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UPDATE - 19
Raju- darashal kal Reena mam ne building ki chhat se kud kar apni jaan de di hai.
Ye sunte hi sabhi ek dum se shocked ho gye ki ye kaise ho gya or kyu.
Amar- apne clg ki building se.
Raju- ha beta. Pata nahi kya hua unko jo unhone ye kadam utha liya. Baad main police aai thi or thodi bahut janch padtaal ki thi lekin koi bhi jaankari hame nahi di unhone. Apne tak hi rakhi. Sayad koi bahut badi baat rahi hogi.
Ashk- abhi 3 din pehle hi to mili thi main unse tab mujhe to vo ek dum theek hi lag rahi thi. Fir achanak aisa kya ho gya jo unhe ye kadam uthana pada
Avi- baise police wale kon aaye the.
Raju- are bahi tumhare papa ke dost vijay.
Samar- ham unhi se puchhte hai ki aakhir baat kya hui hai. Unhe jarur kuch pata hoga.
Ashk- ha theek kaha tumne.
Uske baad ashk ne turant hi Vijay ko call kiya.
Vijay- are aaj hamari yaad kaise aagyi beti ko
Ashk- kya chachu aap bhi. Aapko tab yaad Karungi jab bhool jaungi. Filhaal to mujhe aap ye bataiye ki ye Reena mam wala kya matter ho gya.
Vijay- ha beta ab kya kar sakte hai.
Ashk- baise aao hame kuch bata sakte hai ki aisa unhone kyu kiya hoga. Vo kya hai na agar nahi pata chalega to neend hi nahi aayegi. Na hi padai me man lagega.
Vijay- theek hai bata deta hu. Lekin ye. Baat apne tak hi rakhna.
Ashk- pakka vada
Vijay- darashal koi unhe blackmail kar raha tha. Unse bahut paiso ki maang kar raha tha. Ab jab mamla bardasht ke bahar chala gya to unhone suicide kar liya.
Ashk- kya. Lekin kis liye blackmail kar raha tha. I mean aisi kya khaas baat thi.
Vijay- koi mms tha.
Ashk- omg fir use aapne pakda ya nahi
Vijay- ham lage hue hai. Jaldi hi pakda jayega vo. Tum log tension na lo. Or ha. Ek baat ka dhyan rakhna. Aainda agar kahi per bhi kapde bagera change karo to us jagah ko achhe se dekh liya karo ki kahi koi camera bagera to nahi laga hai baha per. Samajh gyi na.beta.
Ashk- ha chachu achhe se samajh gyi. Aap use jaldi pakad leejiye. Or uski itni pitaai karna ki saala apne aap ko bhi bhul jaye.
Vijay- bilkul beta. Theek hai ab main rakhta hu.
Ye kehke call cut gya. Bahi ashk ne vo baat sabko batai jise sunke sabhi ke chehro per gussa aagya tha. Khair raju ne sabhi ko samjhaya ki ye baat kisi ko na bataye Verna vichari ki badnami hogi.
In charo ko bhi ye baat sahi lagi. Or fir ye charo baha se bapis ghar ke liye nikal gye. Or raju bhi clg main hi bane apne ghar main chala gya. Aaj clg to band hi tha.
Bahi charo ghar pahuch kar usi baare main soch rahe the.
Avi- Harry
Harry- yes avi.
Avi- jara ye pata to karo ki Reena mam ko kon paresan kar raha tha. Right now.
Harry- abhi karta hu avi.
Ye kehke Harry lag gya kaam me. Usne sabse pehle Reena mam ka mobile hack kiya or unke saare chat bagera dekhe us mms ko bhi. Uske baad un no. Ko locate kiya lekin filhaal vo no. Band the. To usne purana tarika apnaya. Jab jab vo msg ya call aaye the. Tab ki location history pata ki. To use vo mil gyi. Uske baad settelite se us jagah ki pichhali recording ko check kiya. Or usme vo insaan saaf saaf dikh gya. Uske baad uski history nikalne me Harry ko jyada samay nahi laga.
Ashk- kya hua Harry kuch pata chala.
Harry- sab kuch pata chal gya hai. Us aadmi ka naam Ravi hai. Xyz mall ki ek shop main kaam karta hai. Banda thoda jyada hi smart hai. Or usne bahi per rehkar kai ladkiyon ke mms banaye hai or baad me unse paise bhi lute hai. Agar no. Ke hissab se dekha jaye to Reena uska 40 sikaar thi.
Samar- abhi kaha hai vo bas itna bata.
Harry- usi mall main hai usi shop main. Ye rahi uski photo.
