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Romance Zaroori To Nahi...

Kya Aplog Story me Romantic/ Kisi bhi tarah ka Sex Scene padhna chahenge jo storyline ko strong kare

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Maine Index banane ki koshish ki hai... Ap logon ke pass is baare me koi sujhao ho to jaroor bataye... 🙏



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"Mai tumhe chhod kar nahi jaunga Smriti"

Maine goliyan chalate huye kaha... Hum jahan chhupe the wahan se room ke darwaze tak ka raasta bas 2 kadmon ka tha... par utna chalne me hi humara seena challi ho jata...

"Tum Shoaib ko uthao aur darwaza kholo... Mujhe baju wali chhad par goli chalane wale dikh rahe hai... Mai unhe target karti hoon..."

Mujhe ek pal ke liye laga ki Smriti ne meri baat man li... Maine Shoaib ko uthaya aur bahar le jane laga... Par jis pal maine darwaze se bahar pair rakha... Smriti ne piche se darwaza band kar diya...

"Smriti... Please aesa mat karo... Mai tumhe chhod kar nahi ja sakta"

"Aur mai Shoaib ki jaan khatre me nahi dal sakti... Ye log yahan mujhe marne aye hai... Aur agar mai tum logon ke sath gayi to ye log picha nahi chhodenge... Please tum jao aur Shoaib ko... Ahhhh..."

"SMRITI... kya hua tumhe..."

Darwaze ke us par se mujhe Smriti ki dard bhari "aah" saaf sunai de rahi thi... Mujhe pata chal gaya ki Smriti ko goli lagi hai...

Mai darwaza khol kar andar jane hi wala tha ki samne ki seediyon se kuch log daudte huye humari taraf badh rahe the... Mujhe samajh aa gaya ki mai yahan ruka to mai kisiko nahi bacha paunga... Na Shoiab ko Na Smriti ko...

Maine Shoiab ko uthaya aur piche ki seedhi se niche le gaya... Jaise Smriti ne bataya tha wahan ek gadi khadi thi... Mai Shoaib ko wahan bithakar upar ki taraf bhaga to goliyon ki awaz ruk gayi thi... Mai dheme kadmo se age badha...

Achanak charon taraf police ka siren bajne laga... Mai samajh gaya jin logon ke pairon ki awaz maine suni thi wo policewale the...

"Do not trust Anyone"

Mere kano me Smriti ki awaz gunji... Mai janta tha ki mai Shoiab ya Smriti kisi ko bhi akele nahi chhod sakta... Lekin mai karta bhi to kya... Agar Smriti ke pass jata hoon to Shoiab apni jaan gawa dega... Aur nahi gaya to kahi wardi ke aad me chhupe Smriti ke dushman... Use kuch kar na de...

Mai isi ajeeb kashmakash me tha ki maine balcony me kisiko dekha jisse meri saans me saans ayi...

Balcony me Anubhav khada tha... Anubhav pichle saal hi IPS bana tha... Par ye uska pehla prayas tha... Isliye uski umar kafi kam thi... Wo rishte me Smriti ka chachera bhai lagta hai... Aur dono me accha rishta hai...

Aur baat sirf rishte ki nahi... Belt ki naukri me kaun kaisa hai is baat ki pehchan mujhe bakhoobi hai... Kiski kohni ghus me dubi hai... Kaun pressure me akar ghus leta hai aur kaun itne dabao me bhi apni reed ki haddi seedhi rakh kar chalta hai isko parakhne ki taqat bhagwan ne mujhe birasat me di hai...

Aur jahan tak baat hai Anubhav ki... Smriti ki tarah kuch kar dikhane ka jaswa aur apni duty ke prati imandari... Inke khun me behti hai... Mujhe is baat ka andaza ho gaya ki ye rescue operation shayad Anubhav ne hi lead kiya hai...

Mai chahta to tha ki ek jhalak Smriti ko dekh lun... Par maine khud ko badi mushkil se wapas moda... Gadi me baitha aur nikal gaya... Charon taraf police thi... Mujhe agar thodi si der aur hoti to shayad nahi nikal pata...

Maine gadi highway par lakar piche dekha... Jab laga ki haan koi humara picha nahi kar raha to maine gadi ek side laga di...

