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Fantasy Kaisa Yeh Ishq Hai.... Ajab Sa Risk Hai...... (Completed)

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Mahamahim ne jiska bhi dhyan lagaya ho, lekin dhyan lagakar jab usne pana dayan panja aage badhaya, Jivisha apne sine ke bayen hisse me Mahamahim ke panje ki tej jakad mehsus kar rahi thi, jo uske sine se dil chirkar bahar nikal lena chah raha tha..


Jivisha gahri shwans leti jaisi hi dhyan lagayi, ander bilkul andhera tha aur wo kisi tillishm ke ander fans chuki thi. Nischal teji se daurta hua Serin ke pass pahuncha aur usse utha kar Jivisha ke pass le aaya… Jivisha aakhen mundi apni jagah khadi thi aur uske sine ke bayen hisse se khun badi teji ke sath nikal raha tha…


Serin ne apne hath jaise hi Jivisha ke ore badhaya …. "Nah isse chhuna nahi Serin, tum hawai support mangwao, aur dhyan rahe yahan koi bhi marna nahi chahiye… ye Mahamahim bhi nahi"…


Serin iss se pahle kuch puch pati Nischal bhi Jivisha ke karib khada hokar apni aakhen mund chuka tha… halanki abhi ke liye to koi khatra nahi tha, kyonki pahle Nischal ke giraye kahar aur baad me Serin ki jugalbandi ne wahan ke fauj ko aisa kata tha ki wo to jaan bachakar bhagne me vyast the..


Lekin Serin koi bhi jokhim nahi uthana chahti thi, isliye usne turant Shwetna se sampark karke viman se takriban 2000 marak plane bulwa kar wahan ki cahuksi karne ke liye bol di..


Apne juniors ko turant hi yah aadesh di ki wahan ke samrajya ko purn roop se suraksha ghera me le le… juniors ko samjhane ke baad Serin, Nandni se location share karti hui…. "Nandni apne 4000 logon ke sath iss pure location par najar banaye rakho aur dushman par koi bhi raham nahi karna hai.. kewal dhyan rahe bich me Nischal, Jivisha aur Mahamahim hai, in teeno ko kuch nahi hona chahiye"…


Idhar Nischal dhyan laga kar Jivisha ke dimag me prawes kar gaya. Matr nano second me wo dimag ke har sanayu tantu ko chhedte huye pure raftaar ke sath ander ghusta chala gaya…


Dimag me uske gati ko rokne ke liye Jivisha ke ander tarah-tarah ki yaden dali gayi thi… jisme har uss Malkia ki marmik tasveer thi, jisse Mahamahim dwara noch'kar khaya gaya tha… Bharmane ki ek achhi kosis jo Prithvi par hui sapna ke ghatna se prerit thi… lekin Bharmane ke kram me wo yah bhul chuke the ki tab Nischal sikh raha tha, lekin ab Nischal apne vidhya me nipun tha…


Matr second bhar ke samay me Nischal, Jivisha ke dimag ke uss hisse me tha, jahan Jivisha apna dhyan lagate waqt fasi hui thi.… Jivisha andhre me kahin baith kar dard se krrah rahi thi… tabhi wahan charo ore ujala jo gaya.. Samne Nischal khada tha..


Andhera jab chhanta aur Nischal ka pyara chehra Jivisha ko najar aaya, wo apne dard ko darkinar karti daur kar Nischal ke gale lag gayi…. "Nischal, sine me bahut tej dard ho raha hai.. aisa lag raha hai kisi ka panja mere sine me ghuskar mera dil nikalne wala hai" …


Nischal:- To fir chalo uske kiye ki saja dete hai…


Nischal, Jivisha ko apne gode me uthaya aur Jivisha ki jab aankh khuli tab wo ek alag hi duniya me thi… Jivisha dard se chhatpatate hui kahne lagi… "Ye kaun si jagah hai Nischal, yahan aakar to meri pira asahniya ho gayi hai"..


Charo ore kali rakh se tile bane huye the, jispar jalti hui laal law saaf dikh rahi thi… charo ore halka andhera tha, mano yahan ghanghor badri chhayi ho… aisa bhayanak manjar tha mano khushiyon ne sadiyon se yahan muh mod rakha ho..


Nischal, Jivisha ki aakhon me dekhte huye… "Dard aur andhkar ne tumhe bhramit kiya hai Jisa.. bus Alfas grih ke bare me dhyan karo"..


Jivisha:- Ahhhh ! Ye dard meri jaan le raha hai Nischal … main kuch bhi dhyan lagane me asamrth hun…


Nischal, Jivisha ko apne sine se lagate huye, uske sar ko chum'kar thoda piche hua. Apne upar ke kapde nikal'kar, apna khanjar nikala aur dhire se apne sine par chalane laga…


"Baby, nahi karo na please… main mar jaungi"… Jivisha puri tarah kamjor parti hui rone lagi..


