Thriller Main Wapas Aawungi..............(A Suspense Thiller Story)

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Ab kya woh rooh inki laasho ke saath kuch karegi. Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai Moin aur Jawed ki laasho ke saath

wo to waqt hi bateyga yaara..............dekhtey hain aagey kyaa hota hain unke saath...........

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Vinod ne bahot achha socha hai Mohanlal aur uske gairr kanooni dhandhe ko khatam karne ke liye. Dekhte hai yeh kitna successfully execute hota hai.

thanks yaara..................viond kitna safal hota hain ye to aagey pata chal hi jayega..........keep reading.......agla update bahut jald..........

 

[Ajaykumar82]

नौवाँ भाग (अ)​

बहुत ही जबरदस्त और शानदार।।​

लाख पूछने पर भी रामसिंह ने मोहनलाल के नाम के अलावा अपना मुँह नहीं खोला। रामसिंह को डर था कि उसके मुंह खोलने पर उसका या उसके परिवार को नुकसान पहुंचा सकता है।। ये बात सही भी है। जो भी गलत कामों में लगे होते हैं वो अपने गुर्गों के दम पर उछलते हैं और उनका परिवार हमेशा बॉस के निशाने पर रहता है। अगर पुलिस ने पकड़ भी लिया तो भी परिवार की जान की सलामती के लिए मुंह नहीं खोलते गुर्गे।।​

विनोद के सामने रामसिंह ने हाथ जोड़ लिए। तो विनोद ने रामसिंह को जाने दिया। विनोद के ऐसा करने से बहादुर नाराज़ हो गया। लेकिन विनोद ने बहुत दूर की सोचकर ये कदम उठाया था। विनोद को पता था कि रामसिंह आज नहीं तो कल मोहन लाल और उन डॉक्टरों से जरूर सम्पर्क करेगा तब उन्हें वो पकड़ सकता है। जब अपनी मंशा विनोद ने बहादुर को बताई तो बाहर भी विनोद के दिमाग की दाद दिए बिना नहीं रह सका। लेकिन कुछ तो ऐसा जरूर है जो विनोद को सोचने पर मजबूर कर रहा है।।​

so sorry for late reply dear........................kya karun samay nahin mil paa raha is wajah se bahut paresahan hoon................ram singh ka aagey kya hoga aur uska kya hona hain wo upar wala jane.................

vinod ne bhi jaise samjhdaari se kaam liya hain magar dekhtey hain uski ye samajhdaari kitna rang lati hain...................keep reading dear...............

 

[Ajaykumar82]

नौवाँ भाग (ब)​

बहुत ही जबरदस्त और लाजवाब।।​

विनोद 26 के आंकड़े को लेकर परेशान है। उसे लगता है कि वो जो भी रूह है उसे कुछ संकेत दे रही है इस नम्बर के जरिये,लेकिन वो संकेत क्या था ये समझ से परे था विनोद के। उम्र, दूरी, मकान नम्बर या फिर महज एक अंक। विनोद इसी में उलझ कर रह गया था। तभी डॉक्टर ब्रिज ने विनोद के अपनी लैब में बुलाया।​

डॉक्टर ब्रिज के मुताबिक मोइन और जावेद का कत्ल इन दो लाशों ने किया था,क्योंकि उनके शरीर पर घोपी गई लकड़ी के गुटके पर दोनों लाशों की उंगलियों के निशान थे। विनोद का चौकने स्वाभाविक था। क्योंकि बात चौकने वाली ही थी। अगर आप किसी से बोल दो की आपने लाश को चलते हुए देखा है तो कौन भरोसा करेगा। लोग पागल समझेंगे।। डॉक्टर भी रिपोर्ट बनाते बनाते पागल से हो गया। रात में एक नया धमाका हो गया कि मोइन और जावेद जो मर चुके थे और उनकी लाशें एक कमरे में बंद करके रखी गई थी वो दोनों उठकर बैठ गए।।​

कहानी बहुत ही रोमांचक और बेहतरीन होती जा रही है। साथ में दिममग का दही बनना भी शुरू हो गया है।। देखते हैं आगे क्या होने वाला है।​

thanks mahi ji itna sunder review ke liye..................dekhtey hain dr brij aagey kya karta hain aur uski reports kya batati hain..............aagey aur bhi bahut se dhamakey hone wala hain.............saath bane rahiyega....................humesha ki tarah...............

 

[Ajaykumar82]

Update 09 (A)

Vinod ne Ram singh se puchne ki koshish ki uske bare me aur kya janta h pr usne kuch bhi na janne ki bat khi... vinod bhi torture nhi krna chahta tha Ramsingh ko uski wajah bhi thi... isliye use chhod deta h...
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Bahadur ka yu ascharyachakit hona bhi thik hi hai... aakhir kaise kisi mujrim ko ese hi chhod sakte hain... parantu jab vinod iske peeche ki wajah btata hai tb Bahadur ke chehre pr chamak aa jati hai...​

thanks dear for great review............aabhi to kuch rahasya se parda utha hain aur kuch se uthna baki hain................dekhna ye hain ki aagey kuan is mein kitna safal ho pata hain ye to waqt hi batayega..................