Phone apni jeb se nikala aur adress dhundne laga... "Notes" app me mujhe kayi address mile... Mai samajh nahi pa raha tha ki Shoiab ko kaha le jana hai...

"Pha...pharmacy... Mujhe pharmacy ... Le... Chalo"

Shoiab ko thoda thoda ho sh aa raha tha... Maine list me dhund to haan ek pharmacy ka address to tha... Par is waqt kya ek chhoti si pharmacy me Shoiab ka ilaj ho payega?

Pata nahi... Kuch pata nahi... Is raat ki har wardaat ka koi matlab hi nahi bana paa raha mai... Ab bas mera maqsad ek hi tha... Shoiab jo wo jaha bhi jana chahta hai wahan pohcha ke Smriti ke pass jana... Use akela chhodna khatre se khali nahi thi...

Mai Mumbai me naya tha... Map raaste in sab ke baare me pata hone ke bawajood... Ye pharmacy dhudne me mere paseene chhot gaye...

Aj ek raat me maine itne kanoon tode the... Ki in sab ko milakar asani se koi bhi meri wardi khade khade utarwa sakta hai... Huh! Par mai ab karun bhi to kya...

Akhir kar mujhe pharmacy mil gayi... Aur pehli baar pata chala ki Mumbai me itne traffic lights aur unpe itne police wale tainat rehte hai... Apna gaon hota to kabka pohcha deta...

Maine phone se pharmacy ka no dial kiya... Kisine nahi uthaya... Mai sochne laga ki kya karu... Kya Shoiab ko kisi hospital me le jaun

"On your knees... Ghutne pe baitho..."

Mumbai ki wo sumsan gali achanak darawni ban gayi... Kali poshak me kuch log hathon me bandook liye mere samne aa gaye... Kisine meri pith aur mathe par waar kiya aur mai behosh hone laga...

"Are ye Shoiab ko laya hai... Are uthao ise..."

Agle hi pal mujhe mehsoos hua ki kuch logon mujhe utha liya aur pharmacy ke andar le jane lage... Par uske baad kya hua... Mujhe yaad nahi...


"Are yasmeen tune ye kya kiya... Dekh to bechare ko kitnj zor se mara hai... Ab tak hosh nahi aya... Waese ye hai kaun..."

"Are yaar maine zor se nahi mara... Ye Mard ke bhes me hai hi nazuk kali... Koi Kabir Sigh Rathod hai... IPS batch 2017... Smriti ke 3 bodygurds me se ek"

"Ohh... To ye wo hai... Yaar dekh na... Kitna handsome hai... Iski bajuyein... Uff jaise faulad ki bani hai... Chehra... Ahhh... Man karta hai chhum loon..."

"Haan to chhum le na... Kisne mana kiya hai"

Hosh to mujhe 10 15 minute pehle hi aa gaya tha... Par mai chup chap bed pe pada pada in do ladkiyon ki baatein sun raha tha... Ek ka nam Yasmeen hai ye mujhe pata chal gaya...

"Yasmeen, Suman idhar aao... Shoiab ko hosh aa raha hai..."

Maine dono ladkiyon ko kamre ke dusri taraf jate huye mehsoos kiya... Maine ankhon ko adhkhula karte huye apna mooh dusri taraf kiya to Shoiab adha leta hua tha... Sab log use ghere khade the... Ek pregnant aurat jo shayad apne akhri mahine me thi usse lipat kar ro rahi thi...

Kya isi liye Smriti Shoiab ko bachane ke liye itni pagal thi... Najane kyun meri ankhein chalakna chahti thi... Mai Shoiab ka koi nahi... Wo mera akru boss aur mai uska izzat na karne wala junior hoon... Par aj use apno ke sath dekh kar mera dil khushi se bhar gaya... Kya ye Smriti janti thi... Ki mai Shoiab ko bacha lunga...

Par Smriti... Uska kya... Mujhe uske pass jana hai... Jana hi hoga... Uski... Uski jaan khatre me hai...

Maine apne ap ko bistar se uthane ki koshish ki to poora sharir bohot bhari lag raha tha... Sir chakra raha tha... Sirf chont ki wajah se nahi... Lagta hai kuch dawaiyon ka bhi asar tha...

