Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

[Lone survivor]

WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye

 

[JAI]

nice story dear amazing

 

[Naik]

UPDATE-99
Anisha- kaha drop karu aapko?
Lucifer- apne dil me

BOOOOMMMMMMM

Etni smooth line thi ki anisha bhi muskuraye bina rah nahi paye

Anisha- ab batao bhi
Lucifer- mujhe raste me drop kar dena

Anisha- kaha raste me?
Lucifer- main tumhe nahi bataunga
Tum danger ladki ho

Anisha- okay
Aap bata dena kaha karu
Lucifer- tum ne ashmita ko to kuch nahi bola na?

Anisha- nahi sad tone
Lucifer- kya hua?

Anisha- kuch bhi to nahi
Lucifer- sach sach batao

Anisha- kuch bhi nahi hua
Sach me
Lucifer- yahi utaar de fir
Nahi jana mujhe aage

Anisha- vo maine job chhod di
Lucifer- wait what?
Job chhod di?
Tumhe samjh me aa raha hai tum kya bol rahi ho?

Anisha- vo mujhe thoda kaam tha aur Ma'am ne mujhe bahar nahi jane diya to maine quit kar diya
Lucifer- choti bachi ho kya?

Anisha- ab jo ho gaya to so ho gaya
Lucifer- koe nahi main dekhta hu kuch

Anisha- ma'am ko nahi bolna kuch bhi aap
Lucifer- vaise bhi kya hi bol raha hu main usko
Yahi rok do

Aur lucifer vaha se bina anisha ko kuch bole chala gaya

Anisha ne bhi jada force nahi kiya usse aur na kuch pucha bas chhup chhap vaha se car vapas dene chali gaye aur lucifer

Lucifer gaya vaha jaha ke liye aap sab intezaar me bathe the

Jee ha vo gaya naag ke us adde par jaha suresh ko pakad rakha tha

Bahar hi naag aur mansi bathe dikh gaye jo chadni raat enjoy karne ki soch rahe the lekin lucifer unki raat chodne ki puri planning karke batha tha

Lucifer- naag aisa room hai kya yaha jaha par aawaz na aaye?
Naag- aisa to nahi hai bhai
Lucifer ki aawaz se uski aur mansi ki tindra tuti aur uski taraf dekhte hue bola

Lucifer- to mansi tum bahar ghum aao aaj
Mansi- kya karne wale ho aap bhaiya aaj?

Lucifer- vohi jo maine tumhe na dikha sakta hu na bata sakta hu
Mansi- main naag ko le jau?

Lucifer- nahi
Eske bina mera man nahi lagta
Koe achi se movie dekh aao ya shopping kar aao
Ander kamra bhara hua hai paiso se vaha se jitna chahiye le lo aur jao
Mansi- aap mujhe akele bejh rahe ho etni raat ko?

Lucifer- kuch nahi hoga
Maine sab dekh liya hai
Jao jaldi jao ab
Mansi- bahut kharcha karke aaunga fir main

Lucifer- pura sehar khareed aao aaj
Koe tumhe kuch nahi kahega
Mansi- aaj to aisa hi karungi fir
Aur mansi vaha se chali gaye

Lucifer- ab tu mujhe kya dekh raha hai
Leke aao mere sasur ji ko
Naag- jee bhai *sad*

Lucifer- aur achi wali sharaab bhi
Bc gandu red wine pee raha hai
Pata nahi aur kya kya dekhna rah gaya hai mujhe
Naag- mansi ko pasand hai

Lucifer- kyuki vo ladki hai aur tu?
Bc rahne hi de aur ja leke aa us gandu ko
Naag ander gaya aur suresh ko bahar le aaya

Jab suresh bahar aaya to uski halaat dekhne layak thi
Chehre ki ronak puri tarah se khatam ho chuki thi aur jo khushi rathore ki image ko chodne ki thi vo ab udasi me badal chuki thi

Lucifer- latka de naag ulta esse
Aaj eski photo viral karenge
Naag- kaise latkau bhai?
Kapdo me, chaddi me ya fir...