 

[Ajaykumar82]

Update 09 (B)

Ramsingh ke jane ke bad Vinod morgue room ko seal krke ho rhi hatyao ke bare me sochne lgta hai ki tbhi uske phone ki ghanti bajti hai.... wo phone ko uthata h jo ki dr. ka tha wo use lab me aane ko kahta hai...
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lab jakar jo bat dr. btata hai usse vinod hi kya koi bhi aascharyachakit ho sakta hai... moin aur jawed ka katl unhi do dead bodies ne kiya.... aur iska prman tha lakdi... ( apne ladki likha hai me confuse ho gyi thi )
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lakdi pr unhi lasho ke hatho ke nishan the.. ye bat un sbhi ko pret atmao me vishwas krne ke liye majbur kr deti hain...
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Rat 12 bje lab me wahi 4 lashe rkhi hui thi... aur fir thodi der bad Moin air Jawed ki lashe uth kr baith jati hai...
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Brilliant Update
Ab jawed aur moin ko lekar mohanlal ke pas jayegi ye lash... aur fir usse maje lengi ​

thanks laot dear..................kahin kaghin ho sakta hain mistake ho gaya hoga..............dono word ek jaise hi lagte hain.........fir kabhi time mila to main usey edit kar loonga.............isi tarah meri kamiyon ko bhi batate rahiyega...................keep reading..................

 

[Ajaykumar82]

Vinod sach mein kaafi tez dimag wala hai aur sath hi kaafi tajurbekar, talented aur sahi samay par sahi vichar karne ki kshamta bhi rakhta hai... wo ye baat bhali bhaanti samajh gaya tha ki ram singh muh nahi kholne wala... apne boss logo ke bare aur kuch nahi batana wala... isliye ek alag chaal chhal diya usne... dusman ke is ram signh naam ke mohre ke jariye dusmanon tak pahunchne ka raasta dhund liya... isliye shudharne ke bahane ram singh yun hi chhod diya taaki jab ye jaake apne boss mohan lal ya usse jude ki vyakti ko contact kare.... aur Vinod iske jariye evidence mile mohan lal ke khilaf..
Kaafi door ki soch ke chaal chhali hai..

Khair update kaafi dilchasp tha aur sath hi kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi...
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

thank naina ji itna sunder review dene ke liye......................aap teen deviyon ki wajah se to mujhe likhney ki himmat milti hain................aise hi saath dete rahiyega...............

bviond apne maksad mein kitna safal ho payega ye to waqt hi batega..............aur agey kya mod aata hain wo bhi dekha jayega.............keep reading...........

 

[Ajaykumar82]

Shayad sakshi ki hatya mein 26 log ke hath the....
Well... kabhi kabhi kuch cheejen, kuch ghatanaye, kuch baatein viswash ke pare hote hai... koi log in baaton viswash bhi nahi karte... jaise paranormal activities... kuch log yakin karte hai to kayi log nahi...
Vinod bhi in sab activities pe naa viswash karne walo mein se ek hai.... isliye doctor dwara diye details ke baad bhi, ab bhi ushe lag raha hi ki kuch aur hi mystery hai in sab ke ke piche... upor se moin aur jawed ki postmortem report padh aur sun hairan padesaan ki wo aage badhe to kaise badhe..
Shayad ho na ho wo doctor bhi un baaton pe viswash karne pe majbur ho gaya ho jo medical science ke opposite hai...
Khair... Jo bhi ho lekin Vinod haar nahi maan'ne wala... koi na koi raah dhund hi lega wo...
Wohi dusri taraf shayad wo ruh us jungle se bahar aa gayi hai .. pehle un do laasho dwara jawed aur moin ko maut di... ab jawed aur moin ki laasho dwara next targe ka shikar karne wali hai Shayad... Lekin kisko maarne wali hai ye to aane wala waqt hi batayega...
Kahani mein kayi interesting twist aa rahe hai...
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

thanks once again.....................ye 26 pe zyada dimag mutt laagaiye...............ye bahut loccha hain.............dheere dheere main isey har updates ke saath clear karta jawunga...................dekhtey hain aaagey moin aur jawed kya karte hain..............aur iske baad aab kisk number aata hain................


agla update bus thode der mein.................

 

[Ajaykumar82]

Update-10 (A) (Megha Update)

tabhi us morgue room mein ek hulchal hui....................moin jo is waqt laash ki tarah pada hua tha achanak se uski ek ungli dheere se hilney lagi............tabhi thode der baad jawed ke jism mein bhi hulchal hone lagi........................aur uski bhi ungli ek ek kar hilney lagi................achnak ek tezz gurhaahat ke saath pehle moin apni jagah se uthkaar us bed par baith gaya...................aur fir thode der baad jawed bhi usi andaaz mein uthkar baith gaya..................aur dono ek dusare ki taraf dekhtey hue fir dheere se muskura pade.....................................

Ab Aage.....................................................................

