Thriller Main Wapas Aawungi..............(A Suspense Thiller Story)

[Naina]

Update- 07(B) (Megha Update)

thode door bhagtey bhagtey aakhir moin buri tarah se thak jata hain aur zoron se haanfney lagta hain................mote shareer hone ki wajah se aab usey theek se bhaga bhi nahin jaa raha tha..............tabhi uske kanon mein kisi ki awaaz sunayi deti hain...........

" thak .....gaye.... kya ......moin..... khan................bhago ......naa.....aur ......bhago.............jakar.... apni ....jaan.... bachawo.......................dekho .....wo .....jagah .....bilkul ....safe hain .....tumhare..... liye........un .....jhadiyon..... ke..... peechay............" aur uske peechay wahin laash zoron se hansta hua bol padta hain wahin moin ki fatkar haath mein aa jati hain............wo wahan se girta padta fir se bhagney lagta hain............fir do kadam jate hi uske theek samney fir se wahin laash aakar khadi ho jati hain..............

" tumhein....to .....maal.....chahiye .......tha.......naa.........le....lo....apna .......sara...maal.........." aur wo laash apne dono haathon ko apne siley hue pet par le jata hain aur moin ke aakhon ke samney apne dono haathon se apna pet cheerney lagta hain.......................agle hi pal jo pet par tanka laga hua tha wo tanka tootata chala jata hain aur usmein rakha sara druga aur heroine sab kuch ek hi pal mein bahar nikalney lagta hain.........usmein se kuch drugs jameen par gir padta hain to kuch pet mein hi reh jata hain.................ye nazara dekhkar moin wahin zoron se chilla padta hain............wahin us vatavaran mein ek tezz hansey ki awaazein us laash ki fir se goonjh padti hain........

" tujhe.....chahiye .......na....ye ......le......aur.....le......" aur wo laash fir se moin ke samney aakar khada ho jata hain wahin moin haaftey hue buri tarah se thak chuka tha.....................aab uske ander aur bhagney ki taqat nahin bachi thi..............tabhi wo laash uskey kaskar apni bahon mein jakad leta hain aur apne pet mein rakha ek drugs ka pouch faadta hua seedha moin ke mooh mein dalney lagta hain..............wahin moin apna mooh poori tarah se band kar leta hain magar us laash ke samney uski kya bisat thi ki wo tik pata.............

jab wo laash uske jabdey ko kaskar jakadta hain to moin ke mooh khud ba khud khul jate hain aur wo laash pehle ek pouch fir dusara..........fir teesara..........isi tarah se sara drugs uske mooh mein dalta chala jata hain wahin moin ki dard se cheekh nikal jati hain..........aab hudd se zyada matra mein drugs lene par uska kya haal hoga ye to bus moin hi samajh sakta tha.............

thode der baad uske aankh................naak....................kaan............mooh..................sabhi jagah se khoon nikalney shuru ho gaye they wahin wo jameen par buri tarah se chatpata raha tha...................dheere dheere uska jism neela padta jaa raha tha.................wahin uski aankhin bahar ko nikal aayi thi..............shayad dard ki wajah se..............tabhi wo laash ek lakdi ka mota sa tukda apne haath mein leta hua seedha moin ke kareeb chala aaya.............us lakdi ka aagey ka hissa thoda nokila tha............jisey wo jameen par baar baar gada raha tha............

aab moin ko samajhtey der nahin lagi ki aab aagey uske saath kya hone wala hain.............magar uski aisi halat thi ki wo na theek se aab apne pairon par khada ho sakta tha...........aur na kahin bhaag sakta tha.............bus wo kisi keedey maukadey ki tarah bus jameen par reeng raha tha............agle hi pal wo laash us lakdi ka tukda lekar uske paas aaya............... aur udher moin is waqt pet ke bal aagey ki taraf jameen par sarak raha tha...........adhik matra mein drugs lene se aab uska jism kaam karna band kar diya tha...........

tabhi wo laash us lakdi ke tukdey ko apne haathon mein upar ki ore uthatha hain aur uski nok ko poori taqat se jameen mein dhasa deta hain jissey wo lakdi ka tukada moin ke peeth ko cheerta hua uske jism se aar paar ho jata hain aur us soonsan raat mein moin ki ek aakhri dard bhari aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.............ki awaaz nikal padti hain..........jo uske baad humesha humesha ke liye shant ho chuki thi..................uske mooh se dher sara khoon nikala aur uske sath hi uska dum bhi nikal chuka tha............aab sab kuch ek hi pal mein shant ho chuka tha..............

bach gaya tha to aab jawed..............jo aab wo bhi apni jaan bachakar wahan se bhaag raha tha.............magar shayad aaj uski bhi jaan nahin bachney wali thi..........itna bada jungle tha upar se kali ghani raat..............wo akele jata bhi to kahan..............wo paglon ki tarah idher udher bhag raha tha............

" baachawo.........................koi mujhe bachawo..............koi hain.................meri madad karo............" aur jawed bhagta hua buri tarah se thak kar road ke beechon beech haanfney lagta hain..................aab usey bhi bhaga nahin jaa raha tha...................wo kuch door bhagta hua thak kar road par apne ghutnon ke bal lumbi lumbi si saans lene lagta hain.........tabhi uske kanon mein fir se kisi ki awaaz sunayi deti hain...............

