Non-Erotic Wo college ke din (completed)

[Raj_sharma]

ये भी बढ़िया था

Thanks

 

[Raj_sharma]

लेखक महोदय
प्रणाम स्वीकार करें .....

Pranaam sir ji

 

[Raj_sharma]

ये भी बढ़िया था

Wahh ise kahte hai review

 

[Adirshi]

Badhiya attempt hai Raj_sharma bandhu full marks for that
Talking about story, aapne college ke dino ki yaad dila ke nostalgia feel kara diya bhai, waise updates kafi chhote the but content jabardast tha. imho isko aur explore karna chahiye tha aapne behtarin topic hai, wakai college bahut kuch sikhata hai aur college ki kadra us aakhri din hi pata chalti hai jab college se Jane ka waqt aata hai, ek chote se gaon se nikal kar bade sapne liye shahar me aana apne aap ko us shahar me shamil karna, un college ki galiyo me kho Jana, apne aap ko naye se talashna, wo nostalgic feeling is kahani me aapne bahut badhiya tarike se dikhayi hai.
Main generally review deta nahi hu but yeah I liked this one and hoping to see more such works from you. I know ek aur kahani shuru kiye ho jaise hi waqt milega usko bhi padhunga.
Very well written

 

[Raj_sharma]

Badhiya attempt hai Raj_sharma bandhu full marks for that
Talking about story, aapne college ke dino ki yaad dila ke nostalgia feel kara diya bhai, waise updates kafi chhote the but content jabardast tha. imho isko aur explore karna chahiye tha aapne behtarin topic hai, wakai college bahut kuch sikhata hai aur college ki kadra us aakhri din hi pata chalti hai jab college se Jane ka waqt aata hai, ek chote se gaon se nikal kar bade sapne liye shahar me aana apne aap ko us shahar me shamil karna, un college ki galiyo me kho Jana, apne aap ko naye se talashna, wo nostalgic feeling is kahani me aapne bahut badhiya tarike se dikhayi hai.
Main generally review deta nahi hu but yeah I liked this one and hoping to see more such works from you. I know ek aur kahani shuru kiye ho jaise hi waqt milega usko bhi padhunga.
Very well written

Thank you very much Adirshi bhai for your valuable review and time . I Hartly respect your wonderful words.
Even I can't belive that you give review for my story? I mean I am not a writer but just a reader. Thanks again it's mean a lot for me.

 

[CyccoDraamebaaz]

College ke dinno ki baat ho kuch aur hai yaar...

Dil chahta hai kabhi na beete .. chamkile di.. Dil chahta hai hum na rahe kabhi yaaro ke bin..


(Words nahi lekin feelings original hai)​

 

[Raj_sharma]

College ke dinno ki baat ho kuch aur hai yaar...

Dil chahta hai kabhi na beete .. chamkile di.. Dil chahta hai hum na rahe kabhi yaaro ke bin..


(Words nahi lekin feelings original hai)​

Thank you very much for your wonderful review and support bhai

 

[Raj_sharma]

Iron Man
Ajju Landwalia
Napster
Bhai log ye meri pahli story thi, jara dekho kuch samajh me aayi hai kya?

 

[Raj_sharma]

Rekha rani

 

[Raj_sharma]

Ufaq saba aapne review diya tha kya is kahani pe?