Charon taraf sanaata pasra hua tha...................us raat ke andhere mein kahin koi hulchal nahin thi.............hulchal thi to bus us kamrey mein..................moin jaise hi apne jagah se utha............wo apne jism ko bade dhyaan se upar se lekar neechay tak dekhney laga.....................jahan jahan uske badan par jakhmon ne nishan they wahan wahan uske haath uske jism par fir rahe they....................zakhm ka wo hissa aab kala padh chuka tha.............aur khoon ke dhaabon ka rang bhi kala ho chuka tha...............

wo bade ajeeb si nazreion se apne jism ko dekhey jaa raha tha.................nihare jaa raha tha...............wahin is waqt uski aankhein badi badi poori tarah se laal nazar aa rahi thi....................mano uski aankhon mein jaise khoon utar aaya ho...................uski palkein upar ki taraf sarak gayi thi jissey uski palkein aab band nahin ho rahi thi...........aur uski aankhein poori khuli hui si nazar aa rahi thi jo apne aap mein bhayanak thi................

kuch waisa hi haal udher jawed ka bhi tha...............wo bhi bade dhyaan se apne jism ke un jakhmon ko dekhey jaa raha tha...............un dono ke mooh se ek gadha gadha laar bhi nikal raha tha jo neechay un farshon par bhi dheere dheere tapak raha tha..............tabhi us kamrey mein ek saaya nazar aayi jo un dono ke theek samney khadi thi..........zameen se 3 feet upar ki taraf..................safed suit mein...................ye aur koi nahin balki sakshi hi thi................usi roop...........usi rang mein..................

" tumhein mera adhura kaam karna hain................jeetey jee to tum wo poora na kar sake magar tum marney ke baad us kaam ko zaroor poora karogey.................bahar ke kamrey ke locker mein tumhara mobile rakha hua hain..............jawo aur apna phone uthawo aur un kaminon ko phone karke unhein apne addey par bulawo............." aur fir sakshi itna kehti hui fir se gayab ho jati hain wahin jawed aur moni ek dusare ki taraf dekhtey hue zor zor se hasney lagte hain..............

jawed ladkhata hua dheere dheere tezz guraahat ke saath aagey badhta hua us kamrey se bahar jane lagta hain...........darwaza bahar se shayad lock tha.............jawed us darwaze ko ek do baar apne haathon se hilata hain magar jab darwaza nahin khulta tab wo us karwaze ko zoron se hilaney lagta hain..............ye dekhkar moin bhi peechay peechay chala aata hain aur wo bhi jawed ki ismein madad karta hain..............

aab darwaze ki kya bisat ki wo un do shakiyon ke aagey tik pati......................agle hi pal darwaze ke dono kundiyaan alag ho jati hain aur darwaza ka ek hissa alag hota hua jameen par ddddddddhhhhhhhhhhhaaaammmmmmmm ki awaaz karta hua gir padta hain................ye dekhkar moin aur jawed ke mooh se fir se thahakon ki awaaz goonj padti hain................saath hi unke mooh se gadha gadha laar aab bhi tapak raha tha................

jawed aur aagey ki taraf badhta hain aur fir samney ek choti si locker rakhi hui thi jispar ek chota sa tala latak raha tha..................wo us tale ko apne haathon mein leta hain aur us tale ko kaskar ek zoron ka jhatka deta hain ..................agle hi pal wo tala tootata hua uske haathon mein aa jata hain.............ye dekhkar moin fir se zoron se gurratey hue hasney lagta hain.................uske mooh se awaaz aise nikal rahi thi jo pal bhar mein kisi ki rooh ko bhi kanpa de...............

jawed us locker ko kholta hain aur fir apne haathon mein apne mobile ko uthatha hua bade dhyaan se us screen ki taraf dekhey lagta hain...............fir wo recent calls dekhta hain aur kuch numbers ko wo talaash karney lagta hain....................aur aakhir usey wo un do doctors ka number mil hi jata hain jisey dekhney ke baad uske chehrey par ek ajeeb si muskan tair jati hain...................wo fir us number par us doctor ko call karney lagta hain.............

thodi der baad udher wo doctor jawed ka phone number apne mobile ke screen par dekhta hain...................magar itna to tay tha ki us doctor ke chehrey par bhi hairani ke badal saaf nazar aa rahe they.................aur hote bhi kyon na..................jawed to murr chuka tha to wo fir kaise usey uske paas phone kar sakta tha.................aur kahin aisa bhi to ho sakta tha ki jawed ke mobile se kahin koi police uske paas phone kar rahi ho to...............uska khel khatam ho jayega......................ye khyaal aate hi wo us phone ko recieve nahin karta aur dekhtey hi dekhtey wo phone fir cutt jata hain.................

udher wo doctor aabhi bhi apna mobile apne haathon mein liye bade gaur se apne mobile ke screen ko ghoorey jaa raha tha................usney jawed aur moin ke bare mein jo khabrein suni thi wo yakeenan 100% sach thi.............aur jab wakai mein jawed aur moin murr hi chuke they to unke is phone ko aakhir kaun istemal kar raha tha...............us doctor ka andhesha baar baar police ke taraf hi jaa raha tha................aur usey kahin na kahin aisa lag raha tha jaise usey ismein aab koi fansa raha hain..............

wo doctor aabhi bhi is udherbun mein fansa hua tha...................uske chehrey par pasiney ki boondhein is kadakey ke thand mein nazar aa rahi thi...............tabhi fir se uske haathon mein rakha mobile baj utha...................ek nazar wo ghadi ke taraf dekhey laga to is waqt ghadi mein 12.15 baj rahe they.....................