" jawed.......................tum kaha ho.............dekho main tumhein dhoodh raha hoon..............mujhse tum chupo nahin..............main tumhein marunga thodi na...........bus tumhein main apne saath le jawunga...............fir hum dono saath saath rahengey.................." aur wo laash jawed ko idher udher dhoodhney lagta hain.............tabhi usey samney se ek aur laash aati hui nazar aati hain.............jo kuch der pehle moin ki jisney jaan li thi.............jawed jaldi se bhagta hua ek ped ke peechay chup jata hain aur apne mooh par dono haath rakhta hua apne bekabu ho rahe sanson ko pal pal sambhalney lagta hain............

tabhi wo dono laashein apne haathon mein lakdi ka tukda liye jawed ko khojney lagte hain.................wahin jawed ki puri tarah fatt gayi thi...........wo us pal ko koosh raha tha jab wo is raaste par aaya tha................magar uske dimag mein ye bhi sawal chal rahe they ki aakhir sakshi murkar bhi kaise wapas aa gayi............kya aisa mumkin hain............iska matalb aab wo kisi ko zinda nahin chodegi...........jawed isi uljhan mein tha aur is kadakey ke thand mein bhi uske chehrey par pasiney ki chand boondein nazar aane lagi thi..............shayad apni maut ke khauff ki wajah se..............

tabhi ek laash uske peechay gayi aur usey dekhkar muskuraney lagi................issey pehle jawed usey dekhta ya kuch sochta uske haathon mein thama wo lakdi ka dhardhaar tukda agle hi pal jawed ke thighs ko cheerta hua uske jism se aar paar ho jata hain wahin jawed ki aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh dard bhari cheekh nikal jati hain.............wahin jawed ladkhada hua apne pair pakadkar jameen par gir padta hain............uske pairon se dher sara khoon bahar ki taraf gir raha thaa jisey samney khada wo laash dekhta hua zoron se hans raha tha............

uske thahakon ki goonj aisi thi ki us soonsaan jungle ko poori tarah se tharaa dene ke liye kafi thi.............jawed dard se tadapta hua.......apne ek pairon se rengta hua jameen par idher udher sarakney lagta hain...............tabhi uski hansi ki awaaz sunkar dusara laash bhi wahan chala aata hain...............jiska pet pehle se hi fata hua tha........uske haath mein bhi ek lakdi ka tukda tha .............jo wo agle hi pal jawed ke dusare tangon par zoron se gada deta hain jissey wo lakdi ka tukada jawed ke dusare janghon ko cheerta hua uske jism se aar paar ho jata hain.........


ek baar fir se jawed ki dard bhaari.............ssssssssssssmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh......... cheekh un waadiyon mein goonj padti hain...............dard se uski aankhon se aansoon nikal pade they...............jo kuch der pehle wo idher se udher jameen par reng raha tha aab wo bhi nahin reng paa raha tha.........kyon ki lakdi ka dusara tukdaa uske janghon ko cheerta hua kuch hissa jameen mein dhans chuka tha.............

pehla laash uske kareeb aata hain aur uske janghon se beh rahe khoon ko apne haathon mein choota hain fir wo usey jeebh se chatney lagta hain...........usey dekhkar dusara laash bhi jawed ke saath wahi karta hain...........

" mujhe jane do..............mujhe mutt maro..............maine tumhara kya bigada hain............." aur jawed un do murdon ke samney faryaad karney lagta hain wahin wo do laash ek dusare ko dekhkar hansey lagte hin...............

" marega ............tu.....bhi............aur wo...........sab...........bhi.......jo meri...........maut........ke ..........jimmedar..............hain...........tujhe.........zehar .......bechney ka.........bahut...........shauk......hain.........na.....le........khaa............na.......ye.....zehar.........." aur wo laash druga ke teen chaar poches jawed ke mooh mein dalney lagte hain wahin jawed ki cheekh nikal jati hain.............teen chaar pocuhes khane ke baad dono laash apni jagah se khade hote hain aur fir lakdi ka ek ek tukda fir se apne haathon mein lete hain aur is baar jawed ke seenay ke dono bagal ek hi baar mein us tukdey ko seedha aar par kar dete hain.........wahin jawed khoon ki ultiyaan karta hua dum tod deta hain...............

fir sab kuch jaise ek pal mein shant ho jati hain.................thode der baad wo dono laash bhi wahin jameen par gir jate hain...............aab unke jism mein kahin koi hulchal nahin thi.................aab sab kuch pal bhar mein shant ho gaya tha............................

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to akhir kar dono lasho ne milke jawed aur moin jaise jahar jaise nashile padath bechne walo ka kissa khatam khatam kar hi diya wo bhi khaufnaak tarike se....
ye dono khud ko lasho ka shaudagar kahte the aaj khud Kate fate lashe banke us jungle mein pade the....
Kuch raaz ki baatein samne bhi aayi.... Sakshi ki maut ke piche moin aur jawed ke sath sath mohan lal jaise kayi aur log ka bhi hath hai.... shayad inlogo ne bahot bura kiya ho past mein sakshi ke sath..
ab baari hai sakshi ki... isliye wo laut aayi hai pratisodh lene ke liye... aur ye pratisodh ki aag shayad un sabhi logo khak mein tabdil kar degi, jo log sakshi ki maut ka kaaran bana...
Bte jawed aur moin ko tadpa tadpa ke bahot hi dardnaak maut di hai sakshi ne.. waise wo the bhi ushi kabil..