Lucifer- alag alag pose me marenge
Naag- kapde se start karte hai bhai
Fir kam karte jayenge

Lucifer- sahi idea hai
Dekho sasur ji cooperate karoge to maje aayenge tumhe bhi aur hume bhi
Nahi to fir tum bewakuf to ho hi

Suresh- mujhe jane do
Tum jante nahi ho main kon hu
Lucifer- aur tu nahi janta main kon hu
Ab jaldi jaldi pose dene suru kar
Bahut bore ho raha hu main

Suresh- main es sehar ka sabse bada businessman hu
Nanga kara dunga tumhe
Naag- bhai sidha nanga hi kar du kya?

Lucifer- agar ek minute me esne pose dene suru nahi kiye to pahle to hunter chatkana eski gand par fir jo marji vo karna
Naag- I'm ready bhai

Suresh jiski halaat pehle se hi kharab thi uski ab aur hone lag gaye aur apni gand matkate hue ek pose dene laga

Lucifer- Haye Haye naag bc eski gand
Naag- bhai nikal lu kya pent main apni?

Lucifer- ruk ja ruk ja thoda sabar kar
Ab gand piche, muh aage aur kamar still karke

Suresh ne aisa hi kiya aur naag maje se photo lene laga

Naag- bhai eski gand kisi ladki ki hoti to kya baat thi
Lucifer- eski se hi kaam chala lena
Sun be ab ye samne pole dikh raha hai?
Kar uspar pole dance

Suresh- mujhe nahi aata
Lucifer- tu karta hai ya fir main naag ko chhod kar jau yaha tere pass?

Suresh bechara kya hi karta
Pole ke pass gaya aur usse pakad kar edar udhar ghumne laga

Naag- ache se kar lodu
Jaise vo actress karti hai vaise hi kar
Suresh aur mahnat karne laga lekin ab es umar me weight bhi badh raha tha kaise lachak aati usme?
Fir bhi apni taraf se kosis kar raha tha puri vo

Naag- bhai mujhe aisa kyu lag raha hai jaise esko maje aa rahe hai?
Lucifer- kyuki eske maje aa rahe hai lodu
Ab sun jaise ladkiya nachte hue ek ek karke kapde utarti hai vaise hi utarne suru kar

Suresh- mujhe maaf kar do beta
Mujhse galti ho gaye
Aage se aisa kabhi nahi karunga
Tum bologe to main rathore se bhi mafi maang lunga

Lucifer- ye mafi wala kaam nahi pasand mujhe
Tu kapde utarne suru kar
Raat ki maa behan mat kar

Suresh ne sirf shirt aur pant hi pahan rakhi thi aur vo shirt uski tond dhakne me nakamyab thi

Lucifer- naag ready ho ja
Esko pyaar wali bhasa pasand nahi aa rahi sayad

Lucifer ne aisa bola aur suresh ne apni shirt ke button kholne suru kar diye

Lucifer- good boy
Ache se video bana raha hai na naag?
Esko main ab se apne club me chalayenge
Naag- bhai apna to club hi nahi hai

Lucifer- to khol lenge bc
Kis chhij ki kami hai apne pass?
Naag- sahi bol rahi ho bhai

Tab tak suresh ki shirt utar chuki thi aur uski balo me bhari chhati dekh kar lucifer aur naag dono ka mood chud chuka tha

Naag- bc sare mood ki lanka jala di esne to bhai
Lucifer- ghosla to niche hona chahiye tha
Yaha to upar hi etna sab hai

Naag- vohi to bhai
Ab kya kare?
Lucifer- bc abse tourcher karne ke liye esko use karenge
Continue chalne de

Naag- main kitna acha time spend kar raha tha mansi ke sath
Es buddhe ne sab kharab kar diya
Lucifer- sabka badla lenge naag
Sabka badka
Oye ye pent kyu hai tere upar abhi tak?

