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Update.............. 16
location ............. Magic school

me aur Suwarna jb school aye to mene Suwarna ko kl ka
Milne ka kh kr apne room me chla gya
ajj me bhut thk gya tha kyoki mene 8 lavel beast ke
soul light ko absorb kia tha me apne bed pr aya
aur let kr age ke bare me sochne lga ki ab
kya karna hi


Mene Raj 1 ko yad kia wo mer samne a gya mene use apne me
samahit kr lia
ushne jo kia tha mujhe pta chl gya

Uske bad mene Raj 1 aur Raj 2 ko yad kia
wo dono mere samne hazir ho gye

Me ...............
Raj 1 tum jo book mene tumhe dinhi use ache se padh
lo us ke hr magic yad kr lo uske bad tumhe
Teleport wale magic pr dyan dena hi me
janta hu ye bhut kathin magic hi
but tumhe ise sikhna hoga

Raj 1 ..............
ji malik me puri kosis krunga apko nirash nhi krunga
mere malik

Me.............
Mughe tum se yahi asha hi ab tum dubara T . F me chle jao aur
jb tk me ne khun usme se mt niklna

Raj 1.............
ji thik hi malik jesi apki agya

Me.............
bhut ache Raj 1 ab tum ja sakte ho

uske bad Raj 1 wapas T . F me chla gya
fir me kuch der socha aur fir Raj 2 se bola

Me ...............
Raj 2 mughe asha hi ki tum wo jin wali book ache se read kr rhe ho
aur ha ab ache se samajh lene kyoki ager koi bhul hui
to hm bach nhi payege

Raj 2 ...............
app fikar na kare mere malik mere malik app ko
galti ka muka nhi denge hm

Me .........
mughe tum se yahi asha hi
aur ha 5 hour bad mughe nend se jga dena tum ab tum ja sakte ho
Raj 2

Raj 2 ..........
jesi app ki echa mere malik

uske bad Raj 2 chla gya aur me bhi so gya

( Ab chote hi hm Maharaj Aditya ke Rajya me Maharaj Aditya karna
ke pita hi )

Maharaj Aditya apne Singhasan pr bethe the
aur apne mantriyo se kisi bat pr charcha kr rhe the ki
tvi ek senik aya aur bola

Senik ...........
Maharaj Abi - Abi pta chla hi ki Senapati apas agye hi

Senik ki baat sun ki Maha Raj Aditya bhut kuch hogay
usne senik se kha ki

Aditya .......
bhut ache Senik jao aur unhe kaho ki
hm e yad kia hi

Senik ............
Jo hukam maharaj

Aur eske bad wo Senik chla gya Aditya yah janne ke
liye byakul honutha ki Senapati ne us ladke ko kese
saja di ho gi jese use mara hoga es liy Aditya bhut
byakul ho utha kuch der intjar karne ke bad senapati

ji aye


Senapati........ Maharaj ki jay ho

Aditya ........... Btao sena pati ji apne us badtameez balk ko kya
saja di jisne hmare Jan se pyare bete ka apman ki hm sb bistar
se sunna chahte hi

Senapati bechara kya khta suna dala kese use
phle H . M ne aur bad me Godess princess Suwarna
ne doya
tha senapati ki bat sun kept Aditya bhut gussa ho gya

Aditya ( gusse se ) ..............
kya bk rhe ho tum hm H . M ko kisi
tarah samahl lete lakin ye swarna
desh ki godess princess Suwarna
us do tke ke ladke ka sath de rhi
hi jha tk hmne suna tha Suwarna
kisi garib se baat tk nhi karti to
wo us ladke ko kyo bacha rhi hi

Senapati ( darte hue )....................
Maharaj mene pata lgwaya hi kuch
dino me wo aur godess Suwarna dono
hi sath rhte hi

Aditya ...........
wo ladka bhut chalak hi usne
godess princess Suwarna se
dosti kr li hi kyoki wo janta
hi use hmse keval goddess princess
Suwarna hi bacha sakti hi aur koi
bhi lakin hm bhi dekhte hi ki kb tk
Goddes 🤴 Suwarna us ladke ko kb tk bacha
pati hi kabhi na kabhi hme mouka jarur milega
bs whi waqt us ladke ka akhiri waqt hoga

fir Aditya waha se chala jata hi



location .............. Angle lok






Angel lok me is samay lord of
Angle apni sabha me bethe the
aur kuch adesh de rhe the


Lord .............
hm kuch samay ke liye God ka dyan karne ja rhe
hi unse yah puchne ki kese hm Lucifier ko rok
sakte hi jb tk hm nhi a jate tb tk is lok ki sari

jimme dari Suprim Angle ki hi thik hi ye hamara
adesh hi

sb angle .......... Ji lord
jesa app khe

Supreme angle .......
ok angle lord hm jb tk app a nhi jate tb tk
Angle lok ko samhale ge

Lord .......... Mughe app se yahi acha thi


us ke bad Lord chale jate hi .