Itna dekhte hi Samar nikal gya bahar. Or uske peechhe baaki ke teeno bhi.
Charo pahuche us mall main. Car ko park kiya or seedhe gye andar. Or us shop ko dhundne lage. Or thodi hi der me vo dukaan use mil gyi. Charo us shop main gye.
Jaha us ladke ke sath ek ladki bhi khadi hui thi.
Or abhi vo kuch samajh paate usse pehle hi ek jordaar punch pada Samar ka us Ravi ko. Or vo ladkhadata hua neeche ja gira. Or is aawaj se sabhi ka dhyan inki taraf ho gya. Samar us taraf gya or use fir se khada kiya or fir use ek jordaar punch jad diya. Jisse abki baar vo ashk ke pass gira. Or ashk ne turant hi uski peeth main apni laate maarna start kar diya. Vo dard se karahane laga. Or baha moujud sabhi log inko rokne ke liye aagye. Jisme shop ka maalik bhi tha.
SM- ye sab kya kar rahe ho tum log. Chhodo mere aadmi ko. Ise kyu maar rahe ho.
Amar- kyuki usne kaam hi aisa kiya hai. Ise to jaan se maarne ka man kar raha hai lekin
SM- lekin isne kiya kya hai.
Amar- aaiye dikhata hu main aapko
Ye kehke amar use trail room me le gya. Or baha per uper dekhne laga. Or use camera dikh gya. Jise is tarah se set kiya gya tha ki ek najar main use dekh pana impossible tha.
Amar ne bahi rakhe stool per chad kar vo camera kheech liya or us shop maalik ke hatho me rakh diya. Jise dekh kar uski samajh main aagya ki akhir maajra kya hai. Or vo gusse main bahar gya or usne bina der kiya teen char thappad jad diye. Uski haalat pehle se hi kharab kar di thi Samar or ashk ne. Vo lagbhag behosh hi hone wala tha. Tabhi baha per vijay aagya apne kuch logo ke sath. Jise avi ne inform kar diya tha.
Vijay- bas bahut hua. Samar chhodo use. Baaki ka kaam ham karenge. Baise thanks tum logo ki bajah se ye jaldi pakda gya.
Ashk- achhe se thukai karna iski
Vijay- tum logo ne chhoda hi nahi hai iski thukai karne layak. Ab to lagta hai thane me jaate hi ye apna gunaah kabul kar lega.
SM- i m sorry sir. Mujhe nahi pata tha ki ye meri shop me ye sab karta hai. Ye leejiye iska camera.
Vijay- baise asal galti to tumhari hi hai. Tumhe dhyan rakhna chahiye ki tumhari shop me akhir kya ho raha hai or kya nahi.
SM- sir aage se pura dhyan rakhunga.and sorry again.
Uske baad vijay use leke baha se chala gya or baaki jo bhi log the vo bacho ke liye taliya bajane lage. Hamne sabka abhi baadan liya or baha se chalte bane.
Or isi tarah ye din bhi nikal gya. Or next day clg main. Entry hui ek naye proffessor ki. Jo ki history ke hi the. Jo subject Reena mam padati thi.or in charo me sabse jyada history ashk ko hi pasand thi. Isiliye use Reena mam ke liye itna feel ho raha tha. Bahi naye sir ke aajane se ab vo fir se track per aane lagi thi.
Proff- hello student mera naam suraj Sharma hai. Or main aaplogo ka naya history teacher hu. Mujhe bachpan se hi purani or historic chezo me bahut dilchaspi rahi hai or isi bajah se main yaha aaplogo ke saamne as a history teacher khada hu. Ab aap sabhi apna intro de
Uske baad sabhi class wale ek ke baad apna intro dene lage. Or jab ashk ki baari aai to usne apna intro kuch is tarah diya ki sir sunkar hi kush ho gye. Or unhe bhi samajh main aagya ki unhe kis per jyada dhyan dena hai.
Aise hi kuch dino tak ye sab chalta raha.
Bahi kai sehro me achanak se hi logo ke gayab hone ki ginti badti ja rahi thi. Or ye lagbhag har bade sehar ka haal tha. Jinme mumbai bhi shamil tha. Ab ye achanak se kyu or kaise ho raha tha iski jaankari kisi ke pass nahi thi. Police bhi paresaan thi. Infact gayab hone wali main kuch to police wale bhi shamil the. Logo main khoff bhi badta ja raha tha. Lekin filhaal use sabhi kisi seriel killer ka kaam bata rahe the. Jo logo ko maar raha tha or unki lash bhi nahi mil rahi thi kisi ko.
