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Fantasy Kaisa Yeh Ishq Hai.... Ajab Sa Risk Hai...... (Completed)

Naina

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Sir sine se lagaye Durga devi ek-ek kar ke sare kaam bata rahi thi. Jaise-jaise Jivisha kaam ke bare me sun rahi thi, waise-waise uss ki aakhen bari hoti ja rahi thi. Aur jab pura kaam bata kar Durga devi chup hui, Jivisha ko to jaise chakkar sa aane laga ho, wahin Nandni ander he ander jor-jor se hans rahi thi.


Durga devi ke jate he Jivisha apna chhota sa muh banati.... "Oye ye teri mother India kya bol kar chali gayi"


Nandni.... Yahi ki aap ek nayi dulhan ki tarah aaj apne ghar ko apne hathon se saaf karengi. Rasoi me ja kar pahla vidhi purn karengi aur wo hai sab ko apne hathon ka bana mitha khilana.


Jivisha.... Iss se achha hota thodi zahar mujhe de deti, kha kar chain se so jati. Main aur itna sab karun.... aur ye khir kaise banti hai....


Nandni.... Online kisi bhi site se khir banane ki vidhi dekh aur lag ja apne kaam par. Bhag-bhag tere pass waqt bhi kam hai....


Jivisha paun hath patkati chal di safai karne..... "Hey bhagwan ye main kahan fas gayi. Nandu ki maa to riti-riwaj ke naam par meri bali he le legi. Hay ye meri kamar".....


Jivisha apne kaam me lagi, mathe ka pasina apne hathon se pochhti ro-ro kar gane ga rahi thi.... "Duniya me aaye hain to jina he parega"..... aur farsh par pochha laga rahi thi. Tabhi Nandni uske samne khadi ho kar..... "Kitni mehnat kar rahi hai, meri ful se komal Jisa"

Jivisha, apna sir utha kar madad ki pukar wali najron se dekhti... "Thanks, Nandu... tu he to meri pyari bahna hai. Kuch dur tu safai kar de... please"


Nandni.... O' meri pyari banno, wo kya hai na mamma ne kaha hai pados se dhol le kar aane ke liye. Isliye sorry, main abhi teri madad nahi kar sakti. Haan wo tune na, pichhe thik se saaf nahi kiya isliye maine sochi bata dun jarra... jab kar he rahi hai to thik se kar na.


Jivisha gusse me ghurti.... Chal bhag kamini, ja kar meri tamasa ka dhol pit. Bhag yahan se. Sala iss desh me riwaj ke naam par mujh jaisi abla ko tabla samjh kar bajate hain, aur kaminey ladkon ke liye koi riwaj he nahi bante, bas unhe bitha kar khilate raho aur unki charbi badhate raho......


Bechari kisi tarah mehnat kar ke pure ghar ki saaf-safai ki. Khana banane ki site par ja kar khir banana sikha, aur 50 logon ka khir bhi banai. Idhar 9 bajte he sari ladies pahunch chuki thi aur pit kar lok-geet gana shuru ho gaya tha.


Jivisha to ander se jal bhun kar pak rahi thi. Dhol par najchne ki thirak aur ladies ke kilkari ki awaz jab bhi uske kano me parti uska khun ubal mar deta..... "Besharmon naukar se bhi badtar kaam karwa rahe ho aur khud bahar naach ga rahe. Bhagwan, maine tuhara kya bigara tha jo aise din dikha rahe...."


10.30 am baj chuka tha, Durga devi kitchen me aa kar Jivisha se kahne lagi.... "Jaldi kar sari ladies ko jana bhi hai. Aur tu hai ki ab tak khir bhi nahi bana payi. Tu kab khir banayegi kab taiyar hogi aur kab sab ko paros kar apne hathon se khilayegi"....


Jivisha, khud me budbudate..... "Aao mujhe he kha jao. Itna karwa ke man nahi bhara jo ab parosne bhi kah rahi".....


Durga devi.... Kuch kahi kya...


