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Fantasy Kaisa Yeh Ishq Hai.... Ajab Sa Risk Hai...... (Completed)

nain11ster

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Pura guma diya dost dimag ka dahi ban gaya. Kya khoob likhte ho sunder atisunder rachnakriti hai.
Hahaha ... Pahle batana tha na sweksha.wala padh rahe hain.. kya hai pichli war update jab diya tha tabhi se reader ke pass oahunch gaya tha kyonki pata tha dimag ka dahi hona hai aur main rayta ka shaukin Aadmi hun :D..

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achhi philosophy hai
Par har baar samasya ko kismat ke bharose chhod dena achhi baat nahi hai...
sidhi si baat hai, kismat ko wohi log mante hain bhagya pe vishvas karte hai ... lekin ek baat kahu, kayi log aise bhi hai joh is baat pe vishvas rakhte hai ki aap hi apne kishmat ke lekhak hai aur joh apni kismat khud likhte hai,aur main bhi unme se ek hoon... aur nischal aur jivu ko bhi yahin maanke chalna chaahiye :bat: . bhaad mein gayi kasak :bat:


jab kasak jaisi ristedaar ho toh dusman ki kya jarurat...chaahe jane anjane mein sahi woh jivu ko khai mein hi toh dhakel rahi hai.. baaki log jaise gandi nali ke kide apini aur josefer toh lalach mein aake apne ghatiya kaam ko anjaam dene ke firak mein hai aur kamyab bhi ho rahe hai..
Ab dekhne wali baat yeh hai ki jivu ke pyaar ko bali chhada ke kasak kaise harami josefer ke sath apne sapno ka sansar basati hai..
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill nainu ji :applause: :applause:

Ek chhoti si line hai main dhyan dilwata hun .. "go with flow" .. kismat ko apna kaam karne do.. hum apna kaam karte hain .. aur parinam waqt par chhodate hain ..

Iss line me aap ne jitni baat mehnat aur kismat ke bich ki likhi hai wahi Jivisha ne bhi likha hai.. yahan go with flow matlab... Aap jis flow me hai usko karte rahiye no break...

Kismat ko apna kaam karne do... Yani kismat ne kuch galat khel rach diya ... Kyonki kaam wo kisi aur par kar rahi thi aur natija kisi aur ke paksh me aa gaya..

Hum apna kaam karte hain... Yani paristiti viprit bhi ho gayi hai to bhi hum apna kaam jari rakhte hain..

Finally result ko waqt par chhodate hain .. mehnat se kismat badli ya jo kismat me tha wahi mila..


Galti to Kasak ki bhi nahi hi kahi ja sakti .. ab koi haath dhokar itne pichhe para ho to koi kya kar sakta haj.. :dazed:

Hahahaha .. nahi kuch ferbadal hai.. jo wo ghar basane wali baat thi na.. maine is baar thande dimag se annalysis kiya aur kuch basic badlaw kiye hain.. ummid hai pasand aaye :D

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Yeh log ek baat kyun bhool jaate hain ki inka baap hai nischal har mamle mein.. chaahe physically ho ya mentally inse sau kadam aage hai nischal...
hmm... toh kasak ush harami ke sath jishm film banane aayi thi wahan pe.. par harami ki kamjori abhi ushe abhi nahi khana kasak ko... isliye bhagne ka prayas kiya wahan se lekin afsos inka baap khada tha wahan :D
wah nischal ne toh almost jankari nikal hi liya us gande naali ke kide se.. ab toh in namakul zoren grah walo ka band bajne wala hai :D
waise yeh nischal kuch zyada hi taras kha raha hai is kide josefer par... are maar kyun nahi deta yaar.. roz roz ki jhik jhik hi khatam... dekho toh nischal ko marvane ke liye kaisa idea de raha hai jhingul.
waise nischal toh alag kisam ka hybrid alien nikla.... lekin lekin lekin twist hai ki woh prithvi aur prithvi wasio ke liye samman ke sath sath ek lagav aur pyar bhi hai..
aur sabse badi baat woh ghrina drishti se dekhta hai kukarm karne wale logo ko chaahe woh insaan ho ya alien..
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill nainu ji :applause: :applause:

Hahaha .. itna bada nischal puran .. mera hi bacha hai .. mere bare me bhi char line likhti jati . ... Khair yahan ke pure scene me kuch basics badlaw kiye gaye hain .. jo ki shayad kahani ke hisab se sahi the .... Isliye kuch chhote chhote change ki ek series ko bariki se prastut kar raha hun .. baki plot aur story line me koi change nahi hai aur wo as it is rahegi ... Till the end ..

