Fantasy SURYA (chapter 3) [THE DARK WORLD][Completed]

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Ab kaal ki shakti kai guna bad gayi hai to ye bhi tay hai ki surya ki shakti bhi kisi na kisi madhyam se badegi hi . Kyuki dekhne se hi ye lag rha hai ki kaal is part ka main villain nahi hai .aur jahir si baat hai Dushman jab itna takatwar aur dimag wala hai to inko bhi us takkar ka to hona hi padega ,dekhte hai warm hole kya surprise leker aata hai

Sahi kaha bhai kuch jyada hi exiting hone ki aashanka to hai baaki dekhte hai kya saamne aata hai. Baaki rahi baat main villain ki to uska khulasa bhi is update me ho jayega.





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awesome update bro

Is baar ki holi toh Surya ki family ke liye berang rang laayi hai ashruon ka..... Khair dekhte hain gham ke yeh ashru harsh mein kab parivartit honge..... Aur kin halaaton mein yeh hoga

Sahi kaha bhai holi to bigadi hi hai baaki or kya kya bigadta hai ye dekhne wali baat hai. Janne ke liye sath bane rahe...





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UPDATE - 10















ONE YEAR LATER…………..







Surya ko gayab hue aaj pure ek saal ho gye the. Or uske kuch dino baad se surya ke saare bhai kaal ki khoj me lag gye the. Lekin kaal to behrupiya tha. Vo apne roop badal badal kar apna kaam secratly karta raha. Bahi kaal to chhodo uske kisi ek khaas aadmi tak bhi ye log nahi pahuch paye. Bas bhatakte rahe yaha se baha. Bahi us Sahara wale base ko kaal ne pura bahi ki rate me dafan kar diya tha. Isliye koi bhi sabut nahi mila na hi us black hole ki jaankari mil pa rahi thi ki vo akhir kis jagah per open hua tha. Matlab vo surya ko kis jagah le gya tha.





Bahi surya ke baaki ke ghar walo ko bhi bahut bada jhatka laga tha ye sunne ke baad. Bahi radha to ek dum se toot gyi thi. Usne apne aap ko apne hi kamre me band kar liya tha. Or uska kehna tha ki is kamre ka darwaja surya ke aalawa koi nahi kholega. Lekin uska khana khana bhi jaruri tha. Isliye vo bas ek hi time bhojan karti thi jo uski maa use jabardasti surya ki kasam de kar khiladeti thi. Vo bhi kamre ki khidki se usse baat karke. Kyuki darwaja to vo kholti hi nahi thi.



Bahi saare bache bhi bahut hi mayus ho gye the. Ashk ka haal bhi radha jaisa hi tha. Bahi avi to base se bahar hi nahi nikalta tha. Pata nahi vo kya bana raha tha. Sayad kuch aisa jisse use surya ki koi jaankari mil sake.



Ghar me charo taraf mayusi si fail gyi thi. Sab jinda to the lekin unke andar jaan nahi bachi thi. Unki jaan surya ke sath hi chali gyi thi.








Bahi per dekhte hai ki surya kaha per pahucha. Us warm hole se.





Surya us warm hole se Earth per hi pahucha lekin kisi dusre Earth per. Surya ka ye safar keval 10 min. Ka hi tha. Lekin yaha Earth 1 per is beech 1 saal beet chuka tha.



Surya Earth 2 per ek sunsaan jagah per behoshi ki haalat me pada hua tha.



Tabhi kuch logo ki najar us per padi or vo sabhi uske pass pahuch gye. Un sabne surya ki haalat check ki. To unhe sab theek laga. Isliye unhone apni bottle se pani leke surya ke chehre per daal diya jis bajah se surya ek dum hadbada kar hosh me aajata hai.





Main hosh me aaya or apni aankhe kholne laga. To mere charo taraf karib 4 log khade hue the. Or mujhse puchh rahe the ki main theek hu ya nahi.



Maine unhe ishare se theek hone ka ishara kiya.


Fir ek ne mujhe apna sahara diya jisse me khada hua. Or charo taraf dekhne laga ki main kaha hu.or tabhi mujhe yaad aaya ki main to us black hole me chala gya tha fir yaha kaise pahucha.




Main- ye konsi jagah hai.







À1- ye mumbai hai. Tum kon ho or yaha per is haalat me kaise pahuche.





Ye sunke me solid chouka ki main mumbai me kaise pahucha or kab. Mujhe kuch yaad kyu nahi aaraha hai.






Main- pata nahi me yaha kaise or kab pahucha. Lekin thanks ki aaplogo ne mujhe utha diya.





À1- theek hai koi baat nahi. Uske baad vo log baha se chale gye or main apne aap ko sambhalte hue baha se apne ghar ki taraf bad gya



Ek texi ki madad se main apne ghar ke pass pahucha lekin baha pahuch kar mere hosh udd gye. Kyuki us jagah per ek bahut hi bada mall bana hua tha. Theek mere bunglow ki jagah per.



Maine us texi wale se baat ki.




Main- bhai ye mall yaha kab ban gya.




Texi- kya bhai time pass kar rahe ho. Ye to yaha pichhle kai saalo se bana hua hai. Lagta hai kai saalo ke baad yaha aarahe ho.





Main- are bhai mera ghar isi mall ki jagah per bana hua tha. Lekin is mall ko dekhke to mera hi dimaag ghum gya.


Tabhi maine apna mob. Nikala lekin usme bilkul bhi signal nahi aaraha tha. To maine us texi wale ka mob. Manga.call karne ke liye. Usne mujhe mob. Diya or maine sabse pehle bhai ka no. Try kiya or uske baad sabhi ghar walo ke. Lekin kisi ka bhi call lag hi nahi raha tha. Sabhi ke no. Per ek hi tune sunai de rahi thi ki ye no. Manya nahi hai.




Mera kharab dimaag or kharab hota ja raha tha.



Tabhi peeche se kisi ne mera naam liya.





U- hii surya.



Maine palat kar peeche dekha to ek 30 saal ka ladka baha khada hua tha.




Main- tum kon ho. Or mujhe kaise jaante ho.





U- main bahut kuch janta hu tumhare baare me. Aao mere sath tumhare man me jitne bhi sawal aarahe hai unke jawab main tumhe de sakta hu. Agar tum chaho to.


Ye kehke usne texi wale ko kuch diya.



Main- ye kya hai.




Texi- kya bhai satak gyi hai kya. Ye rupay hai. Tumhara bhada yaha tak chhodne ka.





Or ye sunke to mere dimaag ki lassi ban gyi thi. Maine usse vo bapis manga or use dekhne laga. Ye to bilkul hi alag tarah ka note tha. 100 rupay ka. Maine vo use bapis diya or us unknown ki taraf dekha jo muskura raha tha. Meri taraf dekhke.





U- abhi bahut se jhatke lagne baaki hai isliye apne aap ko sambhalo. Or aao mere peechhe.





Ye kehke vo aage bad gya or me uske peeche. Tab vo ek garden me jaake ek bench per baith gya. Or me uske baju me. Or uski taraf dekhne laga.





Main- ab batao ye sab itna ajeeb sa kyu ho raha hai mere sath.





U- ye vo mumbai nahi hai jaha tum rehte ho.




Main- matlab. Mumbai to ek hi hai na pure earth per. Fir ye konsi mumbai hai.





U- surya ye vo earth hi nahi hai jaha per tum rehte ho.




Ab mera dimaag bakai me satak raha tha.





Main- dekho Jo bhi kehna hai saaf saaf kaho. Jalebi mat banao.





U- pehle ye batao ki tumhe last kya yaad hai.




Main- main ek black hole ke andar chala gya tha or vo mere andar aate hi band ho gya tha.




U- sahi kaha tumne. To ab aage suno. Uske baad hua ye ki.



Usne mujhe bataya ki me ek warm hole se kisi dusre hi earth per aagya hu.



Ye sunte hi mujhe ek tagda jhatka laga.




Main- pagal ho kya. Aisa keval filmo me hi hota hai. Ye multiverse bagera.






U- filmo ko chhodo tumne Bhagvat Gita to suni hi hogi. Usme shri krishna ji ne nahi kaha hai ki anant brahmand hai or unme se tumhara brahmand uska ek chhota sa hissa. Ye filmo wale hamare grantho se hi inspire hoke apni filme banate hai. Or aajkal ke scientist bhi hamare grantho se hi inspire hoke antriksh ki khojo ke mayene nikalte hai.




Mujhe uski baato me sachai to najar aarahi thi lekin mera dimaag is baat ko manne ko ready bilkul bhi nahi tha.




Main- sach batao yaha per camera kaha per laga hua hai. Tum mujhe bakra bana rahe ho na.






U- nahi surya ye koi majak nahi hai. Balki ek aisi sachai hai jise tum jitni jaldi apna loge utna achha rahega tumhare liye.






Main- to fir me yaha se bapis kaise ja sakta hu us earth per. Kyuki baha per vo Kaal pata nahi kya kand kiye ja raha hoga. Or mere gharwale kitne paresan ho rahe honge mere ware me sochkar





U- isiliye to main yaha aaya hu tumhari madad karne.




Main- baise tum ho kon. Or itna sab kaise jante ho.





