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Thank you so much bhai for investing your time reading this story, this really means a lot to me
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Nice update BhaiUpdate 7
Aniket aur komal dono college ke liye nikal gaye the
Aniket-teko kuch samajh hai, akkal hai tere main, tu ghar pea a gayi be direct aur maa ne kuch nahi bola teko
Komal-faltu ki badbad kara lo bas, teri mummy sweet hai re, tere jaisa rakshas kaise unke naseeb main aa gaya yahi samajhnahi aata
Aniket-sweet? Beta meri mata ek baar bhadak gayi na sari sweetness nikal jayegi, jaan de chhod meri dost hai aisa hi bataya na?
Komal-maine na unko bola ki unki hone wali bahu apne pati parmeshwar se milne aayi hai to mujhe milne diya jaye
Aniket-thobda dekha hai kabhi apna aaine me aai badi bahu banne wali
Dono college me pahuche ab class me baithne ka mood to nahi tha (waise bhi hota kab hai inka classes karne ka mood padhai karna to inko sabse jyada pasand hi na) dono canteen me pahuche
Komal-anya to ab ye to decided hai ki tu merese shadi nahi karega to ab mujhe bata ki teko kaisi ladki pasand hai
Komal ki baat sunkar aniket babu khayalo ki duniya me pahuch gaye aur komal ne unhe wapis dharti pe laya
Komal-ab agar koi ghatiya picture ka dialogue mara to kaan ke niche khane tayar rehna
Aniket-aye chup! Ladki aisi ho jise dekhte hi kano me ghanti bajni chahiye
Komal-gajab, to pujari ki ladki pata lene ka fir uska baap dinbhar kaan me ghanti bajata raega
Aniket ne pehle to komal ko gusse se dekha aur fir apna mood badalte huye bola
Aniket-ye pyaar ishq mohabbat ki bate hai kammo rani tum nahi samjhogi
Komal-aur mujhe samajhna bhi nahi hai, thanki you, faltu me babu shona baccha baby karte huye apni raat kaun kali karega, maine dekha hai ladkiyo ko 22-23 saal se ghodo ko mera sonu pillu baby bolte huye, kasam se aisa thappad maarne ka man karta hai na nibba ninni sale
Aniket-kammo ye sab ladkiyo ki bate hai re teko nahi samjhengi
Komal-ha to na samjhe tu ye bata apne college me hai kya koi aisi ghanti wali
Aniket-nahi na yaar, agar hoti to tu ab tak meri shadi me naach chuki hoti
Komal-hogi bhi par tumhe tumhari harkato se fursat milegi tab dhyan doge na?
Aniket- chal ke dekha jaye kya? Ek chakker senior ke class ki taraf bhi daal lenge
Komal-apne se badi ladki chalegi?
Aniket-usme kya hai, sachin Tendulkar ne bhi apne se badi ladki se shadi ki hai
Komal-anya ab teri barabari sachin the great Tendulkar se hogi
Aniket-shabass! Tere jaise dost agar ho to dushman ki jarurat hi nahi hai main waise hi barbad ho jaunga
Komal-ha chal cha lab jyada nautanki mat kar, tere jaise kaiyo patak ke mara hai
Aniket-kammo tune sach me ladko ko mara hai ya bas hamper dhaus jamati rehti hai
Komal-dikhau maar ke
Aniket-nahi! Us din ki hockey stick hai dhyan me
Komal-anya ek idea hai, abhi mid break hoga apan kya karte hai sedhiyo ke paas jakar khade ho jate hai jaha se sab niche aayenge aur mast ladkiyo ko line marenge
Aniket-kammo main tujhe kya samajhta tha aur tu kya nikli, tu to ek number ki mawali nikli re
Komal-chal chal nautanki baad me karna
Dono canteen se baahar nikle aur decide ki huyi jagah par jakar khade huye, jaise hi break ki bell baji waise sabhi students class se baahar nikalne lage aur itne me avinash bhi waha pahuch gaya
Avinash-anya yaha kya kar raha bhai
Ab aniket to ladkiyo ko dekhne me busy tha to komal ne jawab diya
