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Fantasy Kaisa Yeh Ishq Hai.... Ajab Sa Risk Hai...... (Completed)

Aakash.

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I have gone mad laughing, what scene have you made, enjoyed reading, everyone is mingling. Anash is very innocent and could not speak in front of Nandani. :lol1:
Jivisha is no less than anyone, put all the blame on Nandani. :lol1:One thing is not understood, how did Jivisha accept Nischal? Or is it also a play.:hmm2:
A new character is added to the story, Kasak. Nischal is talking to Kasak very fondly, something is wrong. Hmm, Kasak doesn't look like my type, she is a complete gimmick. By the way both sisters have a lot of love.
The enemy side is plotting, it is not going well.:sigh:
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.

Thank You...

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sorbobhuk

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Pune.. Jivisha Ka Ghar…


Sab log side hat gaye aur sab se pichhe Nichal khara tha..... Nischal ki najar jab uss ladki par gayi... wo bas ek tak dekhta he rah gaya.... Wo usse dekhne pura kho sa gaya... waise wo ladki thi he aisi .... jaise har jawan dilon ki dharkan ho... jo bhi ladka usse dekhe bas deewana ho jaye.....


Najren kewal Nischal ki he nahi balki ek najar aur thi jo lagatar uss ladki ko ghure ja rahi thi, aur wo thi uski bahan Jivisha ki najar..... Bare chacha ki beti, jo Aurangabad me rahti hai.... Naam Kasak Singh Rajput....


Jivisha, Kasak ko dekh kar do baar apni aakhen mizi.... "Sach me Kasak he hai"....


Tabtak Kasak, Nischal ke pass pahunch chuki thi, aur apna hath aage badha kar kahne lagi.... "Hello, jiju... hello"


Nischal jaise apne dhyan se jaga ho..... wo bhi hath milate huye "hello" kahne laga....


Kasak.... By the way aap kahan khoye the jiju....


Nischal.... Bas aap ko dekh raha tha, aap ka chehra dekh kar dang rah gaya... mere kisi apne se bahut he milti-julti hai...


Kasak..... Ishhh, Jiju line mar rahe ho kya... aisi lines pahle bhi sun chuki hun...


Nischal.... Ha ha ha... ab itna akarshit karne wala surat payi hain, compliments to milegi he na.


Kasak.... Kya baat hai jiju, aap to kafi fast nikle....


Nischal.... Main to fast hun, par tumhari bahan itni slow kaise ho gayi.... dekho kaise tumhe he ghure ja rahi hai.. Dono ke bich kahin koi chemistry to nahi....


Kasak.... Hehe, Jiju... rahne do aap ko iss chemistry ko samjhne ke liye flashback me jana hoga...


Nischal.... Itne logon ke bich flashback me jana sahi hoga kya....


Kasak..... Oh to aap ko flashback dekhna hai. Sidha bolon na flashback dekhna hai, dusron ki chinta kyon karte ho.... Aap bas flashback dekho... baki public ko pause mode par kar dete hain....


Flashback start.....


Aurangabad ka ek gawn.... Gawn me bara sa ghar.... Ghar me Ram aur Shyam jaise do bhai.... Sudhanshu aur Himanshu....


Nischal..... Wait, wait.... bahut pichhe se flashback ho gaya... thoda fast forward kar ke main scene par lao na.....


Kasak.... Ok ... aap flashback par concentrate karo.... maine forward kar diya hai....


Flashback resume....


Vidhyapith ka college.... College me 2 bahne... Kasak aur Jivisha.... Kasak aur Jivisha dono ne Bca me sath admission liya.... Kasak yani Jivisha ki humdum.. humrahi uski sathi....


Jivisha to iss bholi duniya se anjaan thi... Godmata ki tarah usse har kadam par duniya se ru-baru karwane wali Kasak... Papa ki cigarette chori kar ke pina sikhane wali Kasak.... papa ke kamre se wishkey gayab kar ke pina sikhane wali Kasak ... har situation ko kaise handel karna hai sikhane wali Kasak....


Nischal.... To kya usse lesbian bhi Kasak ne he banaya.....


Kasak.... Jiju, public pause mode par hai, lekin bahri nahi... gharwalon ke pass aisi baten na karo, baki aap ki sali hun... yadi aap ko adult baten nahi aati to aap ko bhi main ustad bana dungi... filhaal abhi flashback par concentrate kijiye....


