ABHISHEK TRIPATHI
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bhai shayad ab sahil bidel banega nasha bhi karega aur mere hisab se oh sona se nafrat karne lagegayaar kitni kameeni nikli ye neha,isko ko to iske kiye ki saza zaroor milni chahiye,or bhai sahil ki narazgi or dori sone se itni jaldi khatam mat karna jb wo boarding se wapas aye to,or neha se to bilkul bhi nhi
congratulations for new story ...
Disclaimer padh KR mjaa aagya ...
sb SE funny mujhe..
Esa nahi ke Incest Story hai to Bahen koi chij lene ke liye Zuki he, Bhai ne use dekha, uski gand dekhi aur Uska Lund khada ho gya aur sidha jake daal diya, aur ban gya ek update. ...
kiya describe Kiye go Bhai..aisa lgta hai hi nhi hai pehli bar likhna suru kroge story aap.....
great job ..
all the best ..
Per kisi ka pyar, pyar dekar hi paya ja sakta hai,
please request hai ki neha ki baat koi sun Le aur use samjhaye.
Agar Jodi Sahil aur neha ki banegi to bahut hi behtareen hogi.
Behtareen update,
I think hero to sahil hai but heroen suhana ya Juhi ko hi bananaa... Please.....
4th character ko include mt krna....
Aur story me lust ya adultery ko add mat krna.
Kiyunki is forum me aisi hi lust aur adultery se bne huye bhut sari kachra peti stories h jo ???? pdhne me ekdm bkwas lagti h....
So bro sis emotional love story theme rkhna please ????
Koi aisa incident create kro ki neha aur meet me bhi sahil aur sona jaisa love create ho jaye but sahil shuhana aur Juhi ke bich kisi aur character ko include mt krna wrna Kahaani ka klpd ho jayega....