Thriller Main Wapas Aawungi..............(A Suspense Thiller Story)

[Ajaykumar82]

छठवाँ भाग (ब)​

बहुत ही लाजवाब महोदय,​

एक कहावत है कि जब गीदड़ की मौत आती है तो वो शहर की तरफ भागता है और इस कहानी में जब इंसान की मौत आती है तो वो इस जंगल की तरफ भागता है। ये लोग इतने दिन से ये लाशों के अंदर नशीले पदार्थों की कालाबाजारी कर रहे हैं क्या इन्हें पता नहीं था कि ये रास्ता कितना खतरनाक है, जरूर पता होगा। लेकिन कहते हैं न कि लालच इंसान की सोचने समझने की शक्ति छीन लेता है। ठीक वैसा ही मोइन खान और जावेद खान के साथ हुआ।​

सभी दारू पीते हुए अपने सेठ मोहनलाल की दरियादिली की तारीफ करते हैं। आधी रात को दोनों लाश लेकर निकलते हैं। खतरे से आगाह करने के लिए विनोद ने जो बोर्ड लगवाया था वो भी देखते हैं लेकिन दोनों के लिए काला अक्षर भैंस बराबर था। इसलिए उनको कोई मतलब नहीं था। मोइन को लड़की दिखाई देती है तो जावेद शराब चढ़ गई है ऐसा बोलता है। शराबियों के साथ हमेशा यही होता है। वो सच भी बोलते हैं तो सब यही सोचते हैं कि दारू ज्यादा पी ली है इसलिए कुछ भी बोल रहा है। कुछ देर में उन्हें कंटेनर के अंदर से खट खट की आवाज़ आती है तो वो दरवाज़ा खोलते हैं। अब अंदर वो क्या देखते हैं ये देखना दिलचस्प होगा।​

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छठवाँ भाग (अ)​

बहुत ही लाजवाब महोदय जी।।​

तो इतने बड़े मुर्दाघर के इस छोटे से शहर में होने का राज पता चल गया, शायद और भी राज होंगे इस मुर्दाघर के जो बाद में पता चलेंगे।।इस मुर्दाघर से लाशों की कालाबाजारी होती है। राम सिंह पर विनोद का शक सही था। वो इस कालाबाजारी में है और पैसे लेकर लाशों की कालाबाजारी करता है। इतनी बड़ी संख्या में लाश होने के कारण कोई शक भी नहीं करता उसपर या यूं कहें कि अभी तक कोई दिमागदार या ईमानदार पुलिसवाला आया ही नहीं था।।​

मोइन और जावेद जो मोहनलाल के चमचे हैं जो कोई बड़ा कारोबारी है या यूं कह सकते हैं कि मुख्य सरगना यही है लाशों की कालाबाजारी करने वालों का। ये तो बहुत बड़ा रैकेट चला रहे हैं। लाशों के अंदर ड्रग्स कुकीन , गांजा, हीरोइन भरकर उसकी खरीद फरोख्त की जाती है। कितने निर्दयी हैं ये सब। इंसान तो इंसान लाशों को भी नहीं छोड़ा। अब पुलिस का या कहें कि विनोद का खतरा बढ़ गया है इसलिए तीसरा व्यक्ति इन्हें होशियारी से काम करने की सलाह दे रहा है।​

aagey to aur bhi bahut kuch hone wala hain........bus aap isey padhtey rahiye...............aabhi to iska main head kaun hain wo bhi waqt chaltey batunga............suspnse aur thrill is kahani mein shuru se lkar aanth tak bani rahrgi.............bus aise hi apne reviews dete rahiyega..........

 

[Ajaykumar82]

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sorry nainia ji jo update mein der ho gayi.............kya hain ki kal mujhe covidshied vaccine laga............jiske wajah se mujhe fever ho gaya aur ek din mnain apne taabiyaat ke chalte pareshan raha..........so kuch likh nahin paya...........aaj fit hoon to aaj dusare thread par update diya hoon..........aab likhney jaa raha ho sake to kal update de doonga..........pukka.............

 

[Mahi Maurya]

thanks mahi ji itna sunder aur detaailed review dene ke liye..............main aapka bahut aaabhari hoon...............aapne to poori kahani ki theme hi rakh deti hain har updates ke.............yakeen maniye to main aap teenon deviyon ka review kum se kum teen baar zaroor padta hoon.......aur jitne baar bhi padhta hoon utna mujhe maza bhi aata hain........isi tarah aagey bhi apni daya drisrti banaye rakhna.......

आपकी इस कहानी पर निरंतर हर भाग के संबंधित प्रतिक्रिया हमारी तरफ से जरूर आएगी।
आखिर कहानी है ही बहुत अच्छी। ऐसी कहानियां इस फोरम में बहुत कम हैं।

ऐसी कहानियां पढ़ने में मज़ा बहुत आता है। बस इतना ही निवेदन है आपसे महोदय कि अबकी बार बिना लंबा अंतराल लिए कहानी लिखिएगा और ये कहानी पूरी जरूर करिएगा।

 

[Ajaykumar82]

आपकी इस कहानी पर निरंतर हर भाग के संबंधित प्रतिक्रिया हमारी तरफ से जरूर आएगी।
आखिर कहानी है ही बहुत अच्छी। ऐसी कहानियां इस फोरम में बहुत कम हैं।

ऐसी कहानियां पढ़ने में मज़ा बहुत आता है। बस इतना ही निवेदन है आपसे महोदय कि अबकी बार बिना लंबा अंतराल लिए कहानी लिखिएगा और ये कहानी पूरी जरूर करिएगा।

Thanks mahi ji...aab gape nahi hoga.. regular haftey mein 3updates deta rahunga.

Aaj shaam ko is kahani ka agla update aa Jayega...

