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kISKE KE SATH HERO KI JABARDAST CHUDAI HONI CHAHIYE

  • SHWETA

    Votes: 265 55.1%
  • SMIRITI

    Votes: 90 18.7%
  • sangini

    Votes: 80 16.6%
  • damini

    Votes: 76 15.8%
  • sonal

    Votes: 88 18.3%
  • priyanka

    Votes: 92 19.1%
  • savita

    Votes: 73 15.2%
  • bharti

    Votes: 78 16.2%
  • SUNITA

    Votes: 236 49.1%
  • Archana

    Votes: 70 14.6%

  • Total voters
    481

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Lodon Ka Raja

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as - nahi aap jao main yahi rukunga ,, meri ankhon me ab bhi halke halke ansoon the,,
shweta - ha ashu tujhe jane ke liye koi nahi bol raha hai tu yahi baith or hum bahar chalte hai,, or teeno muskurane lagi,,,,

shweta didi , sanjana or nita mami bahar chali gayi or main andar kajal ka hath pakad kar baitha raha or uski taraf hi dekhta raha,, or meri ankhon me halka halka pani aa gaya tha
or main dirf kajal ke bare me hi soch raha tha ki ye kab uthegi or main isse baat karunga,
kajal ab khatre se bahar to aa gayi thi par abhi behosh thi,,
abhi tak neha , kritka or 2no bua me se koi bhi nahi aaya tha ,, or mujhe ghussa bhi aa raha tha is baat par ki tabhi neha icu me enter hui,,,
neha - bhai kya hua hai kajal didi ko
as - kuch nahi bas accident ho gaya tha or ab ye khatre se bahar hai
neha ne meri ankhon me pani dekha to wo aage aakar mere gale lag gayi or mujhe apni bahon me lene lagi,, main baitha hua tha or neha khadi hui thi jisse mera sir neha ki chuchiyon par ragadne laga or uski chuchiyan dab gayi or uski aahh nikal gayi,,
par mera is waqt aisa koi irada nahi tha or na hi main in sab ke bare me soch raha tha main to bas yahi soch raha tha ki kab kajal thik ho or wo mujhse baat kare,,,
neha - bhai kya kar raha hai
as - neha main majak ke mood me bilkul b nahi hu ,, main thoda ghusse me bola
neha - sorry bhai
as - tujhe bahar koi nahi mila kya
neha - nahi bahar koi nahi hai shayad wo kuch khane ke liye gaye honge ,,,
as - sahi kaha ,, sab bhuke honge unhone kuch bhi nahi khaya hoga,,,
neha - kya tune kuch khaya hai ya nahi,,
tabhi room me kritka , sanjana, shweta didi bhi aa gayi,,
sanjana - nahi neha isne kuch bhi nahi khaya hai ,, bas jab se kajal ke paas hi baitha hai or uska hath hi pakad kar rakha hai ,,
shweta - ashu le khana kha le ,, or didi ne mere aage plate badha di
as - nahi didi mujhe bhukh nahi hai ,, main nahi haunga
kritika - kha le na ashu ,, kab tak bhukha rahega
as - jab tak kajal thik nahi ho jati tab tak,,,
shweta - mera hath pakadte huye,, ashu tu bada ho gaya hai ab sach me or sabki parwah karne laga hai,,,
kritika - ha bahut hi bada ho gaya hai ,, or hasne lagi
as - maine didi ki taraf ankhen nikal di ,, didi bas karo ab,,,
shweta - to khana kha le na ,,, mere liye
as - main shweta didi ki baat ko mana nahi kar sakta tha par maine aaj mana kar diya tha,, nahi didi plz,, jab tak kajal thik nahi ho jati tab tak main khana nahi khaunga,,
neha - rahne do didi ,,
or sabhi side me baith gaye or sabhi idhar udhar ki baaten karne lage,,

