Romance Zindgi.....Ek Rahasaya
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Spelling mistakes ko sudhane me kafi time lag jata...isliye nahi karta Jo flow-2 type ho jata vahi post kar detaI apologize for the late review...
Aditya hides the secret of the diary from Soumya but Saumya will reveal this secret. You showed brother and sister love very well. Pooja and Rahul's love chemistry is also very good. Soumya has stolen the diary. Now just to see what is in that diary.
Update 21 and update 22 were both very good updates. You are writing very well, The story's dialogue is tremendous. There are too many spelling mistakes in your story. Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You ...
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UPDATE-23
aaditya kuad gaadi chala ke le jane wala tha vah diving seat par baith jata hai.....aur sabhi chal dete hai aapne dusre ghar jaha aaditya ki maa thi aur somya ki maa ke pass......
AB AAGE
Rajgarh ab kafi picche nikal chuka tha magar abhi tino me se kisi ne kuch nahi bola tha.....aaditya gaadi saanti se chala raha tha somya aaditya ke bagal wali seat par baithe soch rahi thi ki jo usne kiya kya vah sahi tha ya nahi......puja picche bathi bahar ke najare ka lutf utha rahi thi.....ese kab lucknow ka safar pura ho jata hai malum nahi chalta......aaditya pahle puja ko uske ghar chodta hai fir aapne ghar ki taraf chal deta hai.......is samay raat ke 8:00baje rahe the jab aaditya aapne lucknow wale ghar ke darwaje par pahuchta hai.........somya aur aditya ghar ke aandar kadam rakte hai jaha somya ki maa in dono ka intzaar kar rahi thi.....dono bacche per chu kar aashiwad lete hai.....
somya maa-kese ho aaditya......
aaditya-teek hu....
ese hi haalchaal aur pani pi kar dono aapne room ki taraf chal dete hai(is ghar ke aandar ke bare me baad me batauga)....
somya aapne room me pahuchkar diary nikalkar dekhti hai aur kahti hai....
somya(diray ko dekhte huye)-bus thode der aur intzaar kar lo eske aandar ke chupe huye raaj aaj raat se sare raaj mere samne hoge.....
somya fir diary ko aapne aalmari me rakhkar fresh hone chali jati hai .....
idhar aadtiya aapne room me aapna bag rhakta hai usme se vesi hi diary nikal kar aapne hothno ke pass le jakar ek kiss karta hai.......aur fir se aapne bag me rakh deta hai....aaditya fir fresh hota hai.....fresh hone ke baad aaditya aapni maa se milne unke room ki taraf chal deta hai.....
aaditya aapni maa ke room me kadam rakhta hai....jaha aaditya ki maa bed par leti hui hai duniya se koi matlab nahi duniya to dur ki baat jis kamre me hai usme kya hota hai uska bhi unko koi aabash nahi hai (pahale hi bata chuka hu aaditya ki maa coma mai hai bus thodi si sudar hui hai kese vah baad mai batauga bus unki aakhe hi kaam karti hai kabhi-2 hath per bhi hila leti hai.....) aaditya maa ke bed ke pass pahuchkar usi bed par baith jata hai aur ektak maa ki aakho me jakhne lagta hai jese kuch khoj raha ho.....
kisi ki maa esi halat mai ho vah ladka jo pichle kai saalo se hi aapni maa se mila na ho uske pahle kabhi dekha na ho....vah bhi is haal me na kabhi maa ke mukh se beta sunne ko na mila ho na kabhi maa ke aanchal me aapna sar rakh kar aapni sari pareshani dur karne ko mila ho esme us maa ka ladka maa ki aakho me kya khojega bus yahi ki kash ek baar maa ke goad me sar rakh kar unke hatho se aapne sar par mamta bare sunhare pal bitane ke liye mil jaye.........
aaditya vese hi 1gante se baitha tha....tabhi aaditya ko aapne kandhe par kisi ka hath mahsus hota hai...aaditya picche mud kar dekhta hai jaha somya kadhi thi........
somya-bahiya chaliye khana kha lijeye.....
aaditya-chalo betu abhi aata hu.....
somya chali jati hai aaditya kuch der baad khana khane chala jata.....jaha sabhi bojan karte hai....