 

[Punnu]

Update- 06 (B) (Megha Update)

" chinta mutt kijiye bhai saheb................hum aaj jis raaste jayengey wahan us raaste se din mein bhi log nahin jaya karte...........wo raasta jungle se poora ghira hain aur wahan koi aata jata nahin...............fir to ye raat ki baat hain........hum 11 baje ke baad apni gadi lekar wahan se niklengey............tab tak thoda kha pee le..........." aur sabhi apne apne kaam nibtakar usi haal mein rakhe un chairs par jakar baith jate hain.............jawed aur moin to sharab ki bottle nikalte hain aur usmein rakha sharab charon mil bantkar peenay lagte hain...............ye daur kuch ghanton tak chalta rehta hain aur sab aapas mein behas karte rehtey hain........

" yaar kismet ho to mohanlaal seth jaisi..............sala uske paas itna rokada hain ki poochon mutt................sala ek bade se alishaan bunglow mein rehta hain...........aur ek uska dusara bunglow bhi khali pada hain..........teen mercedes car.............ghar mein naukar chakar.........sala sab kuch hain uske paas..............aur ye sab humare hi wajah se...........agar hum uska maal nahin pahuchatey to sala usey kaun poochta...........magar ek to khaas baat hain apne seth mein ki wo humein paison se taulkar rakhta hain jiske wajah se humari jubaan par humesha tala laga rehta hain............" aur charon khilkhilatey hue zoron se hans padte hain............

" kisi ne sapney mein bhi nahin socha hoga ki is purani si building mein ye sab bhi kaam hota hain...............waise aise sunsaan jagah par kaun itni raat ko aana chahega............agar bhoola bhaatka koi agar aa bhi gaya to uski maut pukki hain............" aur fir se sabhi ke hansey ki aawazein goonj padti hain..........

" aab humein nikalna hoga......11.30 baj gaye hain............aur aab thand bhi badhti jaa rahi ...........aise mein drive karna aur bhi dikkat ho jata hain...............' aur jawed aur moin dono apni apni jagah se uthatey hain aur fir apni van mein jakar baith jate hain...............wahin wo dono doctors us kamrey ki lights ko off karte hain aur fir tala lagakar wahan se apni bike lekar dusare taraf chal padte hain............

" yaar jo bhi bol.............magar ye kaam bhale hi galat hain magar ismein paisa aur aaish bahut hain............bus 2 ghantey ke har din humein 5000 rs milte hain..........to soch hum mahiney mein kum se kum 20 chaakar to laga hi lete hain............." aur moin jawed ki taraf dekhta hua dheere se muskura padta hain wahin jawed bhi jawab mein hans padta hain.........

" yaar..............tabhi to humare maalik mohanlal ne us murdaghar ko is sehar se bahar banwaya hain................aur sehar se humesha wo do teen laashon ko wahan par mangwa bhi leta hain..........aur fir un laashon ke ander heroine aur drugs bharke usey bahar supply karta hain...........yaar jo bhi bol ye dhanda bada mast hain.............." aur jawed itna kehta hua zoron se thahaka markar hansey lagta hain............wahin moin bhi jawab mein hans padta hain.......

" chal chal gadi chala............kahin aisa na ho ki humein pahunchney mein der ho jaye..........." aur jawed moin ki taraf dekhta hua usey aadhesh deta hain wahin moin tezi se us van ko apne manzil ke taraf badha deta hain........

jaise ho wo dono ek mod par pahunchtey hain aagey unhein ek bada sa sign board likha hua nazar aata hain..........." please don't travel between 07pm to 07 am.....this place is haunted..........enter at your risk...........thankyou.........."aur moin us van ko rokata hua samney lage us board ko bade dhyan se padhney lagta hain............wahin jawed bhi samney lage us board ko bade dhyaan se dekh raha tha............

" abe gandu............jab tu angootha chaap hain to fir samney lage us board ko kya bade dhyaan se padh raha hain...............wo kahawat suni hain na........kala akshar bhains bararur............to chal gadi usi raaste le chal jahan se wo doctor keh raha tha humein jane ko..............ye raasta mere khyaal se sabse aasana aur surakshit hoga.............." aur jawed moin ko jaise hukum deta hain wahin moin us van ko usi raaste ki taraf mod deta hain jahan par aaye din wey haadse ho rahe they.........

" chal mana ki main anghootha chaap hoon magar tu to 5 paas hain na.........to tu hi padkhar kyon nahi bata deta ki us board par likha kya tha..........." aur moin jhalaatey hue jawed ki taraf dekhta hua bol padta hain wahin jawed jawab mein apne kale peelay daant dikhata hua hans padta hain........

" sala angrezi mein likha tha is wajah se mujhe samajh mein nahin aaya.............agar yehi cheez hindi mein bhi likhi hoti to bhi kya tu apne raaste badal deta...........nahin na..........fir ismein behas ki kaun si baat huyi..........." aur jawed itna kehta hua zoron se hans padta hain wahin jawab mein moin idher udher fir dekhney lagta hain.............kuch door jane par raasta poori tarah se soonsan aur veeran ho jata hain..............wahan gadi to door.............ek parinda bhi is waqt nazar nahin aa raha tha.........

thode door jane par moin back glass mein peechay ki taraf dekhney laga............tabhi usey road ke kinarey ek safed kapdon mein ek ladki baithi hui nazar aayi.............wo apne aankhon ko malta hua fir se us sheeshay mein peechay ki image ko dekhney laga aur wahin ek baar fir se usey wahi ladki baithi hui nazar aayi...........issey pehle jawed kuch samjhta moin ke pawn brakes par dab chuke they jissey uski van jameen ko ccccccccchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.....ke awaaz ke saath ragadti hui kuch door jakar ruk gayi.............wahin jawed bade gaur se moni ke chehrey ki taraf dekhney laga.................

" abe...............toone gadi kyon rok di............aab itni raat gaye tujhe is jungle mein aisa kaun dikh gaya............." aur jawed apni nazrein idher udher ghumata hua bol pada wahin moin ke chehrey par khushiyaan saaf nazar aa rahi thi.............

