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Romance Zindagi (mohabbat aur Nafarat)

Akil

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Di- Mom dad Priya aur mohini.
Mai-Wo log yaha Kya kar rahe hai. Aur ha Mai kisi se Nahi milna chahta.
Di- Bhai wo log Kal sham se hi yahi par Tera wait kar rahe hai.
Mai-Par Di
Di- Koi par war Nahi time mujhe promise Kiya hai ki tu Meri har baat manega.
Mai-Thik hai Di aap jaisa bologi Mai karunga but unse baat Karne ke liye aap mujhe force Nahi karengi

Mai aise hi bed par leta raha Jiju bagal me baithe the tabhi Di sabhi ko lekar room ke andar dakhil huyi tabhi Meri najar unpar padi sabhi ki aankho rone ki wajah se poori Lal Hui padi thi. Unko aise dekh kar mujhe bhi dukh huya lekin Maine unko ignore kar Diya.
Jab sabhi mere pass aayi aakar bed ke dono taraf khade ho Gaye .
Mom ne mere sar par hath rakha toh Maine unka hath apne sir se hata diya. Jisse Mom ki aankho me aansu aa Gaye
Mom-(rundhe Gale se)Beta ab bhi hamse naraj hai Kya hame maf Nahi kar sakta .
Mai kuch Nahi bola.
Dad- Beta hum jante hai ki humse galti huyi hai hum tumse apni galti ki mafi mangte hai. Ek baar Hume maf kar de
Dad ki aankho me bhi aansu the. Par Mai isbaar bhi chup that.
Mohini- Bhaiya apni gudiya ko bhi maaf Nahi karoge. Manti hu galti humri hai par aap bhi sochiye ki us samay Kya condition thi Mai kis mental condition me thi.
Tino kuch na kuch bole ja rahe the lekin Mai chup tha kuch bol Nahi raha tha.
Priya bs mujhe dekh rhi thi uski aankho me aanshu bah rahe the lekin uski aawaj Nahi nikal rahi tha.
Mai-(Priya se )Tumhe bhi kuch bolna hai .
Priya-........
Mai- (rukhepan se)- ab mujhe aaram karna hai.

Meri baato se sabko dukh hua lekin koi kuch Nahi bola. Priya ko chhod kar sab room se bahar chale Gaye.
Mai- (Rukhepan se) Tum kyon Nahi gayi.
Priya-..............
Mai- jawo yaha se ab mujhe Sona hai mujhe kisi ki jarurat Nahi hai.
Lekin Priya toh kuch bol hi Nahi rahi thi.
Mujhe uski ignorance par gussa aa gaya aur apne bed se uth kar kar uske dono bajuo ko jor se pakad liya. Usko mere pakadne se dard hua toh usne dard ko bardast Karne ke liye apne jabde bhinch liye aur dard bardast Karne ki kosis kar rahi thi.
Mai-(Priya ki aankho me dekhte huye) Ab kyon chup ho bolo tum kyon rukhi ho yaha akhir Mai kaun ho tumhara
Priya- pati.(Priya ke muh se bas itna hi nikla)

Maine uske baju chhod diye aur bed par baith gaya. Mere bhi aankho me aanshu aa Gaye
Mai- kyon aaj yad aaya ki Mai tumhra pati hu in 6salo me aise Kya ho gaya Jo tum mujhe pati man liya.
Priya-...…...........
Mai- par Mera kisi se koi rista Nahi hai.
Mere aur Priya dono ke aankho se lagatr aanshu bah rahe the .
Idhar kamjori ki wajah se mujhe chakkar aane laga Mai girne Wala tha tabhi Priya ki najar mujh par padi
Woh daud kar mere pass pahunchi aur Sahara dekar bed par litaya aur .
Priya- Aapko jitna gussa hone hai thik hone ke baad ho lijiye ga.
Mujhe bed par lita kar mere upar chadar dal Diya aur wahi pade kurshi par wo baith gayi. Mujhe ab mind aa gayi thi.
Priya ke dono bajuo par mere pakdene ki wajah se kale Nishan pad Gaye.
Priya-(man me)- mai Kya kahu mujhe kuch samajh me Nahi aata hai ki galti kiski hai Jo bhi hua uska adhar ek ghinauna jhooth tha jiske Karan us waqt hamne Gusse me Aapko apni baat rakhne ka mauka hi Nahi Diya aur baad me aapne humko koi mauka Nahi Diya lekin Jo bit gaya usko toh Nadal toh Nahi sakte lekin ab Mai Aapko Mana ke rahungi chahe mujhe uske liye kuch bhi karna pade.