Mai uth khada hua... Par apne kadmo par nahi tik paya... Bed par baith gaya... Maine pas hi apni shirt tangi huyi dekhi... Mai uthakar pehenne laga...

Mai chahta tha ki yahan se chup chap nikal jaun... Maine kamre ke charon taraf dekha to kamra thoda purana sa laga... Aur sabse hairani ki baat to ye thi kamre me mujhe kahi darwaza nazar nahi aya...

"Sit down young man... Yahan tum surakshit ho... Aur tumhe aram ki sakht zaroorat hai!!!"

Zabar update...
Chalo apni heroine too bach gyi...ab dekhte h kahani kis aur jaati h... intezar rahegaa next update ka..
 

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Maine mud ke dekha to samne ek lamba chauda admi khada tha... Kad me shayad mujhse bhi thoda lamba... Par umar ki wajah se sharir thoda jhuk gaya tha... Par fir bhi takriban 60 65 ki umar me bhi wo kafi taqatwaar maloom par rahe the...


"With due respect to your concern sir... Mai aur nahi ruk paunga... Mujhe is waqt bohot zaroori kaam hai... Mujhe Smriti ke pass jana hai".


"Smriti ko hospital le gaye hai... Waha uska ilaj ho raha hai... Tum koi doctor to nahi... Ki uske liye is waqt dua se jyada kuvh kar paoge... Aur dua tum yahan ruk kar bhi kar sakte ho..."


Wo admi mujhse baat kar hi raha tha ki wo do ladkiyan jisme se ek kanam Yasmeen aur ek ka nam Suman tha... Aur sath hi ek ladka... Mere aas pass akar khade ho gaye... Maine gaur kiya ki sab ke pass bandookein thi aur mai is waqt khali hath tha... Mai bed par pair chadha kar baith gaya...


"Everyone Relax... Ye bhi ek officer hai... Acche se pesh aao inke sath..."


Us admi ki baat par wo teeno idhar udhar rakhe chair aur sofe par baith gaye...


"Kya mai jan sakta hoon... Ki yahan kya ho raha hai? Aur ap log kaun hai?"


Maine shant tarike se pucha...


"Mera nam Sanjeev Kelkar hai... Mai ek Retired judge hoon... Aur ye Suman meri beti aur Sameer mera beta... Aur ye Yasmeen hai... Smriti ki school friend... Aur Shoiab se to tum mil hi chuke ho... Aur wo Shoiab ki patni Afreen"


Maine sab par nazar ghumai... Par abhi bhi mai kuch thik se samajh nahi paa raha tha...


"Dekho Kabir... Ye to hume bhi thik se nahi pata ki kya hua... Kyun hua aur kaise hua... Ye baat to mujhe bhi abhi tak sahi se nahi pata...


Tell me Kabir... Kya tumhe kabhi is baat ki hairani nahi hui... Ki sirf Smriti ki suraksha ke liye itni security kyun?"


"Sawal to uthe man me... Par..."


"Par tumne kabhi pucha nahi... hai na?"


"Dekho Kabir mai aj tumhe kuch baatein batana chahunga... Kyun ki Shoiab ki jo halat hai... Uske baad tumhe hi Smriti ki security ka zimma uthana hoga..."


Mai gaur se Sanjeev ji baatein sunne laga...


"Smriti ki maa matlab Annu meri chacheri behen hai aur uske pita mere acche dost... Isi silsile me mai use janta hoon...


Karib 3 mahine pehle... Ek din Smriti ne mujhe call kiya... Uski posting pehle Madhyapradesh me hui thi... Shayad tum jante hoge..."


Maine haan me sir hilaya...


"Wo call par mujhe thodi ghabrayi hui lagi... Aur wo jitna ho sake utna us ghabarahat ko chupane ki koshish kar rahi thi... Usne meri madad mangi... Kaha meri posting Maharashtra me specially Mumbai ya Thane me karwa dijiye...


Mere kuch connections the... Maine uski posting hone me madad ki... Par sirf meri madad se ye samvab nahi tha...


Is mamle me Aditya... Politician... Jante to hoge use..."