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vahi dusri taraf
10:00pm
royal palace hotal ,jaipur
jaipur ka sabse bada hotal hai......is wakt hotel puri tarah dulhan ki tarah saji hui lag rahi hai....dur se hi hotel ki sano-sokat jalak rahi hai........
aaj desh ke jane mane gajal gayak kunal rathore ki ek progaram hai.....jisme deshbhar ke janemane naamcheen hastiya samliyat hone wale hai....jinme roshni ke dadaji brijbhaan singh bhi pahuchne wale hai.......
is samay hotel me logo ka aane ka silsala jari tha...tabhi kai gaadiyo ki kafila hotel me enter karta hai jo thik hotel ke main gate ke samne rukta hai jo bech me gaadi thi us gaadi ka darwaja kulta hai...
jisme se ek bujug vaykti yani roshni ke dadaji brijbhaan singh bahar nikalte hai....usi gadi ka dusre taraf se darwaja kulta hai jisme se roshni utrati hai...
roshni is wakt kisi chand ki tarah aapni ronak bikhe rahi thi aapne charo taraf jisne bhi ek baar roshni ko dekha bus dekhta hi rah gaya koi apsara bhi dekh le to najar laga de.....roshni is wakt pink colour ki salwar kurti pahni hui thi...mathe par ek choti se bindi...aakhe to bina kajal kiye huye hi kajal lagi hui thi...cahare par bina makeup ke jo kudrati thi vesi hi......bus in sab me koi roshni ki aakho ki garhrai me dekhta to usme ek kahlipan ko mahsus kar pata.....magar in baato ko kisi ke samne na jahir karate huye roshni dadaji ke pass khadi ho gayi.....dadaji aur roshni hotel ke aandar bane haal me chale gaye jaha aaj ki mahfil hone wali hai...dadaji ko dekhkar jitne log aandar vip log mahjood the jo is mahfil ke special invite kiye gaye the sabhi khade hokar dadaji milne lagte hai...ese hi thode baad announce hoti hai ki mahfil kuch der baad suru hone wali hai sabhi aapni-2 jagah bithe jaye....sabhi aapni-2 jagah baithe jate hai.........
stage puri tar saja chuka tha bus intzaar gajal gayak kunal rathor ka jo aaj ki raat special bulaye gaye the....
jis samay dadaji aur roshni aandar parvseh kar rahe the unse kuch dur ek ladka kadha in dono ko aandar jate huye dekh raha tha.....
dono ke aandar jate hi usne aapna phone nikala koi no. par phone kiya.....kuch ring jane ke baad dusri taraf se phone uthaya gaya.......
ladka(phone par)-jo tumne kaha vah sach hai......
dusri taraf se-ji bahiya ji.....100%
ladka-thik hai tumhre is kaam ke pese tume mil jayege....aur ek baat kisi ko kano kan kabhar nahi honi chahiye ki mai yaha par hu......
dusri taraf se -maaf kijega bahiya ji is kaam ke mai koi pese nahi luga....aur esha kabhi hua aap aaye ho aur kisi ko malum chala ho....magar aaj aapke hath me hai bina kisi ko malum chale sab sahi ho jaye......
ladka-thik hai.....mai aandar ja raha hu tab tak bahar tum sab aakar dekh lena.......
dusri taraf se-aap befikar rahiye....abhi mai aapne aadmiyo ko lekar vaha par pahuch jauga......bus aap aapna kayal rakiyega.....
ladka phone katkar aapne jeb me phone rakta hai.......aur chal deta hai hotel ke aandar ki aur ladke ne is samay suit pahan rakha tha carhre par dadhi aur muche bada rakhi thi.....
