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स्वराज भाई आपकी स्टोरी बदला 2 पढ़ी अच्छी लगी पर बदला अभी तक अधूरी है 2018 की स्टोरी पूर्ण नहीं है
Thanks dost,Swaraj bhai big fan
Aapki kahaniyan bahut hi interesting aur rooted hoti h unn characters ka pain , unki khushi sab se hum connect kar paate h aur har bar ki tarah iss baar bhi aapne story ka end aate aate emotional kar hi diya mind blowing apki kahaniyan tarif ke bhi bahut upar h mere shabd kam pad jayenge tarif me
Maine jb aapki story pehli baar padhi BADLA usi waqt se main aapka fan ho gaya phir ek ek kar beauty and the beast ke dono part aur agent series ko bhi padha aur Sach kahu to aapki stories padhne ke baad mera kahaniyon ko padhne ka standard badh gya par jab maine inn stories ko complete kiya tab pta chala ki aapne likhna chhod diya bahut dukh hua tha bhai ki aisi stories fir nahi padh paunga par ab aap wapas aa gaye wo bhi iss gazab ki story ko kamaal ending diya thanks aise hi kahaniyan likhte rahiye sir
Waiting for next part of BEAUTY AND THE BEAST
Bhai thori c chal jaye abi
Chorta nae jb prho ga tb coment kr k bta do ga
Bilkul ab next use hi start karungaThanks dost,
Bohut acha laga ki aapne meri stories padhi hui hai, mera sirf likhne ka maksad hai ki log un characters ko samjhe, situation ko samjhe aur ye stories ke character unke dil me chap jaaye, mera koi bhi story ka hero kamzor hokar bhi apni chaap chod Jaata Hai. Jo chahe badla ka hero dhruv ya agent series ka suraj, ya bodyguard ka arjun har character alag hai
Isliye maine rakhi ko last me story ka hero bana diya aur siddharth hero bante bante reh gaya
Meri nayi story "HEART transplant" ko please utna hi pyaar dijiye
Saath rahiye
Bohat der kardi sarkar aatey aatey. Sab theek to thaa bhai. Is forum ki wajah se ek rishta sa ban gaya hai sab members me.Rishabh ne aankhen kholi, andhera tha charo aur
"hello??" rishabh ne awaz lagai to charo aur khamoshi chai hui thi
"anyone there??" rishabh uth khada hua, lights band thi aur koi bhi nahi tha spa me uske alawa
Rishabh tezi se spa se nikla aur darwaze ko kholne ja hi raha tha ki
DHADDDDDD
"AHHH" ek tez cheekh nikli rishabh ke muh se usne Saamne ek shaks khada tha
"koun ho tum?? Koun ho??" rishabh ne poocha
THADDDDD
iron rod se is baar jabde par Vaar kiya us shaks ne
"apni mout ke Saamne aakar bhi poochta hai ki koun ho tum??" shaks bola
Rishabh poori tarah darr gaya aur darr ki wajah se hamla kar baitha us shaks par
Shaks ne na sirf apne aap ko bachaya balki...
THADDDDD
rod sar par laga is baar rishabh ke aur wo sar pakad kar baith gaya
" spa bohut acha lagta hai na tujhe, aaj pata chalega spa kitna khatarnaak hai" shaks bola aur rishabh ko ghasit kar use baandh e laga
"kyun kar rahe ho ye sab?? Tumhe kya chahiye paisa?? Jitna chahoge utna milega, please mujhe chod do plz" rishabh gidgidane laga
"kya lagta hai paise se tere paap dhul jayenge???" shaks ne poocha
"y ye sab Akhil ka kiya dhara hai, maine kuch bhi nahi kiya" rishabh fir gidgidaya
"uska number bhi aayega, Filhal to ab tera number hai rishabh" shaks bola
"plz plz plz" rishabh rone laga
"aaj pata chalega jism ki garmi ko kaise thand kiya Jaata Hai rishabh" bol rishabh ko poora baandh kar usne steam ko full on kar diya
"dheere dheere poora skin ukhad jayega
rishabh fir tumhare muscles aur fir sirf haddiyan rahengi, kisi ko yaad karna hai to kar lo" shaks bola to rishabh ki aankhen dar ki bajah se bahar a gayi
Shaks ruka nahi aur aage badh gaya aur peeche reh gayi rishabh ki cheekhein
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"damn it damn it" dushyant bola
"wo Hamein nahi chodega, nahi chodega" David bola
"Akhil bas bohut hua, Hamein hi kuch karna hai" sheetal boli
Chup tha Akhil, uske paas koi jawab nahi tha
Taqat aur power ka doosra Naam Akhil tha
Ek ek gang ke member ko chun chun kar ikathha kiya hua tha usne
Darr Naam Ki chidiya kya hai ya koun hai wo is gang ko pata nahi tha
Lekin jab se ye siddharth aaya hai tab se un sabhi logo ke life me toofan sa a gaya hai
Aur fir ye purvi ko nishana banaya hai siddharth ne, kuch hai kahin
Kuch to relation zaroor hai sidhhart aur siddesh me, ye pata karna bohut mushkil hai lekin ye karna hi hoga
"David aur dushyant, sidhhart ke Bachpan se lekar India me aane tak ka poora history pata karo" Akhil bola
"lekin Akhil hum to ye pehle bhi kar chuke hai, fir ye sab...." dushyant bola
"hamne abhi tak sirf sidhhart koun hai ye pata kiya hai dushyant, lekin sidhhart ke Bachpan se lekar ab tak ka safar hame nahi pata, kahin na kahin kuch to gadbad zaroor hai" Akhil bola
"do you think I can seduce him??" minal boli.