Nischa.... Haa dono bahan ke pyar ko to samjh gaya, ab aage kya hua...


Kasak.... Aage khud he dekho..... "Barshat ki ek raat thi.... bijli joron se kadak rahi thi"...


Nischa..... Ab kya horror scene dal rahi ho....


Kasak.... Nahi re jiju... abhi ladai ka scene hai na to mahol ko thrilling bana rahi hun.....


"Wahh... ye to pagalpan me Jivisha ki maa lagti hai"..... "Haan haan mahol suit kar raha hai Kasak ji aage bataeye na"....


Kasak..... Haan jiju suno... par iss baar bich me mat tokna... pura flashback end karne dena...


"Haan to barsaat ki wo raat thi, aasman me bijli ki tej gar-garahat ho rahi thi.... hum dono bahne daru, chakhna aur murge ke sath baith kar dono DDLJ enjoy kar rahi thi.... SRk sir and kajol... wooo hooo"


"Movie khatam hone ke baad Kasak ek pak uthati puchhne lagi..... "Jisa humare life me ddlj ki story jaisa kuch hua na to tu preeti ka role karna"


Jivisha.... Main kyon preeti ka role karungi.... bhagwan ne mujhe simran ke role ke liye he banaya hai... tu ban ja preeti .....


"Bas behosi ke aalam me dono bahno me SRk ko le kar pahli baar toofani jhagra hua... aur pahli baar hum dono bahne ek dusre ki dushman bani.... dono jab khadi thi to bich me sepration wala bijli bhi kadka tha"......


"Gusse me dono bahne alag hui thi. Kasak yani guru ji Jivisha ki... isliye guru hone ke nate Kasak apni mahanta ki ore ek kadam aage badhati, Jivisha ko samjhane subah-subah pahunchi.... aur jab wo pahunnchi to".....


Nischal, jo khoya tha story me..... "Pause kahe le liya aage batao na"...


Kasak.... Jiju aap to aas-pass dhyan bhi nahi dete, public pause mode se active mode par chali aayi hai.....


Tabhi un dono ke pass Jivisha pahunchi aur Nischal ko dekhte huye, Kasak se kahne lagi.... "Tum ne to bhism pratigya liya tha ki tum yahan nahi aaogi... kya hua apni baat par kayam na rah saki".....


Kasak bhi Nischal ki ore dekhti hui kahne lagi...... "Bhagodey ab mujhe moral sikhayenge.... my life is all about family... aur main eklouti sali ka farz nibhane, apne aatmsamman ko tak par rakh kar yahan jiju ke liye aayi hun"......


Jivisha..... Ye kyon nahi kahti ki yahan muft ki dawat urrane aayi ho....


Kasak jor se chillati.... Chhote papa... chhoti maa dekho aap ki ladli kya kah rahi hai, main aap ke yahan muft ki dawat uarrane aayi hun....


Nischal, pure hall me dekhne laga.... pura pariwar jaise Kasak ki baton ko suna he na ho, sab apne-apne kamo me lage huye rah gaye... Kasak ek baar aur jor se chillayi ... lekin iss baar bhi kisi ne kuch respond nahi kiya....


Kasak... Sorry jiju... aap ka aur mera sath yahin tak ka tha, ab main ja rahi hun....


Tabhi Ravi apna kaam karte huye he kahne laga..... "Kasak emotion me bah kar ghar se jane ka faisla mat karna, warna bade papa bhi tujhe ghar me ghusne nahi denge... bhul gayi kya kah kar yahan aayi ho"...


Kasak.... Koi baat nahi bhaiya.... jab yahan koi apna he nahi to yahan bhi rah kar kya karungi... main platform par rah kar he padhai kar lungi.... chal urr ja re panchhi, ki ab ye ghar hua begana... yahan koi to mera apna ho... ek jiju hain unhone bhi muh mor liya apne eklauti sali se...


Nischa.... Arre kaisi baten kar rahi hain aap... aur koi begana nahi yahan... please aap apne jiju ke khatir ruk jao...


Kasak... uchhalti hui.... "Sirf jiju ne mujhe roka hai isliye ruk rahi hun... warna main ye baat kabhi nahi bhulungi ki sab ne mujhe ignore kiya tha"....


