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Thakur

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Thakur

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Normally me aisi bate nahi likhta par ye jaruri bhi he :notme:
Presenting formula of :
how to write an incomplete story in xf ?:D
To har banda yaha par kabhi na kabhi likhna to chahta he hai, kuchh log man banakar koshish karte he kuchh thik se plot bana ke likhte he, par ek time pe pehele wala banda atak jata he kyo ki plot me sab set na hone ki wajah se wo jab jab likhna chalu karta he use naye ideas aate he aur wo bina jyada soche unhe add karta he isse uska ek update bhale he achha bane par long time ke liye story ki plot badal jati (aisa mere sath bohot baar hota he) ab iska upay kya ye ? Pehele main plot likh ke rakhe jisme 3no phase starting ,mid aur ending likh ke rakhe isse isme agar koi change karna ho to pata rehta he ki exact story kya ye (kaafi baar break ke bad kuchh bhi yaad nahi rehta just like me !)
Ab ek point aur he ke story likhni kiske liye he ? answer he khud ke liye :D logo ki pasand time to time change hoti he aur bheed ke sath chalne wale aksar bhula diye jate he , isliye jaruri nahi ke har koi incest ,cuckold-adultry, bina sir pair ka magic story likhe sirf isliye ke ve aaj trend me he ! Tumhe apni imagination ko expand karne ke liye likhna he na ki logo ko khush karne ke liye (jo ki impossible he).
Aur agar fir bhi tum yahi karte ho to ek time baad tum khud bhi isse ubb jaoge kyo ki usme to tumhara koi intrest tha he nahi. Sirf views aur response milega isliye tum wo likhna shuru karoge jo tumhare area of interest me nhi he to ye ek boring process ho jayegi jo ki ek jagah aake bich me he ruk jaye.
Potential : har kisi me likhne ka potential hota he par fail hone ke dar se wo likhna shuru he nahi karta, ya fir wo karta he jo uski pasand thi he nahi. Par isse self satisfaction thode he milega ? Apne potential ko pahchane aur ek sahi plot ko likh ke regularly likhne ki aadat dale :yes:

That's it for now. Malum he kuchh logo ko bura lage par yaha waha bhatakne wali bhid ko bhi rasta dikhane ki jarurat padti he !
 
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Update 20- Kirdaar naye



Ankush : aur bhi koi jameen he to me dekhta hu aur tuze detail me bhejta hu, ok

Me : ha thik he , aur thanks bhai for help.

Ankush : Bass kya bhai thanks mat bol khali jameen milne ke baad apne ko koi achhi si job dila de aur kuchh nahi chaiye ,party bhi me he dunga .

Me : Done bhai done.

Mene phone cut kar diya aur wahi raaste pe let gaya, iss time mere thobde pe jo smile thi wo McDonald’s ke putle se bhi badi thi, me itna saara paisa aur jameen ko jise mene abhi tak paaya bhi nahi he use imagine kar ke he has raha tha , meri haalat is samay shekh-chilly se kam nahi thi :D .



To be continued…





Subah ke 4 baje the aur murge ki baang se meri nind khuli, dekha to me wahi raaste ke kinare so gaya tha, agar koi raat me mere upar gaadi chadha deta to mera kalyan ho jaata yahi pe.

Me utha aur kapde jhaad ke dekhne laga koi jaaga he kya, kuchh der me doodhwala mila jo uska mini-Ape leke sheher ja raha tha ,uske sath he me bhi chal diya aur usne muze mere gaon ke bahar chhod diya . Me paidal he kheto ki aur gaya, me kheto ke paas pohocha he tha ke dekha compound tuta hua he aur khun ke dhabbe bhi he ! BC kal kya kam chutiyapa ho raha tha life me jo ye naya bhi aa gaya. Me usi tute compound se andar gaya aur khun ke dhabbo ko follow karne laga. Andar dekha to jaha sabji ke liye baag banaye the usme se aadhe kisi ne nasht kar diye the ! Ye dekhh ke meri aankho me khun utar aaya, gusse se hath paon fulne lage aisa laga ye sab karne wala agar mila to kaat ke tukde tukde kar du uske.

