Update:-1
Yatrigan kripya dhyan de Pune-Indore Express ki platform sankhya badal dee gayi hai.. Ab wo platform number 2 ke badle 5 par aayegi.. Aap ko hui asuvidha ke liye hume khed hai...
Jaise hi yah announcement hua, 40-50 ladkon ki bhid ek sath hungama karte huye kahne lage... "Huhhhh !!!! Ye railway wale, kha-m-kha pareshan kar rahe"…
Bhid ko awaj sunkar police wale daure chale aaye, aur tabhi wahan par ek ladka khada hokar kahne laga... "Aap sabhi followers se nivedan hai ki jyada shor na kare, isse madam ko aur any yatriyon ko taklif hoti hai..
"Huh, in railway walon ko to bus announcement karne aata hai.. aapko hui asuvidha ke liye khed hai".. Jaise hi yah announcement hua Jivisha platform kramank 2 se uthkar 5 par jane lali...
Bla ki khubsurat, jiske chehre ki chamak itni tej thi ki aas pass ke log na chahte huye bhi uske chehre ko dekhne lagte.. uski wo nili aakhen itni madhosh kar dene wali thi ki jis par najar bhar dhal'kar dekh le, wahin apne sine par hath dhal'kar baith jaye..
Is hushn par uske sarir ki banawat, bilkul chharhara badan, patli kamar aur aakrshit karne wale uroj.. kul milkar jise dekh'kar ek bar to gahri shwans khinch'kar khud se hi sawal karne lago… "Kaun hogi ye".. baki khatrnak armano ki to charcha he chhod dijiye...
Railway ki announcement par Jivisha gusse me uth'kar jab platform number 5 ke ore ja rahi thi, uske piche jane wale aashikon ki koi kami nahi thi... Aisa lag raha tha ek jagah ki puri bhid khali ho gayi hai…
"Alexa khyal rahe koi mujhe iriitate na kare aur na hi ashlil harkat. Aur abhadr comments huye to fir"… Jivisha ithla'kar chalti hui, usi ladke se kahne lagi, jisne announcement ke baad ladkon ki bhid ko samjha'kar chup karwaya tha, aur unhe shant rahne ki hidayat diya tha...
Alexa:- Don't worry Jivisha, mere hote huye koi dusra aise karne ki himmat nahi kar sakta.. .
Jivisha ghur'kar apne bayen dekhti... "Alexa, are you joking"
Alexa:- No miss !!! Alexa is in the mood of flirting...
Jivisha:- Alexa ab mai tumse baat nahi karungi…
Alexa:- To fir khana nahi pachega tumhara...
"Alexaaaaaaaa"…. Jivisha dhime se nakiyati hui kahne lagi... Pratikriya me Alexa ne smile dete kaha... "Looking aweosme today, smile please"…
Jivisha mobile thi to Alexa uske ghar ke bahar ka network. Bahar jahan bhi wo hoti Alexa usse company deta.. Haalanki uska naam kya tha ye to Jivisha ne bhi kabhi nahi puchhi, lekin ek wahi cute sa ladka tha jiski company Jivisha ko bahut pyari lagti aur uske javab dene ke andaj ko dekhkar uska naam Alexa rakh dee...
Jivisha pahunchi platform number 5 par aur jahan wo baithi wahan charo ore achanak he bhid bhad badh gayi.. isi bich dhuvan udati aur horn bajati hui train bhi pahunch gayi.. Jivisha jakar B3 coach ke pass khadi ho gayi…
Train lagi aur train se Jivisha ki sabse pyari saheli, Nandni apna bag liye utar rahi thi... Nandni jaise hi niche utri... "Kaisi hai meri Nandu"… Jivisha pure utsah ke sath gale lagti aur utni hi fiki prakriya ke sath Nandni, Jivisha ke gale lagti khud se hi kahne lagi… "football he bana de mujhe"…
"Arreeeeeeee, tu to kuch bol hi nahi rahi"… Jivisha, Nandni se alag hote hui kahne lagi…
Nandni:- Maine socha pahle tujhe hi pura bolne dun.. kyonki mai kuch bolti to tu bich me rok'kar mujhe kuchh kahne lagti.. iss se achha mai sochi tujhe hi mauka de diya jaye…
Jivisha:- Tera to ilaj karwana hoga Nandu, bahut tane dena sikh gayi hai...