Suresh ab bina maar khaye ghayal ho chuka tha
Uski aankhon me pehle baar asli ke aashu aaye the

Puri jindagi usne jo izzat shaurat banaye thi aaj vo sab loot rahi thi
Aaj se pehle kisi me etni himmat nahi thi ki vo suresh ke samne aankh utha kar bhi dekh sake aur aaj do londo ne usko nanga nacha rakha tha

Izzat lutati hai to kaisa feel hota hai vo aaj usse pata chal raha tha

Lucifer- ye natak mat kar
Puri raat nahi hai humare pass
Jaldi jaldi start kar

Suresh ke aashu tej hote gaye aur vo upar dekhte hue apni pant utarne laga
Aur dekhte hi dekhte vo sirf ek underwear me bach gaya tha

Naag- bhai jaldi se khatam karte hai esko
Ab mujhse ye dekha nahi ja raha
Lucifer- naag tu dekh aur ek sabak le ki kisi ki izzat kharab karne se pehle hum bilkul nahi sochte
Bas samne hota dekh haste rahte hai aur jab vo khud ke sath hone lagta hai to kaisa feel hota hai vo dekh

Es se sabak le ki kabhi bhi apne manoranjan ke liye kisi ko chodna nahi chahiye kyuki kahi na kahi aapse bada Lund wala bhi koe dunia me batha hua hai sivay mere se
Mere se bada koe nahi hai

Dekh esko
Suresh the fucking raichand
Raichand empire ka maalik aaj humare samne chaddi me khada hai
Esko ek misaal banane de
Lekin jo sikh mil rahi hai es se usse kabhi bhulna bhi mat

Naag- bhai hum bhi to eski izzat hi utaar rahe hai na?
Lucifer- nahi
Hum esko saja de rahe hai
Esne jo kiya uski saja
Maine apni life me bahut bure bure kaam kiye hai, na jane kitna khoon aur kaisa kaisa khoon bahaya hai lekin kisi ki izzat ke sath khilvaad nahi kiya maine

Lucifer- ye chaddi ko kya ab apni shadi me leke jayega?
Utaar esko bhi

Suresh me ab etni himmat nahi bachi thi ki vo kuch bol paye
Uske hath apne aap apne underwear par chale gaye aur jaise hi utarne wala hu bahar ka gate khula aur ashmita ander dhakil hue

Usse kaise pata chala es jagah ka?
Simple pehle anisha ko follow kiya fir lucifer ko

Jiski aankhon me gussa, dard, aur pata nahi kitne bhaav the
Lucifer ne bahut easily sab mahsus kar liya tha

Vo lucifer ko dekhte hue apne baap ke pass gaye aur usse kapde dene lagi

Naag- bhai...
Lekin lucifer ne usse rok diya aage kuch bolne se

Ashmita ne suresh ko kapde pahanaye aur lucifer ko dekhti hue vaha se usse leke chali gaye
Aankhir me do bond aashu ki tapak hi gaye uski aankhon se
Aur vo chali gaye

Naag- bhai aapne kyu apna rishta kharab kiya?
Ye sab to main bhi kar sakta tha suresh ke sath?
Lucifer- koe rishta humesha ke liye nahi hota naag
Aaj nahi to kal usse totna hi tha
Acha hua aaj toot gaya
Agar tere se karvata to vo tujhe dusman samjh leti aur badle lene ki sochti
Maine kiya to vo mujhe dusman nahi samjhegi khud ko samjhegi
Aur aisi condition me ya to insaan bilkul toot jata hai ya fir etna upar chala jata hai ki koe usse chhu bhi nahi pata
Esliye mere hatho se hona jaruri tha
Ab mujhe bas ye dekhna hai ki en dono me se kya hota hai ashmita ke sath...