Nischal muskurate huye apne sine me khanjar ki nok ghusa diya… rakt ki dhar khanjar ke niche se bahne lagi… Jivisha vyakulta se uski ore badhi kintu Nischal usse rokte huye…


"Jivisha, tmnhara dard me hona mera kaleja chir raha hai… dekho mere sine par tumhare panje ke nishan jo mit rahe hai.. matlab meri jodi apne anth ke nikat hai… ya to tum mirtu ko prajit karo, warna mere kul ka shrap yahan bhi kaam karega… dusre Viggo Sigma ka aathwan vansaj bhi apni jodi banane ke baad marega. Lekin main apni jodi ke bina kuch din iss sansar me tarap kar nahi marna chahunga… main to muskurate huye tunhare sath aaunga"…


Jivisha uski baat sukar kisi tarah muskurai aur apne dono hath failakar wo fir se madhosh hona shuru ho gayi… Nischal Jivisha ke pichhe aakar uske badan se lipat gaya aur uske kano ke niche hontn se sparsh karne laga… honth ke chhuan se Jivisha ke badan me mithi si umang daur gayi aur badan khushi se sihar gaya…



Jaise-jaise Jivisha, Nischal me kho rahi thi.. wahan ke kale badal chhant rahe the.. Jivisha ka dard bhi dhire-dhire kam hota ja raha tha… aur dard jaise-jaise kam hota ja raha tha, pyar aur umang bhi badi teji ke sath badhta ja raha tha..


Kuch hi pal me dono itne madhosh huye ki wahan ke kale badal aur andhkar sama kahin gayab sa ho gaya… charo ore shwet hi shwet najar aa raha tha.. aur iss shwet se jagah me kahin dur 2 kale se log najar aa rahe the… jo unke karib badh rahe the…


"Kya baat hai, aaj tak mujhe kisi ne itna prabhawit nahi kiya jitna Tum dono ne kiya. Aaj tak main sab ko chunte aa raha tha, lekin mujhe koi dhundh le, aisa samast brahmand me koi nahi… kyonki ye samast brahmand hi main hun… Prithvi bhi main hun, Zoren bhi main hun, Aizem bhi main hun aur Aaynek bhi main hi hun.. shristhi ke jis kan me mujhe dhundhoge main wahin hun"…


Jivisha:- Maaf karna badbole Surpmarich, tumse abhi mere love se nipto, jabtak main iss durachari Mittoso se nipat'ti hun.. wo kya hai na abhi waqt nahi hai humare pass…


Jivihsa apni baat kah'kar jaise hi aage badhi, Mahamahim ke sath khada wo divya asur Surpmarich ne kewal apni najar uthayi aur Nischal aur Jivisha dono hawa me tang gaye… "Tumhari tuchh si sahktiyon par jab tumhe itna gurur hai, fir mujhe kitna gurur hona chahiye"


"Apna gurur tu apne pichhwade me dal le Surpmarich"… Nischal gusse me aakhen laal karte apni baat kaha aur Surpmarich ke najron se jaal se wo achanak hi ojhal ho'kar thik uske piche pahunch gaya...


Jaise hi Nischal, Surpmarich ke piche pahunch, Surpmarich uss se bhi tej hota, Nischal ke piche pahunch gaya… lekin aage pichhe ke iss khel me Jivisha se uska dhyan hat gaya aur Jivisha bhi apni sampurn shaktiyan khol chuki thi…


Jivisha ki ikchha shakti ka prawah itna khatarnak tha ki Surpmarich jabtak Jivisha ki ikchha shakti ke ghere par dhyan kendrit karta, tab-tak Nischal ek baar fir uske pichhe pahunch'kar, usse apne hathon se uthaya aur niche jamin par puri takat se patak diya…


Surpmarich ka dhyan Jivisha se hat gaya aur bhumi par girte hi wo uthkar turant hi khada ho gaya aur badi hi teji ke sath Nischal par lapka… jaise hi wo Nischal par lapak raha tha Mahamahim apne dono hath uthakar Nischal par humla karne ke liye taiyar ho gaya…


Jivisha mauka dekh'kar turant hi Mahamahim ke karib pahunchi aur apna panja sidha uske kaleje me ghusa'kar uska jinda dil, kaleja chirkar bahar nikal li..


Jaise hi uska dil bahar nikla uska jagah par anginat bomb girne lage… Surpmarich ki tej si chinkh nikal gayi…. "Nahiiiii".. aur baukhla'kar usne Nischal ke sar par itna tej mukka chala diya ki yadi Jivisha ne mukke aur Nichal ke sar ke bich Mahamahim ke sarir ko na feka hota, Nischal ke dimag ka chatni ban gaya hota…


Lekin fir bhi Surpmarich ka wo itna balsali prahar tha ki Mahamahim ke sine ko bhed'kar mukka teji se Nischal ke sar par laga aur wo behosh ho gaya… Surpmarich apna prahar kar'ke gusse me wahan se gayab ho gaya… Jivisha, Nischal ke pass daur kar pahunchi aur uske sar ko apne god me lekar balon me hath ferne lagi…


Charo ore bhishan bomb fut rahe the… lekin Jivisha apni jagah baith'kar, Nischal ke sar ko gode me rakh'kar, uske chehre par hath fer rahi thi… Nischal lagbhag behoshi ke aalam me apni aakhen khola, apna hath badha kar usne Jivisha ke aashu ko saaf kiya.. dhime se honth hilate huye kahne laga… "chalo chalte hain, warna hum yahin fans jaynge"..