Tezpur sehar mein................sehar se kuch door........bheed bhaad se alag..................ek shant colony mein.....................ek 26 no ka bada sa bunglow tha..................filhaal aabhi wahan zyada makanein nahin bani thi..............magar dekhney se wo area kafi sunder aur bada hi khoobsurat lagta tha..............

raat ke kareeb 2 baj rahe they.................raat humesha ki tarah gehri aur poori tarah se khamosh thi..............usi bunglow mein ek ladki koi 20 saal ki............apne kamrey mein kambal odhey soyi hui thi................kamrey mein ek zero waat ka hulka bulb bhi jal raha tha................ye area pahaon se ghira hone se jab yahan tezz hawa chalti to ajeeb si awazein nikalti...............jo us mahool ko aur bhi bhayanak bana deti...............

wo ladki sapney mein apna sir idher udher karti hui .......neend mein jaise badbada rahi thi.................halanki itne thand mein bhi uska jism pasiney se bheeg gaya tha................shayad durr ki wajah se...............tabhi thode der baad wo fauran zoron se cheekhti hui apne bister par uthkar baith gayi aur zoron se haanfey lagi...........

uski dhadkaein bahut tezz thi...............aur chehrey par durr ki lakheerein bhi saaf nazar aa rahi thi...........uske tezz cheekhney ki awaaz sunkar bagal mein soo rahi uski maa tezi se daudti hui ander aayi aur aakar apni beti ko fauran apne seenay se laga liya............wahin wo ladki apni maa ko kuch pal tak yu hi dekhti rahi fir achanak se uski aankhon mein aansoon ki moti dhara foot padi..............jisey wo apne aankhon mein sama na saki...........

" kya hua meri baachi............tu theek to hain na....................." aur uski vyakul maa ghabrati hui fauran us kamrey ki lights on ki aur apne baachi ko apne seenay se lagaye uske balon ko bade hi pyaar se sehlaney lagi..........dularney lagi..............wahin wo ladki gumsum si apni maa ki aagosh mein..........chup chaap si leti hui.............bilkul dari hui.......sehmi si.................lipat kar lumbi lumbi saansein le rahi thi...........

" beta avni......................tujhe hua kya.............kya tujhe fir se wahin sapna aaya................." aur uski maa ne bade pyaar se apni beti ke sir par apne hathon se dulartey hue ussey poocha ....................wahin uski masoom si beti bina kuch kahe ek baar fir apne maa ke seenay se lag gayi aur fir foot foot kar dubara se roo padi..................wahin uski maa usey aise hi apne seenay se lagaye rahi.................shayad..........wo apni beti ko auron se kahin zyada strong banana chahti thi..........magar niyati ko shayad kuch aur hi manzoor tha....................

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26 no bunglow?
Ho Na Ho is 26 no ke bunglow ka nata us us 26 no raste se hai aur avni ka nata us sakshi se.... lekin kya connection hai ye to aane waqt hi batayega...
avni jis tarah se darawane sapne dekh dar rahi thi kuch to mystery hai jo abhi samne nahi aaya hai...
Ab niyati kya ye to aane wale waqt par hi pata chale..
Khair.. Kaafi dilchasp aur majedaar update tha
Let's see what happens next..
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

 

[Punnu]

Amazing update brother......moin or Javed jante the us rooh ko ....or is rooh ka naam pta chl gya swati....lgta hai bahut logo ne milkar maara hai isse....mohanlal ke saath milkar....and moin or Javed bahut dardnak maut di hai usne ....jo wo kaam dusro ke liye krte the ...ussi tarah se mare hai....drugs khilakar maara....sabse jyada mast part vo lga ...jab lashon ne apna stomach faadkar ...in dono ko drugs khilaya...and I think 26 no. Wali Avni ka swati se koi gehra connection hai .....I think koi khoon ka rishta hoga...shayad behan ka....kher ye to meri prediction hai.....dekhte hai aage kya dhamaka hota hai ......

 

[Mahi Maurya]

सातवाँ भाग (अ)​

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बहुत ही बेहतरीन महोदय,​

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खट खट की आवाज़ वैन से आई तो जावेद ने वैन का दरवाजा खोला, कुछ न मिलने पर दोनों चकित रह गए। तभी एक बिल्ली ने मोइन को पंजा मारकर गायब हो गई, आश्चर्य की बात ये कि बिल्ली की आंख सामान्य से ज्यादा डरावनी थी।।​

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जावेद उसका मजाक उड़ाता है। लेकिन मोइन का डर जायज है। क्योंकि उस्की समझ में नहीं आता कि दरवाज़ा खटखटाया किसने। ऊपर से बिल्ली की आंख खून जैसी लाल थी। जावेद जब मूतने गया तो दोनों लाशें ये उसी लड़की का काम है जिसका नाम साक्षी है। जिसे जावेद अच्छी तरह पहचानता है। लगता है जावेदर मोइन का साक्षी के साथ कोई गहरा ताल्लुक है। कहीं उन दोनों ने साक्षी को मार तो नहीं डाला था या फिर इन लाशों की तरह साक्षी की लाश को इन दोनो ने ऐसे ही इस्तेमाल किया था।​

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दोनों लाशों के साथ कमाल हो गया। दोनों उठकर चलने भी लगी और बोलने भी लगी। दोनों की हवा खराब हो गई। जो होना स्वाभाविक है। क्योंकि कोई लाश जिंदा होकर बात करने लगे तो इंसान की फटनी लाजिमी है।। दोनों अपनी जान बचाकर भाग लेते हैं। लेकिन कब तक, ये देखना स्वाभाविक है।।​

 

[Mahi Maurya]

सातवाँ भाग (ब)​

बहुत ही लाजवाब और जबरदस्त​

इसी को कहते हैं कि जो दूसरे के लिए गड्ढा खोदता है वो खुद उस गड्ढे में गिरता है। दूसरों को मौत बेचने वाले को खुद उसी जहर से मौत हुई। मोइन और जावेद की मौत ड्रग्स के ज्यादा सेवन से हुई है। ऐसा पुलिस को लगेगा। जबकि हकीकत ये है कि दोनों लाशों ने मिलकर मोइन और जावेद को पहले ड्रग्स जबरन खिलाया और फिर लकड़ी घोपकर दोनो की हत्या कर दी। ​

