Romance Ek Hateli Lovestory ;) (complete)

[johnsamuri]

Ok g

Wo link tha bhai iske part 2 ka
Complete kar diya hu wo bhi

Ok got it but apse ek nai khani ki ummeed hai bhai

 

[Adirshi]

Ok g

Ok got it but apse ek nai khani ki ummeed hai bhai

After USC

 

[Thakur]

Update 49
Epilogue​

Din beet kar ab raat aa chuki thi, aniket aur komal parinay sutra me bandh gaye the aura b uske jivan ki ek nayi shuruwat hone wali thi… tekdi par aaj avinash akela hi party kar raha tha, uska sathi aaj waha nahi than a, wo shanti se beer ka eke k ghut le raha tha itne me piche se awaj aaya

Yash- kya avi seth ? akele akele party ?

Avinash ne piche palat kar dekha to yas uski taraf dekh kar muskura raha tha

Yash-kya bhai avi sirf aniket dost hai kyat era, hum nahi hai ?

Avinash- arey waisa nahi hai aao baitho

Yash- to fir aaj kya gum me rum

Avinash- ab kaheka gum bhai apne bhai ki shadi huyi hai aaj bas usi ki party kar raha hu

Yash-ha ye bhi sahi hai

Avinash- yash teko batau, ye sab yaade na aankho ke saamne kisi film ki taraf chal rahi hai, kya dhamal kiya hai hum logo ne par ab ani par jimmedari badh gayi hai, uski shadi ho gayi hai to0 aisa rukha rukha lag raha hai, ab wahi uski grihastio chalu ho jayegi fir kaka ka business ab use kaha samay milega na masti ke liye

Fir uske baad najane kitna hi samay avinash uske aur aniket ke kisse suna raha tha aur has raha tha, wo itna hasa ke uski aankho me pani aa gaya…

Fir yash bola

Yash-ek baat bata avi.. aniket ki jaymala hone tak to tu stage par tha fir baadme achanak kaha gayab ho gaya tha ?

Avinash- main kaha gayab hua tha bhai, arey ha yaad aaya wo baahar kuch kaam the to bas wahi dekh raha tha

Fir yash bhi beer ke halke halke ghut lete huye bola

Yash-ek baat bata pichli baar hum log tekdi par aaye the tab ani ko komal ke pyaar ka ehsaas dilane hi aaye the na barobar

Avinash- hao ye to pehle hi decided than a

Yash- hmm aur us raat propose kaarne ka bhi koi plan nahi tha barabar..

Avinash- hao na bhai, par aniket kuch sunne ko hi tayar nahi tha, bole abhi propose karega, mera to dimag hi kaam nahi kar raha tha.. sab kaise ekdum achanak hua tha

Yash hasa aur wo avinash ne dekha aur bola

Avinash- abhi has aa rahi hai par us time fat gayi thi bhai

Yash-nahi main uske liye nahi hasa..

Avinash- fir kyu hasa ?

Yash- avi tum jaanta hai na main umra me terese bada hu, tere se jyada duniya bhi dekhi hai, ek baar nahi do do baar pyaar bhi kiya hai..

Avinash- ha to..

Yash- aur pyaar ke mamle me bhi mera anibhav tere se jyada hai

Avinash- yash gol gol bate mat ghuma sidhe sidhe bol na kya kehna chahta ha tu

Yash ne ek pause liya aur usne avinash ka hath pakda aur uske shirt ki bahi per ki, avinash ke hath pe ek tattoo tha, yash bola

Yash- ye kya hai ?

Jispar avinash bola

Avinash-ye ye to mere naam ka hai A.K. avinash kanitkar

Yash- to tere is tattoo ke bare me ani ko malum hai ?

Avinash- nahi ?

Yash- kyu ?

Avinash- arey usme kya hai itna

Yash- bahut kuch hai, tum dono baal mitra ho na, tumko ek dusre ki har baat pata hai fir ye baat ani ko kaise nahi malum ?

Avinash- yas teko jyada ho gayi hai tu kuch bhi bol raha hai.

Yash- maine ye tattoo tab dekha tha jab hum aniket ko komal ke ghar ki diwar par chadha rahe the, acha ye sab chhod ye bata komal jab dulhan ban ke aayi tab maine teri aankho me pani dekha tha kyu ?