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Ashmita n apne baap ko or beizzat hone bacha lia lekin uski achche se izzat ki watt laga ab kabhi woh kisi ki izzat k saath nahi khelega aisa kerne k pehle hazar baar sochega or apni halat k baare m sochega kia huwa tha uske saath
Baherhal dekhte h ab aage kia hota h




Or rahi story m koyi rai dene ki tow kuch h hi nahi jo aapko bataya jai ki yaha per aisa ho sakta tha waha per aisa ho sakta tha kahani ek dam sahi jaa rahi aap ek mast likh rahe ho
Bas aap likhte jayiye
Baki sab first class h

 

[Naik]

not gonna lie but I havent wrote shit for the past two weeks aur purane likhe sare updates khatam ho gaye hai esliye aaj to nahi aa payega aur 100th update special bhi hai esliye bhi time lagega so no update today
thank you for the support you guys have shown
much love to everyone

Okay bhaya

 

[A.B.KING]

not gonna lie but I havent wrote shit for the past two weeks aur purane likhe sare updates khatam ho gaye hai esliye aaj to nahi aa payega aur 100th update special bhi hai esliye bhi time lagega so no update today
thank you for the support you guys have shown
much love to everyone

Okay bro

 

[Lib am]

UPDATE-79

Lawyer- aap mujhe sab kuch detail me bataye
Mujh se kuch bhi chhupane ya juth bolne ki jarurat nahi hai kyuki baad me vo hume problem me daal sakta hai
Ma'am- jee meri shadi rishi se 10 saal pehle hue the
Vo rich the aur handsome bhi to mummy papa ne shadi ki umar hote hi meri shadi kara di
Main chah kar bhi kuch nahi kar paye kyuki ghar ki condition etne achi nahi thi ki main unke against jati esliye unki baat manana hi meri majburi ban gaye

Kuch din tak to sab theek raha vo meri care bhi karte the aur pyaar bhi dikhate the halanki bed par vo jungle hi the lekin main sochti thi ki sab ki alag alag pasand hoti hogi baki to mujhe pyaar hi karte hai na

Lekin fir dheere dheere unke behavior me change aane laga
Vo raat ko kabhi bhi uth kar bath jate aur mere sath jabardasti karne lagte
Main patni thi to kabhi mana nahi kar pati thi
Uske baad vo public place me bhi kuch bhi harkate karne lage jaise private parts ko touch karna vagra vagra

Vo kabhi bahut ache se behave karte jaise unse acha koe hai hi nahi dunia me aur agle hi pal ek shataan ka roop le lete
Pehle pehle mujhe laga ki main naye naye aae hu unki zindagi me esliye unhe samjhne me problem ho rahi hai lekin yehi meri galti thi kyuki ye sab kam hone ki bajah badti gaye aur main sab majburi ke sahti rahi

Mere pass koe option bhi to nahi tha
Mummy papa ko bata nahi sakti thi aur financially etni strong thi nahi ki khud se apna gujara chala saku
Esliye maine pehle apne aap ko independent banane ki sochi aur kisi tarah marte peetate apni studies complete karne lagi
Essi bich main pregnant ho gaye aur fir baby hogya lekin maine fir bhi apni study Jari rakhi

Pehli baby girl hone ki vajah se to ghar ka mahool aur jada kharab ho gaya jo sab kuch pehle chal raha tha vo sab ab double ho gaya aur physical abuse ne to had Paar kar di thi

Mere husband ke hath me jo bhi chhij aati usse hi mujhe marne lag jate kabhi kabhi to cigarettes se jala bhi dete the aur main ye sab chhup chhap sahti rahi ye soch kar ki ek baar kuch ban jau fir apni beti ko le kar kahi door chali jaungi lekin esse pehle ki main kuch aur kar pati main vapas pregnant ho gaye aur es baar kismat se baby boy hua lekin halaatein sudharne ka naam hi nahi le rahi thi

Mujhe laga tha unko ladka chahiye tha aur ladka mil gaya hai esliye ab sayad chhije theek ho jaye lekin aisa hua nahi
Mere saas aur sasur ne bhi apne hadde Paar karna start kar diya tha

Main puri tarah toot chuki thi aur jeene ki koe khawas bachi nahi thi life me ki es college se ek din mujhe teaching ki job offer hue
Maine apne ghar me kisi ko nahi bataye ye sab kyuki agar bata deti to meri khaal kheech lete vo log esliye main apne bacho ko le kar vaha se bhagne ki tayari karne lagi