Jivisha... Haan to ruki kahe hai... apne sath apne jiju ko bhi platform par he rakh lena... sequrity bhi mil jayegi. Isse bhi leti ja....


Kasak.... Chup kar tu... mera ego mat badka... warna sine me dafan raaj ko ugal dungi...


Jivisha..... Maine bhi abhi tak bahut kuch chhipa rakha hai, bahar aa gaya to kahin ki nahi rahegi...


Nischal.... Haan to ek-ek kar ke bolna shuru karo ... main bhi to tum dono ka raaj jaan lun....


Shoking expression ... aur sare ghar wale pichhe mur gaye.... Avinash dur se he chillaya...."Maa jiju ko yahan ki sari rsahme samjha di kya".... Pichhe se Ravi bhi kahne laga.... "Nischal ji, chalo yahan se, main aap ko pure pariwar se introduce karwata hun"....


"Kamal hai, abhi to ye log apne-apne kaam me lage huye the... aisa kya ho gaya jo apna kaam chhor kar idhar itna concentrate karne lage"......


Nischal ko kya pata tha ki usne kya puch liya hai... aur kyon ye log itna react kar rahe hain....


Aizem Planet .... Nischal ka grah .....


Sabaiya ki puri team jo Nischal ko dhundhne gayi thi, wo wapas Aizem grah par laut aayi.... Raat ke waqt Serin ke sath Sabaiya ki meeting....


Serin.... Pura pata bata diya tha, fir bhi sab ko wapas bula liya....


Sabaiya..... Devices kisne activate kiya tha...


Serin.... Maine...


Sabaiya.... Kisne kaha tha uss device ko band kar pana kisi ke vash me nahi....


Serin... Maine...


Sabaiya..... Aur kal wo device kisne band kiya....


Serin.... Ho gaya kabhi-kabhi log muskil bhara kaam bhi sikh jate hain... lekin tumhare pass to uska pata tha na ... device band hua to kya ho gaya tum to uske piche ja sakte the... usse apne rsate se hata sakte the...


Sabaiya..... "Nischal ko koi nahi janta... Koi soch bhi nahi sakta uske bare me ki wo kya kar sakta hai aur kya nahi..... tum logon ne to bas itna he jana hai ki aizem grah ka chota sahzada bas aise he ghumta firta hai jise yahan hone wale ghatnao se koi lena dena nahi"...


"Lekin sabhi logon ke pass kewal adhuri jankari hai... wo mera bhai hai aur main usse bachpan se dekhta aa raha hun.... tumhe kya lagta hai 6 jahaj aur 36 log Nischal ko wahan se khatam kar ke aayenge.... aisa sochna bhi bharam aur bhul hai tumhari" .....


"Jab tum ne kaha ki wo kamjor hai to maine apne sabse satir katilon ka team bana kar bheja tha, lekin Nischal ne wo device band kar ke sabit kar diya.... brahmand me wo kahin bhi rahe kamjor nahi.


"Tum janti bhi ho, west sima se ladai chal rahi thi. Samne west sima ki ek puri tukri, aur Nischal akela. Jab west sima ki wo khunkhar tukri nahi tiki to aage tum soch sakti ho.... uss ke guts, uska caliber, uski planning, kabhi koi nahi samjh sakta. Usse marne ke liye kisi sena ki tukri nahi balki uss ke dimag ko maat dene wala koi chahiye".....


Serin.... Aur sayad aisa koi ho bhi nahi....


Sabaiya.... Galat .... Nischal ke liye ulti ginti shuru ho gayi hai... tum bas uss se contact banaye rakho... jald he tumhe sab kuch pata chal jayega....
Jabardast update hai bhai dono.....nischal or nandini ke baare me jo galat flehmy tha wo to clear ho geya liken jivisha ne nandini ko fasa diya....o
Or kasak koun hai nischal kyu ki ksha uski shakal kisi se milte hai....or kya kasak hi nischal ke liye wo tufan ban ke aayegi jaisa nischal ka bhai bol raha hai.....or serin ne wo device active karke nischal ke bhai ko uske pata bata diya or nischal wo device band kar diya.....ab dekhte hai nischal kaise bachta hai dono taraf se hone wala humle se
 

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Puna... Apini aur Josefer ki mulakat .....