Avinash-arey wo pal hi aisa tha, main bhavuk ho gaya tha

Yash- fir ek baat bata, us raat aniket ka komal ko propose karne ka plan bana tab tune bataya tha ke komal ki room kaunsi hi, uske pitaji kitne baje ghar aate hai yaha tak ki komal jag rahi hogi ya soyi hogi ye bhi pata tha tujhe, itni infoi tere paas kaise ?

Avinash gardan jhukakar niche baitha tha aur yash bol raha tha

Yash – abhi jo tune ye sab apni purani yade batayi hai usne komal bhi thi par tune komal ka jikra ek baar bhi nhi kiya, jab pehli baar tune shravni ke propose aur aniket ke rangit talim ka kissa mujhe itne utsah se bataya tha tabhi mere dhyan me aa gaya tha ke us din na sirf komal balki tere dil me bhi pyaar ne janm le liya tha, teri komal se kya baat huyi ye bhi tune mujhe bataya aur jab tune komal ke vichar sune usidin tune decide kiya ke aniket ke pyaar ke liye agar komal shravni ke propose me madad kar sakti hai to tub hi komal ki madad karega use uska pyaar dilane me kyuki tu khud komal ko man hi man chahne laga tha, komal ke aansu bhi too tujhe hi dikhe the warna maujud to waha kai log the

Avinash ki aankho se aasu beh rahe the usne bas ha me gardan hilayi aur yash shant hua, jab avinash thoda shant hua tab yash bola

Yash- kyu kiya aisa ?

Avinash jabardasti muskuraya aur bola

Avinash- kyuki aniket sirf dost nahi hai mera bhai hai, bachpan se sath ai humlog , aur uske to aneko upkar hai mujhpar, aaj tak usne job hi mere liye kiya hai uske saamne to ye bahut kam hai, komal to abhi abhi jindagi me aayi thi re aniket aur mera sath to tab ka hai jab se hame chaddi bhi pehanni nai aati thi, sar pe baap ka saya nahi tha par umra me bhale hi mere hi itna tha par kabhi bhi mere bhai ke baap ki kami nahi mehsus hone di, aur bhai jinhe pyaar nahi milta unhe kuch nahi milta aisa bhi nahi hai yaar, mere paas mera anmol dost hai, mujhe mera pyaar na mila isse koi fark nahi padta, mere bhai ko uska pyaar mila ye kya kam hai ? aur ani ke dosti par to 1 kya 10 komal kurban karne ke pehle main 1 pal bhi nahi sochunga

Yash- arey par tum komal se….

Avinash ne yash me muh par hath rakh diya

Avinash- wo sab khatam ho gaya hai, shadi ki us pavitra agni me jal ke rakh ho gaya hai, aur ab komal sirf aur sirf meri bhabhi hai aur hamari sanskruti me maa ke baad bhabhi ka darja hota hai, main aba age padhne ke liye dusre shahar jar aha hu, ani ki aisi icha hai wo chahta hai ki main padhu aur mere liya uska shabd hi sab kuch hai, tumne ye baat aaj boli hai aage mat bola kyuki agar aisa hua to ye mere pyaar aur dosti ka apman hoga, tumhe priya ki kasam, aur ye bhi mat samajhna ki ye happy ending nahi tha arey bhai aniiket aur komal ki shadi happy ending se kam thi kya aur raha sawal mera to wo hai na adi usne mere loiye bhi kuch to socha hoga…

Avinash waha se utha aur khali beer ki botal wahi fodi aur nikal gaya aur jaye huye wo gar aha tha

Avinash- ye dosti hum nahi chhodenge, chhodenge dum magar tera sath na chhodenge…

Yash jate huye avinash ho dekh raha tha aur bola

Yash- pyaar karna to priya ne sikhaya tha par use nibhana aaj avi sikha gaya, pyaar karne wale to bahut dekhe the par dosti par pyaar nyochavar karne wala HATELA aaj pehli baar dekha, main to aaj tak is hateli lovestory ko ani ki samajhta tha ye to hateli lovestory avi ki nikli....