" ladki...............wo bhi akeli............is jungle mein..............yaar aapne to maze ho gaye...........aab to raatein rangeen ho hi jayegi..........hum dono ki............." aur moin itna kehta hua fauran us van se bahar kood jata hain aur apni nazrein idher udher ghoomate hue us ladki ko talash karney lagta hain.........magar gadi se utartey hi na to usey wo ladki kahin nazar aati hain..........aur na hi aur kuch............wahin jawed uski taraf dekhta hua hans padta hain.......

" lagta hain tujhe chadh gayi hain...........aur kya hain na teri biwi tujhe chodh gayi is liye tu aksar ladki ke liye pareshan sa rehta hain............fikar mutt kar........... kal chale hain hum ruskshana begum ke aadey par..........wahan tujhe badhiya maal main dilwa doonga........." aur jawed hansta hua seedha aakar us van mein baith jata hain wahin moin apne sir ko khujaney lagta hain.........................aur wapas aakar apni van mein dubara se baith jata hain.......

" maine dekha tha usey.......................meri nazrein aise dhok nahin kha sakti............usney safed rang ka suit pehna hua tha...........sali aabhi to yehi thi to wo aise gayi kahan.........." aur moin apne soch mein doobata chala jata hain.......tabhi wo apni van ko start karta hain aur usey aagey ki taraf le jane lagta hain.......

kuch door jane par uske back cabin mein kisi ke darwze thatthakeny ki awaaz sunayi deti hain.....thhhaaaakkkkkkkkkkk...thhhhhhaaakkkkkkkkkk...............wahin moin jawed ki taraf ajeeb si nazreion se dekhney lagta hain............wahin jawed moin ki taraf............

" tumne kuch awaaz suni.............lagta hain koi back cabin mein se darwaza khatkhata raha hain..............magar ander to sirf laaashein hain...........zinda insaan koi nahin........ye kaise ho sakta hain..............." aur jawed ke chehrey par pareshani ke badal saaf nazar aane lagte hain wahin moin fir se apni gadi par brakes lagata hain aur jawed ki taraf bade dhyaan se dekhney lagta hain...........

" to kya kare aab.............ek kaam karte hain..........chalkar dekhtey hain ki ander koi hain kya....................!!!!!!!!!!!" aur moin pareshan sa hota hua apni van se dubara se neechay utarta hain aur saath hi saath jawed bhi utar jata hain........fir wo dono peechay van ke taraf chal padte hain..........jab jawed us van ke darwaze ke paas pahunchta hain wo ek chabi se uski lock ko kholta hua us darwaze ko ek hi jhatkey mein poora khol deta hain aur ander jab un dono ki nazrein padti hain dono ek dusare ka mooh dekhney lag jate hain....................dekhna tha aagey un sab ki zindagi mein kaun sa mod aane wala tha..........

Till Continued............................................

Bahut osm update yr.....to Javed or moin dono lashon ka soda krte hai.....or kisi mohan lal ke liye kaam krte hai.....shayad is rooh se mohanlal ka koi connection ho skta hai..I think .....drugs supply krana..ye kaam hai mohanlal ka .....or dusri taraf Javed or moin dono usi raste se chal diye Jha pr rooh kisi ko maarti hai...lgta hai ab inki baari hai...dekhte hai aage kya hota hai..

 

[Ajaykumar82]

Bahut osm update yr.....to Javed or moin dono lashon ka soda krte hai.....or kisi mohan lal ke liye kaam krte hai.....shayad is rooh se mohanlal ka koi connection ho skta hai..I think .....drugs supply krana..ye kaam hai mohanlal ka .....or dusri taraf Javed or moin dono usi raste se chal diye Jha pr rooh kisi ko maarti hai...lgta hai ab inki baari hai...dekhte hai aage kya hota hai..

thanks alot yaara..........fir reading this story..............aagey ismein bahut se mod aayengey.............dekha jayega ki aagey kya kuch hota hain.......ye kahani bhi meri wo kaun thi jaisi hain magar uska theme alag tha aur iska theme laga hain..........keep reading yaara......

 

[Ajaykumar82]

Update- 07 (A) (Megha Update)

" to kya kare aab.............ek kaam karte hain..........chalkar dekhtey hain ki ander koi hain kya....................!!!!!!!!!!!" aur moin pareshan sa hota hua apni van se dubara se neechay utarta hain aur saath hi saath jawed bhi utar jata hain........fir wo dono peechay van ke taraf chal padte hain..........jab jawed us van ke darwaze ke paas pahunchta hain wo ek chabi se uski lock ko kholta hua us darwaze ko ek hi jhatkey mein poora khol deta hain aur ander jab un dono ki nazrein padti hain dono ek dusare ka mooh dekhney lag jate hain....................dekhna tha aagey un sab ki zindagi mein kaun sa mod aane wala tha..........

Ab Aage.................................................................

Samney us van ka darwaza khula pada tha...............aur us van ke ander wahi do laashein waisi hi rakhi hui thi............ jaise pehle thi................jawed torch jalata hua idher udher dekhney lagta hain magar usey ander kuch nazar nahin aata..........jaise hi wo torch neechay farsh ki taraf jalata hain ander se ek billi tezi se nikalti hui seedha moin ke upar jhapat padti hain................aur moin ke mooh se ek durr bhari cheekh nikal jati hain.............

moin issey pehle sambhalta wo billi uske nazreion se ojhal ho chuki thi..................wahin jawed moin ko aise dara hua dekhkar uspar zoron se hans padta hain.........

"hahahahahah.................durr gaya fattu................ek billi ko dekhkar................mard banta hain isi pe...........thoo hain tujhpar..............." aur jawed moin ko dhikkarta hua fir uspar hansey lagta hain wahin moin ki bolti band ho jati hain...........sach to ye tha ki is waqt wo kafi dara aur ghabraya hua sa tha............usney bahut kareeb se us billi ki aankh dekhi thi...........jo aam billiyon ke mukabley thodi alag thi...........us billi ki aankhein poori tarah se laal thi............jaise us billi ki aankhon mein khoon utar aaya ho............magar ye nazara jawed nahin dekh paya tha...........

" aaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh.....................kitna dard ho raha............" aur moin apne hathon ki taraf dekhta hua dard se karaah uthatha hain..............billi ke is tarah achanak jhapatney se uske ek haath par uske panjey aur nakhoonon ke nishaan gad gaye they jiske wajah se uske haath par teen bade bade lakreein ban gayi thi.............jipar se aab khoon nikal raha tha.............

" chal kal ke akhbaar mein nikalwa deta hoon ki mere dost par raat mein.......... ek sunsaan si jagah par...........ek billi ne achanak se humlaa kar diya...........aur usey mere dost ko ghayal kar diya................maza aayega..................ye khabar padhkar logon ko............" aur jawed maze leta hua fir se zoron se hansey lagta hain wahin moin gussey se ander hi ander jawed ko gaaliyaan deta hain magar samney uske kuch kehta aur nahin...........

magar moin ko ye baat samajh mein nahin aa rahi thi ki us cabin mein aakhir billi aayi kahan se...............aur agar aayi bhi to wo insanon jaise darwaze par kaise dastak dene lagi................ye uski samajh mein aabhi bhi nahin aa raha tha..........wo is waqt kafi uljhan mein nazar aa raha tha...........

" tu yahin par ruk.............main aabhi hulka hokar aata hoon................" aur jawed itna kehkar fauran samney ki jhaddiyon ke taraf mootney chal padta hain wahin moin sadak par baitha hua............. apne haathon ko un jakhmon par apne mooh se dekhta hua phoonk raha tha................is tarah phoonkney se usey thodi jalan se rahat mil rahi thi..........

"kkkkkkkkaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr........" ki ek tezz awaaz ke saath achanak fir se jaise sab kuch shant ho jata hain wahin moin apne charon taraf idher udher dekhney lagta hain....................jab wo peechay ki taraf mudata hain to usey us van ke darwaze par ttttthhhhhaaaaaaaakkkkkkkkkkkk......................ttttthhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaakkkkkkkkk..........ki awaaz ke saath van ke darwaze khulte aur band hote se nazar aate hain..........magar kamal ki baat to ye thi ki is waqt hawa bilkul bhi nahin chal rahi thi upar se van ka darwaza mote lohe ka bana tha to wo kaise itni aasani se kabhi khul raha tha to...............kabhi band ho raha tha....................ye moin ke samajh mein nahin aa rahi thi..............

ho na ho jawed shayad us darwaze ko lock karna bhool gaya tha................aabhi bhi usmein chabi latak rahi thi.................moin apni jagah se uthatha hain aur fauran us van ke darwaze ke taraf chal padta hain...............jaise hi wo us darwaze par apna haath rakhta hain wo darwaza apni jagah par jaise ruk sa jata hain............aab na hi wo darwaza khul raha tha................ aur na hi band ho raha tha .................aur na hi wahan koi aur hulchal ho rahi thi...........

" kamal hain............bina hawa ke ye darwaza kaise apne aap ye band aur khul raha...........lagta hain aaj kuch zyada ho gayi.........." aur moin jaise hi us darwaze ko band karney jata hain aur jab uski nazar ander ke nazare par padti hain..........uske chehrey par barah baj jate hain.............uske chehrey ka rang achanak se feeka padh jata hain.............kyon ki aabhi thodi der pehle jin laashon ko wo dekh gaya tha aab us van mein ek bhi laashein usey kahin nazar nahin aa rahi thi..............to is tarah se achanak se kahan gayab ho gayi wo do laashein...........

drugs aur heroine ka khyaal aate hi moin ke to jaise haath pawn fool se jate hain..........uske haath pawn durr se sunn ho gaye they..............shareer mein aisa laga ki jaan hi nikal gayi ho..............laashein is tarah se gayab hone se kahin zyada usey un laashon ke ander bhare us maal ki thi jo bazar mein crores ke they.............agar uska maalik ko ye baat pata lagi to uski jaan gayi samjho...........

moin apne khyalon mein gum tha..................uska dhyaan is baat par nahin jaa raha tha ki is tarah se wo do laashein achanak se kahan gayab ho sakti hain.............tabhi uske kandhon par kisi ka haath usey mehsoos hua aur wo apne soch se bahar nikala....................aur jaise hi usney apni gurden peechay ki taraf ghumayi aur jab uski nazar samney ki taraf gayi uski rahi sahi himmat bhi jawab de gayi..............

un do laaashon mein se ek laash chalkar uske samney aa khadi hui thi...................jiski aankhein bilkul kali thi..........aur chehra bilkul bhayanak sa tha..............daanth thode bahar ki taraf nikle they aur mooh se laar tapak rahi thi..............

" tu.......mujhe ...khooj.....raha.....hain.....naaa.........dekh......main ....tere.....samney....aaa...gaya....mujhe......to....dekhkar.....tujhe.........khus ....hona .......chahiye.......tha.......naa........." aur wo laash achanak se bol pada................wahin moin ki to jaise hawa nikal padi...............uske mooh se jaise jubaan hi band ho gayi ho.............wo wahan se girte padte bhagney laga.................


idher jaise hi jawed hulka hua aur apne pent ki chain band karney laga tabhi uske kandhey par kisi ne apna haath rakha.............jaise hi wo peechay muda dusari laash theek uske peechay khadi thi...................usi rang roop mein.......usi andaaz mein............wahin jawd ki bhi futt ke haath mein aa gayi..........

"kkkaaaaauuuuuuuunnnnnnnnnn hoooo tummmmmmmmmmmmmm........" aur jawed durr se peechay ki tarah bhaga aur ladkhadatey hue achanak se gir pada............wahin wo laash uski baateion ko sunkar zoron se thahaka markar hansey laga..........

