Fantasy Pyaar Ya Nafrat ( Completed)

[Vickey1211]

Waiting

 

[Ristrcted]

Main ek new story start karna chahta hu jo The 15 shades of Rick se match karti hai. Usme bahot saare scenes usse copy kiye hai. Par bahot kuch usse alag bhi hai. Aur usme aisa bahot kuch hai jo shayad asli uss story ke writer ko pasand naa aaye.

Aur mujhe bola gaya tha bina writer ki permission ke main start nhi kar sakta par phir bhi main kar raha hu kuch changes karke.

Aur starting ke pahle hi bata deta hu bahot-bahot kuch copy paste hogaa.

Toh aaplog bataiye mujhe kya start karu.

Aapka answer iss post ko leke tag karke bole.

kuch scenes hi copied hoge naa....aur wo bhi ditto to nahi hi kar doge aap usme bhi apni likhayi ka thoda jaadu to daaloge hi....
aur naam bhi alag hoga...dikkat nahi honi chahiye fir to..kyunki bahut si stories aisi mil jaayengi jaha pe kuch baatein match karti hai...

 

[Vipul]

Main ek new story start karna chahta hu jo The 15 shades of Rick se match karti hai. Usme bahot saare scenes usse copy kiye hai. Par bahot kuch usse alag bhi hai. Aur usme aisa bahot kuch hai jo shayad asli uss story ke writer ko pasand naa aaye.

Aur mujhe bola gaya tha bina writer ki permission ke main start nhi kar sakta par phir bhi main kar raha hu kuch changes karke.

Aur starting ke pahle hi bata deta hu bahot-bahot kuch copy paste hogaa.

Toh aaplog bataiye mujhe kya start karu.

Aapka answer iss post ko leke tag karke bole.

Bhai pahele yeh story complete karo uske baad dusari story likhana aur ek request hain agar duasari story jitana waqt mile to us main dusara part bhi likh dena aur ho sake to update bhi de Dena aage aapaki marji

 

[Jaguaar]

dekha apan ....waise ye Neha naam se nafrat hai yaa iss wali Neha se nafrat hai....bada gusse mein tha yaha pe......
aage badhte hue wo sab mil raha hai jo hona chahiye tha..

Filhal toh Neha naam se nafrat hai

 

[Raj 88]

Update do bhai

 

[Jaguaar]

नो प्रॉब्लम डिअर, क्योकि आपका अंदाजे बयां उससे अलग होगा, बस सीन कॉपी करना पर वर्डिंग्स नही , पर रिक्वेस्ट है कि पहले एक स्टोरी कम्पलीट कर लो, अगर एक्स्ट्रा टाइम है तो इसके एक्स्ट्रा अपडेट दो , पर इकट्ठी दो नावों की सवारी दोनों स्टोरीज लटका सकती है।

Mere case mein aisa nhi hogaaa

Iska update toh roj aayega kyoki yeh meri first story hai. Aur uska jab tak yeh khatam nhi hojaati tab tak ek din ka gap mein aayegaa.

 

[Arjun Singh 72]

Main ek new story start karna chahta hu jo The 15 shades of Rick se match karti hai. Usme bahot saare scenes usse copy kiye hai. Par bahot kuch usse alag bhi hai. Aur usme aisa bahot kuch hai jo shayad asli uss story ke writer ko pasand naa aaye.

Aur mujhe bola gaya tha bina writer ki permission ke main start nhi kar sakta par phir bhi main kar raha hu kuch changes karke.

Aur starting ke pahle hi bata deta hu bahot-bahot kuch copy paste hogaa.

Toh aaplog bataiye mujhe kya start karu.

Aapka answer iss post ko leke tag karke bole.

Kuch part copy h to koi baat nahi agar pure story ka plot hi same ho jayega to ye copy hoga

 

[Jaguaar]

Jaguaar bhai mera to manna h bhai pehle is story ko end karo fir 2nd start karo.
2 story saath bohat muskil hota h

Mere case mein aisa nhi hogaa. Iska roj aayegaa aur uska 1 day gap mein jab tak finish nhi hojaati.

 

[Amir]

Waiting brooooooo

 

[Jaguaar]

chalo intro vintro ho gaya aur dhulayi ka bhi kaam ho gaya yaha pe....Neha se itni nafrat kyun...
waise iss Neha mein wo K3G ki Poo wali kuch baatein hai
Kon hai ye....jisne Poo ko mud ke nahi dekha
to ye dono hi minor villains ka role nibha rahe hai yaha...Neha aur uska Bhai Rahul......
inke parents ko inke kaarnamo ke baare mein pata nahi hai...kaise parents hai thodi bahut khij khabar to rakhni hi chahiye aur jaisa inka intro hua uss hisab se to bahut khijkhabar rakhni chahiye....salon ne ladkiyon ki life barbaad kar di hai...
Meera....anath hai ye....abhi isko as a friend hi maan ke chalte hai aage pata chalega ye heroine hai yaa kuch aur.....waise isse pahle wale update mein wo ladki aayi thi....wo bas aise hi thi yaa fir koi khass...

Padhte jaaiye pata lag jaayegaa