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Fantasy Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai ~ Ajab Sa Risk Hai ~ Reload (Completed)

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Page 766 Se 775 tak har panne par update hai.

Final closing update on page:-
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Issi ke sath Ishq Risk reloaded ka ye season poora hua. Next fantasy journey announce ho jayegi. Ummid hai pahle

"Arymani:- The Pure Alfa Between Two World's."

Yahi aaye... Jo bhi hoga purv suchna mil jayegi... Fihlaal end enjoy karenge... Aur kahani ka poora safar kaisa rahega wo ek baar jaroor sajha karen...



Filhaal Abhi vyast hun ek pure romantic journey par....


Aap sab ka :welcome1: hai udhar. Kahani par pahunchne ke liye story title par ulgi karne ka...


 
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Somewhere In Universe...

Fauj ke kayi 5 bade-bade jahaj ek unknown planet par utar rahe the.. Har viman ke upar saaf aksharon (word) me likha hua tha.. "Middle State Of Aizem Planet"…


Sare viman kisi Aizem Grah ke Madhya Rajya se the, jinke hajaron ke tadat ki sainya tukdi us jagah par utar rahi thi.…


Viman ke land hote hi sainik apne viman se bahar utar'kar ek katar bana rahe the. Har sainik jaise hi us jamin par apne paun rakhta, bus itna hi khyal unke man me aata, "Kya manhush si jagah hai"


5 katar me tukdi khadi thi, aur har sainik umda technology se laish hathiyaron ke sath khade the... Har katar ke sabse aage me uss tukdi Front Officer khada tha, aur un 5 Front Officer ko command dene ke liye ek Suzerain thi.


Sabhi soldier jabtak katar laga rahe the, Suzerain Meerasi apne ek chief officer Nizal ke sath char kadam chal'kar us jagah ka muvayna karne lagi.. khusk hawa, hawa me ret ke kan.. charo ore bilkul tapa dene wala tapman aur jahan tak najar jaye kewal ret hi ret...


Kuch hi samay me puri tukdi katar me thi, Nizal bhi aakar apni team ke sath khada ho gaya.… Aur Meerasi apne tukdi ko mission samjhati...


"Aizem ki Uttari seema walon ne humare rajya me isi planet ke kisi janwar ko chhoda tha.. Us janwar ka tracker tum sabke screen par flash ho raha hai... Har tukdi ko uss janvar ko chhip'kar dhundhna hai.. anukul mauka dekh'kar usse maar dalo aur sabse aham baat.… Uttari seema wale iss kshetr me ghuse the, is baat ka sboot dhundh nikalo, chalo jao jao jao jaldi se jao"…


Meerasi sabhi soldiers ko command dene ke baad apne commanding viman me gayi aur wahan se har kisi par najar banayi hui thi.. jaise-jaise ye kshetr explore ho raha tha, Meerasi ko apne air-conditioned viman me bhi pasine aane lage the...


Soldier tukdiyon ki vaman jaise-jaise us kshetr ko scan kar rahi thi, kafi visamtayen aur khuffnak si jagah dikh rahi thi.. Har 50 kilometre par yahan ki jalwayu aur kshetr puri tarah se badla hua tha...


Retila ilake ke samapt hote hi ek bahut lambi aur utni si chaudi nadi wahan se gujarati thi, jiske pani ki dhara itni tej thi ki wo ummid ke pare the.. Uske thik aage jungle aur pahad shuru hote the, jiske pedon ki unchai aasman chhute the.


Jungle bhi kafi ajib, jiske bare me na to aaj tak kabhi dekha aur na hi suna... Har ped takriban 2000 fit mota aur 8000 se 10000 fit uncha tha.. aisa lag raha tha building ke badle yahan ped hi khade rahte hai...


Unki sakhayen itni moti thi ki aisa lag raha tha wo sakha na hokar, 1000 sal purana koi bargadh ka ped nikla ho dayen bayen se.… aur har sakha par viman ke barabar ki chidiyon ne jaise ghosla bana rakha ho...


Shwansen to tab ruk gayi, jab soldier aircarft ko achanak hi dayen-bayen puri takat se modne pare, kyonki junglon ke aage badlon se bhi unche pahad the, jinme se kayi to sakriya jwalamukhi the...


