Fantasy Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai ~ Ajab Sa Risk Hai ~ Reload (Completed)

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Page 766 Se 775 tak har panne par update hai.

Final closing update on page:-792


Issi ke sath Ishq Risk reloaded ka ye season poora hua. Next fantasy journey announce ho jayegi. Ummid hai pahle

"Arymani:- The Pure Alfa Between Two World's."

Yahi aaye... Jo bhi hoga purv suchna mil jayegi... Fihlaal end enjoy karenge... Aur kahani ka poora safar kaisa rahega wo ek baar jaroor sajha karen...


Filhaal Abhi vyast hun ek pure romantic journey par....

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Aap sab ka hai udhar. Kahani par pahunchne ke liye story title par ulgi karne ka...

<<<< Too Young !! Too Old >>>>​

 

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Final Chepter :-: The Master:- E ​

Mul duniya ke niwasi, jivan aur mirtyu ke chakr se jude rakhte hai isliye Surpmarich, uski patni Kreedha aur bache kuch 1000 logon ne apni kayi pidhiyon ko apne aankhon ke samne marte dekhte... Aur kayi santan ko bade hote... Kuch samanya roop se paida hote unhe vayask hone ke baad jivan samajhne ke liye any grah par basa diya jata aur kewal khas yog me paida liye bachhon ko vikrut karne se lekar prashikshit karne ki jimmedari Surpmarich ki hoti...


Ussi dauran Vish-Nilayani satta me aayi jab uski ek mulakat Surpmarich ke clone se ho gayi.... Uske purvanuman ne kuchh aasanka jatayi thi aur tabhi usne pahchan liya tha ki ye koi purv ki aatma hai jo khud ko sanjoye hain… kyonki bahut se siddhiyon ka prasikhsn to kayi guruon ne band kar diya tha aur Vigyaan ke ore rukh karne ka faisla kiya, taki shakti samanya roop se sabke pass ho aur uska labh samast prajati le sake...


Fir to ek ore Surpmarich ke clone apni ladai ladte aur dusri ore mashtisk mahal ka nirman karte rahe... Ussi dauran Surpmarich ke swatantr clone ne kar 2 kaarname anjaam diye... Ek to mashtishk mahak ka nirman poora kar diya aur dusra Ek atyant vises yog, jisme kayi sari shaktiyan samahit thi, uss yog me Vish-Nilayani ke garv se ek vikrut aatma ki uttpatti hui thi...


Surpmarich ke mastisk mahal uske paida hone ke pahle din hi shakti ko bhanp chuka tha… Jab wah ladka Adharv thoda bada hua aur Vish-Nilayani apne pran tyag rahi tab Guru Vashudhar ko apne putr Adharv ko maarne ka kaam shaunpi... Lekin Guru Vashudhar ko wah ladka nahi mila tha kyonki Surpmarich usse apne sath lekar pahle far Universe pahuncha…


Mashtisk mahal se ab dono ore ka rasta khul to chuka tha, lekin Surpmarich, Adharv ko mul duniya me hi prasikhsn dene ke baad le'kar jaana chahta tha... Adharv ke sath Surpmarich ki beti bhi prashikshit ho rahi thi aur dono ussi yog me janm liye the... Fark sirf itna tha ki jivan srijan karne wali Vish-Nilayani ke garv se ek viprit bacche ne janm liya tha... Viprit arthat Vish-Nilayani ki aatma toot rahi thi thi aur ussi waqt ek vikrut bacche ne janm liya, jo jivan samapt karne ki pravirti rakhta tha aur usne kiya bhi aisa hi... Vish-Nilayani ke sabhi betoyon ko maar'kar…


10 varshon ke poorn prashikshan ke baad Surpmarich apne logon ke sath ja chuka tha wapas viprit duniya... Iss baar Surpmarich ko apni siddhiyan hasil karne me kafi lamba waqt laga tha, kintu 2 mahashakti ka uday bhi bhi hua aur dono ke bich panapta prem. Vish-Nilayani ka beta Adhrav aur Surpmarich ki beti Savdha, ne viprit duniya me Surpmarich ke itihaas ko na sirf dohraya, balki uske aage kahin lambi rekha khinch dee...


Surpmarich pichhli galti ko iss baar dohrana nahi chahta tha, isliye apne samast logon ko dono hi duniya ka banaye rakhne ke liye 1 varsh mul duniya to 1 varsh viprit duniya me rakhta...


18 Mashtisk mahal ke gulaam apna paun aise faila chuke the, ki unse ab jitne wala koi dusra mul duniya me khada nahi ho pa raha tha, siway 2 mashtisk mahal ko chhod'kar jahan prithvi ke siddhiyon ka prabhav shuru se bana rakha, wo tha Zoren aur Prithvi... Bhavishya ko dekhte huye Atharv aur uski pyari patni Savdha ne mashtisk mahal ki shaktiyon ko wah unchai dee, ki ek baar bina unki marji ke isme aaye fir wo kabhi bahar hi nahi nikal paye...


