Nice mind blowing update brotherChapter 2 : Yeh Duriyan
Update 8
" Wow… Shanky… Audi…. Meri Fav…." Suhana ne Audi ke pass khade Sahil ke taraf dekhkar kaha.
" Yes Sona… Tumhari Fav Car… " Sahil Ne Suhana ke pass aate hue kaha.
"Ye hamari hai? " Sona ne Sahil ki taraf dekh kar pucha.
" Yes… Ye hummari Car hai. Mene Kaha tha na Ke Ek din Hum Audi me ghumenge. Aaj wo Din aa hi gya. Aaj Audi hai Hummare pass. " Sahil ne kaha.
Suhana kaafi khush thi. Usne turant Sahil ko apni baho me bhar liya.
" Shanky, I'm Proud of You. Juni Di, Momz aur Popz bhi Dekh kar bahut khush ho jayege. "
" Haan, Hum Sabhi sath Long Drive pe jayege, Hummari Car me. " Sahil ne Muskurate hue kaha.
"Kaali kaali khaali raaton se
Hone lagi hai dosti
Khoya khoya in raahon mein
Ab mera kuch bhi nahi"
Sahil ki ankhe achanak khul jaati hai. Use Realise hua ke wo Har roz ki tarah aaj bhi Sapna dekh raha tha.
Wahi Uske Mobile pe Ring baje jaa rahi thi.
"Har pal har lamha
Main kaise sehta hoon
Har pal har lamha
Main khud se ye kehta rehta hoon
Tujhe bhula diya oh
Tujhe bhula diya oh
Tujhe bhula diya oh
Phir kyun teri yaadon ne
Mujhe rula diya oh
Mujhe rula diya."
Sahil ye as Ringtone baj rahe Song ko sun raha tha aur Uski aankho me aansu the. Usne apni ankhe fir se badh ki aur Uski ankho ke samne fir se sab ke chahati ka Slideshow chalne laga. Pahele Niraj ka, Fir Priti ka, Fir Juhi ka aur last me Suhana ka chahera uske ankho ke samne aa gya.
Sahil ke Ankho ke anshu o ki dhar nikalne lagi.
Par tabhi Fir se kisi ka call ata hai aur wo Ringtone bajne lagti hai.
"Kaali kaali khaali raaton se
Hone lagi hai dosti
Khoya khoya in raahon mein
Ab mera kuch bhi nahi"
Sahil ne apni ankhe kholi aur anshu ponchhe.
" Useless Dreams. " Sahil ne khud se hi kaha.
Fir usne Mobile pe screen pe dekha to Screen pe Vashu Di Name display ho raha tha.
Sahil ne Turant call pick kar liya.
" Hello Sahil, Good Morning, Jaag gaye? " Samne se Vanshika ki awaj aai.
(New Character, Abhi aur bhi New Characters hai. Jinka Intro Next Update me.)
" Yes Di..Good Morning Di.. " Sahil ne kaha.
" Good.. Aaj last Exam hai na? "
" Haan, English ka.. "
" All the best. "
" Thank You Di. "
" You're welcome. Btw Tum kuch pareshan lag rahe ho. Is everything alright? "
" Yes Di. "
" Pakka na? "
"Haan Di.. pakka… "
"Vese Sahil, Suno. Exam ke bad Aaj mere flat pe aana hai tumhe."
" Ok Di. Aa Jaunga. "
" Mujhe shayad Late ho jaye aane me. Tum Mere flat ki keys le lena sath. "
" Okay Di. "
" Achha Chalo, Ab Tum apni padhai karo. Mein disturb nahi karungi. "
" Okay Di. "
" Bhul mat jana, Exam ke bad Mere flat pe. Bye.. "
" Bye.. Di.. Mein nahi bhulunga.."
Aur fir Sahil ne call cut kiya.
Call cut karke Sahil ne Mobile ko apne bed ke side rakha aur apne side ke bed pe dekha to Uska Room partner Rahul so raha tha.
Fir Sahil Fresh hone chala gya.
Fresh hone ke bad Sahil ne Chai banai aur fir chai pike apni padhai karne beth gya.
Kuch Der bad Jab Sahil padhai me busy tha tab Rahul ka Alram baja. Rahul bhi jag jata hai aur Alram bandh karta hai.
Fir Wo Sahil ko padhte hue dekhta hai.
" Oye Topper, Aaj English ke paper ke liye bhi 4 baje jaag gya? " Rahul ne Sahil ki taraf dekh kar kaha.