Aur haan rahi baat Josefer ki to ... Uske marne ya na marne ki pichhe yadi koi wajah hai to jaroor aa jayenge ...

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“Nandni, yahaṅ bahut sare sawal tumhe milenge. Mujhe kuch-kuch bateṅ samjh me to aa rahi hai, lekin kuch-kuch bateṅ nahi. Kuch log aur bhi haiṅ yahaṅ par sayad unhe tum pahchan sako. Chalo tumhe dikhata huṅ”


Uss kabaḍ room se bahar aa kar dono chupke se ek darwaze ke samne aa kar khadey ho gaye, aur Nischal isharoṅ me ander jhakne ke liye kahne laga. Nandni ne jab key-whole se uss kamre ko dekha to ander so rahe aadmi ko dekh kar kahne lagi….. “Ye ṭo Shresh hai, jiss se Jivisha ki shadi hone wali hai”


Nischal, Nandni ka kandha pakaḍ kar hilaya. Nandni mud kar puchne he wali thi ki “kya hua” tabhi Nischal ne apne hotoṅ par ungli dal kar kuch na bolne ka ishara kiya. Nandni hathoṅ ke ishare se puchne lagi “kya hua”


Nischal apne dono hathoṅ se “ṭhehar jao” ka ishara kiya aur apne bayen ore ki lobby me dekhne ke liye bola. Jab pahli baar Nandni ne dekha to usse kuch najar nahi aaya… fir jaise he Nischal ne apne sath laye ek device ki raushni wahan kiya… Nandni ko samne ek bhimkay janwar najar aane laga.


Nandni uss janwar ko dekh kar puri tarah se ghabra gayi, aur dhire-dhire apne kadam khisakti, Nischal ke pichhe ja kar chhip gayi. Nischal bhala iss janwar ko kaise bhul sakta tha, jisne kuch din pahle he uss par humla kiya tha. Uss janwar ki najar ab bhi dono par nahi pari thi. Thodi der wo janwar wahiṅ gast lagata raha, fir chala gaya.


Jab wo janwar wahan se chala gaya tab Nandni apni aṭki saseṅ bahar chhoṛti…. “Kya tha ye”


Nischal…. Ṭhik se bolo, kuch samjh me nahi aa raha.


Nandni…. Kya tha ye….


Nischal…. Kya kah rahi ho kuch samjh me he nahi aa raha…. Chalo pahle nikalte haiṅ yahaṅ se fir baat karte haiṅ.


Daraasal Nandni uss janwar ko dekh kar itna ghabra gayi thi ki uss ke halakh se aawaz he nahi nikal pa rahi thi. Do baar uss ne sawal kiye par Nischal ko kuch samjh me he nahi aaya. Ek to wo pahle se ghabrayi thi, upar se fir 2 baar usse jump karwaya Nischal ne. Dono iss elake se bahar aa chuke the aur dono he uss jagah ke bare me soch rahe the.


Nandni…. Nischal aaj main 5 baar marte-marte bachi huṅ. Main wada karti huṅ ki ab se jo bhi tum kahoge uspar main aaṅkh muṅd kar yakin kar lungi. Lekin please, aaj ke baad mujhe aise khatroṅ ke khilaḍi mat banana.


Nischal….. Sorry Nandu. Chhoro ye aur batao tum kis natije par pahuṅchi.


Nandni…. Nischal, main kuch faisla karne ki haalat me nahi huṅ. Kal subah chay par isse aaram se discuss karte haiṅ na. Waise agar tumhare pass koi plan ho to main uss me abhi sath de sakti huṅ. Par natijoṅ ke bare me main kal he baat karuṅgi.


Nischal…. Nahi, filhaal to koi plan nahi hai. Chalo ghar wapas chalte haiṅ.


Dono bas apne he dhun me alag-alag point par sochte khamosh ghar ja rahe the, tabhi car ke ander Nandni ke mobile ke screen ki light jali.


Nischal…. Nandni, tumhare mobile par lagta hai kisi ka msg aaya hai…


Nandni, drive karti hui…. “Nischal please check karo, kis ka msg hai”


Nischal phone check karta hua…. “Tumhare network provider ko subah-subah bhi chain nahi, bhakti geet mala ke paise kaṭ liye haiṅ, ussi ka massage aaya hai. Ruko-ruko, tumhare Dr ka takriban 40 miss call pare haiṅ….


Nandni…. Very funny, main to shocked se behosh ho gayi.


Nischal, Nandni ke sir par ek hath marta…. “Duffer such me call aaya tha. Call back karo, pucho to kya padesani hai. Problem me hoga tabhi to itna call kiya hai”.


Nandni ne jaise he itne sare miss calls dekhe, usne turant car side me lagayi aur call back karne lagi…. “Gadha, itne call kar raha tha, abhi main call laga rahi huṅ to pick nahi kar raha”..