(Ab dekhna ye hai ki Priya Surya ko kaise manati hai. Filhal inko yahi rahne dete hai )

Dusri taraf do log aap me baith kar baat kar rahe the (unko u1 aur u2 likhunga)
U1- Tmko pata chala Surya wapas aa gaya.
U2- ( chaunkte huye) Kya, kab,kaise.
U1- Detail toh pata Nahi par itna confirm hai ki wo aa gaya.
U2- par 6 Sali baad kyon wapa s aaya hai
Past mein aisa kya hua tha jo surya aaj apne hi parivaar se is qadar naaraaz hai ki unka chehara tak dekhna pasand nahin karta?
Aur agar jo bhi kuch hua Past mein uske baare mein surya ke parivaar ko yeh kaise pata laga ki surya inocent tha
Priya kis jhooth ki baat kar rahi hai?
Dekhte hain ki woh surya ko kaise mana paayegi mana paayegi bhi ki nahin....
Yeh do log kaun hain aur woh surya ko kaise jaante hain ya yoon kahun ki unka surya se kya vaasta hai?
Aur in logon ko kaise pata laga ki surya waapas aa gaya hai?
Surya pichhle 6saalon se apne parivaar se door tha toh aisi kya wajah hai ki use ab apne parivaar ke paas aana pada hai...
 
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Update-15​
Di- Mom dad Priya aur mohini.
Mai-Wo log yaha Kya kar rahe hai. Aur ha Mai kisi se Nahi milna chahta.
Di- Bhai wo log Kal sham se hi yahi par Tera wait kar rahe hai.
Mai-Par Di
Di- Koi par war Nahi time mujhe promise Kiya hai ki tu Meri har baat manega.
Mai-Thik hai Di aap jaisa bologi Mai karunga but unse baat Karne ke liye aap mujhe force Nahi karengi

Mai aise hi bed par leta raha Jiju bagal me baithe the tabhi Di sabhi ko lekar room ke andar dakhil huyi tabhi Meri najar unpar padi sabhi ki aankho rone ki wajah se poori Lal Hui padi thi. Unko aise dekh kar mujhe bhi dukh huya lekin Maine unko ignore kar Diya.
Jab sabhi mere pass aayi aakar bed ke dono taraf khade ho Gaye .
Mom ne mere sar par hath rakha toh Maine unka hath apne sir se hata diya. Jisse Mom ki aankho me aansu aa Gaye
Mom-(rundhe Gale se)Beta ab bhi hamse naraj hai Kya hame maf Nahi kar sakta .
Mai kuch Nahi bola.
Dad- Beta hum jante hai ki humse galti huyi hai hum tumse apni galti ki mafi mangte hai. Ek baar Hume maf kar de
Dad ki aankho me bhi aansu the. Par Mai isbaar bhi chup that.
Mohini- Bhaiya apni gudiya ko bhi maaf Nahi karoge. Manti hu galti humri hai par aap bhi sochiye ki us samay Kya condition thi Mai kis mental condition me thi.
Tino kuch na kuch bole ja rahe the lekin Mai chup tha kuch bol Nahi raha tha.
Priya bs mujhe dekh rhi thi uski aankho me aanshu bah rahe the lekin uski aawaj Nahi nikal rahi tha.
Mai-(Priya se )Tumhe bhi kuch bolna hai .
Priya-........
Mai- (rukhepan se)- ab mujhe aaram karna hai.