Mere aur Alia ke vaha se nikalna bahut aasan tha kyuki hum dono humesha ghar me hi rahte the lekin Mere husband mere bete ko bilkul bhi mere sath nahi chhodte the esliye main intezaar karti rahi aur karti rahi aur karti rahi lekin mujhe ek bhi chance nahi mila aur joining date bhi pass aane lagi

Agar ye mokka main gava deti to pata nahi vapas aisa mokka kab aata aur aata bhi ya nahi

Esliye pata nahi maine kya socha aur main Alia ko le kar ek mokka dund kar vaha se bhag aaye

Thode bahut paise the mere pass us se Alia ka khana peena to ho gaya tha ek mahine ke liye main kuch aise hi gujara kar leti
Rahne ek liye railway station ke pass ek khali banjar ghar pada hua tha ussi me kisi tarah ek mahine tak gujara kiya

Fir jab salary milne lagi aur kuch savings ho gaye to yaha shift hogaye

Tab tak maine na apne ghar par kisi ko kuch bataya aur na mere husband ke ghar par
Mujhe pata tha ki vo mujhe dund kar vapas torcher karne ka chance hath se jane nahi dega esliye main koe loose end nahi chhodna chahti thi
Esliye apne ghar bhi nahi bataya

Kuch mahine ke baad jab thode bahut paise ho gaye to fir ek lawyer ko dundne lagi ki kaise apne bete ko bhi us aadmi ke chungal se bacha pau lekin uske pass paise aur power besumar thi jiski vajah se aaj tak main kuch kar nahi paye hu

Kuch dino pehle use mera address pata chal gaya aur mujhe ek legal notice bejh diya ki main uske beti ko usse door rakh rahi hu aur uska mansik shosan kar rahi hu
Jis din Lucifer mila tha us din main essi chakar me court gaye thi

Ab mujhe nahi pata main kya karu
Mere pass bas Alia hi bachi hai agar vo bhi mere se door chali gaye to mere jeena ki umeed hi toot jayegi
Kaise bhi karke hume bacha lijiye
Mere pass jada paise to nahi hai lekin jitne hai main sare aapko dene ke liye tayar hu lekin main aapse hath jod kar viniti karti hu mere bachi ko mujhse door mat hone dena
Ye bolte bolte madhuri ma'am ki aankhon me aashu tapak gaye sayad etne dino se jo dard apne andar sama rakha tha aaj vo khul ke bahar aagya tha

Lucifer ne ma'am ko chhup karane ke liye koe bhi kosis nahi ki
Ya to usse aisi situation me kaise react karna chahiye ye nahi pata tha ya fir vo aaj aakhiri baar Ma'am ko khul kar rone de lena chahta tha

Lawyer- you're a strong woman
Lucifer- she is a strong woman
No doubt

Lawyer- aapke pass jo aapne bataya unka koe proof hai?
Ma'am- proof to nahi hai
Us ghar me cctv lage the usme recordings hogi

Lawyer- vo hume kaise milegi?
Aur kya pata abhi tak delete bhi kar di hogi?
Lucifer- main nikalva lunga cctv footage bhi aur proofs bhi

Lawyer- kaise?
Lucifer- vo mera kaam hai

Lawyer- fir to cake walk case hai
Easily hum jeet jayenge aur aapke bache aapke pass honge
Ma'am- thank you so so much sir

Lawyer- call me Vijay
Lucifer- thank you Vijay
Anything else?

Lawyer- nahi bas aap proof nikal lo baki nanga main kar dunga court me
Lucifer- vo ho jayega

Lawyer- theek hai fir main chalta hu
Lucifer aur madhuri dono Vijay ko gate tak chhodne gaye fir bye bol kar vapas aagaye

Madhuri- coffee?
Lucifer- milk ha coffee chalegi na bilkul coffee chalegi
Koe coffee ke liye kaise mana kar sakta hai?

Madhuri ka chehra jo abhi tak latka hua tha vo thoda sa khil gaya tha lucifer ki harkat se

Madhuri- main lati hu
Lucifer- Alia nahi aaye abhi tak?