Nischal ne Jivisha ka hath thama aur dono Mahamahim ke dimag se bahar aaye… dono jaise hi bahar aaye, Jivisha aakhen khol'kar sidha Nischal ke ore lapki aur uske girte sarir ko tham'kar wahin niche baith gayi…


Bahar to jaise lashon ka dher bana hua tha aur Serin ke pass 2 jinda bandhak khade the… ek Apini aur dusra Avinashi… Jivisha ek najar Apini ko dekhi aur apna hath utha kar uska gala daboch kar lashon ke dher me fekhti hui kahne lagi….


"Baby wo Apini mujhe dikha aur tumhara wada maine pura kar diya… aakhen khol kar to dekho, Serin ne akele apne dum par ye pura ranbhumi jit lee hai… Mahamahim ki maha sena yahan lashon ke dher me tabdil hai aur jo bach gaye wo aatmsamarpan kar chuke hain"..


Serin, Jivisha ke sar par hath ferti…. "Isse medical ki jaroorat hai Bhabhi, chalo isse lekar chalte hain".. ..


Nischal ko wahan se utha'kar viman me wapas laya gaya. Buri tarah ghayal Jivisha bhi thi aur wo bhi viman me pahunchte hi behosh ho gayu. Yudh jit to gaye the, lekin koi bhi iss jit ka jashn nahi mana raha tha…


Serin, Nischal aur Jivisha ko medical sahayata de rahi thi wahi Ansh NilBhut ke logon ke sath milkar, unke 5 caror logon me se jitno ki jaan bacha sakta tha utno ki jaan bachane me laga hua tha…


Idhar Nandni, Shwetna ke sath milkar atmsamartpit kiye sainiko ko wahan ke ranbhumi se lashon ko hatakar unhe dafanane ke kaam me lagi hui thi… Takriban aadhi raat Jivisha ko hosh aaya… aakhen khulte hi Jivisha Nischal ko dhundhne lagi…


Nischal ko sabse alag rakh'kar ilaj kiya ja raha tha. Jivisha uss jagah ko dhundh'kar wahan pahunchi. Serin ab bhi Nischal ke pass hi thi aur kuch padesan si dikh rahi thi..


"Kya hua, sab thik to hai na.. tum itni vyakul kyon ho"… Jivisha Serin ke kandhe par hath deti hui puchhne lagi..


Serin:- Shayad iske brain cell damage ho gaye hain, isliye iska hath aur paun ne kaam karna band kar chuka hai..


Serin ki baat sun'kar Jivisha ko jajse gahra Sadma laga ho, uske aashu chhlak aaye, wo roti hui Serin se lipat gayi… Serin uske pith thap-thapate huye santwana deti hui kahne lagi…


"Bhabhi Nischal ko aapke ke pyar aur hasi ki jaroorat hogi, warna wo toot jayega. Aap pyar se uska sath dogi to ye waqt bhi tal jayega. Aur haan, please aisa nahi dikhaeyega ki wo ashay ho gaya hai."..


Serin apne aashu pahle baha chuki thi lekin Jivisha ke liye ye marmik kshn tha. Wo khud ko sambhalne ke liye Serin se kuch waqt maang'kar wahan se chali gayi. Wahan se wo sidha Alfas grih me pahunchi aur apne bahte aanshuon ke sath pustak ke panne ko fir se paltane lagi…
 
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Bilkul subah ka waqt tha… Jivisha muskurati hui Alfas grih se bahar nikli.. Kund me nahane ke karan uska chehra aur bhi jyada khila hua lag raha tha… Jivisha ne wahan ke dwarpaal ko bolkar sabhi ko turant hi sabha bahwan me bulwa li…


Ek ore NilBhut samuday ki pratinidhi Shwetna apne logon ke sath baithi hui thi, to dusri ore Jatin aur Baby Takshat samuday ka pratinidhitwa kar rahi thi… aur dono hi samuday ke logon ne jhuk'kar apni nayi shashika ka swagat kiya…


Jivisha:- Tum sab ki yah haalat ka karan, kewal aur kewal ye sar jhukana hi hai… Aaj se main yahan ka rajtantra khatm krati hun aur yahan par prajatantra ko bahal karti hun..


Dono hi pakshon ke logon ne badi utsukta se prajatantra ka matlab puchhne lage… kayi sare video Play huye jisme prajatantra ke working culture, ek saman adhikar, ek saman kanoon, satta aur takat kisi ek ke hath me na hokar balki sabko saman adhikaron ki vyawastha ko dikhaya jane laga…


Chunki Jatin prithvi par kafi lambe arse se raha tha aur usse yah kanoon vaywastha kafi pasand thi, isliye wah iss baat ke liye raji ho gaya… Jatin aur Shwetna ki aguwai me ek team ka gathan hua, jo iss pure Zoren ko 30 zone me vibhajit karke ek kusal prajatantra ko bahal karti…


Jivisha apni baat puri karke sabha ko Jatin aur Shwetna ke hawale kar'ke apne liye bus wo Alfas grih rakh li jo Shwetna ki dekh-rekh me Jivisha aur Nischal ki amanat rahti…


Subha ka waqt tha, Jivisha Zoren grah par shanti aur shashan vaywastha bahal kar'ke wapas chali aayi thi. Muskura to rahi thi lekin uski muskurahaton me bhi ek khamoshi si thi…


Jivisha apne anterman me jhanknti apni udasi ko bhanp gayi, isliye wo Nischal ke pass na ja'kar Chirag aur Aarsi ke pass pahunch gaye… dono daur kar Jivisha ke pass pahunche… Chirag subkate huye puchne laga… "Didi aap ke sine se khun nikal raha tha, dard bhi ho raha hai kya aap ko"..


