Romance Ye pyar bhi ajeeb hai

[Kingfisher]

congrats nayee story ke liye... revenge ko na bhool jaiyega iske chakkar mein... mana ke yeh aapke dil ke kareeb hain.. toh wo story bhi hamare dil ke kareeb... agar hamar dil tora na akki ke tarah.. toh hum dosti nahin...

kachhi umar kee dosti sala aisi hee hoti hain.. baat-baat pe larte hain jhagarte hain.. dosti torte hain aur phir ek ho jaate hain... Sala akki toh bara harami hain.. sidha madam ko letter likh diya.. lekin akhil ke naam se.. bechara khali phokat mein murga ban gaya... akhil sidha sada launda lagta hain.. jab aaki thora natkhat banda hain..... aise kayee baar hamne bhi dosti tori hain aur kasam bhi khayee kee baat na kareng.. lekin phir kuchh din baad phir se dosti ho jaati hain...

dono mil ke ek doosre ke liye kya kiya gina rahe hain... aur baad mein khud paas aayenge...

Interesting....

Thanks aalluu bhai hamne socha nhi tha ki app ludkte ludkte hue yha tak aa jaoge

Hum apka dil nhi todenge bhai kuch karanvash me us thread ko chod rha hu bas jald hi vapasi karunga
Pehle es ko complete karunga fir revenge ko start karunga
Bas koi thos vajah thi jiske karan mene vo story filhal ke liye band kar di

Ye bhi es comedy emotional drama love sad movement se bhari hue story hogi
Bas ho ske to yha bhi sath b e rahiye

Dhanyavad

 

[Kingfisher]

Achchi dosti hai duno apna apna ahsan bata rahe hai hhhhhhhhhhhh hota ham ne bhi kiya hai

Sahi kha bhai ye pehle bhi hota tha aur ab bhi hota hai akshar dosti me
Kyo ki hum bhi kuch samay pehle vo movement enjoy kiy hai

By the way thanks
Es tippani ke liye

 

[Kingfisher]

interesting story lag rahi hai

Thanks guruji aap us thread par nhi aye to koi na par tha par niyamit bane rahiyega
Dhanyavad

 

[Kingfisher]

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Update ... 1



“ are yaar jaldi rok na gadi ”


“ kya hua ab ? ”


“ Arre kya hua hoga ?... vahi iska photographi ka keeda”


“ Dekh tu meri photography ke bare mein kuch mat bol ha ... aur phir zra baahar dekh , kya haseen nazara hai ... Tum logon ko aana hai to aao varna main chla kuchh acchi pictures click karne ” un dono ko dant’te hue me bola


“ Ok ok fine , But come soon... that's what we've been waiting for ” sheet par pasarte hue Pritam ne kaha


“ Ok ” me gadi se utarkar apne camera me us vadi ke nazaaron ko kaid karne mein mashagul ho gaya ... Bahut hi suhavna mausam tha us vakt manali mein ... halki-halki barfbari bhi shuru ho chuki thi . Par me apane kaam mein itana khoya hua tha ki mujhe pata hi na chala ki me kab Ghadi se door nikal aaya. Tabhi pictures lete hue achanak mujhe Ek jannat ki pari dikhai padi


Use dekhkar me saham gaya tha is dar se ki agar mene apna haath na badhaya hota to vo Pari /ladki is vakt khaee mein hoti .


Mene ek pal ke liye khud ko dekha aur phir use par un ankhon mein is baat ka zara bhi khauf nhi tha ki kuch der pehle uski jaan bhi ja sakti thi ... Dar ki jagah un aankhon mein mujhe ek dard dikhai diya. Ek gehra udash dard.


“Are you fine ?”


“ yes ! vo mujhe pta hi nhi chala ki kab vo mera pair ! Khair meri jaan bachane ke lie shukriya ”.... itna kehkar vo mud’kar jaane lagi .


Mene use rokna chaha, shaayad puchhna chahta tha ki aakhir koi apani jaan ke liye itna laparvaah kaise ho saktI hai ? lekin kaise puchta ? vo thi to mere liye ek aajnabi hi na ...