hotel ke aandar pahuchte hi usne security walo ko aapna pass dikhya aur ladka chal diya jaha program hone wala tha.....aandar pahuchte usne aapne charo taraf najar dali najar thik roshni aur dadaji ki uppar ruk gayi....aapni najar ko hatakar kone ki taraf chal diya jaha se usko koi nahi dekh paye aur vah sabko dekh sake.....kone me pahuchkar vaha rakhe kurshi par baith gaya....
tabhi sabhi logo ki taliyo ki bajne ki aawaj sunta hai ladka....aur samne ki taraf dekhne lagta hai...jaha stage par gajal gayak kunal rathore aa chuke the...
stage par se programe suru hone ki goshna hoti hai....aur mike ko sambalte huye kunal rathore.........
jiye to jiye kaise bin aapke
jiye to jiye kaise bin aapke
lagta nahi dil kahin bin aapke
jiye to jiye kaise bin aapke
kaise kahu bina tere jindagi ye kya hogi
kaise kahu bina tere jindagi ye kya hogi
jaise koi saza koi badhua hogi
jaise koi saza koi badhua hogi
meine kiya hai yeh faisla
jeena nahi hai tere bina
jiye to jiye kaise bin aapke
(ladka puri tahar in bolo me kho chuka tha tabhi usko lagta hai kuch hua hai....aapne aap ko us gajal se bahar lata hai.....to usko malum chalta hai ki uska phone vibret kar raha hai jeb me.....ladka phone uthata hai dusri taraf se vahi banda tha jisse kuch der pahle baat hui thi.......ladka kaan me mobile lagta hai......
dusri taraf se-bahiya ji sikar aa chuke hai........
ladka-kisi ko aandar aane mat dena.....sab ko aapni girfat me kar lo mai aata hu.....
dusre taraf se-jesa aadesh bahiya ji......
aur ladka uth kar chal deta hai.....)
muje koi de de zahar hans ke mein pee lungi
muje koi de de zahar hans ke mein pee lungi
har dard sah lungi har haal mein jee lungi
har dard sah lungi har haal mein jee lungi
dard-e judai sah na sakungi
tere bina mein rah na sakungi
jiye to jiye kaise bin aapke
lagta nahi dil kahin bin aapke
dekh ke wo muje tera palken juka lena
dekh ke wo muje tera palken juka lena
yaad bahut aaye tera muskura dena
yaad bahut aaye wo tera muskura dena
kaise bhulau wo saari raate
wo meethi baate wo mulakate
jiye to jiye kaise bin aapke
lagta nahi dil kahin bin aapke
jiye to jiye kaise bin aapke
Kaha jata hai kisi ke dil me payar jeshe ankohe bandhan me ek baar Jud jata hai vah sathi chahe pass ho ya dur rahta humesha dil me hai......esha kuch is gajal ko sunkar roshani ke sath bhi ho raha tha kho si gayi thi jese ye uske hi bol hai.....jo dusre ke jariye pesh kiya ja raha hai....
Gajal ke katam hote hi taaliyo se haal guj utha...
Magar roshani in sabse dur kisi dusri duniya yani yaado ke lamhe me khoi thi.....magar dadu ke jab dekha ki roshani kisi yaado me khoi hai to dadu ne in lamho se bahar nikala......
Roshani dadu- jo is duniya me na ho uske bare me yaad karke kyu kud ko dard de rahi hai....agar tera payar saccha hai to bhul ja usse vah bhi yahi tum se yahi ummid chahega bus humeaha muskarti raho.....
Roshani-dadu ye aap sabhi jante hai ki vah nahi raha magar mera dil kahta hai vah jarur aayega....aur usse aana hi hoga mere liye ese dhoka dekar nahi ja sakta ....please dadu kya hum ghar chal sakte abhi.....
Dadu-thik hai ghar chalte hai....
Roshani ke dadu vaha sabhi se kahke chal dete hai ki koi jaruri kaam aa gaya hai.......aur chal dete hai bahar roshani ke sath ghar ki aur.........
