Update:-112 (D)
Akshmya mantr jo kisi ke kiye ko kshma karne yogya na maan'kar, uske upar prabhavi karta hai... Jis par yah mantr prayog kiye, yadi wo kaat na paya to asahniya pira se grast hota chala jayega... Wahin mahamrityunjay ka jaap mukhya roop se mirtyu par vijay pane ke liye kiya jata hai...
101 jaap ek sath karti hui Jivisha jaise-jaise kadam badha rahi thi, Surpmarich ki dharkane badha rahi thi... Bus surakhsa ghera todne ki der thi… uske baad ya to wo sampoorn yojan poora karta ya fir akshmya mantr ke kaat kaa jaap karta...
Aane wale pal ki kaamna soch'kar Surpmarich poore jor se mantr jaap karne laga... Yahan uske koi sahayak na tha, lekin Jivisha ek samay me 101 baar mantr jaap kar rahi thi... Bilkul prabhavi sa ghera banta ja raha tha mahamrityunjay mantr ka...
Iss baar jab Jivisha jaap karti hui Surpmarich ke surakha ghere ke seema me ghusi, sampoorn yojan ki shakti kafi kamjor par gayi aur uske upar khada tha 101 mahamrityunjay ka ek jaap... Jaise hi Jivisha ne pahla kadam uss seema me rakh'kar mahamrityunjay mantra ke sath Akshmya mantr ka jaap karne chahi, Surpmarich sampoorn yojan rok'kar kaat mantr pahle se japne laga...
Jivisha ko ab poora mauka mil gaya aur wo wapas apne sharir me aakar aankhen kholti.… "Ek veer ki tarah lado kayar, jaan bachane ke liye aur kitni tarkib lagaoge"…
Surpmarich ka ansh, Pratham…. "Tumhari siddhiyan hamesa mujhse aage kyon rahi hai.. jabki main to hazaron salon se mantr jaap karta hun, har siddhi me mahir hun".
Juvisha:- "Tum wo gyani ho Surpmarich jo khud ko hi chhalte aaye hai.... Ek sammanjanak dushman, jo utne hi logon ko pareshan karta tha, jo uske raste me ho aur fir apni shaktiyon par dhyan kendrit karta tha… lekin hazaron saal se jivit in sade huye logon ke sath hath mil'kar ek wo samman bhi kho chuke"...
"Tumhe apne jinda hone ki siddhi ka koi gyan nahi murkh. Thumhe to ye bhi pata nahi ki tum kisi ke aise mukhaute ho jiski aad me wo kabse chhipa baitha hai. Aaj tak kisi ki najar me nahi aaya. Isliye ek aakhri ladai lado, kisi veer ki tarah… ek gauravpoorn mirtyu hasil karo.. band karo jaan bacha'kar bhagna"…
Surpmarich:- "Tum virasat me mili siddhiyon par itna ahankar jata rahi, jaise tum mujhe maar paogi... Bhulo mat aakhri ladai me main chahta to tum teeno ko maar sakta tha"...
Jivisha:- "To abhi maar'kar dikhao na... Kyon ab bharosa nahi raha kya... Sab pichhe jayenge aur koi bich me nahi aayega"...
Jivisha apni baat samapt karti hui ek poore panje ka thap bhumi par thoki aur agle hi pal ek bade circle sa ban gaya jiske kinare par hajaro mil ki khai si bani thi jo kafi chaudi thi... Ek ghera jise dono me se koi ek paar kar sakta tha...
Surpmarich apne dono hath uthate, hawa ko apne dono panje me kaid karte, bada sa bavandar banaya aur usse Jivisha ke upar chhod diya... Jivisha muskurati bus apne jagah khadi rahi...
Kafi teji se wo bawandar Jivisha ko charo ore se gher chuka tha… Dhul aur kayi tarah ke particles ke bich Jivisha kahin gum si gayi aur agle hi pal Jivisha ko poora lapete wo aandhi, Surpmarich ke charo ore ghumne lagi...