Abhi me vhi khda soch hi rha tha ki Tabhi meri nazar zameen par gire ek kagaz par padi ... Vo kagaz shayad us ladki ke paas se gira tha vahan... Mene vo kagaz uthakar khola ki tabhi !


"Are Akhil ! kya hua tha ? tu thik to hai na ? hamane vahaan se kuchh girne ka shor suna "... ye mere dost Anant kee aavaaz thee.


" Ha ! kuchh nhi hua sab thik hai "


"lekin vo ladki kaun thi ?" Mere dusre dost Pritam ne puchha.


" Pta nhi " ...mene badi laaparvahi se baat ko talate hue kaha.


"chal abhi bahut le li tasveeren, mausam bhi kharab ho raha hai ... hame vapis hotel chalna chahiye " ..ye kahakar Pritam or Anant gadi ki taraf badhne lage.


Mene ek baar mud'kar pichhe dekha aur phir us kagaz ke tukde ko aur mod'kar apani pocket me rakh liya.


us sham mausam me toofan ki shuruaat ho chukee thi or me es vakt ek 5 star hotel ke aalishan room me tha.


" Hello papa "


" Hello Akhil beta kaise ho tum ? kaisi chal rahi hai tumhari vocation ? "... dusri taraf se aavaz aaii.


" Main ekdam thik hoon papa, aap aur maa kaise hain ?


"hum bilkul thik hai, tumhari maa tumhe yaad kar rahi thi ... lekin tum ye batao ki tum log vapis kab aa rhe ho ?"


" kyaa papa abhi yaha aye hame teen din bhi nahi hue hai aur ye saval aap dusari baar puchh rahe hain "... mene dikhavati narazagi jatate hue kaha.


" kya kru beta kabhi tumhe khud se door nahi bheja na "


"par papa ab main bda ho chuka hu "


"haan-haan pata hai, tabhi to tumhe roka nahi ... tumhara jab tak mann kare ghumo, enjoy karo ... aram se vapis ana, koee jaldi nahin ok ? "


"Thank you papa, byy "


Me apka apna introduction de deta hu taki aap meri history geography Jann sko to Bhailog me hu Akhil Rastogi , Delhi sheher ke jane-mane businessman Khekhar rastogi ka ikalauta beta .... dikhne me to me kisi handsome hunk se kam nahi hai aur filahal me apne do doston ke sath chhuttiyan bitane manali aya hua hu ... vaise aapaki janakari ke liye bta du ki mere pita ke business se jyada meri ruchi study aur photograaphy mein hai.


Me aaya to yaha ek musafir ban kar , lekin mujhe ye nahi pta ki kismat mujhe meri ki koun kaun-see hakikat se ru-ba-ru karavane vali hai .


Ek bda sa andhakarmay room tha jiske beech me maiz par ek dheemi roshani vala study lamp jal rha tha ... Room me jyada kuchh nahi bs ek bed, kitabon se bhri almirah, deevaron par badi-badi paintings aur ek study table thi jis par Vo chupachap baithi apane khyalon me gum thi ... kale ghane baal, gahri bhoori aankhi, ek sundar lekin udaas aur khamosh chehara.


"yahi din tha vo vo manahoos shaam. kash ! ki ye din usaki zindagi me kabhi aaya hi na hota ... kash ! ki vo use kabhi khud se door hone hee nahin deti. kash ! ki vo use bcha paati " ye sochate-sochate usaki aankhon me udasi ki jagah aansuon ne le li .