Madhuri- kuch contest tha uske school me ab bas aati hogi
Lucifer- ye bacho par etna burden kyu dalte hai?

Madhuri kitchen se kyuki jab life unexpected burden daale to usse jhel sake
Lucifer- aap etne satik jawab kaise de deti ho?

Madhuri- experience se
Lucifer- aapse jada experience hai mujhe fir bhi nahi aate aise jawab mujhe

Madhuri- main sikha dungi
Lucifer- aap sikha dogi?
Fir to main yahi aajaya karunga office ke baad se
Aap har roj raat ko mujhe sikha diya karna

Madhuri- yaha aane ke liye kisi ne kabhi tumhe mana kiya hai?
Lucifer- nahi mana to nahi kiya lekin aap hi dunia, samaj, logo ke bare me soch soch kar pareshan hote rahte the

Madhuri- vo koe aaye kya meri musibaat me?
To main kyu unke bare me sochu?
Vaise ye Lawyer ki kitni fee hai?
Lucifer- fee to bahut jada hai Ma'am
Aur main paye paye lunga aapse

Madhuri- tum kisi baat ka sidha jawab kyu nahi dete?
Lucifer- mere se sidha insaan to dunia me koe nahi hai

Madhuri- kya fee hai eski?
Lucifer- aap doge?

Madhuri- tum bataoge?
Lucifer- aap doge kya?

Madhuri- tumhe deni hai?
Lucifer- mera lawyer hai to mujhe hi deni hogi na

Madhuri- tumhra lawyer hai?
Lucifer- meri ek friend ne help ki hai
Unka family lawyer hai esliye fee vagra ki mat socho aap

Madhuri- free me to aajkal apne kaam nahi karte ye to fir bhi friend ka friend hai
Lucifer- main dekh lunga payment vagra
Aap mat socho us bare me

Madhuri- tum kaha se doge?
Lucifer- aap sochne ki chhije to sochte nahi ho
Are Alia ke bare me socho
Rahul(ma'am ka beta) ke bare me socho
Mere bare me socho
Humare bare me socho
Kitna kuch hai aapke pass sochne ka lekin aapko sochna faltu ki baaton ke bare me hai

Ma'am muskurate hue coffee leke aati hai aur lucifer ke side me bath jati hai

Madhuri- acha baba sorry nahi sochungi es baare me
Khush ab?
Lucifer- nahi

Madhuri- ab kya hua?
Lucifer- sochne ki chhijo ke bare me sochna start karo fir khush hounga

Madhuri- Alia, Rahul sab to pehle hi dil me hai unke bare me aur kya sochu?
Vohi to dunia hai
Lucifer- aur?

Madhuri- mere bare me?
Bache khush to main khush
Lucifer- aur?

Madhuri- aur kya tha?
Lucifer- dekh lu kuch ho to

Madhuri- job hai aur to
Mere students hai
Aur kuch to sayad nahi hai
Ha mummy papa hai behan hai bas
Lucifer- chalo theek hai
Main chalta hu ashmita ne bulaya tha evening me

Madhuri- coffee to pe lo
Lucifer- aapko main coffee peene wala dikhta hu?

Madhuri- tumne hi to bola tha?
Lucifer- ab man nahi hai
Kuch kaam ho to call kar dena

Madhuri- tum aaj kal kuch jada hi gussa nahi hone lag gaye?
Lucifer- main to etni pyaar se baat Kar raha hu
Kya gussa hounga main?

Madhuri- acha baba sorry
Main to mazak kar rahi thi
Tum mere liye bahut important ho
Aaj main has pa rahi hu, khush ho pa rahi hu, bahar ghum ne ja rahi hu ye sab tumhri vajah se hi hai
Agar tum nahi aate to sayad main ghut ghut ke abhi tak ya to mar gaye hoti ya marne ki kagar par hoti
Mujhe nahi pata hum dono me kya hua kyu hua kab hua lekin tum ab meri chhoti si dunia ka ek bahut aham kridaar ban gaye ho
Main humesha tumhri aabhari rahungi har chhij ke liye jo tumne mere aur mere bacho ke liye kiya

Lucifer- aashu hi laa doge kya ma'am?
Main to kuch aur sunana chahta tha aur apne kuch aur hi suna diya
Madhuri- dil ki baat thi jo bol di

Lucifer- theek hai
Alia ke liye chocolates laya tha usse de dena
Madhuri- ab to sab bata diya
Ab kya hua?

