Romance Ye kaisi Mohabbat

[Assassin]

Bhai ending ye nahi thi meri lekin fir sab request karne lage to happy ending deni padi lekin sala happy ending dene ke baad bhi bc galliya hi padi
Actually main ending realistic rakhna chahta tha jo esse completely different thi
Lekin koe baat nahi
Thank you so much for your lovely words bhai
Respect

Chalo koi na
Readers kabhi kabar story characters se jyada he attached ho jate he.

 

[Mathur]

Hello, Ladies  & Gentleman, 
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.

Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 10th, June 2020, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.

Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.

Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.

Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.

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[Monsterboy]

I'm starting to read
But 1st update is awesome
Keep it up

 

[kingkhankar]

I'm starting to read
But 1st update is awesome
Keep it up

Go for it. One of the best stories in Xforum. Writer ka dimag bahut jyada khatarnak hey and interesting way of expressing the feelings.

 

[rakku]

Aaj kiski band bajni hai usko intejar hai......

 

[Nevil singh]

Update-1

Kya hoti hai ye muhobaat?
Kisi anjaan shaksh ne sharab ke nashe me samne bathe shaksh se kaha

Muhobaat?
Muhobaat vo hoti hai jo Hume aabaad kar deti hai aur kabhi kabhi barbaad bhi kar deti hai
Muhobaat vo hoti hai jo jitna hasati hai usse kahi jada rulati hai
Muhobaat vo hoti hai jab hum khuli aankhon se sapne dekhte hai , vo sapne jo aankh kholte hi toot jaya karte hai
Muhobaat ek bahut khubsurat bimari hai aur hum sab na chahte hue bhi eska sikar ho jate hai

Vahi kisi dusre shaksh ne kaha

"Lagta hai aap bhi sikar ho chuke ho bharkhurdar" bhid se kahi aawaz aae

" Hum kaise piche rah jate janab, marne ka makshad jo chahiye tha " bade rahsamiy tarike se pehle shaksh ne bola

" to all my heart broken brother " ek shaksh daru ki bottle hava me uthate hue bola

Aur fir vaha shanti chha gaye, jo bhi bathe hue the vo sab apni apni dunia me kho gaye ya fir yu kahe us dunia me kho gaye jisse mana to apna tha lekin kabhi apni ho na saki

" Mujhe ek sawal hai, bahut mahino se main khud se hi puchta aa raha hu ki
Aisa kya jadu hota hai es muhobaat me ki hum sab barbaad hone ke liye khiche chale jate hai
Aur agar koe jadu hai bhi to vo dono taraf kyu nahi hai, ek to barbaad ho jata hai aur dusre ke jaise kyu fark hi nahi padta"

" Meri halaat bhi aap sab jaisi hi hai, muhobaat ne mara bhi aur muhobaat ne savara bhi"

" Lekin bas vo ek Khushi naam ki jo chhij hoti hai na uska pata nahi mil pa raha hai"

Back to story

Vahi bhid me ek shaksh muhobaat ki paribhasha dene ke baad apne aapko us daru ke glass me khoj raha tha

Uske chehre se hi lag raha tha jaise pure dunia jahan ka dard leke batha hua ho

Dekhne me ek 25-26 Saal ka handsome sa ladka tha jiske chehre par khub badi badi dhadi thi aur usse bhi bade bade baal

Sayad usse ab apne aapse koe fark hi nahi padta tha
Sayad jis chhij se fark padta tha vo usse kho chuka hai

Bahut waqt usne apne aapke sath bath kar apne gam daru ke nashe me bhulane ki kosis ki aur fir vaha se uth kar chala gaya

Muhobaat aur sharab kya khub chhij banane hai khuda ne
Pata hota hai ki barbaad hona hai, fir bhi ussi raste par chalte rahte hai


Vo ladka girta padta apne ghar pahucha aur vahi jamin par so gaya

To ye shaksh hai Daksh Singh raichand

Eski jindagi me eske paas sayad paiso ke alava aur kuch nahi hai
Self made businessman hai aur bahut jada khadush type ka character hai enka

Jab samne aate hai to koe bolne se pehle hazar baar sochte hai

Par sayad logo ki kismat achi hai ki ye bolte bahut kam hai sirf utna jitna jaruri ho ya fir usse bhi thoda kam

Ye apne mahal se ghar me jamin par hi sote rahe aur koe enhe sambhalne bhi nahi aaya kyuki us mahal me aur koe rahta hi nahi tha

Na koe family members aur na koe guards

Ye Daksh Singh raichand kon hai, kaha se aaye hai aur enka jindagi me maksad kya hai ye koe nahi janta

Agar koe kuch jante hai to vo ye hai ki ye ek genius drug addict hai aur uska sath sehat ke liye acha nahi hai

Jab se logo ne Daksh ko dekha hai vo humesha akela aur nashe me hi dikha hai


In the morning

Daksh apni ankhen malta hua uthata hai aur apni halaat dekhte hue khada hota hai.... And guess what sabse pehle usne kiya kya

Ground floor par bane bar se ek bottle uthae aur peete hue morning routine karne laga

Dheere Dheere sare kaam khatam karke office pahuch gaya jaha abhi halchal thi lekin Daksh ko dekhte hi sab jagah shanti fail gaye

Daksh vaha se sidhe apne cabin me chala jata hai aur kaam karne lagta hai

Ye tha uska routine

Har roj raat ko nashe me kahi par bhi sojata tha fir subah kahi se uthata aur nashe sabse pehle suru hote aur uske baad office

Vaha pure time kaam me dooba rahta aur raat ko vahi fir se saraab

Na koe Dost tha aur na koe family lekin ha dusman bahut the.... Kuch log uski success se jalte the to kuch uski personality se to koe uske paise chahta tha