" Are yaar Akhil tune uncle ko bol diya na ki abhi ham kuchh din aur yaha rahne vale hain "


"haan meri baat ho gayi hai unse, unhone kaha hai ki jab tak hamara mann kare ham yahan rehh sakte hai "


" badhiya to ab ham logo ko sona chaahiye " jamvai lete hue Anant bola


" Nhi yaar tum log so jao, main abhi apne aaj ke pictures ka collection check karoonga "


" Ok ! As you wish , chal lawde " Pritam ke kandhe par thapki marte hue Anant bola


" Good night " uthte hue Pritam ne mujhse kaha or Anant ke sath mere room se chla gya


Anant aur Pritam ke Room se jane ke baad mene apna DSLR camera uthaya aur bed par aaram se pasarkar click ki hui tasvire dekhne lga ... tasviron ko sweep karte hue mere samne us ladaki ki tasveer aa pahunchi ... ghane kaale lambe baal aur black colour ka overkout jo usne blue colour ki jeans ke sath dala hua tha is se jyada us tasveer me aur kuchh nahi dikha us se juda.


tabhi achanak ek khyal mere dimag mein kaundha aur mene fataphat uthakar almirah se apni jekiet nikali jo subah mene pahno thi aur phir me uski pocket me kuchh dhoondhne lga.


aur aakhir vo mil gya vo kagaz ka tukda jo subah us tragedic girl ke paas se gira tha.


Mene vo kagaz khol kar dekha. us par ek bahut hi pyari shayari type poem likhi hui thi. Jo kuch es prakar thi


" jo tera saya kisi jism se saham jaye

to mujhe yaad karna

jo teri nind aadhi raat mein hi ud jaye

to mujhe yaad karna

jo tere haalat kabhi teri samajh me na aaye

to mujhe yaad karna

jo bheed mein bhi teri tanhaii tujhe sataye

to mujhe yaad karna

jo teri rooh ka parinda aasamaan mein bhi chhatapataye

to mujhe yaad karna

jo teri khvahishon ka chiraag kabhi dagmagaye

to mujhe yaad karna

jo teri apani parr'chhaii bhi tujhe adhura chhod jaye

to mujhe yaad karna

main to hoon tere aas paas, beshak ye tujhe nazar na aye

par phir bhi kabhi agar meri kami tujhe rulaye

to bas tu mujhe yaad karna

mujhe yaad karna ! !"



Rits



Rits

use achanak aisa lga jaise kisi ne use pukara ho .. usne nazar uthakar idhar udhar dekha, room me koi nahin tha.


"Kya ye usaki aavaaz thi ? nahi ye nahi ho sakta vo to ja chuka tha hamesha ke liye.


lekin ye Ehesaas aisa kyon lag raha tha ki vo yahin kahin aas paas hai " ... usne sochate hue khidaki ke paas jaakar dekha. vahan bas milo door tak phaila hua andhera tha aur tez garjna hui jo ki us toofaan se kam hii lag rhi thi jo usaki jindagi me aya tha.


tabhi kisi ne uske kandhe par haath rkha.


"aur kitna kosogo khud ko ? do saal ho gye hai use gye hue aur tum aaj bhi us din se aage nahin badh paii ho ... kab tak takleef dogi khud ko ? bhool jao beta hua sab " ye usaki granny thi jo uske dil aur zindagi ke halaat se bakhubi vaqif thi.


" nahin Nani maa, me mar bhi jaoon to bho khud ko is ilzam se riha nahi kar sakati ki jo kuchh bhi hua vo sirf aur sirf mera dosh tha ... me jimmevaar hoon us anahoni ke liye jisne meri zindagi tabaah kar di " usne apne aansuo par mushkil se kaboo paate hue kaha.


" Nahi Rits , aisa nahi hai jo kuchh bhi hua vo bhagvan ki marzi thi "


"kaisi marzi naani maa ? bachapan mein mere mom-dad mujhse chheen liye aur jab zindagi me kisi ko apna mana to mera pyaar bhi mujhse chheen liya ... ye kaisi marzi hai bhagvan i aur agar yahi usaki marzi hai to phir usne ye rishte mujhe diye hee kyon ? kyon mujhe sapne dekhane par majboor kiya ? kyon use meri zindagi mein bheja " aur ye kahate-kahate vo phoot-phootakar ro padi.