Bahi ye baat surya tak bhi pahuch hi gyi. Or use bhi ab tension. Hone lagi thi ki ye akhir kon kar raha hai. Or kyu ?
Bahi bacho me khoff ka namo nishan nahi tha. Lekin bado ne unhe keh rakha tha ki raat main jyada bahar na ghume. Isliye bache bhi jyada raat tak bahar nahi nikalte the.
Aise hi ek raat karib 12 baje ashk ko ek call aaya. Or us waqt avi bhi uske pass hi tha.
Ashk- hii kiran
Kiran- hii ashk
Ashk- kya hua neend nahi aarahi hai kya.
Kiran- yaar main charu ke ghar gyi thi lekin nikalne main kaafi der ho gyi. Or oper se ye car bhi beech raste band pad gyi hai. Yaha na to koi auto najar aaraha hai na hi taxi. Uper se andhera laga hua hai charo taraf bahut dar lag raha hai yaar pls to yaha aake mujhe ghar drop kar de.
Ashk- theek hai. Baise agar tu charu ke ghar se jyada dur nahi hai to bahi chali ja na.
Kiran- yara yahi to problem hai main uske ghar se kaafi dur hu. Or yaha se mera ghar bhi filhaal dur hai. Or uper se aajkal ye log jo gayab ho rahe hai us bajah se kaafi dar lag raha hai. Or mere dad bhi ghar per nahi hai. Verna me unko bula leti. Pls tu aajana.
Ashk- theek hai apni location bhej main aati hu.
Kiran- already bhej di hai. Or ha jaldi aana. Jyada late mat karna.
Ashk ne location check ki or kaha.
Ashk- 15 min. Me pahuchti hu. Tu car ke andar hi baithi rehna or gate bagera bhi lock kar lena or car ki light bagera bhi band rakhna. Taaki koi Agar baha aaye bhi tab bhi use lage ki car main koi nahi hai. Samajh gyi na.
Kiran- theek hai tu jaldi se aaja.
Uske baad call cut gya. Or ashk ne avi ko sath le liye or dono nikal gye kiran ki taraf………….
To be continue…………………..
Raju- darashal kal Reena mam ne building ki chhat se kud kar apni jaan de di hai.
Ye sunte hi sabhi ek dum se shocked ho gye ki ye kaise ho gya or kyu.
Amar- apne clg ki building se.
Raju- ha beta. Pata nahi kya hua unko jo unhone ye kadam utha liya. Baad main police aai thi or thodi bahut janch padtaal ki thi lekin koi bhi jaankari hame nahi di unhone. Apne tak hi rakhi. Sayad koi bahut badi baat rahi hogi.
Ashk- abhi 3 din pehle hi to mili thi main unse tab mujhe to vo ek dum theek hi lag rahi thi. Fir achanak aisa kya ho gya jo unhe ye kadam uthana pada
Avi- baise police wale kon aaye the.
Raju- are bahi tumhare papa ke dost vijay.
Samar- ham unhi se puchhte hai ki aakhir baat kya hui hai. Unhe jarur kuch pata hoga.
Ashk- ha theek kaha tumne.
Uske baad ashk ne turant hi Vijay ko call kiya.
Vijay- are aaj hamari yaad kaise aagyi beti ko
Ashk- kya chachu aap bhi. Aapko tab yaad Karungi jab bhool jaungi. Filhaal to mujhe aap ye bataiye ki ye Reena mam wala kya matter ho gya.
Vijay- ha beta ab kya kar sakte hai.
Ashk- baise aao hame kuch bata sakte hai ki aisa unhone kyu kiya hoga. Vo kya hai na agar nahi pata chalega to neend hi nahi aayegi. Na hi padai me man lagega.
Vijay- theek hai bata deta hu. Lekin ye. Baat apne tak hi rakhna.
Ashk- pakka vada
Vijay- darashal koi unhe blackmail kar raha tha. Unse bahut paiso ki maang kar raha tha. Ab jab mamla bardasht ke bahar chala gya to unhone suicide kar liya.
Ashk- kya. Lekin kis liye blackmail kar raha tha. I mean aisi kya khaas baat thi.
Vijay- koi mms tha.
Ashk- omg fir use aapne pakda ya nahi
Vijay- ham lage hue hai. Jaldi hi pakda jayega vo. Tum log tension na lo. Or ha. Ek baat ka dhyan rakhna. Aainda agar kahi per bhi kapde bagera change karo to us jagah ko achhe se dekh liya karo ki kahi koi camera bagera to nahi laga hai baha per. Samajh gyi na.beta.
Ashk- ha chachu achhe se samajh gyi. Aap use jaldi pakad leejiye. Or uski itni pitaai karna ki saala apne aap ko bhi bhul jaye.