Mashtisk mahal ko shakti dene ke kram me haalanki Adharv aur Savdha se badi si chuk ho gayi thi aur uss mahal ko ab chinhit kiya ja sakta tha, jo ki pahle sambhav nahi tha, sanyog matr to sadaiv hote rahte hain. Iss baat ke ore to dhyan dono ka nahi gaya kintu uss mashtishk mahal kee khud ki takat itni thi ki yadi koi gulam apne malik ko khush kar de, to malik ke barabar to nahi, lekin ek asim takat wah mashtisk mahal se samet sakta tha...


Viprit duniya ki 2 mahashakti jo viprit duniya me baith'kar apne 18 mashtisk mahal ko poorn sanchalan kar sakte the, jabki ek Mashtisk mahal poore brahmand ke barabar tha.… Surpmarich lakshya ab bhi nahi bhula... Aur bus apni ek aakhri taiyari me laga hua tha.…


Halaanki Adhrav aur Savdha, apne sabse pyare abhibhavak yani Surpmarich se kahte rahe ki hum dono duniya ke barabar hain aur iss baar hume koi nahi rok sakta, lekin Surpmarich dono ko apni aankhen dikhate huye itna hi kahta.… "Yahi galti mujhse hui thi ab tum wo galti mat karo"…


Takat to Surpmarich ne bhi asimit bator lee bus wo viprit nakshtr jaisi baat nahi thi.…


Ek lambe daur ka chhipa hua hua khiladi, jiske pass khud ki asimit takat, aur uske beti damad ke pass to behisab takat jiski kalpna bhi kabhi Surpmarich ne nahi ki thi... Wah Far Universe se apni fauj humla ke liye nahi nikal raha tha... Adharv aur Savdha ko iss intzar ki kahani nahi samjh me aa rahi thi, lekin Surpmarich kuchh to raaj apne ander sameta tha….


Prithvi par Nischal aur Jivisha, apne khoyi yaad wapas aane ke baad, jab dono ke liye chijen samanya hone lagi. Guru Vashudhar ke uss vikrut ansh par charcha shuru hui, jisne uttpat macha rakha tha....


Uss waqt ek hi baat nikal'kar aayi thi ki Guru Vashudhar ka sharir ab bhi jivit hai, jis vajah se uski aatma yah sansar nahi chhod pa rahi … aur ho na ho Vish-Nilayani aur Surpmarich ke pratham sharir ko bhi sanrakhit rakha gaya hai.


Surpmarich ke jivit sanrakshit sharir ke vajah se hi, jab Surpmarich ka jivit sharir hi mirtyu lok me nahi gaya, to fir aatma kahan se mirtyu lok me jayegi. Yahi karan hai ki Surpmarich apna roop badal kar wapas aa jata hai.…


Ek majboot aur pramanit theory, jisne Surpmarich ke amar jivan ke raaj khol diye the. Vish-Nilayani jab khoj ke liye nikli thi tab Far Universe ka jikr aaya tha... Far Universe ke uss brutal humle ka jikr tha... Ye baar-baar far Universe kano tak aa raha tha, isliye aasanka yahi jatayi ja rahi thi ki Surpmarich ka sharir far Universe ke kisi grah par ho sakta hai...


Jivisha prithvi par Surpmarich se anubandh ke sath nikli thi, ki na wo Surpmarich ke raste me aayegi aur na hi Surpmarich uss ke raste me... Aur issi aunbandh ka natija tha jo Surpmarich ke 2 ansh Zoren se rato raat nikle the.…


Sattvik Aasharam me jab yojna bani thi, tab Astak uss kahani me dur-dur tak nahi tha, aur naa hi kisi ko pata tha ki, jis dhurt ne kayi hazaron salon se uttpaat macha rakha hai, wah to mahaj ek swatantr mukhauta hai, jiska malik mashtisk mahal ke jariye apne kaam ko usse karwata hai.


Naa hi unko yah pata tha ki Surpmarich jo bhi takat chori karta tha, wah sabhi shaktiyan mashtisk mahal ke jariye unke malikon tak pahunch jati thi... Koi jadu nahi tha jo wo log siddhiyan sidhe grahan kar len. Sadhna ki jaroorat unhe bhi padti thi, lekin jab rasta hi pata nahi to sadhna kis chij ke liye karenge... Na sirf mulhota Surpmarich balki unke sabhi gulaam bhi apne malik ko update karte the...