Jivisha.... Haan kah rahi thi main, bas aadhe ghante aur intzar aunty fir main aap ko ab tak ki sab se best khir apne hathon se khilaungi. Bas chini dal kar main bhi ja rahi hun taiyar hone...


Jivisha ne dhund kar chini ka dabba nikala. Bechari lekin chini aur khane wale sode me fark nahi kar payi. Aur site par likhe instruction ke anusar..... Chini andaz se dalte huye usne do bare dabbe sode ke ulat diye khir me.


Nahate waqt bhi Jivisha ke tane kam na huye..... "Hay Ram, in jalimon ne to lut liya riwaj ke naam par. Pata nahi ab aur kitna jhelna hoga"


Saree pahan kar Jivisha fatafat nikli aur fir se lag gayi kaam par... Sab ko thali me khir paros kar dene lagi... Abhi 15 ladies ko khir di he hogi... tabhi ek lady "thuuuuuuuuuu" karti chillane lagi.... "Ye khir hai ya chuha mar kar dal diya hai khir me"...


Pura mahol shocking..... Jivisha ki to aankhen bari ho gayi..... "Itni mehnat ke baad ye kamini aisa kah rahi"... usne ek ungli se khir ko taste ki..... jaise he khir muh me gaya... wahin hall me Jivisha apne hath paun patakti.... "mammi-mammi" ... kar ke rone lagi.....



Kahin dur Himalya ki wadiyon me Uttrakhand, Nanital, Jim Corbett National Park.....


Apne group ke sath ghumne aayi Sweksha, Jim Corbett National Park (JCN park) me ghumte-ghumte apne group se kahin dur bhatak gayi thi. Jungle ke ander wo wild life photography me itni masgul ho gayi ki usse pata bhi nahi chala, kab wo apne group se dur nikal aayi.


Bhatakti hui wo JCN park ke ristricted area me pahunch gayi thi, jahan saaf akshron me likha tha… "Jungli janwaron ke atyadhik humle ke karan, pratibandhit kshtr"… Sweksha apne photography me itni mast thi ki wo notice board ko na dekhkar, sheron ke ek jhund ko dekh kafi excited ho rahi thi ...... "wowwww, it's look really awesome"


Sweksha sheron ke jhund se kafi duriyan banaye thi, jis wajah se usse photography mein clear view nahi mil pa raha tha. Uske aage jane ki himmat nahi thi, isliye wo ped par chadh kar, upar se unki tasveeren lene lagi. Har click par wo khud se kahti "nice click" aur agli tasveer lene lagti.


Yun hi jab wo tasveer le rahi thi, tabhi achanak uske kamre ke aage latakta sanp dikhne laga, Sweksha jab camera aakhon ke aage se hatayi, wo sanp bus aadhe fit ki duri par jhul raha tha. Apne dar ko kabu karti wo niche utri aur aas pass apne group ko dhundhne lagi. Kintu wo kafi dur nikal aayi thi isliye na to usse koi dikha aur na hi kisi ne uski awaz suni.


Isi kram me wo apne group ko dhundhte hui, us pratibandhit kshetr ke aur ander ghus gayi. Dhundhte dhundte wo achanak hi ek sher ke samne khadi ho gayi. Dono ke bich lagbhag 100 meter ki duri hogi aur sher apne samne shikar ko dekh kar jor ki dahar lagaya.


Khauffnak manjar tha wo. Uski dahar itni bhaybhit karne wali thi ki Sweksha ke hath paun kapne lage. Wo jan bachane ke liye piche palti aur uska paun mud gaya. Paun mein uske jabardast monch aur ladkhada kar wo jamin par gidi thi. Samne se sher dahar lagate huye uski ore teji se badha.… Dar se puri kanp-kanpi chhuti aayi. Hath paun fulne lage.. upar ki sans upar aur niche ki sans niche rah gayi…


"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa" ek tej chinkh aur Sweksha ke hosh udd chuke the.... Uski jab aakhen khuli to bikul andhera tha aur ek lambi chinkh ke baad jaise halak me juban atak gayi ho Sweksha ki... wo kuch bol he nahi pa rahi thi.... kafi kosis kar rahi thi par muh se awaz nahi nikal rahi thi....