Aisa najara jo kalpna se pare tha... Ek poorn siddhi jo kabhi Vish-Nilayani ne Surpmarich ko dikhayi thi... Uske dwara chhori gayi shakti bina kisi kaat ke Vish-Nilayani se lipat kar ussi ki ho jati... Pahle humle ke baad hi Surpmarich muskura diya aur apne ghutno par aate...
"Main mirtyu swikar karta hun... Apni mirtyu se aur lad nahi paunga"…. Surpmarich apni haar swikar karte huye ghutno par aa gaya…
Jivisha ret ke bich jo hawa ke pankh par sawar thi, Surpmarich ke karib pahuncha'kar.… "Jo liya hai wo wapas karo dhurt... Tumhare bharm jaal kisi aur ko dikhana... Main Vish-Nilayani nahi hun"…
Jivisha apni tej hunkaar ke sath Surpmarich ke sine par ek laat jamayi aur wo circle ke kinare tak khiskta hua chala gaya. Surpmarich hawa me upar hote... "Wakai tum Vish-Nilayani nahi ho"… kahte huye usne apna hath jhatak diya... Aur agle hi pal Jivisha ke paun me gili mitti ka lep ne jakad liya, jo dhire-dhire upar ke ore badhne laga...
"Tumne aaklan to sahi kiya mere bare me lekin mujhe kamjor samjh'kar ladne aayi... Meri shaktiyan shuru se tum sab se kayi kadam aage rahi hai... Bus tere gale me jo wo shkati mukhi patthar, jise fossil stone kahte hain, usse main barbaad nahi karna chahta tha. Lekin koi nahi, aankhon ke samne ek badi shakti ko mai toot jane ka gum sah lunga"...
"Kya hua Vish-Jivisha ab hil nahi pa rahi ho kya... Mujhe aisa kyon lag raha hai ki tumhari shaktiyan sab mitti me khinchti ja rahi hai.… Mitti ke sarir ki sabhi shaktiyan uske shrrot (source) me milti ja rahi... Chu chu chu... Apne shakti ke mad me ye ghera jaal khud bana lee. Ab to madad ko koi aa nahi payega... Mar ja yahi kismat hai tumhari, kyonki mirtyu jaal tumhe ghere hai, jiska kaat kisi mantr me nahi bus ek nischit mirtyu hai"…
Mitti ka wo lep kafi teji se Jivisha ko bandhte huye upar aa raha tha…. Uski sari shaktiyan uss lep ne jaise baandh rakhi ho... Paun ke talwon se shuru hua aur badhte huye ghutno tak pahunch gaya jab Surpmarich ne apni baat samapt ki...
Tabhi Jivisha itni tej hansi ki charo ore uski hansi gunj gayi… Uska hansna charo ore aisa kautuhal macha raha tha ki bina kisi shakti ke wahan kisi shakti Swaroop ke hone jaisa anubhav karwa de.… "Main ab bhi kahti hun main Vish-Nilayani nahi"…
Tabhi dhul aur ret ke paar se Shwetna, aur uske sath Jivisha ki 100 betiyan wahan pahunch chuki thi.… Surpmarich hairan bhadi najron se mitti me lipat'lti hui Jivisha ko dekha... Mano puchhne ki kosis kar raha ho kaise.…. "Kaise tum in sab ko suraksha ghere ke ander tak le aayi"…
"Jaise main khud pahunchi thi uss mashtishk mahal me thik ussi parakar se tumne bhi inhe jate dekha murkh... Hahahaha... Ek siddh purush jiski shaktiyan mujhse kayi kadam aage hai, wo shayad ek aam si mirtyu ke bhay se kaanp raha"...
Jivisha chilla'kar apni baat kahi aur agle hi pal Shwetna, Pratham ke talvon se hokar sar se nikal chuki thi. Surpmarich dard se vyakul ho utha.… "Aaaaaaaaa.… Aaaaaaa.. Vish-Jivisha main to dhokebaaj hun, isliye dhoke se maarta hun. lekin mujhe maarne ke liye dhoka karna tumhare prakritik shaktiyon ko tod degi"….
Meena:- Maa iski juban bahut chalti hai...