Josefer..... Rijo ka sandesh mila...


Apini.... Haan mil gaya hai....


Josefer.... Main apna Adirshi janwar khula chhor raha hun, Malkia ki koi chij hai tumhare pass....


Apini ek rumal dete huye kahne laga..... "Yahi hai"....


Josefer ne apne janwar ko wo rumal sunghaya aur 2 logon ke sath viman me bhej diya pata lagane ke liye.....


Indore.... Raat ka waqt ...


Jivisha, call disconnect kar ke thunkti hui kahne lagi...... "Itna bhi na paresan karo bhagwan ki aap par se bharosa he uth jaye. Om namoh namah... Jivisha yahan ka dana pani ab yahin tak.... yahan se bhi bhagne ka ab samay aa gaya hai"


Jivisha call disconnect kar ke subah ke 3 baje ka alarm laga kar so gayi. Thik 3 baje alarm baja, Jivisha aadhi jagi aadhi soyi aapni aakhen mijti uthi..... "Unhhh, unhhh, unhhh.... kaun se karam ki saza mil rahi hai jo itni subah jagna para"


Bhagna to tha he, chehre par pani mari, chupke se apne sara saman pack ki aur sidha wahan se rafoo chakkar. Jivisha bhag kar sidha bus stand pahunchi jahan wo kisi bhi raste jane wali bus par sawar hona chahti thi.


Indore se Bhopal ki ek bus subah 4:00 baje thi. Jivisha ussi bus ka ticket le kar aaram se bus me baith gayi. Idhar subah ke takriban 3:45 par Nandni ki nind khuli. Wo bhi aadhi nind me uthi aur sidha washroom ke liye chali gayi.


Jab wo laut rahi thi tab uss ka dhyan bistar par gaya, Jivisha gayab..... "Ufffff ye ladki, sab ko pagal bana degi"...


Nandni thodi chinta me par gayi. Teji se bahar nikli aur Ashis ke pass jane ka soch he rahi thi ki hall me baithe Nichal par najar gayi.....


Nandni..... Tab se tum computer par he baithe ho.


Nischal ko aisa laga jaise usse kisi gahri nind se jagaya gaya ho... apni aakhen kholta hua sab se pahle apne sare wires samet kar jeb me dala, fir ek gahri sans lete kahne laga..... "Haan ye bahut he intresting tha isliye tab se isse he samjhne ki kosis kar raha hun. Waise tumhare yahan porn movies kafi excited karne wali hoti hain"...


Nandni... What ??? Porn movies... tum hall me baith kar porn dekh rahe the...


Nischal.... Nahi wo achanak se ek video play hua to usse band karne ka man he nahi kiya...


Nandni... Chhi,... bakwas band karo aur ye batao ki tum ne Jivisha ko kahin jate dekha...


Nischal.... Mujhe pata nahi, main iss internet aur computer me itna vyast tha ki aas-pass ki chijon par dhyan he nahi gaya...


Nandni... Tharki kahin ka... kahte kyon nahi porn videos aakhen far kar dekh rahe the. Main bhi kahan tum se baton me lagi hun.... Suno Jivisha yahan se bhag gayi hai....


Nischal..... Ye ladki kitna bhagti hai, iske paun me pahiye lage hain kya...


Nandni.... Vary funny.... No more funny talk, chalo pahle usse dhundhte hain....


Nischal..... Usse dhundna... Par kyon ???


Nandni.... Chalo chup-chap...


Nischal.... Ji maim jaisa aap kahen, to chale....


Nandni ne car ki key li, aur dono wahan se nikal pare..... Nandni wahan se sidha bus stand ki ore car le li.....


Indore ka sarwate bus stand aur pass me he railway station.... Nandni ne Nischal ko Indore junction par drop ki aur khud bus stand nikal gayi...


Thodi si masakkat aur Jivisha ki puri information mil gayi... bus number se le kar, bus ki puri timing tak.... Nandni wapas railway station aayi aur wahan se Nischal ko pick-up karke Bhopal ke liye nikal gayi...


Nandni..... 4:00 baje yahan se bus nikli hai, yadi hum 100 ki speed se gaye to sonkatch ke aas-pass usse pakad sakte hain...