Tabhi uss jagah me raushni hui, koi tha jo wahan ke khidki ko khol kar ujala kar raha tha..... Sweksha ne jab usse dekha to uski aakhen bari hoti chali gayi..... "Tum kaun ho"... kahti hui wo bistar se uth kar khadi hone ki kosis ki, aur dard bhari chinkh ke sath..... ladkhara gayi....


Uss ladkey ne usse tham liya..... "leti raho, tumhare paun me moch ke sath kafi sujan bhi hai"....


Sweksha.... Main yahan kaise pahunchi, aur tum kaun ho....


Ladka.... Mera naam Uday hai, main iss jungle ka ranger hun. Tum par sher humla karne wale the aur tum dar se behosh ho gayi thi. Main tumhari chinkh sun kar wahan pahuncha aur firing kar ke un sheron ko bhagaya...


Sweksha.... Ohhh ! Thanks.... Aap please mujhe mere group ke pass chhor do, mere apne doston ke sath yahan aayi hun.


Uday..... Sorry miss, bare afsos ke sath ye kahna par raha hai ki, aap ko ek do din yahan rukna parega...


Sweksha, aashrya se.... "Kyon, kyon bhala mujhe rukna hoga"....


Uday.... Kyonki iss waqt meri jeep kharab hai, aur jungle ke iss hisse me koi aata nahi. Isliye jab tak machanic aa kar jeep thik nahi karta, yahin rahna hoga, aur koi upay nahi hai.


Sweksha.... Ab main kya karun...


Uday.... Humari mehman nawaji ka maza lijiye, aur yahan rah kar dekhiye ki kitni taklif hum jhelte hain. Oh by the way aap ka camra, jo uss jagah se mili thi. Sambhal kar agli baar se photography kijiyega. Warna kismat har baar sath nahi deti...


Sweksha.... Hmmm ! samjh gayi main....


Tabhi Sweksha ko apne niche kuch gila-gila ehsaas hua, aur wo hath laga kar dekhne lagi...


Uday.... Hota hai kabhi-kabhi dar ke mare...


Swekha.... Yakkk ! Please iss par baat mat karo. Aur mat yaad dilao wo manjar, mere pran mano gale me atak gaye the. Waise kuch pahn'ne ko milega....


Uday...... Mere pass kuch kapdey hain, yadi aap chaho to usse pahan sakti ho....


Sweksha.... Hmmm ! Dijiye....


Uday ne chhoti si almari se kuch kapdey nikal kar diye aur ek parda khinch diya. Sweksha un kapdon me se lungi ko nikalti usse apne kamar me achhe se lapet li....


Uday fir wahan se nikal gaya, aur jate-jate kahta gaya..... "Main aap ke yahan se nikalne ki vaywastha karwata hun. Mej par kuch fruites aur pani ki bottol rakhi hai. Jaroorat lage to kha-pi lena. Aur yahan se bahar nikalne ki kosis bhi mat karna warna apne sath hone wali ghatnao ke liye tum khud jimmedar ho"....
nakli shaadi par shaadi ki rasme toh sach thi na... kya ladki hain.. Khir tak banani nahin aati hai.... :sigh:
hmm... ek gajab ki natakiya mod aa gayi hai story mein... Poor sweksha :(
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill nainu ji :applause: :applause:
 

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Sir sine se lagaye Durga devi ek-ek kar ke sare kaam bata rahi thi. Jaise-jaise Jivisha kaam ke bare me sun rahi thi, waise-waise uss ki aakhen bari hoti ja rahi thi. Aur jab pura kaam bata kar Durga devi chup hui, Jivisha ko to jaise chakkar sa aane laga ho, wahin Nandni ander he ander jor-jor se hans rahi thi.


Durga devi ke jate he Jivisha apna chhota sa muh banati.... "Oye ye teri mother India kya bol kar chali gayi"


Nandni.... Yahi ki aap ek nayi dulhan ki tarah aaj apne ghar ko apne hathon se saaf karengi. Rasoi me ja kar pahla vidhi purn karengi aur wo hai sab ko apne hathon ka bana mitha khilana.