Meerasi, apne opretor ko dekhti hui... "Kya isliye is planet ka naam, Final Planet rakhe huye the kyonki iski jamin par ruke to hum apne final place ko dekhenge"…


Operator:- Meerasi mujhe nahi lagta ki yahan ki jamin par utarkar, yahan ke kisi janwar ko le jaya bhi ja sakta hai... Wo janwar yahin ke kshetr ki kisi antriksh yatri ki galti se apne elaake me pahuncha hoga."…..


Operator aur Meerasi dono baat kar hi rahe the, tabhi samne ke screen par jaise hi najar gayi, Meerasi chillati hui kahne lagi.… "Abort the mission"… "I repeat abort the mission"…


Najron ke samne kaleja chid'kar bahar nikal aaye aisa drishya tha. Dur-dur tak jahan najar jaye bada sa sapaat maidan, jahan par the Final Planet par basne wale jiv...


Koi apne kaamsutra me laga hua tha, to kayi aapas me khel rahe the.. maidan ke is bhag me halke laal rang me nar aur halke pile rang me madayen thi, jo 5-6 ke jhundh me the aur aapas me kayi sare kamo me sanlipt the...


Maidan ke is hisse me kya ho raha tha uska aaklan karna bilkul hi muskil tha, kyonki ek najar jo wahan ke jiv ko dekh le, wo heart attack se mar jaye... Sabhi stanpayi (mammals), apne dono paun par khade hone wale.. nar ka pura sharir halke balon se cover the..


Unke sarir ki banawat to insano ki tarah hi thi.. purn nange insan jis swaroop me milenge, unki roop Rekha aur banwat bhi waisi hi thi.. kewal jo anter tha wo uske sharir ka rang jo halke laal aur halke pile rang ka pratit hota tha.. aur unka aakar...


Aakhen fat jaye unka aakar dekh'kar, kuch aur fat jaye dekhkar wo to anterman ki pukar hai. Baharhaal jo najron ke samne the... unka aakar kuch yun tha ki paun ka ek panja 15 fit ki lambai ka hoga.. unka sarir kam se kam 30 fit ka ilaka gher leta ho, aur unki lambai kam se kam 200-300 fit to hogi hi... dekhkar hi shwans tham jaye..


Alag-alag disha se urr'kar jaise hi pancho viman us maidani ilake me the, sabki fat'kar hath me aa chuki thi... Meerasi abort the mission kah to rahi thi, lekin wahan khel rahe bachon ne jaise koi urrta hua khilona pakad liye ho.. pal bhar me hi pachon viman wahan khel rahe bachon ke hath me thi, aur pal bhar me hi sab jamin par..


Jaise hi yah ghatna hui, wahan ke kuch niwasi ne dekha aur sab ek sath chillane lage... Kaan faad wo chillana tha, jise sunkar kya-kya fat chuka tha viman me baithe sainikon ka, wo to wahi achhe se explain kar sakte the. Un giant insano ka samanya roop se baat karna hi behra kar de, fir to ye log jod-jod se chilla rahe the...


Mission abort hone se pahle hi pachon viman chhatigrast hokar maidan me the aur charo ore se unhe giant insan ghere... "Sabhi abhi bahar aa jao"… Itna kahkar ek giant insan ne pachon viman ke bich khali jagah me mukka maar diya...



Mukka parne se jo wahan kampan aur awaj paida hui, uske bhay se sabhi apne viman se bahar nikal aaye.. har kisi ke chehre par dar saaf dekha ja sakta tha.. kayi sainikon ke halakh sukh chuke the to kayi apni paint gili kar chuke the…


3000 hazar ki bhid me chand logon ko chhod diye jaye to sab yahi soch rahe the ki paun ke niche kuchle jayenge ya chutki se masle jayenge..


