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Ha bhai maine bhi aisa hi socha tha ki kaal se mast ladai hogi. Lekin kaal ne pichhli story me kaafi udham machaya tha or uska role bhi bahut jyada tha. Isliye kuch naye character introduce karane ke liye usko maarna pada. Baaki kaal se bhi jyada khatarnaak characters aane wale hai bas sath bane rahe...
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Ha bhai black heart ke supporter kuch bhi karenge us pathar ke liye. Lekin surya se direct takkar filhaal vo nahi le sakte. Kyuki pathar uske pass hai. Or usne vo kaha rakha hai iski jaankari unme se kisi ko bhi nhi hai. Baaki dekhiye aage kya karte hai ye log. Or inko usme kitni safalta milti hai.
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Hmm toh ab Kaal ka bada bhai Vikraal aayega badla lene dekhte hain ki woh kya karega ab Surya and team ke saath wese is Vikraal ka band baap ki jagah bachche bajaaein toh mast rahega
Dekhte hai bhai. Jaisi bhi story ki demand hogi usi prakar se sabki band bajegi. Baaki kya pata sayad bache hi uski band baja de. Kisi na kisi tarah se. Who knows.
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Behtareen update Rahul bahi
Awesome writing jese sab samne hi ho rha ho.jo bhi hai maja bahut aane wala hai aur kya yaha pe young generation ka romance bhi dikhai dega kya
Thanks bhai. Aap sabhi ka sath bana hua hai jis bajah se me likh pa raha hu. Or ha maja to kaafi aayega. Bas dekhte jaiye. Or ha thoda bahut romance bhi dekhne ko milega. Young generation ka.
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UPDATE - 18
Uske baad takshak ne vikraal se contact kiya tallypathy ke jariye. Or use sab kuch vistaar se bata diya.
Bahi vikraal apne bhai ki mout ki baat sunkar ek dum aag babula hogya. Usne gusse main ek bahut badi chattan me ek punch de mara. Or vo chattan taas ke patto ki tarah bikhar gyi. Or bahi per us jagah ka mousem bhi ek dum se bigadne laga.
Tabhi takshak ne use shant kiya or usse kaha ki apne dimaag ka istemaal karo or prithvi se paras pathar lekar aao. Or sath me surya ko maar kar bhi.
Jise sunke vo fouran hi earth ke liye nikal gya. Ek poratal khol ke.
Aise hi 2 din nikal jaate hai. Or fir aata hai birthday wala din.
Subah se hi sabhi ne avi or ashk ko wish kar diya tha. Or surya or baaki pariwar ne mumbai jaane ka plan banaya lekin jab unhe pata chala ki sham ko unki house party honi hai. To sabhi ne apna plane cancel kar diya. Kyuki bache bado ke beech jyada enjoy sayad nahi kar paate isliye sirf phone per hi wish kar diya.
Bahi clg main subah hi notice board per notice laga diya tha house party ka. Jise sunke sabhi bahut hi exited the.
Or har ek class main jaake bhi sabhi ko personally invite kar diya tha Samar or amar ne. Jisse sabhi ne aane ke liye haami bhar di thi.
Bahi ghar per bhi party ki tayyariya joro shoro se chal rahi thi. Ghar pura decorate kar diya tha. Or kahane or peene ki bhi puri tayyariya kar di gyi thi. Or sabse imp music ko blast karne ke liye badiya speaker bhi aagye the.
Or unhi sab main sham kab ho gyi pata hi nahi chala.
Or 7 baje se hi sabhi ka aana bhi shuru ho gya tha.
Party ghar ke peeche side pool ke pass thi or sabhi ye dekhkar kaafi exited the.
Inke main friend to aahi chuke the or baaki ke bache bhi aane lage the. Or 8 baje tak pure clg ke karib 300-400 bache baha per moujud the. Or inmen se kaafi to aane hi nahi waale the.
Bheed kaafi bad gyi thi. Lekin jagah ki kami nahi thi.
Music baj raha tha or sabhi injoy kar rahe the. Sabhi soft or hard drink apni capacity ke anusar le rahe the. Or dance kar rahe the.