Kamyab koe nahi ho paya tha abhi tak bas sapne dekhe ja rahe the

Aaj Daksh ke liye kafi bada din tha kyuki ek bahut bade project ki deal hone wali thi...vaise to project Daksh ko hi milne wala tha lekin vo koe risk nahi lena chahta tha esliye usne apne sare ache bando ko kaam par laga rakha tha

Esliye ek last time usne socha meeting kar li jaye ki kahi kuch gadbad na ho to sabko meeting hall me bula liya

Daksh ka nature aisa tha ki uske sirf samne khade hone se logo ki aawaz nikalni band ho jati thi esliye sab dare dare Daksh ko explain kar rahe the

Sab kuch hone ke baad Daksh unko lekar chala gaya jaha actual meeting honi thi

Vaha dekha to sab pehle se hi bathe the aur sab bari bari se apna project explain kar rahe the ..... Daksh ke kisi bande ne bhi kiya

Sabko yehi lag raha tha ki es baar bhi project Daksh ki company ko hi jaega kyuki unki presentation bahut achi thi

" Hello everyone
I'm glad that you people worked so hard for this project and I appreciate your efforts but as you know tender will go only to one of you
And it goes to
.
.
.
.
Rathore group of companies "
Kisi senior ne announce kar diya

But jo hua uski vajah se vaha shanata chha gaya kyuki jo tender jana tha raichand groups ko vo gaya Rathore groups ko

Kuch der ke sanate ke baad vaha gossips suru ho gaye ki aisa kaise ho gaya aur kya ye Daksh ke downfall ki suruvaat hai kyuki ye pehli baar tha jab Daksh hara tha

Sab logo ke chehre par alag alag expression the sivay Daksh ke jo pehle ki tarah emotions less batha hua tha lekin use bando ki fatti padi thi

" I want the MD of Rathore group will come and sign the agreement "
Firse senior bande ki aawaz aae

To sabki najar MD ko dondne me lag gaye jiski do vajah thi ek to kisne ne Rathore group ke MD ko dekha nahi tha aur dusra sab us bande se milna chahte the jisne Daksh ko hara diya

Kuch hi der ke intzaar ke baad ek Ladki entry leti hai main door se aur vo Ladki nahi koe angel lag rahi thi kyuki etni sundar aur hot ladki sayad hi kisi ne apni jindagi me dekhi hogi

Aur jaise hi logo ne dekha ki Daksh kisi ladki se haar gaya to mahool aur garam ho gaya lekin tufaan to aaya kaha tha

Tufaan aaya jab Daksh ne us ladki ko dekha aur ab tak jo expression gayab the Daksh ke chehre se vaha janleva gusse ne le liya tha

Vo apni sheat se khada hua nahi nahi khada nahi hua apni chair ko side me fekta hua us ladki ke samne jake khada hogya

Daksh ke chehre par behad gussa tha aur us ladki ke chehre par smile yaha Daksh ko dekh kar aisa lag raha tha jaise vo abhi us ladki ko maar dega

"I would like to present one more offer" Daksh bola

" deal is over Mr. Raichand" senior bola

" for me it just started now" Daksh firse bola

Daksh- I am ready to reduce my profit to 70%
Ye Daksh ne vaha bahut bada bomb food diya kyuki 70% ka matlab Daksh ko ab profit nahi loss hone wala hai aur vo bhi bahut jada

Senior- I'm sorry Mr. Raichand
You lost your chance

Aur vo ladki muskurate hue aage badti hai ....agreement sign karti hai aur Daksh ko dekhte hue vaha se chali jati hai

Dheere Dheere sab vaha se nikalane lagate hai aur bach jate hai to sirf Daksh aur uske log

Daksh- good job guys
You will get a promotion now
" Sir we lost the tender" ek ne darte darte kaha

Daksh- don't worry
There will be no rathore group in the future .... Let them enjoy there last success

Aur Daksh bhi vaha se chala jata hai

Kaha jaega aur kya karega ye sab aapko pata hai to vo sab batane ki jarurat nahi hai

Dusri taraf

Rathore- Daksh is a dangerous man
Tumhe risk nahi lena chahiye tha
Ladki- dad it's time to end his era

Rathore- tum samjh nahi rahi ho
Main usse bachpan se janta hu aur ye bhi janta hu ki haar usse bardbast nahi hoti
Vo kuch bhi kar sakta hai aur jis tarah se ye tender mila hai ....mujhe dar lag raha hai
He is a monster aur samjhdar log monster se nahi uljhate
Uske paas khone ko kuch nahi hai lekin mere paas tum ho

Ladki- dad he is just an another guy
And I will beat him

Rathore- he is not just an another guy
He is more monstrous than a monster itself

Ladki- was
Abhi nahi hai dad vo tha
Ab to sirf ek nashedi bacha hai uske andar aur aksar log nashe me galtiya kar dete hai

Rathore- mujhe nahi pata tum kya bol rahi ho aur kya karna chahti ho
Main bas tumhe safe dekhna chahta hu
Tumhre alava mera hai hi kon

Ladki- don't worry dad
Vo mujhe kuch nahi kar sakta and
everything is fair in love and war
Love is over now war begins......

sarvotam update ke sath akalpniye aagaaj nayi rachna ka

 

[Nevil singh]

Update-2

Daksh kisi ko behrahmi se maar raha tha
Aur vo bechara niche pada pada ro raha tha.... Sath Sath me ye janene ki bho kosis kar raha tha ki usne kiye kya hai

"Bhaiii maainnee kkiiyaa kyaa haii" vo aadmi thoda tutti aawaz me bola

Daksh- to abhi tak tujhe ye bhi samjh nahi aaya hai ki tune kiya kya hai
Aur jey usko firse dhone lag jata hai