Meerasi yah najara dekhkar oprator ko missiles activate karne boli aur viman ko unke ilake me lene ke liye kah di.. Meerasi ke order turant follow huye... 2000 fit ki unchai par Meerasi ne apne viman sthir ki aur upar se announce karne lagi... "Hum dushman nahi hain dost hain.. hum yahan kisi ko nuksan pahunchane nahi aaye, humare logon ko jane do"


Meerasi ki awaj niche pachon viman me lage bhonpu se gunjne lagi, jise sunkar wahan ki fijaon me paglon wali hansi gunjne lagi… Ek giant insan ne jhuk'kar apne mutthi me 4-5 sainikon ko utha liya aur uske pass wale uske sathi ne uske hatheli par tali baja dali...


Sabhi soldirs aise hatheli par chipak gaye jaise machhar ko markar chipka diye ho.. aur wo giant insan apni hathli wahan ke khade viman ke ore kar diya.. Meerasi ka khun puri tarah se khaul gaya.. ataack ke aadesh dekar Meerasi ne apne viman me loaded chhote missaile se humla kar di..


Niche se goliyan barasni shuru hui aur upar ke viman se missile... 5 minute me hi wo ilaka dhuwan-dhuwan ho chuka tha. Meerasi operator ko rukne kahi aur dhuwa chhatne ka intzar karne lagi..


Jaise hi wahan ka dhuwan hata, samne giant insan khamosh khade the.. unme se ek ne fir se apne hatheli par 4-5 soldier ko rakha aur uska dusre sathi ne tali dete huye sanbko hatheli par chipkate huye kahne laga… "Yahan kewal tumhara bahubal kaam aayega, baki ke hathiyar Jin tatvon (ingredients/chemical) ke bane hai yahan ke jalwayu unhe un tatwon me ghol degi"…


Meerasi ko aisa laga jaise wo sadme me na kahin chali jaye.. test karne ke liye usne ilaka saaf karne wala missile chhod dee, jo 20 kilometer ke kshetr ko malwe me tabdil kar deta, bina dimag me dusra khyal laye ki niche wahan uske log fase hai..


Missile chhuta aur agle hi pal kewal wahan dhwan hi dhuwna tha aur dhuwan jab chhata tab is baar sabhi giant hans rahe the. Is baar 10 giant ke hateli par takriban 150 se jyada soldier...


Tabhi achanak wahan hooting hone lagi.. sabhi soldiers ek sath chillane lage.. hatheli par bhi jo khade apni maut ka soch rahe the.. wo sab bhi siti bajane aur hooting karne me lage the…


Haan unki awaj bahut dhimi giants ke kano me ja rahi thi, lekin jaa jaroor rahi thi... Upar aasman me jab unhone dekha to Meerasi ki viman ke sath dusra viman bhi pahunch chuka tha... Unhe aisa laga jaise us viman se koi chhoti si chij chhalang laga'kar niche kudi hai, jo teji se unke ore badh rahi hai...


Niche sainikon ki dhimi aa rahi hooting par wo sab hansne lage, mano kah rahe ho "pagal kahin ke" aur agle hi pal har hatheli par tali tokhne ke liye unka dusra sathi taiyar tha...


Ye bada sa 20 fit ka panja hawa me ek sath aur agle hi pal aise laga jaise wahan ke mahol me khamoshi si chha gayi... 10 giant jo apne hath upar kar chuke the, jabtak apne hath niche karte, kisi ke bahubal ne un giants ki pariksha leni shuru kar di thi...


10 giant jo hath uthaye tali marne ko taiyar the.… ek ke baad dusre aur fir teesre ne mehsus kiya ki ek hawa ka patla jhonka unke pass aaya aur gaya.. aur itne hi der me unka vishal, sharir sar se lekar paun tak, kayi hisson me bantkar khun ki dhar chhodte huye jamin par gira para..


Uss Bahubali ne tabahi ka yah manjar, sabhi giant ke palak jhapkne se pahle hi dikha chuka tha.. 10 uthe hath jo apne sathi ke hath par tali ki thap dete. Wo sabhi hath niche aane se pahle kat chuke the...