vimal ka scene--

mom or dad vimal ke ghar pahuch gaye the or waha jakar dekha to pata chala ki vimal ko heart attack aya tha or waha sabhi gharwale mojood the jo ki sab ro rahe the or aap to jante hi ho ki jab kisi ki death hoti hai to ghar me kaisa scene hota hai,,,
kamal - bhaisahab kah kar dad ke gale laga gaya or rota raha
dad - sambhalo kamal apne aap ko,, bura waqt hai ,,,
kamal - main janta hu bhai sahab par mujhe sangini ki chinta hai ,,
dad - kyo kya hua,,
kamal - aap to jante hi ho ki damini ki usse bilkul bhi nahi banti hai or wo use ab bhi tane de rahi hai ,, ab aap hi batao ki main kya karu
tabhi waha par suraj chacha pahuch gaye ,,,
suraj - ek kaam karo ki ise kuch dino ke liye apne mayke bhej do jab tak sab thik nahi ho jata ,,
ye baat sunte hi mom waha chali gayi ,,
mom - nahi bhai sahab sangini ko main apne ghar lekar chali jati hu ,, or wo ab hamare sath hi rahegi,,,
mom bahut hi sidhi thi or mom ki baat katne ki himmat to kisi me bhi nahi thi,,,
suraj - sahi kah rahi ho bhabhi ,, bahu waha rah legi or main le jata use apne ghar par priyanka , waha hai nahi or sachu bhi hotel me hi rahti hai to waha uska man bhi nahi lagega or wo vimal ko bahut jyada yaad karegi or kahi kuch kar na le,,,
kamal - sahi kaha bhai sahab ,,,waha sabhi ghar par honge to unka man bhi lag jayega or wo vimal ko bhul jaye to ham aage uske bare me bhi kuch sochenge,,
dad - to thik hai fir pahle vimal ka antim sanskar kar dete hai or uske baad hum sangini ko ghar lekar chale jayenge,,
or fir vimal chacha ka antim sanskar kiya or wapis ghar aa gaye..
mom sangini chachi ke paas gayi or unse apne sath chalne ko kaha
sangini - nahi didi main yahi rahungi inhi ke sath or is ghar me hi hamari yaaden hai
main kahi nahi ja rahi ,,
mom - nahi tum hamare sath hi chalogi,,,chalo or jid mat karo ,,,
reema - ha didi sahi kah rahi hai maan jao bahu
sonal - ramesha chacha ki biwi ,, ha bahu yaha tu rahogi to khamakha tumhara jhagda hoga damini ke sath or tum to janti hi ho ki tumhari or damini ki kitni banti hai or jab thoda waqt gujar jaye tab wapis aa jana yaha,, or mahol bhi thik ho jayega
sangini chachi ne bahut mana kiya par baad me mom ne or baki sab ne milkar unhe mana liya or wo waha se hamare ghar aa gayi or unka saman mere kamre me rakhwa diya ,,,,,
uske baad mom wahi par ruki or dad hospital aa gaye or kamla bua ko mom ne phone karke sab kuch bata diya or kamla bua or pragya bua ghar par gayi or mom ke sath sanghini ko samjhane lagi ,,,
dad or mom ne abhi tak unhe kajal ke accident ke bare me nahi bataya tha isiliye kyoki waha ye sab batana sahi nahi tha kyoki mahol hi aisa tha or log fir sab pareshan ho jate,, par dad ne ajay mama ko phone kar diya tha or usne police me phone kar diya tha or commisioner se baat karke accident ke bare me pata karne ko kaha tha or unhone ek ladke ko pakad liya tha jiska kajal ke sath accident hua tha or use jail me daal diya tha par ye baat ham me se kisi ko nahi pata thi,,,or us ladke ki pitai bhi ki taki usse sach nikalva sake ki waha kya hua tha par sach to kajal hi bata sakti thi,,,
fir dad hospital aa gaye tha,,,
dad - kaisi hai kajal ab
shweta - ab kajal khatre se bahar hai ,, waha ab kya scene hai dad,, vimal chacha ka
dad - uska antim sanskar ho gaya hai,,, or sabhi apne apne ghar chale gaye hai,,
kritika - kk dad
dad- ha main to batana hi bhul gaya tha ,,
neha - kya
dad- jisne kajal ka accident kiya tha use police ne pakad liya hai or wo jail me hai
as - main bahut hi ghusse me tha,, sale ko jaan se kyo nahi maar diya us kutte ko
sabhi mera ghussa dekhkar hairan ho gaye,,,
shweta - aaassshhhuuu,, chillate huye boli ,, tu gali kyo de raha hai ,, kjail me hai na wo use uske kiye ki saja milegi or ghussa mat kar