" tu.......mujhe......bhool....gaya........gaur....se ....dekh...........agar.........aab........bhi...... nahin.........pehchana.........to.......aab ........pehchaan........lega............."aur tabhi ek side mein ek hulki si roshani hui aur ek saaya jawed ko fir nazar aane laga................wo saaya aur koi nahin balki wahi ladki thi jo rooh bankar wahan us jagah par bhatak rahi thi.............

jaise hi jawed ki nazar us saaye par padi uske pawn tale jameen khisak gayi..............usey to ek pal yakeen nahin ho raha tha ki jo uski aankhein dekh rahi hain kya wo.......haqeeqat hain................ya fir koi sapna..............

" saaaaakksssshhhhi.....................tttttuuuummmmmmmmmmmm............" aur javed ki jubaan jaise ladkhada si gayi..........wahin wo saaya jaise gussey se dahek uthi..........

" sakshi nahin................apni maut bula mujhe.................chaal bhag.............jitna bhaag sakta hain tu yahan se..............aaj main bhi dekhti hoon ki tujhe kaun bachaha hain....................." aur jawed jaise taise girte padte wahan se bhagney lagta hain wahin wo do laashein dono ka peecha karney lagti hain............thode der baad wo saaya bhi gayab ho jati hain.................idher ek taraf moin apni jaan bachata hua bhaag raha tha.................wahin dusari taraf jawed............

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[Ajaykumar82]

Update- 07(B) (Megha Update)

thode door bhagtey bhagtey aakhir moin buri tarah se thak jata hain aur zoron se haanfney lagta hain................mote shareer hone ki wajah se aab usey theek se bhaga bhi nahin jaa raha tha..............tabhi uske kanon mein kisi ki awaaz sunayi deti hain...........

" thak .....gaye.... kya ......moin..... khan................bhago ......naa.....aur ......bhago.............jakar.... apni ....jaan.... bachawo.......................dekho .....wo .....jagah .....bilkul ....safe hain .....tumhare..... liye........un .....jhadiyon..... ke..... peechay............" aur uske peechay wahin laash zoron se hansta hua bol padta hain wahin moin ki fatkar haath mein aa jati hain............wo wahan se girta padta fir se bhagney lagta hain............fir do kadam jate hi uske theek samney fir se wahin laash aakar khadi ho jati hain..............

" tumhein....to .....maal.....chahiye .......tha.......naa.........le....lo....apna .......sara...maal.........." aur wo laash apne dono haathon ko apne siley hue pet par le jata hain aur moin ke aakhon ke samney apne dono haathon se apna pet cheerney lagta hain.......................agle hi pal jo pet par tanka laga hua tha wo tanka tootata chala jata hain aur usmein rakha sara druga aur heroine sab kuch ek hi pal mein bahar nikalney lagta hain.........usmein se kuch drugs jameen par gir padta hain to kuch pet mein hi reh jata hain.................ye nazara dekhkar moin wahin zoron se chilla padta hain............wahin us vatavaran mein ek tezz hansey ki awaazein us laash ki fir se goonjh padti hain........

" tujhe.....chahiye .......na....ye ......le......aur.....le......" aur wo laash fir se moin ke samney aakar khada ho jata hain wahin moin haaftey hue buri tarah se thak chuka tha.....................aab uske ander aur bhagney ki taqat nahin bachi thi..............tabhi wo laash uskey kaskar apni bahon mein jakad leta hain aur apne pet mein rakha ek drugs ka pouch faadta hua seedha moin ke mooh mein dalney lagta hain..............wahin moin apna mooh poori tarah se band kar leta hain magar us laash ke samney uski kya bisat thi ki wo tik pata.............

jab wo laash uske jabdey ko kaskar jakadta hain to moin ke mooh khud ba khud khul jate hain aur wo laash pehle ek pouch fir dusara..........fir teesara..........isi tarah se sara drugs uske mooh mein dalta chala jata hain wahin moin ki dard se cheekh nikal jati hain..........aab hudd se zyada matra mein drugs lene par uska kya haal hoga ye to bus moin hi samajh sakta tha.............

thode der baad uske aankh................naak....................kaan............mooh..................sabhi jagah se khoon nikalney shuru ho gaye they wahin wo jameen par buri tarah se chatpata raha tha...................dheere dheere uska jism neela padta jaa raha tha.................wahin uski aankhin bahar ko nikal aayi thi..............shayad dard ki wajah se..............tabhi wo laash ek lakdi ka mota sa tukda apne haath mein leta hua seedha moin ke kareeb chala aaya.............us lakdi ka aagey ka hissa thoda nokila tha............jisey wo jameen par baar baar gada raha tha............

aab moin ko samajhtey der nahin lagi ki aab aagey uske saath kya hone wala hain.............magar uski aisi halat thi ki wo na theek se aab apne pairon par khada ho sakta tha...........aur na kahin bhaag sakta tha.............bus wo kisi keedey maukadey ki tarah bus jameen par reeng raha tha............agle hi pal wo laash us lakdi ka tukda lekar uske paas aaya............... aur udher moin is waqt pet ke bal aagey ki taraf jameen par sarak raha tha...........adhik matra mein drugs lene se aab uska jism kaam karna band kar diya tha...........

tabhi wo laash us lakdi ke tukdey ko apne haathon mein upar ki ore uthatha hain aur uski nok ko poori taqat se jameen mein dhasa deta hain jissey wo lakdi ka tukada moin ke peeth ko cheerta hua uske jism se aar paar ho jata hain aur us soonsan raat mein moin ki ek aakhri dard bhari aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.............ki awaaz nikal padti hain..........jo uske baad humesha humesha ke liye shant ho chuki thi..................uske mooh se dher sara khoon nikala aur uske sath hi uska dum bhi nikal chuka tha............aab sab kuch ek hi pal mein shant ho chuka tha..............

bach gaya tha to aab jawed..............jo aab wo bhi apni jaan bachakar wahan se bhaag raha tha.............magar shayad aaj uski bhi jaan nahin bachney wali thi..........itna bada jungle tha upar se kali ghani raat..............wo akele jata bhi to kahan..............wo paglon ki tarah idher udher bhag raha tha............