Jivisha, uske sar ke baal ko bikherti hui, apne gaal se uske gaal ko ragarti hui, usse pyar se chumti kahne lagi… "Kya betu tu to bada ho gaya hai.. aur jarra mujhe apni bahu ko dekhne de… Aarsi tum bhi badi ho gayi haan"..


Aarsi:- Didi, didi jab hum dono bade ho gaye hain, to fir humari shadi karwa do na…


Chirag:- Abhi shadi ki baat nahi karni chahiye Aarsi..


Aarsi:- Lekin kyon baby..


Chirag:- Duffer, film me nahi dekhti, ghar me jab kisi ko chot lag jaye ya ghayal ho jaye to shadi ki baat nahi karte, sab kuch normal hone ke baad karte hain..


Aarsi:- Ohhh ! Mujhe nahi pata tha ye baat… koi nahi hum 2,4 din me thode aur bade ho jayenge fir shadi karenge..


Jivisha:- Oh ho.. aur shadi ke baad ghar kaise chalaoge..


Chirag:- Wo Kasak 2.0 bua hai na.. wo na ek bade se research centre ki master hai aur hum dono unke assistant. Hum dono ki to job bhi lag gayi hai…


Jivisha:- Baat to ye bhi sahi hai.. job to hai tunhare pass. Lekin kya Aarsi ke commissioner papa aur Chirag ki hitlar mammi manegi....


Aarsi, Jivisha ke mathe par apni chhoti si hatheli se dhakke deti hui kahne lagi… "Aap bhi na didi, sathiya gayi ho. Hum 2 sal pahle bhage the, wo log to ab tak apne nati-pote ke intzar me honge"..


Jivisha kya kahe aur kya na kahe, uske muh par to tala he lag gaya tha. Haalanki Aarsi kah to bilkul sahi rahi thi, lekin yadi ye case kisi aur ke sath hota to… lekin ab inhe kya jawab de…


"Band kar diya in chilgojon ne tera muh"… Nandni unke pass aa kar baith'ti hui kahne lagi… iss se pahle ki dono kuch bolte, Nandni dono se kahne lagi.... "Tum dono yahan kya kar rahe ho, tumhe to Serin ne bulaya hai"..


Dono Serin ka naam sun'kar hi wahan se uth'kar bhage.. unhe Serin ke liye aise bhagte dekh Nandni kahne lagi... "Tere dono bachon ka kafi karib se khyal rakhi hai usne"..


Jivisha:- Bahut dard jhele hain usne Nandu, shayad Nischal ke hisse ka dard bhi wo jhel gayi. Kal raat mili thi, khud to vyakul thi aur mujhe himmat rakhne ke liye kah rahi thi..


Nandni:- Ek kaam karenge, usse hum apne pagal gange me samil kar lenge..


Jivisha:- Wo to sahi hai Nandu, Lekin ye to lagbhag Kasak ki tarah dikhti hai…


Nandni:- Ye to aur bhi fayde wala rahega..


Jivisha:- Kaise..


Nandni:- Mujhe kya pata bus flow me nikal gaya…


Jivisha:- Haan ye flow me nikalna, jab normal the kitne khush the na… wo flow me kuch bhi kisi ko kah dena, fir har koi lag gaye uss betuke flow ko sabit karne me…


Nandni:- Haan yaad hai… Main tum dono ko miss karungi.. Behad..


Jivisha:- Dono ko miss karungi se kya matlab hai tumhara..


Nandni:- Main aur Aakash soch rahe the ki, kal hum dono Chirag aur Aarsi ko lekar Prithvi nikal jaye. Hum yahan dusron ke ghar ki samsya ka samdhan me to jute hain, lekin apne hi ghar ke log kin haalaton me honge, unki koi khabar nahi… Nandita bhabhi ne bure waqt me kitni madad ki thi aur 2 sal se apne bache ko dekhi nahi, wahi haal Aarsi ke papa ka bhi hoga. Uss bechare ki to badi beti ko bhi in logon ne maar dala tha…


Jivisha:- Thanks yaar … tere jane se kam se kam aage ke liye mera sar dard to kam ho jayega…


Nandni:- Haan so to hai, sabhi logon ke drame mujhe hi jhelne honge .. koi na raste me 2 din ka waqt hoga.. bahana soch lenge…


Jivisha:- Acha sun wo Nischal ne tere aur Ansh ke liye kuch apne hath se banaya tha, socha tha jab wahan Aizem par sab ko kuch na kuch deta, ussi waqt tum dono ko bhi wo deta, lekin ab to tum ja rahi ho, to wo bhi leti chali jao..


Nandni:- Tu kyon de rahi hai mujhe, main to uss kadus se hi le lungi. Waise bhi kal wo lashon ke dher ko hatwane me itni thak gayi ki uss se mil hi nahi payi.. abhi kaisa hai wo..


Jivisha:- Acha hai..