“Grrr grrr ”

Kisi ki ghuti ghuti cheenkh ek or se suanai di aur me uss aur chal diya , dekha to jungli suar tha jiska ek pair langdaya hua tha aur wo bhaag raha tha…

“thaayyy”

Aur uski bhi wicket gir gayi !

Mene mud ke dekha to didi hath me dunali banduk liye khadi thi aur banduk me goli bhar rahi thi . me unke paas gaya,



Me : Didi ye sab kya tha ? aur aap yaha kya kar rahe ho ?

Didi : Tu jab Renuka ko chhodne gaya tab raat me kheto me jungli suar ghusne ki khabar aayi, chacha ji dusre kheto pe gaye aur me tere liye ye banduk leke aayi par tu yaha nahi tha !

Me : I am sorry didi wo tyre puncture ho gaya…

Didi : safai mat de Ajay, ye banduk aur ye kartus pakad aur uss ped pe jaake baith aur wahi se maarna inko , me chacha ke paas ja rahi hu .

Didi to chali gayi par wo bina kahe bhi bohot kuchh keh ke gayi, me apni jimmedario ke nibha nahi paya kyu ke me apne he swaarth me magan raha !

Ek baar firse kahi dur se kisi ke daudne ki awaj aayi aur me uss taraf chal diya ,hamare kheto se lag ke jo dusre chhote chhote khet the unko bhi jungli suaro ne dhvast kar diya tha, mene ghum ke hamare kheto ka chakkar lagaya aur dekha ke total 6 jungli suar maare the didi ne !

Mene ek baar firse najar daalne ka socha aur iss baar me kheto wale ghar ke upar chadha aur dekhne laga, suryoday ho chala tha aur andhera puri tarah se hat chuka tha aur har taraf tabah hue khet the ,isi bich suvaro ka ek jhund jungle ki or bhaagta dikha unke pichhe padosi khet wala tin ke dibbo ko bajate hue bhaag raha tha , mene ek suar pe nishana lagaya aur trigger daba diya. Suaro ka jhund mujhse 80-90 metre pe tha par itna distance iss rifle ke liye kaafi he. Ek aur suar ko shoot kar ke mene rifle reload ki, fir kuchh soch ke me bhi jungle me ghus gaya .

Jungle ka ye hissa shuruat me itna ghana nahi he kyunki kaafi ped kaate gaye he par andar jaha se nadi gujarti he waha ka bhaag bohot he ghana he matlab ke andar jaao to suraj ki roshni bhi thodi thodi he dikhegi itna ghana he ! Me andar jaane laga aur dekha to ek jagah ghaas pe khun laga hue the to usi ko follow kar ke me aage badhane laga. Akhir ek jagah jaake muze rukna pada kyu ki aage nadi he jo ki naa to puri tarah sukhi he na he bhari he ,pani gehra nahi he par itna kam bhi nahi he ke jungli suar ise paar kar jaaye. Me wahi aas paas unhe dhundne laga aur ek suar muze paani pite hue dikh gaya to use wahi dher kar diya, aage jaake mene aur 3-4 aise jungli suaro ko maar diya, par jab reload karne laga tab dekha ke ab khali ek he kartus (bullet) bachi he !

Wapsi ke samay mene wo khandar wali jagah dekhi jaha Indar chacha (Vidya didi ke papa) ke sath ghumne aata tha aur unhone he muze aur didi ko rifle chalana sikhaya tha, babu ji ko ye baat pasand nahi aayi thi aur un dono me kaafi behes bhi hui par raat ke khane tak dono saath the. Bohot khubsurat kshan the wo hamari jindagi ke, chacha-chachi ke jaane ke baad humare ghar ki khushiya kho gayi, babu ji ne khud ko kaam me laga diya, maa didi ko sambhalne me lag gayi, dadi ko stroke aaya to wo hospital me thi kuchh time ke liye, aur me ? Mera man udas hua hi, par saath saath me sabse cut ho gaya , dosto ka saath ho ke bhi me akela pad gaya. Ghar ka mahaul agle 2 saal tak dukhi he raha, na koi gaana baja na TV chalaya. Bas ek din babu ji ne kaha ke ab me aur Vidya didi padhne ke liye sheher ja rahe he , kyuki iss vaatavaran me to kya khaak padhai hogi. Didi ne sheher1 me Bsc me admission liya aur mera admission Sheher2 me civil engineering me ho gaya. Aur jaisa ke hota he life kisi ke liye rukti nahi he waise he ek alag mahol me reh ke hamari life bhi patri pe aa gayi.