Location.......... Devil lok

Rajguru ............. Hmne jo karya tum logo se kha hi wo ho
Jana chahiye

Sare mantri ........ Ho jayega Rajguru ji

Rajguru ........... Kl hm sb ke liye bhut bada din hi kl hamare maharaj
apni tapasya puri kr krke uthege

koi bhi galti nhi honi chahiye
thik hi

SB mantri ( kushi se ) ...........
hi jayega mere malik

Intro khani ke sabhi patra ka

hero ....... Raj

father of hero ......... God of death

Baba hero ke ( hero ko pala hi )

maa hero ki ( jinhone hero ko pala hi ) ....... Tara

Maharaj Aditya



(Ajj mene jo likha wo delete ho gya hi isi liye
Ajj bs yhi Update ayega next update kl ayega)

( Ab likhne ka mn nhi kh raha hi app sb ajj isi se kam chla le
next update me ful introduction sabhi patra ka mil jaye ga
Thank

Apka friend
Raj Thakur
Nice update Bhai
 

ashish_1982_in

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Update........... 15
Location ............ Magic school

Location ............ Magic school

Mene Suwarna se bat ki thi ki mughe 5 lavel beast ka soul light chahiye

Usne kha tha ki kl night me chalenge
me apne bed pr let kr yahi soch rha tha

Ki kl me phli bar kisi se fight karne ja rha tha to soch rha tha kl kya hoga

Mene magic book me dekha tha ek aisa Tir Dhanush jo ki kisi bhi 10 lavel ke best ko behosh kr sakta tha

lakin tir ka nishana beast ke dil pr lagna chahiye

me ne socha mere pass kl rat tika samay hi ager mene wo Tir Dhanush hasil kr lia to mugje sikar me bhut fayda hoga

es liye mene apna colone banaya

clone ....... Raj 3

ME..... Raj 3 tumhe kl sari class leni hi mughe kuch kam hi kl sari class tum le lena

RAj 3....... Jo agya malik

Raj 3 ko adesh dene ke bad me apne T . F me gya aur wo spell ki practice karne lga jisse me qi Tir Dhanush bna sakta tha
mene do din lagatar practice ki
Abhi bs keval 45 % hi bna
tha

T . F me 4 days 16 hour practice krne ke bad mughe saphlata mili
Me bhut kush hua

Ab mere pass 8 hours bache the jungle jane me to me
Apne T . F se bahr nikla aur
apne room me agya wha mughe

Raj 3 mila mene use apne ander smahit kr lia
mugje sb pata chl gya tha ki ajj class me kya hua

Clone magic sikhne se mughe bhut fayda ho gya tha

fir mene apne ander se Raj 3 ko bahr nikala aur usse kha ki wo thi room me rhega jb me sikar pr jaunga

itna khkr me room se bahr nikla gya thodi der guhumne ke bad me park me jake ek

seat pr beth gya kuch der bad mughe esa lga ki jese mere piche se koi a rha hi mene jb mudkr dikah

To Aarti , Rohit aur Raja the aur unke sath wo badtameez Priya bhi thi
mene socha ab ye log mere pass kyo arhe
hi
Ab magic school me mugje sb phe channe lge the akhir ho bhi kyona

School ki top aur is Planet ki sbse powerfull Rajya ki 🤴 meri dost jo thi

Abi me kush soch rha tha ki Rohit bola

Rohit ........ Aur Raj bhai kha rhte ho ajjkl

Aarti ......... Raj tumne wo magic Sikh lia kya
jo hm ne library nse book lia tha
Mughe
unme se kuch shi se samajh nhi aya hi
Kya tum mughe bta sakte ho

Me ........ Mene kitni bar bola hi ki me tumara nouker nhi jo tumhe magic sikhau thik hi .

RAja .........
Bs bhut hua Raj hm tumhe apna dost mante hi lakin tum hmse Thik se bat bhi nhi karte ho
Ye galat hi

Me......
Mene kha tumse ki tum mughe apna dost mano

Priya..........
Menw to phle hi kha tha ki iske pas mt jao lakin nhi meri sunta hi kon hi

Me ..........
Tumhe mene kha ki tum mere pass awo
Bar bar mughe preshan karti rhti ho

Itna khkr library nki trafh chl dia
wha puch kr mene kuch magic spells learn kie
2 hours bad me apne room me agya

apne bed pr beth kr aram karne lga kyoki ajj mughe forest of Isla jana tha best ka sikar kr
soul light ko hasil karna rha

Ab karna mere pass nhi ata tha kyoki use pata tha ki mere sath Godess Suwarna hi

Time ......... Night 10.00

Me aur Suwarna jungle ki tarfh chl die pedal

Suwarna ........
hm kon se lavel best ka sikar karege
app mt karna me krungi abi apke pass utni power nhi hi

Me....... Hme 5 - 10 lavel beast ka sikar karna hi

Suwarna .......... Kya app konho kya gya hi 5 se 10 lavel ka best ka sikar karna koi asan kam nhi hi

YHa tk ki forest of Isla me Keval 12 lavel tk ke beast rhte hi
isme bhut khatra hi

