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Fantasy Invincible - Too strong to defeat

ankuraggar

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Prologue

balavaan ekaakee hote hain. akelepan par kaaboo paane se aap sheersh par ajey khade ho sakate hain.

Dharatee par shaolin mandir ke samarthak shishy Vikram ka martial spirit world ki duniya mein Hua ziya technique ka gupt gyaan, the Body Metamorphose Scripture lye punarjanam hua.

Ek martial spirit world ki duniya mein, keval martial spirit vaale hee yuddh kalao mein prashikshit karane aur yoddha banane mein saksham hain.

Vikram - ek svarg-viral durlabh maarshal aatma ke saath paida hua jo galati se janajaati dvaara aayojit jaagaran samaaroh ke dauraan aam sanskaran martial spirit ke lie liya gaya tha aur is prakaar darakinaar kar diya gaya tha.

Haalaanki, Vikram apane aam "sanskaran" martial spirit ke saath apraakrtik pratibha pradarshit kee, pratibhaon ko paraast karate hue, kabeele aur poore martial spirit world ko chaunka diya.

Iss kahani mein hum yhi sab padhenge ki kya hua aage.
 

ankuraggar

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Chapter 01: Wind Snow Continent

Update 1:


Raat dheere-dheere shaant tareeke se basane lagee aur chamakeele taare dikhaee dene lage.

Pahaadee par, lagabhag 7 saal ka ek bachcha ek ajeeb sthiti mein khada tha. bachche ke pair alag ho gae the, pair kee ungaliyon ko jameen se chhoote hue oonchee edee ke joote, haathon ko sir ke oopar ooncha uthaaya, usaka sir jhuka hua tha, aur behosh.

Aadhyaatmik oorja lagaataar usake chhote shareer ke bheetar chakkar laga rahee thee.

Bachche ke shareer ko dhankate hue chaandanee chamak uthee.

Ladake ne is vichitr sthiti mein apana abhyaas jaaree rakha, apane shareer mein aadhyaatmik oorja ka sanchaar karate hue ise apane madhyaahn mein pravaahit kiya.

Raat dheere-dheere beet gaee. jaise-jaise chaandanee pheekee padati gyi, dhoop kee pahalee kiranon kee jagah bachche ne dheere-dheere apanee hatheliyon ko neeche kiya.

Uskee aankhen gaharee, gaharee putaliyon ko prakat karane ke lie khuleen, jinase prateet hota tha ki unake bheetar ek gaharee sunaharee chamak hai.

Vikram ne munh se durgandh bharee hava se saans lee, usakee aankhen ugate sooraj ko dekh rahee theen.

Jis din uska janm hua tha us din se lekar aaj tak use is duniya mein aae saat saal ho chuke hain.

Unhonne teen saal kee umr mein the Body Metamorphose Scripture ka abhyaas shuroo kar diya tha.

Ab chaar saal baad, vo third stage: Palm propping the sky gate tak pahunchane mein saphal rahe.

Apane pichhale jeevan mein, unake poorvajon ne shaolin mandir ke banner tale prashikshan liya tha aur the Body Metamorphose Scripture unhe unke poorvajon se viraasat mein mila tha.

Ab tak, Vikram is kaaran ko samajhane mein asamarth rahe the ki unake jaisa koee, jo apane samay mein martial art vilakshan ke roop mein pratishthit tha, ko is duniya mein laaya gaya tha.

Aur Vikram ko sabase jyaada udaas karane vaalee baat yah thee ki vah ek navajaat bachche ke shareer mein jaga tha.

Vikram ne apanee chhotee patalee bhujaon ko dekha aur khatta muskuraaya “vah apane pichhale jeevan mein satrah varsh kee aayu tak pahunch chuke the, aur chaudah saal kee kadee mehanat ke baad, unhonne the Body Metamorphose Scripture mein nauven charan tak prashikshan praapt karane mein kaamayaabee haasil kee thee, lekin kabhee bhee unhonne yah nahin socha hoga ki unhen shuroo karana hoga phir se”.