Jivisha.... Iss se achha hota thodi zahar mujhe de deti, kha kar chain se so jati. Main aur itna sab karun.... aur ye khir kaise banti hai....


Nandni.... Online kisi bhi site se khir banane ki vidhi dekh aur lag ja apne kaam par. Bhag-bhag tere pass waqt bhi kam hai....


Jivisha paun hath patkati chal di safai karne..... "Hey bhagwan ye main kahan fas gayi. Nandu ki maa to riti-riwaj ke naam par meri bali he le legi. Hay ye meri kamar".....


Jivisha apne kaam me lagi, mathe ka pasina apne hathon se pochhti ro-ro kar gane ga rahi thi.... "Duniya me aaye hain to jina he parega"..... aur farsh par pochha laga rahi thi. Tabhi Nandni uske samne khadi ho kar..... "Kitni mehnat kar rahi hai, meri ful se komal Jisa"

Jivisha, apna sir utha kar madad ki pukar wali najron se dekhti... "Thanks, Nandu... tu he to meri pyari bahna hai. Kuch dur tu safai kar de... please"


Nandni.... O' meri pyari banno, wo kya hai na mamma ne kaha hai pados se dhol le kar aane ke liye. Isliye sorry, main abhi teri madad nahi kar sakti. Haan wo tune na, pichhe thik se saaf nahi kiya isliye maine sochi bata dun jarra... jab kar he rahi hai to thik se kar na.


Jivisha gusse me ghurti.... Chal bhag kamini, ja kar meri tamasa ka dhol pit. Bhag yahan se. Sala iss desh me riwaj ke naam par mujh jaisi abla ko tabla samjh kar bajate hain, aur kaminey ladkon ke liye koi riwaj he nahi bante, bas unhe bitha kar khilate raho aur unki charbi badhate raho......


Bechari kisi tarah mehnat kar ke pure ghar ki saaf-safai ki. Khana banane ki site par ja kar khir banana sikha, aur 50 logon ka khir bhi banai. Idhar 9 bajte he sari ladies pahunch chuki thi aur pit kar lok-geet gana shuru ho gaya tha.


Jivisha to ander se jal bhun kar pak rahi thi. Dhol par najchne ki thirak aur ladies ke kilkari ki awaz jab bhi uske kano me parti uska khun ubal mar deta..... "Besharmon naukar se bhi badtar kaam karwa rahe ho aur khud bahar naach ga rahe. Bhagwan, maine tuhara kya bigara tha jo aise din dikha rahe...."


10.30 am baj chuka tha, Durga devi kitchen me aa kar Jivisha se kahne lagi.... "Jaldi kar sari ladies ko jana bhi hai. Aur tu hai ki ab tak khir bhi nahi bana payi. Tu kab khir banayegi kab taiyar hogi aur kab sab ko paros kar apne hathon se khilayegi"....


Jivisha, khud me budbudate..... "Aao mujhe he kha jao. Itna karwa ke man nahi bhara jo ab parosne bhi kah rahi".....


Durga devi.... Kuch kahi kya...


Jivisha.... Haan kah rahi thi main, bas aadhe ghante aur intzar aunty fir main aap ko ab tak ki sab se best khir apne hathon se khilaungi. Bas chini dal kar main bhi ja rahi hun taiyar hone...


Jivisha ne dhund kar chini ka dabba nikala. Bechari lekin chini aur khane wale sode me fark nahi kar payi. Aur site par likhe instruction ke anusar..... Chini andaz se dalte huye usne do bare dabbe sode ke ulat diye khir me.


Nahate waqt bhi Jivisha ke tane kam na huye..... "Hay Ram, in jalimon ne to lut liya riwaj ke naam par. Pata nahi ab aur kitna jhelna hoga"


Saree pahan kar Jivisha fatafat nikli aur fir se lag gayi kaam par... Sab ko thali me khir paros kar dene lagi... Abhi 15 ladies ko khir di he hogi... tabhi ek lady "thuuuuuuuuuu" karti chillane lagi.... "Ye khir hai ya chuha mar kar dal diya hai khir me"...