Mukhote Surpmarich se pahle nipatna tha aur iske liye tay hua ki uss Mukhote ke jaankari me aaye bina, sab Far Universe niklenge. Yahi vajah thi ki Mukhote Surpmarich ko maarne ke liye 3 se 4 mahine ka waqt liya gaya tha. Pahle far Universe se uske sharir ko nasht karna tha. Ek baar sharir nasht ho gaya, fir uske charo ansh ko ek sath maarne ki yojna banegi... Iss baat se bekhabar ki Mukhote Surpmarich ko naya jivan kahin aur se milta hai aur uske sharir ka malik to kahin aur hai, apni poori yojna bana chuke the.


Zoren pahunch'kar yah tay hua ki Viggo viman down the line Deep universe ke ore jayegi, jiske thik 90⁰ ke upar ka hissa far Universe ka tha... HuYu ki madad se shurwat me Deep Universe jate dikhaya jayega aur jab Jivisha sunischit hogi ki ab Surpmarich unhe jate nahi dekh raha, tab sidha far Universe badh jayenge...


Yojna to jane ki thi far Universe, lekin Surpmarich jab Zoren se bhaga tha tab wah mashtisk mahal ko hi istamal kar raha tha… aur istamal hui mastisk mahal tarange khinch rahi thi, kyonki wah niskriya nahi hui thi aur issi vajah se pahli baar sabke samne mashtishk mahal aa chuka tha…


Gahre raaj aur kewal gutthi thi... Chunki Nischal ek Universe traveller raha hai, isliye kabhi bhi kisi nayi chij ke seema me tab tak nahi ghusta, jab tak parakhn na le... Aur issi parakhne ke kram me usse ek poora mashtisk ka jaal mila...


Nischal ne apne information center, HuYu ko iske bare me kaam par lagaya aur udhar poora Saatvik Aashram sakte me tha. Yah kaisa mayajaal hai... Iss mayajaal ki gutthi to nahi suljhi, lekin HuYu ki dee hui suchna ne sab ko ek mat kar diya...


Jaise hi far Universe ke humle aur ussi humle ke waqt kuchh bhu-bhag par viksit huye divya mahal ki charcha, jo uss Decca planet ke darshnik ne kiya tha... Halanki mashtishk mahal ki asthapna to Surpmarich ke, middle Universe ke humle se saikdon varsh purv hi ho chuka tha, lekin shayad uss darshnik ko bhi khincha ho uss mahal ne aur usne Far Universe ke humle se usse jod diya...


Uss mashtishk mahal ko fence karne ke baad Decca se uss darshnik ke vansaj ko sodh ke liye bulaya gaya aur sath me wahan pahuncha tha Apasyu. 1 mahine ke sodh ke baad yojna me poora badlav aaya...


Iss yojna ke badlav ka sutradhar bani thi Vardali... Vardali ne jab raaj khole ki Dark Universe me bhi ek aisa hi mahal hai, lekin Surpmarich aur Astak ek dusre ko nahi jante... Aisa Vardali ka maan'na tha…


Kafi vichitr si ghatna thi... 2 ek jaise mayajaal, 2 alag-alag jagahon par. Dono jagah ke alag-alag sewak aur dono sewak ko ek dusre ke bare me pata nahi. Ye saaf sanket the ki iss mashtishk mahal ki rachna kisi teesre ne kiya hai aur ye dono iss mayajaal ke gulaam hai, jinhe iss mahal ke malik ke bare me koi gyan nahi. Lekin wo hai kaun jo ek nahi balki 2 mrit mashtisk ka nirman hazaron varsh purv kar gaya aur kisi ko bhanak tak nahi, ye ek bada sawal tha???


Fir sawalon ki ek poori shrinkhla samne thi..… Kya aise mahal aur bhi hain universe me, jahan ka sanchalak ek dusre se anjaan hai... Aur aakhir 2 anjaan mahal ke samnchalak ek mahal me mile, to kya ho sakta hai... Aur kya Surpmarich ke amar gatha ke pichhe mashtisk mahal ka koi haath hai...


Kayi aise sawal the jiska jawab kewal ek hi aadmi de sakta tha, jisne iss mayajaal ka nirman kiya. Ab sawal ye tha iss mayajaal ke nirmata ko bulaye kaise, taki iss nirman ke pichhe ke raaj khule...


Vardali ke khulase ke baad kayi tarah ke sawal samne the... Lekin Apasyu ek natija bhaanp chuka tha…. "Jaise hi wo mahal tootega, uska malik humare samne hoga aur jo itne shaktishali mahal ko bana sakta hai... Uski shakti ko hum hara nahi payenge"…


Ab kahani me na to Astak rah gaya tha aur naa hi Mukhota Surpmarich. Ab to poori taiyari kewal mashtishk mahal ko todne ko le'kar shuru hui. Jahan Zoren ke prabhavi location ko dekhte huye, yah faisla liya gaya ki ek mrit mashtisk me ghusna hi poorn mayajaal me ghusna hai, upar se Zoren ka mahal poorn shakti kendr par bana hai, isliye iss mahal ko, baad ke anubhavon ke aadhar par dekhna tha, pahla number Astak ke mahal ka hoga...