Nischal…. Cool down Nandu, phone pick up kar lega…



Pahla call bekar gaya, par Nandni ne jaise he dusra call lagaya, pahle he ring par call receive ho gaya…. “Ansh kya hua, iss waqt itne sare calls”


Phone ke dusri ore se…. “Tum Nandni bol rahi ho”


Nandni…. Haaṅ ji main Nandni bol rahi huṅ. Aap kaun bol rahe haiṅ, aur aap ke pass Ansh ka phone kaise aaya.


Dusri ore se…. Main ṬI sawalker bol raha huṅ. Aap jald se jald Aundh gawn police station aa jaeye.


Nandni, haḍabaḍi me apni gaṛi dusre ore mod di, aur car Aundh gawn police station ki ore le li. Achanak se aaye iss badlaw ko dekhkar Nischal puchne laga…. “Kya kaha Ansh ne, jo tum itni padesan ho gayi”


Nandni…. Ansh nahi, ṬI se baat ho rahi thi.


Dono jald he police station bhi pahunch gaye. ṬI ne jaise he Nischal ko dekha….. “Arre tum wahi ho na”


Nischal….. Aap police wale haiṅ…


Aisa laga jaise kab ke bichhde do yaar mil rahe the. Ek baar un dono ki baten shuru ho gayi to khatam hone ka naam he nahi le rahi thi. Ek to raat ki jagi, upar se kaam jaldi khatam karne ke badle Nischal uss Ṭi ke sath panchayat karne laga….. “Annhhhh, sare pagal mere he kundli me aa kar ghar bana liye haiṅ”.


Nandni, najren ghuma kar dekhi to Ansh dubak kar ek bench par baiṭha hua tha. Nandni, Nischal aur TI ke baat ke bich ghusti….. “Nischal, yahaṅ jo karne aaye the pahle wo kar len, fir tum sir ke sath darbar karte rahna”


ṬI sawalkar, Nandni ko gaur se dekhte….. “Nischal ye jaroor tumhari gf hogi, aur wahan wo iss ka bander bhai baiṭha hai jo colony ki deewar fanḍ raha tha”.


Ansh, jo dar ke mare dubka baiṭha tha, “bhai” sabd sunkar wo bol para…. “Nahi sir main Nandni ka hone wala pati huṅ. Aur ye uss ka dost hai”


Sawalker….. Ha ha ha, tab se ye bhigi billi bana tha. Ae Sinde chhod de re Dr sahab ko. Aur Dr sahab kisi ke yahaṅ jaeye to kayde se jaeye, aise colony ki deewar fandne ki kosis karenge to padesani hogi he.


Nischal…. Sir, ab hum chaleṅ kya?


Sawalker…. Kahaṅ ja rahe ho, ab ye dono pata nahi kitne din baad mil rahe honge, jane do in love birds ko, tum baiṭho, aao 2 peg lagate haiṅ.


Nischal….. Nandni, tum ek kaam karo, tum Dr sahab ko lekar jao. Main kal milta huṅ.


Nandni…. Haaṅ aur tum yahaṅ baiṭh kar peg maroge. Subah milo batati huṅ. Chalo Ansh, ab tum yahaṅ khadey ho kar kya sun rahe ho. Tumhe bhi peg marna hai kya ?


Finally Nischal wahiṅ ruk gaya aur dono wahan se chale aaye. Nandni jab police station se nikal rahi thi, khud ki haalat par ro rahi thi. Thodi der pahle Nischal ne usse maut ke darshan karwa diye aur abhi tak wo iss twist se bahar bhi nahi aayi thi ki ab ye Ansh ka kand ho gaya…


Nandni jaise he car me baiṭhi Ansh par bhaḍakti hui usse ghurne lagi. Halaṅki dono ke bich shabdoṅ ka koi adan-prdaan nahi hua, par Nandni ne apne aakhon se sab kuch kah diya. Subah hone ko aayi thi, aur Nandni nahi chahti thi ki usse aur koi twist mile isliye chup-chap gaḍi bhaga kar apne flat me aayi aur sidha bistar pakaḍ liya.


Agle din …. Jivisha ke ghar….


Puṇya aur uss ka beta Shresh lagbhag 11 baje aane wale the. Ghar ke log taiyariyoṅ me jute huye the. Ṭhik 11 am baje dono baap-bete uss ghar me pahuṅche. Himanshu gate se unka swagat karta hall me lekar aaya. Chay, coffee ke sath baton ka daur bhi shuru ho gaya.


Puṇya…. Humari bahu kahin dikh nahi rahi. Kyoṅ Himanshu, usse tune kuch kaha to nahi.