Nischal.... To hum itne dhime kyon chal rahe hain, car bhagao phir... 100 kya 120 par bhagao...


Nandni car drive karna shuru ki... Subah ke 4:30, sadak lagbhag khali. Full acceleter aur car hawa se baat kar rahi thi... 10 km kab gujra pata bhi nahi chala.... aur tabhi ... kharr.. kharr.. kharr ki awaz karti car ruk gayi.....


"Damn god ab iss car ko kya hua"... bud-budati hui Nandni bahar nikli... bonat khola..... aur awaz lagane lagi..... "Ander car me baith kar kya kar rahe ho, rediator garam ho gaya hai ja kar pani lao"


Nischal.... Madam ye 80's ki car nahi jiska rediator garam ho jayega. Car ka fuel khatam ho gaya. Band kar do bonnet aur ander aa jao....


Nandni car ko ek laat marti..... "Had hai ghar me 20 lacs ki car rakhte hain, aur petrol nahi. Tum ander baithkar kya aaram kar rahe ho, bahar aao"


Nischal bahar aate.... "Haan ji kahiye"....


Nandni.... Had hai main yahan paresan hun aur tumhe koi chinta he nahi...


Nischal..... Ji kahiye aap ki main kya madad kar sakta hun....


Nandni..... Dauro, jaise daur kar mujhe dikhaye the aur pakar kar lao uss pagli ko... paresan kar rakhi hai ye ladki....


Nischal.... Nah.. main akela nahi daurne wala.... wo bahut khatarnaak ladki hai, jaunga to sirf tumhare sath...


Nandni.... Kaise, ab kya mujhe gode me utha kar dauroge...


Nischa.... Haan...


Nandni..... Jyada over smart mat bano aur bhago....


Nischal.... O' Madam aise bologi to main kahin nahi jane wala... kaam tumhara hai isliye request karo...


Nandni..... hath jor kar kah rahi hun, please jao aur uss kam-akal ko le aao... jyada hoshiyari kare to 2 thappad laga kar lana...


Nischal hasta hua wahan se nikla. Wo apni raftar se aage badha, bas kuch he minute lage honge aur Nischal uss bus ke aage tha..... Nischal bich sadak par, bilkul bus ke samne khada ho gaya. Bus driver ne teji se break lagaya aur so rahe sare passenger chaunk kar nind se jag gaye...


Conductor chillate huye niche utra aur Nischal ka collor pakad liya...... "Sala pagal hai kya be"


Nichal halka muskuraya aur uske kalai ko pakad kar morna suru kiya..... Counducter dard se chilla utha.... "Hath chhoro bhai, please chhor do warna toot jayega"....


Nischal.... Tamij se baat kar, badtamiji mujhe pasand nahi...


Conductor...... Bhai aap ko bhi bhopal jana hai kya, to chalo na...


Nischal.... Nahi mujhe bhopal nahi jana... tumhare bus me Jivisha naam ki ek ladki hai, usse niche utaro aur bus aage badhao... tabtak main yahin intzar kar raha hun...


"Thik hai bhai" kahta hua wo counductor bus me chadh gaya aur "Jivisha madam.. Jivisha madam" karne laga....


Jivisha..... Kya hua bhaiya..


Conductor.... Madam aap ke koi pahchan wale niche khadey hain aur wo aap ko bula rahe hain...


"Ab ye kaun sa naya twist hai"....... "Bhaiya wo kisi aur ko dundh rahe honge mujhe yahan koi nahi janta. Main to Pune se hun.


Conductor.... Madam aap ek baar dekh to lijiye...


Jivisha.... Bhaiya kaha na mujhe yahan koi nahi janta.... ab kya koi bhi kisi ka naam lekar niche kahe utarne, to kya aap use aise bich raste mein niche utar doge. Main bechari ladki, kahin koi unch-nich ho gaya to...


Tabhi hero sa ek ladka, six pack muscles wala, bich me bol para..... "Inhone kaha na ye yahan kisi ko nahi janti to tu kyon jabardasti kar raha hai. Tera he koi sathi to nahi niche"


Conductor..... Kuch bhi bakwas na karo, aur jyada inquiry karni ho to niche ja kar karo..... jab tak Jivisha madam niche nahi jati ye bus aage nahi badhegi...


