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xoxo0781

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Update: Week me mostly sunday ko milega

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Hero - Raj (20 sal)
Raj ki maa - Sakshi (42 sal) - Main Heroine
Raj ki Behen - Neha (18 sal)
Raj ke papa(late) - Rajdeep

Raj ki Mausi - Radha (43 sal)

Radha ki Beti - Preeti (19 sal)


Out off family

Sakshi ki Best Friend from her school = Naina (35 sal)
Raj's Best Friend from his childhood = Saurabh
Raj's classmate = Shreya (20 sal)



Amit Sir(Sports Teacher) - 45 sal = Tharki (Ladkibaazi se badnaam hai)

Vineet(Awara Student) - 18 sal = Neha ki class me padhta hai


For Readers:
→ Bhai apne option se mujhe likhne ki zabardasti mat karo. I can't able to write independently.
→ Suggestion dena hai to khushi-khushi do, acche ideas ho to DM bhi kar sakte ho.
→ Negative comments ko main seedha ignore kar doonga.
→ Ye story poori tarah romantic-love story nahi hai, aur bhi bahut kuch hai ismein.
→ Jo female characters 18+ hongi, wo hero (Raj) ki girlfriend ban sakti hain.
→ Regular update milte rahenge, tension na lo. (mostly Sunday & Thursday ko, thoda aage-piche ho sakta hai)
→ Comment & Like karo, taaki mera Likhne ka Motivation bana rahe
→ Aur haan, ye story adhoori nahi chhodi jayegi — poori karke hi manoonga.

Thanks 🙂 for reading ...
 
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sumedh19

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Sakshi ke life me sirf Raj hai,

Ye Update 4,5 m mene galti kari thi, usko theek bhi kiya hai.

Raj single hai jab tak uski shadi nahi ho jaati...

I won't reveal anything now, nahi toh readers ka maza kharab hoga.

Bahut dhanyawad aapka for the support u shown bro,

Bye bro, best wishes to you from me ...
Matlab bro?
Kya raj Sakshi ko dhoka dega?

I mean same time pe zyada ladkiyo ko ek sath?
 

Ranjit143

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dekho bhai Raj ke niche sab females nahi hogi, ye koi Randikhana nahi hai

Pyar toh hoga na bhai but single ladka pyar nahi kar sakta kya?
Are bhai pyar ek Insan ki sath hota hai..

Lakhon Insan ke sath nahin hota hai aur jiske sath hota hai na uska rang ,paisa na umra na rishta kuchh nahin dikhte..

Bass donon ek dusre ko beinteha pyar karte hain ek dusre ke liye jite ek dusre ke liye marte hain...
Aur baki Jo aap bole ho na usko pyar nahin hawas kahate hawas jo ki lakhon Insan ke sath ho sakta hai..

Pyar sirf ek ki sath hota hai..
Baki Jo sirf attraction nahin to support ke liye pyar ka naam dete hain.
 
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xoxo0781

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Are bhai pyar ek Insan ki sath hota hai..

Lakhon Insan ke sath nahin hota hai aur jiske sath hota hai na uska rang ,paisa na umra na rishta kuchh nahin dikhte..

Bass donon ek dusre ko beinteha pyar karte hain ek dusre ke liye jite ek dusre ke liye marte hain...
Aur baki Jo aap bole ho na usko pyar nahin hawas kahate hawas jo ki lakhon Insan ke sath ho sakta hai..
Purane jamane me ek Raja ko bahut sari Rani hoti thi na.

Ye aaj kyun nahi ho sakta?

Raj strong banda hai bhai, wo handle kar lega

Ladke ko ek se zyada ladkiyo se pyar ho sakta hai na, but usme sabse zyada pyar Sakshi se hoga aur wahi story ka suspense hai...Kya wo sabko Sakshi k liye chodd dega ya nahi?? Ye bada question hai
 
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Ranjit143

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Purane jamane me ek Raja ko bahut sari Rani hoti thi na.

Ye aaj kyun nahi ho sakta?

Raj strong banda hai bhai, wo handle kar lega

Ladke ko ek se zyada ladkiyo se pyar ho sakta hai na, but usme sabse zyada pyar Sakshi se hoga aur wahi story ka suspense hai...Kya wo sabko Sakshi k liye chodd dega ya nahi?? Ye bada question hai
Sahi kaha bhai aapne purane jamane mein bahut sare rani main ek maha rani hoti hai jo ki raja ki bahut karibi hote jisko raja bahut pyar karte baki to sirf rajya ki takat badhane ke liye raja ko majboori main shaadi karna padta hai..

Aur aap koi purane jamane ka raja rani ki kahaniyan nahin likhe ho aap aaj ki jamane ek pyar aur romantic kahani likh rehi ho jo ki ek saccha pyar..

Rahane do bhai koi fayda nahin
bolne ki aapka jo marzi likho
 
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sam21003

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Ab tak jo bhi logon ke reaction aaye hain, usse thoda andaaza lag gaya hai ki meri story kaun-kaun padh raha hai .
Mujhe accha laga ye dekhkar ki kai logon ko story pasand aa rahi hai.



