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Jannat1972

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Aapki ek aur behtreen story...mane pehle ek maa padhi wo bht shaandaar story thi ..uske fauran baad ye padhi..aapke writing skills jabardast hai ...itne sex scenes aur repeated hone k bawajood story m kahi boriyat mehsoos nahi hoti..saath m ek jabardast story bhi...yahi aapki lekhni ka kamaal h ...
Lekin kuch cheeze miss kar hayi aap jaise vakeel n bataya tha k mehta jee k pass bhi apkeke sasur n kuch choda h ..wo kya tha ...aur bank m jewellery bhi padi thi khandaani wo vhi riya n nahi nikali ...may b next part m aap ye daal de .....overall bht jabardast story..aur mai toh aapka fan ho hi gaya hu ..ab aapki teesri story padhunga.....best of luck..keep it up...with regards ..luv u 😘.
You are the best..
 
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kiyotaka007 said:
Bichare aap ke husband poora din mehnat karwate hoyega aap unn se lekin Maja unne bhi bhot aata hoyega
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ye to pati se hi puchna padega maja aata h ya nhi, sab mardo ke liye ghar ka butter chikin bhi daal ke brabar hota h
 
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Jannat1972 said:
Aapki ek aur behtreen story...mane pehle ek maa padhi wo bht shaandaar story thi ..uske fauran baad ye padhi..aapke writing skills jabardast hai ...itne sex scenes aur repeated hone k bawajood story m kahi boriyat mehsoos nahi hoti..saath m ek jabardast story bhi...yahi aapki lekhni ka kamaal h ...
Lekin kuch cheeze miss kar hayi aap jaise vakeel n bataya tha k mehta jee k pass bhi apkeke sasur n kuch choda h ..wo kya tha ...aur bank m jewellery bhi padi thi khandaani wo vhi riya n nahi nikali ...may b next part m aap ye daal de .....overall bht jabardast story..aur mai toh aapka fan ho hi gaya hu ..ab aapki teesri story padhunga.....best of luck..keep it up...with regards ..luv u 😘.
You are the best..
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bahut bahut dhanyawaad ji
is story me main aur bahut kuch likhna chahti thi ek aurat ke poit of view se, lekin readers ko alfa male wali story chahiye, ek mard 100 aurto ko chode wo sabko pasand aata h, ek aurat apni marji se kisi aur ke sath chude wo pasand nhi aata, ha apne pati ko dhoka dekar hero se chude usme bada maja aata h, bas aurat mard ka khilona honi chahiye, ye hi readers ki choise h, is story ko readers nhi mile isliye maine ise jaldi close kr diya
tisri story start ho chuki h apna kimti time nikal kr us per bhi apne comments jarur dena
love you too dear
 
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