Ahhhhhhh daksshhh bbhhhaaiii naahhhiii plllleeeasseee maaff kaarddo mujhe sach me nahi pata ki aap kyu naraj ho

Daksh- vo tander rathore group ko kaise mila
Aur agar tune juth boli to abhi yahi jinda jala dunga

Vo aadmi etna dar chuka tha ki bina ek bhi second gavae usne pura sach ugal diya

" Bhai vo malik bahut bada tharki hai to rathore group ne bahut sari ladkiya aur bahut sare paise bejh kar usse apni side me kar Liya" vo aadmi ek saas me bol gaya

Daksh- dar nahi laga usse mujhse
" aapke aur Ma'am ke bich me jo chal raha hai usse usko ye laga ki aapka dhayan uski taraf jaega hi nahi aur vo safe rahega" aadmi bola

Daksh- ek tender ke liye etna niche gir gaye vo
" sirf ek tender ki baat nahi ha..... Baat hai aapko harane ki" aadmi darte hue bola

Daksh- tujhe sab pata tha aur tune bataya nahi mujhe
Daksh ek mukka marte hua bola
" boss main batata to maam mar dalti aur nahi bataya to aap mar rahe ho esliye main bach ke bhag raha tha" aadmi bola

Daksh- lekin ab nahi bhagega
Tu vapas jaega aur jaisa chal raha tha vaise hi chalne dega but mujhe har chhij ki khabar honi chahiye nahi to main tujhe marunga nahi jinda hi maut ke darsan kara dunga
Ab nikal
Daksh ne usse bahar fekte hue bola

Vo aadmi chal gaya aur Daksh apne hath par lage khoon ko saaf karne laga

" Baby bahut badi galati ki maine jo pehle tujhe jane diya lekin ab vaisi galati nahi karunga .... Dimag to khub chalaya tune aur main chutiya ye samjhta raha ki sala sehar me mujhse kon bhidega par acha hai ab maja aaega..... Sweetheart bahut ho gaya pyaar muhobbat ab badle ka waqt aagya hai"

Daksh thodi der aur vaha batha raha aur peeta raha aur sochta raha ki karna kya hai aur fir vaha se uth kar apne ghar aagya

Aaj bahut salo ke baad vo sahi salaamat ghar vapas aaya tha matlab ki apne pairo par chalte hue nahi to girte padte hi aata tha

Ghar aakar khana bhi banaya aisa kiye to baras ho gaye the

Ye to acha ho gaya tha Daksh ki life me ki saraab kam ho gaye the aur khana bhi kha raha tha

Lekin kuch bahut khatarnaak chal raha tha uske Dimag me kuch bahut hi khatarnaak

Sayad usne soch liya tha ki khud dhokhe se hara hai to dhokhe se haraega bhi

Khana bana kar usne usse pack kar liya aur car nikal ke kahi nikal gaya

Kaha ???
Abhi pata chal jaega yaar

Vo gaya tha apne pyaar ke paas sayad akele khane ka man nahi tha esliye chala gaya ho ya fir koe aur baat thi ye to baad me hi pata chalegi

Knock
knock
Knock

"Hello baby what a surprise " Ladki ne gate kholte hi bola

Daksh - I thought you are hungry you so main dinner leke aagya
Ladki- bhukh to bahut lag rahi hai
Come na
Bahar kyu khade ho

Aur vo piche mud ke undar chali gaye
Daksh bhi uske piche piche chalne laga

Ladki ne Daksh ke hath se khana liya aur ek plate me dalne lagi

Ladki- tumne banaya hai na
Bahut time hogya tumhre hath ka khana khaye
Daksh- Maine hi banaya hai

To ye Ladki vohi hai jisme Daksh ke hatho se tander nikala tha aur rathore group ki MD Priya rathore

Priya- to kaisi lagi apni pehli haar
Daksh- achi actually bahut achi
Mere pyaar ne jo haraya hai

Priya- ohh sweetheart eski ab aadat dal lo
Aur Daksh ko apne hatho se khilane lagi aur khud bhi khane lagi

Daksh- cheating se hi to haraya hai
Kabhi samne se war karke dekhna
Priya- ohh mera baby ko cheating pasand nahi aae
Kya karu tumse hi sikha hai

Daksh- ek tander se tum jeet nahi sakti
Priya- bilkul nahi jeet sakti
But dekho ek tander ki vajah se tumse milna ho gaya aur tumhre hatho ka khana bhi mil gaya to technically jeet sakti hu

Daksh- main barbaad kar dunga tumhe aur tumhre ghamand ko
Priya- awwww aur jaise main to chhup chhap bath kar sab dekhti rahungi
My love don't forget ki main tumhe sabse ache se janti hu
Mujhe pata hai tum aage Kya karne wale ho aur to be honest uske liye main pehle se hi prepare hu

Daksh- etna pyaar kyu karti ho mere se
Priya- ab kya karu bas ho gaya

Daksh- aage ka kya plan hai
Priya- chalo tumne puch liya to bata deti hu
Sabse pehle to sehar se tumhra naam khatam karungi
Jo dar batha hua hai na logo me ki Daksh raichand ek monster hai usse panga nahi lena usko mitana hai
Uske baad dheere dheere vo sab chhen lungi tumse jo tumhe sabse jada pyaara hai
And in the end hum firse ek sath aise hi kahi bath kar dinner kar rahe honge aur tumhri barbaadi ko celebrate kar rahe honge

Daksh- etna trust hai khud par
Priya- na na babes khud par nahi tum par hai
Tum khud haar jaoge