Jivisha:- Khich le beta lekin ye tabhi tak shakti hin hai jab tak ye lep mere sar tak nahi chadh jata... Aur main tabhi tak jinda hun jab tak ye lep mere naak ke niche tak hai...
Tabhi dragon ki jhundh ne Surpmarich ke sharir ko aisa ghera ki Jivisha dekh nahi payi niche kya ho raha hai, bus jo chinkh aur minnaten sabhi raniyan kar rahi thi, thik waise hi bhikh Surpmarich bhi maang raha tha. Hawa me uske sarir ke ukhde nag badi teji se hawa me aa rahe the... Dard ki chinkh failti ja rahi thi... Chinkhte huye bus itni hi awaj aa rahi thi... "Pahleeeee galaaaa hi kaat daloooo meraaaaa"
Jivisha apni mirtyu ki aashanka jata chuki thi, isliye yahan maujood uski 100 betiyon ne bhi teji dikhaya tha. Majah 2 minute hi dard ki wo asahniya awaj gunji thi. Itni bhayanak maut thi, jiske baad Surpmarich apne aakhri shabdon me yahi kaha, "ab wapas aane ki himmat nahi hogi"…. Issi ke baad Jivisha ke upar ka wo mitti ka lep apne aap deh gaya, jo iss baat ki pusti kar raha tha ki Surpmarich ka yah ansh pratham mar gaya hai...
Ek bahut purani siddhi thi jo shayad hi iss sansar me koi jivit jaan'ne wala bacha ho, siway ye Surpmarich ke... Yah shakti Vish-Nilayani ke uss bade se granth ka hissa thi, jo alpas grih (Zoren grah me Nilbhut smuday ka ek cave) me rakhi hui thi...
Ek aisi siddhi jisme shadahk kisi bhi balsali prani ke mitti se bane sharir ko, mitti me mila sakta tha aur ek baar jab wo shakti chal jaye, fir wo insan apni kisi bhi shakti ka prayog nahi kar sakta...
Haan lekin itna hi aitihat se ye shakti chalani hoti thi, kyonki ye shakti chalane wali ki sampoorn urja istamaal karta hai, jaise ki abhi Surpmarich ki urja istamal ho rahi thi... Yadi nisana chuka to wo mitti ka lep miiti ko nishana banayegi, aur fir shakti chakanewale ki sari siddhiyan aur shaktiyan mitti me mil jayegi... Fir jo bhi usne hasil kiya ho, ya jo bhi hasil karaga, sab iss lep ki amanat hogi.... Jo bhi arjit kiya hai ya karenge ussi ki hokar rah jayegi...
Wahin iss siddhi ko kisi ke upar safalta purvak sadhne se shadhak ko aashirwad swaroop ek vachan milta hai... Yah vachan siddhi asthapna ki hoti hai. Jiske bare me soch'kar iss siddhi ko chalaye, ye lep vachan me bandhe hone ke karan, sidha ja'kar apne shikar ko jakad leti hai...
Ek baar lep se jakde gaye, fir mirtyu tay hai.. isse taala nahi ja sakta, tab'tak jabtak ki iske chalane wala maalik, siddhi poorn hone se pahle mar na jaye... Jivisha kisi ko maarne ke liye dhoka nahi kar sakti thi, lekin Jivisha ke suraksha ki jimmedari Shwetna par thi, isliye usse sath rahne se mana bhi nahi kar sakti thi... Ek beti maa ke pass hai yah dhoka nahi hota...
Ek shaktisali sidhh purush, shayad wo maut na mar paya... Jo usse hasil honi chahiye thi... Ladte huye apne poorn siddhi ke sath... Balki wo ek aam sa insano ki tarah khada tha, jise uss se 1000 guna kamjor praniyon ne bina koi der kiye 100 tukde kar dale the… Aam insano jaise hi mirtyu ka bhay aur ye poora maidan gawaah tha un 100 betiyon ke berahmi kee, jisne har uss majboot dushmano se maut ka bhikh mangwaa chuki thi, jisne bhi uski maa ko maarne ki chunauti dee thi.