ME........
me tum chinta mt karo mene sb soch lia

Ase hi bate karte karte hm forest of Isla me agye
jisse me forest me ander gya mughe apne aspas kisi powerfull beast ko sense kia
uska lavel 5 to 8 ho sakta tha

Mene Suwarna kon sachet rhne ke liye kha

Mene aur Suwarna ne dekha ki do best apas me ladh rhe hi 1 wala 6 lavel ka tha
Aur 2 wala 8 lavel ka tha

Me.....
Jb wo 8 lavel wala beast 6 lavel wale best ko mar dega to hm 8 wale prnhmla krenge
tb uski power km hogi kyoki usne 6 lavel ke beast ko mara hi
Hme jese hi 6 lavel best mare turnt hmka karna hi kyoki ager
hmne

6 lavel best ke soul light ke use absorb hone se phle use nhi mara to hm use nhi mar payenge

Kyoki uske bad uska lavel 14 lavel puch jayega tb hm usko nhi mar sakte aur kya pata hm sikar karne aye hi hm hi na sikar hi jaye

kuch der dono best apas me ladte rhe aur fir
DOno bhut fast ladh rhe the
Kuch der bad 6 lavel best har gya

Suwarna ne turant apne thunder magic ka istemal kia wo best jamin pr giranuse bhut
chote hu pr chote turant thik ho ja rhi

Thi ager Suwarna ke pass apni angle power hoti to wo ik second me is best ko mar sakti thi
but abi wo 13 year ki thi use sari power 18 year pr milti

suwarna .......
Lagta hi hmara akhiri samay a gya hi
mene isp apna lighting magic joki midium lavel 4 pr hi use kia

BUt is best ko jada phark nhi para

Suwarna.......
ab kuch ho der me ye soul light ko absorb kr lega tb hme ise nhi hara payege

MEne Tir Dhanush wala spel padha
Aur nishana uske dil pr lagay aur use chod
dia jise wo Tir uske dil pr lga wo 8 lavel beast ki chikh fure Isla ke jungle me gunj uthi

Kuch der bad wo best me gya aur uski 8 lavel soul light mene absorb kr lia mugjenitna dard hua ki me bta nhi sakta

mene 6 lavel ki soul light Suwarna ko dia absorb karne ke liye

Suwarna.....
ager app ise absorb kr lege to apke pas 14 lavel ki best soul light ho jayegi

Me........ Raj itna kud garj nhi hi tum ise absorb kr li isse tum 10 guna aur powerfull nho jaogi

Suwarna meri trafh dekha aur smile karte hue use absorb kr lia dard use bhi bhut hua pr kisi tarah usne wo dard saha

ME.....
ye tum meri trafh dekh kr smile kyo kr rhi ho

Meri baat sun ke Suwarna sarma gyi

Suwarna.......
Jb waqt ayega to bta dungi

Uske bad me aur Suwarna school a gye aur apne room me jakr so
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Update no . 10
Subha jb me utha to time dekha
4 ho rha tha me utha aur apne T F me dyan me beth gya aur apne
Thunder element ko jagrit karne ki kosis
karne lga mene apne ander dekha Yellow gere me Green calour ka gola
tha mughe Priya mam ki
bat yad agyi
aur me us gole ki trafh chl dia lakin mughe apne body me bhut
dard ho rha tha fir
bhi me
kisi tarah apne Thunder element ke karib jane laga meri ankho ke samne andera cha gya aur me
behos hogya jb mughe hos aya
to Subha ho gyi thi me
apne body me toda dard mehsoos kr
rha tha fir bhi me class me
jane ke liye tyar hone lga

Me tyar hoke class ki trafh chl dia ajj meri class nhi thi kyoki kisi ko
pata nhi thanki mere pass
sare element hi

Jb me wha phucga to dekha ajj Aarti
Bi ayi th kyoki uske pass me fier element
Vi tha
karna to mughe gusse me goor rha tha
jese ager pa jaye to mugje khaa jaye

Lakin bechara kuch kr bhi nhi sakta tha
tha to mughe gorta rhta tha me ja kr second seat or beh gya kyoki ajj
first seat phle se Full thi
kyoki ajj me bhut der behos rha tha

Me jaker 2 seat pr beth gya mere bagal ek ladka betha tha

Me chup chap beth gya aur apne clone ke bare me sochne lga ki kese me
clone bnane ki power hasil karu
mene socha ajj Priya mam se puchunga

kuch der bad Shalini mam class me ayi
aur jb unhone mujhe class me dekha to pucha

Shalini.....
Raj apko ye wali class keval three days hi lini thi wo vi physical ki apke pass
to lightning element aur thunder element hi

Me.......
Master Shalini me sari class lunga mudhe vi sikhna hi ki kese Air, water, earth , Akash, fier ko jagrit kia jata hi
kyoki koi bhi gyan hnikarak
nhi hota hi

Shalini........
Very good Raj bhut ache

Uske bad mam sabko batane lagi dyan karne ke bare me kyoki abi bhut se student dyan bhi nhi lga

pate the yese hi ye wali class khatam ho
gyi tvi Master Dav hmari class me agye

Intro of some important character of story..........