Iske liye bhi 3 se 4 mahine ka waqt liya gaya kyonki raste me khade the 2 shaktisali dushman aur ek poora mayajaal, jiske bare me poori jaankari hasil karni thi aur yahi vajah bhi rahi thi ki Apasyu poora mahina Zoren grah par, Decca ke darshnik ke vansajon ke sath kewal uss mahal par sodh karta raha.


Apasyu apne hisse ka kaam le chuka tha. Ek poorn aaklan aur uske sare samikhaon ke baad, Nischal ne Hurriyent planet ka rasta liya... Hurriyent Nischal ko kis vajah se jana tha, iska koi mukhya uddhesya nahi tha. Kewal dil ki pahli awaj thi wo... Dimag me na to Hyber metal tha aur na hi Roffa ke bare me kabhi usne suna...


Bus ek to baar-baar Decca ke ek mahan engineer aur artitecture, HuYu ke muh se Hurriyent ka naam sunte, ek universe traveller ke dil me jigyasa si jaag jati, ek baar ja'kar dekhunga... Wahin jab 2 poorn shakti (Astak aur Surpmarich) ko harane ke upar vichar hua to Nischal ne jane ki majboot vajah bhi bana lee, Hyber metal le aao... Kahin mahal tootne ke baad far universe ki asankhya viman iss kshetr me ghus gaya to apne logon ki rakhsa kaise karoge… Haan Hyber metal ko Far Universe ke humle ko bhi dhyan me rakh'kar laane ka faisla hua tha…


Nischal ke dil ki pahli aawaj aur wo lagbhag 2.5 se 3 mahine ke safar par tha. Itna hi waqt Jivisha ko apni nayi siddhi sadhne ke liye chahiye thi aur itna hi waqt Serin aur Luna ne bhi sena taiyar karne ke le'kar, Astak aur Surpmarich ko harane ke liye har tarah ki niti taiyar karne ke liye liya tha.… Orja ke information aur Mahal ka raaj khulne ke baad na to Astak ab koi samsya rah gaya tha aur naa hi uski vansaj fauj...


Haa lekin inki taiyari mahal ke sath-sath Surpmarich ke dono ansh Partam aur Joy ko le'kar poori focus thi, kyonki wah apni siddhi sabit kar chuka tha kayi ladaeyon me, aur uske pass mahal ki di hui shakti se jyada uski apni siddhiyan thi... Iss baat ka aaklan Nischal aur Serin ne hi kiya tha, jab Orja ki information ke hisab se Astak vansajon ki shaktiyon ka aaklan kar rahe the, usme ek baat hamesa nikal'kar aati, Surpmarich ki shaktiyan in sab se kahin aage hai, iska matlab ye kewal mahal ki shaktiyon par nirbhar nahi...

 

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Bhai aaj update dene wale thye aap 12pm se 1pm ke bich abhi tak nahi aaya

Ji aak update de to raha hun shayad wo wala aaj ke liye likha tha smile please

 

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Jo shak tha vo confirm ho gya Kuch to hai dono ke bich.
Chalo do week Ka wait karte hai

Etna khae hsrahe ho
Wait to karenge hi or kr BHI kya skte hai

Hasne wali hi baat thi pass bhai... Shak dur ho gaya ye kaun likhta hai... Ab to naya shak creat karne ki kosis hogi... Wo suna nahi kya... Baat juban tak aate aate ruk jaye

 

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He is back

Thanks for this awareness... Aise info share hote rahne chahiye

 

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Are kaha ho gav walo nain11ster bhai aa gaye he Xabhi bhai Nevil singh bhai KEKIUS MAXIMUS bhai 11 ster fan bhai ragish7357 bhai or baki jo bhi ho me bhul gaya name

Naina ji aap to yahi ho is liye aap ka name nahi likha

Hahaha... Mujhe lagta hai aap ghar par bhi itne hi khush honge king bhai

 

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Thik hai bhai hum intejar me hai

Thankoo sorbo bhai... Apne kinti comments dete rahen

 

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Zabardast update hai bhai...... Ye yudh hi is part ka antim yudh hai kya..
Aaap thik to hai....koi Khabar bhi nhi.....