Meri baato se sabko dukh hua lekin koi kuch Nahi bola. Priya ko chhod kar sab room se bahar chale Gaye.
Mai- (Rukhepan se) Tum kyon Nahi gayi.
Priya-..............
Mai- jawo yaha se ab mujhe Sona hai mujhe kisi ki jarurat Nahi hai.
Lekin Priya toh kuch bol hi Nahi rahi thi.
Mujhe uski ignorance par gussa aa gaya aur apne bed se uth kar kar uske dono bajuo ko jor se pakad liya. Usko mere pakadne se dard hua toh usne dard ko bardast Karne ke liye apne jabde bhinch liye aur dard bardast Karne ki kosis kar rahi thi.
Mai-(Priya ki aankho me dekhte huye) Ab kyon chup ho bolo tum kyon rukhi ho yaha akhir Mai kaun ho tumhara
Priya- pati.(Priya ke muh se bas itna hi nikla)

Maine uske baju chhod diye aur bed par baith gaya. Mere bhi aankho me aanshu aa Gaye
Mai- kyon aaj yad aaya ki Mai tumhra pati hu in 6salo me aise Kya ho gaya Jo tum mujhe pati man liya.
Priya-...…...........
Mai- par Mera kisi se koi rista Nahi hai.
Mere aur Priya dono ke aankho se lagatr aanshu bah rahe the .
Idhar kamjori ki wajah se mujhe chakkar aane laga Mai girne Wala tha tabhi Priya ki najar mujh par padi
Woh daud kar mere pass pahunchi aur Sahara dekar bed par litaya aur .
Priya- Aapko jitna gussa hone hai thik hone ke baad ho lijiye ga.
Mujhe bed par lita kar mere upar chadar dal Diya aur wahi pade kurshi par wo baith gayi. Mujhe ab mind aa gayi thi.
Priya ke dono bajuo par mere pakdene ki wajah se kale Nishan pad Gaye.
Priya-(man me)- mai Kya kahu mujhe kuch samajh me Nahi aata hai ki galti kiski hai Jo bhi hua uska adhar ek ghinauna jhooth tha jiske Karan us waqt hamne Gusse me Aapko apni baat rakhne ka mauka hi Nahi Diya aur baad me aapne humko koi mauka Nahi Diya lekin Jo bit gaya usko toh Nadal toh Nahi sakte lekin ab Mai Aapko Mana ke rahungi chahe mujhe uske liye kuch bhi karna pade.

(Ab dekhna ye hai ki Priya Surya ko kaise manati hai. Filhal inko yahi rahne dete hai )

Dusri taraf do log aap me baith kar baat kar rahe the (unko u1 aur u2 likhunga)
U1- Tmko pata chala Surya wapas aa gaya.
U2- ( chaunkte huye) Kya, kab,kaise.
U1- Detail toh pata Nahi par itna confirm hai ki wo aa gaya.
U2- par 6 Sali baad kyon wapa s aaya hai

Nice update bhai .. kahani badi interesting lag rahi hai .. chaliye dekhte hai aisa kya chupa hai suryaa ke past me or ye log kon hai jo surya ke aane se pagla gaye hai ..
 

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Di- Mom dad Priya aur mohini.
Mai-Wo log yaha Kya kar rahe hai. Aur ha Mai kisi se Nahi milna chahta.
Di- Bhai wo log Kal sham se hi yahi par Tera wait kar rahe hai.
Mai-Par Di
Di- Koi par war Nahi time mujhe promise Kiya hai ki tu Meri har baat manega.
Mai-Thik hai Di aap jaisa bologi Mai karunga but unse baat Karne ke liye aap mujhe force Nahi karengi