1. Master Dev........... Ye magic school ke top 10 master me ate hi inki hmare Rajya me bhut ejjat hi inke pass three element hi Air , water, earth aur ye ek bhut
AChe Talwar baj hi .

Dev.......
Student abi app sb shi se dyan nhi lga pate hi to app sb ko 10 days ki
chutti di jati app sb ko in
dino me ache se dyan lgana sikhna
hi aur ager koi problem ho to

Salini mam se phuch skte hi ok student

sab student........
ok sir

Ese hi ye wali class khatam ho gyi ab Lightning element nki class thinto ma Aur Aarti lightning elememt
Ki class ki trafh chl die

us class me bhi hme whi notice mili jo dev sir ne btaya tha

ME.......
Es class me bhi whi notice hi ye jisko dyan karna ata hi use kya karna hi
ye to btaya nhi gya hi

Aarti........
Raj tumko dyan lagana ata hi kya

Me........
Ha

Aarti........
TO ab hm kya krenge

Me........
Tumhe bhi dyan lagan ata hi

Aarti.....
Ha

Me. Koi bat nhi hm jaker library me koi
magic book le lete hi fir usi se practice
krenge

Aarti.......
Ha yahi sahi rhega

Uske bad me aur Aarti library ke trafh chl die wha jaker hmne kuch magic ki book
li

Uske bad hm dono apne class ki trafh chl die

jb Aarti apne room me phuchi to usse se Priya ne pucha ki

Priya.......
Tum us Raj ke sath kha gyi thi

Aarti.........
wo hm logo ko dyan lagana ata hi to kuch magic book lene gye the

Priya .........
hu magic book lene gye the mere sath nhi chl skti thi jo us ke sath gyi thi wo bada badtameez hi pta nhi apne apko kya samajhta hi

Aarti .......
Ab tum chup bhi rho

Aur uske bad Aarti Teacher stop room ki trafh chl deti hi

Location.......... Planet Alpha xy
ye ek hmare planet se bhut bada aur sktisali hi es ke aur hmare nich ek
surcha kawach hi jo ki
5 year bad tutega

Is planet me Keval ek hi Raja ka Adhikar hi uska nam hi king Mureko

Mureko apne drbar me apne sighsan pr betha tha aur kuch chrcha kr rha tha

Mureko.........

bs ab srif 5 year hi ek bar wo surcha kawach ht jaye fir hm Tha great S of God ko hasil kr lenge aur fir hm bhut sktisali ho jayege

Mantri 1 ......
Ji Mere Malik app shi kh rhe hi us Talwar me bhut skti hi

Mantri 2........
Hm bhi malik mantri 1 ki bato se etfhak rkhte hi

Mureko......
Hahahaha bs ab sirf 5 year hi


Location Davil lok

Is lok me kewal Dark magic ka upyog hota tha yha ke king Lucifier bhut
skti shali tha

Abi Devil king apne upasna me betha Mata Nikumbla ki puja kr rha tha pichle 800 salo se demon king maa Nikumbla ki puja kr rha tha aur ab mata ke prakat hone ka samay a gya tha

Location......... Angel lok

yha pr lord of Angel bhut
Zabardast awesome
 

ashish_1982_in

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Update.............. 16
location ............. Magic school

me aur Suwarna jb school aye to mene Suwarna ko kl ka
Milne ka kh kr apne room me chla gya
ajj me bhut thk gya tha kyoki mene 8 lavel beast ke
soul light ko absorb kia tha me apne bed pr aya
aur let kr age ke bare me sochne lga ki ab
kya karna hi


Mene Raj 1 ko yad kia wo mer samne a gya mene use apne me
samahit kr lia
ushne jo kia tha mujhe pta chl gya

Uske bad mene Raj 1 aur Raj 2 ko yad kia
wo dono mere samne hazir ho gye

Me ...............
Raj 1 tum jo book mene tumhe dinhi use ache se padh
lo us ke hr magic yad kr lo uske bad tumhe
Teleport wale magic pr dyan dena hi me
janta hu ye bhut kathin magic hi
but tumhe ise sikhna hoga

Raj 1 ..............
ji malik me puri kosis krunga apko nirash nhi krunga
mere malik

Me.............
Mughe tum se yahi asha hi ab tum dubara T . F me chle jao aur
jb tk me ne khun usme se mt niklna

Raj 1.............
ji thik hi malik jesi apki agya

Me.............
bhut ache Raj 1 ab tum ja sakte ho

uske bad Raj 1 wapas T . F me chla gya
fir me kuch der socha aur fir Raj 2 se bola

Me ...............
Raj 2 mughe asha hi ki tum wo jin wali book ache se read kr rhe ho
aur ha ab ache se samajh lene kyoki ager koi bhul hui
to hm bach nhi payege

Raj 2 ...............
app fikar na kare mere malik mere malik app ko
galti ka muka nhi denge hm

Me .........
mughe tum se yahi asha hi
aur ha 5 hour bad mughe nend se jga dena tum ab tum ja sakte ho
Raj 2