" Nahi mere bachhe, bhagvan itna kathor nahin hai. jaroor usne teri zindagi ke liye bhi kuchh achha socha hoga ... aur tu to meri bahadur beti hai, too aise haar nahi maan sakati " granny ne kaha jabaki vo bhi jaanti thi ki Rits ke ghavon par is tarah ki baaten koii asar nahi karne vaali thi .


agle din subah Me yani Akhilwa apane doston ke saath ghoomne nikal gya. sara din pahado ki sair me vaqt ka kuchh pata hee na chla.


vapis aate - aate hum teenon bhayankar thak chuke the gand lal ho gai thi bc . tabhi raste me Anant ne gadi roki.


"are yaar vo dekh cafe chal vahan chalke thodi thakan utaren vaise bhi hotel kuchh door hi rehh gya hai "


"theek hai lekin jyada der nahi " Pritam bola.


" haan theek hai "


Hum teenon utarakar cafe "seezan" ki or chal pde ... Ye usi raste par tha jahan kal mujhko vo ladakk dikhaii di thi. Khair hum teenon jaakar ek table par beth gye.


" Ji sir kahiye apako kya chaahiye ?" pahadi sa dikhne vaala ek waiter hamare paas akar bola.


" teen coffee " Pritam ne ordar diya.


Me idhar udhar nazren ghumane laga. vo lakadi se bana ek wintage luck vaala chhota magar khoobasurat sa kafe tha jiske pichhali taraf bde aaram se barphile pahadon ko dekhne ka luft liya ja sakta tha ... Me ye sab notice kar hi rah tha ki tabhi mere pichhe ki taraf last table par baithi hui vo jannat ki pari dikh gaii .


Mere dil mein achaanak se thunderbolt honi lgi .


" Kya ye sirf ek ittefaak hai ? kal hi to nahi nahi ! vaise bhi ye ek chhota sheher hai our yahan kafe hi kitne hai .. ye ek itefaq hi hai " mene mann hi mann socha.


" Oye tu kidhar gum ho gya ?" Anant ne mere samne chutki bajaii.


"kuchh nahi main abhi aaya, only two minutes wait lawde " kehh'kar me table se uth gya.


" Ohhh hello kidhar chale ! "... Pritam ne awaaz lagaii.


" Chhod jaane de use, aa jayega" ... Anant ne use roka.


Me sidhe us kafe ke maalik ke paas gaya jo ek 70 saal ka bujurg vyakti tha.


"namaste kaaka, kaise hain ?" ... Me bola


"namaste beta, tum kaun ?" ...us vyakti ne kaampati aavaz me puchha.



To be countinue ....

 

[SultanTipu40]

achcha kiya riya ne bechari ne warning bhi diya tha phir bhi hero sahab so rahe hai

 

[kamdev99008]

Thanks guruji aap us thread par nhi aye to koi na par tha par niyamit bane rahiyega
Dhanyavad

Bhai us thread par bhi regularly padhta hu... Aur yahan bhi padhunga

Bas comment karne me kanjusi hai... Like se hi kaam chala liya karo

 

[aalu]

Yeh subah-subah sidha bed pe hi snana kee facility bari badhiya hain... Aise neend mein koi jabardasti uthate hain toh kasam se man karta hain uske jaan le le... Sala hum toh lar parte the.. pura kohni ko nukila bana ke dum laga ke ek dete the... phir uske baad mummy mujhe aake de dana dan... chappal se pooja karti thee subah mein hi.... aise morning kabhi-kabhi naseeb ho jata tha..... Waise tej bike ka dar aksar larkio ko hota hain.... na jaane kyun...

class mein toh tagri beizzati hui entry pe hi.. lekin hamare akki babu toh thehre moti chamri unhe kahe kee sharam... sala madam ko hi lapet liya... jab dosti tut-ti thee toh jalankhor doosre saathi ko bharkana shuru kar dete the... kahe ke dost ko aksar ek doosre kee kamjori pata hoti hain... aur phir wo bare khatarnak ho jaate hain.. aksar embarrasing secrets bhi jante hain... aur phir gusse mein saari class ke samne bak dete hain... aur phir sala jo beijjati karte the launde kee kya bataon .... har jagah se khoon nikal ke chhorte the...