→ Bhai apne option se mujhe likhne ki zabardasti mat karo. I can't able to write independently.

→ Suggestion dena hai to khushi-khushi do, acche ideas ho to DM bhi kar sakte ho.

→ Negative comments ko main seedha ignore kar doonga.

→ Ye story poori tarah romantic-love story nahi hai, aur bhi bahut kuch hai ismein.

→ Jo female characters 18+ hongi, wo hero (Raj) ki girlfriend ban sakti hain.

→ Regular update milte rahenge, tension na lo. (mostly Sunday & Thursday ko, thoda aage-piche ho sakta hai)

→ Comment & Like karo, taaki mera Likhne ka Motivation bana rahe

→ Aur haan, ye story adhoori nahi chhodi jayegi — poori karke hi manoonga.

Sub se pahle to aap ka bahut _2 shukriya
Ke aap story ko complete karoge
Dosri baat aap ka likhne ka andaz bahut umda hai story bahut hi shandar hai aur kuch story hai jo dil ko chuti hai onme se ye story bhi aap bahut acha aur details me likh rahe ho isme koi shak nahi aap ki writing skill bahut zabardast hai aap apne style me likhe yahi behtar hai baki logo ke suggestion to ate rahege aur ek baat story super hit hogi itna to main bhi janta so such a beautiful story
Keep writing keep posting 😃 😄 keep it up 💪 💪 💪 💪 💪 💪 💪 💪 💪 💪 💪
Thanks for reading ... 🙂

Ab tak jo bhi logon ke reaction aaye hain, usse thoda andaaza lag gaya hai ki meri story kaun-kaun padh raha hai .
Mujhe accha laga ye dekhkar ki kai logon ko story pasand aa rahi hai.



→ Bhai apne option se mujhe likhne ki zabardasti mat karo. I can't able to write independently.

→ Suggestion dena hai to khushi-khushi do, acche ideas ho to DM bhi kar sakte ho.

→ Negative comments ko main seedha ignore kar doonga.

→ Ye story poori tarah romantic-love story nahi hai, aur bhi bahut kuch hai ismein.

→ Jo female characters 18+ hongi, wo hero (Raj) ki girlfriend ban sakti hain.

→ Regular update milte rahenge, tension na lo. (mostly Sunday & Thursday ko, thoda aage-piche ho sakta hai)

→ Comment & Like karo, taaki mera Likhne ka Motivation bana rahe

→ Aur haan, ye story adhoori nahi chhodi jayegi — poori karke hi manoonga.

Thanks for reading ... 🙂
Bahut hi shandar lajawab superb fantastic fabulous dhansu story hai aap ki writing skill bahut zabardast hai bahut umda aur details me likhte ho so beautiful
Apne andaz me likhte raho hum sab aap ke sath hai xf ki shandar stories me se hai
So finally thanks again 👍 😁
Keep writing keep posting
Keep it up 💪 💪 💪 💪 💪 💪 💪 💪 💪 💪
 
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Kawal Kumar

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dekho bhai Raj ke niche sab females nahi hogi, ye koi Randikhana nahi hai

Pyar toh hoga na bhai but single ladka pyar nahi kar sakta kya?

Right keep the story close to realistic.
Yha kai story hai jha hero ko superman diikhaya jata hai as he is only mard n all else are waste. Every girl on earth want love n fuck from him.

Keep this story a realistic a mix of romance, love n slow seduction, let hero explore her daey by day inch by inch. Let him do sm work to get her.
 

xoxo0781

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Haan bro I know the reality, sab acche se likhunga. Not every girl wants to sleep with our hero
Right keep the story close to realistic.
Yha kai story hai jha hero ko superman diikhaya jata hai as he is only mard n all else are waste. Every girl on earth want love n fuck from him.

Keep this story a realistic a mix of romance, love n slow seduction, let hero explore her daey by day inch by inch. Let him do sm work to get her.
 
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xoxo0781

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Ke aap story ko complete karoge
Dosri baat aap ka likhne ka andaz bahut umda hai story bahut hi shandar hai aur kuch story hai jo dil ko chuti hai onme se ye story bhi aap bahut acha aur details me likh rahe ho isme koi shak nahi aap ki writing skill bahut zabardast hai aap apne style me likhe yahi behtar hai baki logo ke suggestion to ate rahege aur ek baat story super hit hogi itna to main bhi janta so such a beautiful story
Keep writing keep posting 😃 😄 keep it up 💪 💪 💪 💪 💪 💪 💪 💪 💪 💪 💪



Bahut hi shandar lajawab superb fantastic fabulous dhansu story hai aap ki writing skill bahut zabardast hai bahut umda aur details me likhte ho so beautiful
Apne andaz me likhte raho hum sab aap ke sath hai xf ki shandar stories me se hai
So finally thanks again 👍 😁
Keep writing keep posting
Keep it up 💪 💪 💪 💪 💪 💪 💪 💪 💪 💪
Thank you dost 😃
 
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