Raj 2 ..........
jesi app ki echa mere malik

uske bad Raj 2 chla gya aur me bhi so gya

( Ab chote hi hm Maharaj Aditya ke Rajya me Maharaj Aditya karna
ke pita hi )

Maharaj Aditya apne Singhasan pr bethe the
aur apne mantriyo se kisi bat pr charcha kr rhe the ki
tvi ek senik aya aur bola

Senik ...........
Maharaj Abi - Abi pta chla hi ki Senapati apas agye hi

Senik ki baat sun ki Maha Raj Aditya bhut kuch hogay
usne senik se kha ki

Aditya .......
bhut ache Senik jao aur unhe kaho ki
hm e yad kia hi

Senik ............
Jo hukam maharaj

Aur eske bad wo Senik chla gya Aditya yah janne ke
liye byakul honutha ki Senapati ne us ladke ko kese
saja di ho gi jese use mara hoga es liy Aditya bhut
byakul ho utha kuch der intjar karne ke bad senapati

ji aye


Senapati........ Maharaj ki jay ho

Aditya ........... Btao sena pati ji apne us badtameez balk ko kya
saja di jisne hmare Jan se pyare bete ka apman ki hm sb bistar
se sunna chahte hi

Senapati bechara kya khta suna dala kese use
phle H . M ne aur bad me Godess princess Suwarna
ne doya
tha senapati ki bat sun kept Aditya bhut gussa ho gya

Aditya ( gusse se ) ..............
kya bk rhe ho tum hm H . M ko kisi
tarah samahl lete lakin ye swarna
desh ki godess princess Suwarna
us do tke ke ladke ka sath de rhi
hi jha tk hmne suna tha Suwarna
kisi garib se baat tk nhi karti to
wo us ladke ko kyo bacha rhi hi

Senapati ( darte hue )....................
Maharaj mene pata lgwaya hi kuch
dino me wo aur godess Suwarna dono
hi sath rhte hi

Aditya ...........
wo ladka bhut chalak hi usne
godess princess Suwarna se
dosti kr li hi kyoki wo janta
hi use hmse keval goddess princess
Suwarna hi bacha sakti hi aur koi
bhi lakin hm bhi dekhte hi ki kb tk
Goddes 🤴 Suwarna us ladke ko kb tk bacha
pati hi kabhi na kabhi hme mouka jarur milega
bs whi waqt us ladke ka akhiri waqt hoga

fir Aditya waha se chala jata hi



location .............. Angle lok






Angel lok me is samay lord of
Angle apni sabha me bethe the
aur kuch adesh de rhe the


Lord .............
hm kuch samay ke liye God ka dyan karne ja rhe
hi unse yah puchne ki kese hm Lucifier ko rok
sakte hi jb tk hm nhi a jate tb tk is lok ki sari

jimme dari Suprim Angle ki hi thik hi ye hamara
adesh hi

sb angle .......... Ji lord
jesa app khe

Supreme angle .......
ok angle lord hm jb tk app a nhi jate tb tk
Angle lok ko samhale ge

Lord .......... Mughe app se yahi acha thi


us ke bad Lord chale jate hi .


Location.......... Devil lok

Rajguru ............. Hmne jo karya tum logo se kha hi wo ho
Jana chahiye

Sare mantri ........ Ho jayega Rajguru ji

Rajguru ........... Kl hm sb ke liye bhut bada din hi kl hamare maharaj
apni tapasya puri kr krke uthege

koi bhi galti nhi honi chahiye
thik hi

SB mantri ( kushi se ) ...........
hi jayega mere malik

Intro khani ke sabhi patra ka

hero ....... Raj

father of hero ......... God of death

Baba hero ke ( hero ko pala hi )

maa hero ki ( jinhone hero ko pala hi ) ....... Tara

Maharaj Aditya



(Ajj mene jo likha wo delete ho gya hi isi liye
Ajj bs yhi Update ayega next update kl ayega)

( Ab likhne ka mn nhi kh raha hi app sb ajj isi se kam chla le
next update me ful introduction sabhi patra ka mil jaye ga
Thank

Apka friend
Raj Thakur
very nice update bhai
 

Asif khan

Well-Known Member
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Update.......11
Back to hero........

( Waha hmare Lucifier bechare 800 salo se tpasya kr rhe hi aur yaha hamare Raj bhai sahab so rhe hi

Ab kr bhi kya sakte hi chahe bhi to hm log story ke
hero hi to
kuch bol bhi nhi sakte hi nhi to kya
pta naraz ho jaye ye
naraz bhi bhut
jldi hote
hi hahahaha

Devil lok ka Mahal ............

jb se Devil king Lucifier tpsya karne gye
the sare Rajya ki bagdor Rajguru
karma ke hatho me thi
ajj devil lok me bhut chal phal thi
ek minute ek minute devil
KIng ka Mahal sajaya
ja rha tha
Rajguru kuch bate kr rhe the mantri logo se ( cholo ab yha tk a hi gye hinto inki bate hi sun li jaye
kya pata kuch kam ki hi ho

Rajguru........
Mantri 4 tum Mahal ko ache se shajao
Maharaj ki tpasya puri hone wali hi