Uske baad karib 9 baje cake ko kaat gya ashk or avi dono ne hi cake ko sath main kata or ek dusre ko khilaya or uske baad Amar Samar jatin charu or kiran ko bhi. Or uske baad sabhi unke chehre per cake malne ke liye aage aane lage to ashk to sabke hath jodne lagi. Kyuki usne jo makeup kiya tha vo kharab ho jata. Lekin cake to malna tha. Isliye unke chehre per thoda thoda cake mal hi diya sabhi ne. Uske baad sabhi apne taraf se laaye hue gift unko dene lage. Or khana khakar sabhi jaane lage. Ab ghar main sirf ye 7 log hi bache hue the. Tabhi baha per gaon se pura pariwar hi aa dhamka. Jise dekhkar sabhi bahut kush ho gye. Actually Harry ne sabko bata diya tha ki party jaldi hi khatm ho gyi hai isliye agar aap sabhi jaana chahe to ja sakte hai. Or 10:30 baje tak sabhi log baha per pahuch gye.
Sabhi maao ne apne bacho ko wish kiya unhe gifts diye or khub aasirbaad diya. Bahi baaki teeno log to dekh kar hi reh gye pure pariwar ko. Kitna bada pariwar tha.vo bhi aaj ke time per. Jaha aaj sabhi log khud family se alag ho jaate hai bahi ye joint family main mil jul kar rehte hai.
Khair uske baad sabhi ke beech kaafi baate hui or fir sabhi bahi per ruk gye. Kiran charu or jatin bhi.
Ye din bhi nikal gya.
Subah hote hi saare log apne apne ghar chale gye. Ab ghar main keval 4 log hi bache hue the. Or aaj kisi ka bhi clg jaane ka bilkul man nahi tha. Or yahi haal baaki sabhi ka bhi tha. Lekin jaana bhi jaruri tha. Lekin ye log nahi gye. Or aajkal din in sabhi ne ghar per hi masti main hi nikala.
Bahi vikraal ne in 2 dino me surya or uske pariwar ki saari history pata kar li thi. Lekin andar ki baate abhi bhi use nahi pata thi. Jaise ki paras pathar kaha per hai.
Iske liye usne ek yojna banai
Ab dekhna ye tha ki iski ye yojna kaha tak safal hoti hai. Or aise samay main jaha surya ko aane wale khatre ke baare main koi idea nahi hai.
Rony or main office ja rahe the tabhi raste main mere man me ek sawal aaya.
Main- bhai mujhe samajh main nahi aaya ki tumko kaal ne pakad kaise liya tha. Matlab hua kya tha baha per.
Rony- badi der me yaad aaya ye sawal.
Main- ab aagya to aagya batao to.
Rony- darashal main aise hi ghumne gya tha. Tabhi mera mobile chori ho gya. Mujhe bhi pata nahi chala ki ye kaise ho gya. Khair maine dusra mobile liya or baha se parking main gya to kuch logo ne mere uper gun laga di. Maine mud ke dekha to unki gun kuch alag type ki thi. Or unhone mask bhi pehna hua tha. Isliye main samajh gya ki ye sayad usi ke aadmi hai jiski bajah se ham sab paresaan hai. Or isliye main unke sath chala gya bina koi chalaki kiye. Vo mujhe ek warehouse le gye. Tabhi unlogo ne mere muh per koi spray maar diya. Jisse mera bheja ek dum se blank hone laga. Or mujhe aagya gussa isliye main sabhi ko maarne laga. Lekin ladai thodi der hi chali or main behosh ho gya. Uske baad tab hosh aaya jab aadil ne uthaya vo bhi usi warehouse main. Or fir usne bataya ki kya hua tha is beech. Main to pura hi hill gya tha ye sunkar ki tu ab nahi hai. Main to usko maarnr nikal gya tha sahara ki taraf lekin aadil ne mujhe rok liya.
Main- bhai vo aapko warehouse kyu le gye the. Vo aapko gaadi me hi behosh kar sakte the.