Idhar ladka jab beach me gajal ki mafil chod ke hotel bahar aata hai to aapne jeb me rakha hua nakab pahan ke phone par baat karte huye phone par baat huye ladke ke pass jata hai jaha 2aadmi gutne ke bal nicche bithe the aur unke charo taraf 4ladke kadhe the jinki age sayad27-28 hogi.....ladka vaha nakab pahan ke jab pahucha hai to........
aaditya kuad gaadi chala ke le jane wala tha vah diving seat par baith jata hai.....aur sabhi chal dete hai aapne dusre ghar jaha aaditya ki maa thi aur somya ki maa ke pass......
AB AAGE
Rajgarh ab kafi picche nikal chuka tha magar abhi tino me se kisi ne kuch nahi bola tha.....aaditya gaadi saanti se chala raha tha somya aaditya ke bagal wali seat par baithe soch rahi thi ki jo usne kiya kya vah sahi tha ya nahi......puja picche bathi bahar ke najare ka lutf utha rahi thi.....ese kab lucknow ka safar pura ho jata hai malum nahi chalta......aaditya pahle puja ko uske ghar chodta hai fir aapne ghar ki taraf chal deta hai.......is samay raat ke 8:00baje rahe the jab aaditya aapne lucknow wale ghar ke darwaje par pahuchta hai.........somya aur aditya ghar ke aandar kadam rakte hai jaha somya ki maa in dono ka intzaar kar rahi thi.....dono bacche per chu kar aashiwad lete hai.....
somya maa-kese ho aaditya......
aaditya-teek hu....
ese hi haalchaal aur pani pi kar dono aapne room ki taraf chal dete hai(is ghar ke aandar ke bare me baad me batauga)....
somya aapne room me pahuchkar diary nikalkar dekhti hai aur kahti hai....
somya(diray ko dekhte huye)-bus thode der aur intzaar kar lo eske aandar ke chupe huye raaj aaj raat se sare raaj mere samne hoge.....
somya fir diary ko aapne aalmari me rakhkar fresh hone chali jati hai .....
idhar aadtiya aapne room me aapna bag rhakta hai usme se vesi hi diary nikal kar aapne hothno ke pass le jakar ek kiss karta hai.......aur fir se aapne bag me rakh deta hai....aaditya fir fresh hota hai.....fresh hone ke baad aaditya aapni maa se milne unke room ki taraf chal deta hai.....
aaditya aapni maa ke room me kadam rakhta hai....jaha aaditya ki maa bed par leti hui hai duniya se koi matlab nahi duniya to dur ki baat jis kamre me hai usme kya hota hai uska bhi unko koi aabash nahi hai (pahale hi bata chuka hu aaditya ki maa coma mai hai bus thodi si sudar hui hai kese vah baad mai batauga bus unki aakhe hi kaam karti hai kabhi-2 hath per bhi hila leti hai.....) aaditya maa ke bed ke pass pahuchkar usi bed par baith jata hai aur ektak maa ki aakho me jakhne lagta hai jese kuch khoj raha ho.....
kisi ki maa esi halat mai ho vah ladka jo pichle kai saalo se hi aapni maa se mila na ho uske pahle kabhi dekha na ho....vah bhi is haal me na kabhi maa ke mukh se beta sunne ko na mila ho na kabhi maa ke aanchal me aapna sar rakh kar aapni sari pareshani dur karne ko mila ho esme us maa ka ladka maa ki aakho me kya khojega bus yahi ki kash ek baar maa ke goad me sar rakh kar unke hatho se aapne sar par mamta bare sunhare pal bitane ke liye mil jaye.........
aaditya vese hi 1gante se baitha tha....tabhi aaditya ko aapne kandhe par kisi ka hath mahsus hota hai...aaditya picche mud kar dekhta hai jaha somya kadhi thi........
somya-bahiya chaliye khana kha lijeye.....
aaditya-chalo betu abhi aata hu.....
somya chali jati hai aaditya kuch der baad khana khane chala jata.....jaha sabhi bojan karte hai....
