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Sumit ko Sumit hi banana hai...Uska to aur bhi watt lagaana haiLagta hai champ saheb ne kasam kha li hai ki sumit ko devdas banake hi dum lenge![]()

Sumit ko Sumit hi banana hai...Uska to aur bhi watt lagaana haiLagta hai champ saheb ne kasam kha li hai ki sumit ko devdas banake hi dum lenge![]()

waise writers ke bhi apna ek tashan haiLekin shayad kayi readers ne kuch zyada hi kuch keh diye honge isliye Dr wale I'd se ab nahi aayenge kabhi bhi![]()
Champ bhaiNain bhaiAapne to apna vichaar bata diya ki dono mahasay kyu hairaan hai lekin Kamdev bhai aur Akki bhai dono abhi bhi khaamosh hai iss sawaal par
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... Akki ❸❸❸ javab dega nahi kyonki wo aadhe ghante me 3 baar mere comment dekha hoga... 4 baat reply type karke delete kiya hoga anth me kaha hoga... Ignore karo... Aur yahi hua hai Afsosh hai to sirf iss baat ka ki mera story mein review nahi aayega...Kyu ki mai contest mein story likhunga hi nahi.
Ho mujhe chhod'kar jo tum jaoge... Jo tum jaoge.. jo tum jaoge..Do stories ke liye to maine request ki tab jaake nain11ster aur harshit1890 sahab ne suru ki hai ab bis raah pe kaise chhod du..![]()
Champ bhai... Akki ❸❸❸ javab dega nahi kyonki wo aadhe ghante me 3 baar mere comment dekha hoga... 4 baat reply type karke delete kiya hoga anth me kaha hoga... Ignore karo... Aur yahi hua hai
kamdev99008 babu ek baar comment chhod sakte hain story par karna, lekin unki najar jab bhi unse puchhe sawal par hogi.. apne vichar jaroor denge... Aa chuka hai unka reply dekh lijiye...
Baki Naina ji hain ... Javab na aaya hoga to muh me ungli daal kar javab nikal legi... Jaise bhi ho ghuma'kar... Aaj nahi 5 saal baad... Kisi fifkarti Nagin ke badle ki tarah jawab niakwaye bina focus nahi hatayegi...
Nothing personal haan .. mere personal openion hai.. smile plz![]()
Kamdev bhai ka reply aa chuka hai...Abb unke review ke liye ek sawaal unko tag karke chhodna padega update mein hi. 10-15 story.. kuch jyada hi aap to ummid lagaye baithe hain... Itna badhosa to mere chuninda readers ko bhi na hogaMere story khatm hone ke baad ka challenge hai ye...Jab tak mera story khatm hoga tab tak unke 10-15 stories khatm ho jaayenge![]()
Haan fir wo barabar reply karenge... It's fact... Aap chahe to try kar sakte hainKamdev bhai ka reply aa chuka hai...Abb unke review ke liye ek sawaal unko tag karke chhodna padega update mein hi.
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