Josh me aate huye wo ladka bola..... "Aise kaise nahi aage badhega bus... miss aap chinta na karo abhi hosh thikane lagata hun uss ke... chal re kannu"...


Wo ladka apne 2 aur sathi ke sath bare josh mein niche utra, aur 2 min baad luta-pita haalat mein wapas aakar kahne laga..... "Madam aap niche chale jao, wo aap ko he dhundh rahe hain"


"Aannnhh kaun hai ye".... Jivisha bus se bahar nikli aur samne Nischal..... "Ohhhh nooioooo !!! Tummmm"


Nischal ne Jivisha ka hath tham kar usse side kiya aur bus ko ishara karte jane ke liye kah diya..... Bus ko jate dekh Jivisha thunakti hui Nischal se jhagra karne lagi.....


Nischal, chup-chap bas sunta he raha..... Sari bhadas nikalkar jab Jivisha chup hui....... "Tumhari life hai jaise jiyo. Sach kahi main hota kaun hun.... lekin Nandni to tumhari dost hai na.. chalo wo tumhara intzar kar rahi hai"...


Jivisha..... Nahi mujhe kahin nahi jana... tum samjhte kyon nahi, mera khandaan mujhe lene aa raha hai.....


Nischal..... Jivisha, kabhi na kabhi to tumhe apne ghar jana he hai, par in sab ke bich tum apne dost ke gharwlon ka vishwas tod dogi....


Jivisha, Nischal ki baat par thodi der shant rahi, ummid bhari apni najron se Nischal ki ore dekhte huye puchhne lagi..... "To main kya karun"


Nischal.... Wapas chalo, fir dekhte hain kya hota hai....


Jivisha..... Nahi, maine bahut se kaam kharab kiye hain. Nandni ke gharwalon ka viswas waise bhi tootega hi, jab unhe sach pata chalega....


Nischal.... Itna mat socho, ab tak sab ne mil kar tumhari madad ki hai, aage bhi karenge. Mera wada hai tumse, main jabtak hun tumhe har paresani se nikalunga....


Ek bharosa jo Nischal ki baton me tha..... "Thik hai chalo chalte hain... par tum yahan tak aaye kaise... ek dum achanak se... tumhe to hall me dekha tha"


Nischal, jor se chillate huye..... "Jivisha hilna mat, tumhare pith par sanp hai"


"Kya... Sanp"..... Dar se uske hath paun kapne lage....... "Jivisha sidhi khadi raho daro mat... aur ye ho gaya"


Nischal ne bari safai se uske gardan par hath laga kar uski koi nabz dabaya aur wo behosh ho gayi.... Nischal usse gode me uthaya aur Jivisha ko dhyan se dekhte huye kahne laga…. "Chalen madam"


Nischal, Jivisha ko lekar wapas daur lagane ki taiyari me tha... Aur thik ussi waqt Josefer ke khoji, Jivisha ka pata lagate uske karib pahunch chuke the.... do khojiyon me se ek khoji ne turant Josefer ko suchna diya..... "Josefer Malkia ko koi ladka utha kar le ja raha hai"


Josefer..... Malkia uss ka virodh kar rahi hai ya apni marji se ja rahi....


Khoji.... Kuch kah nahi sakta. Malkia uski gode me behosh leti hai...


Josefer.... Malkia yadi behosh hai to mar dalo uss ladkey ko... Malkia ke aas-pass ki har insan ko khatam kar do taki wo akelepan ke karan hum se jaldi jur jaye....


Khoji ne "thik hai" kaha..... aur Nischal ko marne ke irade se aage badhne lage. Idhar Nischal, in sab se be khabar Jivisha ko wapas Nandni ke pass le jane ki taiyari kar raha tha.....
malkia :yikes:
pahale to maine ise malaika hi padha tha :D bad me comment type karte samay fir se padha , fir yaad aaya ki aapki story hai sidhe sadhe naam kaise ho sakte hai :lol1:
nishchhal ne nandani ko kab tej doud kar dikhaya tha ? lag raha hai kuch update miss ho gaye hai mujhse :approve:
 

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"Chay le lo chay, chay garam, chay garam" .... "Ek rupya de do sahab, mere bache bhuke hain.. aap ko dua lagegi".... "Vanita, mayapuri, oulook, sarita... magazine le lo magazine".... "Yatrigan kripya dhyan den, train no 12406, Mumbai-howrah mail apne nirdharit samay se ek ghanta der se chal rahi hai... aap ke hui aswidha ke liye hume khed hai"

"Ufff kitni bhid hai yahan... ye main kaun si grah par aa pahuncha, ye to chidiyakhana jaisa lag raha hai".....

