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xoxo0781

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Update: Week me mostly sunday ko milega

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Hero - Raj (20 sal)
Raj ki maa - Sakshi (42 sal) - Main Heroine
Raj ki Behen - Neha (18 sal)
Raj ke papa(late) - Rajdeep

Raj ki Mausi - Radha (43 sal)

Radha ki Beti - Preeti (19 sal)


Out off family

Sakshi ki Best Friend from her school = Naina (35 sal)
Raj's Best Friend from his childhood = Saurabh
Raj's classmate = Shreya (20 sal)



Amit Sir(Sports Teacher) - 45 sal = Tharki (Ladkibaazi se badnaam hai)

Vineet(Awara Student) - 18 sal = Neha ki class me padhta hai


For Readers:
→ Bhai apne option se mujhe likhne ki zabardasti mat karo. I can't able to write independently.
→ Suggestion dena hai to khushi-khushi do, acche ideas ho to DM bhi kar sakte ho.
→ Negative comments ko main seedha ignore kar doonga.
→ Ye story poori tarah romantic-love story nahi hai, aur bhi bahut kuch hai ismein.
→ Jo female characters 18+ hongi, wo hero (Raj) ki girlfriend ban sakti hain.
→ Regular update milte rahenge, tension na lo. (mostly Sunday & Thursday ko, thoda aage-piche ho sakta hai)
→ Comment & Like karo, taaki mera Likhne ka Motivation bana rahe
→ Aur haan, ye story adhoori nahi chhodi jayegi — poori karke hi manoonga.

Thanks 🙂 for reading ...
 
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Prince Charlee

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Pls complete it. Forum par pahle he bohat kum stories chal rahi hai jin ko read karne ka man karta hai, aap ki writing bohat achi hai aur story ka plot bhi pls continue karo ise aur regular update do ge to views aur comments bhi badhe ge.
 

sam21003

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Should I close the story?

Ye meri 1st story thi, ab mera dil thoda dukh gaya hai. I am feeling sad...

Mere pas kuch acche ideas the...
but seems like most of readers don't like my story...

Give me honest reply till Sunday (27th July)


After consideration & reality check, I will delete the story...
Kyu
Should I close the story?

Ye meri 1st story thi, ab mera dil thoda dukh gaya hai. I am feeling sad...

Mere pas kuch acche ideas the...
but seems like most of readers don't like my story...

Give me honest reply till Sunday (27th July)


After consideration & reality check, I will delete the story...
Kyu bhai band kar rahe story jisko pasand ayegi wo reply karega aur kabhi _2 late reply bhi aate so story aap ki hai marzi bhi aap ki jaisa thik lage kare humara kya koi dusri story padh lenge so finally thanks 🙏 👍
Ek achchhi story likhne ke liye
 
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xoxo0781

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Ab tak jo bhi logon ke reaction aaye hain, usse thoda andaaza lag gaya hai ki meri story kaun-kaun padh raha hai .
Mujhe accha laga ye dekhkar ki kai logon ko story pasand aa rahi hai.


Lekin kuch baatein saaf kar dena chahta hoon:

→ Bhai apne option se mujhe likhne ki zabardasti mat karo. I can't able to write independently.

→ Suggestion dena hai to khushi-khushi do, acche ideas ho to DM bhi kar sakte ho.

→ Negative comments ko main seedha ignore kar doonga.

→ Ye story poori tarah romantic-love story nahi hai, aur bhi bahut kuch hai ismein.

→ Jo female characters 18+ hongi, wo hero (Raj) ki girlfriend ban sakti hain.

→ Regular update milte rahenge, tension na lo. (mostly Sunday & Thursday ko, thoda aage-piche ho sakta hai)

→ Comment & Like karo, taaki mera Likhne ka Motivation bana rahe

→ Aur haan, ye story adhoori nahi chhodi jayegi — poori karke hi manoonga.

Thanks for reading ... 🙂
 
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sumedh19

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Ab tak jo bhi logon ke reaction aaye hain, usse thoda andaaza lag gaya hai ki meri story kaun-kaun padh raha hai .
Mujhe accha laga ye dekhkar ki kai logon ko story pasand aa rahi hai.



→ Bhai apne option se mujhe likhne ki zabardasti mat karo. I can't able to write independently.

→ Suggestion dena hai to khushi-khushi do, acche ideas ho to DM bhi kar sakte ho.

→ Negative comments ko main seedha ignore kar doonga.

→ Ye story poori tarah romantic-love story nahi hai, aur bhi bahut kuch hai ismein.

→ Jo female characters 18+ hongi, wo hero (Raj) ki girlfriend ban sakti hain.

→ Regular update milte rahenge, tension na lo. (mostly Sunday & Thursday ko, thoda aage-piche ho sakta hai)

→ Comment & Like karo, taaki mera Likhne ka Motivation bana rahe

→ Aur haan, ye story adhoori nahi chhodi jayegi — poori karke hi manoonga.