Ye sab sochte hue me kheto me wapas aaya ,majdur aa chuke the aur jo nuksaan hua he uska jaayja le rahe the.

“ab kya karna he beta, inn jaanwaro ne to saari mehnat pe mut diya ” kaka.

Me : karna kya he kaake, ab firse jitni sabji lagayi thi usse dugni lagani he aur taar ka majbut compound banana he , aaj se aur abhi se ! Chachi tum chai banao sabke liye aur aaj se tum log subah se shaam tak yahi kaam karo, khana chai nashta bhi yahi hoga .



Wo log bhi maan gaye, mene unko jungli suar jama kar ke saaf karne ko kaha ,un logo ne to aaj khane se mana kar diya to mene khali saaf karne ka keh diya. Me wahi pe borewell pe nahaya aur dosto ko call kar ke sham ka program banane ka keh diya. Fir thoda maans thaile me bhar ke ghar le gaya :sweat: . Dekho aisa he ke life me problems to aayengi he par tum uska kya karte ho ye important he :bigboss1: .



Dopahar ko khane pe ,

Me : Babu ji ,hume sheher2 jaana hoga, naye kaartus lene ke liye.

Babu ji : saare khatam kar diye tune ? Itne janwar the waha ?

Didi : apne kheto me to 6 he ghuse the par bhai sahab ne to jungle me ghus ke maara he sab ko !

Didi ki baat pe me khaasne laga, fir dekha ke sab muze he ghur rahe he,

Me : Wo janwar kal firse aate isliye maara he maine .

Babu ji : Chhodo, waise bhi Banduk ka licence renew karne jana he tha, isi pe ek banduk iske naam pe register karwa deta hu .

Fir koi kuchh nahi bola, shaam ko maine dosto ko kheto pe he bula liya aur wahi pe khane pine ka program chala, didi ke liye Ashwini ko keh diya tha ke didi ko aaj raat tak busy rakhe aur wo bhi samaz gayi .



Sham ke 6 baje the, abhi andhera hone me time tha par hum jungle me the to abhi se andhera hota dikh raha tha. Me aur Ravi maans ko saaf karne me lage hue the, Alok haandi pe chawal paka raha tha. Itne me Manthan roti leke aa gaya, uske pichhe pichhe Nayak bhi aaya.

Ravi : kitna time lagate ho be saalo, aur Nalayak tu be dekhte he muh fer leta he aajkal bsdike bada nawab ban gaya he kya shadi kar ke ?

Me : chhod be Ravi, itne time baad sab aaye he aur tu abhi se bhaga raha he ..

Nayak : Bhai Ajay tu iska muh band kara de nahi to me chala jaunga yaha se.

Ravi : Ha to ja na lavde , ek bachelor party to de nahi sakta, bada aaya nawab…

Alok : ayy muh band rakho sab pehle daru niche rakho fir jise jaana he jaao bc

Manthan : Daru to tum logo ke paas he na be ?

Ravi : ayy to tum log kya leke aaye ho gobar ?

Me : ae Ravi tu ye saanf kar, daru Sanjay la raha he mene bola he usko

Alok : Kiska naam le liya bhai tune !

Me : Kyu kya problem he usse ab ?

Ravi : chhod usko jaane de

Me : Bolo be kya lafda kiya he wo ?

Manthan : Sanju pas wale gaon ki ladki ko pel raha tha usi ke kheto me, logo ke hatho uss din to bach gaya tha wo, fir uss ladki ke bhai idhar aaye aur Sanjay ki behen ko line marne lage , Sanju ne dekhte he pehchan liya unko fir wahi pel diya usne.

Me : Fir ?