Himanshu apne dost puṇya se sab kuch bata chuka tha. Jivisha ke bhagne se le kar uss ki nakli shadi tak.


Himanshu, ne apni bahu Nandita ko ishara kiya, aur wo Jivisha ko le aayi. Jivisha ko dekh kar, ek baar fir Puṇya bolne laga…. “Jis bachi ke chehre par muskan aur baton me shararten bhari rahti thi, usse kaise khamosh butt ki tarah bana diya. Himanshu, bache haiṅ yaar, un par aise thode na koi sasan karta hai”.


Himanshu…. Hmmmm ! Puṇya. Khair wo sab chhod, shadi ki date final kareṅ.


Puṇya…. Tu 2 min ruk Himashu. Jivisha beta, aap ko iss shadi se koi aitraz to nahi.


Sawal Jivisha se tha, lekin Puṇya ke iss sawal par 2 awaz ek sath nikli. Ek Shresh aur dusra Abhinash ke muh se, aur dono ke ek he sabd the…. “Mujhe aitraz hai”


Puṇya ne Shresh ko dekha aur Himanshu, Abhinash ko ghurne laga. Himanshu pure ġusse me aate…. “Aitraz hai to apne kamre me chale jao”


Puṇya…. O’ Himanshu tu faltu ka ġussa dikhana band kar. Mere bete ko bhi aitraz hai to kya usse bhi bhaga dega.


Himanshu…. Haaṅ usse bhi bhaga duṅga. Usse kya lagta hai ki wo ab Jivisha se shadi nahi karega to main koi laḍka dhuṅdh paunga.


Priya, wahiṅ pass me he baiṭhi thi. Apne pati ko wo shant rahne ke liye kah rahi thi. Lekin Himanshu par to jaise bhut sawar tha. Iss chakkar me Priya ko bhi dant par gayi….


“Tum shant raho Priya. Mujhe iss topic par koi bahas nahi karni. Hum, bachon ke chain se sone ke liye khud ki nind haram kar lete haiṅ, aur ye bache kya karte haiṅ. Kuch jo hote haiṅ wo apne baap ke muh par kalikh pot kar apne pyar ke naam par bhag jate haiṅ to kuch uss se bhi aage nikal jate haiṅ aur humare sir par ek aise ladkey ko biṭha dete haiṅ jo bhaḍe par shadi nibhane aaya ho. Sala hum he gadhe haiṅ jo in bachon ki sunte haiṅ aur bachon ke liye marte haiṅ. Pahli baar iss laḍki ne mujhe ye ehsas karwaya ki kyoṅ humare samaj me laḍki ke paida hone par afsos karte haiṅ”.


“Tu to baḍa sanskari hai na, jo Jivisha ke shadi ki baat dobara kar raha hai aur dono baar apne baḍe bhai ko iktalla karne ki bhi kosis nahi kiya”…. Garam mahol me darwaze se Jivisha ke baḍe papa ki awaz gunjne lagi. Himanshu apne baḍe bhai ki baat sun kar shant ho gaya.


Himanshu….. Bhaiya aap nahi jante ki iss laḍki ne…


Himanshu ke baḍe bhai Shudhanshu ne usse bich me he ṭokte….. “Naam bhul gaya kya meri bachi ka, jo “iss laḍki, iss laḍki” kar raha hai. Aur haaṅ ek baat yaad rahe, meri beṭiyoṅ ko mera sah mila hai, isliye yadi us se koi bhul hoti hai to uss ki puri ġalti ki jimmedari meri hogi. Ab tu jarra shant rah aur mamla mujhe samajhne de”


Shudhanshu ke entry ne to puri kahani he palaṭ diya. Himanshu jo ab tak sher bana tha, apne baḍe bhai ke aate he bilkul khamosh ho gaya. Shudhanshu wahan sab ko sun’ne ke baad…. “Haaṅ hone wale jamai ji, bataeye aap ko kya aitraz hai”


Shresh…. “Uncle, mujhe shadi se koi aitraz nahi hai, lekin aise khamosh khadi Jivisha se main nahi shadi karuṅga. Jivisha ke sapne mujhe pata hai… aur jab tak main uss ke sapne ka Rajkumar ban kar nahi dikhata tab tak main ye shadi nahi karuṅga.