यकीनन दृश्य बहुत भयावह था। दो लाशों ने मिलकर दो इंसानों का खून कर दिया इस बात पर कोई भरोसा नहीं करेगा। लेकिन बुरे काम का नतीजा हमेशा बुरा ही होता है। हाँ उसका नतीजा निकलने में थोड़ा देर जरूर लगती है, लेकिन नतीजा जरूर निकलता है जिस तरह से साक्षी ने कहा कि वो एक एक को चुनचुन का मारेगी। उससे तो लगता है कि उसको साथ बहुत ज्यादा बुरा हुआ था। अब सवाल ये है कि साक्षी है कौन।।​

तेजपुर में बंगला नम्बर 26 है, शायद ये वही बंगला है जिसका सुबूत उस साये ने पुलिस को दिया था। अवनी ने कोई बुरा स्वप्न देखा। जिससे लगता है कि उसका इन घटनाओं से या ऐसी किसी भयानक घटना से कोई न कोई संबंध जरूर है, लेकिन उसकी उम्र 22 साल है। तो ये सब कैसे सम्भव है। यही सारे सवाल है जिनका जवाब भविष्य के गर्भ में है।।​

 

[Jaguaar]

Update- 07 (A) (Megha Update)

" to kya kare aab.............ek kaam karte hain..........chalkar dekhtey hain ki ander koi hain kya....................!!!!!!!!!!!" aur moin pareshan sa hota hua apni van se dubara se neechay utarta hain aur saath hi saath jawed bhi utar jata hain........fir wo dono peechay van ke taraf chal padte hain..........jab jawed us van ke darwaze ke paas pahunchta hain wo ek chabi se uski lock ko kholta hua us darwaze ko ek hi jhatkey mein poora khol deta hain aur ander jab un dono ki nazrein padti hain dono ek dusare ka mooh dekhney lag jate hain....................dekhna tha aagey un sab ki zindagi mein kaun sa mod aane wala tha..........

Ab Aage.................................................................

Samney us van ka darwaza khula pada tha...............aur us van ke ander wahi do laashein waisi hi rakhi hui thi............ jaise pehle thi................jawed torch jalata hua idher udher dekhney lagta hain magar usey ander kuch nazar nahin aata..........jaise hi wo torch neechay farsh ki taraf jalata hain ander se ek billi tezi se nikalti hui seedha moin ke upar jhapat padti hain................aur moin ke mooh se ek durr bhari cheekh nikal jati hain.............

moin issey pehle sambhalta wo billi uske nazreion se ojhal ho chuki thi..................wahin jawed moin ko aise dara hua dekhkar uspar zoron se hans padta hain.........

"hahahahahah.................durr gaya fattu................ek billi ko dekhkar................mard banta hain isi pe...........thoo hain tujhpar..............." aur jawed moin ko dhikkarta hua fir uspar hansey lagta hain wahin moin ki bolti band ho jati hain...........sach to ye tha ki is waqt wo kafi dara aur ghabraya hua sa tha............usney bahut kareeb se us billi ki aankh dekhi thi...........jo aam billiyon ke mukabley thodi alag thi...........us billi ki aankhein poori tarah se laal thi............jaise us billi ki aankhon mein khoon utar aaya ho............magar ye nazara jawed nahin dekh paya tha...........

" aaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh.....................kitna dard ho raha............" aur moin apne hathon ki taraf dekhta hua dard se karaah uthatha hain..............billi ke is tarah achanak jhapatney se uske ek haath par uske panjey aur nakhoonon ke nishaan gad gaye they jiske wajah se uske haath par teen bade bade lakreein ban gayi thi.............jipar se aab khoon nikal raha tha.............

" chal kal ke akhbaar mein nikalwa deta hoon ki mere dost par raat mein.......... ek sunsaan si jagah par...........ek billi ne achanak se humlaa kar diya...........aur usey mere dost ko ghayal kar diya................maza aayega..................ye khabar padhkar logon ko............" aur jawed maze leta hua fir se zoron se hansey lagta hain wahin moin gussey se ander hi ander jawed ko gaaliyaan deta hain magar samney uske kuch kehta aur nahin...........

magar moin ko ye baat samajh mein nahin aa rahi thi ki us cabin mein aakhir billi aayi kahan se...............aur agar aayi bhi to wo insanon jaise darwaze par kaise dastak dene lagi................ye uski samajh mein aabhi bhi nahin aa raha tha..........wo is waqt kafi uljhan mein nazar aa raha tha...........

" tu yahin par ruk.............main aabhi hulka hokar aata hoon................" aur jawed itna kehkar fauran samney ki jhaddiyon ke taraf mootney chal padta hain wahin moin sadak par baitha hua............. apne haathon ko un jakhmon par apne mooh se dekhta hua phoonk raha tha................is tarah phoonkney se usey thodi jalan se rahat mil rahi thi..........

"kkkkkkkkaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr........" ki ek tezz awaaz ke saath achanak fir se jaise sab kuch shant ho jata hain wahin moin apne charon taraf idher udher dekhney lagta hain....................jab wo peechay ki taraf mudata hain to usey us van ke darwaze par ttttthhhhhaaaaaaaakkkkkkkkkkkk......................ttttthhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaakkkkkkkkk..........ki awaaz ke saath van ke darwaze khulte aur band hote se nazar aate hain..........magar kamal ki baat to ye thi ki is waqt hawa bilkul bhi nahin chal rahi thi upar se van ka darwaza mote lohe ka bana tha to wo kaise itni aasani se kabhi khul raha tha to...............kabhi band ho raha tha....................ye moin ke samajh mein nahin aa rahi thi..............

ho na ho jawed shayad us darwaze ko lock karna bhool gaya tha................aabhi bhi usmein chabi latak rahi thi.................moin apni jagah se uthatha hain aur fauran us van ke darwaze ke taraf chal padta hain...............jaise hi wo us darwaze par apna haath rakhta hain wo darwaza apni jagah par jaise ruk sa jata hain............aab na hi wo darwaza khul raha tha................ aur na hi band ho raha tha .................aur na hi wahan koi aur hulchal ho rahi thi...........