Pura mahol shocking..... Jivisha ki to aankhen bari ho gayi..... "Itni mehnat ke baad ye kamini aisa kah rahi"... usne ek ungli se khir ko taste ki..... jaise he khir muh me gaya... wahin hall me Jivisha apne hath paun patakti.... "mammi-mammi" ... kar ke rone lagi.....



Kahin dur Himalya ki wadiyon me Uttrakhand, Nanital, Jim Corbett National Park.....


Apne group ke sath ghumne aayi Sweksha, Jim Corbett National Park (JCN park) me ghumte-ghumte apne group se kahin dur bhatak gayi thi. Jungle ke ander wo wild life photography me itni masgul ho gayi ki usse pata bhi nahi chala, kab wo apne group se dur nikal aayi.


Bhatakti hui wo JCN park ke ristricted area me pahunch gayi thi, jahan saaf akshron me likha tha… "Jungli janwaron ke atyadhik humle ke karan, pratibandhit kshtr"… Sweksha apne photography me itni mast thi ki wo notice board ko na dekhkar, sheron ke ek jhund ko dekh kafi excited ho rahi thi ...... "wowwww, it's look really awesome"


Sweksha sheron ke jhund se kafi duriyan banaye thi, jis wajah se usse photography mein clear view nahi mil pa raha tha. Uske aage jane ki himmat nahi thi, isliye wo ped par chadh kar, upar se unki tasveeren lene lagi. Har click par wo khud se kahti "nice click" aur agli tasveer lene lagti.


Yun hi jab wo tasveer le rahi thi, tabhi achanak uske kamre ke aage latakta sanp dikhne laga, Sweksha jab camera aakhon ke aage se hatayi, wo sanp bus aadhe fit ki duri par jhul raha tha. Apne dar ko kabu karti wo niche utri aur aas pass apne group ko dhundhne lagi. Kintu wo kafi dur nikal aayi thi isliye na to usse koi dikha aur na hi kisi ne uski awaz suni.


Isi kram me wo apne group ko dhundhte hui, us pratibandhit kshetr ke aur ander ghus gayi. Dhundhte dhundte wo achanak hi ek sher ke samne khadi ho gayi. Dono ke bich lagbhag 100 meter ki duri hogi aur sher apne samne shikar ko dekh kar jor ki dahar lagaya.


Khauffnak manjar tha wo. Uski dahar itni bhaybhit karne wali thi ki Sweksha ke hath paun kapne lage. Wo jan bachane ke liye piche palti aur uska paun mud gaya. Paun mein uske jabardast monch aur ladkhada kar wo jamin par gidi thi. Samne se sher dahar lagate huye uski ore teji se badha.… Dar se puri kanp-kanpi chhuti aayi. Hath paun fulne lage.. upar ki sans upar aur niche ki sans niche rah gayi…


"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa" ek tej chinkh aur Sweksha ke hosh udd chuke the.... Uski jab aakhen khuli to bikul andhera tha aur ek lambi chinkh ke baad jaise halak me juban atak gayi ho Sweksha ki... wo kuch bol he nahi pa rahi thi.... kafi kosis kar rahi thi par muh se awaz nahi nikal rahi thi....


Tabhi uss jagah me raushni hui, koi tha jo wahan ke khidki ko khol kar ujala kar raha tha..... Sweksha ne jab usse dekha to uski aakhen bari hoti chali gayi..... "Tum kaun ho"... kahti hui wo bistar se uth kar khadi hone ki kosis ki, aur dard bhari chinkh ke sath..... ladkhara gayi....


Uss ladkey ne usse tham liya..... "leti raho, tumhare paun me moch ke sath kafi sujan bhi hai"....


Sweksha.... Main yahan kaise pahunchi, aur tum kaun ho....


Ladka.... Mera naam Uday hai, main iss jungle ka ranger hun. Tum par sher humla karne wale the aur tum dar se behosh ho gayi thi. Main tumhari chinkh sun kar wahan pahuncha aur firing kar ke un sheron ko bhagaya...