Maine haan me sir hilaya...


"Usne Smriti ki bohot madad ki"


Maine bohot koshish ki... Mere dil ka toofan chupa loon... Par Aditya ka nam sunte hi mai khud ko rok nahi paya... Mere chehre ke bhav dekh kar Sanjeev ji ko ye shayad ab tak pata chal gaya hoga ki mai Aditya ko bilkul pasand nahi karta...


"Smriti ki posting par kayi sawal uthe... Use Executive Officer ki post mili... Lekin is post ke liye aur experienced log tak lagaye baithe the... Par Smriti ne aesa kyun kiya mujhe aj tak pata nahi chala...


Yahan ane ke baad Smriti ne apni team banani shuru kar di... Suman, Sameer, Yasmeen, Ek lawyer hai Sugandha aur Shoiab... Ye sabhi log kisi mamle me Intel jama kar rahe the... Par kisi ko bhi nahi pata ki poora mamla kya hai..."


"Dekhiye Sanjeev ji..."


Maine apni baat shuru ki...


"Aj Smriti ne Shoiab ko bachane ke liye apni jaan dao pe laga di... Kuch log itne beparwah hai ki wo is district ke Executive Officer par hamla kiya wo bhi ek high profile party me... Ap mujhe jitna bata rahe hai usse kayi jyada pechida hai ye mamla... Ab pata nahi Smriti kis halat me hai...


To mai ab apki izazat chahta hoon..."


"Haan jaroor... Mera beta tumhe ghar chhod dega... Ye lo... Ye pendrive rakho... Isme hume jo kuch bhi pata hai... Wo sari jankari hai... Use it well young man"


"Waese ye jagah hai kya"


Maine Sanjeev ji se pucha...


"Haha... Ye jagah... Ye ek safe house hai... World war one me ise pehli baar banaya gaya tha... Uske baad freedom fighters ne ise use kiya... Ye jagah mujhe pariwarik virasat ke roop me mili hai..."


"Par yaha se nikal ne ka raasta?"


"Come with me..."


Sameer ne mujhe apne sath ane ko kaha...


"Kabir..."


Mai is jagah ko chhodne ko taiyaar tha hi ke Shoiab ne mujhe oiche se awaz lagai... Wo bed par adha leta hua tha aur uske pet par patti bandhi hui thi... Mai uski taraf age badh gaya...


"Thank you... Aj tum aur Smriti nahi hote... To mai baap banne ki khushi milne se pehle hi is duniya se jaa chuka hota"


"Are sir please... Ye to mera farz tha"


Shoiab ne mujhe achanak gale laga liya... Pehle mujhe laga shayad bhabhuk hokar... Par fir usne sabse chupa kar mere kan me fusfusaya...


"Packet tumne ek baar kho diya... Dobara mat khona... And remember do not trust anyone"


Maine us lifafe ko seedha meri shirt ke andar sarakte huye mehsoos kiya... Sabse chupa kar Shoiab ne us pagal se admi ke diye packet ko mujhe saunp diya... Mai itni afra tafri me is packet ke baare me bhool hi gaya tha... Pata nahi kaise Shoiab ne ise apne pass chupa liya... Aur yahan use mujhe ye packet chupa kar dene ki kya zaroorat hai... Kya ye sab uske dost nahi?


Mera dimag charon taraf kam karne laga... Jo ab tak mujhe bataya gaya wo sach hai?? Kya wakai mai yahan se aj zinda nikal paunga?


Mai dhere dhere Sameer ki taraf age badh gaya... Wo bhi mujhe raasta dikha kar ek sink ki taraf le gaya... Wahan usne meri taraf muskura kar ek tile ko piche ki taraf sarkata to pass hi ek khufiya darwaza sarak kar khul gaya... Mai ek pal ke liye hairan ho gaya...


Sameer ke piche piche mai us darwaze se hote huye pharmacy tak aa pohcha... Sameer ne bahar khadi bike start ki aur mai uske piche baith gaya...


Maine raaste me ek collegue ko message karke pucha ki Smriti ko kis hospital me le gaye hai... Maine Sameer ko wahi le chalne ko kaha...