Nandni:- Baat kya hai Jisa… tu kya chhipa rahi hai..


Jivisha:- Uske sar me thodi si chot aayi hai.. aur..


Nandni, hairani se Jivisha ke ore dab-dabatyi najron se dekhti…. "Wo fir se coma me chala gaya kya? Ye iske sath hi aisa kyun hota hai? Main na grih shanti yagya karwaungi, ye baar-baar Nischal ke sath ghtna hona grahon ka koi dosh lagta hai.."


Jivisha:- Nahi wo coma me nahi hai. Balki brain cell damage hone se uske hath aur paun ke kaam karna band kar diya hai… ..


Nandni:- Arreee yaar ye kya ho gaya… Hey bhagwan kyon ache logon ko padesan karte ho.. kab usne kisi ka bura chaha hai…


Jivisha, Nandni ke aanshu pochhti…. "Yaar tu royegi to uska aur mera, hum dono ka husla toot jayega.. bura waqt hai ye bhi tal jayega"…


Nandni:- Kahan hai wo, mujhe abhi milna hai.. tu mujhe pahle nahi bata sakti thi, jab main yahan se jane ki baat kar rahi thi. Usne kabhi taklif me saath nahi chhoda, main usse kaise chhod'kar jane ki soch sakti hun…


Jivisha:- Ullu rona band karegi.. shant ho ja bahna… main kah rahi hun na bura waqt hai tal jayega… yahan par to sab hain lekin apne pariwar ke pass humari koi khabar tak nahi. Tumne bilkul sahi socha hai.. tu aaram se wahan nikal ja.. waise bhi 10-15 din baad hum pahunch he rahe hain wahan..


Nandni:- Shut up.. main usse chhod kar kahin nahi ja rahi..


"Bhabhi sahi bol rahi hai Nandni, rahi baat Nischal ki to main wada karti hun agle 10 se 15 din me hum sab tunhare pass honge. Ek wada maine bhabhi se kiya tha puchh lo usse nibhayi ki nahi"… Serin unke pass aati hui kahne lagi..


Nandni:- Hmmm ! Yaar ikchha to nahi thi jane ki.. dil nahi maan raha hai..


Serin:- Jab maine usse khud se alag kiya tha tab mera bhi dil nahi maan raha tha.. nahi mana tha mera dil ki wo bhola akele kaise iss duniya ko sambhalega… kaise survive karega.. lekin mujhe bhi dil majboot karna para tha. Dekho ussi ka natija hai ki aaj uske wajah se mujhe bhi pariwar aur doston ke bich ka sukh mila hai… warna aise pariwar ki kamna to kahin dur-dur tak sapne me bhi nahi thi...


Jivisha:- Tu aaram se hans kar mil Nischal se, fir kuch dino ki to baat hai.. aur haan kamini humare bagair shadi nahi kar lena…


Nandni:- Main to raji bhi ho jaun lekin ab to Ansh hi raji nahi hoga.. doston ke naam par to uske pass Nischal ke siwa koi hai bhi nahi.. aur humare yahan ladka apne baap ke bina ek baar shadi kar sakta hai, lekin dost ke bina to usse lagega shadi nahi maiyyat samaroh ka aayojan hua tha..chal chalkar mil leti hun uss khadus se..


Jivisha:- Serin, Nischal ko hosh aa gaya kya ?


Serin:- Haan kuch der pahle hi aaya tha.. ek baar batane aayi thi tab aap log nahi the..


Nandni:- Kaisa react kiya usne..


Serin:- Imandari bataun to wo thoda sa padesan hua, lekin bilkul normal tha.. kah raha tha bade-bade events me aise hadse hote rahte hain… mere hath paun sab to tum sab ho..


Nandni:- Haan sahi hi to kaha hai usne.. waise bhi bahut bhagta tha.. ab ek jagah kam se kam baitha to rahega..


Uski baat sun'kar sabhi hans diye aur hanste hanste achanak hi rone lage.. Kuch pal gum mitane ke baad teeno hi pahunchi medical section me… pura medical section ko khali dekh'kar Jivisha aaschrya se puchhne lagi… "Yahan ke ghayal log sab kahan gaye"..


Serin:- Jo gambhir roop se chotil the, unhe NilBhut ke hospital me rakha gaya hai… aur baki sab ko chhuti de di gayi hai.. iss ladai me in logon ne 2 carore log khoye hain.. lekin apne logon ko kisi ne ro kar vida nahi kiya, balki pure jashn ke sath unki aakhri vidai di gayi…


Nandni:- Batao ek ye log hain, aur ek tum sab ho… Nischal ke liye bus ro rahe ho..


Jivisha:- Haan pagal khali hum log hi roye the na.. chal ab..


Jaise hi teeno ander pahunche… "Kya hai khadus, suni tere hath paun chale gaye"… Nandni uske bistar ke kinare baith'kar puchhne lagi …


Nischal:- Matlab ye baat akhbar me bhi aa gayi kya?


Nandni:- Sir aap itne mahan hasti hain ki aap ke chhink ki charcha to pure universe me hoti hai, fir to ye aapke hath aur paun hain..


Nischal:- Haan durbhagyavash ye sahi khabar hai..