Is pal mein, vikram ne pahaadee kee disha se aane vaale nakshekadam kee naram sarasaraahat sunee

Vikram jaanata tha ki yah kaun hai aur nishchit roop se, jald hee ek pyari si masoom si aawaz aayi: "big brother, mujhe pata hai ki aap yahaan sooryoday dekhane ke lie hain. pitaajee aur maan aapakee talaash kar rahe hain."

Vikram ne dayi taraf ko dekha aur ek chhotee si paanch saal ki bachchee dikhayi di jisakee badee-badee gol aankhen theen aur baal do lambi chotiyon mein latake hue the,

Ye chhoti ladaki Vikram ki bahan thi, Arushi.

Aaj k liye itna hi (Total words 2850)
 
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DAIVIK-RAJ

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Chapter 01: Wind Snow Continent

Update 1:


Raat dheere-dheere shaant tareeke se basane lagee aur chamakeele taare dikhaee dene lage.

Pahaadee par, lagabhag 7 saal ka ek bachcha ek ajeeb sthiti mein khada tha. bachche ke pair alag ho gae the, pair kee ungaliyon ko jameen se chhoote hue oonchee edee ke joote, haathon ko sir ke oopar ooncha uthaaya, usaka sir jhuka hua tha, aur behosh.

Aadhyaatmik oorja lagaataar usake chhote shareer ke bheetar chakkar laga rahee thee.

Bachche ke shareer ko dhankate hue chaandanee chamak uthee.

Ladake ne is vichitr sthiti mein apana abhyaas jaaree rakha, apane shareer mein aadhyaatmik oorja ka sanchaar karate hue ise apane madhyaahn mein pravaahit kiya.

Raat dheere-dheere beet gaee. jaise-jaise chaandanee pheekee padati gyi, dhoop kee pahalee kiranon kee jagah bachche ne dheere-dheere apanee hatheliyon ko neeche kiya.

Uskee aankhen gaharee, gaharee putaliyon ko prakat karane ke lie khuleen, jinase prateet hota tha ki unake bheetar ek gaharee sunaharee chamak hai.

Vikram ne munh se durgandh bharee hava se saans lee, usakee aankhen ugate sooraj ko dekh rahee theen.

Jis din uska janm hua tha us din se lekar aaj tak use is duniya mein aae saat saal ho chuke hain.

Unhonne teen saal kee umr mein the Body Metamorphose Scripture ka abhyaas shuroo kar diya tha.

Ab chaar saal baad, vo third stage: Palm propping the sky gate tak pahunchane mein saphal rahe.

Apane pichhale jeevan mein, unake poorvajon ne shaolin mandir ke banner tale prashikshan liya tha aur the Body Metamorphose Scripture unhe unke poorvajon se viraasat mein mila tha.

Ab tak, Vikram is kaaran ko samajhane mein asamarth rahe the ki unake jaisa koee, jo apane samay mein martial art vilakshan ke roop mein pratishthit tha, ko is duniya mein laaya gaya tha.

Aur Vikram ko sabase jyaada udaas karane vaalee baat yah thee ki vah ek navajaat bachche ke shareer mein jaga tha.

Vikram ne apanee chhotee patalee bhujaon ko dekha aur khatta muskuraaya “vah apane pichhale jeevan mein satrah varsh kee aayu tak pahunch chuke the, aur chaudah saal kee kadee mehanat ke baad, unhonne the Body Metamorphose Scripture mein nauven charan tak prashikshan praapt karane mein kaamayaabee haasil kee thee, lekin kabhee bhee unhonne yah nahin socha hoga ki unhen shuroo karana hoga phir se”.

Is pal mein, vikram ne pahaadee kee disha se aane vaale nakshekadam kee naram sarasaraahat sunee

Vikram jaanata tha ki yah kaun hai aur nishchit roop se, jald hee ek pyari si masoom si aawaz aayi: "big brother, mujhe pata hai ki aap yahaan sooryoday dekhane ke lie hain. pitaajee aur maan aapakee talaash kar rahe hain."