Haan ye antim hissa hai yudd ka 2 hissa samapt ho gaya hai... Thansk a lot sorbo bhai.mm

Haan main thik hun

 

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Update:-113 (G) ​

Mahakaal ka sawaroop the aaj dono... Bahte khun ki garmi dur tak mehsus ki ja skati thi. Inke badhte kadam khauff ke parichayak the... Na khud par raham kiye na dhusmano par...


Nandni jo viman me baithi bahar ka najara dekh rahi thi. Kafi lamba samay ho gaya tha usse bhi baithe-baithe… Bardast ke bahar... Upar se poori kataar kewal pichhe se aage badhte huye najar aa rahi thi, jabki Nandni ko to dekhna tha poori kataar ke Kate badan ek sath hawa me, jo ki pichhle kayi ghante se nahi ho raha tha… Chinta aur pareshani to sabko thi, lekin Nandni ki seema paar kar gayi thi… rah-rah kar ek hi khyal aata.…


"Sangathit log jab Nischal aur Serin ki raftaar rok sakte hain to thoda-thoda kar'ke usse ghayal bhi kar sakte hain... Aur ye itni vishal fauj hai ki gujarte waqt ke sath unka thoda bhi, Nischal aur Serin kr liye bahut jyada sabit hoga"… Fikr itni thi ki wah gahri shwans leti apne aankhon se gire aanshu ko ponchhti kuchh sochi aur sabko bahar aane boli...


Niche aa'kar pahla sawal Aerobok se hi kee... "Dono akele lad rahe hai aur iss baar koi line kat nahi rahi?? Dono ke raftaar ko rok'kar jaise ladai kar rahe hai dushman... Aerobok tum humla kyon nahi kar rahe"…


Aerobok:- Aise sangathit humle ke liye hume prasikshan nahi mila hai, isliye hume dur rahne ke liye kaha gaya hai… ladne gaye to bhi marenge, aur aage jab jaroorat hogi tab hum nahi honge, isliye Sahjade ne hume hold par daala hai..


Nandni... "Mujhe batao fir tumhe prashikshan kis baat ki mili hai"… ..


Aerobok:- Hum unhe bhumigat kar nahi sakte... Bhid me ladne gaye to bich me fansa'kar wo maar denge... Jab ladai me in dono ke kaam hi nahi aaye, fir faltu ka marne kayon jana aisa Sahjade ka kahna hai...


Nandni:- Tumhare ek ke jahar ka asar nahi hoga shayad, wahin yadi ek sath kayi log jahar ko hawa me chhodo to...


Aerobok:- Hmmmm !!!! Zahar ander ghus'kar jala dega...


Nandni:- To ruke kyon ho jaoooo abhi... Bhid ka dhyan khincho... Zahar hawa me itna gholo ki shwans na le paye…


HuYu:- Ruko... Nischal ka samjh me aaya lekin Serin jab zahar ko shwans ke jariye legi...


Nandni:- Mask banao jhatpat fir, bina der kiye...


HuYu:- Aise mask to har space ship me hote hain... Lekin wahan tak pahunchaye kaun...


Nandni:- Aerobok sabko taiyar rakho aur mere ishare ka intzar karna... HuYu sabhi complete suit wale ko lekar bahar aao.... Ab agar giants football khelne aayenge to hum unhe acche se football khilayenge...


HuYu:- Wo kaise... Jaise abhi wo Canon aur Saras apne viman me baith'kar, apne aircrafts ko command de rahe hain aur niche se anti blastic missile se dushman ke missiles ko rok bhi rahe... Waise hi ab teesra kaam bhi karenge.. hawa me giants ke sar ko missile se nishana banayenge... Jaise unke missile hawa me kaam kar rahe waise humare bhi karenge…


Darasal pichhe kayi ghanton se ye log bhi apne ore se naakaam kosis kar chuke the.. Sangathit army ke charo ore arbon giants khade the, jo kisi ko madad ke liye ander pahunchne hi nahi de rahe the... Utne bade sharir ke sath, Nischal ki tarah tej daurna sabke liye sar dard bana tha aur koi chah'kar bhi unki madad ke liye ab tak nahi pahuncha paya tha...


Duhman jaise poori taiyari kar'ke aaye ho ki pahle kisi tarah dono bhai-bahan ko maar girao, uske baad to aaram se shikar hoga… aur shayad apne iss maksad wo log safal hote bhi najar aa rahe the...


Nandni HuYu ko lagbhag order deti hui kahne lagi... Jakar cordinate karo aur dragon babies ko missile command dene kaho... In logon ki commanding kamal ki hai, sab Nischal ke sath the... Aur ander jakar mask lao aur mask ke sath Sonu ko bhi bhejna... Jarra main mask un tak pahuncha dun... Chalo aalsiyon jarra kaam kar lo... Kewal wahi dono heros nahi hai... Hum sab me ek hero basta hai...