Nandni:- Bahut bhagta tha na… ab thik hua.. hamesa najron ke samne rahega.. waise iske muh par tape laga'kar iska rape kar dun to kisi ko pata tak nahi chalega…


Jivisha uske sar par pichhe se hath marti… "Jhalli kahin ki, ja tu apne doctor ko pakad.. mere maal par najar dali to dekh lena. Oye jiju apni biwi ko sambhalo yaar.. ye kuch jyada hi maze le rahi hai"…


Ansh:- Ab kya hi bataun pahle sirf suna tha ab dekh raha hun, ladkiyan shadi ke baad besharm ho jati hain..


Nischal:- Doctor sahab Shadi to Jivisha ki bhi ho gayi hai.. aap ke kahne ka kya matlab hai wo bhi besharm hai..


Jivisha apni aakhen dikhati… "Bade matlab nikale ja rahe hain haan"..


"Aaj ki subah aise khili si aaogi to main to pagal ho jaunga"… Aur Jivisha ke honton par Nischal ke honton ka sparsh …


"Had hai baby ye kya kar rahe ho… besharm to tum ho gaye"… Sab log Jivisha ke ore dekhte huye… "Kya hua aisa kya kar diya Nischal ne"..
 
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Nandni jis teji ke sath khinch rahi thi, Nischal apna dhyan laga'kar, aakhen munda aur Nandni ke katuhal man me pahunkar…. "bilkul shant ho jao Nandu, aur jor lagana band karo. Apni aakhen mundi raho aur shwans mat lena"..


Nischal pura dhyan laga'kar Nandni ke dimag ko kabu kiya.. usse shant rakha….. aur ret ke ander teji se uske barabar aate huye, uske naak ko daba kar, muh se muh laga'kar usse shwans dene laga…


Nischal ab bhi uske dimag ko shant karke shwans diye ja raha tha… takriban 5 minute tak ret me ghusne ke baad Nischal ko aisa laga ki wo hawa me hai… turant hi usne Nandni ko apne hatho se upar uthaya aur khud niche dharam se gir gaya… charo ore ghanghor andhera aur kewal sapon ke fufkar ki awaj aa rahi thi… "Nandu tu thik hai"…. "Nischal, mujhe kuch dikh nahi raha.. bahut dar lag raha hai"..


Nischal:- Dar mat, main hu na…


Nischal ne Nandni ko apne kandhe par rakh'kar usse pakda aur apni aakhe mundkar fir se dhyan lagaya.. uska dimag jaise Nandni ke charo ore ghum raha ho.. Nischal ko charo ore ka najara bhi saaf dikh raha tha..


Charo ore kewal sanp hi sanp the.. kayi sanp Nischal ke paun ko das rahe the, to kayi uske paun se mans noch rahe the. Nischal lekin apne jagah par khada, apna pura dhyan Nandni par lagaye huye tha..


Tabhi kayi sapon ne ek sath hawa me uchhal'kar Nandni par humla kiya. Jaise hi Nandni par sapon ne humla kiya, Nischal apne puri raftaar me aaya… sapon ke humla karne ki gati aisi thi ki wo yadi ek sath 1000 ki tadat me bhi humla karte, to bhi Nischal ko koi fark nahi parna tha…


Nischal apni puri raftaar se charo ore hath ghum'kar, ek sath sabhi sapon ko jamin me girakar dharasahi kar chuka tha…. "Dekho, tum alpaayu ho ya kya ho, mujhe nahi pata, kintu tum jo bhi kar rahe ho, bahut galat kar rahe ho. Please ye humla rok do, hum aapas me baith'kar baat kar sakte hain"


Nischal lagbhag minnate karte huye kaha, lekin humla aur bhi teji se hone laga… Nischal lagatar uss andhere me Nandni par ho rahe humle ko rokte…. "Maine kaha bus bhi karo tumlog, humne tumhara kya bigara hai"… Nischal ne ek aur kosis ki, lekin humle ki gati me kami aane ke badle briddhi hoti chali gayi.


Nischal:- Yaar Nandu, bade dhit hai ye..


Nandni:- Mujhe to kuch dikhai nahi de raha Nischal, tum kis se yahan baat kar rahe ho…


Nischal:- Ab ye jo koi bhi ho iss andhere me to inse nahi nipta ja sakta…


Nandni:- Mere pass bijli to hai..


Nischal:- lekin na to yahan bulb hai aur na hi itne sare jiv ko tum ek sath jhatke de paogi… shyad laaton ke bhut hai…….. Main to baat chit ka prastaw de raha tha, lekin tum to humle hi kiye ja rahe, aise thode na hota hai dost.. ab to yahan toofan uthega aur garaj tumhari iss mand me hogi"..


Nischal tej chinkh ke sath apna ek paun pura jamin par de mara.. aisa laga jaise wahan ka pura mahol hi kampan karne laga ho. Nischal ab kisi ko ghayal nahi karne wala tha balki sidha jaan se hi marta..


Nischal purn roop se apne humle ko taiyar tha, tabhi uske kano me aisi dhwani sunai pari, jis se uska dhyan tootne laga. Jabtak aakhen munde tha tab tak sab kuch saaf najar aa raha tha, lekin aankh ke khulte hi wo kuch dekh nahi pa raha tha..


