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Fantasy Kaisa Yeh Ishq Hai.... Ajab Sa Risk Hai...... (Completed)

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nakli shaadi par shaadi ki rasme toh sach thi na... kya ladki hain.. Khir tak banani nahin aati hai.... :sigh:
hmm... ek gajab ki natakiya mod aa gayi hai story mein... Poor sweksha :(
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill nainu ji :applause: :applause:
Shadi nakli thi lekin Jisa ka expression aur emotion to ektarfa tha na :D .. ab itne drame kiye shadi ko lekar to uske saide effect bhi to jhelegi ... :D .. baki aage ka kuch nahi bolna sab aane wala hai :declare:
 

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Hayeeeere zalim saas zalim zamana bahot bura huwa jivisha ke sath mein dekho ab kya karti hai woh


Yeh uday sahi time par uday ho gaye sweksha ka sawaha ho jata tha sher ke samne waise mat update tha yeh bhi padh kar maza aaya bus update ki quantity badhao nain jii
Zalim sas kab se ho gayi .. wo to Durga devi bus rashmen nibha rahi hai :D .. baki shadi ka laddu to Jivisha ko chakhna tha .. ab ke rahi hai maze :D

Dekhiye sir ji .. ab 2 story chal rahi hai .. dono ko roj manage karna aur unpar update dena hota hai... Fir bhi main kosis karunga kal 2 update dene ki :declare:
 

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Lovely Jivisha... :love: Looks more sweet in anger.:lol1: All the hard work went in vain. Nandini is also having fun. Sveksha and Udaya's story has some new characters, but who is she? The poor came in front of the lion. :lol1:Now I like this story more than Bhawar.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...

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Ji abhi kahaini mazdhar me hain .. ek hi waqt ki 2 kahaniyan chal rahi hain... Jis waqt Jivisha indore pahunchi thik usi waqt ki kahani idhar bhi chal rahi hai.. ya ekadh din baad ki maine dhyan na diya :D .. enjoy the story
 

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Bahut badhiya update hai bhaiw.......maine aaj hi pashna start kiya.......jisa ki apne 1st page per kaha ye story complete karenge ummid hai story jarur puri hogi....
Sorry maine first page ye nahi kaha ki ye story complete karunga .. kyonki bahut rare story hai jo main complete nahi kar paya hun .. nahi to apna track record complete wala hai :) ...maine bus ye kaha ki forum band hone ke wajah se adhuri rah gayi... Baharhal aap chinta na karen .. story jab shuru hui hai to khatam hogi hi isme koi 2 rai nahi hai ..

Ummid karta hun aap anth tak bane rahenge aur story enjoy karte rahenge .. :welcome1: bro
 

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rishto ko itna mat ulajhao ki kahani ka maja bekar ho jaaye ,,,,,,,,,,,, :::::""""""""Durga devi kisi ko chhodne ke mood se nahi u dont worry Durga devi ki ek aur beti hai .. ya Jivisha ki bhi ek aur sister hai .. aage aane wali hai .. kaho to koi chakkar cahlwa dun kya
Ji aap comment padh kar uljhe nahi .. kyonki yahan to hansi mazak aur khincha tani uppar level ki chalti rahegi .. u just enjoy the story .. comment ka mazak story me nahi milega .. yahan off track topic late hain :declare:
 
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