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Achhi kashamkash chal rahi hai dono auraton me.
Nice update. Savita ko majhdhar me chhod diya hai.
Nice update. Savita ko majhdhar me chhod diya hai.
Thank you Prem Bhai
Achhi kashamkash chal rahi hai dono auraton me.
Nice update. Savita ko majhdhar me chhod diya hai.
Nice update. Savita ko majhdhar me chhod diya hai.
Thank youबहुत ही सुन्दर और शानदार लिख रहे हो आप !
अब सविता का क्या होगा !
अगले भाग की प्रतीक्षा में है !
Thank you BhaiDost tumhari dono khaniya badiya hai bhaut dino baad fir khani parne mein maja a raha hai please continue your both story.
Yaar itani tariff ke liye shukriya aap ko... jald next update aayegaBahut gajab ki story likhi hai. Shandar scene creation hai. Saf suthre shabdon me sateekta se likhi gai story hai. Dil bagh bagh ho gaya. Kirdoaron ke dailogs damdar behad jamin se jude hue aur kahani ke track aur line ke hisab se match karte hai. Ekdam balance banaye hue scene aur dialogues hai. Kavya ki yaad aa gai. Pics aur GIF achhe match karte hai aur story ke anurup hai. Behad shandar updates ke liye bahut bahut Dhanyvad. Agle update ka badi besabri se intjar hai kripya jaldi dijiye.
Aapne likha hi itna umda hai ki tareef to khud ba khud hone wali hai. Thanks.Yaar itani tariff ke liye shukriya aap ko... jald next update aayega