Daksh- aur vo kyu?
Priya- vo bhi waqt bata dega
Acha ha jo tumne aaj banda bejha tha na jasusi karne ko usse maine maar diya hai
Aur seriously sweetheart tumhe aisa laga ki main uspar trust kar lungi
I'm really disappointed

Daksh- pata tha nahi karoge
Esliye hi to bejha tha
Priya- ohh my god
Tum bas ye janana chahte the ki kitna pyaar karti hu main tumse(sarcastically)

Daksh- aur tumne prove kar diya ki bahut
Priya- vaise to prove karne ki jarurat nahi thi lekin fir maine socha pyaar kiya hai to prove bhi kar deti hu

Yaha bata du enke pyaar ka matlab nafarat se hai

Priya- babe khao na dar kyu rahe ho
Main nahi marungi tumhe
Etna pyaar jo karti hu
Daksh- aur maine maar diya to tumhe

Priya- that's such a disappointing then
Na tum mujhe maar sakte ho aur na main tumhe
Hum to bas ek dusre ko barbaad kar sakte hai

Daksh- dar nahi lagta tumhe mujhse
Priya- babe vo dar tumne hi khatam kiya tha
Lagta hai yaadast kamjor ho gaye hai

Daksh- ha sayad thodi si
Kya karu pehle tum jo hoti thi paas sab yaad dilane ko
Priya- aww baby main ab bhi hu
Sab yaad dilaungi
Ek Ek chhij bas waqt aane do

Daksh- main sab ko maar dunga aur ye tumhe pata hai
Priya- Acha hai na
Fir hum dono bachenge bas
Muhobaat se rahenge

Daksh- tumne galati kardi vapas aakar
Main kabhi hara nahi aur hari hue baji kaise jeetni hai ye mujhe ache se aata hai
Priya- aur hari hue baji tum jeetne ki kaise soch sakte ho ye mujhe pata hai

Daksh- tum mujhe nahi janti
Priya- ohh baby main hi to tumhe janti hu aur hai ki kon tumhra

Daksh- thik hai fir dekhte hai ye Muhobaat ki ladae kon jeetata hai
Priya- Muhobaat khatam ho chuki hai

Daksh- meri taraf se abhi suru hue hai
Maine kabhi socha nahi tha ki aisa ho lekin agar tum chahti ho to thik hai

Priya uthi aur Daksh ko ek jabardast kiss karte hue boli

Priya- babe ye ek war hai
Aur bas etna jaan lo ki esme na tum jeetoge aur na main
Hum dono ko hi harna hai
Fir bhi hum ladenge
Pata hai kyu
Kyuki
Pyaar jo karte hai ek dusre se etna
Thank you for the dinner

Priya mud ke vaha se chali jati hai
Daksh vahi batha rah gaya aur khud ke hi soch me doob gaya

Aur fir thodi hi der me khud bhi vaha se uth ke chala gaya....

atulniye update

 

[Nevil singh]

Update-3

Daksh akele bilkul sober halaat me batha kuch soch raha tha aur usse dekh kar lag raha tha ki kisi gehri hi soch me hai

Kyuki bahut waqt se vo bas ek hi position me bathe hue tha aur kuch reaction nahi de raha tha

Jab bahut der ho gaye aur kuch samjh nahi aaya to irritate hokar samne pada laptop utha ke fek diya aur sar niche karke bath gaya

" sab janti hai na vo mere bare me lekin vo jis Daksh ko janti thi vo usse pyaar karta tha aur ab jo Daksh hai vo halaat
Bas etna hi fark hai aur ye fark mujhe jeetane ke liye kafi hai kyuki meri nafarat to usne dekhi hi nahi"

Ek ek chhij ka badla lunga aur aisa badla jo puri jindagi usse yaad rahega
Jo puri jindagi uski ankhon se pani sukne nahi dega

Usne cheating ki hai lekin ye to uski purani aadat bhi hai sala esme naya kya hai

Hai na naya
Naya ye hai ki es baar uski cheating bhi usko jeeta nahi paaegi

Daksh sochte sochte kisi ko phone mila deta hai
Tring Tring tring
"Hello" samne se aawaz aae

Daksh- meet me at ***** now
"OK" firse aawaz aae
Aur ye conversation yahi khatam ho gaye

Daksh utha aur car lekear batae hue jagah par chala gaya

Vaha kya hua ye agle update me bataunga

Vaha se vapas aane ke baad kya hua ye batata hu

Daksh bahut khushi khushi vaha se vapas aaya aur sidhe ek badiya bar me chala gaya

Aur ek kone me bath kar apni daru ke majje lene lag gaya

Tabhi ek sundar ladki Daksh ke pass aae

"Can I buy you a drink" Ladki boli
Daksh- sorry what?

Ladki- ab tum nahi puch rahe the to maine hi puch liya
Daksh- ohh I'm sorry
What you want to drink?

Ladki- what you want me to drink?
Ladki thodi naughty style me boli
Daksh usko ignore karke counter par se ek drink uske liye order kar deta hai

Ladki- so what a handsome guy like you doing alone here?
Daksh- waiting for you I guess

Ladki- fir to intzaar khatam hogya aapka
Daksh- sayad
But main etni jaldi koe decision nahi leta
Businessman hu to pehle sab kuch check karna pasand karta hu

Ladki- acha g
Lekin agar check karne ke baad pasand nahi aae to esme to mera hi nuksaan hai na
Daksh- actually kya hai bahut dushman hai mere
To pehle check karna jada safe lagta hai

Ladki apni drink ki sip marte hue
Aisa kya karte ho aap jo etne dusman hai aapke
Daksh- main logo ko barbaad karta hu

Ladki- mujhe bhi kar dijiye na barbaad
Fir se ankh marte hue boli
Daksh- badi jaldi hai tumhe