 

[Kingfisher]

APDATE...3

Akki-- sorry mam age se aisa nhi hoga

Fir adhi chuti ho jati hai sab apna lanch box lekar ground par lagi bench par aa jate hai apni pet pooja karne ke liy

ab age...

sab kha kha rhe the to Amisha ake akki ke pass ake beth gayi uska lanch box bhi uske sath hi tha

amisha---akki thoda udher khisak mere ko betna hai 10 minutes ho gye hae bethne ki jagah dunte hue par yar ek bhi jagah khali nhi hai sab ke sab bhukkad hai thodi si sabra nhi kar sakte gar jakar. Bhi to kha sakte the

Akki---tu bhi kha sakti hai gar par

amisha--- yar tuje to pta hi hai na ki mere se bhukha nhi raha jata sabr nhi hota hai

akki --- ha to hum sab bhi to ensan hi hai na ... Chal jyada natak mat kar beth ja yha

amisha---are aaj tere sath tera vo dost nhi betha akhil dikh bhi nhi rha

Akki---dekh amisha agar tuj us chutiye ke bare me baat karni hai to tu yha se ja sakti ho

amisha--- chii tum kitne gande tarike se bat karte ho aur me kyo jau

akki---sorry yar par tu uski bat mat kar acha acha sunna na ek paratha de na mera to khana hi khatam ho gya ajj bhukh bi jyada lagi hai varna me kisi se mangata nhi tuje to pta hai

amisha---akki me tuje achi tarah se janti har bar kisi na kisi se mang hi leta hai acha mene bhi aaj khana kam hi layi to adha hi lele

akki---tikh hai adha to de

amisha ---yar jab tumhare sath akhil nhi hota hai tu aise bujhe hue se kyo rehta akhil kitna acha ladka hai tumne hi usse jagda kiya hoga

akki---yar amisha sach bta tere or akhil ke bich kuch chal to nhi rha hamesha tu uski hi side leti hai

amisha--- aisa kuch nhi akki me to bas aise hi puch rhi thi

akki--bahut badiya aur uske chakkar me padna bhi mat bahut kamina insan hai vo pehle bhi ek girlfriend rhe chuki hai uski esi school me

Amisha--- kabb mene to kabhi nhi dekhi usko kisi ladki ke sath

akki-- tum ladkiya hamesha bholi ki bholi rahogi tum ladkiyo ko kaise pta chalega tumhaara din to ek dusre ki chugliya karne me hi nikal jata hai uska best friend me hu ya tu

amisha--- shut up hum ladkiya aisi nhi hoti samje aur me tuj par vishwas bhi nhi karti

akki-- acha chod vaise mere bare me kya kyal hai meri girlfriend banogi kasam se tuje shoping bhi karaunga gar valo se chipkar

amisha-- apni bakvaas band kar varna chappal se marungi muje khana khane de

akki-- soch kar batana

ye dono yha bat kar hi rahe the ki akhil bhagta hua aya

akhil-- bhai vo senior mujse badtamiji kar rhe hai aur usne mujko mara aur abb vo yhi ane vale hai mera pich karte hue please bacha le

akki-- kun hai tu

akhir-- are me tera bestfriend akhil yar dekh hamare bich to jagda aur din hota rehta hai tu kal ki baat bhul ja

akki-- bhul jau kase bhul jaun yad hai tune mujhe kya kha tha

akhir-- Abe jo bhi kha tha uske liye me tere pair pakadta hu

akki-- to der kis bat ki jaldi pakad aur bol ki akki is great me gadha hu Me tera paltu kutta hu age se kabhi nhi karunga

akhil--- ye kuch jyada nhi ho rha

akki--dekh mere pass jyada time nhi hai jaldi bol

akhil---ha bolta hu me gadha.....
vi age kuch bolta usko akki ne rok diya
akki-- pair kon poakdega pair pakad ke bol