Komal-ladkiyo pe line maarne aaya hai
Ab avinash ke liye ye naya tha kyuki aniket ne aajtak aisa kabhi nahi kiyia tha ha par ye baat bhi satya thi ke wo kab kya karega iska koi andaja nahi laga sakta tha
Avinash-ye kya nawa chutiyap hai, anya ye komal ke chakker me mat pad tu lagta hai kaka ko batana padega ye komal bigad rahi hai tujhe
Komal-avya kya bola dobara bolna
Komal ne jaise hi avi ko gusse se dekha to avi samajh gaya ki use bhi maar pad sakti hai aur is maamle me to aniket bachane bhi nahi ayega isiliye baat sambhalte huye bola
Avinash-hehe ab main maskhari bhi nahi kar sakta kya
Komal-hmm good boy
Fir komal avinash ke paas sarki aur dheere se usme avinash ke kaan me kuch bola aura b avinash bhi unme shamil ho gaya, wahi aniket aane jane wali har ladki ko dekh raha tha aur aakhir kaar komal boli
Komal-ani ek bhi ladki pasand nahi aayi kya
Aniket-nahi na yaar
Komal-mujhe to tumhari chinta hone lagi hai ab, suna tha bhagwan ne sabse liye Jodi banayi hoti hai par tumhari lagta hai bhrun hatya me maar to nahi gayi na ( well yaha ye line as a joke likhi gayi hai par this is not a joke ‘SAVE THE GIRL CHILD’ beti bachao beti padhao aur ab aage padho)
Par aniket ne komal ki baat ko ansuna kar diya aura b tak lagbhag sbahi ladkiya class se baahar aa chuki thi aura b aakhri do ladkiya class se baahar aayi aur unlogo se thoda aage badhi to komal ne avinash ko kuch ishara kiya aur usne apne hath ki do ungliya muh me daalte huye ek sansanit siti bajayi aur komal ne paas se ek kankar utha kar ek ladki ki pith pe mara
Abhi abhi kya hua ye aniket ke kuch samajh hi nahi aaya wo bas wahi khade khade dekhta raha aur jis ladki ko kankar laga tha wo mud kar in logo ke paas aayi aur gusse me pucha
Ladki-kisne kiya ye ?
Aur avinash aur komal ne bagair ek pal ki raah dekhe aniket ki or ishara kar diya
“murkh,nalayak, halkat, besharam, kutta”
Aisi galiya dete huye aniket ke kuch bolne se pehle hi
‘chataak!’
Aniket ke kaan ke niche laga ke wo ladki pair patakte huye waha se nikal gayi
Aniket ko to din me tare najar aa gaye the aur wo bechara apna gaal sehlate huye piche muda to ye dono rakshas avnash aur komal use thappad khata dekh jor jor se has rahe the
Avinash-sale ye komal ne teko chane ke jhad pe chadhaya aur tu chad bhi gaya ab kha thappad, usdin ka pura badla nikala hai isne
Aniket-harami kammo, khali fokat ijjat duba di yaar tune ab nahi bachegi tu
Aniket ne komal ka hath pakad ke pith ki taraf mod diya
Komal-sorry sorry sorry anya sorry yaar aur chinta mat kar meri pehchan wali hai wo usko bata dungi ham majak kar rahe the hath chhod yaar
Aniket ne hath chhod diya aur bola
Aniet-iski saja milegi barabar milegi
Komal-ham bhi saja ke liye tayar hai jani
Aniket-gazab mere sath reh reh ke tu bhi nautanki sikh gayi kammo to chalo ab tumhari punishment hai ke aaj tum the great aniket ko idli wada khilaogi aur bsdk avya tu, tu bahut siti baja raha tha ab teko aisa bajaunga ki siti bajana bhul jayega
Avinash-ha chal chal ala motha shahana
Aur teeno nashta karne nikal gaye……
Or ye Ala Motha Shana Dialogue
Pushpa movie me use hua hai
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Thank you bhai
Aur apun allu arjun ka fan hai maine hi to bola tha ye dialogue use karne wo,
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Bhai mohabbat he khelo par start karo kuch is bar apko ek lambi innings kahleni he padegi bahi
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