" Haan, English ko bhaw na deta to use bura na lagta.. " Sahil ne Rahul ke taraf dekh kar haste hue kaha.
Rahul bhi Sahil ki baat sunke Hasne lagta hai.
" Vaise sun, Aaj Party me jana hai. Yaad hai na? " Rahul ne Sahil ke taraf dekhkar pucha.
" Haan. "
" Job se chhuti li? "
" Yep. "
" Sahi life hai teri. Padhai ke sath kamai bhi. " Rahul ne fir se muskurate hue Sahil se kaha.
" Tujhe karni hai Job? Bol? Teri bhi job lagwa deta hu? "
" Job karni hoti to Mere Mama ki medical shop pe bhi Mein hi na chale jata. Tuje thode waha job pe lagwata. " Rahul ne haste hue kaha.
" Abe wo Medical Shop ki job thi. 3-4 Hajar milte the. Ye Call center ki job hai. 12 Hajar milte hai. "
" Par Abhi to Bhai yaha thode rahena hai. Aaj ki exam, Raat ko party aur fir apne ghar, Anand." Rahul ne muskurate hue kaha.(Anand Gujarat ke ek Shahar ka name hai.)
" Sahi hai. "
" Abey Tu nahi jaa raha kya apne Ghar Vadodara? " Rahul ne serious hokar Sahil se pucha.
" Pata nahi. "
" Pata nahi matlab? "
" Matlab Man to nahi kar raha. "
" Tera Ghar jane ka man abhi bhi nahi karta? Abey 3 Saal ho gye. Tuje 3 saal me kabhi ghar jate nahi dekha. 10th ke Exam ke bad 3 Months sale mere Mama ki shop pe hi so jata tha par ghar nahi gya. Tu yar bahut ajeeb banda hai. Akhir problem kya hai ghar se? " Rahul ne Sahil se pucha. Usne pahele bhi Sahil se is bare me pucha tha par Sahil ne kabhi bhi kuch bhi nahi bataya tha. Par Rahul ne socha ke Aaj last din hai. Shayad Sahil aaj apni problem bata de.
" Hai kuch Personal Issues. "
Sahil ne har bar ki tarah aaj bhi yahi excuse diya Rahul ko.
" Haan, Jo tu kabhi batane wala hai nahi mujhe. " Rahul ne kaha.
Wo samajh gya ke Sahil aaj bhi apni problem nahi batane wala.
" Chal chhod us baat ko. Tu bhi Padh le. Varna Fail ho jayega. "
" Pahele Chai to Pee lene de, Fresh to ho lene de."
" Thik hai. Thik hai."
Fir Rahul Fresh hone chala jata hai aur Sahil apni padhai pe lag jata hai.
Dusri taraf yaha Ahmdabad se kuch 300 Km dur Surat ke Ek Hostel me Suhana Bhi Padhai kar rahi thi. Uska Bhi to 12th ke Board ke exam chal rahe the.
Tabhi Uske Mobile pe Ring bajne lagti hai.
Suhana dekhti hai To 6 baj rahe the aur Juhi ka call tha.
" Hello Di..Good Morning.." Suhana ne kaha.
" Good Morning Sona… " Samne se Juhi ki awaj aai.
" Di, Aaj Last Exam… English ka. "
" Haan, Isi liye to maine aaj tumhe jagane 6 baje ko call kiya tha. "
" Haan, Par Di mein to jagi hi hui thi. "
" Haan.. Har baar ki tarah.. Vese Preparation kesi chal rahi? "
" Bas Thoda Revision baaki hai. Aur sab kuch to ho chuka hai. "
" Ghar kab aa rahi hai? "
" Soch rahi hun, Pura Saman leke Hi aa jau, aaj hi. "
" Friends ke sath ghumne ka plan nahi Bana? "
" Banaya hai Friends ne, but mein nahi jaa rahi. "
" Kyun?"
"Man nahi hai. "
" Tu bhi na Sona, In palo ko miss mat kar. Bad me pachtava hoga. "
" Nahi Hoga Di. Mein na jaldi se ab Ghar aana chahti hu. Ab yaha aur nahi rahena. Mujhe Shanky se jald se jald milna hai Ghar aake. Vesey Aapki koi baat hui Shanky se? Wo kab aa raha hai?"