" kamal hain............bina hawa ke ye darwaza kaise apne aap ye band aur khul raha...........lagta hain aaj kuch zyada ho gayi.........." aur moin jaise hi us darwaze ko band karney jata hain aur jab uski nazar ander ke nazare par padti hain..........uske chehrey par barah baj jate hain.............uske chehrey ka rang achanak se feeka padh jata hain.............kyon ki aabhi thodi der pehle jin laashon ko wo dekh gaya tha aab us van mein ek bhi laashein usey kahin nazar nahin aa rahi thi..............to is tarah se achanak se kahan gayab ho gayi wo do laashein...........

drugs aur heroine ka khyaal aate hi moin ke to jaise haath pawn fool se jate hain..........uske haath pawn durr se sunn ho gaye they..............shareer mein aisa laga ki jaan hi nikal gayi ho..............laashein is tarah se gayab hone se kahin zyada usey un laashon ke ander bhare us maal ki thi jo bazar mein crores ke they.............agar uska maalik ko ye baat pata lagi to uski jaan gayi samjho...........

moin apne khyalon mein gum tha..................uska dhyaan is baat par nahin jaa raha tha ki is tarah se wo do laashein achanak se kahan gayab ho sakti hain.............tabhi uske kandhon par kisi ka haath usey mehsoos hua aur wo apne soch se bahar nikala....................aur jaise hi usney apni gurden peechay ki taraf ghumayi aur jab uski nazar samney ki taraf gayi uski rahi sahi himmat bhi jawab de gayi..............

un do laaashon mein se ek laash chalkar uske samney aa khadi hui thi...................jiski aankhein bilkul kali thi..........aur chehra bilkul bhayanak sa tha..............daanth thode bahar ki taraf nikle they aur mooh se laar tapak rahi thi..............

" tu.......mujhe ...khooj.....raha.....hain.....naaa.........dekh......main ....tere.....samney....aaa...gaya....mujhe......to....dekhkar.....tujhe.........khus ....hona .......chahiye.......tha.......naa........." aur wo laash achanak se bol pada................wahin moin ki to jaise hawa nikal padi...............uske mooh se jaise jubaan hi band ho gayi ho.............wo wahan se girte padte bhagney laga.................


idher jaise hi jawed hulka hua aur apne pent ki chain band karney laga tabhi uske kandhey par kisi ne apna haath rakha.............jaise hi wo peechay muda dusari laash theek uske peechay khadi thi...................usi rang roop mein.......usi andaaz mein............wahin jawd ki bhi futt ke haath mein aa gayi..........

"kkkaaaaauuuuuuuunnnnnnnnnn hoooo tummmmmmmmmmmmmm........" aur jawed durr se peechay ki tarah bhaga aur ladkhadatey hue achanak se gir pada............wahin wo laash uski baateion ko sunkar zoron se thahaka markar hansey laga..........

" tu.......mujhe......bhool....gaya........gaur....se ....dekh...........agar.........aab........bhi...... nahin.........pehchana.........to.......aab ........pehchaan........lega............."aur tabhi ek side mein ek hulki si roshani hui aur ek saaya jawed ko fir nazar aane laga................wo saaya aur koi nahin balki wahi ladki thi jo rooh bankar wahan us jagah par bhatak rahi thi.............

jaise hi jawed ki nazar us saaye par padi uske pawn tale jameen khisak gayi..............usey to ek pal yakeen nahin ho raha tha ki jo uski aankhein dekh rahi hain kya wo.......haqeeqat hain................ya fir koi sapna..............

" saaaaakksssshhhhi.....................tttttuuuummmmmmmmmmmm............" aur javed ki jubaan jaise ladkhada si gayi..........wahin wo saaya jaise gussey se dahek uthi..........

" sakshi nahin................apni maut bula mujhe.................chaal bhag.............jitna bhaag sakta hain tu yahan se..............aaj main bhi dekhti hoon ki tujhe kaun bachaha hain....................." aur jawed jaise taise girte padte wahan se bhagney lagta hain wahin wo do laashein dono ka peecha karney lagti hain............thode der baad wo saaya bhi gayab ho jati hain.................idher ek taraf moin apni jaan bachata hua bhaag raha tha.................wahin dusari taraf jawed............

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Toh ab Javed aur Moin ka aakhri waqt aagaya hai.
Aur uss rooh ka naam Sakshi hai. Jisse shayad Javed aur moin dono jaante hai.
Par kaisee kyaa inndono ne hi Sakshi ko maara hai apne dhandhe ke chakar mein. Aur kya isiliye woh bhatak rahi hai apni maut ka badla lene ke liye.

 

[Jaguaar]

Update- 07(B) (Megha Update)

thode door bhagtey bhagtey aakhir moin buri tarah se thak jata hain aur zoron se haanfney lagta hain................mote shareer hone ki wajah se aab usey theek se bhaga bhi nahin jaa raha tha..............tabhi uske kanon mein kisi ki awaaz sunayi deti hain...........

" thak .....gaye.... kya ......moin..... khan................bhago ......naa.....aur ......bhago.............jakar.... apni ....jaan.... bachawo.......................dekho .....wo .....jagah .....bilkul ....safe hain .....tumhare..... liye........un .....jhadiyon..... ke..... peechay............" aur uske peechay wahin laash zoron se hansta hua bol padta hain wahin moin ki fatkar haath mein aa jati hain............wo wahan se girta padta fir se bhagney lagta hain............fir do kadam jate hi uske theek samney fir se wahin laash aakar khadi ho jati hain..............