sanjana - ashu ghussa nahi karte bhai shant ho ja,
as - nahi main sale ko jinda nahi chodunga chahe kuch bhi ho jaye
sabhi jante thi ki main chup nahi hone wala hu or ye baat sabhi ko mere or kajal ke bare me pata tha ki main iske liye kuch bhi kar sakta hu to shweta didi hi samajhdar thi or unhi me ham sab me sabse jyada dimaag tha to unhone ne hi ek tarkib nikali
shweta - mere paas aate huye or mera chehra apne hathon me lete huye,,
dekh ashu hum hospital me hai or kajal ko abhi hosh nahi aya hai ,,, or kajal ko kahi dukh na pahucha de tu to chup ho ja or pahle bhi tu kitna ghussa kar raha tha jab operation chal raha tha or bich me hi aa gaya tha,,,
main kajal ke dukhi hone ka sunkar udas ho gaya or chup ho gaya or kajal ka hath pakadkar dobara baith gaya
dad - kya hua tha yaha mere jane ke baad
sanjana - kuch nahi dad abhi nahi baad me iske bare me baat karenge
tabhi nita mami waha aa gayi ,,,,
dad - are nita tum
nita mami - namaste jija ji
dad - namaste, par tum yaha kaise
shweta - are mami ne hi to operation kiya hai
neha - dad ke kuch bolne se pahle hi,, thank u mami, or dad ke gale lag gayi,,,
fir tabhi naina ka phone aya sanjana didi ko ,,
or sanjana didi ne sari baat naina ko bata di ,, naina thoda ghussa thi ham sab par kyoki hamne use kuch bhi nahi bataya tha,,,par didi ne use ghar par hi rahne ko kaha tha ,,
or sabhi yaha se waha tahlne lage or raat ho gayi fir kajal ko hosh aya
as - kajal tum thik ho na ,, main ekdam khush hote huye bola,,
kajal - ashu ,, jaan ,, kajal ne bas itna hi bola tha ki uski ankhon me ansoon aa gaye,,
as - kajal ne mujhe jaan kah kar bulaya tha wo to cha hua ki waha par koi nahi tha nahi to koi sun leta to kayamat hi aa jati,, or maine kajal ko chup rahne ka ishara kiya ,, par sanjana didi ne sab sun liya tha shayad wo bahar gate par hi thi,,,
fir maine dad ko bulaya or dad ne nita mami ko bualaya or sabhi andar aa gaye,,
sabhi kajal ko hosh aane par khush the or sabhi kajal se baat karne lage
as - nahi abhi koi baat mat karo jyada ise aaram karne do
neha - wah bhai badi chinta hai tujhe ,, hamari to kabhi hoti hi nahi hai,,
sabhi neha ki baat par muskura diye par mere chehre par koi muskaan nahi ayi jo ki kajal ne dekh liya tha or sanjana didi ne bhi notice kar liya tha,,,
as - dad main chahta hu ki main ek hospital khol du kajal ke name par or us hospital me garib logon ka ilaaj hoga or nita mami us hospital ko chalayengi ,,
dad - acha idea hai beta,,, sach me tu bada ho gaya hai
or fir maine kajal ko ghar le jane ki baat kahi or ham kajal ko ghar lekar aa gaye or uske liye uske kamre me rahne ka or sabhi dawai or sabhi chizon ka intejam wahi par kar diya,,
ab ek taraf to sabhi khush the ki kajal ghar me aa gayi hai or thik ho gayi hai par abhi use bed rest ki jarurat hai or dusri taraf vimal ki death ka sahi ko dukha tha,,
raat ko sabhi room me the kajal wale,,, mom ne sangini chachi ko sula diya tha,,,
mom - ab thik hai na tu kajal
as - ha thik hai mom disturb mat karo ise
shweta - pata hai mom aaj ashu ne kya kiya hospital me
kajal - kya kiya
as - oye tu chupchap leti rah or kuch mat bol ,, maine kajal ko daant diya
sanjana - are dant mat ise tu,,,
naina - koi baat nahi didi ,, ye to bhaiya ka pyaar bol raha hai kajal didi ke liye,,
sabhi muskurane lage
naina - maine aisa kya bol diya jo sab hans rahe ho or mujhe kisi ne kuch bhi nahi bataya ja main kisi se baat nahi karti ,,, naina ne ainthte huye ek bacche ke andaaz me bola,,,
mom - are tu to sabki ankhon ka tara hai meri gudiya,,,,
naina ek dam khush ho gayi.
shweta - dekho dramebaaz kitna drama karti hai,, ye to neha se bhi upar ho gayi hai