U- main kon hu ye filhaal jaane do. Lekin tum ye samajh lo ki agar tum baha chale bhi gye tab bhi tum kaal ko dhund nahi paoge jab tak uska maksad pura nahi ho jata. Ya jab tak vo nahi chahta. Filhaal vo tumhe mara hua hi samajh raha hai use bahi samajhne do.






Main- ha ye baat main bhi janta hu. Usne kaha tha ki vo time travel karke aage hone wali ghatnao ko dekh ke aa sakta hai or uske hisaab se counter plan bhi bana sakta hai. Aisi condition me use dhund pana or use hara pana bahut hi muskil hoga.main agar baha jaake use dhud bhi leta hu tab bhi vo kisi na kisi tarah mujhse do kadam aage hi rahega. Or akhir uska plane kya hai ye bhi samajh me nahi aaraha haj vo akhir karna kya chahta hai.








U- kaal ek bahut hi khatarnaak alien hai. Lekin tumahara main villain kaal nahi hai. Balki kaal khud kisi ke ishare per kaam karta hai.





Ye ek or jhatka tha.




Main- ab ye naya kon hai





U- uska naam hai. BLACK HEART.





main- ye kaisa naam hai.




U- jaisa uska kaam hai baisa hi uska naam hai. Bahut hi powerfull or immortal hai vo. Vo ek Prince hai. Hell yani narak ka.






Main- jaha tak mujhe pata hai. Narak per to yamraj ka raj hota hai. Fir ye kis narak ka prince hai.







U- ek aisa narak jaha per dunia bhar ki evil shaktiya nivaas karti hai. Ye us narak jaisa nahi hai jaha per inhe dandit kiya jata hai. Balki ye narak in jaise logo ke liye kisi swarg se kam nahi hai. Or is jagah ko black heart ke pita ne banaya tha apni shaktiyo se. Taaki baha per vo bina kisi dar ke raj kar sake.






Main- lekin kaise mujhe jara detail me batao.





U- itna to tumne suna hi hoga ki is pure sansaar me kai bhatakti aatmayen hoti hai. Jinhe aam log bhoot pret kehte hai. To black heart ke pita unse souda karte hai. Unhe us narak me jagah dete hai badiya samman dete hai. Or badle me unki soul ko corrupt kar dete hai. Or aisa hone ke baad vo evil ban jata hai. Or sabhi jagah per apni burai ko failane lagta hai. Jitne jyada log burai se judte hai inki shaktiya itni hi badti jaati hai. Ab chuki kalyug chal raha hai. Jaha bure logo ki ginti achhe logo se kahi jyada hai. Jis bajah se ye log is samay immortal ban gaye hai. Inhe keval qaid kiya ja sakta hai. Maara nahi ja sakta. Ya fir pure sansar se burai ko khatm karna padega tab jaake inki shaktiya kamjor hongi or fir unhe mara ja sakta hai. Lekin aisa hona sambhav nahi hai






Main- tum ye sci- fi me fantasy kaha ghusate ja rahe ho.



U- ab jo sach hai to hai. Isme mera koi haath nahi hai.



Main- to fir inko qaid kaise kiya ja sakta hai. Kyuki main to ek aam insan hu. Inki shaktiyo ke aage main kaise tik sakta hu. Or agar tik bhi gya. To bhi hamare beech nirantar chalne wale yudh ka aarambh ho jayega. Jiska koi ant nahi hoga. Fir inhen kabu me kaise kiya ja sakta hai.









U- filhaal ye sabhi kabu me hai. Lekin jald hi nahi rahenge. Kaal black heart ko hi aazaad karane me laga hua hai. Ek baar vo aazad ho gya. Fir vo puri prithvi ko hi narak me badal dega. Uske pass itni powers to hai. Or koi uska kuch nahi bigaad payega. Pehla no. Tumhari prithvi ka lagega. Uske baad dusri prithvi bhi unki najro me aajayegi or vo yaha ke liye nikal jayenge. Isliye unko tumhare yaha hi rok dena padega.







Main- lekin kaise.





Itna sunne ke baad vo meri taraf dekh ke mand mand muskurane laga or yaha meri tension badti hi ja rahi thi…….













To be continue………………….

 

[mashish]

UPDATE - 10















ONE YEAR LATER…………..







Surya ko gayab hue aaj pure ek saal ho gye the. Or uske kuch dino baad se surya ke saare bhai kaal ki khoj me lag gye the. Lekin kaal to behrupiya tha. Vo apne roop badal badal kar apna kaam secratly karta raha. Bahi kaal to chhodo uske kisi ek khaas aadmi tak bhi ye log nahi pahuch paye. Bas bhatakte rahe yaha se baha. Bahi us Sahara wale base ko kaal ne pura bahi ki rate me dafan kar diya tha. Isliye koi bhi sabut nahi mila na hi us black hole ki jaankari mil pa rahi thi ki vo akhir kis jagah per open hua tha. Matlab vo surya ko kis jagah le gya tha.





Bahi surya ke baaki ke ghar walo ko bhi bahut bada jhatka laga tha ye sunne ke baad. Bahi radha to ek dum se toot gyi thi. Usne apne aap ko apne hi kamre me band kar liya tha. Or uska kehna tha ki is kamre ka darwaja surya ke aalawa koi nahi kholega. Lekin uska khana khana bhi jaruri tha. Isliye vo bas ek hi time bhojan karti thi jo uski maa use jabardasti surya ki kasam de kar khiladeti thi. Vo bhi kamre ki khidki se usse baat karke. Kyuki darwaja to vo kholti hi nahi thi.



Bahi saare bache bhi bahut hi mayus ho gye the. Ashk ka haal bhi radha jaisa hi tha. Bahi avi to base se bahar hi nahi nikalta tha. Pata nahi vo kya bana raha tha. Sayad kuch aisa jisse use surya ki koi jaankari mil sake.



Ghar me charo taraf mayusi si fail gyi thi. Sab jinda to the lekin unke andar jaan nahi bachi thi. Unki jaan surya ke sath hi chali gyi thi.








Bahi per dekhte hai ki surya kaha per pahucha. Us warm hole se.





Surya us warm hole se Earth per hi pahucha lekin kisi dusre Earth per. Surya ka ye safar keval 10 min. Ka hi tha. Lekin yaha Earth 1 per is beech 1 saal beet chuka tha.



Surya Earth 2 per ek sunsaan jagah per behoshi ki haalat me pada hua tha.



Tabhi kuch logo ki najar us per padi or vo sabhi uske pass pahuch gye. Un sabne surya ki haalat check ki. To unhe sab theek laga. Isliye unhone apni bottle se pani leke surya ke chehre per daal diya jis bajah se surya ek dum hadbada kar hosh me aajata hai.





Main hosh me aaya or apni aankhe kholne laga. To mere charo taraf karib 4 log khade hue the. Or mujhse puchh rahe the ki main theek hu ya nahi.



Maine unhe ishare se theek hone ka ishara kiya.


Fir ek ne mujhe apna sahara diya jisse me khada hua. Or charo taraf dekhne laga ki main kaha hu.or tabhi mujhe yaad aaya ki main to us black hole me chala gya tha fir yaha kaise pahucha.




Main- ye konsi jagah hai.







À1- ye mumbai hai. Tum kon ho or yaha per is haalat me kaise pahuche.





Ye sunke me solid chouka ki main mumbai me kaise pahucha or kab. Mujhe kuch yaad kyu nahi aaraha hai.






Main- pata nahi me yaha kaise or kab pahucha. Lekin thanks ki aaplogo ne mujhe utha diya.





À1- theek hai koi baat nahi. Uske baad vo log baha se chale gye or main apne aap ko sambhalte hue baha se apne ghar ki taraf bad gya



Ek texi ki madad se main apne ghar ke pass pahucha lekin baha pahuch kar mere hosh udd gye. Kyuki us jagah per ek bahut hi bada mall bana hua tha. Theek mere bunglow ki jagah per.



Maine us texi wale se baat ki.




Main- bhai ye mall yaha kab ban gya.




Texi- kya bhai time pass kar rahe ho. Ye to yaha pichhle kai saalo se bana hua hai. Lagta hai kai saalo ke baad yaha aarahe ho.





Main- are bhai mera ghar isi mall ki jagah per bana hua tha. Lekin is mall ko dekhke to mera hi dimaag ghum gya.


Tabhi maine apna mob. Nikala lekin usme bilkul bhi signal nahi aaraha tha. To maine us texi wale ka mob. Manga.call karne ke liye. Usne mujhe mob. Diya or maine sabse pehle bhai ka no. Try kiya or uske baad sabhi ghar walo ke. Lekin kisi ka bhi call lag hi nahi raha tha. Sabhi ke no. Per ek hi tune sunai de rahi thi ki ye no. Manya nahi hai.




Mera kharab dimaag or kharab hota ja raha tha.



Tabhi peeche se kisi ne mera naam liya.





U- hii surya.



Maine palat kar peeche dekha to ek 30 saal ka ladka baha khada hua tha.




Main- tum kon ho. Or mujhe kaise jaante ho.





U- main bahut kuch janta hu tumhare baare me. Aao mere sath tumhare man me jitne bhi sawal aarahe hai unke jawab main tumhe de sakta hu. Agar tum chaho to.


Ye kehke usne texi wale ko kuch diya.



Main- ye kya hai.




Texi- kya bhai satak gyi hai kya. Ye rupay hai. Tumhara bhada yaha tak chhodne ka.





