Fantasy Pyaar Ya Nafrat ( Completed)

[Jaguaar]

superb updated

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[Jaguaar]

Update bro

Thodi der mein

 

[Jaguaar]

Bahot behtareen update bhai
Bahot shaandaar zaberdast lajawab

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[Jaguaar]

baat to sahi hai ab koi anjaan ladka thodi naa kisi ke liye 4 goli khaa le...aur agar wo aisa karta hai to do hi baatein hongi wo toota hua hoga bilkul aur soch raha hoga hum rahe yaa naa rahe sala ghanta kisi ko fark padega...inko baccha lete hai....aur dusri baat wo pagal hoga....
Dawa de dena...risky hai....lekin aur koi rasta nahi hai sayad inke pass....waise bhi agar formula kaam kar gaya to bachha bach hi jaayega.....aur nahi to exeriment failed...
dekhte hai kya hota hai

Aur agar formula nhi lagta toh woh martaa kyoki doctor ne apne haath khade kar diye.

 

[A-Star]

bahut hi umda kahani hai dost

 

[Jaguaar]

Connection hai...pahle se connection hai daya dono ka connection hai....
khiar ye chodo...
Jaguaar sahab aapko nahi lagta thodi flat si gayi ye update....kahani ko suspence mein rakhna tha ye theek hai par....gusse ko aur acche se darsha sakte the aap....aur wo ekdum se dono ne isko apna beta maan liya aur isne bhi haa kar di...
Bura mat maaniyega par thoda dramatic dikhate to mazza do gunna badh jaata...par abhi bhi accha hai bas thoda flat sa laga...
Binna example diye kaise apan dusre update pe jaaye ab...
Ab Aryan ko Pariwar se nafrat hai...to jab sanjay usko apna beta banne ko bolta hai tab Aryan ke reactions thode ajeeb se dikhane the confused se...
wo sala sali baap hai usne nikal diya ghar se ab ye janab mille hai jinki maine jaan bachayi hai haa unki life bhi pareshaniyon se ghiri hui hai beta khoya hai inhone...kya inki baat maan sakta hu....kahi agar yaha bhi kuch gadbad ho aur fir se wwaise hi ghar se nikal diya jaaye mujhe to.....kya main aisa karu yaa nahi....
something like this....aur aisa dekh Sanjna usko gthoda sochne ke liye bolegi par ghar mein rah kar hi...aisa hota to thoda ras aur mil jaata....
khair aapki story hai...aapne kya socha hoga character ke baare mein aane wale palon ke baare mein ye main nahi janta to jyada nahi kahna chahiye padhne pe pata chalega hai naa..
jawab ka intezar

Hosakta hai Aryan apne parivaar se nafrat karta hai. Par uska dil bahot jyaada soft hai. Aur unhone Aryan ki jaan bachayi aur usko ek nayi zindagi di shaktiyan di. Itna toh woh kar hi sakta hai unke liyeee

 

[Jaguaar]

bahut hi umda kahani hai dost

Thank you

 

[Ristrcted]

Hosakta hai Aryan apne parivaar se nafrat karta hai. Par uska dil bahot jyaada soft hai. Aur unhone Aryan ki jaan bachayi aur usko ek nayi zindagi di shaktiyan di. Itna toh woh kar hi sakta hai unke liyeee

ye logic bhi sahi hai....

 

[Ristrcted]

Update 5​

Aryan ko apne dadaji ke baare mein sunn bahot achha lagta hai. Par woh kuch keh nhi pata. Sanjay bhi yeh samaj jata hai toh woh bolta hai.

Sanjay: Dekho beta jo hogya hai usko toh hum badal nhi sakte. But unki achhi yaadon ke saath humhe apne jivan mein aage badhna chahiye. Tumhare dadaji tumko aisi haalat mein dekh ke khush honge kya. Unko bhi dukh hogaa tumko aise dekh. Isiliye ab dukhi hona chor do aur apne jivan mein aage badho.

Aryan: Ji.

Kuch der chup rehne ke baad Aryan bolta hai. Aap yaha mujhse kuch bolne aaye thee.