Sweksha.... Ohhh ! Thanks.... Aap please mujhe mere group ke pass chhor do, mere apne doston ke sath yahan aayi hun.


Uday..... Sorry miss, bare afsos ke sath ye kahna par raha hai ki, aap ko ek do din yahan rukna parega...


Sweksha, aashrya se.... "Kyon, kyon bhala mujhe rukna hoga"....


Uday.... Kyonki iss waqt meri jeep kharab hai, aur jungle ke iss hisse me koi aata nahi. Isliye jab tak machanic aa kar jeep thik nahi karta, yahin rahna hoga, aur koi upay nahi hai.


Sweksha.... Ab main kya karun...


Uday.... Humari mehman nawaji ka maza lijiye, aur yahan rah kar dekhiye ki kitni taklif hum jhelte hain. Oh by the way aap ka camra, jo uss jagah se mili thi. Sambhal kar agli baar se photography kijiyega. Warna kismat har baar sath nahi deti...


Sweksha.... Hmmm ! samjh gayi main....


Tabhi Sweksha ko apne niche kuch gila-gila ehsaas hua, aur wo hath laga kar dekhne lagi...


Uday.... Hota hai kabhi-kabhi dar ke mare...


Swekha.... Yakkk ! Please iss par baat mat karo. Aur mat yaad dilao wo manjar, mere pran mano gale me atak gaye the. Waise kuch pahn'ne ko milega....


Uday...... Mere pass kuch kapdey hain, yadi aap chaho to usse pahan sakti ho....


Sweksha.... Hmmm ! Dijiye....


Uday ne chhoti si almari se kuch kapdey nikal kar diye aur ek parda khinch diya. Sweksha un kapdon me se lungi ko nikalti usse apne kamar me achhe se lapet li....


Uday fir wahan se nikal gaya, aur jate-jate kahta gaya..... "Main aap ke yahan se nikalne ki vaywastha karwata hun. Mej par kuch fruites aur pani ki bottol rakhi hai. Jaroorat lage to kha-pi lena. Aur yahan se bahar nikalne ki kosis bhi mat karna warna apne sath hone wali ghatnao ke liye tum khud jimmedar ho"....
ek ne kheer me soda dal diya aur dusari ne sher dekh kar soda nikaal diya :lol1:
ab ynha bhi soda ? aur aap bolte ho daru ki bat na karu :doh:
 

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Hayeeeere zalim saas zalim zamana bahot bura huwa jivisha ke sath mein dekho ab kya karti hai woh


Yeh uday sahi time par uday ho gaye sweksha ka sawaha ho jata tha sher ke samne waise mat update tha yeh bhi padh kar maza aaya bus update ki quantity badhao nain jii
 

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Durga devi kisi ko chhodne ke mood se nahi u dont worry Durga devi ki ek aur beti hai .. ya Jivisha ki bhi ek aur sister hai .. aage aane wali hai .. kaho to koi chakkar cahlwa dun kya :D
Yessss... :love:
 

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Lovely Jivisha... :love: Looks more sweet in anger.:lol1: All the hard work went in vain. Nandini is also having fun. Sveksha and Udaya's story has some new characters, but who is she? The poor came in front of the lion. :lol1:Now I like this story more than Bhawar.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...

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"Chay le lo chay, chay garam, chay garam" .... "Ek rupya de do sahab, mere bache bhuke hain.. aap ko dua lagegi".... "Vanita, mayapuri, oulook, sarita... magazine le lo magazine".... "Yatrigan kripya dhyan den, train no 12406, Mumbai-howrah mail apne nirdharit samay se ek ghanta der se chal rahi hai... aap ke hui aswidha ke liye hume khed hai"

"Ufff kitni bhid hai yahan... ye main kaun si grah par aa pahuncha, ye to chidiyakhana jaisa lag raha hai".....

Nischal, Kalyan junction ke platform no. 4 par khada wahan ki bhir ko dekh ascharya me par gaya. Ajib tarah ke mahol, ajib tarah ke log aur bhasha to bikul samjh se pare.

