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kya kammo bhaiya usko dalla hi bane rahen dena tha kya...
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Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hind section mein khula hai. Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai. Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge. Winning Writer's ko well deserved Awards milenge, uske alawa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne ka mouka bhi milega taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab ke liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai XForum ke sabhi readers ke upar apni chhaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.. Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunehra avsar hai apni kalpanao ko shabdon ka raasta dikha ke yahan pesh karne ka. Isliye aage badhe aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de. Entry thread 7th February ko open hoga matlab aap 7 February se story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 25th February tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega. Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.
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Update 9
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Aaj jab mai supari vasul karne gaya toh jaise mujhe vapas firr se apna atit dikh gaya.....
Ha ek muder kiya ta uski payment utha k vapas laut raha ta.... Toh raste me ek gali p ek larka dikh gaya.. Jo apni bahan k liye grahak khoj raha ta....
Sab dekho na bhoot achi hai... Ek baar dekho na hame thora hi de dena...
Oyee sunn kya kar raha hai be... Sala dalali kar rahai ki bhik mang raha hai.. Maine usse apne pass bulate kaha..
Vo dara sahma mere pass aya... Sab mera chota bhai bimar hai aur ham teeno bhai bahan bhuke hai .... Ilaj k liye paise chahiye kya kare...
Usse mere se baat karte dekh ek dubli patli si larki dauri dauri ham dono k pass ayiii. Uske aanko me mere prati nafrat ti....
Kiss bol raha hai ramesh jisne hame raste p la khara kiya usse....
Mai yah sun chauk gaya.....
Tabhi mere aadmi ne kaha... " Bhau.. Ye vai ganesh ki beti hai jise hamne pichle mahine tapka dala ta... "
Mai yah sun chauk gaya mujhe aaj pata chal raha ta.. Ki kabhi jaha mai ta aaj mai iss kadar badal gaya ki dusro ki jindgi b maine vaise hi bna dali jaha mai kabhi khud ta.. ...
Gari aage badh gai...
Mai sant baitha ta... Raste me apne purane ghar k pass se ho kar gujar raha ta... Toh maine bola... " Gari roko.....
Maii vahi utar gaya. .
Apne purane ghar ko dekh aankho k samne vapas se sara manjar nach gaya... Aankhe chal chala si gai...
Bhai chalna nai hai usman chala jayega... Mere admi ne kaha..
Tu ja... Tabhi mujhe kuch dhayan aaya... Sunn vo ganesh k bacho ko koi dikat nai honi chahiye unka sar khrach bhejwa de...... "
Aur mai vapas aage badh gaya...
Ye bhau ko huwa kya aaj jab se vo ganesh ki beti dikhi hai bara sant sant se hai aaisa ajib behave kar rela hai bhai....
Vo log aage badh gaye....
Tabhi dusre ne bola.. Bhau k bare me janta kya hai tu... Kuch b nai toh chup rah..
Mai ghar k andar ghusa... Samne vo bistar ta vahi chulha jaha kabhi di khana bnaya karti ti... Vahi bistar jispe ham sath me soya karte te vahi thali jisme vo niwala bna mujhe hotho me diya karti ti....
Par aaj mere hath me kuch nai ta kahne ko toh mai iss sagar ka dada ban gaya par firr b apni bahan ko na khoj saka aaj tak...
Mai vahi bas se tek laga dhul bhari fars p baith gaya aur dhire dhire apne atit ki yado me khota chala gaya....
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Aaj jab mai supari vasul karne gaya toh jaise mujhe vapas firr se apna atit dikh gaya.....
Ha ek muder kiya ta uski payment utha k vapas laut raha ta.... Toh raste me ek gali p ek larka dikh gaya.. Jo apni bahan k liye grahak khoj raha ta....
Sab dekho na bhoot achi hai... Ek baar dekho na hame thora hi de dena...
Oyee sunn kya kar raha hai be... Sala dalali kar rahai ki bhik mang raha hai.. Maine usse apne pass bulate kaha..
Vo dara sahma mere pass aya... Sab mera chota bhai bimar hai aur ham teeno bhai bahan bhuke hai .... Ilaj k liye paise chahiye kya kare...
Usse mere se baat karte dekh ek dubli patli si larki dauri dauri ham dono k pass ayiii. Uske aanko me mere prati nafrat ti....
Kiss bol raha hai ramesh jisne hame raste p la khara kiya usse....
Mai yah sun chauk gaya.....
Tabhi mere aadmi ne kaha... " Bhau.. Ye vai ganesh ki beti hai jise hamne pichle mahine tapka dala ta... "
Mai yah sun chauk gaya mujhe aaj pata chal raha ta.. Ki kabhi jaha mai ta aaj mai iss kadar badal gaya ki dusro ki jindgi b maine vaise hi bna dali jaha mai kabhi khud ta.. ...
Gari aage badh gai...
Mai sant baitha ta... Raste me apne purane ghar k pass se ho kar gujar raha ta... Toh maine bola... " Gari roko.....
Maii vahi utar gaya. .
Apne purane ghar ko dekh aankho k samne vapas se sara manjar nach gaya... Aankhe chal chala si gai...
Bhai chalna nai hai usman chala jayega... Mere admi ne kaha..
Tu ja... Tabhi mujhe kuch dhayan aaya... Sunn vo ganesh k bacho ko koi dikat nai honi chahiye unka sar khrach bhejwa de...... "
Aur mai vapas aage badh gaya...
Ye bhau ko huwa kya aaj jab se vo ganesh ki beti dikhi hai bara sant sant se hai aaisa ajib behave kar rela hai bhai....
Vo log aage badh gaye....
Tabhi dusre ne bola.. Bhau k bare me janta kya hai tu... Kuch b nai toh chup rah..
Mai ghar k andar ghusa... Samne vo bistar ta vahi chulha jaha kabhi di khana bnaya karti ti... Vahi bistar jispe ham sath me soya karte te vahi thali jisme vo niwala bna mujhe hotho me diya karti ti....
Par aaj mere hath me kuch nai ta kahne ko toh mai iss sagar ka dada ban gaya par firr b apni bahan ko na khoj saka aaj tak...
Mai vahi bas se tek laga dhul bhari fars p baith gaya aur dhire dhire apne atit ki yado me khota chala gaya....
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Kahani ko vapas padhne k paschat mujhe mahsus huwa vapas atit p focus karna jaruri hai aakhir kyu air kaise masum sa bhai ek gunda ban gaya aur kaha hai uski bahan jisse vo yaad kar vapas aasu baha raha hai par vo uske pass nai....
Kya raaz hai in sab k bich.... Kya aaisa huwa kyu vo badla jo imandarri p chalna chahta ta jisne aakhir bahan k jism ki kamai khane se inkar kiya ta jisne aaj vahi julm ki duniya me kya kar raha hai kaise huwa kyu huwa ye parivartan inn sab savalo k jawab atit me hi milenge isliye atit me jana aawasyak hai
Kya raaz hai in sab k bich.... Kya aaisa huwa kyu vo badla jo imandarri p chalna chahta ta jisne aakhir bahan k jism ki kamai khane se inkar kiya ta jisne aaj vahi julm ki duniya me kya kar raha hai kaise huwa kyu huwa ye parivartan inn sab savalo k jawab atit me hi milenge isliye atit me jana aawasyak hai
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