...........................................................................................
vahi dusri taraf
10:00pm
royal palace hotal ,jaipur
jaipur ka sabse bada hotal hai......is wakt hotel puri tarah dulhan ki tarah saji hui lag rahi hai....dur se hi hotel ki sano-sokat jalak rahi hai........
aaj desh ke jane mane gajal gayak kunal rathore ki ek progaram hai.....jisme deshbhar ke janemane naamcheen hastiya samliyat hone wale hai....jinme roshni ke dadaji brijbhaan singh bhi pahuchne wale hai.......
is samay hotel me logo ka aane ka silsala jari tha...tabhi kai gaadiyo ki kafila hotel me enter karta hai jo thik hotel ke main gate ke samne rukta hai jo bech me gaadi thi us gaadi ka darwaja kulta hai...
jisme se ek bujug vaykti yani roshni ke dadaji brijbhaan singh bahar nikalte hai....usi gadi ka dusre taraf se darwaja kulta hai jisme se roshni utrati hai...
roshni is wakt kisi chand ki tarah aapni ronak bikhe rahi thi aapne charo taraf jisne bhi ek baar roshni ko dekha bus dekhta hi rah gaya koi apsara bhi dekh le to najar laga de.....roshni is wakt pink colour ki salwar kurti pahni hui thi...mathe par ek choti se bindi...aakhe to bina kajal kiye huye hi kajal lagi hui thi...cahare par bina makeup ke jo kudrati thi vesi hi......bus in sab me koi roshni ki aakho ki garhrai me dekhta to usme ek kahlipan ko mahsus kar pata.....magar in baato ko kisi ke samne na jahir karate huye roshni dadaji ke pass khadi ho gayi.....dadaji aur roshni hotel ke aandar bane haal me chale gaye jaha aaj ki mahfil hone wali hai...dadaji ko dekhkar jitne log aandar vip log mahjood the jo is mahfil ke special invite kiye gaye the sabhi khade hokar dadaji milne lagte hai...ese hi thode baad announce hoti hai ki mahfil kuch der baad suru hone wali hai sabhi aapni-2 jagah bithe jaye....sabhi aapni-2 jagah baithe jate hai.........
stage puri tar saja chuka tha bus intzaar gajal gayak kunal rathor ka jo aaj ki raat special bulaye gaye the....
jis samay dadaji aur roshni aandar parvseh kar rahe the unse kuch dur ek ladka kadha in dono ko aandar jate huye dekh raha tha.....
dono ke aandar jate hi usne aapna phone nikala koi no. par phone kiya.....kuch ring jane ke baad dusri taraf se phone uthaya gaya.......
ladka(phone par)-jo tumne kaha vah sach hai......
dusri taraf se-ji bahiya ji.....100%
ladka-thik hai tumhre is kaam ke pese tume mil jayege....aur ek baat kisi ko kano kan kabhar nahi honi chahiye ki mai yaha par hu......
dusri taraf se -maaf kijega bahiya ji is kaam ke mai koi pese nahi luga....aur esha kabhi hua aap aaye ho aur kisi ko malum chala ho....magar aaj aapke hath me hai bina kisi ko malum chale sab sahi ho jaye......
ladka-thik hai.....mai aandar ja raha hu tab tak bahar tum sab aakar dekh lena.......
dusri taraf se-aap befikar rahiye....abhi mai aapne aadmiyo ko lekar vaha par pahuch jauga......bus aap aapna kayal rakiyega.....
ladka phone katkar aapne jeb me phone rakta hai.......aur chal deta hai hotel ke aandar ki aur ladke ne is samay suit pahan rakha tha carhre par dadhi aur muche bada rakhi thi.....
hotel ke aandar pahuchte hi usne security walo ko aapna pass dikhya aur ladka chal diya jaha program hone wala tha.....aandar pahuchte usne aapne charo taraf najar dali najar thik roshni aur dadaji ki uppar ruk gayi....aapni najar ko hatakar kone ki taraf chal diya jaha se usko koi nahi dekh paye aur vah sabko dekh sake.....kone me pahuchkar vaha rakhe kurshi par baith gaya....