Lucifer- mujhe sach me hi jana tha
Aapse koe naraj ho sakta hai kya?
Madhuri- kaha jana hai?

Lucifer- doctor ke
Madhuri- kya hua tumhe?
Tum theek to ho na?

Lucifer- nahi
Madhuri- kya hua to?
Tumne bataya kyu nahi mujhe?

Lucifer- sayad kisi ne mera dil chura liya hai
Doctor se jake puchna hai eska ilaaz kya hai
Alia- chachuuuuuu
Alia lucifer ko dekhte hi khush hote hue usse lipat gaye

Bechare lucifer ne etna acha point mara tha aur Alia ke aajane se Madhuri ka jawab sun nahi paya lekin vo udash nahi tha kyuki usse pata tha ki Madhuri bolti to bhi sab ghuma ghuma ke bolti

Alia- aap kab aaye?
Lucifer- mujhe to bahut time hogya
Tum late hogaye ab main ja raha hu

Alia- mujhe speech competition me gold medal liya
Lucifer- vo to milna hi tha
Tum bolti hi etni jada ho

Alia- hehehe
Lucifer- main tumhre liye chocolates laya tha mumma se le lena

Alia- OK thank you chachu
Madhuri- Alia jao change kar lo

Alia- okay mumma
Aur vo apne room me bhag jati hai

Lucifer- koe problem ho to aap bata dena mujhe
Aur lucifer ma'am ka reply sune vaha se chala gaya

Bahar aate hi ashmita ki call aagaye

Ashmita- hello
Lucifer- hello ashu
Kaise ho?
Mujhe miss kar rahi ho kya?

Ashmita- kaha hai tu?
Hume Bahar jana tha na?
Lucifer- aa raha hu ashu
Etna gussa kyu kar rahi hai

Ashmita- irritate mat kar aur jaldi aa
Lucifer- raha nahi jata mere begar ek second bhi en ladkiyo se

Ashmita- ha ha tera charm hi aisa hai kya kare
Lucifer- tel laga ke ready rah
Aa raha hu main

Ashmita- jaldi aa
Aur phone kaat deti hai uske phone rakhte hi inaaya ki call aajati hai

Lucifer- ab tumhe kya hua?
Inaaya- mere ghar aaoge ya main tumhre flat aau?

Lucifer- dono hi kaam nahi karna
Inaaya- kyu?

Lucifer- main bahar ja raha hu Ashmita ke sath late ho jaunga
Inaaya- to uske ghar par to rukega nahi
Mere ghar aajana ya fir main tumhre flat par wait kar lungi

Lucifer- main uske ghar par hi ruk jaunga
Uska room bahut bada hai
Inaaya bina kuch bole gusse me phone kaat deti hai aur lucifer muskurate hue ashmita ke pass chala jata hai....

Ye kahani kuch kuch samajh mein aate aate nasamjhi ki taraf jaate jaate samjh ki taraf mud jaati hai. Kitna simple aur beautifully drafted complex plot hai. Amezingly interesting hai. Saare characters jalebi aur imerti ki tarah simple aur sweet hai.

 

[A.B.KING]

not gonna lie but I havent wrote shit for the past two weeks aur purane likhe sare updates khatam ho gaye hai esliye aaj to nahi aa payega aur 100th update special bhi hai esliye bhi time lagega so no update today
thank you for the support you guys have shown
much love to everyone

Waiting

 

[king cobra]

Kahan ho bhai update deo

 

[parkas]

Lone survivor bhai next update kab tak aayega?

 

[Amir]

Bro we r waiting

 

[Golu]

Intzar bhai aapse aisi ummid na thi ki aPke update me do tin din ka gap ho