Nandni kya javab de kuch samjh me he nahi aaya isliye bade aaram se kahne lagi, "Ghar chalegi ya saari baten yahin par kar legi"…
"Haan-haan, ghar hi to le jane aayi hun tujhe.… Aaaaaaaaaaaa... Pagal andha kahin ka, dekh kar nahi chal sakte"….
Jivisha, Nandni se baat kar hi rahi thi ki tabhi ek ladka daudta hua aaya aur dono ke bich se dhakka dekar bhagne laga.. jaise hi Jivisha chillayi, takriban 40-50 ladke ek sath chillaye... "Sale Jivisha ko dhakke markar bhagta hai.. pakad sale ko"…. Aur dekhte hi dekhte ladkon ki bhid daud'kar us ladke ko pakadne ki kosis me jut gaye...
Nandni:- Ab ye mat kahna ki ye bhis tere followers hai..
Jivisha:- bilkul sahi samjhi hai.. inme se tujhe koi pasand ho to bata dena... Teri setting karwa dungi..
Nandni:- Duffer kyon pran lene par tuli hai... Meri shadi pahle se ho gayi hai..
Jivisha:- Yaad mat dila fir tu, chupchap shadi kar li aur mujhe bataya tak nahi..
Pass hi ek piller tha, Nandni us piller par apna sar patakti… "sala kisne tere dimag ka reset button dabaya hai, uska gala ghont dungi main"…
Jivisha:- Aree aree aree.. mujhe Azad karwane wale ka gala ghontegi to mai tera divorce karwa dunga..
Nandni:- Mera divorce baad me karwana pahle apne aashikon ko sambhal...
Dono jabtak baten kar rahi thi, tabtak Jivisha ke aashikon ki bhid ne puri mehnat karke us ladke ko pakad laya, aur lakar Jivisha ke samne khada kar diya.. itne me he ek ladka sharmate huye... "Jivisha ise maine pakda"…
Najren nichi karke wo apne aediyon se jamin ko maslate is kadar Sharma raha tha ki Nandni aur Jivisha apni aakhen badi kiye use he dekhne lagi…
Jivisha:- Bhai tum pahle khud ko to sambhalna sikh lo... Aur tum sab aise bhid laga'kar.… Please irritate mat karo.. wo Alexa kidhar hai..
Nandni:- What !!! Alexa …
Jivisha:- Yes Alexa..
Nandni, apna bag uthati.. "Bus kar bahan chal yahan se ghar chalte hai.. tera pagalpan to din-w-din badhta ja raha hai"..
Jivisha:- Chup'kar, Alexa where r ju....
Alexa:- Present here..
Jivisha:- Alexa yahan ke bidh ko kinare karke is ladke ko meri car me bithao, akele me hisab kitab lungi ki ye mujhe dhakka mar'kar bina sorry bole kyon chala gaya..
Ladka:- Dekho mera naam Vyom hai.. aur mere piche log pade the isliye mai bhag raha tha... Ab chhodo mujhe aur jane do..
Jivisha, us ladke Vyom ko upar se niche tak dekhti… "Achhe mast hatte-katte gabdu ho... Chehre se thode pareshan jaroor dikh rahe ho lekin itne bhi nirash nahi lagte ki apna naam vyog rakh lo"..
Vyom kandhe ko jhatakte huye khud ko 2 ladkon ki pakad se chhudate…. "Bahut hi ghatiya kosis thi joke karne ki, chhodo ab rasta do, aur apne namuno ko sambhalo"…
Vyom, Nandni aur Jivisha ko kinare karte huye wahan se nikal gaya.. Jivisha uski baat par kuchh der tak sochne ke baad… "Alexa abhi ye kya bol'kar gaya"..
Alexa:- Tum bahut badi jhalli ho.. duffer ki synonyms ho..
Jivisha:- Alexa !!!!