" Nahi, Usne bola tha ke Exam khatam hone tak hum koi use call na kare. Use disturb hota hai. "
" Ohh.. "
" Vesey Bhi wo pahele jese kaha baat karta hai !! Badal gya hai Shanky. "
" Di, Aap Tension mat lo. Ek baar Mujhe Ghar aa jane do. Shanky ko ghar aa jane do. Mein use mana lungi. Mein bhi taras rahi hu Shanky ko dekhne ke liye, Uski awaj sun ne ke liye. 3 saal ho gye use Dekhe, us se baat kiye. "
" Mein bhi chahti hu ke sab ab jaldi se pahele jaisa ho jaye. Dekh na tujhe to pata hai yaha Mumma bhi udas hi raheti hai. Papa se bhi naraj hai Mumma. Shanky ne to Hume milne aane se bhi mana kar diya tha. Kitne Call karte hai ab ek call pick karta hai aur mushkil se 2 Min baat karta hai. Filhal to kuch bhi thik nahi hai. Par I hope ke ye sab jaldi se thik ho jaye. "
" Haan Di. Mein bhi yahi chahti hu ke sab thik ho jaye jaldi. Aap dekhna mein pahele to Shanky ko manaungi aur fir hum teeno milke sab thik kar dege. "
" Haan, Vese Sona, Ek kaam karti hu na. Hum tumhe wha lene aa jate hai agar tu aaj hi ana chahti hai to. "
" Okay Di. Mera Saman bhi aa jayega fir Aaj hi. "
" Okay. To fir Mein Hum 1 Baje Room pe pahunch jayege. 1 baje hi khatam hogi na? "
" Haan, Exam to 1 baje khatam hogi but Exam Center se Hostel jate 2 baj jate hai. "
" To fir hum Exam Center pe hi aa jayenge. "
" Thik hai Di."
" Achha Chal ab Me rakhti hu. All the Best. "
" Thank you di."
Aur fir Juhi call disconnect kar deti hai.
Call Disconnect karne ke bad Juhi fresh hone chali jati hai.
Idhar Suhana call disconnect hone ke bad apne Mobile se handsfree connect karti hai aur Mobile me Music player on karti hai. Usme ek Folder tha jiska name tha " His Voice. " Suhana wo folder open karti hai. Usme kaafi sari audio files thi.
Usme se wo ek audio file ko play karti hai.
"Hello….. Hello…. Kon?...... Oh.. Dekho… Mujhe pareshan mat kiya karo… Aur Aage se Mujhe kabhi bhi Call mat karna.. "
Ye Sahil ki awaj thi jo Suhana ne record ki thi jab usne ek unknown number se Sahil ko call kiya tha.
Suhana ki ankho me Sahil ki aawaj sunke anshu aa jate hai.
Pure folder me jitni audio files thi us sab me Sahil ke aawaj ki recordings hi thi.
Fir Suhana Gallery open karti hai or Ek Sahil ka photo open karti hai.
Suhana Ankh me anshu ke sath photo dekhti hai, " Shanky, Ab jab mein tum se milungi tab Mein tumhe mana lungi. Ye sab duriyan mita dungi, Saari Nafrate meeta dungi, Mein Aage kabhi bhi khud se tumhe juda nahi hone dungi. "
Wo Sahil ki Photo ko Dekh hi rahi the ke use ek jaani pahechan awaj sunai deti hai.
" O Madam. Kis se baate kar rahi ho video call se? "
Suhana ne awaj sunke Side ke bed pe dekha to Uski Room partner Arushi ki awaj thi jo ki abhi abhi jagi thi.
" Bas Ek Friend se baat kar rahi thi. " Suhana ne uski taraf dekhkar kaha.
" Friend ya Boyfriend? Ankh me anshu bhi dikh rahe hai mujhe to. " Arushi ne Suhana ke taraf dekhkar kaha.
" Are Friend hi na, tujhe to pata hai na Mujhe ye Bf vf ka chakkar nahi pasand. Aur kafi time se friend se mili nahi hu isi liye anshu aa gye ankh me. " Suhana ne kaha.
" Achha, kaafi khas friend hai." Arushi ne muskurate hue kaha.
" Haan, Kaafi Khaas hai. " Suhana ne bhi muskurate hue kaha.
" Achha chal Mein chai bana rahi hu. Payegi? " Arushi ne bed se uthkar kaha.
" Of course. "
"Okay. "
Fir Arushi Chai banane ke liye chali jati hai.
Idhar Suhana fir se Sahil ke photo ko dekhti hai. Is baar uske chahere pe ek muskan thi. Wo Mobile pe hi Sahil ki photo ko kiss karti hai.