Mantri 4 ........ Khus hote hue
jo agya Rajguru ji

Rajguru ...........
Mantri 1 tum se hmne kha tha ki tum 1001 kuwari kanayo ko pakri hm Maharaj ko bhet denge wo kam kha tk phucha ( yha logo ki shadi nhi ho rhi hi ladki nhi mil rhi hi Rajguru nko 1001 kuwari kanaye chahiye lakin bhai kon
bta ke sar kataye apna)

Mantri 1........
Ji Rajguru ji hmne iam khatam hi kr liya
hi app ko sikayat ka moka nhi denge

Rajguru ..........
Sikayat ka moka dene ki bhul bhi mat
karna barna unki jagah pr
tumhari hi bali de denge

Mantri 1. Bechare dar ke bhag gye jaldi kanya dhudne
( Ab bhai koi Aam to hi nhi ki tod layenge )

( Rajguru to bda khaternak nikla cholo ab Raj bhai sahab ko uthate hi nhi to
wo sada ke liye so jayege)

Back to hero..........

Sham ko jb me utha to apne app ko bhut trotaza mehsus kr rha tha
ab mene soch lia tha chaye jo ho jaye lakin Colon magic to me
sikh kr rhunga

Sbse phle mene kl jo book li thi aur ajj jo book li thi use laker apne T. F ke ander chl dia ajj wali
book to baccho wali thi
Mene apni colone wali book nikali

Aur colon bnane ke liye jo mantra hota hi use ache se padhne lga

Is mantra ko apne mn me bolna hi aur
52 minuts tk mantra padhte rhna hi
sa karne se bhut dard hoga lakin
shna padega ab

Mene bhut bar kosis ki jb tk puri trah se thak nhi gya jb me T. F se nikla o morning 4 baj rhe the mene T. F me 2 days 3 hour practice ki thi
ab me apne mn me
16 minut mantra
bol sakta tha me bhut thak gya tha to socha chlo tosha aram hi kr lia gaye

fir me room se nikl kr ground nk trafh chl dia wha pucha to dekha wha to bheed lgi karna apne kuch sathiyo
ke sath betha tha

Rohit aur ek ladki kuch bate kr rhe the
wo ladki Aarti ke group me bethi thi
dyan se dekha to yad aya ye
to wo badtameez Rajkumari Priya
thi jo mugh se us din ladh rhi thi

mughe dekh ke to kuch logo ko bhut
gussa a rha tha ab jahir si bat thi
ki apne karna aur unke sathi
aur Priya ji thi aur Aarti ki
kuch dost pr mughe
kya ghanta fhark nhi parta hi me jaker

ek seat pr beth gya aur thandi hwa ka
maja lene lga pichle jnam me
to dutkar hi shi thi

ab wo jnam na shi to yahi shi
ME apne pichle jindgi ke bare me sochne lga ki mughe abhas hua ki koi
meri traf a rha hi mene apni ankhe
Kholi to dekha ki Rohit
aur Aarti aur Aarti ki
kuch dost thi

Mene socha ki kon samjhaye ki me wo manush hu jiske pass ager wo rhe
to unki jindgi bhi narak bn jayegi

ABhi todi hi der hui thi ki Rohit jiqkuch bola ab unhe jada chup machi thi

Rohit...... Aur Raj bhai kya kr rhe ho
ajj Subha aya kese a gaye bhut thake
thake lg rhe ho

Me....... Gusse se... Tum se matlab jao jaker apna kam karo dubara
dikha bhi mt ab jao

Rohit........ Ja rha hu bhai dat kyo rhe ho

Priya ....... Mene to phle hi kha tha ki
iske pass mt awo lakin nhi meri bat sunta hu kon hi

isi Aarti ji ko kuch puchna tha to ab pucho


Me...... Mene tumse ye bhi kha hi ki tum mere pass awo aur h bhut jada tez mt bolo ab dubara mt ana me tumse bolne
ke liye
mara nhi ja rha hu samjhi

Aarti ........ Wo Raj ji mughe app se kuch bat karni ho

me kuch ulta bolne hi wala tha pr bol nhi paya pata nhi kyo Aarti
ki bat sun kr

Me ....... Boliye Rajkumari ji kya bolna hi apko

Aarti ....... Kya me app ke sath practice kr skti hu magic ki

mughe help bhi mil jayega aur hm ache se practice bhi kr payege

Ab bolna to nhi chta tha lakin bolna padega

Me...... Me app ka koi nouker nhi jo magic sikhata phiru

aur itna kh kr me wha se age ki trafh chl dia ab me waha aur nhi ruk skta
tha
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Raj Singh Thakur

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Hallo friends ye Keval Introduction hi update nhi ise app achi trah se padh le taki app ko story achi trh se samajh me ajaye

Introduction of some important character of story

1) Real father of Raj ........ God of death

2) Veer ( Raj ko palne wale ) inhe apna hero Baba khta hi

3) Tara ( Raj ko palne wali mhila ) inhe apna hero Maa khta hi

4) Raj ( inhe to app sb jante hi honge ye hi hmari khani ke hero ) Main character