Aj ki raat ne meri zindegi ko ulat palat kar rakh diya... Lekin jo bhi kuch hua... Usme sabse zaroori is waqt yahi tha ki mai Smriti ke pass pohoch paun... Use ek jhalak dekh lun... Wo thik to hai na... Mujhe ye tak pata nahi ki use goli kahan lagi... Mai isi kashmakash me gum tha ki hospital aa gaya...


Sameer ne mujhe utara aur bina kuch bole bike ghuma kar chala gaya... Mai daudta hua andar gaya... Maine reception par Smriti ka nam bola to bataya ki patient critical hai aur use ICCU me rakkha gaya hai...


Mera dil baith gaya... Mai Smriti ki is halat ke liye baar baar khud ko dosh de raha tha... Uski hifazat meri zimmedari thi jise mai nibha nahi paya... Maine itna bebas aj tak khud ko kabhi mehsoos nahi kiya jitna aj kar raha hoon... Man kar raha tha... Use gale laga lun... Ek baar wo mujhe tham le... Aur mai ek baar usse maafi mang lun...


Mai daudta hua ICCU ke bahar pohcha... Mai use ekbaar bas dekhna chahta tha par wo bhi aj mumkin na ho saka...


ICCU ke bahar Aditya khada tha... Sath hi uske admi uske body guards aur bohot sare policewale... Aditya ka chasma uske hath me tha... Wo ek tak cabin ke andar dekh raha tha... Uske ankhon me nami thi... Smriti ko khone ke dar se bhi bar kar ek aur dar mujhe satane laga... Kya rishta hai in dono ka?


Mai dheme kadmo se age badha... Lekin jaise hi Aditya ki nazar mujh par padi... Uski ankhein gusse se jal uthi...


"Giraftar kar lo ise... Yehi hai culprit... Isiki wajah se Smriti ki aj ye halat hai... Arrest him"


Saari ungliyan mujh par uth rahi thi... Mai kuch samajh pata... Apna bachao kar pata... Usse pehle hi mere department ke log... Mere juniors ne mujhe hatkari pehna di!!!
 
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kabir smriti ko chhor ke kaheen nahin jana chahta lekin niche jo chhedi lal para hain usko toh oxygen cylinder black mein kharid ke dila deta.... Isiliye kehta hoon ladkio ka kabhi yakeen na karna chahiye dekho ain mauke pe Ga###d pe laat maar de.... hmmmm lagta hain smriti andar maje mein hain aah uhhh kar rahi hain... sala yeh chhedi lala ko itna chotil hone par bhi pharmacy se chhata lena hain :D... kahan se laate hain itni hawas... laundiya ne naajuk kali bola....:hehe: .. toh hamari naajuk kali IPS nikli... iski izzat khatre mein hain idhar... bechara smriti ko bachaye kee khudkee izzat... sali hawsi laundiya.. baap ka maal samjha hain... smrit ka tanka bhira hain wo bhi tagra wala...

lagta hain behoshi kee halat mein hi loot chuki hain kuchh na chhora in hawsio ne bechare ko theek se khara bhi na hua jaa raha hain... ai pechhe check kar shab theek toh hain na...
 

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Nice action scene, great scene writing. Loved how you added a new character, anubhav on IPS position also in the family relation of our female lead, shares same personality traits as well.

Also, i think cause kabir likes smriti he automatically tends to like her brother as well, his heart influences his decision about her brother.

Plot seems to be revolving around shoaib and smriti uptill now, lets see how it unfolds in future update.

Great writing, keep going like this
Thank you very much for appreciating Adam...

For now let's say Kabir trusts Anubhav with Smriti's safety... Any other speculation would be too soon for now...

I have posted a new update... Some more characters... Actually a lot of characters I have added... Let me know which one attracts you the most ☺️

Stay tuned 🤝
 
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Add rainbow 🌈 colours aka different colors for the "index".
Use some pointing smileys like :writing: Or ✍ ,

Add colors to the "updates" in index, make it more spacious. Make index post as sticky post, so that new readers can easily read yiur story.

Try to make and add a poster about your story.
I am not that of a creative person in case of colours and graphics... But will try to recreate the Index

And poster 😬 will try my hand in that too 👍

Thanks for you grat suggestions ☺️
 
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