neha - neha se upar to koi ho hi nahi sakta hai didi,,,
naina - to ho jaye challnege,,
dad - are chup ho jao tum dono ,,, bas bhi karo,,
sanjana - kal rachna, madhvi or ranjana bhi aa rahi hai
naina - acha ab to maja ayega sabhi ek sath honge ghar me ,, kal to ham party karenge
mom - nnaaiinnaa,, mom ne use bure tarike se danta,, kuch akal hai ya nahi tujhe pata nahi hai kya vimal chacha ki death ho gayi hai,,,
naina - sorry mom mujhe kisi ne in sab ke bare me bataya nahi tha
or kajal ko bhi ye sab jaan kar dukh hua ,,,
mom - ha tere vimal chacha ki death ho gayi hai or sangini chachi ab yahi par rahengi kuch din ,,, or ashu tere kamre me hi uska saman hai ,, uska dhyan rakhna
as - mom mere kamre me kyon rakha main to kajal ke sath hi rahunga ab jab tak ye thik nahi ho jati,,
kajal - nahi ashu ,, tu sangini chachi ke paas rah ,,, unhe mujhse jayada dukh hua hoga or wo tujhse bahut pyaar karti hai ,, or teri har baat manti hai to unhe bhi koi baat karne ko mil jayega or unka gum bhi dur ho jayega,,,
main to kajal ke chakkar me sab kuch bhul hi gaya tha ki vimal chacha ki death ho gayi hai or sangini chachi ka dhyan hi nahi raha or khyal tak nahi aya ek baar bhi,,,,
cchhhiii main kitna selfish ho gaya hu ya to choot ke chakkar me rahta hu or ya to sirf apne bare me hi sochta ifrta rahta hu,,,
raat ho gayi or sabhi apne apne room me chale gaye or shweta or sanjana didi kajal ke paas ruki or wahi rahi raat ko or main sangini chachi ke paas chala gaya
jab main room me pahucha to dekha ki sangini chachi so rahi thi or unki kamar meri taraf thi or chehra dusri taraf tha to maine unhe disturb nahi kiya or jakar chachi ke bagal me hi let gaya,,,,
mere bed par letne ki wajah se chachi ki ankh khul gayi or wo meri taraf palti or mujhse lipar kar rone lagi
sangini - aasshhuu ,,,
as - chachi sab thik ho jayega hosla rakho
sang- kya thik hoga sab to ujad gaya mera ,, meri duniya mera sab kuch to chin gaya ab kya thik hoga ,,
as - nahi chachi aisa nahi hai ham sab hai na yaha,, or meri ankhon me bhi ansoon aa gaye,,
sang - kuch thik nahi hoga , mere sath na insaafi ki hai kismat ne mujhe to aulad ka sukh bhi nahi mila or ab mere pati ko bhi mujhse chin liya or chachi jor jor se rone lagi
as - chachi aap aisa kaise kah sakti ho main bhi to apka beta hu na or aaj se aap meri maa ho or mujhe ab beta hi kahogi ,, thik hai na mummy
sang - chachi mere muh se apne liye mummmy word sunkar thoda muskurayi
sach ashu,, tu mujhe mom kahega,,
as - ha mummy ,, aaj ke baad main apko mom kahunga,,, bas apko mujhse wada karna hoga
sang - kaisa wada beta
as - ab aap dukhi nahi hogi , main apko dukhi nahi dekh sakta,,,
sang - beta itna beraham mat ban ,, tere chacha ko gaye huye aaj 1 din bhi nahi hua hai or tu aisa bol raha hai,, mujhe aaj ji bhar ke rone de,,, or mere gale lag gayi
main kuch nahi bol paya kyoki main bhi janta tha ki koi ekdam kisi ko bhula nahi pata hai or na hi kisi ke dil se koi nikal sakta hai kabi jo usse itna pyaar karta ho ,,,
par mujhe bhi chachi ko in sab se bahar nikalna hoga ,,, par abhi is bare me baat karne ka koi fayda nahi hai
as - thik hai mom chalo so jate hai
sang- okk beta or mere gaal par ek kiss ki or mere sine par sir rakh kar let gayi or main bhi so gaya or fir hum subah uthe ....
 
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बहुत ही शानदार अपडेट था......
डैड की शानदार वापसी कराई है.....
डैड को ऐसी मेडिसिन खिलवाओ
की उनका लिंग खम्बे जैसे हो जाये...
और अपनी शादीशुदा बेटियों का
पूरा ख्याल रखे....
विवेक के जाने के बाद...
संगिनी चाची के खेवनहार डैड ही बने...
हीरो आशु तो संगिनी चाची को
पहले ही mom कहना शुरू कर दिया है....
Thanks........
 
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