Alexa:- Tumne puchha to bataya..
Nandni Alexa aur Jivisha wala drama dekh'kar jod-jod se hansti hui kahne lagi… "Wo ladka gaya bhi aur tu khadi khadi dekhti rah gayi.. chal ab"…
Dono thodi hi der me ek bunglow ke bahar khade the, jispar swarn villa likha hua tha… Nandni subah-subah pahunchi thi aur pura pariwar hall me hi chay par mil gaya..
Nandni ko dekh'kar lagbhag uska pura pariwar ander hi ander hans rahe the, jiski gawahi un sabke chehre de rahe the... Nandni un sabko dekh'kar apna bag darwaje par hi patakti… "Hans lo aap log lekin koi is nautanki ko mat samjhana"…
Jivisha:- Oye tu kyon itna chidhti hai.. dekh post graduation hum kar nahi paye to 2 sal sath rahkar kar lete hai.. kaun si badi baat hai...
"O bawri meri shadi ho gayi hai tu samjhti kyon nahi... Aur teri bhi to.." kahte huye Nandni khamosh ho gayi...
Jivisha:- Tu chill maar mere bade papa, Sudhanshu Rajput, ke yahan tera wo doctor aa sakta hai tujhse milne ke liye, itni chinta mat kar.. aur fir 2 sal ki baat hai, Kasak ke sath yun nikal jayenge.. tu thak gayi hogi aaram kar le...
Nandni apna bag lekar upar chali gayi aur Jivisha sabke bich baith'ti hui kahne lagi.. "Papa mai kya soch rahi thi"..
Papa Himamshu... "Haan beta tu kya soch rahi thi"…
Jivisha:- Mai soch rahi thi ki post graduation ke sath-sath na mai IPS ki bhi taiyari karun..
Himanshu apni beti ki baat sunkar chay me biskut dubo'kar kuch der chhodte huye... "Jivisha beta is biscut aur chay ki kahani se tum kya sikhi"..
Jivisha:- Yahi ki koi to gahri baat hai jo aap is chay me ghul chuki biscut ke madhyam se samjhana chahte hai.. shayad ye previous year ke IPS interview me puchha gaya sawal hai na papa..
Jivisha ka jawab sunkar piche se khi-khi ki awaj aane lagi. Itne me Swarn Villa Ghar ke sabse chhota sadsya aur Jivisha ke bade bhaiya Ravi aur Bhabhi Nandita ka Beta Chirag, apna school bag uthaye, honthon par "Tera hone laga hun, jabse mila hun" geet gungunate chala ja raha rha tha...
Himanshu:- Chirag yahan aa..
Chirag:- Off O dadu kitni baar bola hun ki school jate waqt distrub mat kiya karo, mujhe der se school pahunchne ki aadat nahi...
Maa Priya Rajput:- Mera ladla pota, kitni pareshani hoti hogi na tujhe dur school jane me.. yahan pados ka school bhi ab higher secondary ho gaya hai.. mai soch rahi thi, sixth class se baki ki padhai yahin pados ki school se kar leta..
Chirag:- Are nahi dadi, aap logon ke liye ek din school deri se chala jaunga, koi badi baat hai kya?
Himanshu:- Chirag ek baat bata, ye maine biscute dali chay ke cup me.. isse tu kya samjha..
Chirag:- Mere sath timepass kar rahe ho taki main school deri se jaun.. jab baat sajis ki ho rahi hai to aaj is ghar me faisla ho hi jaye..
Chirag ki maa aur Jivisha ki bhabhi Nandita, Chirag ko aankhen dikhati... "Juban jyada lambi hoti ja rahi hai kya, chal chupchap school ja"..
Jivisha:- Huhh ! Acha nahi hoga mere bache ko kisi ne chheda to.. betu tu school ja.. papa aap kya kahna chahte ho sidhe kah do na, baat kyon ghuma rahe ho..
Himanshu:- Isme baat kya ghumana hai beta.. jaise chay me biscute dubo'kar mai time pass kar raha, waise tu bhi IPS preparation ke naam par time pass kar rahi. Pahle bina chit kiye koi to exam pass kar le.. IPS banegi... Charprasi bhi ban jaye na to paun dho'kar pi lunga..