Vikram ne dayi taraf ko dekha aur ek chhotee si paanch saal ki bachchee dikhayi di jisakee badee-badee gol aankhen theen aur baal do lambi chotiyon mein latake hue the,

Ye chhoti ladaki Vikram ki bahan thi, Arushi.

Aaj k liye itna hi (Total words 2850)
Nice mind blowing update brother
 

ABHISHEK TRIPATHI

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Chapter 01: Wind Snow Continent

Update 1:


Raat dheere-dheere shaant tareeke se basane lagee aur chamakeele taare dikhaee dene lage.

Pahaadee par, lagabhag 7 saal ka ek bachcha ek ajeeb sthiti mein khada tha. bachche ke pair alag ho gae the, pair kee ungaliyon ko jameen se chhoote hue oonchee edee ke joote, haathon ko sir ke oopar ooncha uthaaya, usaka sir jhuka hua tha, aur behosh.

Aadhyaatmik oorja lagaataar usake chhote shareer ke bheetar chakkar laga rahee thee.

Bachche ke shareer ko dhankate hue chaandanee chamak uthee.

Ladake ne is vichitr sthiti mein apana abhyaas jaaree rakha, apane shareer mein aadhyaatmik oorja ka sanchaar karate hue ise apane madhyaahn mein pravaahit kiya.

Raat dheere-dheere beet gaee. jaise-jaise chaandanee pheekee padati gyi, dhoop kee pahalee kiranon kee jagah bachche ne dheere-dheere apanee hatheliyon ko neeche kiya.

Uskee aankhen gaharee, gaharee putaliyon ko prakat karane ke lie khuleen, jinase prateet hota tha ki unake bheetar ek gaharee sunaharee chamak hai.

Vikram ne munh se durgandh bharee hava se saans lee, usakee aankhen ugate sooraj ko dekh rahee theen.

Jis din uska janm hua tha us din se lekar aaj tak use is duniya mein aae saat saal ho chuke hain.

Unhonne teen saal kee umr mein the Body Metamorphose Scripture ka abhyaas shuroo kar diya tha.

Ab chaar saal baad, vo third stage: Palm propping the sky gate tak pahunchane mein saphal rahe.

Apane pichhale jeevan mein, unake poorvajon ne shaolin mandir ke banner tale prashikshan liya tha aur the Body Metamorphose Scripture unhe unke poorvajon se viraasat mein mila tha.

Ab tak, Vikram is kaaran ko samajhane mein asamarth rahe the ki unake jaisa koee, jo apane samay mein martial art vilakshan ke roop mein pratishthit tha, ko is duniya mein laaya gaya tha.

Aur Vikram ko sabase jyaada udaas karane vaalee baat yah thee ki vah ek navajaat bachche ke shareer mein jaga tha.

Vikram ne apanee chhotee patalee bhujaon ko dekha aur khatta muskuraaya “vah apane pichhale jeevan mein satrah varsh kee aayu tak pahunch chuke the, aur chaudah saal kee kadee mehanat ke baad, unhonne the Body Metamorphose Scripture mein nauven charan tak prashikshan praapt karane mein kaamayaabee haasil kee thee, lekin kabhee bhee unhonne yah nahin socha hoga ki unhen shuroo karana hoga phir se”.

Is pal mein, vikram ne pahaadee kee disha se aane vaale nakshekadam kee naram sarasaraahat sunee

Vikram jaanata tha ki yah kaun hai aur nishchit roop se, jald hee ek pyari si masoom si aawaz aayi: "big brother, mujhe pata hai ki aap yahaan sooryoday dekhane ke lie hain. pitaajee aur maan aapakee talaash kar rahe hain."

Vikram ne dayi taraf ko dekha aur ek chhotee si paanch saal ki bachchee dikhayi di jisakee badee-badee gol aankhen theen aur baal do lambi chotiyon mein latake hue the,

Ye chhoti ladaki Vikram ki bahan thi, Arushi.

Aaj k liye itna hi (Total words 2850)
Nice start
 
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