Or ye sunke to mere dimaag ki lassi ban gyi thi. Maine usse vo bapis manga or use dekhne laga. Ye to bilkul hi alag tarah ka note tha. 100 rupay ka. Maine vo use bapis diya or us unknown ki taraf dekha jo muskura raha tha. Meri taraf dekhke.





U- abhi bahut se jhatke lagne baaki hai isliye apne aap ko sambhalo. Or aao mere peechhe.





Ye kehke vo aage bad gya or me uske peeche. Tab vo ek garden me jaake ek bench per baith gya. Or me uske baju me. Or uski taraf dekhne laga.





Main- ab batao ye sab itna ajeeb sa kyu ho raha hai mere sath.





U- ye vo mumbai nahi hai jaha tum rehte ho.




Main- matlab. Mumbai to ek hi hai na pure earth per. Fir ye konsi mumbai hai.





U- surya ye vo earth hi nahi hai jaha per tum rehte ho.




Ab mera dimaag bakai me satak raha tha.





Main- dekho Jo bhi kehna hai saaf saaf kaho. Jalebi mat banao.





U- pehle ye batao ki tumhe last kya yaad hai.




Main- main ek black hole ke andar chala gya tha or vo mere andar aate hi band ho gya tha.




U- sahi kaha tumne. To ab aage suno. Uske baad hua ye ki.



Usne mujhe bataya ki me ek warm hole se kisi dusre hi earth per aagya hu.



Ye sunte hi mujhe ek tagda jhatka laga.




Main- pagal ho kya. Aisa keval filmo me hi hota hai. Ye multiverse bagera.






U- filmo ko chhodo tumne Bhagvat Gita to suni hi hogi. Usme shri krishna ji ne nahi kaha hai ki anant brahmand hai or unme se tumhara brahmand uska ek chhota sa hissa. Ye filmo wale hamare grantho se hi inspire hoke apni filme banate hai. Or aajkal ke scientist bhi hamare grantho se hi inspire hoke antriksh ki khojo ke mayene nikalte hai.




Mujhe uski baato me sachai to najar aarahi thi lekin mera dimaag is baat ko manne ko ready bilkul bhi nahi tha.




Main- sach batao yaha per camera kaha per laga hua hai. Tum mujhe bakra bana rahe ho na.






U- nahi surya ye koi majak nahi hai. Balki ek aisi sachai hai jise tum jitni jaldi apna loge utna achha rahega tumhare liye.






Main- to fir me yaha se bapis kaise ja sakta hu us earth per. Kyuki baha per vo Kaal pata nahi kya kand kiye ja raha hoga. Or mere gharwale kitne paresan ho rahe honge mere ware me sochkar





U- isiliye to main yaha aaya hu tumhari madad karne.




Main- baise tum ho kon. Or itna sab kaise jante ho.





U- main kon hu ye filhaal jaane do. Lekin tum ye samajh lo ki agar tum baha chale bhi gye tab bhi tum kaal ko dhund nahi paoge jab tak uska maksad pura nahi ho jata. Ya jab tak vo nahi chahta. Filhaal vo tumhe mara hua hi samajh raha hai use bahi samajhne do.






Main- ha ye baat main bhi janta hu. Usne kaha tha ki vo time travel karke aage hone wali ghatnao ko dekh ke aa sakta hai or uske hisaab se counter plan bhi bana sakta hai. Aisi condition me use dhund pana or use hara pana bahut hi muskil hoga.main agar baha jaake use dhud bhi leta hu tab bhi vo kisi na kisi tarah mujhse do kadam aage hi rahega. Or akhir uska plane kya hai ye bhi samajh me nahi aaraha haj vo akhir karna kya chahta hai.








U- kaal ek bahut hi khatarnaak alien hai. Lekin tumahara main villain kaal nahi hai. Balki kaal khud kisi ke ishare per kaam karta hai.





Ye ek or jhatka tha.




Main- ab ye naya kon hai





U- uska naam hai. BLACK HEART.





main- ye kaisa naam hai.




U- jaisa uska kaam hai baisa hi uska naam hai. Bahut hi powerfull or immortal hai vo. Vo ek Prince hai. Hell yani narak ka.






Main- jaha tak mujhe pata hai. Narak per to yamraj ka raj hota hai. Fir ye kis narak ka prince hai.







U- ek aisa narak jaha per dunia bhar ki evil shaktiya nivaas karti hai. Ye us narak jaisa nahi hai jaha per inhe dandit kiya jata hai. Balki ye narak in jaise logo ke liye kisi swarg se kam nahi hai. Or is jagah ko black heart ke pita ne banaya tha apni shaktiyo se. Taaki baha per vo bina kisi dar ke raj kar sake.






Main- lekin kaise mujhe jara detail me batao.





U- itna to tumne suna hi hoga ki is pure sansaar me kai bhatakti aatmayen hoti hai. Jinhe aam log bhoot pret kehte hai. To black heart ke pita unse souda karte hai. Unhe us narak me jagah dete hai badiya samman dete hai. Or badle me unki soul ko corrupt kar dete hai. Or aisa hone ke baad vo evil ban jata hai. Or sabhi jagah per apni burai ko failane lagta hai. Jitne jyada log burai se judte hai inki shaktiya itni hi badti jaati hai. Ab chuki kalyug chal raha hai. Jaha bure logo ki ginti achhe logo se kahi jyada hai. Jis bajah se ye log is samay immortal ban gaye hai. Inhe keval qaid kiya ja sakta hai. Maara nahi ja sakta. Ya fir pure sansar se burai ko khatm karna padega tab jaake inki shaktiya kamjor hongi or fir unhe mara ja sakta hai. Lekin aisa hona sambhav nahi hai






Main- tum ye sci- fi me fantasy kaha ghusate ja rahe ho.



U- ab jo sach hai to hai. Isme mera koi haath nahi hai.



Main- to fir inko qaid kaise kiya ja sakta hai. Kyuki main to ek aam insan hu. Inki shaktiyo ke aage main kaise tik sakta hu. Or agar tik bhi gya. To bhi hamare beech nirantar chalne wale yudh ka aarambh ho jayega. Jiska koi ant nahi hoga. Fir inhen kabu me kaise kiya ja sakta hai.









U- filhaal ye sabhi kabu me hai. Lekin jald hi nahi rahenge. Kaal black heart ko hi aazaad karane me laga hua hai. Ek baar vo aazad ho gya. Fir vo puri prithvi ko hi narak me badal dega. Uske pass itni powers to hai. Or koi uska kuch nahi bigaad payega. Pehla no. Tumhari prithvi ka lagega. Uske baad dusri prithvi bhi unki najro me aajayegi or vo yaha ke liye nikal jayenge. Isliye unko tumhare yaha hi rok dena padega.







Main- lekin kaise.





Itna sunne ke baad vo meri taraf dekh ke mand mand muskurane laga or yaha meri tension badti hi ja rahi thi…….













To be continue………………….

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[krish1152]

UPDATE - 10















ONE YEAR LATER…………..







Surya ko gayab hue aaj pure ek saal ho gye the. Or uske kuch dino baad se surya ke saare bhai kaal ki khoj me lag gye the. Lekin kaal to behrupiya tha. Vo apne roop badal badal kar apna kaam secratly karta raha. Bahi kaal to chhodo uske kisi ek khaas aadmi tak bhi ye log nahi pahuch paye. Bas bhatakte rahe yaha se baha. Bahi us Sahara wale base ko kaal ne pura bahi ki rate me dafan kar diya tha. Isliye koi bhi sabut nahi mila na hi us black hole ki jaankari mil pa rahi thi ki vo akhir kis jagah per open hua tha. Matlab vo surya ko kis jagah le gya tha.





Bahi surya ke baaki ke ghar walo ko bhi bahut bada jhatka laga tha ye sunne ke baad. Bahi radha to ek dum se toot gyi thi. Usne apne aap ko apne hi kamre me band kar liya tha. Or uska kehna tha ki is kamre ka darwaja surya ke aalawa koi nahi kholega. Lekin uska khana khana bhi jaruri tha. Isliye vo bas ek hi time bhojan karti thi jo uski maa use jabardasti surya ki kasam de kar khiladeti thi. Vo bhi kamre ki khidki se usse baat karke. Kyuki darwaja to vo kholti hi nahi thi.



Bahi saare bache bhi bahut hi mayus ho gye the. Ashk ka haal bhi radha jaisa hi tha. Bahi avi to base se bahar hi nahi nikalta tha. Pata nahi vo kya bana raha tha. Sayad kuch aisa jisse use surya ki koi jaankari mil sake.



Ghar me charo taraf mayusi si fail gyi thi. Sab jinda to the lekin unke andar jaan nahi bachi thi. Unki jaan surya ke sath hi chali gyi thi.








Bahi per dekhte hai ki surya kaha per pahucha. Us warm hole se.





Surya us warm hole se Earth per hi pahucha lekin kisi dusre Earth per. Surya ka ye safar keval 10 min. Ka hi tha. Lekin yaha Earth 1 per is beech 1 saal beet chuka tha.



Surya Earth 2 per ek sunsaan jagah per behoshi ki haalat me pada hua tha.