" Jaldi milege Shanky. "
Aur Fir wo Mobile ko lock karke side mein rakh deti hai. Aur apni Padhai karne lagti hai.
Idhar Vadodara me Juhi Fresh hone ke bad Niche kitchen me aati hai. Priti Bhi Kitchen hi thi aur Nasta bana rahi thi.
" Good Morning Mumma. " Juhi ne Priti ko hug karte hue kaha.
" Good Morning Jinu. "
" Mumma, Ek baat batau? Aap sunke bahut khush ho jaogi. "
" Bata. "
" Mumma, Sona aaj ghar aa rahi hai. "
Priti, Juhi ki baat sunke Juhi se turant alag hoti hai. Aur fir Juhi ke taraf dekhkar Puchti hai, " Sachchi? "
" Haan Mumma, Sachchi. Aaj subah hi meri baat hui Sona se. Aaj last exam hai na 12th ka. To wo aaj hi aa rahi hai Ghar. " Juhi ne Priti ke taraf dekhkar muskurate hue kaha.
Priti ne Juhi ki baat sunke Fir se Juhi ko gale laga liya.
" Jinu Beta, Mein bata nahi sakti ke mein kitni khush hu. Aaj 3 saal bad Sona aa rahi hai. Me use dekh paungi mere samne. " Priti ne bhari awaj me kaha.
Juhi Priti se alag hoke dekhti hai to Juhi ki ankho me anshu the.
Juhi samaj sakti thi Priti ki paristhiti ko. 3 saal tak apne bachcho se alag rahena, unhe dekhe bine rahena aur upar se unke unki narazgi. Asan nahi hota ise sehna.
" Jinu, Shanky kab aa raha hai? Shanky se kuch baat hui? " Priti ne Juhi ke taraf dekhkar pucha.
Juhi ne naa me apna Sir hilaya.
Priti ke chahere pe fir se dard chha gya. Kyuki Suhana to thoda baat karti thi par Sahil ne in 3 saal me muskil se 10-12 baar baat ki hogi.
" Mumma, Aap udas mat ho. Mein Aaj uski Exam ho jane ke bad Use call karungi na. Wo bhi aa jayega. "
" Beta, Akhir kab tak mein apne bachho se dur rahungi? Kab tak unhe yun dur dur dekhna padega mujhe? "
" Mumma, Sab thik ho jayega. Aap dekhna. "
Tabhi wha Kitchen me Niraj aa jata hai.
Wo Priti aur Juhi ko dekhta hai.
" Kya hua Jinu? " Niraj ne Juhi ki taraf dekhkar pucha.
" Kuch nahi Papa. Aaj Sona aa rahi hai. " Juhi ne Niraj ki taraf dekhkar kaha.
Niraj bhi Suhana ke wapas ghar aane ki baat sunke khus ho gya.
" Aur Shanky? " Niraj ne Juhi se pucha.
" Shanky se abhi tak baat nahi hui Papa. Aaj exam ke bad baat karungi. "
"Okay. "
Fir Niraj Juhi ko Isharo me Priti ko sambhalne ko kaheta hai kyuki usne bhi Priti ki ankho me anshu dekhe the, aur fir wo wha se chala jata hai.
" Juhi, Pata hum bahot Bure Maa Baap hai na? Apne bachho ke sath itna bada Anyay kiya humne. " Priti ne ankh me anshu o ke sath Juhi ko dekhte hue kaha.
" Mumma, Us sab mein aap ki koi galti nahi thi. "
" Nahi, Galti thi. Mein apne bachcho ke liye kuch nahi kar payi. Mein ek achhi Maa nahi ban payi. "
" No Mumma. Kon kaheta hai ke aap Achhi Maa nahi ho? Mumma, Sachhi, Aap bahut achhi ho. Sachchi. " Juhi ne Priti ka hath apne hath me paka kar kaha.
" Ye sirf tum mujhe achha lagane ke liye bol rahi ho. "
" Nahi Mumma, Mein pure dil se bol rahi hu."
Aur fir Juhi fir se Priti ko hug kar leti hai.
" I Love You Mumma. "
" I Love you Too Beta. "
" Mumma, Aap fir jaldi se ready ho jaiye. Hume Sona ko lene Surat jane ke liye nikalna bhi hai na." Kuch der bad Juhi ne Priti se alag hote hue kaha.