Ladki- intzaar karke kya milega
Daksh- sayad kuch nahi

Ladki- Tabhi to
Chalte hai kahi shant jagah par aur discuss karte hai
Daksh- ek call kar leta hu

Daksh apna phone nikalata hai aur ek number dial karne lagta hai

"Hello love" samne se bola
Daksh- kya sweetheart etna hi janti ho kya

" Matlab" firse aawaz aae
Daksh- tumne mere ek aadmi ko mara to main soch raha hu eska kya karu

To ye Ladki Priya ne hi bheji thi sayad kuch information nikalne ke liye

Priya- main soch hi rahi thi ki tumhe pata lag jaega fir bhi ek try marne me kya nuksaan
Daksh- nuksaan hai na jaan
Ab ye bechari to mar jaegi na

Priya- mujhe usse kya
Maine konsa usko force kiya tha
Usne kaam manga maine diya
Aur paise bhi to le chuki hai
Ab mare ya jinda rahe ye uski problem
Daksh- baat to sahi hai
But sundar bahut hai soch raha hu ek baar try kar leta hu

Priya- dono ko aisi halaat kar dungi na fir main ki kabhi try karne ke layak nahi rahoge
Priya behad gusse me boli
Tum sirf mere ho aur sirf mere
Agar kisi aur ke bare me socha bhi to jindagi narak bana dungi uski aur tumhri bhi

Daksh darne ka nataak karte hue
Sorry baby main to mazak kar raha tha
Please mujhe kuch mat karna
I'm sorry baby
You know na ki I love you so much
Are ganta mera
Jo ukhandna hai ukhad le sweetheart esko to aaj mere sath sona hai

Priya- ek gante ke andar andar vo bhagwan ke paas pahuch jaegi
Aur Priya ne gusse me phone kaat diya

Samne bathi ladki ne jab puri conversation suni to uski to gand hi faat gaye kyuki Daksh ne phone speaker par laga rakha tha

Ladki- please mujhe maaf kardo
Mujhe paiso ki jarurat thi esliye karna pada
Mujhe abhi nahi marna
Aap jo kahoge vo main karungi lekin please mujhe bacha lo

Daksh counter se uske liye aur apne liye ek aur drink order kar deta hai

Daksh- ye to pehle sochna chahiye tha na
Aag ke bich me aaoge to jalogi hi
Ladki- please mujhe bacha lo
Please

Daksh- mujhe kya fayda tumhe bacha ke
Ladki- agar main ek gante me nahi mari to aap jeet jaoge aur Maam har jaegi

Daksh- ladki intelligent hai
Counter wale se bolta hai

Daksh- thik hai
Lekin uske baad main jo kahunga vo karna padega tumhe
Ladki- jo aap kaho main sab kuch karungi
Aapko puri jindagi kisi ki yaad nahi aane dungi

Daksh- sweetheart you know what
I love her and she love me aur koe humare bich me nahi aaega

Bahar ek black color ki car khadi hai usme jake bath jao
Vo tumhe safe jagah pahucha dega
Hum kal milenge
Aur Daksh usse vaha se bhej deta hai aur khud muskurata hua saraab peene lagta hai

Jaise usse pata ho ki aage kya hone wala hai aur jo bhi hoga uska fayda indirectly Daksh ko hi milega

Ye bas Daksh soch raha tha ab hoga kya ye to aage hi pata chalega

Ache se nashe me hoke Daksh vaha se apne ghar chala jata hai

Do Dino se jo limit me pee raha tha aaj pehle jaise hi hokar pahucha aur sidhe couch par pad gaya

Dusri taraf

Priya- kya samjhta hai aapne aapko
Agar kisi dusri ladki ki taraf dekha bhi na usne to sabse pehle uski hi ankhen nikal lungi
Ladki ko to baad me dekhungi

Usse pyaar aur nafarat karne ka hak sirf mujhe hai aur mujhe pyaar aur nafarat karne ka hak usse

Aur agar koe humare bich me aaya to jinda jala dungi usse

Esko(daksh) ko to kal dekhungi pehle us ladki ka kuch karna padega

Jaha tak mujhe lagta hai usne ladki ko jane diya hoga aur bola hoga ki ek gante tak jaan bach gaye to vapas aana fir dekhenge( actually Daksh ne bhi pehle same socha tha lekin jab usse pata chala ki uski jaan bacha kar vo thoda hurt kar sakta hai Priya ko to usne plan change kar diya)

Priya- lekin mujhe hurt karne ke chakar me usse safety bhi de sakta hai
Ya fir apne sath bhi leke ja sakta hai
Nahi nahi apne sath to nahi leke jaega

Ye to confirm hai

To do hi situation bachi
Ya to jane diya hoga ya kahi chupa diya hoga

Priya apna phone nikalti hai aur kisi ko call karti hai

Priya- ek photo bejh rahi hu
Kill her in half an hour and I will pay you one million dollar but in half an hour

Aur Bina kuch sune phone kaat diya

Ab Priya ko thodi tension ho gaye thi kyuki vaise haar jeet to chalti hai lekin agar kisi ladki ki vajah se haar gaye to ye uski bardast ke bahar hai

Esliye usne bhi ek bottle khol li aur edar udar gumte hue peene lag gaye

Jaise Jaise waqt bit raha tha vaise vaise uski tension bhi bad rahi thi

Vo kisi bhi kimat par jeetna chahti thi Esliye to ek million dollar offer kar diye

Aur yehi nahi usne teen char jagah aur phone karke bol diya aur last location bhi bata di ki kaha thi

