Adultery Ziddi ammi or unka student

[shakirali]

Taqriban das din se writer forum par nahi aaya hai… mere khyaal se ye kahani bhi doosri kai kahaniyo ki tarah hi ab dam tod chuki hai aur iske aage update aane ke jyadaa asaar hai nahin ab.

 

[Kodom Ali Mastan]

Awesome and amazing story!
Marvelous and enticing writings!
Fantastic and fabulous narrations!

 

[think boy]

Come yrr koi to javaab de do

 

[aloned]

Taqriban das din se writer forum par nahi aaya hai… mere khyaal se ye kahani bhi doosri kai kahaniyo ki tarah hi ab dam tod chuki hai aur iske aage update aane ke jyadaa asaar hai nahin ab.

Nhi Bhai mujhe lagta h writer bade update ki tayyari kar rha h. Kyo ki writer ek hafte m sirf ek hi update deta h. Isliye ho sakta h writer bada update tayyari kar rha hoga to usme der lag Rahi hogi

 

[vijay19884verma]

Update bro

 

[shakirali]

K

Nhi Bhai mujhe lagta h writer bade update ki tayyari kar rha h. Kyo ki writer ek hafte m sirf ek hi update deta h. Isliye ho sakta h writer bada update tayyari kar rha hoga to usme der lag Rahi hogi

khuda karey ki aisa hi ho aur ye kahaani isi tarah kaafi aagey tak jaaye!

 

[Blackpearl]

Taqriban das din se writer forum par nahi aaya hai… mere khyaal se ye kahani bhi doosri kai kahaniyo ki tarah hi ab dam tod chuki hai aur iske aage update aane ke jyadaa asaar hai nahin ab.

Jab ye kahaani forum ne band ki tab bhi writer ne poora edit karke is story ko aage badayata. Story achese likne ke liye thoda aur time lag gaya hoga. Never pads minus comments.

 

[Sushilnkt]

Update

 

[Kodom Ali Mastan]

Waiting

 

[think boy]

R u okh bro please koi update do apne bare me