Jivisha ko samjhne ke liye to puri kahani padhni hogiJiwisha...
Gunga bola .. gunga bola ... Gunga bola ... Situation aur bhi intense hoti yadi ye seperately aata... Lekin uswaqt dono pariwar ko itne jhatke lag chuke the ki Nichal ka bolne usme ulajh kar rah gayaek taraf nischal ke muh se shabd kya nikle sab ke sab hairan padesaan... upor se nandu pe hi shaq karne lage sabhi... woh toh achha hua ki nandu ne samay rahte baat ko sambhal li.. warna jaane drama lober family wale jane kya se kya soch lete....
sab baatein clear toh huyi par abhi adhuri... aur sabse badi baat jivu ne nandu k kandhe pe bandhuk rakhke chalayi... wah kya chaal chali ain mauke par.. I like it.... superb
bechari bholi bhali masoom si nandu
hmm.... so yeh alien logis khatarnak planning ko anjaam dene ko hai.. is apni ki kya aukat ki nischal chu bhi sake.. marenge sab ke sab marange..
Bahot badi galti kar rahe hai yeh log
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills nainu ji
hahaha ... mujhe nahi aisa lagta Kasak sare fasad ki jad thi ... yahan to sab ek se ek namune bhade pare hain kisko kya kaha jaye .. haan iss kahani me koi ek bechara hai to wo hai AnshFinally kasak ne entry le hi li.. btw saare fasad ki jad yahin hai kahani ki suruwat se ant tak... iski bewaakufiyo ki wajah se... are
Lo ek aur drama.. yeh kasak sach mein ek drama queen hi hai.. kaise mod de de ke flashback suna rahi hai... yaar jivu bahot badki huyi hai ispar shayad ek jordaar jhagda ho..
ab kya hua... kahin koi galti toh nahin kar baithta nischal...
Hmm... Nischal ka bhai thik hi kah raha hai.. nischal The great One hai.. baki sab chai kam pani hai... dhundhte rah jaoge par milega nahi, jab tak woh na chahe...
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills nainu ji
.. dekhiye ab dono bahno ke bich kya vhemstry hai ye to hume aage hi pata chalega....
ji shukriya beast ji ... kahani abhi to shuru hui hai ummid karta hun ki maza bhi aa raha hoga .... aise hi apne vichar dete rahiye
ansh ki jagah aakash kar deta to jyada achha lagta mujhe .. mujhe lagta hai ansh me akash ke pure gun hain
I have gone mad laughing, what scene have you made, enjoyed reading, everyone is mingling. Anash is very innocent and could not speak in front of Nandani.
Jivisha is no less than anyone, put all the blame on Nandani.
A new character is added to the story, Kasak. Nischal is talking to Kasak very fondly, something is wrong. Hmm, Kasak doesn't look like my type, she is a complete gimmick. By the way both sisters have a lot of love.
The enemy side is plotting, it is not going well.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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.... play hi hai .. jivisha ne kab aacept kiya tha 
.. dono pati patni hai finally jivisha ke parent ne accept kar liya ... aur aur aur .. Jivisha sirf apne jhut ko continue kar rahi hai ... khair ab main update deta hun .. taki baki ki kahani wahan se clear ho jaye
malkia
pahale to maine ise malaika hi padha tha
nishchhal ne nandani ko kab tej doud kar dikhaya tha ? lag raha hai kuch update miss ho gaye hai mujhse
... apni aur Apini me bhi confuse na ho jaeyega .. Apini naam hai apni to khair apni hi hai 