Mai aise hi bed par leta raha Jiju bagal me baithe the tabhi Di sabhi ko lekar room ke andar dakhil huyi tabhi Meri najar unpar padi sabhi ki aankho rone ki wajah se poori Lal Hui padi thi. Unko aise dekh kar mujhe bhi dukh huya lekin Maine unko ignore kar Diya.
Jab sabhi mere pass aayi aakar bed ke dono taraf khade ho Gaye .
Mom ne mere sar par hath rakha toh Maine unka hath apne sir se hata diya. Jisse Mom ki aankho me aansu aa Gaye
Mom-(rundhe Gale se)Beta ab bhi hamse naraj hai Kya hame maf Nahi kar sakta .
Mai kuch Nahi bola.
Dad- Beta hum jante hai ki humse galti huyi hai hum tumse apni galti ki mafi mangte hai. Ek baar Hume maf kar de
Dad ki aankho me bhi aansu the. Par Mai isbaar bhi chup that.
Mohini- Bhaiya apni gudiya ko bhi maaf Nahi karoge. Manti hu galti humri hai par aap bhi sochiye ki us samay Kya condition thi Mai kis mental condition me thi.
Tino kuch na kuch bole ja rahe the lekin Mai chup tha kuch bol Nahi raha tha.
Priya bs mujhe dekh rhi thi uski aankho me aanshu bah rahe the lekin uski aawaj Nahi nikal rahi tha.
Mai-(Priya se )Tumhe bhi kuch bolna hai .
Priya-........
Mai- (rukhepan se)- ab mujhe aaram karna hai.

Meri baato se sabko dukh hua lekin koi kuch Nahi bola. Priya ko chhod kar sab room se bahar chale Gaye.
Mai- (Rukhepan se) Tum kyon Nahi gayi.
Priya-..............
Mai- jawo yaha se ab mujhe Sona hai mujhe kisi ki jarurat Nahi hai.
Lekin Priya toh kuch bol hi Nahi rahi thi.
Mujhe uski ignorance par gussa aa gaya aur apne bed se uth kar kar uske dono bajuo ko jor se pakad liya. Usko mere pakadne se dard hua toh usne dard ko bardast Karne ke liye apne jabde bhinch liye aur dard bardast Karne ki kosis kar rahi thi.
Mai-(Priya ki aankho me dekhte huye) Ab kyon chup ho bolo tum kyon rukhi ho yaha akhir Mai kaun ho tumhara
Priya- pati.(Priya ke muh se bas itna hi nikla)

Maine uske baju chhod diye aur bed par baith gaya. Mere bhi aankho me aanshu aa Gaye
Mai- kyon aaj yad aaya ki Mai tumhra pati hu in 6salo me aise Kya ho gaya Jo tum mujhe pati man liya.
Priya-...…...........
Mai- par Mera kisi se koi rista Nahi hai.
Mere aur Priya dono ke aankho se lagatr aanshu bah rahe the .
Idhar kamjori ki wajah se mujhe chakkar aane laga Mai girne Wala tha tabhi Priya ki najar mujh par padi
Woh daud kar mere pass pahunchi aur Sahara dekar bed par litaya aur .
Priya- Aapko jitna gussa hone hai thik hone ke baad ho lijiye ga.
Mujhe bed par lita kar mere upar chadar dal Diya aur wahi pade kurshi par wo baith gayi. Mujhe ab mind aa gayi thi.
Priya ke dono bajuo par mere pakdene ki wajah se kale Nishan pad Gaye.
Priya-(man me)- mai Kya kahu mujhe kuch samajh me Nahi aata hai ki galti kiski hai Jo bhi hua uska adhar ek ghinauna jhooth tha jiske Karan us waqt hamne Gusse me Aapko apni baat rakhne ka mauka hi Nahi Diya aur baad me aapne humko koi mauka Nahi Diya lekin Jo bit gaya usko toh Nadal toh Nahi sakte lekin ab Mai Aapko Mana ke rahungi chahe mujhe uske liye kuch bhi karna pade.

(Ab dekhna ye hai ki Priya Surya ko kaise manati hai. Filhal inko yahi rahne dete hai )

Dusri taraf do log aap me baith kar baat kar rahe the (unko u1 aur u2 likhunga)
U1- Tmko pata chala Surya wapas aa gaya.
U2- ( chaunkte huye) Kya, kab,kaise.
U1- Detail toh pata Nahi par itna confirm hai ki wo aa gaya.
U2- par 6 Sali baad kyon wapa s aaya hai

Good update .. :claps:
 
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