Rony- maine unki thodi baate suni thi. Jisme vo baat kar rahe the ki filhaal unke jaane ka intjaam nahi hua hai thoda time lagega isliye unhe kahi rukna padega. Or isi liye vo mujhe us khaali pade warehouse me le gye the. Or unhone socha ki kahi main kuch gadbad na kardu isliye mujhe behosh kar diya. Ha agar main bahi parking main unhe maar deta to sayad aisa kuch hota hi nahi.or uske liye mujhe bahut dukh bhi hai.
Main- chalo koi na ab baise bhi sab theek hai.
Rony- baise ham us pathar ka kya kare. Kyuki mujhe lag raha hai ki koi na koi jaldi hi aayega usko lene ke liye. Or sayad vo kaal se bhi jyada takatvar ho
Main- mujhe bhi is baat ka andesha hai. Us pathar ko nast nahi kar sakte. Use agar tod bhi diya tab bhi uske ek chhote se kad se bhi unka kaam chal sakta hai. Us pathar ko jalaya bhi nahi ja sakta. Bahut shaktishali hai vo. Isliye jab tak koi solid ilaaz nahi milta tab tak usi hifajat hi karni padegi hame. Fir chahe koi bhi aaye use hamse chheenne ke liye.
Rony- ha ye baat to hai.
Aise hi baate karte hue ham log office pahuch gye.
Bahi bache bhi clg pahuch chuke the.
Lekin jaise hi charo andar pahuche to andar ka mahool kaafi shant tha. Bache to na ke barabar hi dikh rahe the clg main.
Amar- aaj chhuti to nahi hai na clg ki.
Ashk- mujhe bhi aisa hi lag raha hai. Dekho na koi bhi nahi dikh raha hai.
Avi- baise agar chhutti hoti to guard hame gate per hi bata deta. Lekin usne bhi kuch nahi kaha.
Samar- sahi kaha tune. Ek kaam karte hai raju kaka se puchhte hai ya fir koi sir se
Ye kehke charo baha se canteen ki taraf gye. To baha per raju akela hi baitha hua tha
Samar- are kaka aaj clg me itni shanti kyu hai. Kahi chhutti to nahi hai na.
Raju- baise keh sakte ho ki aaj chhutti hi hai clg main
Amar- lekin achanak ye chhutti sab theek to hai na.
Raju- nahi beta. Darashal kal tumlog aaye nahi the na isliye tumhe kuch pata nahi hai. Kal ek bahut bada kaand ho gya clg main. Or aaj usi ka asar hai ye.
Ye sunke charo ke chehre ek dum se gambhir ho gye.
Samar- aisa kya ho gya kal??
Fir raju ne unhe bataya ki kal kya hua tha. Jise sunke sabhi ek dum shock ho gye. Unhe viswas hi nahi ho raha tha ki ye kaise ho gya……
To be continue……………………..
Uske baad takshak ne vikraal se contact kiya tallypathy ke jariye. Or use sab kuch vistaar se bata diya.
Bahi vikraal apne bhai ki mout ki baat sunkar ek dum aag babula hogya. Usne gusse main ek bahut badi chattan me ek punch de mara. Or vo chattan taas ke patto ki tarah bikhar gyi. Or bahi per us jagah ka mousem bhi ek dum se bigadne laga.
Tabhi takshak ne use shant kiya or usse kaha ki apne dimaag ka istemaal karo or prithvi se paras pathar lekar aao. Or sath me surya ko maar kar bhi.
Jise sunke vo fouran hi earth ke liye nikal gya. Ek poratal khol ke.
Aise hi 2 din nikal jaate hai. Or fir aata hai birthday wala din.
Subah se hi sabhi ne avi or ashk ko wish kar diya tha. Or surya or baaki pariwar ne mumbai jaane ka plan banaya lekin jab unhe pata chala ki sham ko unki house party honi hai. To sabhi ne apna plane cancel kar diya. Kyuki bache bado ke beech jyada enjoy sayad nahi kar paate isliye sirf phone per hi wish kar diya.