" baachawo.........................koi mujhe bachawo..............koi hain.................meri madad karo............" aur jawed bhagta hua buri tarah se thak kar road ke beechon beech haanfney lagta hain..................aab usey bhi bhaga nahin jaa raha tha...................wo kuch door bhagta hua thak kar road par apne ghutnon ke bal lumbi lumbi si saans lene lagta hain.........tabhi uske kanon mein fir se kisi ki awaaz sunayi deti hain...............

" jawed.......................tum kaha ho.............dekho main tumhein dhoodh raha hoon..............mujhse tum chupo nahin..............main tumhein marunga thodi na...........bus tumhein main apne saath le jawunga...............fir hum dono saath saath rahengey.................." aur wo laash jawed ko idher udher dhoodhney lagta hain.............tabhi usey samney se ek aur laash aati hui nazar aati hain.............jo kuch der pehle moin ki jisney jaan li thi.............jawed jaldi se bhagta hua ek ped ke peechay chup jata hain aur apne mooh par dono haath rakhta hua apne bekabu ho rahe sanson ko pal pal sambhalney lagta hain............

tabhi wo dono laashein apne haathon mein lakdi ka tukda liye jawed ko khojney lagte hain.................wahin jawed ki puri tarah fatt gayi thi...........wo us pal ko koosh raha tha jab wo is raaste par aaya tha................magar uske dimag mein ye bhi sawal chal rahe they ki aakhir sakshi murkar bhi kaise wapas aa gayi............kya aisa mumkin hain............iska matalb aab wo kisi ko zinda nahin chodegi...........jawed isi uljhan mein tha aur is kadakey ke thand mein bhi uske chehrey par pasiney ki chand boondein nazar aane lagi thi..............shayad apni maut ke khauff ki wajah se..............

tabhi ek laash uske peechay gayi aur usey dekhkar muskuraney lagi................issey pehle jawed usey dekhta ya kuch sochta uske haathon mein thama wo lakdi ka dhardhaar tukda agle hi pal jawed ke thighs ko cheerta hua uske jism se aar paar ho jata hain wahin jawed ki aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh dard bhari cheekh nikal jati hain.............wahin jawed ladkhada hua apne pair pakadkar jameen par gir padta hain............uske pairon se dher sara khoon bahar ki taraf gir raha thaa jisey samney khada wo laash dekhta hua zoron se hans raha tha............

uske thahakon ki goonj aisi thi ki us soonsaan jungle ko poori tarah se tharaa dene ke liye kafi thi.............jawed dard se tadapta hua.......apne ek pairon se rengta hua jameen par idher udher sarakney lagta hain...............tabhi uski hansi ki awaaz sunkar dusara laash bhi wahan chala aata hain...............jiska pet pehle se hi fata hua tha........uske haath mein bhi ek lakdi ka tukda tha .............jo wo agle hi pal jawed ke dusare tangon par zoron se gada deta hain jissey wo lakdi ka tukada jawed ke dusare janghon ko cheerta hua uske jism se aar paar ho jata hain.........


ek baar fir se jawed ki dard bhaari.............ssssssssssssmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh......... cheekh un waadiyon mein goonj padti hain...............dard se uski aankhon se aansoon nikal pade they...............jo kuch der pehle wo idher se udher jameen par reng raha tha aab wo bhi nahin reng paa raha tha.........kyon ki lakdi ka dusara tukdaa uske janghon ko cheerta hua kuch hissa jameen mein dhans chuka tha.............

pehla laash uske kareeb aata hain aur uske janghon se beh rahe khoon ko apne haathon mein choota hain fir wo usey jeebh se chatney lagta hain...........usey dekhkar dusara laash bhi jawed ke saath wahi karta hain...........

" mujhe jane do..............mujhe mutt maro..............maine tumhara kya bigada hain............." aur jawed un do murdon ke samney faryaad karney lagta hain wahin wo do laash ek dusare ko dekhkar hansey lagte hin...............

" marega ............tu.....bhi............aur wo...........sab...........bhi.......jo meri...........maut........ke ..........jimmedar..............hain...........tujhe.........zehar .......bechney ka.........bahut...........shauk......hain.........na.....le........khaa............na.......ye.....zehar.........." aur wo laash druga ke teen chaar poches jawed ke mooh mein dalney lagte hain wahin jawed ki cheekh nikal jati hain.............teen chaar pocuhes khane ke baad dono laash apni jagah se khade hote hain aur fir lakdi ka ek ek tukda fir se apne haathon mein lete hain aur is baar jawed ke seenay ke dono bagal ek hi baar mein us tukdey ko seedha aar par kar dete hain.........wahin jawed khoon ki ultiyaan karta hua dum tod deta hain...............

fir sab kuch jaise ek pal mein shant ho jati hain.................thode der baad wo dono laash bhi wahin jameen par gir jate hain...............aab unke jism mein kahin koi hulchal nahin thi.................aab sab kuch pal bhar mein shant ho gaya tha............................

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Tezpur sehar mein................sehar se kuch door........bheed bhaad se alag..................ek shant colony mein.....................ek 26 no ka bada sa bunglow tha..................filhaal aabhi wahan zyada makanein nahin bani thi..............magar dekhney se wo area kafi sunder aur bada hi khoobsurat lagta tha..............

raat ke kareeb 2 baj rahe they.................raat humesha ki tarah gehri aur poori tarah se khamosh thi..............usi bunglow mein ek ladki koi 20 saal ki............apne kamrey mein kambal odhey soyi hui thi................kamrey mein ek zero waat ka hulka bulb bhi jal raha tha................ye area pahaon se ghira hone se jab yahan tezz hawa chalti to ajeeb si awazein nikalti...............jo us mahool ko aur bhi bhayanak bana deti...............

wo ladki sapney mein apna sir idher udher karti hui .......neend mein jaise badbada rahi thi.................halanki itne thand mein bhi uska jism pasiney se bheeg gaya tha................shayad durr ki wajah se...............tabhi thode der baad wo fauran zoron se cheekhti hui apne bister par uthkar baith gayi aur zoron se haanfey lagi...........

uski dhadkaein bahut tezz thi...............aur chehrey par durr ki lakheerein bhi saaf nazar aa rahi thi...........uske tezz cheekhney ki awaaz sunkar bagal mein soo rahi uski maa tezi se daudti hui ander aayi aur aakar apni beti ko fauran apne seenay se laga liya............wahin wo ladki apni maa ko kuch pal tak yu hi dekhti rahi fir achanak se uski aankhon mein aansoon ki moti dhara foot padi..............jisey wo apne aankhon mein sama na saki...........