Lekin etna sab karne ke baad bhi uski tension kam nahi ho rahi thi
Usse ye ache se pata tha ki agar vo Ladki Daksh ne chhupae hai to kaam bahut muskil hai aur agar usne jane diya to fir kaam ho jaega

Lekin ab uske dimag me ek aur khayal aane lag gaya tha sayad nashe ki vajah se ki agar vo ladki Daksh ke sath hue to

Fir to koe chance hi nahi hai ki uske aadmi Daksh ke rahte ladki ke pass bhi pahuch sake

Sober thi to usse yakin tha ki Daksh usse sath nahi leke jaega lekin nasha bahut kharab chhij hai
Usne hume sirf negative chhije hi yaad aati hai

Ab kya hoga en dono me ye to waqt hi batega tab tak aap log guess kijiye ki kon kamyaab hoga aur kisko es baar haar jhelni padegi
Milte hai next update me....

bemishaal update

 

[Nevil singh]

Update - 4

Priya- Kab tak sote rahte ho tum?
Aur ye kya haal bana rakha hai ghar ka
Priya Daksh ko uthate hue daat rahi thi

Daksh ko bhi jab etni aawaze suni to soffe par jaha vo so raha tha ankhen malta hua uthata hai

Priya ko dekh kar
Daksh- what the hell you are doing here?
Priya- khana lae hu aur tumhe khuskhabri bhi deni thi

" maar diya tumne us Ladki ko" Daksh aise bola jaise usse koe fark hi nahi pada

Priya- mujhe laga tum apni haar par rone lagoge
Daksh- yahi to fark hai sweetheart
Tumhe lagta hai ki tum mujhe ache se samjhti ho lekin aisa nahi hai sweetheart

Priya- ohh baby baatein bana rahe ho
Koe baat nahi har koe ek na ek din harta hi hai tumhe to khush hona chahiye ki tum apne pyaar se hare ho
Daksh hasta hua
Apne pyaar se haar jau aisa main hone nahi dunga

"Khane me kya lae ho " Daksh baat change karte hue bolta hai
Priya- jo tumhe pasand hai

Daksh- chalo fir khana khate hai kyuki tumne apni khushi to bata di ab main apni bhi bata deta hu
Priya- sayad mental hospital me jane ki jarurat samjh aa gaye hogi tumhe

Daksh- vaha to sath chalenge
Aur dono dinning table par bath gaye

Priya- kitne gande ho
Na hath doya Na muh aur sidhe khane ko bath gaye

Daksh Priya ke bahut najdik aake to ab muh dho leta hu lekin tumhre muh se aur usse kiss karne wala hi tha ki Priya ne usse dhakka de kar rok diya

Priya- koe jarurat nahi hai
Aise hi thik ho
Daksh- tumhre marji
Mujhe laga tumhe action nahi mila hoga etne dino se to khair vaise meri life bahut badiya ja rahi hai
Na koe rok tok aur har roj koe naya panchi

Priya- this isn't funny aur agar koe bhi tumhre paas dikh gaye to uske hath par kaat ke choharaye par bhikh mangane ke liye chhod dungi
Ye baat Priya ne behad gusse me kahi thi

Daksh- vo baad me dekhenge
Pehle good news sun le
Priya- kya?

Daksh- kisi ne call nahi kiya tumhe ya fir tumhe kisi ka call attend nahi kiya
Priya- tumne kya kiya?
Priya stressed aawaz me boli

Daksh- tumne mere se tender chhina aur maine tumse
Ab hisaab barabar
Priya- aisa nahi ho sakta
Boss raji kaise hua( boss vo hai jo tender ke agreements karata hai)

Fir Ek second ruki aur smile karte hue
To ye sab ek plan tha
Tumne jaan bhujh ke us ladki se flirt ki
Tumne jaan bhujh kar mere paas phone kiya
Aur tumne jaan bhujh kar usse safe house bheja
Taki mera sara dhayan us ladki pe ho aur raat ko kya hua ya kya ho chuka hai uska kuch pata hi na chale

I must say I'm impressed

Daksh- everything is planned sweetheart
Aur abhi to sirf suruvaat hai
Mere raste me jo aaega vo mitti me mil jaega
Priya- main mitti ban kar aungi fir
Besak tumne boss ko mar diya hai
Besak tumhe koe pakad nahi paega aur na main pakadne dungi
Lekin es baar baji tumhre rahi
Main vapas aaungi
Aur Priya vaha se jane lagti hai but Daksh usse pakad kar apni taraf khech leta hai

Daksh- etni badi safalta mili hai uske liye ek kiss to banta hai aur Bina Priya ke response dekhe Priya ke laal gulabi hontho ko chusne lagta hai jisse ek minute baad hi Priya Apne aapko chhuta kar vaha se chali jati hai

Daksh muskurata hua uthata hai aur bar se ek bottle utha kar badiya pack banata hai aur apna daily routine start kar deta hai

Usse pata tha ki jo ladae uske aur Priya ke bich me start hue hai usse bahut ghar ujdenge aur bahut in the end un dono me se kisi ek ke marne se hi khatam hoega

Vaise to end me kya hona hai ya Daksh ko kya karna hai ye usne bahut pehle hi soch liya tha ab to bas waqt gujar raha tha

To Daksh aaram aaram se tayar hua fir ek do joint mare aur office pahuch gaya

Vaha jake pehle to sabki class li aur fir apne kaam me jud gaya
Priya aur uski pange me uske kaam par bahut fark padta tha esliye jab bhi mokka milta Daksh usko compensate karne ki kosis karta

Usse abhi apna kaam bhi pura karna tha aur Priya par bhi najar rakhni thi kyuki vo kuch to karegi aise to chup nahi bathne wali vo

Daksh ne soch liya tha chahe kuch bhi ho jaye ab se sari baji uske hi hath me honi chahiye