Bahi clg main subah hi notice board per notice laga diya tha house party ka. Jise sunke sabhi bahut hi exited the.
Or har ek class main jaake bhi sabhi ko personally invite kar diya tha Samar or amar ne. Jisse sabhi ne aane ke liye haami bhar di thi.
Bahi ghar per bhi party ki tayyariya joro shoro se chal rahi thi. Ghar pura decorate kar diya tha. Or kahane or peene ki bhi puri tayyariya kar di gyi thi. Or sabse imp music ko blast karne ke liye badiya speaker bhi aagye the.
Or unhi sab main sham kab ho gyi pata hi nahi chala.
Or 7 baje se hi sabhi ka aana bhi shuru ho gya tha.
Party ghar ke peeche side pool ke pass thi or sabhi ye dekhkar kaafi exited the.
Inke main friend to aahi chuke the or baaki ke bache bhi aane lage the. Or 8 baje tak pure clg ke karib 300-400 bache baha per moujud the. Or inmen se kaafi to aane hi nahi waale the.
Bheed kaafi bad gyi thi. Lekin jagah ki kami nahi thi.
Music baj raha tha or sabhi injoy kar rahe the. Sabhi soft or hard drink apni capacity ke anusar le rahe the. Or dance kar rahe the.
Uske baad karib 9 baje cake ko kaat gya ashk or avi dono ne hi cake ko sath main kata or ek dusre ko khilaya or uske baad Amar Samar jatin charu or kiran ko bhi. Or uske baad sabhi unke chehre per cake malne ke liye aage aane lage to ashk to sabke hath jodne lagi. Kyuki usne jo makeup kiya tha vo kharab ho jata. Lekin cake to malna tha. Isliye unke chehre per thoda thoda cake mal hi diya sabhi ne. Uske baad sabhi apne taraf se laaye hue gift unko dene lage. Or khana khakar sabhi jaane lage. Ab ghar main sirf ye 7 log hi bache hue the. Tabhi baha per gaon se pura pariwar hi aa dhamka. Jise dekhkar sabhi bahut kush ho gye. Actually Harry ne sabko bata diya tha ki party jaldi hi khatm ho gyi hai isliye agar aap sabhi jaana chahe to ja sakte hai. Or 10:30 baje tak sabhi log baha per pahuch gye.
Sabhi maao ne apne bacho ko wish kiya unhe gifts diye or khub aasirbaad diya. Bahi baaki teeno log to dekh kar hi reh gye pure pariwar ko. Kitna bada pariwar tha.vo bhi aaj ke time per. Jaha aaj sabhi log khud family se alag ho jaate hai bahi ye joint family main mil jul kar rehte hai.
Khair uske baad sabhi ke beech kaafi baate hui or fir sabhi bahi per ruk gye. Kiran charu or jatin bhi.
Ye din bhi nikal gya.
Subah hote hi saare log apne apne ghar chale gye. Ab ghar main keval 4 log hi bache hue the. Or aaj kisi ka bhi clg jaane ka bilkul man nahi tha. Or yahi haal baaki sabhi ka bhi tha. Lekin jaana bhi jaruri tha. Lekin ye log nahi gye. Or aajkal din in sabhi ne ghar per hi masti main hi nikala.
Bahi vikraal ne in 2 dino me surya or uske pariwar ki saari history pata kar li thi. Lekin andar ki baate abhi bhi use nahi pata thi. Jaise ki paras pathar kaha per hai.
Iske liye usne ek yojna banai
Ab dekhna ye tha ki iski ye yojna kaha tak safal hoti hai. Or aise samay main jaha surya ko aane wale khatre ke baare main koi idea nahi hai.
Rony or main office ja rahe the tabhi raste main mere man me ek sawal aaya.
Main- bhai mujhe samajh main nahi aaya ki tumko kaal ne pakad kaise liya tha. Matlab hua kya tha baha per.
Rony- badi der me yaad aaya ye sawal.
Main- ab aagya to aagya batao to.