Nischal, Kalyan junction ke platform no. 4 par khada wahan ki bhir ko dekh ascharya me par gaya. Ajib tarah ke mahol, ajib tarah ke log aur bhasha to bikul samjh se pare.

Tabhi koi train uss platform par aa kar ruki aur logon ki bhir utri.... ek aurat upar se niche bag lade, chillati hui kahne lagi.... "Ae khambe ki tarah raste me kyon khada hai, side hat na. Dikhta nahi bhari saman uthaye hun"

Nischal uss aurat ke ajib si baat ko samjh to nahi paya bas usse laga ki wo kuch kah rahi hai. Nischal hathon ke ishare me puchha "Kya hai"

Aurat.... Pagal hai kya hatne kah rahi hun to tujhe samjh me nahi aa raha hai kya....

Uski bhasha Nischal ke samjh se pare thi. Aur khada bas isharon me puchhne ki kosis kar raha tha ki wo kahna kya chahti hai.... anth me haar kar wo aurat he uske bagal se nikal gayi.

Wo aurat karib char kadam aage gayi hogi, Nischal ne samne dekha to uss aurat ka ek jhola sayad wahin chhut gaya tha... Nischal ne jhola liya aur teji se mura jhola usse wapas dene ke liye....


"Hey bhagwan ye mukhiya ji ke aadmi mujhe dhundhte yahan na aa jaye. Please bhagwan un kamino ki najar nahi pare mujh par, bacha lo prabhu... bacha lo"

Jabardasti shadi ho rahi thi, aur Jivisha shadi ke din he bhag aayi. Jab se train me baithi thi, usse ek he dar sata raha tha kahin mukhiya ji ke aadmi na dekh le, aur pakar kar uski jabardasti shadi na karwa de...

Dulhan ke libas me, upar se niche tak sazi Jivisha.... "Bhagwan-bhagwan" karti chali ja rahi thi.... tabhi... "Ticket... ticket"... karte huye T.T bhi pahunch gaya...

T.t ko dekh dekh kar Jivisha jor-jor se rone lagi. Halanki uski aankhon me aanshu to nahi the par awaz me rone wali siskiyan jaroor thi.

Kuch he der me bhir jama ho gayi..... "Kya hua bitiya, tum ro kyon rahi ho, tumhare sath wale log kahan gaye"

Bhir me se ek dayalu lady, Jivisha ko satwana deti puchhne lagi..... Jivisha apne naak aur aankh ponchhti kahne lagi..... "Mere sath koi bhi nahi. Pata nahi mere pati kahan chale gaye. Subah jab nind khuli to mere pass nahi the. Kab se unhe dhund rahu hun mil he nahi rahe. Ticket, paisa sab unhi ke pass hai... subah se bhukhi bhi hun, kuch khayi tak nahi".

T.t, wahan ke mahol ko dekh kar he nikal gaya. Usse samjh me aa gaya tha ki aage kuch kaha to public puri lapat paregi.

Train ke achhe bhale log, sab uss bechari akeli asahay ladki ko wahan se utha kar apne stah wali berth par le aaye. Pahle to khub khilaya pilaya, fir Jivisha ke pati ko 100 galiyan dete huye usse kosne lage.....

Train apni puri raftar se apne har paraw par rukti hui chal rahi thi. Jivisha ka safar achha katne laga, lekin tabhi lobby me najar gayi aur dar se Jivisha ka kaleja dhak-dhak karne laga. Mukhiya ji ke aadmi Jivisha ko dhundhte uss compartment me pahunch chuke the.

"Ab kya karun... Bhagwan kaha tha na thodi madad karo... nahi suni na aap ne"... Jivisha chupke se wahan se uthi aur ja kar bathroom me ghus gayi... idhar mukhiya ji ke aadmi usse pure compartment me dhundhte aage badh rahe the.... Tabhi Kalyan junction par train ruki aur Jivisha chhipte-chhipate bahar nikal gayi.....