“Maine tab bhi Himanshu uncle se wada kiya tha jab Jivisha shadi chhod kar gayi thi. Lekin baad me pata chala ki Jivisha ne shadi kar li. Ye sun kar khud ke liye thoḍa dukh hua tha, lekin Jivisha ke liye khush tha ki usse apne sapno ka Rajkumar mil gaya. Main to sab kuch bhul kar apne kaam me laga tha, lekin ek baar fir bhagwan ne mujhe mauka de he diya. Ab main pahle Jivisha ko uska sapna duṅga, fir shadi karuṅga”.
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jivu asal mein koun hai kya hai uski shaktiya yeh toh malum hai.. xp mein aapne details mein jikar kiya tha... par nischal baade mein kuch alag hi details de rahe hain Aap... joh thoda complicated hai pehle wale details se..
hmm... toh yeh kahani is prakar ki hai ki joh Viggo samuday hai mul roop se Aaynek planet se hai.. shayad samay kaal mein aaynek planet pe tabahi aayi hogi koi jiske chalte yeh Viggo samuday Aaynek se palayan hokar Zoren, Aizem, Miyake ya Luceto bhi gaye aur wahan ke hoke rahne lage... shayad yeh log shanti priya aliens hai.. isliye shasak na banke aam logo ki tarah mil julke sadharan si zindagi gujarna zyada pasand karte hai..
Ab zoren grah pe kuch alag hi hadsa hua in Viggo aliens ke sath.. wajah Mittoso ki lalach.
aur baki grah pe inki samul nash isliye kyunki apsi mat bhed ke chalte joh jung huyi aapas mein..
yahan tak samajh mein aa gayi kahani par do baatein chhod ke nischal alpha male kaise, kyun? aur nischal ki maa kahan hai ab.. kya woh zinda hai..
So nischal ne farman jaari kar diya hai josefer ke jariye ki jinghul rijo aur mahamahim whatever ke sehat ke liye yahin achha hai ki jab bhi aaye, sidhe tarike se pehle nischal se baat kar le warna ush chu tiyo ki zoren grah sahit band baj jani hai :lol:
are wah... chalo achha hai ab ye chuja josefer bhi kasak se dur rahega...
aainn :hmm: yeh josefer hath pair muh sab dhoke nischal ke piche pad gaya... kahe nischal ko apna jiju banana chahta hai yaar.. power ke liye kya.. :D
are yaar jivu ne bhi haan keh di..... wajah shayad yahin hai ki ya toh joh ghatana pub mein hua uske wajah se ya phir apne gharwalo ko aur dukh nahi dena chaahti hai jivu..
par nischal ka dil tuta gaya...

Idhar nandu bhi gusse mein hai..
par ab ek nandu hi hai joh kuch solution nikal sakti hai jivu ki mamle mein.
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Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill nainu ji :applause: :applause:

Nahi .. ek section jo rah gaya tha xp par aur main bhul gaya tha dena wo hai Nischal ka history ... Maine nischal ka koi detail hi nahi diya ho agar aap ko yaad ho to ...

Nischal ka socha hua detail jo aana tha wo tha Nandni ke sawalon ke jawab me .. jab wo finally puchti .. nischal prithwi par kyon aaya... Ek adhura sawal jo pahli mulakat se pending hai..

Mujhe b yaad nahi raha jaldi jaldi complete ke chakkar me aur kisi reader ne ye yaad bhi nahi dikwaya .. wo main aage badh gaya.... Halanki yad hi nahi tha isliye badha yaad rahta to ye detail aata..

Uske alawa jo detail hai harfanmaula sahjada wala wo samanya detail hai usme fer badal nahi hoga ... Wo apne samay se aa jayega .. reason wale section me ki kyon bhaga tha Aizem se.. halanki mujhe wo detail puri yaad nahi lekin outline dimag me hai ki kaisa charecter diya tha maine ..

Baki Viggo ki detail ka sahi aakalan kiya hai.. kuch fer badal hai vichar me jo update se hi clear ho to achha hoga...

Baki haan naa ka pura section pending hai. Jo ki aane wala hai so uska jawab wahin se le lijiye .. baki dekhiye ab ye dur grah kya kya gul khilata hain in prithwi walon par :D

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Nana .. ek ek karke 4-5 update padhkar vichar dijiyega .. fir aage padhiyega :D .. waise muhrat ka intzar kar rahe hain to kah dijiyega yahan ke pandit ji se din dikha lenge :D
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Shresh…. Uncle, mujhe shadi se koi aitraz nahi hai, lekin aise khamosh khadi Jivisha se main nahi shadi karuṅga. Jivisha ke sapne mujhe pata hai… aur jab tak main uss ke sapne ka Rajkumar ban kar nahi dikhata tab tak main ye shadi nahi karuṅga.