Ek madhur prem ras dhwani jo Jivisha dwara chhodi gayi thi. Idhar Nischal ka bus ek pal ke liye dhyan toota aur udhar kayi lakh saanp Nischal ke upar ek sath humla kar chuke the. Nischal apne sharir me zahar ka tej asar bhi mehsus kar raha tha….


Uski gati atyant hi dhimi par gayi. Nandni bhi murchhit uske kandhe par pari thi aur uske kamar tak sapon ka ghrea pahunchne wala tha… tabhi Nischal ke chehre par muskan fail gayi…


Saapon ke iss mayawi jaal me Jivisha ki tej awaj aisi gunji ki mano wo kahar ban'kar baras rahi ho…. Har sanp ke gale me jaise moti rassi bandh'kar, puri takat se dono siron ko khinch diya gaya ho… wahan maujood anginat saanp, apna pura muh fare, swans lene ke liye chhapta rahe the, aur Jivisha ke sar par to mano khun sawar tha…


Jivisha apne dono hath hawa me lahrayi aur wahan ke vayu me purn pariwartan ho gaya… uss jagah par maujood har jiv hawa me jame huye the. Nischal ke aas pass ki jagah purn roop se khali ho chuki thi…


Jivisha ab unke purn safaye ki mansa se apne lahrate hath ko bhumi par marne wali thi, jiska yah natija hota ki hawa me jame saanp, bhumi par iss kadar takrate, ki unke chithre ho jate. Lekin tabhi Nischal pure jor se chillate huye kahne laga…..


"Ye sataye huye prani hai Jivisha, inhe mat maro… ye yahan bhumigat hone par majboor the… Main sampark tod raha hun.. shyad mujhme tej jahar ka asar ho raha hai… Nandu bhi behosh hai aur isse purn ilaj ki turant jaroorat hai. In praniyo ko mat maro… yahan aa kar Nandu ko dekho"..


Nischal apna sandesh kah'kar behosh ho gaya. Ussi ke pass Nandni bhi behosh pari thi.. Tabhi Jivisha kisi kaal ki tarah chinkhi…. "Yadi mere dost ko kuch hua to fir dobara tum sab pachtane ke liye jivit nahi rahoge… Meri jaan ke kahne par tum sab ko chhod rahi hun."


Jivisha apni baat kah'kar apni shakti un sapon ke upar se hatayi, aur wahin bhumi par baith gayi… dekhte hi dekhte wahan purn raushni ka shrijan hone laga aur andhera jab chhata, to anginat log apne ghutne par baithe sir jhukaye the..


"Tum sab kaun ho aur bina karan hume maarna kyon chah rahe the.." Jivisha ke aakhon me gussa aur shabdon se jaise bhay baras raha tha… wahan maujood har koi iss bhay ko mehsus kar raha tha…


"Rajkumari main yahan ki mukhiya Shwetna hun. Aap aur aapke logon par humla karna, humari bhul thi, kshma kar dijiye"… Nile rang ki dikhne wali ek kamsin si ladki, sir jhukaye apni jagah se khadi hoti hui kahne lagi..


Jivisha usse gusse me ghurna shuru ki aur wo dekhte hi dekhte apna gala pakde hawa me aa gayi. Apne mukhiya ko hawa me dekh, wahan ke log minnate karte "maafi maafi".. chillane lage…


Jivisha:- Sabhi ek dum khamosh. Meri dost kahan hai.. aur kaisi hai…


Lin:- Rajkumari mera naam Lin hai. Yahan ka main pratham mukhya sahayak hun…


"Kisi ka naam ya pahchan puchhi main. Meri dost kahan hai"…. Gambhir si awaz thi Jivisha ki aur aisa lag raha tha uske awaz ke sath hawa me tarang bhanwar banati charo ore tair rahi hai, jo har kisi ke sar me paglon ki tarah dard de rahi thi… har koi apna sar paglon ki tarah jhatkne ke liye vivash tha….


Lin:- Aap ke dono dost surakshit hain aur hum bhi aap ke he log hai. Apni ye trarang band kijiye, warna humara dimag fat jayeg"..


Lin ki baat sunkar Jivisha shant hoti hui aur tej-tej shwans lene lagi…. "Mere dost kahan hain, main unhe dekhna chahti hun.


Shwetna:- Rajkumari wo dono khatre ke bahar hain.. dono ka upchar chal raha hai… aap apne gusse ko shant kare aur in bebas mukh ko dekhe, jo aap ke aane ki pratiksha me na jane kabse aas lagaye the..


Jivisha:- Inhe bebas kahte hain to fir jalim kaun hoga… bebes to mera Nischal tha, jise ek ore fikr thi ki yahan rah rahe saanp, ya jo koi bhi tum log ho wo majboor hain. Uske kandhe par ek masoom si ladki hai, jo tumhare zahar ke asar se mar sakti hai… meri jaan ne minnat tak ki tum sab se, lekin kisi ne bhi suna kya.. haan batao…


Shwetna:- "4 pidhi jinki andheron me gujari ho Rajkumari, pichhle 800 salon se jisne suraj ki raushni na dekhi ho… hum bhi manushya hai.. lekin humari aabadi itni hai ki shayad hi kabhi manushya roop me rahte hai.. jyadatar sanp bane hi ghumte hain aur jinda rahne ke liye kiron-makodon ko khane ke liye vivas hai."