" Haan, Meri Sona ko lene jane ke liye Jana hai na Surat. Mein jaldi se ready ho jati hu. Aur Jinu, Apne Papa ko nasta de dena. "
" Thik hai Mumma. "
Fir Priti Ready hone chali jati hai. Aur Juhi Niraj ke liye Naste ki plate lekar hall me aa jati hai.
" Good Morning Papa. " Juhi ne hall me aakar Niraj ke pass sofe pe bethte hue kaha.
" Good Morning Beta. "
" Papa Ye Aapke nilye nasta. " Juhi ne naste ki plate Niraj ko dete hue kaha.
" Tumne kiya Nasta? " Niraj ne Juhi ke hath se Naste ki plate lete hue kaha.
" Nahi. "
"To karlo. Aur Priti ne nasta kiya ? "
" Nahi. "
" To beta Tum nasta kar lo aur Priti ko bhi Nasta kara do. Mein to Priti ko ab Force nahi kar sakta. Tumhe hi kuch force karna padega na. "
" Papa, Humne socha ke Surat ke liye jaldi nikal jate hai. Safar lamba hai. Raste me bhukh lagegi tab nasta kar lege. Btw Papa aap aana chahte ho? "
" Aana to chahta hu. Par fir Priti fir pure safar me Mayush rahegi. Aaj Sona aa rah hai Is baat se Priti ke chahere pe kaafi time bad kuch khushi dekhi hai. To aaj Priti ko khush rahene do. Main nahi chahata ke wo aaj bhi mayush rahe Mere vajah se. To tum dono hi chale jao Sona ko lene. "
" Okay Papa. "
" Achhe se Drive karna. Jyada Fast nahi. "
" Okay Papa. Vese Papa..."
" Bolo Beta... "
" Papa aap bhi udas mat hona. Aur haan, Ye Duriyan ab hum jyada time tak nahi rahene dege. Sab jald hi thik ho jayega. "
" Mein bhi yahi chahta hu Beta."
Tabhi wha Priti ready hoke aa jati hai.
" Jinu, Mein ready hu. " Priti ne hall me aate hue kaha.
" Okay Mumma. " Juhi ne Priti ki taraf dekhkar kaha. Aur fir usne Niraj ke taraf dekhkar kaha, "Papa, Hum Surat jane ke niye nikalte hai. "
" Okay Beta. Bye.. " Niraj ne Juhi ki taraf dekhkar kaha.
" Bye Papa. "
" Bye Priti. " Niraj ne Priti ke taraf dekhkar kaha.
Priti kuch nahi bolti. Bas Niraj pe ek Najar daal ke Ghar se bahar nikal jati hai.
Fir Juhi aur Priti Car leke Surat jane ke liye nikal jate hai.
Niraj bhi nasta karke kuch der bad Ghar se Bike leke Office jane ke liye nikal jata hai.
3 Saal Beet chuke the Sahil aur Suhana ko Ghar se dur Boarding school me aaye.
Vese to log bole hai ke Samay kaha beet jata hai wo pata hi nahi chalta. Par asal me to jo insaan un paristhitiyo ka samana karta hai use hi pata hota hai ke wo samay kese beeta hai.
Yahi halat thi ye Puri family ki. Sab Dukhi the. Niraj, Priti, Juhi, Sahil sur Suhana.
Jab Sahil aur Suhana ka boarding school me addmission hua to unke pass 10th ki exam ke liye ek aur option tha. Kyuki wo dono 2 se jyada subject me fail nahi the to wo 2 months bad hi 10th ka exam de kar apna saal bacha sakte the. Par unhone aisa nahi kiya. Unhone 10th me fir se admission liya aur Sab subjects ki hi exam fir se dene ka faisla kiya tha.
Sahil ne Sabhi ko milne aane se bhi saaf saaf mana kar diya tha aur wo bhi sucide ki dhamki dekar. Wo call pe bhi kabhi kabar hi baat karta. Aur time ke sath uska baat karna aur kam hota gya.
Suhana bhi baat karti par pahele jese nahi. Jaha wo pahele har baat mein majak masti karti whi ab wo jyadatar bas serious hi raha karti thi.
Par Sahil aur Suhana dono ne hi man lagakar padhai karna shuru kar diya tha.
10th ke exam ke bad vacation me Sahil aur Suhana dono apene apne faisle pe ade rahe. Dono ne hi ghar aane se saaf saaf mana kar diya.
Sahil ne Vacations me uske apne Room partner Rahul ke Mama ki medical shop me naukri start ki. Aur wo raat me wahi shop me hi so jata tha.