Yahan ka yuddh samapt tha... Jivisha mitti par thap deti, circle ko sampat ki aur wahan se nikalne se pahle, Meena aur uski poori team ko jimmedari saunpte chali ki jitni bhi laashen giri hai, uske maidan paar karne se pahle sabme aag lag jani chahiye...
Rakt se sarobar Jivisha ka sharir kafi bhadi ho chala tha… wah jald se jald ab ek aakhri khel ko samapt karna chahti thi aur wo tha dark Universe se uss mahtishk mahal ki shakti ke shrrot ko tabaah karna..… Taki mahal ke prabhav se iss kshetr me koi Astak ki tarah hi dusra, uss mahal ka sewak na ban jaye aur fir se wahi sab yahan na shuru ho...
Jivisha maidan se jab gujar rahi thi... Sabhi Viggo samuday ke ladaka katar lagaye apne sine par hath diye khade the... Jivisha bhi un veeron ke sam'maan me apna sar jhukati... "Aap logon ka jyada nusksaan to nahi hua na"…
Core planet ka viggo sardar Maahu... "Aap kaun hai main nahi janta, lekin humare aur humare aane wale pidhiyon ka jivan tab tak aap ka karjdar rahega, jab tak ki hum aapke ehsasan ke barabar ka badla nahi chuka dete"…
Jivisha:- Baba chalte chalte baat karen kya, thoda waqt ka aabhav hai aur kaam jyada..
Maahu:- Ji bilkul..
Jivisha:- Baba jab kisi ki shakti toot'ti hai to har gidhh ki najar fir us jagah ko hathiyane me lag jati hai... Main OMU se appeal karungi ki yahan shanti aur satta bahal hone tak force bheje, lekin kya aap yahan apni ek seema banane ke baad, yahan ke poorane samuday ke sath bina seema vivad ke rah sakte hain kya???
Maahu:- Lekin kahin wo fir se purane rang me...
Jivisha:- Mera wada hai ki jab tak aap sunischit na ho jaye ki aane wala satta, kisi narbhakshi ka nahi hai, tab tak aap ke samuday ke har insan ke jaan ki surakha ki jimmedari main leti hun...
Maahu:- Aapne kah diya..
Jivisha:- Bahut chhoti hun aapse... Itna takaluff ki jaroorat nahi hai...
Maahu:- Thik hai main wada karta hun ki jaisa tumne kaha, waisa hi hoga... Hum seems vivad ki pahal nahi karenge…
Jivisha:- Chhodiye ye poora planet hi rakhiye aap... Haan lekin dusre sanday jo honge...
Maahu:- Chinta mat karo... Yahan sabke saman aadhikar honge ye yahan ke shashan aur satta ka pahla niyam hoga...
Jivisha:- Thik hai baba aap apne logon ke sath jashn manaeye yahan ke paap ki factory ko antim roop de dun...
Jivisha, apni baat kah'kar wahan se turant mahal ko nikli, jahan ka poora mahol Jivisha ka ek tihai ansh apne sath laye lakhon Nilbhut mahilaon ke sath mil'kar samapt kar chuki thi... Fir yah tha to mashtisk mahal aur yahan khone ka matlab tha ki, ek anthin duniya me khona… isliye Jivisha apne 100 bacchon aur Shwetna ke sath seema ke ander prawes karne se pahle shakt hidayat deti chali...
"Koi apne mann se idhar-udhar nahi jayega aur naa hi mera kaam badhayega, yadi ye shart manjoor ho to chalo, warna bahar ruko. Main yahan ka ilaka fence kar dungi"…
Sabhi bacche "haan me haan" milate huye kahne lage "har baat manege"... Lekin fir Jivisha ek aur baar warn karti hui ander praves ki.… "Jo bhi katar tor'kar niklegi, uss se aaj ke baad main nata tor'kar nikal jaungi"…
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Adbhut sidh shakti sarpmarich ki
Jo ashhhaye bana gaya jivi ko aur naa milta Dragan babies v shawetlaana ka sath toh bhuli kahani ban jaati vish jivisha
hai udhar. Kahani par pahunchne ke liye story title par ulgi karne ka...
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