" is waqt jawed ka phone kaise aa sakta hain................main to janta hoon ki wo dono kal raat hi mare jaa chuke hain........aur ye khabar 100 aane sach bhi hain............fir jawed kaise mere paas phone kar sakta hain...................main ek kaam karta hoon................uska phone recieve kar leta hoon aur main tab tak kuch nahin bolunga jab tak udher se koi awaaz na aaye.............aur jab ye confirm ho jayega ki phone karney wala mera hi aadmi hain to fir.............." aur ye khyaal aate hi wo doctor apna phone on kar leta hain aur us phone ko loudspeaker par laga deta hain...............

aur kuch der tak udher se aawaz aane ka intezar karta hain................do char seconds tak to udher se koi awaaz nahin aati magar thodi der baad jo aawaz usey sunayi deti hain usey sunkar uske hosh udd jate hain..............wo poorey yekaan se keh sakta tha ki ye jawed ki hi awaaz hain.............

" doctor saheb...................aap mera phone kyon nahin utha rahe..........aaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh................" aur udher se jawed ki dard bhari aawaz us doctor ko sunayi deti hain wahin doctor ke chehrey par aaye pasiney aur bhi gehrey ho jate hain...............wo bade dhyaan se jawed ki baatein sunaney lagta hain............

" jawed........................tum....................to to murr chuke ho................fir tum.................zinda kaise ho.................." aur is baar hairan hone ki bari us doctor ki thi...............aabhi bhi uske chehrey par barah baje hue they..................

" main zinda hi hoon doctor saheb....................yu samajh lo ki police ne game khela hain....................wo kya hain na us din humara sara maal pakda gaya tha jis wajah se police ki nazreion mein hum aa gaye................bus isi ki aad lekar wo aab humein pakdna chahtey haain............hum dono jaise taise wahan se bhaag gaye...............magar humein chotien bahut aayi hain.................aur police ne un do laashon ko humara naam batakar unhein apni giraft mein kar liya............aur ye afwaah faila diya ki hum dono mare jaa chuke hain...................taki wo humare boss tak aasani se pahunch jaye.............." aur jawed fir se karahta hua dheere se bol pada wahin uske mooh se ek ajeeb si guraahat bhi dheere dheere nikal rahi thi..................

" magar............police ko to 4 laashein milti thi...........do tum logon ki.....aur do jismein maal bheja gaya tha............to.................aab tum chahtey kya ho...................." aur doctor apne pasiney poochta hua fir dheere se bol padta hain.................wahin jawed uski baateion ko sunkar fir se muskura deta hain..............

" baatein chodho doctor...........kabhi milogey to sab kuch main tumhein samjha doonga................aur haan...........mujhe fir se do aur laaashein chahiye doctor saheb..................to main chahta hoon ki tum aabhi fauran apne addey par aawo aur us doctor ko bhi apne saath mein lete aawo.............is baar maal zyada milega..................party bahut mast aayi hui hain................." aur jawed dheere se bol padta hain wain doctor kuch der tak apne soch mein dooba rehta hain..............

" magar................agar kisi bhi party ko maal chahiye tha to boss ne aab tak mujhe inform kyon nahin kiya.................khair.................magar is baar mera share 50-50 ka rahega.................kyon ki ek to raat bahut ho chuki hain upar se aaj kadake ki sardi bhi hain...............agar manzoor ho to bolo.......nahin to kisi aur ko dhoondh lo....................main nahin aane wala itni thand mein....................." aur wo doctor apni baat jaise khatam karta hua bol padta hain wahin jawed uski baateion ko sunkar dheere se muskura deta hain...............

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[Ajaykumar82]

Update- 10(B) (Megha Update)

" theek hain doctor saheb..................hum aabhi usi jagah pahunch rahe hain.....................aap dono fauran aaiye..................." aur itna kehkar jawed phone rakh deta hain aur moin ki taraf dekhta hua fir se zoron se gurratey hue hans padta hain..............saath mein moin bhi zoron se gurratey hue hansey lagta hain.............

raat ke kareeb 1 baj rahe they....................wo dono doctor us kadakey ki thandi mein us jagah par apne timse se pahunch chuke they...................magar na hi unhein wahan koi ambulance (van) nazar aayi............aur na hi jawed aur moin khan......................wo dono ek dusare ki taraf idher udher dekhey jaa rahe they to kabhi samney ke us veeran se khandhar ke taraf.................tabhi us doctor ke mobile par fir se phone baja aur uske chehrey par muskaan fir se tair gayi...............phone jawed ka tha...........