Tabhi koi train uss platform par aa kar ruki aur logon ki bhir utri.... ek aurat upar se niche bag lade, chillati hui kahne lagi.... "Ae khambe ki tarah raste me kyon khada hai, side hat na. Dikhta nahi bhari saman uthaye hun"

Nischal uss aurat ke ajib si baat ko samjh to nahi paya bas usse laga ki wo kuch kah rahi hai. Nischal hathon ke ishare me puchha "Kya hai"

Aurat.... Pagal hai kya hatne kah rahi hun to tujhe samjh me nahi aa raha hai kya....

Uski bhasha Nischal ke samjh se pare thi. Aur khada bas isharon me puchhne ki kosis kar raha tha ki wo kahna kya chahti hai.... anth me haar kar wo aurat he uske bagal se nikal gayi.

Wo aurat karib char kadam aage gayi hogi, Nischal ne samne dekha to uss aurat ka ek jhola sayad wahin chhut gaya tha... Nischal ne jhola liya aur teji se mura jhola usse wapas dene ke liye....


"Hey bhagwan ye mukhiya ji ke aadmi mujhe dhundhte yahan na aa jaye. Please bhagwan un kamino ki najar nahi pare mujh par, bacha lo prabhu... bacha lo"

Jabardasti shadi ho rahi thi, aur Jivisha shadi ke din he bhag aayi. Jab se train me baithi thi, usse ek he dar sata raha tha kahin mukhiya ji ke aadmi na dekh le, aur pakar kar uski jabardasti shadi na karwa de...

Dulhan ke libas me, upar se niche tak sazi Jivisha.... "Bhagwan-bhagwan" karti chali ja rahi thi.... tabhi... "Ticket... ticket"... karte huye T.T bhi pahunch gaya...

T.t ko dekh dekh kar Jivisha jor-jor se rone lagi. Halanki uski aankhon me aanshu to nahi the par awaz me rone wali siskiyan jaroor thi.

Kuch he der me bhir jama ho gayi..... "Kya hua bitiya, tum ro kyon rahi ho, tumhare sath wale log kahan gaye"

Bhir me se ek dayalu lady, Jivisha ko satwana deti puchhne lagi..... Jivisha apne naak aur aankh ponchhti kahne lagi..... "Mere sath koi bhi nahi. Pata nahi mere pati kahan chale gaye. Subah jab nind khuli to mere pass nahi the. Kab se unhe dhund rahu hun mil he nahi rahe. Ticket, paisa sab unhi ke pass hai... subah se bhukhi bhi hun, kuch khayi tak nahi".

T.t, wahan ke mahol ko dekh kar he nikal gaya. Usse samjh me aa gaya tha ki aage kuch kaha to public puri lapat paregi.

Train ke achhe bhale log, sab uss bechari akeli asahay ladki ko wahan se utha kar apne stah wali berth par le aaye. Pahle to khub khilaya pilaya, fir Jivisha ke pati ko 100 galiyan dete huye usse kosne lage.....

Train apni puri raftar se apne har paraw par rukti hui chal rahi thi. Jivisha ka safar achha katne laga, lekin tabhi lobby me najar gayi aur dar se Jivisha ka kaleja dhak-dhak karne laga. Mukhiya ji ke aadmi Jivisha ko dhundhte uss compartment me pahunch chuke the.

"Ab kya karun... Bhagwan kaha tha na thodi madad karo... nahi suni na aap ne"... Jivisha chupke se wahan se uthi aur ja kar bathroom me ghus gayi... idhar mukhiya ji ke aadmi usse pure compartment me dhundhte aage badh rahe the.... Tabhi Kalyan junction par train ruki aur Jivisha chhipte-chhipate bahar nikal gayi.....

Jisvisha mud-mud kar aage pichhe dekh rahi thi aur bari teji se aage badh rahi thi. Nischal uss aurat ka bag utha kar usse dene ke liye mura he tha... aur ussi waqt Jivisha mur kar train ko dekh rahi thi aur apne kadam aage badha rahi thi.....


"Dharam"....... Jivisha aur Nischal ki takkar ho gayi... Jivisha larkhara kar girne lagi. Tabhi Nischal ne uske kamar ko apne hathon me tham liya aur usse girne se bachaya....