End…

Real me te hateli love story thi

 

[Adirshi]

Real me te hateli love story thi

Thank you so much bhai is kahani ko padhne aur review karke ke liye

 

[Thakur]

Thank you so much bhai is kahani ko padhne aur review karke ke liye

Yash ki aur avi ki story konsi he?

 

[Adirshi]

Yash ki aur avi ki story konsi he?

Uff! Ye Mohabbat !

 

[Aakash.]

Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum

"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

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"Chance to win cash prize up to Rs 8000"
Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hindi section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words ke bich honi chahiye (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Cash Awards milenge, uske alawa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne ka mouka bhi milega taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab ke liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai XForum ke sabhi readers ke upar apni chhaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.. Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunehra avsar hai apni kalpanao ko shabdon ka raasta dikha ke yahan pesh karne ka. Isliye aage badhe aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de.

Entry thread 15th February ko open ho chuka matlab aap apni story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 5th March 2024 tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.


Story se related koi doubt hai to iske liye is thread ka use kare — Chit Chat Thread

Kisi bhi story par apna review post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Review Thread

Rules check karne ke liye is thread ko dekho — Rules & Queries Thread

Apni story post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Entry Thread

Prizes

Position	Benifits
Winner	4000 Rupees + Award + 5000 Likes + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up	1500 Rupees + Award + 3500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP	1000 Rupees + 2000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories)
3rd Runner-UP	750 Rupees + 1000 Likes
Best Supporting Reader	750 Rupees + Award + 1000 Likes
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof	200 Likes for each report

Regards :- XForum Staff

 

[RAAZ]

Namaskar! XF ke bhaiyo aur ladkiyo, kya haal chal hai sabke hope sab apne apne gharo me hai aur mauj kar rahe hai, kaam ke bagair baahar mat jaya karo be covid khatam nahi hua hai aur aap sab jaante hai meko aap sab ki kitni chinta hai aaplog ko kuch ho gaya to mera reader kam ho jayega yaar, waise majak ki baat nahi hai ye sab log khayal rakhna apna.

sala ye to mudda hi change ho gaya ekdum se, khair to mudda ye hai dosto ki aapka ye dost ek baar fir hajir hai aapki khidmat main ek nayi kahani ke sath, ye koi thriller ya fantasy nahi hai ye aap sab kahani ke prefix se samajh hi jaye honge, utne to aap samajhdaar hai hi , wo kya hai na thriller aur fantasy likhkar ab bore ho gaya hu bas wohi khun kharaba isiliye kuch alag likhna hai ab to socha kyu na wahi se shuru kiya jaye jis prefix main apni pehli kahani likhi thi 'Romance' se.....

So here I am Presenting you a Romantic Comedy

Ek Hateli Lovestory

ab ye likhne me main kitna safal hua ye aaplog apne comment main jaroor batana to milte hai kahani ke pehle update ke sath tab tak ke liye ciao

Regards
Adirshi

Sound intresting.

 

[Aakash.]

Hello everyone! We are thrilled to present the annual story contest of XForum! "The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

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"Win cash prizes up to Rs 8500!"

Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hindi section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 8000 words ke bich honi chahiye (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Cash Awards milenge, uske alawa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne ka mouka bhi milega taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab ke liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai XForum ke sabhi readers ke upar apni chhaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.. Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunehra avsar hai apni kalpanao ko shabdon ka raasta dikha ke yahan pesh karne ka. Isliye aage badhe aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de.

Entry thread 25th March ko open ho chuka matlab aap apni story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 25th April 2025 tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.

Important Links:
- Chit Chat Thread (For discussions)
- Review Thread (For reviews)
- Rules & Queries Thread (For contest details)
- Entry Thread (To submit your story)

Prizes

Position	Rewards
Winner	3500 ₹ + Award + 7000 Likes + 30-day Sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up	2000 ₹ + Award + 5000 Likes + 15-day Sticky Thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-Up	1000 ₹ + 3000 Likes + 7-day Sticky Thread (Stories)
3rd Runner-Up	500 ₹ + 3000 Likes
Best Supporting Reader (Top 3)	500 ₹ (Each) + Award + 1000 Likes
Reporting Plagiarized Stories	200 Likes per valid report

Regards, XForum Staff