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Fantasy Invincible - Too strong to defeat

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ankuraggar said:
Prologue

balavaan ekaakee hote hain. akelepan par kaaboo paane se aap sheersh par ajey khade ho sakate hain.

Dharatee par shaolin mandir ke samarthak shishy Vikram ka martial spirit world ki duniya mein Hua ziya technique ka gupt gyaan, the Body Metamorphose Scripture lye punarjanam hua.

Ek martial spirit world ki duniya mein, keval martial spirit vaale hee yuddh kalao mein prashikshit karane aur yoddha banane mein saksham hain.

Vikram - ek svarg-viral durlabh maarshal aatma ke saath paida hua jo galati se janajaati dvaara aayojit jaagaran samaaroh ke dauraan aam sanskaran martial spirit ke lie liya gaya tha aur is prakaar darakinaar kar diya gaya tha.

Haalaanki, Vikram apane aam "sanskaran" martial spirit ke saath apraakrtik pratibha pradarshit kee, pratibhaon ko paraast karate hue, kabeele aur poore martial spirit world ko chaunka diya.

Iss kahani mein hum yhi sab padhenge ki kya hua aage.
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Chapter 01: Wind Snow Continent

Update 1:

Raat dheere-dheere shaant tareeke se basane lagee aur chamakeele taare dikhaee dene lage.

Pahaadee par, lagabhag 7 saal ka ek bachcha ek ajeeb sthiti mein khada tha. bachche ke pair alag ho gae the, pair kee ungaliyon ko jameen se chhoote hue oonchee edee ke joote, haathon ko sir ke oopar ooncha uthaaya, usaka sir jhuka hua tha, aur behosh.

Aadhyaatmik oorja lagaataar usake chhote shareer ke bheetar chakkar laga rahee thee.

Bachche ke shareer ko dhankate hue chaandanee chamak uthee.

Ladake ne is vichitr sthiti mein apana abhyaas jaaree rakha, apane shareer mein aadhyaatmik oorja ka sanchaar karate hue ise apane madhyaahn mein pravaahit kiya.

Raat dheere-dheere beet gaee. jaise-jaise chaandanee pheekee padati gyi, dhoop kee pahalee kiranon kee jagah bachche ne dheere-dheere apanee hatheliyon ko neeche kiya.

Uskee aankhen gaharee, gaharee putaliyon ko prakat karane ke lie khuleen, jinase prateet hota tha ki unake bheetar ek gaharee sunaharee chamak hai.

Vikram ne munh se durgandh bharee hava se saans lee, usakee aankhen ugate sooraj ko dekh rahee theen.

Jis din uska janm hua tha us din se lekar aaj tak use is duniya mein aae saat saal ho chuke hain.

Unhonne teen saal kee umr mein the Body Metamorphose Scripture ka abhyaas shuroo kar diya tha.

Ab chaar saal baad, vo third stage: Palm propping the sky gate tak pahunchane mein saphal rahe.

Apane pichhale jeevan mein, unake poorvajon ne shaolin mandir ke banner tale prashikshan liya tha aur the Body Metamorphose Scripture unhe unke poorvajon se viraasat mein mila tha.

Ab tak, Vikram is kaaran ko samajhane mein asamarth rahe the ki unake jaisa koee, jo apane samay mein martial art vilakshan ke roop mein pratishthit tha, ko is duniya mein laaya gaya tha.

Aur Vikram ko sabase jyaada udaas karane vaalee baat yah thee ki vah ek navajaat bachche ke shareer mein jaga tha.

Vikram ne apanee chhotee patalee bhujaon ko dekha aur khatta muskuraaya “vah apane pichhale jeevan mein satrah varsh kee aayu tak pahunch chuke the, aur chaudah saal kee kadee mehanat ke baad, unhonne the Body Metamorphose Scripture mein nauven charan tak prashikshan praapt karane mein kaamayaabee haasil kee thee, lekin kabhee bhee unhonne yah nahin socha hoga ki unhen shuroo karana hoga phir se”.