Ravi : Fir kya, uss time ye Aloknath bhi tha Sanju ke sath un londo ko pelne me, do din baad ye unke gaon gaya tha bajar me to un ladko ne ise pel diya !

Manthan : Pela ? Pela nahi bhai ragad ragad ke dhoya ise wo to pehelwan ne bacha liya ise warna maar dalte wo suar saale !

Mene Alok ko dekha to sach me bohot gusse me tha wo, waise to Alok bhi pehelwani karta he ,fit banda he , Sanju ka jigri yaar he isiliye Sanju iske dam pe uchhalta rehta he .

“Bidi jalaile jigar se piya ,jigar maa badi aag he 🎶🎶

Humne dekha Sanju kandhe pe music system aur dusre hath me bada box liye apni masti me tunn :drunkman: hoke aaya he .

Sanju : Nacho bc nacho :eekdance:



Ab hum sab to nachne se rahe, kyonki malhaul jo tha pura serious ho gaya tha aur jiski wajah se hua tha wo aur aag bhadka raha tha .

Me : la daaru la idhar.

Mene daru ka box side me rakh diya aur aur hum paancho mil ke khana banane me lag gaye, Sanju pehle se nashe me tha to wo gaane ke sath bakchodi kar raha tha aur baki sab usko ignore !

Ek ghante me khana sab ready ho gaya fir chadar daal ke sab pine baith gaye, tabtak Alok ka mood bhi thik ho gaya tha to sab sahi chal raha tha .



Ravi : Abbe Manthan sun,

Manthan : Hmm bol

Ravi : Kaam ka dekh liya kya tune ?

Manthan : Kiska kaam bhai ?

Ravi : Mera aur kiska ? tuze bola tha tere sath meri bhi job lagwa de school me .

Manthan : bhai nahi ho payega sach me, bohot paisa maang rahe he wo log, mere time pe he job liya hota na tune bhi to sahi rehta, tab to 2 lakh liye the un logo ne, ab saale 7-8 lakh rupaye maangte he harami log.

Me unn dono ki baate achhe se sun raha tha, jitna muze pata hai usse Manthan paas ke Sarkari school me peon he aur Ravi aajkal gharwalo ke sath kheti kar raha he aur job bhi dhundh raha he .

Me : aye Ravi tu private me dekh na job, udhar bhi to bohot nokri padi he utha le koi bhi.

Ravi : Ajay bhai tu nahi janta ye private ke loche, machhar se jyada khun chooste he private wale wo bhi jhantbhar paiso ke liye , bhaiya ka haal dekha he maine, bhaiya ke liye 4 saal se gharwale ladki dhundh rahe he par koi de he nahi raha . saala tu to janta he bhaiya ko wo kaise he fir bhi aur ye Manthan ko dekh, saala peon he Sarkari school me to ghartak rishte aa rahe he iske !

Me : hmm sahi he bhai sahi he…



Sanju : Kya sahi he bc kya sahi he, Jatin bhaiya to apne jaisa pite bhi nahi he na he mere jaisa kahi muh marte he, sala govt job nahi he to kya koi ladki bhi nahi dega kya unko ?

Alok : Sanju ae sanju ek kaam kar …

Sanju : Ha bol ?

Alok : Tu teri Leena didi ki shadi kara de iske bhai se :rofl:

Aur jo sanju bhadka aur Alok ke upar kuda ke bass ho gayi shuru in dono ki par ye sab kuchh he der chala, kha pi ke sab dher ho gaye, Nayak aur Manthan dono late night me uth ke ghar chale gaye jo ki Nayak ki biwi he ghar pe aur Manthan ko school jana hota he, baki bache hum chaar bakchodi karte karte pi ke wahi so gaye. Bohot dino baad purane dosto se aise mila tha par Ashwini se waada bhi kiya tha ke ye akhiri baar hai, abhi dekhte he kya hota he waade ka !

Subah subah phone ke bajne se meri nind khuli , dekha to Ankush ka phone tha !

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To be continued…
Bahot khoob shaandar update
Dosto k saath Raat m party Kafi achcha mahol ban gaya tha achcha time paas kia sabne
Dekhte h ab Ankush sahab or kia jaankari dete h
Behtareen shaandar update bhai
 
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