Tabhi kuch logo ki najar us per padi or vo sabhi uske pass pahuch gye. Un sabne surya ki haalat check ki. To unhe sab theek laga. Isliye unhone apni bottle se pani leke surya ke chehre per daal diya jis bajah se surya ek dum hadbada kar hosh me aajata hai.





Main hosh me aaya or apni aankhe kholne laga. To mere charo taraf karib 4 log khade hue the. Or mujhse puchh rahe the ki main theek hu ya nahi.



Maine unhe ishare se theek hone ka ishara kiya.


Fir ek ne mujhe apna sahara diya jisse me khada hua. Or charo taraf dekhne laga ki main kaha hu.or tabhi mujhe yaad aaya ki main to us black hole me chala gya tha fir yaha kaise pahucha.




Main- ye konsi jagah hai.







À1- ye mumbai hai. Tum kon ho or yaha per is haalat me kaise pahuche.





Ye sunke me solid chouka ki main mumbai me kaise pahucha or kab. Mujhe kuch yaad kyu nahi aaraha hai.






Main- pata nahi me yaha kaise or kab pahucha. Lekin thanks ki aaplogo ne mujhe utha diya.





À1- theek hai koi baat nahi. Uske baad vo log baha se chale gye or main apne aap ko sambhalte hue baha se apne ghar ki taraf bad gya



Ek texi ki madad se main apne ghar ke pass pahucha lekin baha pahuch kar mere hosh udd gye. Kyuki us jagah per ek bahut hi bada mall bana hua tha. Theek mere bunglow ki jagah per.



Maine us texi wale se baat ki.




Main- bhai ye mall yaha kab ban gya.




Texi- kya bhai time pass kar rahe ho. Ye to yaha pichhle kai saalo se bana hua hai. Lagta hai kai saalo ke baad yaha aarahe ho.





Main- are bhai mera ghar isi mall ki jagah per bana hua tha. Lekin is mall ko dekhke to mera hi dimaag ghum gya.


Tabhi maine apna mob. Nikala lekin usme bilkul bhi signal nahi aaraha tha. To maine us texi wale ka mob. Manga.call karne ke liye. Usne mujhe mob. Diya or maine sabse pehle bhai ka no. Try kiya or uske baad sabhi ghar walo ke. Lekin kisi ka bhi call lag hi nahi raha tha. Sabhi ke no. Per ek hi tune sunai de rahi thi ki ye no. Manya nahi hai.




Mera kharab dimaag or kharab hota ja raha tha.



Tabhi peeche se kisi ne mera naam liya.





U- hii surya.



Maine palat kar peeche dekha to ek 30 saal ka ladka baha khada hua tha.




Main- tum kon ho. Or mujhe kaise jaante ho.





U- main bahut kuch janta hu tumhare baare me. Aao mere sath tumhare man me jitne bhi sawal aarahe hai unke jawab main tumhe de sakta hu. Agar tum chaho to.


Ye kehke usne texi wale ko kuch diya.



Main- ye kya hai.




Texi- kya bhai satak gyi hai kya. Ye rupay hai. Tumhara bhada yaha tak chhodne ka.





Or ye sunke to mere dimaag ki lassi ban gyi thi. Maine usse vo bapis manga or use dekhne laga. Ye to bilkul hi alag tarah ka note tha. 100 rupay ka. Maine vo use bapis diya or us unknown ki taraf dekha jo muskura raha tha. Meri taraf dekhke.





U- abhi bahut se jhatke lagne baaki hai isliye apne aap ko sambhalo. Or aao mere peechhe.





Ye kehke vo aage bad gya or me uske peeche. Tab vo ek garden me jaake ek bench per baith gya. Or me uske baju me. Or uski taraf dekhne laga.





Main- ab batao ye sab itna ajeeb sa kyu ho raha hai mere sath.





U- ye vo mumbai nahi hai jaha tum rehte ho.




Main- matlab. Mumbai to ek hi hai na pure earth per. Fir ye konsi mumbai hai.





U- surya ye vo earth hi nahi hai jaha per tum rehte ho.




Ab mera dimaag bakai me satak raha tha.





Main- dekho Jo bhi kehna hai saaf saaf kaho. Jalebi mat banao.





U- pehle ye batao ki tumhe last kya yaad hai.




Main- main ek black hole ke andar chala gya tha or vo mere andar aate hi band ho gya tha.




U- sahi kaha tumne. To ab aage suno. Uske baad hua ye ki.



Usne mujhe bataya ki me ek warm hole se kisi dusre hi earth per aagya hu.



Ye sunte hi mujhe ek tagda jhatka laga.




Main- pagal ho kya. Aisa keval filmo me hi hota hai. Ye multiverse bagera.






U- filmo ko chhodo tumne Bhagvat Gita to suni hi hogi. Usme shri krishna ji ne nahi kaha hai ki anant brahmand hai or unme se tumhara brahmand uska ek chhota sa hissa. Ye filmo wale hamare grantho se hi inspire hoke apni filme banate hai. Or aajkal ke scientist bhi hamare grantho se hi inspire hoke antriksh ki khojo ke mayene nikalte hai.




Mujhe uski baato me sachai to najar aarahi thi lekin mera dimaag is baat ko manne ko ready bilkul bhi nahi tha.




Main- sach batao yaha per camera kaha per laga hua hai. Tum mujhe bakra bana rahe ho na.






U- nahi surya ye koi majak nahi hai. Balki ek aisi sachai hai jise tum jitni jaldi apna loge utna achha rahega tumhare liye.






Main- to fir me yaha se bapis kaise ja sakta hu us earth per. Kyuki baha per vo Kaal pata nahi kya kand kiye ja raha hoga. Or mere gharwale kitne paresan ho rahe honge mere ware me sochkar





U- isiliye to main yaha aaya hu tumhari madad karne.




Main- baise tum ho kon. Or itna sab kaise jante ho.





U- main kon hu ye filhaal jaane do. Lekin tum ye samajh lo ki agar tum baha chale bhi gye tab bhi tum kaal ko dhund nahi paoge jab tak uska maksad pura nahi ho jata. Ya jab tak vo nahi chahta. Filhaal vo tumhe mara hua hi samajh raha hai use bahi samajhne do.






Main- ha ye baat main bhi janta hu. Usne kaha tha ki vo time travel karke aage hone wali ghatnao ko dekh ke aa sakta hai or uske hisaab se counter plan bhi bana sakta hai. Aisi condition me use dhund pana or use hara pana bahut hi muskil hoga.main agar baha jaake use dhud bhi leta hu tab bhi vo kisi na kisi tarah mujhse do kadam aage hi rahega. Or akhir uska plane kya hai ye bhi samajh me nahi aaraha haj vo akhir karna kya chahta hai.








U- kaal ek bahut hi khatarnaak alien hai. Lekin tumahara main villain kaal nahi hai. Balki kaal khud kisi ke ishare per kaam karta hai.





Ye ek or jhatka tha.




Main- ab ye naya kon hai





U- uska naam hai. BLACK HEART.





main- ye kaisa naam hai.




U- jaisa uska kaam hai baisa hi uska naam hai. Bahut hi powerfull or immortal hai vo. Vo ek Prince hai. Hell yani narak ka.






Main- jaha tak mujhe pata hai. Narak per to yamraj ka raj hota hai. Fir ye kis narak ka prince hai.







U- ek aisa narak jaha per dunia bhar ki evil shaktiya nivaas karti hai. Ye us narak jaisa nahi hai jaha per inhe dandit kiya jata hai. Balki ye narak in jaise logo ke liye kisi swarg se kam nahi hai. Or is jagah ko black heart ke pita ne banaya tha apni shaktiyo se. Taaki baha per vo bina kisi dar ke raj kar sake.






Main- lekin kaise mujhe jara detail me batao.





U- itna to tumne suna hi hoga ki is pure sansaar me kai bhatakti aatmayen hoti hai. Jinhe aam log bhoot pret kehte hai. To black heart ke pita unse souda karte hai. Unhe us narak me jagah dete hai badiya samman dete hai. Or badle me unki soul ko corrupt kar dete hai. Or aisa hone ke baad vo evil ban jata hai. Or sabhi jagah per apni burai ko failane lagta hai. Jitne jyada log burai se judte hai inki shaktiya itni hi badti jaati hai. Ab chuki kalyug chal raha hai. Jaha bure logo ki ginti achhe logo se kahi jyada hai. Jis bajah se ye log is samay immortal ban gaye hai. Inhe keval qaid kiya ja sakta hai. Maara nahi ja sakta. Ya fir pure sansar se burai ko khatm karna padega tab jaake inki shaktiya kamjor hongi or fir unhe mara ja sakta hai. Lekin aisa hona sambhav nahi hai






Main- tum ye sci- fi me fantasy kaha ghusate ja rahe ho.



U- ab jo sach hai to hai. Isme mera koi haath nahi hai.



Main- to fir inko qaid kaise kiya ja sakta hai. Kyuki main to ek aam insan hu. Inki shaktiyo ke aage main kaise tik sakta hu. Or agar tik bhi gya. To bhi hamare beech nirantar chalne wale yudh ka aarambh ho jayega. Jiska koi ant nahi hoga. Fir inhen kabu me kaise kiya ja sakta hai.