Jivisha apne dono hath aage dikhati… "Bas Mukhiya ji, itni bejjati aaj ke liye kafi hai.. Ab to mai jabtak Ips nahi ban jati .. tabtak sochungi ki kya karna hai.. lekin aap yah mat samjhna ki mai ye baat bhul gayi... Mukhiya ji ab junoon si hogi IPS banne ki..
Priya:- Best of luck beta.. IPS na bhi ban saki to gum mat karna… PS to pahle se hai..
Jivisha, apni maa Priya ko sawaliya najron se dekhti... "PS ka matlab maa"..
Priya:- Wahi beta jo tere naam ke aage suit karta hai.. Pagli-Sanki Jivisha.. short me PS Jivisha..
"Huh".. karti hui Jivisha wahan se uth'kar sidhe pahunchi apne ksmre me, jahan Nandni bistar par leti thi.. Jivisha uske pass let'ti.. "Ac compartment se aayi hai, fir bhi leti hai, chal uth.. pahle kuch kha le fir sona"…
Nandni:- Subah bhukh lagi thi to station par daba'kar bread omelet khayi thi..
Jivisha:- Chal na uth bhi ja, kitna soyegi.. din me so lena na... Mujhe tere sath dher sari baten karni hai.. aur tumhare doctor se bhi..
Nandni:- Mai bhi bahut sari baten karna chahti hun, lekin abhi ek nap le lene de.. Mere compartment me ek family thi aur unke gode me baby.. bechara baby andhre me rota tha aur light par wo khelne lagta.. ab wo khel raha tha to halla-gulla hota raha aur natija mai bhi uth'kar baith gayi..
"Mai tujhe bahut miss kar rahi thi.… Achhe sath wale waqt kitni jaldi bit jate hai na"… Jivisha kuch pal khamosh hokar kahne lagi...
Nandni, Jivisha ke ore karwat leti usse dhyan se dekhti.… "Tujhe sach me uske bare me ek lamha yaad nahi"..
Jivisha:- "Mai teri dost hun ya wo Nischal, jo tu har din mujhse yahi sawal puchhti hai... Pahle mai teri baat sunkar sochti thi ki mere sath wo "Sadma" film wala haal hua hai jisme shree devi pagalpan se thik hoti hai aur Kamal Hasan ko bhul jati hai.."
"Sirf tere kahne par mai apne ander ye feeling lati rahi 'ki nahi jiski chahat sachhe dil ki hogi, usse mujhe bhi pyar ho hi jayega'.. Isliye mai kayi dino tak yahi manti rahi ki mera bhi ek boyfriend hai jise mujhe samjhna hai.. lekin hua kya.."
"Kahan hai tumhara Nischal..… Kabhi-kabhi Nischal ke naam par tu mujhse khaffa si dikhti hai.. tere ander dikhta hai ki tu uski kami si mehsus karti hai.. Kya rishta kya nibhaya usne... Mujhe yaad nahi shyad mai pagalpan ka shikar thi, to fir wo kahan hai aur usse kyon kuch bhi yaad nahi.."
"Sach to ye hai ki wo jo koi bhi tha, uske jindgi se wo hisse gayab ho gaya, jisme hum the. Aur meri jindgi se un logon ka.. ek bus bich ki kadi tu bachi hai, jise sab yaad hai lekin koi fayda nahi, kyonki sachai tu bhi janti hai.. wo nahi lautega.."
"Mai to uske bare me yah bhi nahin kah sakti ki bhul'kar aage badh jati hun. Kyonki jab dimag me koi tasveer hi nahi to kya hi kar sakti hun mai.. bus tere liye mayus hai dil.. kyonki ek dost ki kami tumhe mehsus ho rahi aur mere rahte meri bahan aisi kami mehsus kare, aisa bhala ho sakta hai kya.. isliye tera rona band.."
