Adultery Zindagi ki bebasi... A family men cuckold ( complete part 1)
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This is very good story. This is the first time i am commenting on any story. But update is very slow and writer started a new story as well.
If writer is serious and there is plot in his mind then in one hour time he can write a lenghty update daily.
Anyways good story but writer attitude is sprry to say disgusting
If writer is serious and there is plot in his mind then in one hour time he can write a lenghty update daily.
Anyways good story but writer attitude is sprry to say disgusting
Update after 72 days will be more thrilling. So it will be better to update after 72 days. You're writing very good story but your update and attitude is just ....... ...........
Rocky06
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This story waste of time....
Shit concept and suspense
Shit concept and suspense
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Real don
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Attitude is nothing.... Ghar ka kam dhaam bhi to karna hota hai dost
Ya bas rat din ye Muth Marne ka gyaan likhtey rahe ...
You're right brother but if you have plot in your mind then you can write a good update in 30 minutes to 1 hour time.
By the way if you can update today then thanks in advance.
It is really a good story and plot by the way. Write story according to your mind but update today and regular updates will be appreciated
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