"Aise me pata chale ki humara haal karne walon me se koi yahan humari jamin par ghum raha hai, fir kaun samjhega minnat aur kaun samjhega ki humne anjaane me aise logon ko pakda hai jo nirdosh hai… kyonki 4 pidhi bitne baad to sari ummid hi khatam ho chali hai…


Jivisha, puri tarah hairan hoti…. "800 saal se tum logon ne upar jamin par kadam nahi rakhe. Aisa kya ho gaya tha?"..


Shwetna:- Ji haan 800 sal Rajkumari. Humara itihas kayi hazaron varsh purana hai, lekin bilkul chhipa hua. NilBhut samuday se humlog hain, Pratham rani, Vish Kritima ki praja, jo iss Zoren grah ke mul niwasi hain… Vish Kritima alokik shaktiyon ki devi hua karti thi, jiske gun unki agli pidhi me se kisi ek ko mil jati thi. Jinke pass bhi yah gun hota, wo swabhaw ki kafi chanchal aur itni milansar hua karti thi ki dekh'kar koi kah nahi sakta ki wo alokik shaktiyon ki malkin hai aur ek pure samuday ki sanchalak.


Hum yahan anya 5 samudayon ke sath bade hi shanti se raha karte the. Yahan ke sabhi samudayon ki alag-alag seema thi, jisme sabse bada samuday Takshat (Mahamahim ka Samuday) ka tha, kyonki wo log marte kam the aur paida jyada lete the. Humara samuday NilaBhut ko bhu-vashi bhi kahte the, kyonki jyadatar hum jamin par hi rahna pasand karte the.. anya samudayon ki tarah na to hum unchi building banana pasand karte the aur na hi bahut jyada technology ka prasar pasand tha.. Hum apni sabhyata me jite the, apni mulbhut jaroorton ke liye mehnat karte aur bache samay me pariwar aur apne samuday ke sath jashn manate rahte..


Takriban 800 varsh purv ye Takshat samuday ka ek parbhakshi (parasite) Mittoso (Mahamahim) satta me aaya tha, wo bhi aap ke ek jo mitr hain Viggo, unke purvajon ki wajah se. Ek baar wo satta me kya aaya, humari duniya hi usne ujar kar rakh di…


Uss waqt Vishi Kritma ki vansaj, Visi Nilayani humara pratinidhitwa karti thi. Unke aur uss parijivi Mittoso ke bich kya hua tha wo to pata nahi, lekin Visi Nilayani apne mirtu ke purv, apne ansh ko apni 6 bahno me bant'kar badi hi dardnak mirtu mari thi.


Unki aagya anusar 6 bahne, 6 dur ke kisi grah me chali gayi. Yadi suni sunayi baat ko mane to kaha ye jata hai ki NilBhut samuday ke logon ki tarah hi Viggo samuday bhi tha, bhole log jinhe koi bhi chhal sakta ho… Mittoso ne Viggo ko chhala tha aur pahle to satta hathiya liya, fir unhi Viggo ke banaye kisi upkaran ke karan Visi Nilayani apni shaktiyon ka prayog nahi kar payi thi, kintu wo purvanuman kar chuki thi isliye pahle hi apni bahno ko yahan se kafi dur bhej dee aur kahi thi….


"Jahan ke manusya me buddhi ka vikas sabse atydhik hoga, jo saaf dil ke hone bawjood kisi chhaliya ke majboot se majboot bhrm jaal todne me sakshm hogi, jise fasane ke chakkar me kapti khud fas jaynge, jiske purvanuman ko koi thag na sake, bhale hi wo kitna achha hone ka natak hi kyon na kar le, ussi me Vishi Kritima ke alokik shaktiyon ka srijan hoga aur wo apne sabhi sawalon ke jawab ke liye yahan jaroor pahunchegi, apne logon ke bich, fir chahe aane ka karan kuch bhi ho, ya fir jariya koi bhi ho."
nice update...jivisha inki rani hai aisa lagta hai ...
 

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Ye story likhne wala bhi alien to nahi hai. Ek hafte me itne sare updates likh liye aur ab dhada - dhad chap rahe he. Is writer par puri shanka ho rahi hai. Advitiya prani wo bhi unclassified :wink: :D

Wese alien sahab kya updates diye h yrr kamal krte ho. Esi barish ka hi to intazaar tha. Dil puri tarah se tript ho gaya.

Bus 10-11 update me hi ... 25 update bhi chhap raha hun .. pata na itne ek sath dekhkar aap mujhe alian ke sath sath aur na jane kya kya ghoshit kar de :D

Well ... Fantasy hai ye....kahan aap isme mujhe ghusa rahe hain bindass babu... Apan to small town ka small sa chhoda hai jo sab ko entertain kar raha aur khud entertain ho raha
 

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nice update ....jivisha theek bhi ho gayi aur ab nishchal ko sata bhi rahi hai ?...to jatin ki team sambhog karke urja leti thi prithvi par ...
Urja sambhog se na milta tha Leon bhai.. sambhog ke baad indriyan purn jagrit hoti thi uske baad uske badan ko chir kar uske ander ke organ ko jinda chabakar urja leti thi :D
 
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