Kisi bhi giant ke muh se awaj nikalne se pahle hi bhadi bhadkam maans ke lothre maidan me the, aur ek ladka apne logon ke bich sina tane khada tha, jiske bade se khanjar se khun tapak raha tha…


Sabhi sainik wapas se hooting karne lage.. charo ore.. Nischal, Nischal, Nischal, Nischal... ki gunj hone lagi…


Pal bhar ka hi samay to liya tha Nischal ne aur 200 se 300 fit se unche 10 tower ko wo apne khanjar se mahaj chand second me chid-faad'kar niche jamin par gira chuka tha... Unke pass itna waqt bhi nahi tha ki apni maut ki pira par chilla de.. Na hi Nischal ne unhe itna waqt diya ki pahle wale giant ke ander jab wo khanjar dal raha tha, to aakhri wala apni tali ki thap de de.. aisa laga jaise slow motion me 10 hath niche aa rahe the jo inch dar inche niche aate-aate kat fat'kar bikhar gaye...


Gahri si chinkhen aur gusse se pagal giant insano ka swaroop pal bhar me aaya.. aur tabhi Nischal apne viman me lage bhonpu se sabko sunane laga...


"Doston ye kanjar beraham hai... Ek baar jab katna shuru karti hai to fir tum dekhoge ki tumhari aabadi kam ho rahi hai, lekin kuch kar nahi paoge... Charo ore bebas sa mahol hoga aur mai tumhe chinkhne ka bhi waqt nahi dunga"…

"Mai har safar par apni aakhri manjil soch'kar nikalta hun.. jise bhi mere khanjar ka shwad chakhna hai wo aage aa jaye.. Aur yadi aisi chahat na ho to humne aapas me bahut khun baha liya, koi hai jo baat kare ya fir tum sabko kaat'kar hi mai apne logon ko yahan se le jaun"…
Nischal :bow: ye to Rambo nikla....akele hi sabko lapet lega ye...aur iski baaton se lagta hai jaise cold blooded murderer ho ye....
khanajar kamal ki hai iski aur speed bhi....
Nainu bhai ju ne jaise explain iya hai sab aankhn ke saamne chal raha tha...
nice one...
ab jab aao to bata dena 1st se shuru karna padega kya :?:
 
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Nischal :bow: ye to Rambo nikla....akele hi sabko lapet lega ye...aur iski baaton se lagta hai jaise cold blooded murderer ho ye....
khanajar kamal ki hai iski aur speed bhi....
Nainu bhai ju ne jaise explain iya hai sab aankhn ke saamne chal raha tha...
nice one...
ab jab aao to bata dena 1st se shuru karna padega kya :?:
1st yani first part se padhna padega aisa puchh rahe kya :?:
 
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jyada kuch samajh nahi aaya :verysad: par accha tha....sayad apan ko isse pahle ka part se shuru karna hoga.... :hmm2:
Kuchh samjhne jaisa tha kya... Ek ladki apne dost ko reseive karne aayi aur dono ke bich kuchh batchit aur ek ghatna hui..
Yahi shurwaat hai aur iss se jyada samjhne ke liye update me kuchh tha nahi... Uss ladki ke sath kya aur kyon hua wo aage sab explian hai
 

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Dekhiye pahle part ko dhyan me rakh'kar yah sochenge ki dusra part hai to complication hoga... New story samjh kar padhenge tab koi locha nahi hoga...

Haan kuchh term ko lekar sawal yadi huye to main hun na clear karne... Ju carry on.. koi samsya nahi hogi aur na hi koi bhi ansuljha paheli pahle part ka hissa hai ... Jo bhi unsuljha pahli hai wo issi part ka hissa hai kyonki.. pahla part to bahon me bahen dalkar happy end hua tha ... Ek dusre ke sath :D
 

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Dekhiye pahle part ko dhyan me rakh'kar yah sochenge ki dusra part hai to complication hoga... New story samjh kar padhenge tab koi locha nahi hoga...

Haan kuchh term ko lekar sawal yadi huye to main hun na clear karne... Ju carry on.. koi samsya nahi hogi aur na hi koi bhi ansuljha paheli pahle part ka hissa hai ... Jo bhi unsuljha pahli hai wo issi part ka hissa hai kyonki.. pahla part to bahon me bahen dalkar happy end hua tha ... Ek dusre ke sath :D
dono padega apan :cool: ye bhi aur wo bhi
 
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Fir to chay garam ... Chay garam .. bole to ishq risk pratham se hi shurwat kijiye... 20hr ka reading material hai ... Pahla part...
PDF ha kya :?:
 
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