Jis Rajya me hmara hero aur uske maa baba rhte hi us Rajya ka Name hi

Jha hero rhta hi Rajya ka name hi .... Isla

King of Isla ........ Maharaj Vikram

Queen of Isla ......... Maharani Swati

Princess of Isla ........ Aarti ( ye hero ke school me uske sath padhti hi inke pass lightning element hi aur Fier eliment hi

Magic school ......... Ye ek school hi jha bache magic sikhne ke liye ate hi ye Isla me hi aur bhut acha school hi yha alag alag desh aur Rajya ke bachhe padhne ate hi

H . M ...... Ye Isla school ke head master hi aur inke pass bhut power hi inka nam ..... Deepak hi

Madam Priya ....... Ye magic school ki ek high lavel ki teacher hi jo Thunder element ke bare me parhati hi


Madam Shalini ......... Ye hi hmar hero ki class teacher
Jo five elements ka bare me padhati
Hi

Master Veer ........ Ye hero ko aur princess of Isla yani Aarti ko lightning element ke bare me padhate hi

Rajya name .............. Aditya Nagar
Ye wo Rajya hi jha karna ke pita Maharaj Aditya Raj karte hi

Karna ....... Prince of Aditya Nagar

Aditya ....... King of Aditya nager

Senapati Aditya Nagar ka uska name hi ......... Karma

hero ke sarh kuch padhne walo ke bare me

Raja .......... Ye ek Prince hi iske Rajya ka nam hi Ray desh

priya ....... Ye ek princess hi iske Rajya ka name hi krma desh


Rohit ....... Ek student jo ki Raj ke sath padhta hi

Devil lok ....... Ye ek esa lok hi jha black magic karne wale khaternak
Devil rhte hi
Yha ka King hi
King of devil lok .......... Lucifier

Rajguru of devil lok inka name ............ Derya guru Mahavir hi

Angle lok .......... Ye ek esa Rajya hi jaha Angle aur punya atmaye rhti hi

yha ka king hi

KIng of Angle lok ....... Lord of Angle Virbhadra

Suprim Angle name ....... Sarthak

God ( ye character ke bare me batane ki jarurt hi nhi hi )


Adi sakti ....... Ye God ki wife hi


God of deth ......... Ye god ke bete hi enka karya hi sabko apne michir samay pr
deth dena unhe unke karma anushar phal dena enke ek beta hi jiska nam
Raj hi jo ki hmare hero hi God of death 3 number pr hi power me inhe keval inke mata pita ani God aur wife God Adi sakti hi hara sakti hi

Mata Nikumbla devi ....... Inke pass God of deth se thodi km power hi ye sansar ki 4 number pr sabse sakti shali hi

Suwarna ........ Ye swarna desh ki Rajkumari hi aur ye ek angle hi enhe sb goddess prencess Suwarna ke nam se jante hi enke jesi ladki pure grah me nhi hi

Swarna desh ...... Ye jis grah pr hero Rhta hi wha ka sabse powerfull Rajya hi




Age aur bhi character ayenge jese jese wo ayenge me intron karta rahunga
 
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Jaguaar

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Update........... 15
Location ............ Magic school

Location ............ Magic school

Mene Suwarna se bat ki thi ki mughe 5 lavel beast ka soul light chahiye

Usne kha tha ki kl night me chalenge
me apne bed pr let kr yahi soch rha tha

Ki kl me phli bar kisi se fight karne ja rha tha to soch rha tha kl kya hoga

Mene magic book me dekha tha ek aisa Tir Dhanush jo ki kisi bhi 10 lavel ke best ko behosh kr sakta tha

lakin tir ka nishana beast ke dil pr lagna chahiye

me ne socha mere pass kl rat tika samay hi ager mene wo Tir Dhanush hasil kr lia to mugje sikar me bhut fayda hoga

es liye mene apna colone banaya

clone ....... Raj 3

ME..... Raj 3 tumhe kl sari class leni hi mughe kuch kam hi kl sari class tum le lena

RAj 3....... Jo agya malik

Raj 3 ko adesh dene ke bad me apne T . F me gya aur wo spell ki practice karne lga jisse me qi Tir Dhanush bna sakta tha
mene do din lagatar practice ki
Abhi bs keval 45 % hi bna
tha

T . F me 4 days 16 hour practice krne ke bad mughe saphlata mili
Me bhut kush hua

Ab mere pass 8 hours bache the jungle jane me to me
Apne T . F se bahr nikla aur
apne room me agya wha mughe

Raj 3 mila mene use apne ander smahit kr lia
mugje sb pata chl gya tha ki ajj class me kya hua

Clone magic sikhne se mughe bhut fayda ho gya tha

fir mene apne ander se Raj 3 ko bahr nikala aur usse kha ki wo thi room me rhega jb me sikar pr jaunga

itna khkr me room se bahr nikla gya thodi der guhumne ke bad me park me jake ek

seat pr beth gya kuch der bad mughe esa lga ki jese mere piche se koi a rha hi mene jb mudkr dikah

To Aarti , Rohit aur Raja the aur unke sath wo badtameez Priya bhi thi
mene socha ab ye log mere pass kyo arhe
hi
Ab magic school me mugje sb phe channe lge the akhir ho bhi kyona

School ki top aur is Planet ki sbse powerfull Rajya ki 🤴 meri dost jo thi

Abi me kush soch rha tha ki Rohit bola

Rohit ........ Aur Raj bhai kha rhte ho ajjkl

Aarti ......... Raj tumne wo magic Sikh lia kya
jo hm ne library nse book lia tha
Mughe
unme se kuch shi se samajh nhi aya hi
Kya tum mughe bta sakte ho

Me ........ Mene kitni bar bola hi ki me tumara nouker nhi jo tumhe magic sikhau thik hi .