Sanjay: Aree haa. Main baton baton mein bhul gaya. Maine yeh puchne aaya thaa tum ab aage kya karna chahte ho. Mera matlab aage ki padhai se thaa.

Aryan: Mujhe business karna hai. So usi ke according mujhe addmission lena chahiye. But mere 12th ka marksheet aur certificate toh Delhi mein hi hoga. Aur shayad ab tak toh result out bhi hogya hoga.

Sanjay: Tum uski chinta mat karo. Delhi mein mera bachpan ka dost rehta hai main usse keh ke tumhare ceriticates yaha pe mangwa leta hu.

Aryan: Ji thik hai. Waise mujhe aapse aur bhi kuch puchna thaa.

Sanjay: Ha ha pucho kya puchna hai.

Aryan: Ji woh aapne bola thaa main ek superhuman ke jaisa hu.

Sanjay: Superhuman ke jaisa nhi tum Superhuman hi ho. Tumhari physical aur mental strength normal logo mukable hadd se bahot jyaada hai.

Aryan: Achha. Toh mujhe aapse ek permission leni thi.

Sanjay: Kaisi permission.

Aryan: Main apni inn shaktiyon ka istemal karna chahta hu.

Sanjay: Par. Agar tumne yeh shaktiyan istemal ki aur agar unlogo ko yeh pata chal gaya toh tumhare liye bahot mushkile aajayengi. Shayad tumhari jaan bhi jaa sakti hai.

Aryan: Ji main janta hu. Par mujhe business karna hai aur uske liye bahot bade amount ki jarurat padhti hai aur isiliye main Underground fight jaha betting hoti hai waha pe apni physical strength istemal kar sakta hu jisse mujhe amount bhi mil jayegaa aur shaktiyon ka use bhi.

Sanjay: Ummh. Thik hai par meri kuch sharte hai. Agar tum woh mante ho toh tum yeh kar sakte ho.

Aryan: Kaisi sharte.

Sanjay: Tum apni inn shaktiyon aur formula ke baare mein kisi ko nhi bataoge. Kabhi apni identity reveal nhi karoge. Apni taqat par ghamand nhi karoge. Kabhi bhi apni shaktiyan khule aam use nhi karoge. Uss formula ke wajah se tumhe gussa bahot jyaada aayega agar gusse mein tumne kisi ko maar diya toh woh wahi pe mar jayega isiliye kabhi bhi kisi jhagre mein nhi padoge jab tak bahot jaruri naa ho. Aur jab bhi apni yeh shaktiyan use karoge tab humesha mask pahen ke hi karoge. Aur ek aakhri shart tumhare business ke liye main bhi kuch amount dunga jiske liye tum mana nhi karoge.

Aryan: Mujhe aapki saari sharte manzur sivaay aakhri wali chor ke.

Sanjay: Kyo. Kya tum humlogo ko apna nhi mante. Jo mana kar rahe ho.

Aryan: Ji nhi aisi baat bilkul nhi hai. Maine aap dono ko pure dil se apna mana hai. Agar aap nhi hote toh shayad aaj main zinda bhi naa hotaa.

Sanjay: Toh bas main kuch nhi jaanta. Waise bhi ab humara tumhare sivaay aur koi nhi hai.
Isiliye tumhe meri saari sharte maani hogi. Warna tum apni shaktiyan use nhi karoge.

Aryan: Ji thik hai. Mujhe aapki yeh shart bhi manzur hai. Par jab mujhe zarurat hogi tab main aapse maang lunga. Tab tak ke liye main apne dum pe sab karungaa.

Sanjay: Thik hai.

Aryan: Achha kya aap kisi aise ko jaante hai jo mujhe fighting skills sikha sakta hai.

Sanjay: Tum chinta mat karo. Kal tumhare teacher tumhare samne honge.

Aryan: Thank You.

Sanjay: Chalo chalke khaana kha lo.

Aise hi woh din guzar jaata hai. Agle din se Aryan har tarah ki fighting skills sikhna start kardeta hai. Jise woh bahot hi achhi tarah se aur jaldi sikhta hai uss formula ki wajah se.