“Maine tab bhi Himanshu uncle se wada kiya tha jab Jivisha shadi chhod kar gayi thi. Lekin baad me pata chala ki Jivisha ne shadi kar li. Ye sun kar khud ke liye thoḍa dukh hua tha, lekin Jivisha ke liye khush tha ki usse apne sapno ka Rajkumar mil gaya. Main to sab kuch bhul kar apne kaam me laga tha, lekin ek baar fir bhagwan ne mujhe mauka de he diya. Ab main pahle Jivisha ko uska sapna duṅga, fir shadi karuṅga”.


Shresh ki baten jaise bhramit kar rahi ho. Sab log uss ki baat ko sun kar ander se jaise “wahhhh” kar rahe ho. Sudhanshu ne fir Abhinash se pucha ki usse kya aitraz hai. Abhinash muskurate huye kaha… “jo bhi abhi Shresh ji ne kaha, yadi wo waisa he karte haiṅ to mujhe koi aitraz nahi”


Abhinash ko sun’ne ke baad Sudhanshu ne wahiṅ par meeting ko viram lagaya. Shresh ke faisle par jahaṅ sab khush the wahiṅ Jivisha ka koi reaction nahi tha. Na to wo khushi izhar kar rahi thi, aur na he usse koi dukh tha. Jaise he usse pata chala meeting khatam hui, waise he wo apne kamre me chali aayi.


Jivisha ke kamre me Chirag pahle se baiṭha tha, jo uss me aaye badlaw se kafi hatas tha. Ab uss ki bua usse pahle ki tarah baat nahi karti thi. Chirag, Jivisha ke gode me apna sir dal kar khamosh let gaya. Jivisha uske baloṅ me uṅgaliyaṅ dal kar chhat ko dekhne lagi. Na to Jivisha, Chirag ke ore dekhi aur na he Chirag ne kuch kaha par wo Jivisha ko samajhne ki kosis kar raha tha.


Idhar Nandni ke flat me….


Raat ke huye bhishaṇ wardat ke baad Nandni ghoḍe bech kar so rahi thi. Din ke takriban 2 baj rahe honge jab Nischal flat me pahuncha. Jab wo anḍer ghusa to Jivisha ka koi pata nahi tha aur Ansh wahiṅ hall me baiṭh kar gane sun raha tha…


Nischal, Ansh ke pass pahunch kar…. “Aur Dr sahab kaise haiṅ”


Ansh…. Main baḍhiya huṅ, aur aap…


Nischal…. Mujhe kya hoga, main to mast huṅ. Aap ki gf kahaṅ hai…


Ansh…. Wo ab tak so rahi hai…


Nischal…. To jaeye aap usse uṭhaiye, yahaṅ akele kyoṅ baiṭhe haiṅ…


Ansh…. Nahi rahne dijiye. Raat ko mere wajah se usse jagna para tha. Puri kar lene dijiye usse nind.


Nischal…. Police station se lauṭne ke baad tum dono ke bich jhagṛa hua kya?


Ansh, fiki muksaan hasta….. “Jhagṛa bhi karti to thoḍi khushi milti. Mujhe lagta ki kuch to parwah hai usse, lekin wo to bina kuch kahe he so gayi”.


Ansh ke chehre par aayi iss halki si mayusi, aur uss ke baat ki gahrai ko samajhte huye…. “Ansh bhai, raat ko sayad usse nind lagi thi, issi wajah se wo so gayi”.


Ansh…. Nischal bas 2 min jaag kar mujh se sirf…. Khair haṭao ye sab. Jo uss ke karam hai wo wo kare. Main to apna karam nibhauṅga. Waise tum uss raat hospital se rahsmayi tarike se bhage, kyoṅ ? Ab mile ho to batao, aisa kya istamal kiya tha ki utna gahra ghaw jo mahino me recover nahi hote wo miṇṭo me ho gaye.


Nischal, joṛ se haste…. Dr sahab, aap science ke student hokar, illusion ko nahi samjh paye. Suniye, maine ek fake ghaw banaya, aur illusion ke tahat usse bharte huye dikhaya.


Ansh…. You mean, ki tum jadu try kar rahe the. Bakwas main nahi manta kisi illusion ko. Tum mujhe bewakoof nahi bana sakte.



Nischal…. Lo, ab aap ko yakin nahi. Achha ṭhik hai, main abhi aap ke pass baiṭha huṅ na..


Ansh… Haaaann !


Nischal…. Ṭhik hai apni najar Nandni ke kamre par daliye…


Ansh, Nandni ke kamre ki ore sir ghumate… “uss se kyaaaaa”…. Aur Nischal usse Nandni ke kamre ke pass khada dikh gaya. Turant palak jhapak kar wo apne pass dekha… aur pass me baiṭhe Nischal ko badi hairani se dekhne laga…


Ansh…. Magar ye kaise kiya tum ne….