" ander aawo doctor...................main ander hi hoon................." aur itna kehta hua jawed bina kisi jawab ka intezar karta hua fauran apna phone cutt kar deta hain wahin wo dono doctor ek dusare ka mooh dekhney lagte hain............fir kuch sochkar wo dono ander jane lagte hain..........magar saath mein aaya dusara doctor ke munn mein thodi ghabrahat aur jhijhak zaroor thi..............wo bar baar apne saathi ko mana kar raha tha.................magar paison ki lalach insaan ko aandha kar deti hain...........kuch aisa hi aaj us doctor ke saath bhi ho raha tha............

" mera baat maan................yaar mujhe kuch theek nahin lag raha...................wo dono sach mein mare jaa chuke hain..............its impossible................aur mare hue log zinda nahin hote..................zaroor kuch to gadbad hain................ye tera bhram hain aur kuch nahin.............." aur dusara doctor apne saathi ko sachet karta hua dheere se uska baah pakadkar rok leta hain wahin wo uski baateion ko ansuna karta hua aagey aagey us veeran se ghar ke ander jane lagta hain.............

magar jaise hi wo us darwaze ke paas pahunchta hain samney ka darwaza jo ki poori tarah se sata hua tha..................uspar lock nahin tha.................issey un doctors ko yakeen ho jata hain ki ander sach mein koi hain...........magar kaun....................ye kehna zara muskhil tha...............

jaise hi wo dono us kamrey ka darwaza kholte hain darwaza cchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrr ki awaaz ke saath dheere se khul jata hain..............aur kamrey mein ek ajeeb si smell unhein mehsoos hone lagti hain.................jaise koi ajeeb si badboo ki.................shayad sade hua maans jaisi................ya waisa hi kuch.................

" jawed......................dekho main aa gaya.........................tum kahan ho................." aur wo doctor thodi unchi awaaz mein bol padta hain magar uske sawalon ka jawab usey nahin milta....................haan upar ek seedhi thi jispar kisi ke chalney ki aahat ttttthhhhhhaaaakkkkkkkkkk tttthhhhaaaaaakkkkk,..... jaisi awaaz saaf sunayi de rahi thi........................kisi ke jooton ki awaaz..............ander ek choti si khidki bhi thi jiska darwaza kabhi khul raha tha....................to kabhi band ho raha tha....................us khidki ke bahar peechay ghana jungle tha..................magar poornima ki raat hone se bahar saaf saaf us chandrma ki roshani mein saaf saaf nazar bhi aa raha tha.............

bahar kuch dhuwaan aur dhundh jaisa uth raha tha jissey us khidki ke peechay dhoondhla sa dikhayi padh raha tha....................pehla doctor bade dhyaan se us khidki ke bahar ki taraf apni nazrein gadaye dekh raha tha..................wahin jawed ne jiske paas phone kiya tha wo doctor ander kamrey mein jane laga aur us kamrey ke ander aati hui us awaaz ka peecha karey laga...................jaise jaise uske kadam aagey ki taraf badh rahe they waise waise uske dil mein ghabrahat aur durr bhi badhta jaa raha tha...................magar na hi uske kadam ruke.....................aur na hi wo..............

kuch door jane par wo awaaz aani jaise band ho gayi......................wahin wo doctor idher udher apne charon taraf dekhney laga..................magar usey koi nazar nahin aaya..................fir usney apne mobile mein jawed ka number fir se call back kiya to uske chehrey par hairani ke badal chalak pade..............kyon ki wo number aab switch off aa raha tha..............

" kisey dhoodh rahe ho doctor...................mujhe naa.................main upar ke kamrey mein hoon................aa jawo................" aur fir se jaise awaaz aani band ho gayi aur uski jagah fir se ek gehri khamoshi ne gher liya..............wo doctor apne chehrey par aaye pasiney ko fir se poochta hua..................upar seedhiyon ki taraf dekhney laga magar usey upar koi nazar nahin aaya......................uske saath jo dusara doctor tha wo aab neechay khada khidki ki taraf dekhey jaa raha tha...............

kuch sochkar wo fauran upar ke taraf apne kadam badhaney laga.....................aur jaise jaise wo upar ki taraf jaa raha tha uske chehrey ka rang bhi feeka padta jaa raha tha.............

" dekho jawed..................ye mazak ka waqt nahin hain...................laash kahan hain................jaldi se tum laash le aawo aur mere hissey ka maal mujhe do.............." aur wo doctor thoda gussa mein badbada hua upar seedhiyon ki taraf chadhney laga...............jaise hi wo upar kamrey mein gaya samney ek lakdi ki kursi uske opposite side mein rakhi hui nazar aayi..............jispar koi baitha hua tha................us kursi ke upari hisson par kisi ladki ke baal sirf nazar aa rahe they.................aur kuch hissa uske naram mulayam haathon ke bhi....................jisey wo doctor lalchayi hui nazreion se dekh raha tha.................