Humle ki nayi niti tayar thi. Ek baar fir 30 complete mettelic suit hawa me udde... Unke uddne ke sath hi aaram kar rahe giants bhi uth khade huye... Issi bich Nandni, aur Sonu… dono complete matellic suit ke sath ander yudhh ke maidan ke ore badhe…


Dragon baby Sonu yun to aaram se Saras aur Canon ke sath hi baitha tha, lekin tab se baith'kar wo chhote aircaft ko hi dekh raha tha. Kaise wo size me chhota sa aircrafts, bhid me ghus'kar humla karte aur apne se vishal dhusmano ke bich se nikalte...


Nandni ke baithne ke sath hi... "Maasi seat belt bandh lo kyonki hawa me Gulati bhi khana par sakta hai... Isliye taiyar rahna"…


Nandni:- Chal jhampa aaj in champa ko masakali banana hai...


"Lo hum udd chale fir dhushmano ke bich"…. Bade-bade giants ke bich se ghusa Sonu.… "Maasi hum jab baba aur bua ke pass honge tab unke dayen-bayen lagataar humla kar'ke dhuwan-dhuwan kar denge. Taki unhe mask lagane ka mauka mile, fir hum wapas honge... Taiyar...


Nandni:- Haan bilkul taiyar...


Hawa me poori unchai liya Sonu. Iss bich Nandni metallic suit ke weapons on ki... Fire on command... Suit ke fire ke sath hi bijli ke kamal ke 1 megawatt ka single jhatka taiyar tha...


Sonu, unchai par gaya aur teji se dive lagaate huye kahne laga... "Massi ye giants kafi tej hai dikhenge nahi... Aap bus in giants ko chaunka do, taki hume ander jane ka mauka mile...


Nandni ne haami bhadi aur dive ke kuchh der baad hi Nandni ne fir se aag ka dariya banaya aur solon ke dariya ke bich tej current ka ek poora jaal faila dee.


"Uffffff wo giants"… bahut der se shant iss mahol me Nandni ne khuff ka manjar ek baar fir dikhaya... Aag to badan ko matr jala rahi thi, jo unki chamri ke karan thodi beasar si thi jabki ek megawatt ki bijli unke dil ki dhadkan rok chuki hoti…


Nandni to bus hawa me charo ore aag aur bijli chala rahi thi… wahin Sonu hawa me achanak hi kayi sari kalabajiyan karta, bilkul chhote se aircraft ki tarah... Dono ko kuchh dikh nahi raha hota, lekin thoda niche aate tab pata chalta hawa me aag lagi thi aur tej bijli ke jhatke se hawa me uchhla giant jamin par gir raha hota...


Giants me gati thi aur wo giants bhi Nischal ki tarah daur sakte the, jo dikhta nahi tha... Aur unke issi strong point ke karan HuYu ke dimag ki batti bhi jali. HuYu apni team ko naag dansh ki seema ke aas-pass hi rakhe tha... Giants chal rahi ladai me ghus nahi sakte the isliye kinare se hi lambi kataar ki deewar banaye khade the... Sabhi 30 logon ne high laser ka humla kiya... Hona to iss se kuchh nahi tha lekin giants par huye achanak iss humle ne unhe bhi chauka diya...


Pichhe khade giants ke sathi bhannaye, jaise aage walon se kah rahe ho, "in tuchh logon ki itni himmat". Idhar HuYu ke aadesh the, humla karo aur bina ruke naag-dansh ki seema me ghuso… Ek chhoti si kosis uksane ki aur unhe dikhane ki, kee wo naag-dansh ki seema se bahar aa'kar humla kar rahe hain... Giants me gati thi aur unhe pata tha ki palak jhapakte hi wo sabko daboch lenge..


Ek chhota sa dav aur fans gaye caroro giants iss chakkar me... HuYu & team humla karne ke sath hi seema me ghuse… Unhe to pata bhi nahi tha ki koi daura bhi hai... Lekin idhar ye, aadhe inch ke fasle ko tay kar'ke seema me pahunche aur udhar najron ke samne charo ore rakh hi rakh uddna shuru ho raha tha…


Saikron hi mare the abhi arbon baki the aur iss giants sena ke ander command nahi hi tha. Bhid bari thi lekin shurwat ho gayi thi… Kisi ko apne sathi ke marne ka afsos ho ki na ho lekin samne se unhe raakh bankar hawa me bikharte dekh, in maha daanav ke ego ko thes to pahuncha hi tha...