Nischal ne aakhen munda... sara ghatnakarm usse slow motion me dikh raha tha.... uska murna... aur Jivisha ka kandha uske sine se takraya..

Uski gardan piche ki ore mure aur kadan aage tha.... uffff jhatke ke sath gardan ghumate aage muri... khubsurat se chehre par pura baal bikher gaye. Uske aage ka paun larkharaya, aur wo girne lagi...

Nischal ne apni aakhen khol diya... Jivisha ko ab bhi wo apne hathon me thame tha... aur Jivisha ka chehra pura balon se dhaka tha.... Jivisha apne chehre par aaye bikhre baal ko hatayi... "Uffff kya masoom, khubsurat si jhalak thi, aur ye dulhan ka libas iss roop me par aur char chand laga raha tha"

Nischal ke liye ye pal jaise tham sa gaya ho, aur najren bas Jivisha par he tiki rah gayi. Idhar Jivhsa khud ko balance nahi kar payi aur wo larkhara kar girne lagi. Bikhre baal sidhi karti wo jab uthne ki kosis kar rahi thi, tabhi samne Nischal ka wo khubsurat sa chehra tha....

Ek pal ke liye aisa laga ki ye chehra dil me utar raha hai. Par agle he pal jab wapas najren train ki ore gayi to pata chala ki mukhiya ji ke aadmi issi taraf aa rahe hain....

Jivisha, Nischal ke kalai ka sahara le kar sidhi khari hui. Apne aeriyon ko unchi karti thodi upar hui aur Nischal ke gale me hath dal kar hont se hont laga diya. Jisvisha apna chehra chhipane ke liye Nischal ke hont se hont laga, usse chumna shuru kar di.... Nischal ki aankhen fati ki fati rah gayi... usse samjh me he nahi aaya ki ek he pal me ye kya ho gaya....

Jivisha hont se hont lagaye rakhi, aur najren utha kar dekh bhi rahi thi ki wo log unhe cross kiye kiye ya nahi. Aankhen khuli to pata chala ki mukhiya ji ke log bhi wahan khadey ho kar free ka show enjoy kar rahe hain.....

"Fas gayi Jivisha iss filmy trick ke chakkar me. Bhagwan ab aur kitne twist haan, kuch to raham karo. Kab tak main iss anjaan ke sath kiss karti rahun".

Jivisha aakhen kholti aur fir kiss continue karne lagti. Chhota kiss to samajh me bhi aata hai, logon ka dhyan nahi jaye. Lekin ye kiss to lamba, aur lamba he hota chala ja raha tha, aur logon ki puri bhir jama ho kar bas yahi najara dekh rahi thi.... tabhi Jivisha ke kano tak aawaz pahunchi....

"Chalo re inhe romamce kar lene do, lagta hai honeymoon bhi yahin mana kar jayenge. Chalo Jivisha ko ander train me he dhundhte hain"

Train ne horn dena shuru kiya aur mukhiya ji ke log nikal liye. Train jab badh chali to Jivisha, Nischal ke hont chhorti, yakkk-yakk karti apne hont ko rumal se pochh ne lagi....

Khud ko thik kar ke najar jab samne ghumayi... Nischal bari si aakhen kiye usse tukur-tukur dekhe ja raha tha.... Jivisha ke pass bhi koi sabd nahi the ki ab iss bechare ko kya jawab de jo kiss ke baad hakka-bakka khada tha.... Dono nisabd khadey bas ek dusre ko he dekh rahe the....
Bahut badhiya update hai bhaiw.......maine aaj hi pashna start kiya.......jisa ki apne 1st page per kaha ye story complete karenge ummid hai story jarur puri hogi....
 

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rishto ko itna mat ulajhao ki kahani ka maja bekar ho jaaye ,,,,,,,,,,,, :::::""""""""Durga devi kisi ko chhodne ke mood se nahi u dont worry Durga devi ki ek aur beti hai .. ya Jivisha ki bhi ek aur sister hai .. aage aane wali hai .. kaho to koi chakkar cahlwa dun kya
 
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