Aise hi time bita aur Daksh aadat ke anusaar bar me jake bath gaya aur peene laga

Aaj baki dino se kuch jada hi late hogya tha aur pehle se jada nashe me bhi tha to socha chal kar hi ghar jata hu kyuki car chalane ki halaat nahi thi

Daksh apne aur Priya ke bare me sochte hue ladakhada kar chalte ja raha tha aur aaj usse malum pada ki sehar me etni shanti bhi hoti hai

Daksh chalta ja raha tha ki ek ladki aakar takrae
Ladki- please help me
Vo ladke mere piche pade hue hai
Please help me
Rote hue vo ladki boli aur Daksh ke piche jake chhip gaye

Vo Ladki etni dari hue thi ki usne abhi tak notice tak nahi kiya tha ki Daksh sarab ke nashe me hai

Do hi minutes ke baad vaha 5-6 log aagaye sare ke sare dekhne se hi gunde lag rahe the

Daksh- go
Unke bolne se pehle hi Daksh bol pada
Daksh- go otherwise tujhe bich se faad dunga aur sarir me etni goliya barunga ki tere ghar wale bullets ke cover ko bech bech kar amir ho jaenge

Ab agar tujhe unhe amir banana hai to aaja nahi to pata hai na kya karna hai

Jis tarike se Daksh ne bola tha usse sunkar kisi ki bhi gand fat ke hath me aajaye

Vaha bhi aisa hi hua lekin har group me ek banda hota hai na jo sabki gand mara deta hai yaha bhi ek tha jisse laga bas ek nashedi nashe me bakwash kar raha hai aur vo bhagte hue Daksh ki taraf aaya

Lekin bich me hi gir gaya kyuki Daksh ne apni sarab ki bottle se hi usko kaat diya tha
Bich se nahi re sirf jagah jagah par Chhote Chhote cut diye the jisse khoon bahe aur insaan dheere dheere mar jaye
Vaisa cut

Apne sathi ki halaat dekh kar unme se ek ne gun nikal le aur Daksh par tan di

Us Ladki ki to gand hi fat gaye thi bechari ki

Lekin Daksh hasta hua
Maar to tujhe main bhi sakta hu lekin mera pyaar bura maan jaega esliye

Daksh ek side ke liye side me hata aur kahi se hi Goli aakar us bande ke dil me gus gaye

Daksh- thanks love
Daksh vahi se chhilaya

Aur fir dhan dhan dhan dhan dhan goliyon ki barsaat hone lagi aur vo sab log vahi dher ho gaye

Daksh- lagta hai gussa dila diya tum logo ne usse
Samne padi lasho ko dekhte hue bolta hai

Ladki- please mujhe jane do
Maine kuch nahi kiya
Main kisi ko kuch nahi bataungi
Please mujhe mat maro
Vo Ladki dar ki vajah se pata nahi kya kya bol rahi thi

Daksh- mujhe lagta hai tumhe apna hath mere hath se hata lena chahiye kahi agli Goli tumhe na lag jaye
Actually bahut gusse wali girlfriend hai meri

Ladki ne fatak se apna hath hataya aur Daksh se thoda door khadi ho gaye

Daksh- tension mat lo
Tumhe kuch nahi hoga

Fir vaha car aakar ruki to Daksh ne us Ladki ko bhej diya aur khud vaha se chal kar jane laga

Etni ajeeb mohabbat kahi dekhi hai kya
Ek dusre ko barbaad karne par tule hai lekin marne nahi denge

Aur agar mare gaye to ek dusre ke hatho se hi marenge

Na khud sath rahte hai aur na kisi aur ko sath rahne denge

Ab enka kya hoga ye koe nahi janta aur kabhi kabhi to mujhe aisa lagta hai ki ye bhi nahi jante....

jabardast update

 

[Nevil singh]

Update-4

* priya- bahut pyaar karti hu main tumse lekin ek baat yaad rakhna agar mujhe dhoka mila to dunia jala dungi main
Daksh- aur agar tumne dhoka diya to main kya karunga
Sach to ye hai ki mujhe nahi pata main kya karunga
Maine apni life tumhre bina imagine hi nahi ki hai

Priya- ye dunia bahut kamini hai
Kab kya hojaye kisi ko pata tak nahi chalta
Daksh- babe I don't care about the world or shit
I just want to be with aur
Agar kabhi things humare mutabit nahi hue to bhi I promise main tumhra sath nahi chhodunga
Mera tumhre bina koe nahi hai
Daksh aur Priya ek dusre ke galle lag jata hai aur yehi waqt Daksh ki ankh khulti hai vo Sapna dekh raha tha

Daksh khada hua ek do peg mare aur sochne lag gaya ki aisa kya hua aur kab hua ki un dono ki jindagi hi change ho gaye

Jo kabhi ek dusre ke bina rah nahi sakte the aur ab....