U- filhaal ye sabhi kabu me hai. Lekin jald hi nahi rahenge. Kaal black heart ko hi aazaad karane me laga hua hai. Ek baar vo aazad ho gya. Fir vo puri prithvi ko hi narak me badal dega. Uske pass itni powers to hai. Or koi uska kuch nahi bigaad payega. Pehla no. Tumhari prithvi ka lagega. Uske baad dusri prithvi bhi unki najro me aajayegi or vo yaha ke liye nikal jayenge. Isliye unko tumhare yaha hi rok dena padega.







Main- lekin kaise.





Itna sunne ke baad vo meri taraf dekh ke mand mand muskurane laga or yaha meri tension badti hi ja rahi thi…….













To be continue………………….

Mast shaandar update

 

[Ayush2017]

Awesome update bro

 

[Htcw456]

UPDATE - 10















ONE YEAR LATER…………..







Surya ko gayab hue aaj pure ek saal ho gye the. Or uske kuch dino baad se surya ke saare bhai kaal ki khoj me lag gye the. Lekin kaal to behrupiya tha. Vo apne roop badal badal kar apna kaam secratly karta raha. Bahi kaal to chhodo uske kisi ek khaas aadmi tak bhi ye log nahi pahuch paye. Bas bhatakte rahe yaha se baha. Bahi us Sahara wale base ko kaal ne pura bahi ki rate me dafan kar diya tha. Isliye koi bhi sabut nahi mila na hi us black hole ki jaankari mil pa rahi thi ki vo akhir kis jagah per open hua tha. Matlab vo surya ko kis jagah le gya tha.





Bahi surya ke baaki ke ghar walo ko bhi bahut bada jhatka laga tha ye sunne ke baad. Bahi radha to ek dum se toot gyi thi. Usne apne aap ko apne hi kamre me band kar liya tha. Or uska kehna tha ki is kamre ka darwaja surya ke aalawa koi nahi kholega. Lekin uska khana khana bhi jaruri tha. Isliye vo bas ek hi time bhojan karti thi jo uski maa use jabardasti surya ki kasam de kar khiladeti thi. Vo bhi kamre ki khidki se usse baat karke. Kyuki darwaja to vo kholti hi nahi thi.



Bahi saare bache bhi bahut hi mayus ho gye the. Ashk ka haal bhi radha jaisa hi tha. Bahi avi to base se bahar hi nahi nikalta tha. Pata nahi vo kya bana raha tha. Sayad kuch aisa jisse use surya ki koi jaankari mil sake.



Ghar me charo taraf mayusi si fail gyi thi. Sab jinda to the lekin unke andar jaan nahi bachi thi. Unki jaan surya ke sath hi chali gyi thi.








Bahi per dekhte hai ki surya kaha per pahucha. Us warm hole se.





Surya us warm hole se Earth per hi pahucha lekin kisi dusre Earth per. Surya ka ye safar keval 10 min. Ka hi tha. Lekin yaha Earth 1 per is beech 1 saal beet chuka tha.



Surya Earth 2 per ek sunsaan jagah per behoshi ki haalat me pada hua tha.



Tabhi kuch logo ki najar us per padi or vo sabhi uske pass pahuch gye. Un sabne surya ki haalat check ki. To unhe sab theek laga. Isliye unhone apni bottle se pani leke surya ke chehre per daal diya jis bajah se surya ek dum hadbada kar hosh me aajata hai.





Main hosh me aaya or apni aankhe kholne laga. To mere charo taraf karib 4 log khade hue the. Or mujhse puchh rahe the ki main theek hu ya nahi.



Maine unhe ishare se theek hone ka ishara kiya.


Fir ek ne mujhe apna sahara diya jisse me khada hua. Or charo taraf dekhne laga ki main kaha hu.or tabhi mujhe yaad aaya ki main to us black hole me chala gya tha fir yaha kaise pahucha.




Main- ye konsi jagah hai.







À1- ye mumbai hai. Tum kon ho or yaha per is haalat me kaise pahuche.





Ye sunke me solid chouka ki main mumbai me kaise pahucha or kab. Mujhe kuch yaad kyu nahi aaraha hai.






Main- pata nahi me yaha kaise or kab pahucha. Lekin thanks ki aaplogo ne mujhe utha diya.





À1- theek hai koi baat nahi. Uske baad vo log baha se chale gye or main apne aap ko sambhalte hue baha se apne ghar ki taraf bad gya



Ek texi ki madad se main apne ghar ke pass pahucha lekin baha pahuch kar mere hosh udd gye. Kyuki us jagah per ek bahut hi bada mall bana hua tha. Theek mere bunglow ki jagah per.



Maine us texi wale se baat ki.




Main- bhai ye mall yaha kab ban gya.




Texi- kya bhai time pass kar rahe ho. Ye to yaha pichhle kai saalo se bana hua hai. Lagta hai kai saalo ke baad yaha aarahe ho.





Main- are bhai mera ghar isi mall ki jagah per bana hua tha. Lekin is mall ko dekhke to mera hi dimaag ghum gya.


Tabhi maine apna mob. Nikala lekin usme bilkul bhi signal nahi aaraha tha. To maine us texi wale ka mob. Manga.call karne ke liye. Usne mujhe mob. Diya or maine sabse pehle bhai ka no. Try kiya or uske baad sabhi ghar walo ke. Lekin kisi ka bhi call lag hi nahi raha tha. Sabhi ke no. Per ek hi tune sunai de rahi thi ki ye no. Manya nahi hai.




Mera kharab dimaag or kharab hota ja raha tha.



Tabhi peeche se kisi ne mera naam liya.





U- hii surya.



Maine palat kar peeche dekha to ek 30 saal ka ladka baha khada hua tha.




Main- tum kon ho. Or mujhe kaise jaante ho.





U- main bahut kuch janta hu tumhare baare me. Aao mere sath tumhare man me jitne bhi sawal aarahe hai unke jawab main tumhe de sakta hu. Agar tum chaho to.


Ye kehke usne texi wale ko kuch diya.



Main- ye kya hai.




Texi- kya bhai satak gyi hai kya. Ye rupay hai. Tumhara bhada yaha tak chhodne ka.





Or ye sunke to mere dimaag ki lassi ban gyi thi. Maine usse vo bapis manga or use dekhne laga. Ye to bilkul hi alag tarah ka note tha. 100 rupay ka. Maine vo use bapis diya or us unknown ki taraf dekha jo muskura raha tha. Meri taraf dekhke.





U- abhi bahut se jhatke lagne baaki hai isliye apne aap ko sambhalo. Or aao mere peechhe.





Ye kehke vo aage bad gya or me uske peeche. Tab vo ek garden me jaake ek bench per baith gya. Or me uske baju me. Or uski taraf dekhne laga.





Main- ab batao ye sab itna ajeeb sa kyu ho raha hai mere sath.





U- ye vo mumbai nahi hai jaha tum rehte ho.




Main- matlab. Mumbai to ek hi hai na pure earth per. Fir ye konsi mumbai hai.





U- surya ye vo earth hi nahi hai jaha per tum rehte ho.




Ab mera dimaag bakai me satak raha tha.





Main- dekho Jo bhi kehna hai saaf saaf kaho. Jalebi mat banao.





U- pehle ye batao ki tumhe last kya yaad hai.




Main- main ek black hole ke andar chala gya tha or vo mere andar aate hi band ho gya tha.




U- sahi kaha tumne. To ab aage suno. Uske baad hua ye ki.



Usne mujhe bataya ki me ek warm hole se kisi dusre hi earth per aagya hu.



Ye sunte hi mujhe ek tagda jhatka laga.




Main- pagal ho kya. Aisa keval filmo me hi hota hai. Ye multiverse bagera.






U- filmo ko chhodo tumne Bhagvat Gita to suni hi hogi. Usme shri krishna ji ne nahi kaha hai ki anant brahmand hai or unme se tumhara brahmand uska ek chhota sa hissa. Ye filmo wale hamare grantho se hi inspire hoke apni filme banate hai. Or aajkal ke scientist bhi hamare grantho se hi inspire hoke antriksh ki khojo ke mayene nikalte hai.




Mujhe uski baato me sachai to najar aarahi thi lekin mera dimaag is baat ko manne ko ready bilkul bhi nahi tha.




Main- sach batao yaha per camera kaha per laga hua hai. Tum mujhe bakra bana rahe ho na.






U- nahi surya ye koi majak nahi hai. Balki ek aisi sachai hai jise tum jitni jaldi apna loge utna achha rahega tumhare liye.






Main- to fir me yaha se bapis kaise ja sakta hu us earth per. Kyuki baha per vo Kaal pata nahi kya kand kiye ja raha hoga. Or mere gharwale kitne paresan ho rahe honge mere ware me sochkar





U- isiliye to main yaha aaya hu tumhari madad karne.




Main- baise tum ho kon. Or itna sab kaise jante ho.





U- main kon hu ye filhaal jaane do. Lekin tum ye samajh lo ki agar tum baha chale bhi gye tab bhi tum kaal ko dhund nahi paoge jab tak uska maksad pura nahi ho jata. Ya jab tak vo nahi chahta. Filhaal vo tumhe mara hua hi samajh raha hai use bahi samajhne do.






Main- ha ye baat main bhi janta hu. Usne kaha tha ki vo time travel karke aage hone wali ghatnao ko dekh ke aa sakta hai or uske hisaab se counter plan bhi bana sakta hai. Aisi condition me use dhund pana or use hara pana bahut hi muskil hoga.main agar baha jaake use dhud bhi leta hu tab bhi vo kisi na kisi tarah mujhse do kadam aage hi rahega. Or akhir uska plane kya hai ye bhi samajh me nahi aaraha haj vo akhir karna kya chahta hai.