Naag-dansh ki seema se bahar dekh'kar jahan pahla khep saikda tha, wahin dusra khep hazar ka hua aur teesra lakhon ka... Naag-dansh ki seema me ghuste hi sidha raakh hi bante... Aise raakh bankar udd rahe the, jaise aag me raakh bana kagaj, hawa ke jhonkon par uddata hai... Aur inki gati hi ab inka kaal thi, kyonki lakhon ki bhid ka ek khep matr 1 second me khatm ho raha tha... Aur ego aisa hurt hua tha ki 10 second se HuYu & team ko maarne ki kosis jari thi aur humle rukne ka naam nahi le raha tha.


Idhar Sonu ke pass to jaise divya dristi thi... Haalanki divya dristi nahi thi, balki iss baar wo apne instinct par kaam kar raha tha... Hawa ki dwani prakahne ki kashmta jo har panchhi ke ander hoti hai.. aur issi andaje se, samne se aa rahe giants se bachte huye uspar humla kar raha tha aur karwa bhi raha tha...


Nandni bhannayi... "Ye sale laton ke bhoot... Beta tu aage badh Nischal aur Serin ke ore, ye harami jo boreder khinche hain, unhe main maza chakha dun"…


Nandni ne Apne hath ghuma'kar, yun kafi dur se lahrati hui, gol-gol jalebi path banane lagi.… Shayad ungli 1 ya 2 kilometer ke kshetr tak ka ishara kar gayi ho. Utni dur se ugli ke ishare se gol-gol jalebi ka path banate hui.. Aakhir aate aate Sonu ke charo ore hi ek electrical path bana diya Nandni ne. Uss path se lagatar 5 megawatt ki supply jari thi... "Aa jaa harami daurte huye… naa dikh mujhe..... Sonu maar sale ko samne se aise wave ki sine ke aad paar ho jaye..."…


Idhar Nandni ka kahna tha, udhar Sonu ne diya ek jhannatedar wave jo hawa me... Misisle firne jaisa sound karta, 1 sidhi line me khade 8-10 giants ka sina faadta hua nikal gaya... "Shabaas beta... Ab ek kaam kar apni jahag ruk aur hawa me dayen-bayen se aise hi sina faad wave chhodta rah"...


Bhanna se gaye sabhi giants. Paglon ki tarah ab inke ore bhi daur laga diye aur dur se hi jab pahle giant ko jhatka laga to uske pichhe aa rahe dusra fir teesare…. Wahan lakho giants the, jo kisi na kisi vidhi ek dusre se chipke the... "Sale harami, 5 mega watt bijli kha'kar bhi khade hain"..


Sonu, hanste huye... "Bhag le maasi hum, mujhe ander ghusne ka rasta dikh raha hai... Warna bijli ke jhatke se abhi to apna sir pit rahe hain, kuch der baad hume football bana'kar pitenge"…


Nandni:- Haan haan... Nikal-nikal..


Idhar Nischal aur Serin… dono rakt me sarobar, apne badan me caroron kanton ka dard aur vish chubhoye... Bina ruke aur bina raham kiye, lagatar lad rahe the... Kabhi dono dayen se bayen badhte to kabhi bayen se dayen.… "Nischal, bhai main aur nahi sambhal sakti... Meri himmat toot rahi hai... Gala sukh raha hai"..


Nischal:- Kaam kar le aalsi... Aaj pahli baar to dhang se ladne aayi hai....


Serin:- Ye harami kanten chubho rahe hain... Janta bhi hai kahan-kahan chubhen hain... Tu to khula badan hai.. dekh apne suje badan ko... Main ye tight kapdon me hun aur ander se poora sooja hua hai...


Nischal ek jhalak apne badan ko dekhte.… Jo ajib hi tarike se sooja hua tha... "Aahhh"… Nischal samne wale ko ek laat maar'kar dur kiya aur apni talvar lahrate... "Harami baat kar raha tha... Sence nahi hai kya... Bhonk diya..."


Serin:- Mar to nahi raha bata de to main bhagne ka intzam karungi...


Nischal:- Nahi upar body talvar se cover tha to haamiyon ne paun me khanjar ghop diya...


Serin:- Ek kaam kar baith ja araam se. In salon ke paun kaat'te hain... Pichhe wale jab'tak khabar denge.. hum 1-2 lakh lash to paun kaat-kaat'kar gira denge..


Nischal:- Haan ye sahi hai...


Dono teji se baithe aur utni hi teji se dono ki dard bhadi aaahh nikal rahi thi... Taareef me itne kaatne ghuse the ki teji se jhukte hi aankhon me iss dard ke aanshu to jaroor aa gaye the. Khair dono dard me to chinkhe, lekin sath hi sath, talvar lahra'kar, paun bhi ek hi baar me kaat diye... Aage walon ke girte hi picche wale utne hi teji se aage aaye.