Nischal…. Bola tha na illusion Dr sahab, illusion. Ab yakin ho gaya na ki main jadu bhi kar sakta huṅ.


Ansh…. Haa yakin ho gaya….


“Raat ko sone nahi dete, din ko kaayynnn, kaaayynnn kar rahe ho dono hall me, bhago yahaṅ se warna main dono ka khun kar duṅgi”


Nischal…. Natije ke bare me bhul gayi kya (raat ki baat yaad dilaya pahle). Waise bhi subah ke 5 baje se jo soyi hogi, abhi din ke 2 baj rahe haiṅ. Chupchap jag jao.. warna mujhe achhe se jagana aata hai.


Ansh…. Mujhe bhi sikhao, kaise achhe se jagate haiṅ….


Nandni…. Nischal usse sikhana baad me, aaj tumhara turn hai… jab tak main fresh ho kar aati huṅ, nasta taiyar milna chahiye.


Nischal…. “Tum jao ready ho kar aao, tab tak main sab vaywastha banata huṅ ”… aur Nandni ke jate he…. “Dr sahab, yaar kuch bahar se he mangwa do mera khana banane ka mood nahi”


Ansh…. Waise tumhare turn se matlab, tum bhi yahaṅ rahte ho kya??…


Nischal…. Rahta nahi jabardasti laya gaya huṅ. Tumhari madam ko bhi jadu sikhna hai isliye usne mujhe yahaṅ bandi bana rakha hai.


Ansh ne bahar se he khane ka order de diya aur dono ki baten chalti he rahi. Idhar tabtak Nandni bhi naha-dho kar ready ho kar aa chuki thi, aur aate he sab se pahle khane par toot pari. Khana khatam hote he Nischal apni baat kahne laga. Tabhi Nandni ne usse rok kar Ansh ki ore ishara ki….


Ansh…. Kya Nandu, main kuch samjha nahi…


Nandni…. Kya se matlab… yuṅ achanak bina bataye raat ko aana… meri jasusi karne aaye the kya kal ??…


Ansh… Nahi main to surprise dena chahta tha, lekin watchman ne mujhe ander he aane nahi diya. Fir maine tumhe kai call lagaye par tum ne respond he nahi kiya…


Nandni…. Ansh, baby ye sab karne ki kya jaroorat hai. Mujhe surprise karne ke chakkar me jail ke chakkar to lag gaye na. Jante ho kitna ghabra gayi thi main.


Ansh… Sorry Nandu…


Nandni…. Waise Ansh tum yahaṅ apna hospital chhod kar mujh se milne aaye.


Ansh…. Pahle aisa he socha tha. Fir laga ki 1,2 din tum se mil kar wapas jauṅga to bhi wahan man nahi lagega. Isliye jab tak tum yahaṅ ho main bhi yahan government research lab me apne adhure assignment ko pura kar lunga, aur thoda waqt appolo walon ne le liya...

Nandni apni aakhen dikhati… Oye gold madelist bahenbaji haan. Ye kyon nahi kahte ki wapas se reasearch me dilchaspi shuru ho gayi hai.

Ansh:- Reaserch hi to karne aaya hun, lekin apni Nandni par.


Nandni, Ansh ke gale lagti…. “Love you Ansh”


Ansh…. Love you too Nandu. Ohk tum dono baten karo main hospital se ho kar aata huṅ.


Nandni…. Oye Dr sahab, yahaṅ to mere liye waqt rahega na….


Ansh… Yadi emergency case ko chhod de to, mere pass koi kaam he nahi, bas waqt he waqt hai tumhare liye…


Nandni…. Ṭhik hai baby, meri car lete jao. Raat ko jaldi aana, main tumhara khane par intzar karuṅgi.


Ansh “c u latter” bolta wahan se chala gaya. Ansh ke jate he Nischal, Nandni ko hairani se dekhne laga. Nischal ko apni ore aise dekhte Nandni samjh gayi ki Nischal ke man me kya chal raha hai….


Nandni…. Main janti huṅ tum kya soch rahe ho. Aur dekha jaye to tum sahi he soch rahe ho, mujhe ander se jarra bhi feel nahi hota Ansh ko lekar. Lekin kya meri he feeling sab kuch hai. Bhale main uss ke pyar ko feel na kar sakuṅ, lekin uss ehsaas ko feel jaroor kar sakti huṅ…. Jab ander se ye mehsus ho ki jin se hum pyar karte haiṅ, ussi ko humari kadar nahi.


Nischal…. Tum sab ke emotions ka khyal rakhti ho Nandu. You are great. Waise tumhara ye saddy face bilkul saḍu sa lagta hai, isliye face par smile lao taki hum kal raat ke bare me kuch baat kar le.