" kya hua meri baachi............tu theek to hain na....................." aur uski vyakul maa ghabrati hui fauran us kamrey ki lights on ki aur apne baachi ko apne seenay se lagaye uske balon ko bade hi pyaar se sehlaney lagi..........dularney lagi..............wahin wo ladki gumsum si apni maa ki aagosh mein..........chup chaap si leti hui.............bilkul dari hui.......sehmi si.................lipat kar lumbi lumbi saansein le rahi thi...........

" beta avni......................tujhe hua kya.............kya tujhe fir se wahin sapna aaya................." aur uski maa ne bade pyaar se apni beti ke sir par apne hathon se dulartey hue ussey poocha ....................wahin uski masoom si beti bina kuch kahe ek baar fir apne maa ke seenay se lag gayi aur fir foot foot kar dubara se roo padi..................wahin uski maa usey aise hi apne seenay se lagaye rahi.................shayad..........wo apni beti ko auron se kahin zyada strong banana chahti thi..........magar niyati ko shayad kuch aur hi manzoor tha....................

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[Naina]

Update- 07 (A) (Megha Update)

" to kya kare aab.............ek kaam karte hain..........chalkar dekhtey hain ki ander koi hain kya....................!!!!!!!!!!!" aur moin pareshan sa hota hua apni van se dubara se neechay utarta hain aur saath hi saath jawed bhi utar jata hain........fir wo dono peechay van ke taraf chal padte hain..........jab jawed us van ke darwaze ke paas pahunchta hain wo ek chabi se uski lock ko kholta hua us darwaze ko ek hi jhatkey mein poora khol deta hain aur ander jab un dono ki nazrein padti hain dono ek dusare ka mooh dekhney lag jate hain....................dekhna tha aagey un sab ki zindagi mein kaun sa mod aane wala tha..........

Ab Aage.................................................................

Samney us van ka darwaza khula pada tha...............aur us van ke ander wahi do laashein waisi hi rakhi hui thi............ jaise pehle thi................jawed torch jalata hua idher udher dekhney lagta hain magar usey ander kuch nazar nahin aata..........jaise hi wo torch neechay farsh ki taraf jalata hain ander se ek billi tezi se nikalti hui seedha moin ke upar jhapat padti hain................aur moin ke mooh se ek durr bhari cheekh nikal jati hain.............

moin issey pehle sambhalta wo billi uske nazreion se ojhal ho chuki thi..................wahin jawed moin ko aise dara hua dekhkar uspar zoron se hans padta hain.........

"hahahahahah.................durr gaya fattu................ek billi ko dekhkar................mard banta hain isi pe...........thoo hain tujhpar..............." aur jawed moin ko dhikkarta hua fir uspar hansey lagta hain wahin moin ki bolti band ho jati hain...........sach to ye tha ki is waqt wo kafi dara aur ghabraya hua sa tha............usney bahut kareeb se us billi ki aankh dekhi thi...........jo aam billiyon ke mukabley thodi alag thi...........us billi ki aankhein poori tarah se laal thi............jaise us billi ki aankhon mein khoon utar aaya ho............magar ye nazara jawed nahin dekh paya tha...........

" aaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh.....................kitna dard ho raha............" aur moin apne hathon ki taraf dekhta hua dard se karaah uthatha hain..............billi ke is tarah achanak jhapatney se uske ek haath par uske panjey aur nakhoonon ke nishaan gad gaye they jiske wajah se uske haath par teen bade bade lakreein ban gayi thi.............jipar se aab khoon nikal raha tha.............

" chal kal ke akhbaar mein nikalwa deta hoon ki mere dost par raat mein.......... ek sunsaan si jagah par...........ek billi ne achanak se humlaa kar diya...........aur usey mere dost ko ghayal kar diya................maza aayega..................ye khabar padhkar logon ko............" aur jawed maze leta hua fir se zoron se hansey lagta hain wahin moin gussey se ander hi ander jawed ko gaaliyaan deta hain magar samney uske kuch kehta aur nahin...........

magar moin ko ye baat samajh mein nahin aa rahi thi ki us cabin mein aakhir billi aayi kahan se...............aur agar aayi bhi to wo insanon jaise darwaze par kaise dastak dene lagi................ye uski samajh mein aabhi bhi nahin aa raha tha..........wo is waqt kafi uljhan mein nazar aa raha tha...........

" tu yahin par ruk.............main aabhi hulka hokar aata hoon................" aur jawed itna kehkar fauran samney ki jhaddiyon ke taraf mootney chal padta hain wahin moin sadak par baitha hua............. apne haathon ko un jakhmon par apne mooh se dekhta hua phoonk raha tha................is tarah phoonkney se usey thodi jalan se rahat mil rahi thi..........

"kkkkkkkkaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr........" ki ek tezz awaaz ke saath achanak fir se jaise sab kuch shant ho jata hain wahin moin apne charon taraf idher udher dekhney lagta hain....................jab wo peechay ki taraf mudata hain to usey us van ke darwaze par ttttthhhhhaaaaaaaakkkkkkkkkkkk......................ttttthhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaakkkkkkkkk..........ki awaaz ke saath van ke darwaze khulte aur band hote se nazar aate hain..........magar kamal ki baat to ye thi ki is waqt hawa bilkul bhi nahin chal rahi thi upar se van ka darwaza mote lohe ka bana tha to wo kaise itni aasani se kabhi khul raha tha to...............kabhi band ho raha tha....................ye moin ke samajh mein nahin aa rahi thi..............

ho na ho jawed shayad us darwaze ko lock karna bhool gaya tha................aabhi bhi usmein chabi latak rahi thi.................moin apni jagah se uthatha hain aur fauran us van ke darwaze ke taraf chal padta hain...............jaise hi wo us darwaze par apna haath rakhta hain wo darwaza apni jagah par jaise ruk sa jata hain............aab na hi wo darwaza khul raha tha................ aur na hi band ho raha tha .................aur na hi wahan koi aur hulchal ho rahi thi...........

" kamal hain............bina hawa ke ye darwaza kaise apne aap ye band aur khul raha...........lagta hain aaj kuch zyada ho gayi.........." aur moin jaise hi us darwaze ko band karney jata hain aur jab uski nazar ander ke nazare par padti hain..........uske chehrey par barah baj jate hain.............uske chehrey ka rang achanak se feeka padh jata hain.............kyon ki aabhi thodi der pehle jin laashon ko wo dekh gaya tha aab us van mein ek bhi laashein usey kahin nazar nahin aa rahi thi..............to is tarah se achanak se kahan gayab ho gayi wo do laashein...........

drugs aur heroine ka khyaal aate hi moin ke to jaise haath pawn fool se jate hain..........uske haath pawn durr se sunn ho gaye they..............shareer mein aisa laga ki jaan hi nikal gayi ho..............laashein is tarah se gayab hone se kahin zyada usey un laashon ke ander bhare us maal ki thi jo bazar mein crores ke they.............agar uska maalik ko ye baat pata lagi to uski jaan gayi samjho...........

moin apne khyalon mein gum tha..................uska dhyaan is baat par nahin jaa raha tha ki is tarah se wo do laashein achanak se kahan gayab ho sakti hain.............tabhi uske kandhon par kisi ka haath usey mehsoos hua aur wo apne soch se bahar nikala....................aur jaise hi usney apni gurden peechay ki taraf ghumayi aur jab uski nazar samney ki taraf gayi uski rahi sahi himmat bhi jawab de gayi..............

un do laaashon mein se ek laash chalkar uske samney aa khadi hui thi...................jiski aankhein bilkul kali thi..........aur chehra bilkul bhayanak sa tha..............daanth thode bahar ki taraf nikle they aur mooh se laar tapak rahi thi..............

" tu.......mujhe ...khooj.....raha.....hain.....naaa.........dekh......main ....tere.....samney....aaa...gaya....mujhe......to....dekhkar.....tujhe.........khus ....hona .......chahiye.......tha.......naa........." aur wo laash achanak se bol pada................wahin moin ki to jaise hawa nikal padi...............uske mooh se jaise jubaan hi band ho gayi ho.............wo wahan se girte padte bhagney laga.................


idher jaise hi jawed hulka hua aur apne pent ki chain band karney laga tabhi uske kandhey par kisi ne apna haath rakha.............jaise hi wo peechay muda dusari laash theek uske peechay khadi thi...................usi rang roop mein.......usi andaaz mein............wahin jawd ki bhi futt ke haath mein aa gayi..........

"kkkaaaaauuuuuuuunnnnnnnnnn hoooo tummmmmmmmmmmmmm........" aur jawed durr se peechay ki tarah bhaga aur ladkhadatey hue achanak se gir pada............wahin wo laash uski baateion ko sunkar zoron se thahaka markar hansey laga..........

" tu.......mujhe......bhool....gaya........gaur....se ....dekh...........agar.........aab........bhi...... nahin.........pehchana.........to.......aab ........pehchaan........lega............."aur tabhi ek side mein ek hulki si roshani hui aur ek saaya jawed ko fir nazar aane laga................wo saaya aur koi nahin balki wahi ladki thi jo rooh bankar wahan us jagah par bhatak rahi thi.............

jaise hi jawed ki nazar us saaye par padi uske pawn tale jameen khisak gayi..............usey to ek pal yakeen nahin ho raha tha ki jo uski aankhein dekh rahi hain kya wo.......haqeeqat hain................ya fir koi sapna..............

" saaaaakksssshhhhi.....................tttttuuuummmmmmmmmmmm............" aur javed ki jubaan jaise ladkhada si gayi..........wahin wo saaya jaise gussey se dahek uthi..........

" sakshi nahin................apni maut bula mujhe.................chaal bhag.............jitna bhaag sakta hain tu yahan se..............aaj main bhi dekhti hoon ki tujhe kaun bachaha hain....................." aur jawed jaise taise girte padte wahan se bhagney lagta hain wahin wo do laashein dono ka peecha karney lagti hain............thode der baad wo saaya bhi gayab ho jati hain.................idher ek taraf moin apni jaan bachata hua bhaag raha tha.................wahin dusari taraf jawed............

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bure log sochte hai ki wo jo bure kaam kar rahe hai, agar police ke hathe na chadhe to saza bhi nahi milegi....
Lekin wo kehte hai manushya ko apne apne karmo ka phal ishi jindagi mein bhugatna padta hai... achha karo to achha aur bura karo to bura....
Jindagi bhar jo paap aur bure kaam kiye un dono jawed aur moin ne, aaj unka bhi waqt aa gaya hai, aaj ye dono bhi apne bure karmo ka phal ye dono bhugatne wale hai..
Wo ruh jiska naam sakshi hai wo chahti to ek hi jhatke mein maar sakti thi par wo dara dara ke, tadpa tadpa ke maarna chaahti hai un dono ko.... I think sakshi ke sath kuch to kiya hoga jawed ne isliye wo aise bol rahi thi...
well jo bhi ho ye dono giyo.. lasho ka shaudagar aaj khud lash banne wale hai..
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills Ajay sahab