" tumhein....to .....maal.....chahiye .......tha.......naa.........le....lo....apna .......sara...maal.........." aur wo laash apne dono haathon ko apne siley hue pet par le jata hain aur moin ke aakhon ke samney apne dono haathon se apna pet cheerney lagta hain.......................agle hi pal jo pet par tanka laga hua tha wo tanka tootata chala jata hain aur usmein rakha sara druga aur heroine sab kuch ek hi pal mein bahar nikalney lagta hain.........usmein se kuch drugs jameen par gir padta hain to kuch pet mein hi reh jata hain.................ye nazara dekhkar moin wahin zoron se chilla padta hain............wahin us vatavaran mein ek tezz hansey ki awaazein us laash ki fir se goonjh padti hain........

" tujhe.....chahiye .......na....ye ......le......aur.....le......" aur wo laash fir se moin ke samney aakar khada ho jata hain wahin moin haaftey hue buri tarah se thak chuka tha.....................aab uske ander aur bhagney ki taqat nahin bachi thi..............tabhi wo laash uskey kaskar apni bahon mein jakad leta hain aur apne pet mein rakha ek drugs ka pouch faadta hua seedha moin ke mooh mein dalney lagta hain..............wahin moin apna mooh poori tarah se band kar leta hain magar us laash ke samney uski kya bisat thi ki wo tik pata.............

jab wo laash uske jabdey ko kaskar jakadta hain to moin ke mooh khud ba khud khul jate hain aur wo laash pehle ek pouch fir dusara..........fir teesara..........isi tarah se sara drugs uske mooh mein dalta chala jata hain wahin moin ki dard se cheekh nikal jati hain..........aab hudd se zyada matra mein drugs lene par uska kya haal hoga ye to bus moin hi samajh sakta tha.............

thode der baad uske aankh................naak....................kaan............mooh..................sabhi jagah se khoon nikalney shuru ho gaye they wahin wo jameen par buri tarah se chatpata raha tha...................dheere dheere uska jism neela padta jaa raha tha.................wahin uski aankhin bahar ko nikal aayi thi..............shayad dard ki wajah se..............tabhi wo laash ek lakdi ka mota sa tukda apne haath mein leta hua seedha moin ke kareeb chala aaya.............us lakdi ka aagey ka hissa thoda nokila tha............jisey wo jameen par baar baar gada raha tha............

aab moin ko samajhtey der nahin lagi ki aab aagey uske saath kya hone wala hain.............magar uski aisi halat thi ki wo na theek se aab apne pairon par khada ho sakta tha...........aur na kahin bhaag sakta tha.............bus wo kisi keedey maukadey ki tarah bus jameen par reeng raha tha............agle hi pal wo laash us lakdi ka tukda lekar uske paas aaya............... aur udher moin is waqt pet ke bal aagey ki taraf jameen par sarak raha tha...........adhik matra mein drugs lene se aab uska jism kaam karna band kar diya tha...........

tabhi wo laash us lakdi ke tukdey ko apne haathon mein upar ki ore uthatha hain aur uski nok ko poori taqat se jameen mein dhasa deta hain jissey wo lakdi ka tukada moin ke peeth ko cheerta hua uske jism se aar paar ho jata hain aur us soonsan raat mein moin ki ek aakhri dard bhari aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.............ki awaaz nikal padti hain..........jo uske baad humesha humesha ke liye shant ho chuki thi..................uske mooh se dher sara khoon nikala aur uske sath hi uska dum bhi nikal chuka tha............aab sab kuch ek hi pal mein shant ho chuka tha..............

bach gaya tha to aab jawed..............jo aab wo bhi apni jaan bachakar wahan se bhaag raha tha.............magar shayad aaj uski bhi jaan nahin bachney wali thi..........itna bada jungle tha upar se kali ghani raat..............wo akele jata bhi to kahan..............wo paglon ki tarah idher udher bhag raha tha............

" baachawo.........................koi mujhe bachawo..............koi hain.................meri madad karo............" aur jawed bhagta hua buri tarah se thak kar road ke beechon beech haanfney lagta hain..................aab usey bhi bhaga nahin jaa raha tha...................wo kuch door bhagta hua thak kar road par apne ghutnon ke bal lumbi lumbi si saans lene lagta hain.........tabhi uske kanon mein fir se kisi ki awaaz sunayi deti hain...............

" jawed.......................tum kaha ho.............dekho main tumhein dhoodh raha hoon..............mujhse tum chupo nahin..............main tumhein marunga thodi na...........bus tumhein main apne saath le jawunga...............fir hum dono saath saath rahengey.................." aur wo laash jawed ko idher udher dhoodhney lagta hain.............tabhi usey samney se ek aur laash aati hui nazar aati hain.............jo kuch der pehle moin ki jisney jaan li thi.............jawed jaldi se bhagta hua ek ped ke peechay chup jata hain aur apne mooh par dono haath rakhta hua apne bekabu ho rahe sanson ko pal pal sambhalney lagta hain............

tabhi wo dono laashein apne haathon mein lakdi ka tukda liye jawed ko khojney lagte hain.................wahin jawed ki puri tarah fatt gayi thi...........wo us pal ko koosh raha tha jab wo is raaste par aaya tha................magar uske dimag mein ye bhi sawal chal rahe they ki aakhir sakshi murkar bhi kaise wapas aa gayi............kya aisa mumkin hain............iska matalb aab wo kisi ko zinda nahin chodegi...........jawed isi uljhan mein tha aur is kadakey ke thand mein bhi uske chehrey par pasiney ki chand boondein nazar aane lagi thi..............shayad apni maut ke khauff ki wajah se..............