Niche baithne se itna sukoon tha ki ab khud ko bachame ke liye dimag nahi lagana tha, kyonki jo bhi teji se aata, upar dekhte huye hi aata. Ab to bus kaatna tha aur dono dhanadhan paun kaate ja rahe the...


"Kamine jodi ke gulaam, yudhh ke maidan me tera dimag kaam karna band kar diya hai. Tu sanyasi ho jata wahi achha tha… Itni der se thaka raha tha... Aise baith'kar pahle humla nahi kar sakta tha... Dekh to inko, khali jagah bharne ki itni jaldi hai ki, aage aaye ja rahe aur niche se 1 fit chhota ho'kar girte ja rahe"…


Lagbhag 4 round sabke paun kaatne ke baad yudhh jaise viram sa ho gaya tha aur dono samne ka najara dekh, apne muh par haath rakhe... "Aur aaram se humla kar le... Ye sabhi kamine to dur hi aaram se baith gaye, hume gherkar... Ab agar ye log humla karne ke liye 2 circle banaye na, fir batata hun... Ye na ki 2 round paun kaat'kar khade ho jao... Ab karenge ye hum dono ko niche se 6 in chhota… dekh to aage badh bhi nahi rahe hain.. aaram se fail'kar baithe hain"..


Nischal aur Serin ek baar khade ho'kar dekhe... Poore maidan ke sainik baith gaye the... Serin mathe par hath rakhti... "Yaar sach me, yadi double circle me, ek khade aur ek baithe circle ke sath humla hua tab to hum gaye"…


"Aaram se patlthi laga'kar baith... Kaanton se vayumandaliya aavran bacha lega... Thodi der shwans le le"…


"Nischal blood circulation dhima hua to hume nind aa jayegi... Poore badan me chhed kar diya hai haramiyo ne"..


"Ab kya kar sakte hain… bina external help ke hum bure fase hain"…


"Ye sale pahle to aise na the... Ye jitne bhi tough wale dushman hote hain, sab humare nasib me kyon hote hain... Bhej dete bhabhi ke pass... Uske pass thi to in sab se nipatne ki shakti hai"…


"Tapak jati wo bhi... Sale bahut harami fauj lagte hain aur utne hi dhit bhi"…


Tabhi Serin ko Sonu aur Nandni dikhi... "Aahhh bhagwan aaya prithvi ka... Hath jod le re... Kya timing hai"…


Jagah itni khali thi ki Sonu aaram se land kiya... Nandni ke niche utarte hi Nischal bina ruke... "Bilkul muh par dono tape laga lo... Nandu tere pass 10 minute ka waqt hai.. nahi to humara marna tay hai"…


Serin:- Aur haan look, reaction aur kya kyon jaise sawal baad me...


Nandni:- Ye mask laga lo Serin, hum Zahar ko yahan ki hawa me gholne wale hain…


Nischal:- Achha hai yaar... Jhatpat jao... Doc sahab ko raste se hi bata dena ki humare jadi buti wali drink ka bag nikal'kar rakhe... Bag collect kar aur laut'te waqt, 20, 30 zaharbaaj Nilbhutiyon ko load kar'ke le aana... Jaldi bhaag ab...

ek tarah dekha jaaye to is update mein kaman nandu ne hi sambhaali hai...
Baakiyo ne bas robotic tarike se rule rahe just because nischal ne order diya tha par nandu ne apni suj bujh se kaman sambhaali aur nischal aur serin ko kaise dusmano ke bich jaake madad kar sake uske liye ran niti taiyar karke usme amal ki usne ..
waise team work badhiya hai inki... aur upor se leaders itne samjhdaar to kya kehne...
Khair let's see what happens next
ye jo next ran neeti taiyar ki hai nandu ne jahar gholne wali usme kitna kamyab hoti hai...
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

 

[nain11ster]

Welcome back nain sir..

welcome back bhai

Nain भाई जान कर खुशी हुई की आप स्वास्थ है

Ye jaan kar khusi hui ki aap safe aur surakshit hai humko aur kya chahiye

Itna warm welcome dekh kar dil khush ho gaya... Aaj ki kahani ko aisi ki taisi karta hun sab bas padhte rahiye ... Aur haste rahiye

 

[nain11ster]

ek tarah dekha jaaye to is update mein kaman nandu ne hi sambhaali hai...
Baakiyo ne bas robotic tarike se rule rahe just because nischal ne order diya tha par nandu ne apni suj bujh se kaman sambhaali aur nischal aur serin ko kaise dusmano ke bich jaake madad kar sake uske liye ran niti taiyar karke usme amal ki usne ..
waise team work badhiya hai inki... aur upor se leaders itne samjhdaar to kya kehne...
Khair let's see what happens next
ye jo next ran neeti taiyar ki hai nandu ne jahar gholne wali usme kitna kamyab hoti hai...
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

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