U- kaal ek bahut hi khatarnaak alien hai. Lekin tumahara main villain kaal nahi hai. Balki kaal khud kisi ke ishare per kaam karta hai.





Ye ek or jhatka tha.




Main- ab ye naya kon hai





U- uska naam hai. BLACK HEART.





main- ye kaisa naam hai.




U- jaisa uska kaam hai baisa hi uska naam hai. Bahut hi powerfull or immortal hai vo. Vo ek Prince hai. Hell yani narak ka.






Main- jaha tak mujhe pata hai. Narak per to yamraj ka raj hota hai. Fir ye kis narak ka prince hai.







U- ek aisa narak jaha per dunia bhar ki evil shaktiya nivaas karti hai. Ye us narak jaisa nahi hai jaha per inhe dandit kiya jata hai. Balki ye narak in jaise logo ke liye kisi swarg se kam nahi hai. Or is jagah ko black heart ke pita ne banaya tha apni shaktiyo se. Taaki baha per vo bina kisi dar ke raj kar sake.






Main- lekin kaise mujhe jara detail me batao.





U- itna to tumne suna hi hoga ki is pure sansaar me kai bhatakti aatmayen hoti hai. Jinhe aam log bhoot pret kehte hai. To black heart ke pita unse souda karte hai. Unhe us narak me jagah dete hai badiya samman dete hai. Or badle me unki soul ko corrupt kar dete hai. Or aisa hone ke baad vo evil ban jata hai. Or sabhi jagah per apni burai ko failane lagta hai. Jitne jyada log burai se judte hai inki shaktiya itni hi badti jaati hai. Ab chuki kalyug chal raha hai. Jaha bure logo ki ginti achhe logo se kahi jyada hai. Jis bajah se ye log is samay immortal ban gaye hai. Inhe keval qaid kiya ja sakta hai. Maara nahi ja sakta. Ya fir pure sansar se burai ko khatm karna padega tab jaake inki shaktiya kamjor hongi or fir unhe mara ja sakta hai. Lekin aisa hona sambhav nahi hai






Main- tum ye sci- fi me fantasy kaha ghusate ja rahe ho.



U- ab jo sach hai to hai. Isme mera koi haath nahi hai.



Main- to fir inko qaid kaise kiya ja sakta hai. Kyuki main to ek aam insan hu. Inki shaktiyo ke aage main kaise tik sakta hu. Or agar tik bhi gya. To bhi hamare beech nirantar chalne wale yudh ka aarambh ho jayega. Jiska koi ant nahi hoga. Fir inhen kabu me kaise kiya ja sakta hai.









U- filhaal ye sabhi kabu me hai. Lekin jald hi nahi rahenge. Kaal black heart ko hi aazaad karane me laga hua hai. Ek baar vo aazad ho gya. Fir vo puri prithvi ko hi narak me badal dega. Uske pass itni powers to hai. Or koi uska kuch nahi bigaad payega. Pehla no. Tumhari prithvi ka lagega. Uske baad dusri prithvi bhi unki najro me aajayegi or vo yaha ke liye nikal jayenge. Isliye unko tumhare yaha hi rok dena padega.







Main- lekin kaise.





Itna sunne ke baad vo meri taraf dekh ke mand mand muskurane laga or yaha meri tension badti hi ja rahi thi…….













To be continue………………….

Fantastic update bro.
good to see Suriya live and well.....

 

[Nevil singh]

UPDATE - 10















ONE YEAR LATER…………..







Surya ko gayab hue aaj pure ek saal ho gye the. Or uske kuch dino baad se surya ke saare bhai kaal ki khoj me lag gye the. Lekin kaal to behrupiya tha. Vo apne roop badal badal kar apna kaam secratly karta raha. Bahi kaal to chhodo uske kisi ek khaas aadmi tak bhi ye log nahi pahuch paye. Bas bhatakte rahe yaha se baha. Bahi us Sahara wale base ko kaal ne pura bahi ki rate me dafan kar diya tha. Isliye koi bhi sabut nahi mila na hi us black hole ki jaankari mil pa rahi thi ki vo akhir kis jagah per open hua tha. Matlab vo surya ko kis jagah le gya tha.





Bahi surya ke baaki ke ghar walo ko bhi bahut bada jhatka laga tha ye sunne ke baad. Bahi radha to ek dum se toot gyi thi. Usne apne aap ko apne hi kamre me band kar liya tha. Or uska kehna tha ki is kamre ka darwaja surya ke aalawa koi nahi kholega. Lekin uska khana khana bhi jaruri tha. Isliye vo bas ek hi time bhojan karti thi jo uski maa use jabardasti surya ki kasam de kar khiladeti thi. Vo bhi kamre ki khidki se usse baat karke. Kyuki darwaja to vo kholti hi nahi thi.



Bahi saare bache bhi bahut hi mayus ho gye the. Ashk ka haal bhi radha jaisa hi tha. Bahi avi to base se bahar hi nahi nikalta tha. Pata nahi vo kya bana raha tha. Sayad kuch aisa jisse use surya ki koi jaankari mil sake.



Ghar me charo taraf mayusi si fail gyi thi. Sab jinda to the lekin unke andar jaan nahi bachi thi. Unki jaan surya ke sath hi chali gyi thi.








Bahi per dekhte hai ki surya kaha per pahucha. Us warm hole se.





Surya us warm hole se Earth per hi pahucha lekin kisi dusre Earth per. Surya ka ye safar keval 10 min. Ka hi tha. Lekin yaha Earth 1 per is beech 1 saal beet chuka tha.



Surya Earth 2 per ek sunsaan jagah per behoshi ki haalat me pada hua tha.



Tabhi kuch logo ki najar us per padi or vo sabhi uske pass pahuch gye. Un sabne surya ki haalat check ki. To unhe sab theek laga. Isliye unhone apni bottle se pani leke surya ke chehre per daal diya jis bajah se surya ek dum hadbada kar hosh me aajata hai.





Main hosh me aaya or apni aankhe kholne laga. To mere charo taraf karib 4 log khade hue the. Or mujhse puchh rahe the ki main theek hu ya nahi.



Maine unhe ishare se theek hone ka ishara kiya.


Fir ek ne mujhe apna sahara diya jisse me khada hua. Or charo taraf dekhne laga ki main kaha hu.or tabhi mujhe yaad aaya ki main to us black hole me chala gya tha fir yaha kaise pahucha.




Main- ye konsi jagah hai.







À1- ye mumbai hai. Tum kon ho or yaha per is haalat me kaise pahuche.





Ye sunke me solid chouka ki main mumbai me kaise pahucha or kab. Mujhe kuch yaad kyu nahi aaraha hai.






Main- pata nahi me yaha kaise or kab pahucha. Lekin thanks ki aaplogo ne mujhe utha diya.





À1- theek hai koi baat nahi. Uske baad vo log baha se chale gye or main apne aap ko sambhalte hue baha se apne ghar ki taraf bad gya



Ek texi ki madad se main apne ghar ke pass pahucha lekin baha pahuch kar mere hosh udd gye. Kyuki us jagah per ek bahut hi bada mall bana hua tha. Theek mere bunglow ki jagah per.



Maine us texi wale se baat ki.




Main- bhai ye mall yaha kab ban gya.




Texi- kya bhai time pass kar rahe ho. Ye to yaha pichhle kai saalo se bana hua hai. Lagta hai kai saalo ke baad yaha aarahe ho.





Main- are bhai mera ghar isi mall ki jagah per bana hua tha. Lekin is mall ko dekhke to mera hi dimaag ghum gya.


Tabhi maine apna mob. Nikala lekin usme bilkul bhi signal nahi aaraha tha. To maine us texi wale ka mob. Manga.call karne ke liye. Usne mujhe mob. Diya or maine sabse pehle bhai ka no. Try kiya or uske baad sabhi ghar walo ke. Lekin kisi ka bhi call lag hi nahi raha tha. Sabhi ke no. Per ek hi tune sunai de rahi thi ki ye no. Manya nahi hai.




Mera kharab dimaag or kharab hota ja raha tha.



Tabhi peeche se kisi ne mera naam liya.





U- hii surya.



Maine palat kar peeche dekha to ek 30 saal ka ladka baha khada hua tha.




Main- tum kon ho. Or mujhe kaise jaante ho.





U- main bahut kuch janta hu tumhare baare me. Aao mere sath tumhare man me jitne bhi sawal aarahe hai unke jawab main tumhe de sakta hu. Agar tum chaho to.


Ye kehke usne texi wale ko kuch diya.



Main- ye kya hai.




Texi- kya bhai satak gyi hai kya. Ye rupay hai. Tumhara bhada yaha tak chhodne ka.





Or ye sunke to mere dimaag ki lassi ban gyi thi. Maine usse vo bapis manga or use dekhne laga. Ye to bilkul hi alag tarah ka note tha. 100 rupay ka. Maine vo use bapis diya or us unknown ki taraf dekha jo muskura raha tha. Meri taraf dekhke.





U- abhi bahut se jhatke lagne baaki hai isliye apne aap ko sambhalo. Or aao mere peechhe.