tabhi sabhi logo ki taliyo ki bajne ki aawaj sunta hai ladka....aur samne ki taraf dekhne lagta hai...jaha stage par gajal gayak kunal rathore aa chuke the...
stage par se programe suru hone ki goshna hoti hai....aur mike ko sambalte huye kunal rathore.........
jiye to jiye kaise bin aapke
jiye to jiye kaise bin aapke
lagta nahi dil kahin bin aapke
jiye to jiye kaise bin aapke
kaise kahu bina tere jindagi ye kya hogi
kaise kahu bina tere jindagi ye kya hogi
jaise koi saza koi badhua hogi
jaise koi saza koi badhua hogi
meine kiya hai yeh faisla
jeena nahi hai tere bina
jiye to jiye kaise bin aapke
(ladka puri tahar in bolo me kho chuka tha tabhi usko lagta hai kuch hua hai....aapne aap ko us gajal se bahar lata hai.....to usko malum chalta hai ki uska phone vibret kar raha hai jeb me.....ladka phone uthata hai dusri taraf se vahi banda tha jisse kuch der pahle baat hui thi.......ladka kaan me mobile lagta hai......
dusri taraf se-bahiya ji sikar aa chuke hai........
ladka-kisi ko aandar aane mat dena.....sab ko aapni girfat me kar lo mai aata hu.....
dusre taraf se-jesa aadesh bahiya ji......
aur ladka uth kar chal deta hai.....)
muje koi de de zahar hans ke mein pee lungi
muje koi de de zahar hans ke mein pee lungi
har dard sah lungi har haal mein jee lungi
har dard sah lungi har haal mein jee lungi
dard-e judai sah na sakungi
tere bina mein rah na sakungi
jiye to jiye kaise bin aapke
lagta nahi dil kahin bin aapke
dekh ke wo muje tera palken juka lena
dekh ke wo muje tera palken juka lena
yaad bahut aaye tera muskura dena
yaad bahut aaye wo tera muskura dena
kaise bhulau wo saari raate
wo meethi baate wo mulakate
jiye to jiye kaise bin aapke
lagta nahi dil kahin bin aapke
jiye to jiye kaise bin aapke
Kaha jata hai kisi ke dil me payar jeshe ankohe bandhan me ek baar Jud jata hai vah sathi chahe pass ho ya dur rahta humesha dil me hai......esha kuch is gajal ko sunkar roshani ke sath bhi ho raha tha kho si gayi thi jese ye uske hi bol hai.....jo dusre ke jariye pesh kiya ja raha hai....
Gajal ke katam hote hi taaliyo se haal guj utha...
Magar roshani in sabse dur kisi dusri duniya yani yaado ke lamhe me khoi thi.....magar dadu ke jab dekha ki roshani kisi yaado me khoi hai to dadu ne in lamho se bahar nikala......
Roshani dadu- jo is duniya me na ho uske bare me yaad karke kyu kud ko dard de rahi hai....agar tera payar saccha hai to bhul ja usse vah bhi yahi tum se yahi ummid chahega bus humeaha muskarti raho.....
Roshani-dadu ye aap sabhi jante hai ki vah nahi raha magar mera dil kahta hai vah jarur aayega....aur usse aana hi hoga mere liye ese dhoka dekar nahi ja sakta ....please dadu kya hum ghar chal sakte abhi.....
Dadu-thik hai ghar chalte hai....
Roshani ke dadu vaha sabhi se kahke chal dete hai ki koi jaruri kaam aa gaya hai.......aur chal dete hai bahar roshani ke sath ghar ki aur.........
Idhar ladka jab beach me gajal ki mafil chod ke hotel bahar aata hai to aapne jeb me rakha hua nakab pahan ke phone par baat karte huye phone par baat huye ladke ke pass jata hai jaha 2aadmi gutne ke bal nicche bithe the aur unke charo taraf 4ladke kadhe the jinki age sayad27-28 hogi.....ladka vaha nakab pahan ke jab pahucha hai to........
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