Vahi same haal Priya ka bhi tha uske sath bhi har roj yehi hota tha
Vo bhi raat ko uthati, ek do peg marti fir sochti apne aur Daksh ke bare me aur sochte sochte so jati

Next day Daksh utha aur tayar hokar office chala gaya aur shanti se apna kaam karne laga

Aaj kuch badla hua lag raha tha kyuki na abhi tak usne kisi employ ko daata tha aur na gusse me tha

Vo shanti se apna kaam kar raha tha lekin uske jaiso ki life me shanti kaha hai

Sir
Sir
Sir
Chhilate hue koe Daksh ki cabin me Bina knock kiye guss gaya

"Siirr voo delhi wale plant ko government ne siege kar diya" Vo admi darte darte bola
Daksh- esme etna ghabrane wali kya baat hai
Minister ko phone karke bolo ki uske baap ka plant hai vo

" Sir vo minister ne hi band karaya hai" fir aadmi bola
Daksh- kya baat hai puri dunia hi khilaf hogaye kya mere

Daksh- kya reason diya hai
Aadmi- use of toxic chemicals and pollution

Daksh- BC chutiya hogya hai kya
Vaha to koe chemicals use bhi nahi hoti
Ek kaam karo bande bhej ke minister ko utha lo
Aadmi- sir????
Aadmi gabrate hue bola

Daksh- thik suna tumne
Utha lo sale ko
Banaya maine hai usko aur sala mere sath hi game khel raha hai
Aadmi- Sir bahut risky ho jaega

Daksh- nahi hota to maja hi kharab ho jana tha
Bande bej ke utha lo aur ha mujhe jinda chahiye vo
Aadmi- ji
Aur vo vaha se chala gaya

Daksh ne phone uthaya aur number dial karne lag gaya
" hello" samne se aawaz aae

Daksh - achi chal thi par kaam nahi aae
Priya- kaise kaam nahi aae
Tumhra sabse bada plant jo band ho gaya

Daksh- vo to main ek week me vapas open karva lunga
Priya- baby nahi kara sakte tum
Acha plan hai abki baar

Daksh- tumne minister ko blackmail kiya hai aur ye pata hai mujhe kyuki mujhe dhoka dede ye baat hazam nahi hoti
Priya- blackmail to kiya hai
Aur aisa kiya hai ki vo dobara Tumhra sath nahi de paega

Daksh- vo nahi to koe aur
Main banana janta hu to todna bhi janta hu
Priya- dara rahe ho
Hahahahaha
Par mujhe dar nahi laga

Daksh- tum kuch jada hi nahi sochne lag gaye mere bare me ki tum ye bhul gaye ki tumhra bhi business hai
Priya- mujhe sab yaad hai

Daksh- fir to ye bhi pata hoga ki tumne surat ki diamond mine mujhe bech di
Priya- ye kya mazak hai

Daksh- yehi to bol raha hu sweetheart mujhe barbaad karne ke chakkar me kitna bada nuksaan kara liya tumne
Priya- aisa nahi ho sakta
Maine kisi bhi paper par sign nahi kiya
Priya thodi tension me boli

Daksh- ohh baby
Tumne nahi kiya lekin maine karava liya
Priya- dhokka?

Daksh- hahahahahahahahahaha
Bola tha na Bola tha na ki mere se panga mat le
Lekin suna nahi tumne meri
Priya- bahut badi galati kardi tumne
Vo mine bahut important thi mere liye

Daksh- ek raat mere sath aur main tumhe vapas kar dunga aur vo bhi free
Mohabbat jo etni hai tumse
Priya- vapas to main leke rahungi
Chahe uske liye mujhe kuch bhi karna pade
Kuch bhi
Tum ab mazak se bahut aage bad gaye ho
Aur Priya ne phone kaat diya

Daksh ke chehre par bhi ek bahut badi muskan aagaye jaise usne bahut badi jeet mil gaye ho

Daksh vaha se utha aur kuch important logo se important baat ki aur fir nikal gaya apne rasta

Yaha main bata du ki Priya ke business ke profit me sabse bada hath Gujrat wali mines ka hi tha

Uske hath se jane ka matlab hai ki usko bahut bada loss aur ye baat Priya bahut ache se janti thi

Usse samjh nahi aa raha tha ki aisa kaise ho gaya kyuki Daksh se alag hone ke baad to vo sare kaam bahut samjhdari se karti thi aur paper to pura padh kar sign karti thi fir aisa kaise ho gaya

Priya ko apne upar gussa bhi bahut aa raha tha aur Daksh ke upar bhi

Aur log aksar gusse me galtiya kar dete hai
Kahi aisa na ho ki Priya ke sath bhi aisa hi ho jaye

Priya ne Daksh se badla lene ka plan soch liya tha jo bahut tough tha lekin ab Uske pass koe rasta bhi to nahi tha

Ab tak jo chal raha tha vo bas ek mazak tha lekin sayad ab ye mazak se kahi upar ja chuke the aur kisi na kisi ka barbaad hona tay tha

Aisi mohubbat kahi aur kaha dekhne ko milegi tumhe
Ek ko apni success se jada dusre ki barbadi ki khushi ho rahi hai

Yaha dono taraf se puri tayari chal rahi thi kyuki Daksh ko bhi pata tha ki Priya apni puri power laga degi es baar

Esliye vo koe chance nahi lena chahta tha

Usne Uske kuch best log Priya ki jasusi par laga diye
Kuch logo ko apne sare ongoing projects ki dekh bhal ke liye laga diye
Aur kuch ko bade bade plants par jaha koe galati ki gunjaesh hi na rahe

Priya ki jasusi vo nahi karana chahta tha lekin kya kare mohubbat ne aisa ganda kaam bhi kara hi diya

Daksh ki taraf se puri tayari se to jake bath gaya bar me aur peene lag gaya apni pasandida saraab

Vahi Priya jo pehle se hi frustrated aur gusse me thi vo kuch logo ko buri tarah se daat rahi thi jaise abi unka gala kaat degi

Kuch der baad jab shant hue to unhe gusse me hi kuch bata kar vaha se bhaga diya

Aisa kafi baar hua
Kuch log Uske cabin me guste
Fir Priya ne daat khate
Aur uske baad vaha se chale jate

Ye sab hone ke baad Priya bhi Vahi bath kar saraab me doob gaye

Aur ab dono Lalla majnu door kahi bathe hue saraab ke nashe me apne pyaare past ke bare me sochne lage....

khubsurat update