Is pal mein, vikram ne pahaadee kee disha se aane vaale nakshekadam kee naram sarasaraahat sunee

Vikram jaanata tha ki yah kaun hai aur nishchit roop se, jald hee ek pyari si masoom si aawaz aayi: "big brother, mujhe pata hai ki aap yahaan sooryoday dekhane ke lie hain. pitaajee aur maan aapakee talaash kar rahe hain."

Vikram ne dayi taraf ko dekha aur ek chhotee si paanch saal ki bachchee dikhayi di jisakee badee-badee gol aankhen theen aur baal do lambi chotiyon mein latake hue the,

Ye chhoti ladaki Vikram ki bahan thi, Arushi.

Aaj k liye itna hi (Total words 2850)
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Chapter 01: Wind Snow Continent (continue)

Update - 2

Arushi ke alaava, Vikram ka ek aur bhai tha, jo arushi se teen saal chhota tha.

"maa aur pitaajee mujhe dhoondh rahe hain?" Vikram ne poochha. "kya baat hai?"

"mujhe nahin pata." Arushi ne maasoomiyat se bola, "bhai, vaapas chale, agar hamen der ho gai, to maan aur pitaajee aapaki peeth thapathapaenge!"

jab vikram ne yeh suna, to vah muskuraaya aur Chalne se pahale Arushi k pyaare chhote gaalon ko Kheench diya, "chalo chalen".

Arushi ne us sthaan ko ragad diya, jahaan Vikram ne uska chhota sa chehara kheencha tha, usane chutakee lete hue kaha: "bhai, tum sach mein gande ho.

mainne tumase kaha hai na, mere gaalon ko mat kheencha karo!"

haalaanki, jaise hee Arushi ne bolana samaapt kiya, usake gaal ko ek baar phir vikram dvaara kheencha gaya au raise karte hi wo bhaagane laga aur us dauran dil kholakar hansa tha.

Arushi ne chillaate hue usaka peechha kiya, pakadane kee koshish kee. "bhai, bhaago mat!"

jab tak ve pahaadee par sthit Dawalgarh kabeele ki sarhad mein vaapas nahin aae, tab tak bhai-bahan ne pahaadee ke neeche ki aur doaud laga di.

Yadyapi vikram apane pichhale jeevan mein pahale se hi satrah varsh ka tha, lekin usaki bahan Arushi ke saath hone ke kaaran vah us bachche ko baahar le aaya, jo abhi wo tha.

jald hi, bhai-bahan Dawalgarh kabeele ki sarahd mein aa gye. Kabeele mein aate hi, Vikram seedhe poorvee kortayaard ke mukhay hole kei aur jaata hai.

jab veh mukhay hole mein pahunchta hai, to vahaan ek vidvaan vyakti jo madhyam aayu varg ka tha aur ek uch kursi par baitha tha.

unake bagal mein ek sundar mahila thi. Ye shaadeeshuda joda aurkoi nhi Vikram ke maata-pita the.

Unke pita Jairaj, aur unakee maa, Minakshi.

"pitaajee, maan, aap mujhe dhoondh rahe the?" Vikram ne holemein aate hi pucha.

Jairaj ne apani tej talavaar kee tarah bhoye uthai aur bole "aap itanee subah kahaan bhaage the?"

"yah theek hai kya, bachche ko darao mat." Minakshi ne muskuraate hue jairaj se kaha aur phir vikram ki taraf palti aur boli ki tumhare pitaji tums eek jruri baat krna chahte hai.

Jairaj ne muskurate huye kaha “ nhi Minakshi iss baat ko batane ka hak tumahara hai mera nhi isliye tum hi batao”

Minakshi ne vikram ki aur muskurate huye dekhkr kaha. "Vikram, kuch hi dinon mein aap saat saal ke ho jayenge. Aapake shareer mein martial art ki bhaavana jaagrit karane ka samay aa gaya hai. aapake pita aur main aapako martial world mein laane ki yojana bana rahe hain aur wo samaroh hai “Martial art jaagrti samaaroh. ”

Abhi k liye itna hi.....
 
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