"kaaaaauuunnnnnnnnnnnnnn ho tummmmmmmmmmmmm..................aur yahan kaise aayi............" aur wo doctor thoda sa haklata hua dheere se bol pada.............wahin wo saaya aabhi bhi us kursi par baith hui thi.............

udher wo dusara doctor ki nazrein bahar uth rahe us dhuyein par thi...................jisey wo aab bhi bade gaur se dekhey jaa raha tha...............dheere dheere wo dhuwaan ek aakriti ka roop le rahi thi...................jaise koi chehra bana rahi thi..................aur jaise jaise wo dhuwaan aur dhundh jab aur bhi gehra hota gaya...............usmein se jo aakrit bhi banti hui dheere dheere aur saaf nazar aane lagi......................aur kuch der baad jab us dhuwaan aur dhundh se milkar jab ek tasveer ubharkar us doctor ke samney aayi to us doctor ki jaise cheekh nikal padi.........................

ye aakriti sakshi ke chehrey ki hi thi.............jispar us doctor ki nazrein aab tak jami hui thi....................uske mooh se ek bhyanaak si cheekh nikal padi aur wo wahan se jaise hi bhagney ke liye peechay muda.....................samney usey moin khada hua laash ke roop mein nazar aaya....................jo usey dekhkar zoron se thahaka marta hua hans raha tha..................

" nahinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn aisa nahin ho sakta......................tummmmmmmm to murr chuki ho..................." aur wo doctor aagey kuch kehta moin ki laash ko aise apne samney aise khada hua dekhkar uske jaise hosh udd jate hain....................uske mooh se jaise bolti band ho chuki thi....................moin ke haathon mein ek lakdi ka tukda tha...............jiska ek sira bahut nokhila tha....................wo fauran us lakdi ke us tukdey se us doctor ke parion par humla kar deta hain.....................vaar itna sateek aur tagda tha ki wo lakdi ka tukda us doctor ke janghon ko cheerta hua uske aar paar ho gaya tha...................

wahin wo doctor dard se ladkhata hua............. cheekhta hua...........farsh par gir padta hain aur apne pair pakadta hua zoron se aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh...........chillaney lagta hain.....................moin ye dekhta hua dheere se hans padta hain......................uske chehrey par kate pite nishan they.................aankhein badi badi...................aur chehra kafi bhayanak sa nazar aa raha tha....................aabhi bhi uske jism ke kuch hisson par lakdi ke tukdey dhasney ke gehrey nishan they....................

moin uske paas jakar uske baju mein baith jata hain aur uske pairon se beh rahe taaze taaze khoon ko bade dhyaan se dekhney lagta hain...............aur jeebh nikalte hue us doctor ki taraf dheere dheere muskuraney lagta hain................wahin us doctor ki poori tarah se futt gayi thi.................usey kuch soojh nahin raha tha ki wo kya kare..............wo itna to samajh chuka tha ki uski maut aaj pukki hain...............

"nnnnnnnnnnnnnahhhhhhhhhhhh aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...........kaun ho tum....................mujhe jane do......................tum moin nahin ho sakte................" aur wo doctor cheekhta hua bol padta hain wahin jawab mein moin apna jeebh nikalta hua uske janghon par le jata hain aur uske janghon se beh rake khoon ko chatney lagta hain...............wahin wo doctor dard se cheekhey jaa raha tha....................

" tumne sahi kaha doctor................main moin nahin hoon................moin to kal raat mur chuka tha.............tujhe drugs ka bahut shauk hain naa......................aaj tujhe itna drugs main lakar doonga ki tu apni zindagi mein itne sare durgs kabhi dekhney bhi nahin hongey......................" aur moin itna kehta hua us lakdi ke tukdey ko fir se us doctor ke janghon se kheenchta hua bahar nikalta hain wahin wo doctor ki dubara se cheekh nikal jati hain....................

lakdi ka ek hissa us doctor ke khoon se poori tarah sana hua tha........................issey pehle wo kuch samajhta moin us lakdi ke tukdey ko kaskar jhatka deta hain aur is baar uske dusare jaanghon ko us lakdi se aar paar kar deta hain...............wahin us doctor ki dubara se fir cheekh nikal jati hain aur wo poori taqat se cheekh padta hain.....................aab wo uski mazboori thi ki wo wahan se bhaag bhi nahin sakta tha................wahin moin uske baju mein baitha hua usey dekhkar dheere dheere muskura raha tha....................

udher jaise hi wo dusara doctor us kursi ke kareeb jata hain aur jaise hi apna haath us ladki ke kandhon par rakhta hain tabhi wo saaya apni jagah se khadi hoti hain aur jab wo uske taraf ghoomati hain....................idher is doctor ke mooh se bhi ek zordaar cheekh nikal padti hain.................maut ka bhyanak manzar fir se shuru ho chuka tha...................................