Ye kehke vo aage bad gya or me uske peeche. Tab vo ek garden me jaake ek bench per baith gya. Or me uske baju me. Or uski taraf dekhne laga.





Main- ab batao ye sab itna ajeeb sa kyu ho raha hai mere sath.





U- ye vo mumbai nahi hai jaha tum rehte ho.




Main- matlab. Mumbai to ek hi hai na pure earth per. Fir ye konsi mumbai hai.





U- surya ye vo earth hi nahi hai jaha per tum rehte ho.




Ab mera dimaag bakai me satak raha tha.





Main- dekho Jo bhi kehna hai saaf saaf kaho. Jalebi mat banao.





U- pehle ye batao ki tumhe last kya yaad hai.




Main- main ek black hole ke andar chala gya tha or vo mere andar aate hi band ho gya tha.




U- sahi kaha tumne. To ab aage suno. Uske baad hua ye ki.



Usne mujhe bataya ki me ek warm hole se kisi dusre hi earth per aagya hu.



Ye sunte hi mujhe ek tagda jhatka laga.




Main- pagal ho kya. Aisa keval filmo me hi hota hai. Ye multiverse bagera.






U- filmo ko chhodo tumne Bhagvat Gita to suni hi hogi. Usme shri krishna ji ne nahi kaha hai ki anant brahmand hai or unme se tumhara brahmand uska ek chhota sa hissa. Ye filmo wale hamare grantho se hi inspire hoke apni filme banate hai. Or aajkal ke scientist bhi hamare grantho se hi inspire hoke antriksh ki khojo ke mayene nikalte hai.




Mujhe uski baato me sachai to najar aarahi thi lekin mera dimaag is baat ko manne ko ready bilkul bhi nahi tha.




Main- sach batao yaha per camera kaha per laga hua hai. Tum mujhe bakra bana rahe ho na.






U- nahi surya ye koi majak nahi hai. Balki ek aisi sachai hai jise tum jitni jaldi apna loge utna achha rahega tumhare liye.






Main- to fir me yaha se bapis kaise ja sakta hu us earth per. Kyuki baha per vo Kaal pata nahi kya kand kiye ja raha hoga. Or mere gharwale kitne paresan ho rahe honge mere ware me sochkar





U- isiliye to main yaha aaya hu tumhari madad karne.




Main- baise tum ho kon. Or itna sab kaise jante ho.





U- main kon hu ye filhaal jaane do. Lekin tum ye samajh lo ki agar tum baha chale bhi gye tab bhi tum kaal ko dhund nahi paoge jab tak uska maksad pura nahi ho jata. Ya jab tak vo nahi chahta. Filhaal vo tumhe mara hua hi samajh raha hai use bahi samajhne do.






Main- ha ye baat main bhi janta hu. Usne kaha tha ki vo time travel karke aage hone wali ghatnao ko dekh ke aa sakta hai or uske hisaab se counter plan bhi bana sakta hai. Aisi condition me use dhund pana or use hara pana bahut hi muskil hoga.main agar baha jaake use dhud bhi leta hu tab bhi vo kisi na kisi tarah mujhse do kadam aage hi rahega. Or akhir uska plane kya hai ye bhi samajh me nahi aaraha haj vo akhir karna kya chahta hai.








U- kaal ek bahut hi khatarnaak alien hai. Lekin tumahara main villain kaal nahi hai. Balki kaal khud kisi ke ishare per kaam karta hai.





Ye ek or jhatka tha.




Main- ab ye naya kon hai





U- uska naam hai. BLACK HEART.





main- ye kaisa naam hai.




U- jaisa uska kaam hai baisa hi uska naam hai. Bahut hi powerfull or immortal hai vo. Vo ek Prince hai. Hell yani narak ka.






Main- jaha tak mujhe pata hai. Narak per to yamraj ka raj hota hai. Fir ye kis narak ka prince hai.







U- ek aisa narak jaha per dunia bhar ki evil shaktiya nivaas karti hai. Ye us narak jaisa nahi hai jaha per inhe dandit kiya jata hai. Balki ye narak in jaise logo ke liye kisi swarg se kam nahi hai. Or is jagah ko black heart ke pita ne banaya tha apni shaktiyo se. Taaki baha per vo bina kisi dar ke raj kar sake.






Main- lekin kaise mujhe jara detail me batao.





U- itna to tumne suna hi hoga ki is pure sansaar me kai bhatakti aatmayen hoti hai. Jinhe aam log bhoot pret kehte hai. To black heart ke pita unse souda karte hai. Unhe us narak me jagah dete hai badiya samman dete hai. Or badle me unki soul ko corrupt kar dete hai. Or aisa hone ke baad vo evil ban jata hai. Or sabhi jagah per apni burai ko failane lagta hai. Jitne jyada log burai se judte hai inki shaktiya itni hi badti jaati hai. Ab chuki kalyug chal raha hai. Jaha bure logo ki ginti achhe logo se kahi jyada hai. Jis bajah se ye log is samay immortal ban gaye hai. Inhe keval qaid kiya ja sakta hai. Maara nahi ja sakta. Ya fir pure sansar se burai ko khatm karna padega tab jaake inki shaktiya kamjor hongi or fir unhe mara ja sakta hai. Lekin aisa hona sambhav nahi hai






Main- tum ye sci- fi me fantasy kaha ghusate ja rahe ho.



U- ab jo sach hai to hai. Isme mera koi haath nahi hai.



Main- to fir inko qaid kaise kiya ja sakta hai. Kyuki main to ek aam insan hu. Inki shaktiyo ke aage main kaise tik sakta hu. Or agar tik bhi gya. To bhi hamare beech nirantar chalne wale yudh ka aarambh ho jayega. Jiska koi ant nahi hoga. Fir inhen kabu me kaise kiya ja sakta hai.









U- filhaal ye sabhi kabu me hai. Lekin jald hi nahi rahenge. Kaal black heart ko hi aazaad karane me laga hua hai. Ek baar vo aazad ho gya. Fir vo puri prithvi ko hi narak me badal dega. Uske pass itni powers to hai. Or koi uska kuch nahi bigaad payega. Pehla no. Tumhari prithvi ka lagega. Uske baad dusri prithvi bhi unki najro me aajayegi or vo yaha ke liye nikal jayenge. Isliye unko tumhare yaha hi rok dena padega.







Main- lekin kaise.





Itna sunne ke baad vo meri taraf dekh ke mand mand muskurane laga or yaha meri tension badti hi ja rahi thi…….













To be continue………………….

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Surya ko gayab hue aaj pure ek saal ho gye the. Or uske kuch dino baad se surya ke saare bhai kaal ki khoj me lag gye the. Lekin kaal to behrupiya tha. Vo apne roop badal badal kar apna kaam secratly karta raha. Bahi kaal to chhodo uske kisi ek khaas aadmi tak bhi ye log nahi pahuch paye. Bas bhatakte rahe yaha se baha. Bahi us Sahara wale base ko kaal ne pura bahi ki rate me dafan kar diya tha. Isliye koi bhi sabut nahi mila na hi us black hole ki jaankari mil pa rahi thi ki vo akhir kis jagah per open hua tha. Matlab vo surya ko kis jagah le gya tha.





Bahi surya ke baaki ke ghar walo ko bhi bahut bada jhatka laga tha ye sunne ke baad. Bahi radha to ek dum se toot gyi thi. Usne apne aap ko apne hi kamre me band kar liya tha. Or uska kehna tha ki is kamre ka darwaja surya ke aalawa koi nahi kholega. Lekin uska khana khana bhi jaruri tha. Isliye vo bas ek hi time bhojan karti thi jo uski maa use jabardasti surya ki kasam de kar khiladeti thi. Vo bhi kamre ki khidki se usse baat karke. Kyuki darwaja to vo kholti hi nahi thi.



Bahi saare bache bhi bahut hi mayus ho gye the. Ashk ka haal bhi radha jaisa hi tha. Bahi avi to base se bahar hi nahi nikalta tha. Pata nahi vo kya bana raha tha. Sayad kuch aisa jisse use surya ki koi jaankari mil sake.



Ghar me charo taraf mayusi si fail gyi thi. Sab jinda to the lekin unke andar jaan nahi bachi thi. Unki jaan surya ke sath hi chali gyi thi.








Bahi per dekhte hai ki surya kaha per pahucha. Us warm hole se.





Surya us warm hole se Earth per hi pahucha lekin kisi dusre Earth per. Surya ka ye safar keval 10 min. Ka hi tha. Lekin yaha Earth 1 per is beech 1 saal beet chuka tha.



Surya Earth 2 per ek sunsaan jagah per behoshi ki haalat me pada hua tha.



Tabhi kuch logo ki najar us per padi or vo sabhi uske pass pahuch gye. Un sabne surya ki haalat check ki. To unhe sab theek laga. Isliye unhone apni bottle se pani leke surya ke chehre per daal diya jis bajah se surya ek dum hadbada kar hosh me aajata hai.





Main hosh me aaya or apni aankhe kholne laga. To mere charo taraf karib 4 log khade hue the. Or mujhse puchh rahe the ki main theek hu ya nahi.



Maine unhe ishare se theek hone ka ishara kiya.


Fir ek ne mujhe apna sahara diya jisse me khada hua. Or charo taraf dekhne laga ki main kaha hu.or tabhi mujhe yaad aaya ki main to us black hole me chala gya tha fir yaha kaise pahucha.