Thanks for reading ... 🙂
Thank you bro 🙏, thanks a lot

May all your dreams come true ❤️
 
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Ranjit143

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Ab tak jo bhi logon ke reaction aaye hain, usse thoda andaaza lag gaya hai ki meri story kaun-kaun padh raha hai .
Mujhe accha laga ye dekhkar ki kai logon ko story pasand aa rahi hai.



→ Bhai apne option se mujhe likhne ki zabardasti mat karo. I can't able to write independently.

→ Suggestion dena hai to khushi-khushi do, acche ideas ho to DM bhi kar sakte ho.

→ Negative comments ko main seedha ignore kar doonga.

→ Ye story poori tarah romantic-love story nahi hai, aur bhi bahut kuch hai ismein.

→ Jo female characters 18+ hongi, wo hero (Raj) ki girlfriend ban sakti hain.

→ Regular update milte rahenge, tension na lo. (mostly Sunday & Thursday ko, thoda aage-piche ho sakta hai)

→ Comment & Like karo, taaki mera Likhne ka Motivation bana rahe

→ Aur haan, ye story adhoori nahi chhodi jayegi — poori karke hi manoonga.

Thanks for reading ... 🙂
Bhai apne jo bola ye story poori tarah romantic love story nehni hai
Jo bhi female 18+ honge raj ki girlfriend ho sakti hai...

Kya Iska matlab raj ki life mein sakshi ki alava aur bahut sare female aane wala hai kya?

Dekho bhai aise ho sakta hai, story mein aage pata chal jaega, aise answer dekar confuse mat karao, bass mujhe yes or no mein answer de dogi bhi chalega

Meri comment ko negative way mein mat lo, mujhe bass yah janna hai ki main story ke sath aage continue kar paunga ki nahin...

Baki aapki story aap Jaise chaho likho jisko pasand aaega vah padega nahin pasand aaega to vah nahin padega..

Please bhai bura laga to 🙏 do
 
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xoxo0781

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Bhai apne jo bola ye story poori tarah romantic love story nehni hai
Jo bhi female 18+ honge raj ki girlfriend ho sakti hai...

Kya Iska matlab raj ki life mein sakshi ki alava aur bahut sare female aane wala hai kya?

Dekho bhai aise ho sakta hai, story mein aage pata chal jaega, aise answer dekar confuse mat karao, bass mujhe yes or no mein answer de dogi bhi chalega

Meri comment ko negative way mein mat lo, mujhe bass yah janna hai ki main story ke sath aage continue kar paunga ki nahin...

Baki aapki story aap Jaise chaho likho jisko pasand aaega vah padega nahin pasand aaega to vah nahin padega..

Please bhai bura laga to 🙏 do
 

Ranjit143

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Bhai jaane se pahle ek aakhiri sawal chhodkar ja raha hun...

Aapke hisab se raj ki life mein sakshi ki alava bahut sare female a sakte hain to fir sakshi ki life mein anil sir kyon nahin asakte?
Aap 4-5 updates delete kyon kiya?
Aap bhi baki writers jaisa nikale suddenly rang badal dete...

Yeh faltu ki pyar vyar chhodo, maa bete ke bich hawas dikhao aur pura parivar ko baki jitne bhi female sab Ko hero ki niche le aao bass story khatam...
 
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xoxo0781

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Bhai jaane se pahle ek aakhiri sawal chhodkar ja raha hun...

Aapke hisab se raj ki life mein sakshi ki alava bahut sare female a sakte hain to fir sakshi ki life mein anil sir kyon nahin asakte?
Aap 4-5 updates delete kyon kiya?
Aap bhi baki writers jaisa nikale suddenly rang badal diya aapne
Sakshi ke life me sirf Raj hai,

Ye Update 4,5 m mene galti kari thi, usko theek bhi kiya hai.

Raj single hai jab tak uski shadi nahi ho jaati...

I won't reveal anything now, nahi toh readers ka maza kharab hoga.

Bahut dhanyawad aapka for the support u shown bro,

Bye bro, best wishes to you from me ...
 

xoxo0781

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Bhai jaane se pahle ek aakhiri sawal chhodkar ja raha hun...

Aapke hisab se raj ki life mein sakshi ki alava bahut sare female a sakte hain to fir sakshi ki life mein anil sir kyon nahin asakte?
Aap 4-5 updates delete kyon kiya?
Aap bhi baki writers jaisa nikale suddenly rang badal dete...

Yeh faltu ki pyar vyar chhodo, maa bete ke bich hawas dikhao aur pura parivar ko baki jitne bhi female sab Ko hero ki niche le aao bass story khatam...
dekho bhai Raj ke niche sab females nahi hogi, ye koi Randikhana nahi hai

Pyar toh hoga na bhai but single ladka pyar nahi kar sakta kya?
 
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