RAja .........
Bs bhut hua Raj hm tumhe apna dost mante hi lakin tum hmse Thik se bat bhi nhi karte ho
Ye galat hi

Me......
Mene kha tumse ki tum mughe apna dost mano

Priya..........
Menw to phle hi kha tha ki iske pas mt jao lakin nhi meri sunta hi kon hi

Me ..........
Tumhe mene kha ki tum mere pass awo
Bar bar mughe preshan karti rhti ho

Itna khkr library nki trafh chl dia
wha puch kr mene kuch magic spells learn kie
2 hours bad me apne room me agya

apne bed pr beth kr aram karne lga kyoki ajj mughe forest of Isla jana tha best ka sikar kr
soul light ko hasil karna rha

Ab karna mere pass nhi ata tha kyoki use pata tha ki mere sath Godess Suwarna hi

Time ......... Night 10.00

Me aur Suwarna jungle ki tarfh chl die pedal

Suwarna ........
hm kon se lavel best ka sikar karege
app mt karna me krungi abi apke pass utni power nhi hi

Me....... Hme 5 - 10 lavel beast ka sikar karna hi

Suwarna .......... Kya app konho kya gya hi 5 se 10 lavel ka best ka sikar karna koi asan kam nhi hi

YHa tk ki forest of Isla me Keval 12 lavel tk ke beast rhte hi
isme bhut khatra hi

ME........
me tum chinta mt karo mene sb soch lia

Ase hi bate karte karte hm forest of Isla me agye
jisse me forest me ander gya mughe apne aspas kisi powerfull beast ko sense kia
uska lavel 5 to 8 ho sakta tha

Mene Suwarna kon sachet rhne ke liye kha

Mene aur Suwarna ne dekha ki do best apas me ladh rhe hi 1 wala 6 lavel ka tha
Aur 2 wala 8 lavel ka tha

Me.....
Jb wo 8 lavel wala beast 6 lavel wale best ko mar dega to hm 8 wale prnhmla krenge
tb uski power km hogi kyoki usne 6 lavel ke beast ko mara hi
Hme jese hi 6 lavel best mare turnt hmka karna hi kyoki ager
hmne

6 lavel best ke soul light ke use absorb hone se phle use nhi mara to hm use nhi mar payenge

Kyoki uske bad uska lavel 14 lavel puch jayega tb hm usko nhi mar sakte aur kya pata hm sikar karne aye hi hm hi na sikar hi jaye

kuch der dono best apas me ladte rhe aur fir
DOno bhut fast ladh rhe the
Kuch der bad 6 lavel best har gya

Suwarna ne turant apne thunder magic ka istemal kia wo best jamin pr giranuse bhut
chote hu pr chote turant thik ho ja rhi

Thi ager Suwarna ke pass apni angle power hoti to wo ik second me is best ko mar sakti thi
but abi wo 13 year ki thi use sari power 18 year pr milti

suwarna .......
Lagta hi hmara akhiri samay a gya hi
mene isp apna lighting magic joki midium lavel 4 pr hi use kia

BUt is best ko jada phark nhi para

Suwarna.......
ab kuch ho der me ye soul light ko absorb kr lega tb hme ise nhi hara payege

MEne Tir Dhanush wala spel padha
Aur nishana uske dil pr lagay aur use chod
dia jise wo Tir uske dil pr lga wo 8 lavel beast ki chikh fure Isla ke jungle me gunj uthi

Kuch der bad wo best me gya aur uski 8 lavel soul light mene absorb kr lia mugjenitna dard hua ki me bta nhi sakta

mene 6 lavel ki soul light Suwarna ko dia absorb karne ke liye

Suwarna.....
ager app ise absorb kr lege to apke pas 14 lavel ki best soul light ho jayegi

Me........ Raj itna kud garj nhi hi tum ise absorb kr li isse tum 10 guna aur powerfull nho jaogi

Suwarna meri trafh dekha aur smile karte hue use absorb kr lia dard use bhi bhut hua pr kisi tarah usne wo dard saha

ME.....
ye tum meri trafh dekh kr smile kyo kr rhi ho

Meri baat sun ke Suwarna sarma gyi

Suwarna.......
Jb waqt ayega to bta dungi

Uske bad me aur Suwarna school a gye aur apne room me jakr so
Awesome Update

Lagta hai Suwarna ke dil mein Raj ke liye kuch hai. Dekhte hai yeh sach hai yaa jhoot
 
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