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xoxo0781

Carrying Smiles, Hiding Scars
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Update: Week me mostly sunday ko milega

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Hero - Raj (20 sal)
Raj ki maa - Sakshi (42 sal) - Main Heroine
Raj ki Behen - Neha (18 sal)
Raj ke papa(late) - Rajdeep

Raj ki Mausi - Radha (43 sal)

Radha ki Beti - Preeti (19 sal)


Out off family

Sakshi ki Best Friend from her school = Naina (35 sal)
Raj's Best Friend from his childhood = Saurabh
Raj's classmate = Shreya (20 sal)



Amit Sir(Sports Teacher) - 45 sal = Tharki (Ladkibaazi se badnaam hai)

Vineet(Awara Student) - 18 sal = Neha ki class me padhta hai


For Readers:
→ Bhai apne option se mujhe likhne ki zabardasti mat karo. I can't able to write independently.
→ Suggestion dena hai to khushi-khushi do, acche ideas ho to DM bhi kar sakte ho.
→ Negative comments ko main seedha ignore kar doonga.
→ Ye story poori tarah romantic-love story nahi hai, aur bhi bahut kuch hai ismein.
→ Jo female characters 18+ hongi, wo hero (Raj) ki girlfriend ban sakti hain.
→ Regular update milte rahenge, tension na lo. (mostly Sunday & Thursday ko, thoda aage-piche ho sakta hai)
→ Comment & Like karo, taaki mera Likhne ka Motivation bana rahe
→ Aur haan, ye story adhoori nahi chhodi jayegi — poori karke hi manoonga.

Thanks 🙂 for reading ...
 
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Slayer123123

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Should I close the story?

Ye meri 1st story thi, ab mera dil thoda dukh gaya hai. I am feeling sad...

Mere pas kuch acche ideas the...
but seems like most of readers don't like my story...

Give me honest reply till Sunday (27th July)


After consideration & reality check, I will delete the story...
Are nahi bro bohot acha hi likh rahe ho ....your story is really good... Asa mat karo story jo socha hai bo hi likho.... Tumhra story mai 1lakh view hai iska matlab obviously matlab acha story likha hai.... Kuch kuch review negative to haga hi na...but tum baki logo ka to socho baki log to pasand kar rahe hai... Plzz bhai likhna band mat karna...
 
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Slayer123123

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Should I close the story?

Ye meri 1st story thi, ab mera dil thoda dukh gaya hai. I am feeling sad...

Mere pas kuch acche ideas the...
but seems like most of readers don't like my story...

Give me honest reply till Sunday (27th July)


After consideration & reality check, I will delete the story...
Maine bhi apko behen ko lekar negative bola tha but bo ek part hai baki really story bohut acha hai.... You can show emotions for both mother and son which is difficult to write for a writer but you nailed it... Bro plzz stop mat karna
 
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Ranjit143

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Should I close the story?

Ye meri 1st story thi, ab mera dil thoda dukh gaya hai. I am feeling sad...

Mere pas kuch acche ideas the...
but seems like most of readers don't like my story...

Give me honest reply till Sunday (27th July)


After consideration & reality check, I will delete the story...
Sorry yaar🙏
Bich mein behen ko leke aye to achha nehi laga ...isiliye kuchh bol diya hoga.. thoda hamara emotion ta samjho yr story se emotionally connected hai na to dukh hota hai koi teesra aaega to chahe vah behen kyon na ho

But aisa to chalta rahata hai na yeh koi baat hua chhod na yaar
Sorry 🙏
 
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xoxo0781

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Sorry yaar🙏
Bich mein behen ko leke aye to achha nehi laga ...isiliye kuchh bol diya hoga.. thoda hamara emotion ta samjho yr story se emotionally connected hai na to dukh hota hai koi teesra aaega to chahe vah behen kyon na ho

But aisa to chalta rahata hai na yeh koi baat hua chhod na yaar
Sorry 🙏

Should I close the story?

Ye meri 1st story thi, ab mera dil thoda dukh gaya hai. I am feeling sad...

Mere pas kuch acche ideas the...
but seems like most of readers don't like my story...

Give me honest reply till Sunday (27th July)


After consideration & reality check, I will delete the story...
Dost mera reason alag hai, idhar ke chat se thoda negative vibe aa rahi thi,

So I thought break leta hun ya fir story conclude kar deta hun
 

ToorJatt7565

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Should I close the story?

Ye meri 1st story thi, ab mera dil thoda dukh gaya hai. I am feeling sad...

Mere pas kuch acche ideas the...
but seems like most of readers don't like my story...

Give me honest reply till Sunday (27th July)


After consideration & reality check, I will delete the story...
Kya ho gya bhai
Kyu story band krna chahte ho
Itni achhi to story jaa rhi hai
 
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sumedh19

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Bhai please aisa naa karo yaar, 2-4 comments k wajah se story naa chhodo.

Tum independently likho yaar, par story complete karo acche se please 🙏🙏
Should I close the story?

Ye meri 1st story thi, ab mera dil thoda dukh gaya hai. I am feeling sad...

Mere pas kuch acche ideas the...
but seems like most of readers don't like my story...

Give me honest reply till Sunday (27th July)


After consideration & reality check, I will delete the story...
 
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sumedh19

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Bhai please ye story continue karo yaar, logo k bare me sochna band karo, tum sabko khush nahi kar sakte ho.
Please ye request hai 🙏
 
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