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[Jaguaar]

Update-10 (A) (Megha Update)

tabhi us morgue room mein ek hulchal hui....................moin jo is waqt laash ki tarah pada hua tha achanak se uski ek ungli dheere se hilney lagi............tabhi thode der baad jawed ke jism mein bhi hulchal hone lagi........................aur uski bhi ungli ek ek kar hilney lagi................achnak ek tezz gurhaahat ke saath pehle moin apni jagah se uthkaar us bed par baith gaya...................aur fir thode der baad jawed bhi usi andaaz mein uthkar baith gaya..................aur dono ek dusare ki taraf dekhtey hue fir dheere se muskura pade.....................................

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Charon taraf sanaata pasra hua tha...................us raat ke andhere mein kahin koi hulchal nahin thi.............hulchal thi to bus us kamrey mein..................moin jaise hi apne jagah se utha............wo apne jism ko bade dhyaan se upar se lekar neechay tak dekhney laga.....................jahan jahan uske badan par jakhmon ne nishan they wahan wahan uske haath uske jism par fir rahe they....................zakhm ka wo hissa aab kala padh chuka tha.............aur khoon ke dhaabon ka rang bhi kala ho chuka tha...............

wo bade ajeeb si nazreion se apne jism ko dekhey jaa raha tha.................nihare jaa raha tha...............wahin is waqt uski aankhein badi badi poori tarah se laal nazar aa rahi thi....................mano uski aankhon mein jaise khoon utar aaya ho...................uski palkein upar ki taraf sarak gayi thi jissey uski palkein aab band nahin ho rahi thi...........aur uski aankhein poori khuli hui si nazar aa rahi thi jo apne aap mein bhayanak thi................

kuch waisa hi haal udher jawed ka bhi tha...............wo bhi bade dhyaan se apne jism ke un jakhmon ko dekhey jaa raha tha...............un dono ke mooh se ek gadha gadha laar bhi nikal raha tha jo neechay un farshon par bhi dheere dheere tapak raha tha..............tabhi us kamrey mein ek saaya nazar aayi jo un dono ke theek samney khadi thi..........zameen se 3 feet upar ki taraf..................safed suit mein...................ye aur koi nahin balki sakshi hi thi................usi roop...........usi rang mein..................

" tumhein mera adhura kaam karna hain................jeetey jee to tum wo poora na kar sake magar tum marney ke baad us kaam ko zaroor poora karogey.................bahar ke kamrey ke locker mein tumhara mobile rakha hua hain..............jawo aur apna phone uthawo aur un kaminon ko phone karke unhein apne addey par bulawo............." aur fir sakshi itna kehti hui fir se gayab ho jati hain wahin jawed aur moni ek dusare ki taraf dekhtey hue zor zor se hasney lagte hain..............

jawed ladkhata hua dheere dheere tezz guraahat ke saath aagey badhta hua us kamrey se bahar jane lagta hain...........darwaza bahar se shayad lock tha.............jawed us darwaze ko ek do baar apne haathon se hilata hain magar jab darwaza nahin khulta tab wo us karwaze ko zoron se hilaney lagta hain..............ye dekhkar moin bhi peechay peechay chala aata hain aur wo bhi jawed ki ismein madad karta hain..............

aab darwaze ki kya bisat ki wo un do shakiyon ke aagey tik pati......................agle hi pal darwaze ke dono kundiyaan alag ho jati hain aur darwaza ka ek hissa alag hota hua jameen par ddddddddhhhhhhhhhhhaaaammmmmmmm ki awaaz karta hua gir padta hain................ye dekhkar moin aur jawed ke mooh se fir se thahakon ki awaaz goonj padti hain................saath hi unke mooh se gadha gadha laar aab bhi tapak raha tha................

jawed aur aagey ki taraf badhta hain aur fir samney ek choti si locker rakhi hui thi jispar ek chota sa tala latak raha tha..................wo us tale ko apne haathon mein leta hain aur us tale ko kaskar ek zoron ka jhatka deta hain ..................agle hi pal wo tala tootata hua uske haathon mein aa jata hain.............ye dekhkar moin fir se zoron se gurratey hue hasney lagta hain.................uske mooh se awaaz aise nikal rahi thi jo pal bhar mein kisi ki rooh ko bhi kanpa de...............

jawed us locker ko kholta hain aur fir apne haathon mein apne mobile ko uthatha hua bade dhyaan se us screen ki taraf dekhey lagta hain...............fir wo recent calls dekhta hain aur kuch numbers ko wo talaash karney lagta hain....................aur aakhir usey wo un do doctors ka number mil hi jata hain jisey dekhney ke baad uske chehrey par ek ajeeb si muskan tair jati hain...................wo fir us number par us doctor ko call karney lagta hain.............

thodi der baad udher wo doctor jawed ka phone number apne mobile ke screen par dekhta hain...................magar itna to tay tha ki us doctor ke chehrey par bhi hairani ke badal saaf nazar aa rahe they.................aur hote bhi kyon na..................jawed to murr chuka tha to wo fir kaise usey uske paas phone kar sakta tha.................aur kahin aisa bhi to ho sakta tha ki jawed ke mobile se kahin koi police uske paas phone kar rahi ho to...............uska khel khatam ho jayega......................ye khyaal aate hi wo us phone ko recieve nahin karta aur dekhtey hi dekhtey wo phone fir cutt jata hain.................