Jisvisha mud-mud kar aage pichhe dekh rahi thi aur bari teji se aage badh rahi thi. Nischal uss aurat ka bag utha kar usse dene ke liye mura he tha... aur ussi waqt Jivisha mur kar train ko dekh rahi thi aur apne kadam aage badha rahi thi.....


"Dharam"....... Jivisha aur Nischal ki takkar ho gayi... Jivisha larkhara kar girne lagi. Tabhi Nischal ne uske kamar ko apne hathon me tham liya aur usse girne se bachaya....

Nischal ne aakhen munda... sara ghatnakarm usse slow motion me dikh raha tha.... uska murna... aur Jivisha ka kandha uske sine se takraya..

Uski gardan piche ki ore mure aur kadan aage tha.... uffff jhatke ke sath gardan ghumate aage muri... khubsurat se chehre par pura baal bikher gaye. Uske aage ka paun larkharaya, aur wo girne lagi...

Nischal ne apni aakhen khol diya... Jivisha ko ab bhi wo apne hathon me thame tha... aur Jivisha ka chehra pura balon se dhaka tha.... Jivisha apne chehre par aaye bikhre baal ko hatayi... "Uffff kya masoom, khubsurat si jhalak thi, aur ye dulhan ka libas iss roop me par aur char chand laga raha tha"

Nischal ke liye ye pal jaise tham sa gaya ho, aur najren bas Jivisha par he tiki rah gayi. Idhar Jivhsa khud ko balance nahi kar payi aur wo larkhara kar girne lagi. Bikhre baal sidhi karti wo jab uthne ki kosis kar rahi thi, tabhi samne Nischal ka wo khubsurat sa chehra tha....

Ek pal ke liye aisa laga ki ye chehra dil me utar raha hai. Par agle he pal jab wapas najren train ki ore gayi to pata chala ki mukhiya ji ke aadmi issi taraf aa rahe hain....

Jivisha, Nischal ke kalai ka sahara le kar sidhi khari hui. Apne aeriyon ko unchi karti thodi upar hui aur Nischal ke gale me hath dal kar hont se hont laga diya. Jisvisha apna chehra chhipane ke liye Nischal ke hont se hont laga, usse chumna shuru kar di.... Nischal ki aankhen fati ki fati rah gayi... usse samjh me he nahi aaya ki ek he pal me ye kya ho gaya....

Jivisha hont se hont lagaye rakhi, aur najren utha kar dekh bhi rahi thi ki wo log unhe cross kiye kiye ya nahi. Aankhen khuli to pata chala ki mukhiya ji ke log bhi wahan khadey ho kar free ka show enjoy kar rahe hain.....

"Fas gayi Jivisha iss filmy trick ke chakkar me. Bhagwan ab aur kitne twist haan, kuch to raham karo. Kab tak main iss anjaan ke sath kiss karti rahun".

Jivisha aakhen kholti aur fir kiss continue karne lagti. Chhota kiss to samajh me bhi aata hai, logon ka dhyan nahi jaye. Lekin ye kiss to lamba, aur lamba he hota chala ja raha tha, aur logon ki puri bhir jama ho kar bas yahi najara dekh rahi thi.... tabhi Jivisha ke kano tak aawaz pahunchi....

"Chalo re inhe romamce kar lene do, lagta hai honeymoon bhi yahin mana kar jayenge. Chalo Jivisha ko ander train me he dhundhte hain"

Train ne horn dena shuru kiya aur mukhiya ji ke log nikal liye. Train jab badh chali to Jivisha, Nischal ke hont chhorti, yakkk-yakk karti apne hont ko rumal se pochh ne lagi....

Khud ko thik kar ke najar jab samne ghumayi... Nischal bari si aakhen kiye usse tukur-tukur dekhe ja raha tha.... Jivisha ke pass bhi koi sabd nahi the ki ab iss bechare ko kya jawab de jo kiss ke baad hakka-bakka khada tha.... Dono nisabd khadey bas ek dusre ko he dekh rahe the....
:superb: :good: :perfect: amazing story hai nain bhai,
maine na pahle hi padhi to hai ye story lekin kuchh kuchh small facts bhool gaya hoon, ab dubara se padhne mein bhi bilkul vaisa hi romanch anubhav ho raha hai jaisa first time hua tha,
 
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