Incest Zism ki keemat

[Sanjuhsr]

Koi bhi story , voting poll karwa ke likhi nahi jaati, voting poll karwaya tha bas public ki ichha jaanane ke liye,

Kewal sex karwana Hota bhai Bahan ke bitch, fir baat alag tha, riya ko usake bhai se chudwa deta, but yaha kewal sex nahi karwana, story ko aage badhana hai, aur logical way me finish karana hai,

Isiliye readers ka pressure hone ke baad bhi main riya ko Raj se sex nahi karwa raha, kyounki riya ko apna matlab nikalwana hai ladko se ,

Lekin finally riya bhi ek ladki hai, usako bhi apni zism ki aag bhujwani hai, ab wo bhai ya bf ke saamane kamjor na pade sex ki bhook ki wajah se, isiliye wo sex ki bhook anjaan logo se mitwaegi, aur raj , and Vicky etc se bas apna kaam nikalwaegi

Aapko sahi laga. Kahani ki demand hai ki riya ka character strong ho, aur riya ka character aage aur bhi strong hoga, jassi se gaand marwa lene se riya ka character kamjor nahi ho raha kyounki Jassi ka role story me bahut Kam hai

Anyway jo bhi ho, thanks for your suggestion, and I hope ki aap aage bhi apna suggestions dete Rahenge

Sab writer ke anusar hi hota hai, bas request ye rhti hai ki is forum ne readers ko kahani apni pasnd anusar chunne ke liye prefix banaye hai, tb reader incest pdhne ke liye teg dekh kr aa rhe hai lekin kahani me aapne adultery bna di, isliye ye sb review aa rhe hai, riya ko out hi sex karvana hai to prefix change karvane me kya problem hai, adultery krva do,

 

[Pk8566]

Kuch to log kahenge logo ka kam hai kahna isliye dost mast likh rahe ho likte raho duniya Jaye bhad mai

 

[R j]

Update plz....

 

[Sonieee]

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[AssNova]

maine to pahle hi kaha tha ki aise logo ki story mat padho , ye log koi writer nahi hain , na hi inko readers ke liye kahani likhni hai
ye writer wahi abdul ki category wala hai jinke bare me aap aajkal roz news me sun rhe hain

inka kaam hai ek smaaj ki striyon ke prati hin bhawna paida karna aur yahi is story me ho rha hai aur aap log ye story padh ke inke changul me fas rhe ho
satark raho !!!!!

 

[Pk8566]

maine to pahle hi kaha tha ki aise logo ki story mat padho , ye log koi writer nahi hain , na hi inko readers ke liye kahani likhni hai
ye writer wahi abdul ki category wala hai jinke bare me aap aajkal roz news me sun rhe hain

inka kaam hai ek smaaj ki striyon ke prati hin bhawna paida karna aur yahi is story me ho rha hai aur aap log ye story padh ke inke changul me fas rhe ho
satark raho !!!!!

Tum ne kabhi koi story likhi hai aaj tak ya bas gayan palte ho xfroum pr or bhi story hai ye Vali acchi nahi lag rahi to koi or read kr lo ya ak kam karo khud koi story liko tab tum ko sab pata chal jayega story likhne mai kitni mahnat lagti hai or gayan palne mai kitna time lagta hai

 

[Desitejas]

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[Monikaa]

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[Lund me dard]

Update dear

 

[happy_sharma82]

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