Main- ye konsi jagah hai.







À1- ye mumbai hai. Tum kon ho or yaha per is haalat me kaise pahuche.





Ye sunke me solid chouka ki main mumbai me kaise pahucha or kab. Mujhe kuch yaad kyu nahi aaraha hai.






Main- pata nahi me yaha kaise or kab pahucha. Lekin thanks ki aaplogo ne mujhe utha diya.





À1- theek hai koi baat nahi. Uske baad vo log baha se chale gye or main apne aap ko sambhalte hue baha se apne ghar ki taraf bad gya



Ek texi ki madad se main apne ghar ke pass pahucha lekin baha pahuch kar mere hosh udd gye. Kyuki us jagah per ek bahut hi bada mall bana hua tha. Theek mere bunglow ki jagah per.



Maine us texi wale se baat ki.




Main- bhai ye mall yaha kab ban gya.




Texi- kya bhai time pass kar rahe ho. Ye to yaha pichhle kai saalo se bana hua hai. Lagta hai kai saalo ke baad yaha aarahe ho.





Main- are bhai mera ghar isi mall ki jagah per bana hua tha. Lekin is mall ko dekhke to mera hi dimaag ghum gya.


Tabhi maine apna mob. Nikala lekin usme bilkul bhi signal nahi aaraha tha. To maine us texi wale ka mob. Manga.call karne ke liye. Usne mujhe mob. Diya or maine sabse pehle bhai ka no. Try kiya or uske baad sabhi ghar walo ke. Lekin kisi ka bhi call lag hi nahi raha tha. Sabhi ke no. Per ek hi tune sunai de rahi thi ki ye no. Manya nahi hai.




Mera kharab dimaag or kharab hota ja raha tha.



Tabhi peeche se kisi ne mera naam liya.





U- hii surya.



Maine palat kar peeche dekha to ek 30 saal ka ladka baha khada hua tha.




Main- tum kon ho. Or mujhe kaise jaante ho.





U- main bahut kuch janta hu tumhare baare me. Aao mere sath tumhare man me jitne bhi sawal aarahe hai unke jawab main tumhe de sakta hu. Agar tum chaho to.


Ye kehke usne texi wale ko kuch diya.



Main- ye kya hai.




Texi- kya bhai satak gyi hai kya. Ye rupay hai. Tumhara bhada yaha tak chhodne ka.





Or ye sunke to mere dimaag ki lassi ban gyi thi. Maine usse vo bapis manga or use dekhne laga. Ye to bilkul hi alag tarah ka note tha. 100 rupay ka. Maine vo use bapis diya or us unknown ki taraf dekha jo muskura raha tha. Meri taraf dekhke.





U- abhi bahut se jhatke lagne baaki hai isliye apne aap ko sambhalo. Or aao mere peechhe.





Ye kehke vo aage bad gya or me uske peeche. Tab vo ek garden me jaake ek bench per baith gya. Or me uske baju me. Or uski taraf dekhne laga.





Main- ab batao ye sab itna ajeeb sa kyu ho raha hai mere sath.





U- ye vo mumbai nahi hai jaha tum rehte ho.




Main- matlab. Mumbai to ek hi hai na pure earth per. Fir ye konsi mumbai hai.





U- surya ye vo earth hi nahi hai jaha per tum rehte ho.




Ab mera dimaag bakai me satak raha tha.





Main- dekho Jo bhi kehna hai saaf saaf kaho. Jalebi mat banao.





U- pehle ye batao ki tumhe last kya yaad hai.




Main- main ek black hole ke andar chala gya tha or vo mere andar aate hi band ho gya tha.




U- sahi kaha tumne. To ab aage suno. Uske baad hua ye ki.



Usne mujhe bataya ki me ek warm hole se kisi dusre hi earth per aagya hu.



Ye sunte hi mujhe ek tagda jhatka laga.




Main- pagal ho kya. Aisa keval filmo me hi hota hai. Ye multiverse bagera.






U- filmo ko chhodo tumne Bhagvat Gita to suni hi hogi. Usme shri krishna ji ne nahi kaha hai ki anant brahmand hai or unme se tumhara brahmand uska ek chhota sa hissa. Ye filmo wale hamare grantho se hi inspire hoke apni filme banate hai. Or aajkal ke scientist bhi hamare grantho se hi inspire hoke antriksh ki khojo ke mayene nikalte hai.




Mujhe uski baato me sachai to najar aarahi thi lekin mera dimaag is baat ko manne ko ready bilkul bhi nahi tha.




Main- sach batao yaha per camera kaha per laga hua hai. Tum mujhe bakra bana rahe ho na.






U- nahi surya ye koi majak nahi hai. Balki ek aisi sachai hai jise tum jitni jaldi apna loge utna achha rahega tumhare liye.






Main- to fir me yaha se bapis kaise ja sakta hu us earth per. Kyuki baha per vo Kaal pata nahi kya kand kiye ja raha hoga. Or mere gharwale kitne paresan ho rahe honge mere ware me sochkar





U- isiliye to main yaha aaya hu tumhari madad karne.




Main- baise tum ho kon. Or itna sab kaise jante ho.





U- main kon hu ye filhaal jaane do. Lekin tum ye samajh lo ki agar tum baha chale bhi gye tab bhi tum kaal ko dhund nahi paoge jab tak uska maksad pura nahi ho jata. Ya jab tak vo nahi chahta. Filhaal vo tumhe mara hua hi samajh raha hai use bahi samajhne do.






Main- ha ye baat main bhi janta hu. Usne kaha tha ki vo time travel karke aage hone wali ghatnao ko dekh ke aa sakta hai or uske hisaab se counter plan bhi bana sakta hai. Aisi condition me use dhund pana or use hara pana bahut hi muskil hoga.main agar baha jaake use dhud bhi leta hu tab bhi vo kisi na kisi tarah mujhse do kadam aage hi rahega. Or akhir uska plane kya hai ye bhi samajh me nahi aaraha haj vo akhir karna kya chahta hai.








U- kaal ek bahut hi khatarnaak alien hai. Lekin tumahara main villain kaal nahi hai. Balki kaal khud kisi ke ishare per kaam karta hai.





Ye ek or jhatka tha.




Main- ab ye naya kon hai





U- uska naam hai. BLACK HEART.





main- ye kaisa naam hai.




U- jaisa uska kaam hai baisa hi uska naam hai. Bahut hi powerfull or immortal hai vo. Vo ek Prince hai. Hell yani narak ka.






Main- jaha tak mujhe pata hai. Narak per to yamraj ka raj hota hai. Fir ye kis narak ka prince hai.







U- ek aisa narak jaha per dunia bhar ki evil shaktiya nivaas karti hai. Ye us narak jaisa nahi hai jaha per inhe dandit kiya jata hai. Balki ye narak in jaise logo ke liye kisi swarg se kam nahi hai. Or is jagah ko black heart ke pita ne banaya tha apni shaktiyo se. Taaki baha per vo bina kisi dar ke raj kar sake.






Main- lekin kaise mujhe jara detail me batao.





U- itna to tumne suna hi hoga ki is pure sansaar me kai bhatakti aatmayen hoti hai. Jinhe aam log bhoot pret kehte hai. To black heart ke pita unse souda karte hai. Unhe us narak me jagah dete hai badiya samman dete hai. Or badle me unki soul ko corrupt kar dete hai. Or aisa hone ke baad vo evil ban jata hai. Or sabhi jagah per apni burai ko failane lagta hai. Jitne jyada log burai se judte hai inki shaktiya itni hi badti jaati hai. Ab chuki kalyug chal raha hai. Jaha bure logo ki ginti achhe logo se kahi jyada hai. Jis bajah se ye log is samay immortal ban gaye hai. Inhe keval qaid kiya ja sakta hai. Maara nahi ja sakta. Ya fir pure sansar se burai ko khatm karna padega tab jaake inki shaktiya kamjor hongi or fir unhe mara ja sakta hai. Lekin aisa hona sambhav nahi hai






Main- tum ye sci- fi me fantasy kaha ghusate ja rahe ho.



U- ab jo sach hai to hai. Isme mera koi haath nahi hai.



Main- to fir inko qaid kaise kiya ja sakta hai. Kyuki main to ek aam insan hu. Inki shaktiyo ke aage main kaise tik sakta hu. Or agar tik bhi gya. To bhi hamare beech nirantar chalne wale yudh ka aarambh ho jayega. Jiska koi ant nahi hoga. Fir inhen kabu me kaise kiya ja sakta hai.









U- filhaal ye sabhi kabu me hai. Lekin jald hi nahi rahenge. Kaal black heart ko hi aazaad karane me laga hua hai. Ek baar vo aazad ho gya. Fir vo puri prithvi ko hi narak me badal dega. Uske pass itni powers to hai. Or koi uska kuch nahi bigaad payega. Pehla no. Tumhari prithvi ka lagega. Uske baad dusri prithvi bhi unki najro me aajayegi or vo yaha ke liye nikal jayenge. Isliye unko tumhare yaha hi rok dena padega.







Main- lekin kaise.





Itna sunne ke baad vo meri taraf dekh ke mand mand muskurane laga or yaha meri tension badti hi ja rahi thi…….













To be continue………………….

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