Vijay- bilkul beta. Theek hai ab main rakhta hu.
Ye kehke call cut gya. Bahi ashk ne vo baat sabko batai jise sunke sabhi ke chehro per gussa aagya tha. Khair raju ne sabhi ko samjhaya ki ye baat kisi ko na bataye Verna vichari ki badnami hogi.
In charo ko bhi ye baat sahi lagi. Or fir ye charo baha se bapis ghar ke liye nikal gye. Or raju bhi clg main hi bane apne ghar main chala gya. Aaj clg to band hi tha.
Bahi charo ghar pahuch kar usi baare main soch rahe the.
Avi- Harry
Harry- yes avi.
Avi- jara ye pata to karo ki Reena mam ko kon paresan kar raha tha. Right now.
Harry- abhi karta hu avi.
Ye kehke Harry lag gya kaam me. Usne sabse pehle Reena mam ka mobile hack kiya or unke saare chat bagera dekhe us mms ko bhi. Uske baad un no. Ko locate kiya lekin filhaal vo no. Band the. To usne purana tarika apnaya. Jab jab vo msg ya call aaye the. Tab ki location history pata ki. To use vo mil gyi. Uske baad settelite se us jagah ki pichhali recording ko check kiya. Or usme vo insaan saaf saaf dikh gya. Uske baad uski history nikalne me Harry ko jyada samay nahi laga.
Ashk- kya hua Harry kuch pata chala.
Harry- sab kuch pata chal gya hai. Us aadmi ka naam Ravi hai. Xyz mall ki ek shop main kaam karta hai. Banda thoda jyada hi smart hai. Or usne bahi per rehkar kai ladkiyon ke mms banaye hai or baad me unse paise bhi lute hai. Agar no. Ke hissab se dekha jaye to Reena uska 40 sikaar thi.
Samar- abhi kaha hai vo bas itna bata.
Harry- usi mall main hai usi shop main. Ye rahi uski photo.
Itna dekhte hi Samar nikal gya bahar. Or uske peechhe baaki ke teeno bhi.
Charo pahuche us mall main. Car ko park kiya or seedhe gye andar. Or us shop ko dhundne lage. Or thodi hi der me vo dukaan use mil gyi. Charo us shop main gye.
Jaha us ladke ke sath ek ladki bhi khadi hui thi.
Or abhi vo kuch samajh paate usse pehle hi ek jordaar punch pada Samar ka us Ravi ko. Or vo ladkhadata hua neeche ja gira. Or is aawaj se sabhi ka dhyan inki taraf ho gya. Samar us taraf gya or use fir se khada kiya or fir use ek jordaar punch jad diya. Jisse abki baar vo ashk ke pass gira. Or ashk ne turant hi uski peeth main apni laate maarna start kar diya. Vo dard se karahane laga. Or baha moujud sabhi log inko rokne ke liye aagye. Jisme shop ka maalik bhi tha.
SM- ye sab kya kar rahe ho tum log. Chhodo mere aadmi ko. Ise kyu maar rahe ho.
Amar- kyuki usne kaam hi aisa kiya hai. Ise to jaan se maarne ka man kar raha hai lekin
SM- lekin isne kiya kya hai.
Amar- aaiye dikhata hu main aapko
Ye kehke amar use trail room me le gya. Or baha per uper dekhne laga. Or use camera dikh gya. Jise is tarah se set kiya gya tha ki ek najar main use dekh pana impossible tha.
Amar ne bahi rakhe stool per chad kar vo camera kheech liya or us shop maalik ke hatho me rakh diya. Jise dekh kar uski samajh main aagya ki akhir maajra kya hai. Or vo gusse main bahar gya or usne bina der kiya teen char thappad jad diye. Uski haalat pehle se hi kharab kar di thi Samar or ashk ne. Vo lagbhag behosh hi hone wala tha. Tabhi baha per vijay aagya apne kuch logo ke sath. Jise avi ne inform kar diya tha.
Vijay- bas bahut hua. Samar chhodo use. Baaki ka kaam ham karenge. Baise thanks tum logo ki bajah se ye jaldi pakda gya.
Ashk- achhe se thukai karna iski
Vijay- tum logo ne chhoda hi nahi hai iski thukai karne layak. Ab to lagta hai thane me jaate hi ye apna gunaah kabul kar lega.
SM- i m sorry sir. Mujhe nahi pata tha ki ye meri shop me ye sab karta hai. Ye leejiye iska camera.
Vijay- baise asal galti to tumhari hi hai. Tumhe dhyan rakhna chahiye ki tumhari shop me akhir kya ho raha hai or kya nahi.