amisha-- tum kabhi eske bestfriend nhi ho sakte uski madad ke liye kya karwaye ja rhe ho

akki--tum apna muhh band rakh chimkandi

akki -- thodi der pehle to kya bol rhe the or ab dekho

akhil -- amisha kya bola esne tumhe

akki-- kuch nhi bola tu apna kam jari rakh mere pass vaise bhi time nhi hai
abhi vo kuch or bolte usse pehle hi teen ladke uske pass aa gye

usko dekh kar akki ki bhi hawa righte ho gayi akki ne akhil ko side me le ja kar bola

Akki-- yar khi ye bhi to jiise tumne panga liya

akhil---ha yhi to hai tabhi to ye tha aye hai .

akki -- ye tune kya kar diya enki body dekhi hum dono ko dho dhokar hamara bhurta bana dega bhai sorry me apni haddiya nhi tuda sakta tu chahe to me tere pair pakadta hu me gadha hu kutta hu par bhai mere ko jane de

akhir-- aisa mat kar hum dono to bachpan se best friend hai na mene bhi kai bar teri madam ki na

akki-- ab tu mujko emotional blackmail mail kar rha har acha thik hai par tumko bhi meri madad karni hogi
akhil---thik hai aur.....age hum kuch or bol pate piche se ek ladke ne akhil ki gardan pakad li

akki--oye chutiye chod usko varna teri aisi khatiya khadi karunga na ki sab se muh chipata hua firega samja

L1-- aur akki ke bache jyada syana na ban varna eske sath teri bhi halat kharab kar dunga

akki-- dekhte hae kon kiski kya karta hai

L 2-- lagta hai tera din bhi kharab hai
aisa bol kar akki ke upper japad pda akki ne mara ek mukka uske muh par sidha dhadam niche
tisare admi ne Moka dekhte hi Mari akki ko ek lat hamare akki bhai bhi ne jamin ke darshan kar liye
Udher akhil ko dono pitne lage akki jadi se khda hokar piche se L1 ko pakadkar mara pet me ek mukka banda pet pakad kar vhi beth gya
Fir akki ne L2 ke piche se dono hatha pakad liya or akhil se bola

Akki--akhil eska muh tod de sale ka ki ye zindagi bhar yaad rakhe es mukke ko dikha de apna dam ki akhil bhi kisi se kam nhi
Akhil ne jor se mukka banakar pure jor se de mara

Akki--- aaahhhh maaaa mar diya kutteeee

(Asal me hua ye tha ki jab akhil ne mukka marhi hi chaha ki vo ladka jisko akki ne pakad rakha tha vo akhil ko mukka marte hue dekhkar niche ho gya or mukka sidhe akki ke muhh par)

Fir kya un tino ko moka mil gya sambhalne ka fir dhone lage akki or akhil ko kuch hi time hua tha ki principal aa gye jisko Amisha ne bilaya tha ground par jiisse dono ki halat patli hone se bacha gayi

principal-- kya ho rha he ye sab school me gundagardi karne lage

L1-- sir galti in ladki ki hai

akhil--bhi sir suru en logo ne kiya tha
Principal-- asal me hua kya tha

akhil--- sir jab me banch par bethkar khana kha rha to en tino ne mera khana gira diya or botal ka sara pani mere upper gira diya

L2-- nhi sir ye jhut bol rha tha ye sab nhi hua tha

principal-- chup kro tu sab kal apne apne papa ko bulakar lana hoga varna kisi ka school me pravesh nhi hoga that it's Final

fir sab apni apni class me chale gye akki gurr kar akhil ko dekh rha tha

akhil---kan pakadkar dheere se ...so sorry


to be countinue..........

 

[Kingfisher]

achcha kiya riya ne bechari ne warning bhi diya tha phir bhi hero sahab so rahe hai

Ha bhai esme riya ki koi galti nahi hai us bechari ne to pure 10 tak gina tha

 

[Naina]

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