tabhi ek laash uske peechay gayi aur usey dekhkar muskuraney lagi................issey pehle jawed usey dekhta ya kuch sochta uske haathon mein thama wo lakdi ka dhardhaar tukda agle hi pal jawed ke thighs ko cheerta hua uske jism se aar paar ho jata hain wahin jawed ki aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh dard bhari cheekh nikal jati hain.............wahin jawed ladkhada hua apne pair pakadkar jameen par gir padta hain............uske pairon se dher sara khoon bahar ki taraf gir raha thaa jisey samney khada wo laash dekhta hua zoron se hans raha tha............

uske thahakon ki goonj aisi thi ki us soonsaan jungle ko poori tarah se tharaa dene ke liye kafi thi.............jawed dard se tadapta hua.......apne ek pairon se rengta hua jameen par idher udher sarakney lagta hain...............tabhi uski hansi ki awaaz sunkar dusara laash bhi wahan chala aata hain...............jiska pet pehle se hi fata hua tha........uske haath mein bhi ek lakdi ka tukda tha .............jo wo agle hi pal jawed ke dusare tangon par zoron se gada deta hain jissey wo lakdi ka tukada jawed ke dusare janghon ko cheerta hua uske jism se aar paar ho jata hain.........


ek baar fir se jawed ki dard bhaari.............ssssssssssssmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh......... cheekh un waadiyon mein goonj padti hain...............dard se uski aankhon se aansoon nikal pade they...............jo kuch der pehle wo idher se udher jameen par reng raha tha aab wo bhi nahin reng paa raha tha.........kyon ki lakdi ka dusara tukdaa uske janghon ko cheerta hua kuch hissa jameen mein dhans chuka tha.............

pehla laash uske kareeb aata hain aur uske janghon se beh rahe khoon ko apne haathon mein choota hain fir wo usey jeebh se chatney lagta hain...........usey dekhkar dusara laash bhi jawed ke saath wahi karta hain...........

" mujhe jane do..............mujhe mutt maro..............maine tumhara kya bigada hain............." aur jawed un do murdon ke samney faryaad karney lagta hain wahin wo do laash ek dusare ko dekhkar hansey lagte hin...............

" marega ............tu.....bhi............aur wo...........sab...........bhi.......jo meri...........maut........ke ..........jimmedar..............hain...........tujhe.........zehar .......bechney ka.........bahut...........shauk......hain.........na.....le........khaa............na.......ye.....zehar.........." aur wo laash druga ke teen chaar poches jawed ke mooh mein dalney lagte hain wahin jawed ki cheekh nikal jati hain.............teen chaar pocuhes khane ke baad dono laash apni jagah se khade hote hain aur fir lakdi ka ek ek tukda fir se apne haathon mein lete hain aur is baar jawed ke seenay ke dono bagal ek hi baar mein us tukdey ko seedha aar par kar dete hain.........wahin jawed khoon ki ultiyaan karta hua dum tod deta hain...............

fir sab kuch jaise ek pal mein shant ho jati hain.................thode der baad wo dono laash bhi wahin jameen par gir jate hain...............aab unke jism mein kahin koi hulchal nahin thi.................aab sab kuch pal bhar mein shant ho gaya tha............................

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Tezpur sehar mein................sehar se kuch door........bheed bhaad se alag..................ek shant colony mein.....................ek 26 no ka bada sa bunglow tha..................filhaal aabhi wahan zyada makanein nahin bani thi..............magar dekhney se wo area kafi sunder aur bada hi khoobsurat lagta tha..............

raat ke kareeb 2 baj rahe they.................raat humesha ki tarah gehri aur poori tarah se khamosh thi..............usi bunglow mein ek ladki koi 20 saal ki............apne kamrey mein kambal odhey soyi hui thi................kamrey mein ek zero waat ka hulka bulb bhi jal raha tha................ye area pahaon se ghira hone se jab yahan tezz hawa chalti to ajeeb si awazein nikalti...............jo us mahool ko aur bhi bhayanak bana deti...............

wo ladki sapney mein apna sir idher udher karti hui .......neend mein jaise badbada rahi thi.................halanki itne thand mein bhi uska jism pasiney se bheeg gaya tha................shayad durr ki wajah se...............tabhi thode der baad wo fauran zoron se cheekhti hui apne bister par uthkar baith gayi aur zoron se haanfey lagi...........

uski dhadkaein bahut tezz thi...............aur chehrey par durr ki lakheerein bhi saaf nazar aa rahi thi...........uske tezz cheekhney ki awaaz sunkar bagal mein soo rahi uski maa tezi se daudti hui ander aayi aur aakar apni beti ko fauran apne seenay se laga liya............wahin wo ladki apni maa ko kuch pal tak yu hi dekhti rahi fir achanak se uski aankhon mein aansoon ki moti dhara foot padi..............jisey wo apne aankhon mein sama na saki...........

" kya hua meri baachi............tu theek to hain na....................." aur uski vyakul maa ghabrati hui fauran us kamrey ki lights on ki aur apne baachi ko apne seenay se lagaye uske balon ko bade hi pyaar se sehlaney lagi..........dularney lagi..............wahin wo ladki gumsum si apni maa ki aagosh mein..........chup chaap si leti hui.............bilkul dari hui.......sehmi si.................lipat kar lumbi lumbi saansein le rahi thi...........

" beta avni......................tujhe hua kya.............kya tujhe fir se wahin sapna aaya................." aur uski maa ne bade pyaar se apni beti ke sir par apne hathon se dulartey hue ussey poocha ....................wahin uski masoom si beti bina kuch kahe ek baar fir apne maa ke seenay se lag gayi aur fir foot foot kar dubara se roo padi..................wahin uski maa usey aise hi apne seenay se lagaye rahi.................shayad..........wo apni beti ko auron se kahin zyada strong banana chahti thi..........magar niyati ko shayad kuch aur hi manzoor tha....................