Jabki Suhana aur Uski Room partner jo bhi vacations me apne ghar nahi janewali thi, Dono Surat me ek room rent pe leke wahi apne room pe hi ruke the.
Sahil aur Suhana dono ke man lagakar padhai karne ka asar unke 10th ke result me saaf dikhai diya. Sahil ke 92% aaye the aur Suhana ke 86% aaye the.
Result ke bad Un dono ne hi Science stream me admission liye aur PCM subjects select kiye the.
11 aur 12th me bhi Dono ne man laga kar padhai ki thi.
Aur Ab aaj ke din unke 12th ke exams khatam hone wale the.
Suhana to Aaj ki exam ke bad Ghar aane wali thi. Par Sahil ??
bahot mast bhai. but maine socha tha waisa nahi hua...
nice update bro maja aa gaya...
please bro update jaldi jaldi de dena
Khoobsurat update..bhai.. waiting for next....![]()
awesome bro,sahil ko abhi ghar nhi ana chahiye
Behtareen update,
Per Sahil abhi immature hai use khud ka dukh to dikh raha hai per family ka nahi socha, suhana ka nahi socha. Dekhate hai aage kya hota hai.
Awesome update
Nice mind blowing update brother
Next update Ka besabri se intezar
Sahi hai bhai mast epishod chal raha hai aise hi chalaao kahani ko sahil ko bhai samil karo cameli me lekin mature boy ki tara
Sahil ko wapas leke aawo apne ghar lekin emotion nahi hona chahiye bas aisa lage ki apni famely ke liye aya ho aur usko apni cariyar pe jyada dhyan ho age aapki marji aap mast likh rahe ho
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Sabhi Writers ko bhi Thanks aur Un Writers ko Motivate karne wale Readers ko bhi Thanks kyunki inhone is Achhe Platform ko Ek esi Place banaya jaha Hum sabhi Members kaafi Achha content enjoy kar paye.
Guys, Mein first time koi Story likhne ki try kar raha hu. Mein koi Professional Writer nahi hu par Mein puri koshish karunga yeh Story ko achhe se Likhne ke liye.
Story puri Imagination pe based hai. Kisi ki life se iska koi connection nahi hai. Agar Koi Connection milta hai to wo bas sirf ek co incidence hai.
Story ka Prefix Incest hai. So Jinko Yeh prefix na pasand ho wo na padhe. (Aur ho sake to hate na failaye just because of Particular Prefix which you don't like.)
Ab Prefix Incest hai aur Mostly Sabhi ko Meaning pata hai Incest ka. Par Mein yaha pahele Ek baat clearly batana chahta hun ke Story me obviously Incest hai, But sirf wohi ek Element pe yeh story focus nahi rahegi. Story me Sirf aur sirf sex nahi hone wala. Story me aur bhi bahot si chije hogi. So agar aap Yeh expect karte ho ke Har 2-4 Updates me sex scenes ho to yeh nahi hoga. I'm sorry for that. Story me Sex Scenes hoge par Story ke situation ke hisab se, jarurat ke hisab se. Esa nahi ke Incest Story hai to Bahen koi chij lene ke liye Zuki he, Bhai ne use dekha, uski gand dekhi aur Uska Lund khada ho gya aur sidha jake daal diya, aur ban gya ek update. So agar aap esi story expact kar rahe ho tab bhi yeh story aap ke liye nahi hai.
Ek dusri chij yeh hai Ke Yaha Story me sab characters Normal hounge, Koi Supernatural Power wala scene nahi hai. Aur nahi yaha Hero akele 10-12 bando ko akele pelte nazar aayega.
Aapke Reviews and Suggestions mere liye kaafi Important hai kyuki aapke reviews and Suggestions se hi meri writing skills improve hogi aur story me, writing me agar koi Improvement karna hoga ya galti hogi to uske bare me bhi muje usi se pata chalega. In the End yeh Story aur jyada achhi banegi. So If Possible, Plz Try to Give your valuable Reviews and Suggestions. Yaha bhi ek baat clear karna chaunga. Aap beshaq Koi bhi suggestion de sakte hai par plz yeh mat suggest karna ke jaldi se Sex Scenes daal do. I am not gonna do that. Baki aap Koi bhi suggestions de sakte hai, Koi chij na pasand aa rahi ho, koi loop hole ho ya fir story me koi bhi mistakes ho to Aap Muje bezizak bata sakte ho.
Updates Daily Dena mushkil hoga. But Mein koshish puri karunga. Aur ek baat pakki hai ke Story Complete hogi 100%.
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