udher wo doctor aabhi bhi apna mobile apne haathon mein liye bade gaur se apne mobile ke screen ko ghoorey jaa raha tha................usney jawed aur moin ke bare mein jo khabrein suni thi wo yakeenan 100% sach thi.............aur jab wakai mein jawed aur moin murr hi chuke they to unke is phone ko aakhir kaun istemal kar raha tha...............us doctor ka andhesha baar baar police ke taraf hi jaa raha tha................aur usey kahin na kahin aisa lag raha tha jaise usey ismein aab koi fansa raha hain..............

wo doctor aabhi bhi is udherbun mein fansa hua tha...................uske chehrey par pasiney ki boondhein is kadakey ke thand mein nazar aa rahi thi...............tabhi fir se uske haathon mein rakha mobile baj utha...................ek nazar wo ghadi ke taraf dekhey laga to is waqt ghadi mein 12.15 baj rahe they.....................

" is waqt jawed ka phone kaise aa sakta hain................main to janta hoon ki wo dono kal raat hi mare jaa chuke hain........aur ye khabar 100 aane sach bhi hain............fir jawed kaise mere paas phone kar sakta hain...................main ek kaam karta hoon................uska phone recieve kar leta hoon aur main tab tak kuch nahin bolunga jab tak udher se koi awaaz na aaye.............aur jab ye confirm ho jayega ki phone karney wala mera hi aadmi hain to fir.............." aur ye khyaal aate hi wo doctor apna phone on kar leta hain aur us phone ko loudspeaker par laga deta hain...............

aur kuch der tak udher se aawaz aane ka intezar karta hain................do char seconds tak to udher se koi awaaz nahin aati magar thodi der baad jo aawaz usey sunayi deti hain usey sunkar uske hosh udd jate hain..............wo poorey yekaan se keh sakta tha ki ye jawed ki hi awaaz hain.............

" doctor saheb...................aap mera phone kyon nahin utha rahe..........aaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh................" aur udher se jawed ki dard bhari aawaz us doctor ko sunayi deti hain wahin doctor ke chehrey par aaye pasiney aur bhi gehrey ho jate hain...............wo bade dhyaan se jawed ki baatein sunaney lagta hain............

" jawed........................tum....................to to murr chuke ho................fir tum.................zinda kaise ho.................." aur is baar hairan hone ki bari us doctor ki thi...............aabhi bhi uske chehrey par barah baje hue they..................

" main zinda hi hoon doctor saheb....................yu samajh lo ki police ne game khela hain....................wo kya hain na us din humara sara maal pakda gaya tha jis wajah se police ki nazreion mein hum aa gaye................bus isi ki aad lekar wo aab humein pakdna chahtey haain............hum dono jaise taise wahan se bhaag gaye...............magar humein chotien bahut aayi hain.................aur police ne un do laashon ko humara naam batakar unhein apni giraft mein kar liya............aur ye afwaah faila diya ki hum dono mare jaa chuke hain...................taki wo humare boss tak aasani se pahunch jaye.............." aur jawed fir se karahta hua dheere se bol pada wahin uske mooh se ek ajeeb si guraahat bhi dheere dheere nikal rahi thi..................

" magar............police ko to 4 laashein milti thi...........do tum logon ki.....aur do jismein maal bheja gaya tha............to.................aab tum chahtey kya ho...................." aur doctor apne pasiney poochta hua fir dheere se bol padta hain.................wahin jawed uski baateion ko sunkar fir se muskura deta hain..............

" baatein chodho doctor...........kabhi milogey to sab kuch main tumhein samjha doonga................aur haan...........mujhe fir se do aur laaashein chahiye doctor saheb..................to main chahta hoon ki tum aabhi fauran apne addey par aawo aur us doctor ko bhi apne saath mein lete aawo.............is baar maal zyada milega..................party bahut mast aayi hui hain................." aur jawed dheere se bol padta hain wain doctor kuch der tak apne soch mein dooba rehta hain..............

" magar................agar kisi bhi party ko maal chahiye tha to boss ne aab tak mujhe inform kyon nahin kiya.................khair.................magar is baar mera share 50-50 ka rahega.................kyon ki ek to raat bahut ho chuki hain upar se aaj kadake ki sardi bhi hain...............agar manzoor ho to bolo.......nahin to kisi aur ko dhoondh lo....................main nahin aane wala itni thand mein....................." aur wo doctor apni baat jaise khatam karta hua bol padta hain wahin jawed uski baateion ko sunkar dheere se muskura deta hain...............

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Mera shaq sahi thaa Jawed aur moin ki laasho ke saath Sakshi ne kaand kiya hai. Aur woh kaand tha unn dono doctors ko maarnaa. Aur woh doctor jaal mein fhass bhi gayaa.

Kisi ne sach hi kaha hai lalach insaan ko andha kardeti hai. Aur yeh toh insaan ke roop mein bhediye hai.