"Haan samjhti hun ki ab tujhe jindgi ke dusre maze mil rahe kamini. Tu apne us nirdayi dost ko jo mujhse bhi badh'kar tha, usse tu apne pati ke sath chipak'kar bhi yaad kar sakti thi.. lekin mere pass tere wo bhi maze khatm.."
"Lekin janeman.. Are O Jumma, Meri Janeman.. jarra idhar to najre daal de.. Chumma De De Chumma… "
Kahti hui Jivisha apne honth dhire-dhire badhane lagi... Nandni hadbada kar uth'ti hui Jivisha ko takiye marti… "Tu kitni bhi sensible baten kar le, ant me aukaad par utar hi aati hai.…"…
"Abhi to sirf aukaad par utri hun janeman.. aage aage dekhti ja.. dil jigar jaan kahan kahan mai utarti hu"…
"Ae pagal.. tu dur hat.. lipatna-chiptna chhod"
"Ek dost to hun mai, to ab pati ki hi yaad aayegi na... La uss kami ko bhi puri kiye deti hun..."
"O jhalli.. bus kar tere rahte kisi ki yaad aa sakti hai kya... Mera bachpan laut aaya"…
"Pakka na... Ya jawani ke overdose ab bhi chadha hai"…
"Ab ye Jawani ka overdose matlab"
"Har baat ka matlab ho, kabhi-kabhi lay me betuki baten nikal jati hai.. punchline dekh bus.. jawani ka overdose.. mast hai na"..
"Tu pagal ho gayi hai"…
Kuch hi der me dono ki hansi us kamre me gunjne lagti hai... aur chahakti hui Jivisha ko dekhkar Nandni muskurati hui khud se kahne lagi… "Shayad aaj tunhare sawalon ka jawab nahi mere pass aur shayad kabhi na bhi ho, kise pata.. tu to hai na mere pass, mai isi me khush hun… wo bhi jahan ho khush rahe..."
first of all thank you
nain11ster ji
Kya baat kya baat kya baat.... finally itne dino jivu ne xf pe padharne ki takleef ki.. toh kaise hai dear jivu ji... wah yeh toh khushi ki baat ki unke itne chaahne wale usse bhi khushi ki baat IPS ki taiyari kar rahi hai...
... tusi great ho... par personal life mein atit ko leke kuch gadbari hai... nischal ko leke just bas formal baatein.. aisa kya hua... maybe aapki flashback mein kuch anhoni hua ho... yeh kya hua aisa ki aap, aap jisne dilo jaan chaahti thi ushe bhool ne ki baatein kar rahi hai... nischal ko bhool ke aap reh bhi kaise sakti hai jabki woh aapka pyar aapka sab kuch hai... koi raah pe para patthar nahi jise dekh aise bhool jayenge... sach mein dil dukha dene wali baat hai...
are wahhh nandu ne bhi entry le li hai par itni khoyi khoyi si...xf pe fir se dekh bahot khush huyi.. par kuch khoyi khoyi si hai... kuch toh hua hai... Lekin kya yeh toh writer sahab hi bata sakte hai...
aha arre apna chutku the great chirag... are are hontho pe yeh romantic geet kiske liye jara hume bhi bataiye.. kahi aarshi ke liye toh nahi...
Yeh buri baat hai.. yeh gharwale.. yeh log nahi samajhte pyar karne walo ki ashiqi ke baare mein.. hai na..
Priya ji ko dekh khushi huyi par pehle jaisi hi hai..
aur himashu ji ke wohi gyan ki baatein..
yahan pe ek kami khal rahi hai.... are kasak maidam kidhar kahi nazar nahi aa rahe
are o kasak ji aap bhi bhi is kahani mein wapis aake kahani ki shobha badhaiye...
Nischal kaha hai nain saheb
Bin uske yeh kahani hi adhuri... kaha hai woh... jivu bhool gayi ushe.. woh bhool gaya sab kuch.. kya hai yeh sab... dijiye jawab...
Aur yeh Alexa yeh wahan kya kar raha hai
ab kis se sawal puchu
insaan hai ki robot
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill nainu ji...
hai udhar. Kahani par pahunchne ke liye story title par ulgi karne ka...
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awesome update hai nain bhai,
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