SM- sir aage se pura dhyan rakhunga.and sorry again.
Uske baad vijay use leke baha se chala gya or baaki jo bhi log the vo bacho ke liye taliya bajane lage. Hamne sabka abhi baadan liya or baha se chalte bane.
Or isi tarah ye din bhi nikal gya. Or next day clg main. Entry hui ek naye proffessor ki. Jo ki history ke hi the. Jo subject Reena mam padati thi.or in charo me sabse jyada history ashk ko hi pasand thi. Isiliye use Reena mam ke liye itna feel ho raha tha. Bahi naye sir ke aajane se ab vo fir se track per aane lagi thi.
Proff- hello student mera naam suraj Sharma hai. Or main aaplogo ka naya history teacher hu. Mujhe bachpan se hi purani or historic chezo me bahut dilchaspi rahi hai or isi bajah se main yaha aaplogo ke saamne as a history teacher khada hu. Ab aap sabhi apna intro de
Uske baad sabhi class wale ek ke baad apna intro dene lage. Or jab ashk ki baari aai to usne apna intro kuch is tarah diya ki sir sunkar hi kush ho gye. Or unhe bhi samajh main aagya ki unhe kis per jyada dhyan dena hai.
Aise hi kuch dino tak ye sab chalta raha.
Bahi kai sehro me achanak se hi logo ke gayab hone ki ginti badti ja rahi thi. Or ye lagbhag har bade sehar ka haal tha. Jinme mumbai bhi shamil tha. Ab ye achanak se kyu or kaise ho raha tha iski jaankari kisi ke pass nahi thi. Police bhi paresaan thi. Infact gayab hone wali main kuch to police wale bhi shamil the. Logo main khoff bhi badta ja raha tha. Lekin filhaal use sabhi kisi seriel killer ka kaam bata rahe the. Jo logo ko maar raha tha or unki lash bhi nahi mil rahi thi kisi ko.
Bahi ye baat surya tak bhi pahuch hi gyi. Or use bhi ab tension. Hone lagi thi ki ye akhir kon kar raha hai. Or kyu ?
Bahi bacho me khoff ka namo nishan nahi tha. Lekin bado ne unhe keh rakha tha ki raat main jyada bahar na ghume. Isliye bache bhi jyada raat tak bahar nahi nikalte the.
Aise hi ek raat karib 12 baje ashk ko ek call aaya. Or us waqt avi bhi uske pass hi tha.
Ashk- hii kiran
Kiran- hii ashk
Ashk- kya hua neend nahi aarahi hai kya.
Kiran- yaar main charu ke ghar gyi thi lekin nikalne main kaafi der ho gyi. Or oper se ye car bhi beech raste band pad gyi hai. Yaha na to koi auto najar aaraha hai na hi taxi. Uper se andhera laga hua hai charo taraf bahut dar lag raha hai yaar pls to yaha aake mujhe ghar drop kar de.
Ashk- theek hai. Baise agar tu charu ke ghar se jyada dur nahi hai to bahi chali ja na.
Kiran- yara yahi to problem hai main uske ghar se kaafi dur hu. Or yaha se mera ghar bhi filhaal dur hai. Or uper se aajkal ye log jo gayab ho rahe hai us bajah se kaafi dar lag raha hai. Or mere dad bhi ghar per nahi hai. Verna me unko bula leti. Pls tu aajana.
Ashk- theek hai apni location bhej main aati hu.
Kiran- already bhej di hai. Or ha jaldi aana. Jyada late mat karna.
Ashk ne location check ki or kaha.
Ashk- 15 min. Me pahuchti hu. Tu car ke andar hi baithi rehna or gate bagera bhi lock kar lena or car ki light bagera bhi band rakhna. Taaki koi Agar baha aaye bhi tab bhi use lage ki car main koi nahi hai. Samajh gyi na.
Kiran- theek hai tu jaldi se aaja.
Uske baad call cut gya. Or ashk ne avi ko sath le liye or dono nikal gye kiran ki taraf………….
To be continue…………………..
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Aur yeh logon ke ghaayab hone ka kya scene hai?
Lagta hai next number Kiran ka lagta gaya hai kidnap hone mein
Yeh naya teacher kahin Vikraal toh nahin na?
Aur yeh logon ke ghaayab hone ka kya scene hai?
Lagta hai next number Kiran ka lagta gaya hai kidnap hone mein
History teacher ko aese plot kiya h Rahul bhai ki yahi vikral ya uska koi aadmi lag rha hai.lag rha h kiran bhi gayab ho hi jayegi ashk ke pehucte 2
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