Rony- darashal main aise hi ghumne gya tha. Tabhi mera mobile chori ho gya. Mujhe bhi pata nahi chala ki ye kaise ho gya. Khair maine dusra mobile liya or baha se parking main gya to kuch logo ne mere uper gun laga di. Maine mud ke dekha to unki gun kuch alag type ki thi. Or unhone mask bhi pehna hua tha. Isliye main samajh gya ki ye sayad usi ke aadmi hai jiski bajah se ham sab paresaan hai. Or isliye main unke sath chala gya bina koi chalaki kiye. Vo mujhe ek warehouse le gye. Tabhi unlogo ne mere muh per koi spray maar diya. Jisse mera bheja ek dum se blank hone laga. Or mujhe aagya gussa isliye main sabhi ko maarne laga. Lekin ladai thodi der hi chali or main behosh ho gya. Uske baad tab hosh aaya jab aadil ne uthaya vo bhi usi warehouse main. Or fir usne bataya ki kya hua tha is beech. Main to pura hi hill gya tha ye sunkar ki tu ab nahi hai. Main to usko maarnr nikal gya tha sahara ki taraf lekin aadil ne mujhe rok liya.
Main- bhai vo aapko warehouse kyu le gye the. Vo aapko gaadi me hi behosh kar sakte the.
Rony- maine unki thodi baate suni thi. Jisme vo baat kar rahe the ki filhaal unke jaane ka intjaam nahi hua hai thoda time lagega isliye unhe kahi rukna padega. Or isi liye vo mujhe us khaali pade warehouse me le gye the. Or unhone socha ki kahi main kuch gadbad na kardu isliye mujhe behosh kar diya. Ha agar main bahi parking main unhe maar deta to sayad aisa kuch hota hi nahi.or uske liye mujhe bahut dukh bhi hai.
Main- chalo koi na ab baise bhi sab theek hai.
Rony- baise ham us pathar ka kya kare. Kyuki mujhe lag raha hai ki koi na koi jaldi hi aayega usko lene ke liye. Or sayad vo kaal se bhi jyada takatvar ho
Main- mujhe bhi is baat ka andesha hai. Us pathar ko nast nahi kar sakte. Use agar tod bhi diya tab bhi uske ek chhote se kad se bhi unka kaam chal sakta hai. Us pathar ko jalaya bhi nahi ja sakta. Bahut shaktishali hai vo. Isliye jab tak koi solid ilaaz nahi milta tab tak usi hifajat hi karni padegi hame. Fir chahe koi bhi aaye use hamse chheenne ke liye.
Rony- ha ye baat to hai.
Aise hi baate karte hue ham log office pahuch gye.
Bahi bache bhi clg pahuch chuke the.
Lekin jaise hi charo andar pahuche to andar ka mahool kaafi shant tha. Bache to na ke barabar hi dikh rahe the clg main.
Amar- aaj chhuti to nahi hai na clg ki.
Ashk- mujhe bhi aisa hi lag raha hai. Dekho na koi bhi nahi dikh raha hai.
Avi- baise agar chhutti hoti to guard hame gate per hi bata deta. Lekin usne bhi kuch nahi kaha.
Samar- sahi kaha tune. Ek kaam karte hai raju kaka se puchhte hai ya fir koi sir se
Ye kehke charo baha se canteen ki taraf gye. To baha per raju akela hi baitha hua tha
Samar- are kaka aaj clg me itni shanti kyu hai. Kahi chhutti to nahi hai na.
Raju- baise keh sakte ho ki aaj chhutti hi hai clg main
Amar- lekin achanak ye chhutti sab theek to hai na.
Raju- nahi beta. Darashal kal tumlog aaye nahi the na isliye tumhe kuch pata nahi hai. Kal ek bahut bada kaand ho gya clg main. Or aaj usi ka asar hai ye.
Ye sunke charo ke chehre ek dum se gambhir ho gye.
Samar- aisa kya ho gya kal??
Fir raju ne unhe bataya ki kal kya hua tha. Jise sunke sabhi ek dum shock ho gye. Unhe viswas hi nahi ho raha tha ki ye kaise ho gya……
To be continue……………………..
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