Nandni…. Haaṅ bolo, main sun rahi huṅ….


Nischal…. Nandni mujhe lagta hai Indore me jin logoṅ ne mujh par humla karwaya tha un sab ka saragna wo Shresh he hai. Ek Kasak uss ke ghar me quid hai aur dusri Kasak, Jivisha ke ghar me.. tumhe samjh me aaya mamla kya hai…


Nandni:- Nahi, bahut confusion hai Nischal, upar se wo jaanwar. Nischal wo mujhe kyon nahi dikha? Jo bhi tha mujhe to usme apni maut dikh rahi thi.


Nischal:- Fikr mat karo, jabtak main hun tumhe darne ki koi jaroorat nahi.


Nandni:- Achha !!! Tumhe jab wo chir raha tha tab to kuch kar nahi paye aur mujh jaisi masoom ke pass sekhi baghar rahe…


Nischal:- Are us raat ki baat alag thi. Ab mere gode me Jivisha thi aur meri najar uske upar se hat nahi rahi thi. Isliye main khatre ko bhanp nahi paya. Waise bhi mujhe kya pata ki yahan pahle se koi alian tum logon ke life me hai.


Nandni, chaunkti hui…. "Alian, to kya wo log bhi alian hai. Nischal ke bache ye sab tumhara kiya dhara hai".


Nischal:- kya ??????


Nandni:- Muh fad kar chaunk kyon gaye. Tum yahan aaye, tumhare piche tumhare wo dushman bhi aaye. Us raat tumhe marne ki kosis kiye, lekin tum bach gaye. Fir un logon ne socha hoga ki tumhe marne se acha hai ki tumhe trap karke wapas le jaye isliye wo log ab Jisa ke piche pare hain. Hey bhagwan.. tum se milna uske liye pran ghatak sabit ho gaya.


Nischal uske sar par ek hath marte huye…. "Kya kamal ki conspiracy theory hai, jaroor kisi film se ye idea mila hoga"


Nandni proud type feel karti … "Yess baby, dekha na jhat se case solve kar liya aur sare natija tumhare samne hai."


Nischal, Nandni ki baat sukar uske sar ko pakar kar niche table se takra diya…. Nandni apna sar pakad kar "aao" karti use ghuri aur khane ki table par pare plate ko de mari Nischal ke sar par. Wo gusse me dusra aur teesra sari plate uspar fekne lagi.


Nischal:- Are ruk pagal alian hun iron man nahi. Chot lag rahi hai Nandu.. ruk na.. pagal.


Nandni:- dobara aisa kiya na to ye chaku ghused dungi ander.


Nischal:- Bussssssssss… shant aur dhyan se suno..


Nandni:- Haan bol..


Nischal:- Main alag hun, wo alag alian hai. Upar se wo ladka jo Jivisha se shadi karna chahta hai wo bhi yahan pahle se hai. Iska matlab saaf hai ki wo log mujh se pahle yahan aaye hain.


Nandni:- Oh matlab tumhe yahan humari kismat khinch layi hai. Bahagwan ne socha ki itni masoom ladkiyon ka kya hoga, isliye humari raksha ke liye tumhe behja hai.


Nischal:- 2 min shant rahegi. Bakwas kiye ja rahi hai. Inki harkaton se ek baat to samjh me aa gayi hai ki inka mukhya target Jivisha hai aur Jivisha par najar rakhne ke liye asli Kasak ko nakli se badal diye hain…


Nandni…. Bhagwan jane ki unhone humshakal kaise banaye. Par maksad saaf hai ki unka ek aadmi Jivisha ke bilkul karib rahe. Tum kya sochne lage Nischal.


Nischal…. In logoṅ ki kahani to samjh me aa gayi, lekin ek baat samjh me nahi aayi ki aakhir ye log Jivisha se chahte kya haiṅ. Kyonki ye itne to saksham hai ki sab ke bich se Jivisha ko uṭha kar le jaye aur koi kuch kar bhi nahi sakta hai… fir ye log aakhir itni planning kyoṅ kar rahe haiṅ.
Sunder atisunder shabdparwah se rachyta leke aaye hai ek aur vishmaykaari update.
 
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Hahaha ...mere kahne se ho jata Subham bhai to besharm readers ko kuch to sharm aa jati lekin sab ke sab dhit hain... Kya hi kahte hain .. yahan meri to koi sunta hi nahi :D

Baki .. jaldi jaldi vichar chaap dijiye apna
Readers kabhi bhi writers ki nahi sunte, apne sath bhi yahi haal tha,,,,, :dazed:

Aapki kahani padh raha hu, aapne kaha ki 4-4 update ke sath apne vichaar rakhu to ab aise hi karuga,,,,, :D
 
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