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Toh finally Javed aur Moin ka anth hua. Kya police inn laasho ko dekh kar Drugs ke pichhe jaa payegi.

Aur yaha bhi ek 26 number aaya. Par ek ghar ka.

Aur woh ladki Avni ne aisa kaun sa sapna dekha jisse woh iss tarah ghabra gayi aur rone lagi.

Uski maa ki baato se toh aisa laga jaise usko yeh sapne pehle se aate hai.

 

[Ajaykumar82]

bure log sochte hai ki wo jo bure kaam kar rahe hai, agar police ke hathe na chadhe to saza bhi nahi milegi....
Lekin wo kehte hai manushya ko apne apne karmo ka phal ishi jindagi mein bhugatna padta hai... achha karo to achha aur bura karo to bura....
Jindagi bhar jo paap aur bure kaam kiye un dono jawed aur moin ne, aaj unka bhi waqt aa gaya hai, aaj ye dono bhi apne bure karmo ka phal ye dono bhugatne wale hai..
Wo ruh jiska naam sakshi hai wo chahti to ek hi jhatke mein maar sakti thi par wo dara dara ke, tadpa tadpa ke maarna chaahti hai un dono ko.... I think sakshi ke sath kuch to kiya hoga jawed ne isliye wo aise bol rahi thi...
well jo bhi ho ye dono giyo.. lasho ka shaudagar aaj khud lash banne wale hai..
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills Ajay sahab

thanks naina ji ek baar fir se sunder review denen ke liye...................ye sahi hain ki bure karmon ka bura natiza hi milta hain..............aagey ismein bahut se raaz se parda uthega..................saath humesha ki tarah aagey bhi bane rahiyega..............

 

[Moon Light]

Update 7 (A)

Moin Aur Javed van se aati awaj ko dekhne ke liye jab utar kar dekhne jate hain to wnha sb kuch normal hi dikhta hai pr tbhi ek billi aakar moin par hmla krke gayab si ho jati hai.... rat ke samay me esa drishya kafi darawana lgta hai kewal dekhne me hi socho jiske sath esa hota ho us par kya beet rhi hogi... wahi ynha ho rha moin ke sath pr javed uska mjak udata hai aur halka hone ke liye ek or chla jata hai...
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ynha moin hath se niklte khoon ko smbhalne ke liye road kinare baithta h tbhi van ke darwaje apne ap khulte aur band hote hain.... ek bar fir moin ke andar dar ubhar jata hai pr himmt krke wo dekhne jata hai aur wo drishya dekh kar awak rh jata hai.... samne van me lash gayab thi... tbhi piche se kisi ke hath ke sparsh se mudta h wo aur samne lash ko dekh kar kanp jata hai
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dusri taraf jawed ke sth bhi esa hi kuch hota hai.. lash ko dekh kar wo bhi dar jata hai tbhi us lash ke sth prkash niklta h Aur samne... Shakshi naam ki ldki thi...
kmal ki bat ye thi jawed usko jantaa tha....

 

[Ajaykumar82]

to akhir kar dono lasho ne milke jawed aur moin jaise jahar jaise nashile padath bechne walo ka kissa khatam khatam kar hi diya wo bhi khaufnaak tarike se....
ye dono khud ko lasho ka shaudagar kahte the aaj khud Kate fate lashe banke us jungle mein pade the....
Kuch raaz ki baatein samne bhi aayi.... Sakshi ki maut ke piche moin aur jawed ke sath sath mohan lal jaise kayi aur log ka bhi hath hai.... shayad inlogo ne bahot bura kiya ho past mein sakshi ke sath..
ab baari hai sakshi ki... isliye wo laut aayi hai pratisodh lene ke liye... aur ye pratisodh ki aag shayad un sabhi logo khak mein tabdil kar degi, jo log sakshi ki maut ka kaaran bana...
Bte jawed aur moin ko tadpa tadpa ke bahot hi dardnaak maut di hai sakshi ne.. waise wo the bhi ushi kabil..

26 no bunglow?
Ho Na Ho is 26 no ke bunglow ka nata us us 26 no raste se hai aur avni ka nata us sakshi se.... lekin kya connection hai ye to aane waqt hi batayega...
avni jis tarah se darawane sapne dekh dar rahi thi kuch to mystery hai jo abhi samne nahi aaya hai...
Ab niyati kya ye to aane wale waqt par hi pata chale..
Khair.. Kaafi dilchasp aur majedaar update tha
Let's see what happens next..
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

ye to unke saath hona hi tha........................aur rahi baat 26 ki to wo bhi raaz se jald parda uthega...................avni kaun hain uska kya rishta hain sakski ke saath wo to aane wala waqt hi batega..............aabhi bahut se mod aane baki hain..................saath bane rahiyega..............

 

[Ajaykumar82]

Amazing update brother......moin or Javed jante the us rooh ko ....or is rooh ka naam pta chl gya swati....lgta hai bahut logo ne milkar maara hai isse....mohanlal ke saath milkar....and moin or Javed bahut dardnak maut di hai usne ....jo wo kaam dusro ke liye krte the ...ussi tarah se mare hai....drugs khilakar maara....sabse jyada mast part vo lga ...jab lashon ne apna stomach faadkar ...in dono ko drugs khilaya...and I think 26 no. Wali Avni ka swati se koi gehra connection hai .....I think koi khoon ka rishta hoga...shayad behan ka....kher ye to meri prediction hai.....dekhte hai aage kya dhamaka hota hai ......

thanks laot yaara for reading this stoery....................sare raaz se parda uthega magar dheere dheere..............26 ka jo bhi locha ho wo sab ke samney aayega hi..........bus aise hi apne ideas dete rhiyega taki mujhe bhi likhney ki himmmat milti rahe..................keep reading yaara...........