1 hafte baad Aryan ke documents bhi aajate hai aur uska Mumbai ke best Business college mein admission hojata hai kyoki Aryan ne apne school mein Top kiya thaa. Isiliye usse Scholorship bhi mili thi.

Mumbai mein human riots ke wajah se government ne saare schools and colleges band kar diye thee jiske wajah se abhi bhi addmissions chal rahe thee.

Toh Aryan bhi apna Addmission kara leta hai. Aur waha usse pata chalta hai ke classes 10 din ke baad start hongi.

Toh inn 10 dino mein Aryan apni saari fighting skills bahot achhe se sikh leta hai. Uske teachers bhi hairan the. Jo fights sikhne mein kisi insaan ko saalo lag jaate hai wahi Aryan ne woh fights bas kuch hafto mein hi sikh li woh bhi bahot achhe se.

Yeh saari fights sikhne se Aryan ki body jo pahle se hi strong thi woh aur bhi Strong hogyi thi.

Aise hi 10 din ke sham ko Aryan apne liye kuch shopping karne jaata hai kyoki agle din se college start horaha thaa.

Woh shopping karne ek mall mein jaata hai waha woh apne liye thodi shopping karta hai aur Sanjay aur Sanjana ke liye bhi shopping karta hai. Shopping ke baad jab Aryan ghar aaraha hota hai tab achanak uski bike ke saamne ek ladki road cross karte hue galti se uski bike ke saamne aajati hai. Aryan jaldi se break mar deta nhi toh accident pakka thaa. Phir bhi woh ladki ghir jaati hai.

Aryan jaldi se bike se utar kar usko paas jaata hai aur puchta hai

Aryan: Aree aap thik toh hai aapko chott toh nhi lagi.

Ladki: Ji main thik hu. Woh actually thoda jaldi mein thi isiliye road cross karne ke chakar mein galti se aapke bike ke saamne aagyi. Aap thik hai naa.

Aryan: Ji main thik hu. But aap thoda sambhal ke chaliye agar sahi time pe break nhi lagta toh aapko bahot chott lag sakti thii.

Ladki: Ji main dhyaan rakhungi. And I am sorry once again.

Aryan: Koi baat nhi. Agar aapko kahi jaana ho toh boliye main chorr deta hu.

Ladki: Nhi nhi. Main yaha pass mein hi rehti hu main chali jaungi. Aap pareshan naa ho.

Aryan: Achha thik hai.

Yeh bol Aryan apne raaste aur woh Ladki apne raaste nikal jaati hai.

Aryan ghar aakar Sanjay aur Sanjana ko unke liye ki gayi shopping ke shoppers pakda deta hai. Jisse dekh woh bahot khush hote hai.

Uske baad Aryan fresh hoke kuch der apni fight practice karta hai aur dinner karke so jaata hai.

hmm to Aryan ne fighting seekh li hai...par ye banda kuch jyada hi over-achieving nahi samajh raha matlab theek hai powers aa gayi hai par ladayi ki techniques nahi aati aur isne soch bhi liya ki business ke liye paise ungerground fights se laayega...
wo jo sartein rakhi hai wo sahi thi....khatre mein pad sakyta hai ye banda agar powers ka patta chal gaya to....
waise gussa karne se bhi manna kiya hai aur fighting bhi karne bola hai kabhi agar jyada gussa aa gaya to....
gussa control karne ke liye dhyaan laghane ko bhi bolna tha

 

[Jaguaar]

Main ek new story start karna chahta hu jo The 15 shades of Rick se match karti hai. Usme bahot saare scenes usse copy kiye hai. Par bahot kuch usse alag bhi hai. Aur usme aisa bahot kuch hai jo shayad asli uss story ke writer ko pasand naa aaye.

Aur mujhe bola gaya tha bina writer ki permission ke main start nhi kar sakta par phir bhi main kar raha hu kuch changes karke.

Aur starting ke pahle hi bata deta hu bahot-bahot kuch copy paste hogaa.

Toh aaplog bataiye mujhe kya start karu.

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