"try kar sakti ho minal, abhi hame uske baare me jitna maalum ho sake pata karo" Akhil bola
"lekin Akhil wo tere ghar tak ghus aaya aur tu sirf uske baare me pata karne me hi laga hua hai, ek baar use gher kar wo dhulai denge ki wo toilet Jaana bhool jayega" David bola
"nahi David abhi mera focus sirf uski history hai, ek baar maalum ho jaaye ki wo hi kaatil hai to uski wo haal karenge ki siddesh ke saath jo hamne kiya wo iske Saamne kuch nahi hoga" bol Akhil aasman ki aur dekhne laga
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"namaste" muskura kar palak boli
"aap??.." halka sa hairan hua laxmi narayan
"palak bhatnagar, UP police" palak boli muskura kar
"police??" hairaani badhti ja rahi thi laxmi narayan ki
"Arey sir ghabraiyye nahi, bas halki si pooch taach karni thi" palak boli
"poochiye" laxmi narayan darwaze se hat gaya aur Palak Ander a gayi
"siddesh aur prerna aap ke paas tenant the right???" palak ne poocha
"ji, lekin wo to kai saal pehle" laxmi bole
"zyada nahi hua sir, lagbhag Paanch saal hi hue" palak boli. Laxmi chup raha
"khair, siddesh aur prerna ka antim sanskar aapne kiya tha, hai na??" palak ne poocha
"sirf prerna ka, siddesh ki laash nahi mili" laxmi bol uthe
"hmm achi baat hai" prerna boli, thodi chup rahi palak
"aur kuch poochna hai??" laxmi bol uthe
"in logo ko jaante hai aap??" palak ne Akhil aur uske doston ke photos dikhaye Laxmi narayan ko
"nahi" laxmi te sapat lahze me bola
"aapko pata hai koi in logo ko berehmi se maar raha hai??" palak boli
"nahi madam mujhe nahi pata" laxmi bol uthe
"achi baat hai, lekin sir halka sa tajjub hota hai ki do jab bhi khoon hota hai aap khoon ke vaardaat ke aas Paas hote hai" palak boli
"aap Keh rahi hai ki khoon maine kiya?? Ye kaisa bhadda mazak hai madam, mai kisi ko jaanta nahi pehchanta nahi fir bhi aap mujhe accuse kar rahi ho" laxmi halka sa frustrated ho rahe the
"maine kaha ki aap aaspaas the khoon hone ke Waqt, ye nahi kaha ki khoon aapne kiya hai" palak boli
"madam dekhiye..." laxmi bolne ja rahe the kuch
"aap kal raat ko spa ke paas kar kya rahe the Mr laxmi narayan??" palak ne poocha
"mai kal raat ko mobile service karwane gaya tha ek shop me, ye raha uska receipt" bol Laxmi kuch door jakar ek paper lekar palak ke Saamne rakh diya
Palak us receipt ko dekhne lagi
"us shop ke paas mai kai dino se chakkar laga raha hoon phone thik se service nahi kar pa rahe the wo log, chahiye to aap unse pooch sakte hai" laxmi bole
"hmm theek hai Mr laxmi narayan, aaj. Chalti hoon aage se aana jana laga rahega, aur Haan is receipt ko le ja rahi hoon kal parso bhijwa doongi " bol palak chali gayi us receipt ko lekar
Palak ke jaate hi laxmi ne phone lagaya ek number me
"police ko shaque ho raha hai" laxmi bol uthe aur phone Kaat kat police ke jeep ko jaate hue dekh rahe the
Bohot hi lazwaab behtreen story swaraj bhaiEPILOGUE
10 saal baad
"DCP ke liye badhai ho palak didi" sid apna chashma theek karte hue phone me baat karte hue bola
"badhai tab kabool karungi jab tu aur purvi apne dono dolls ko lekar yahan aayega" palak haste hue boli
"acha rakhta hoon didi" bol sid ne phone rakh diya.
Palak DCP ban chuki thi, aur wo iske kaabil bhi thi
Kartick aur kavya ki shaadi ho chuki thi dono India me Mittal group ke jhande gaad rahe the
Dono ka ek beta hai
Laxmi narayan ko sid apne power aur paise ke balboote par chudwa liya
Laxmi narayan ab aurobindo ashram me rehte hai jo pondicherry me hai
Jahan aaj sid ka family aaya hua hai
"sid let's go warna ye dono mujhe Paagal kar denge" purvi shikayat karte hue boli
Apna western outfit badal kar purvi saree zyada pasand karne lagi thi
"wapas aana zaroor sidhhart" laxmi narayan bole.
"lekin ye kya uncle aapne apni Saari wasiyat in dono ke naam kar di??" sid ne poocha
"kya ye dono mere naati naatin nahi hai" dono bachchon ko god me rakhte hye laxmi narayan haste hue bole
"please mummy kuch der rukte hai na" ladka bola
"plzzzz maa" is baar ladki boli
"no, abhi hame nanaji ke paas bhi Jaana Hai aur wapas flight hai parso, dadi ji tum logo ko ek hafte se zyada choddti hai kya" purvi boli
Aur bachhe beman se chale gaye purvi aur sid ke saath laxmi narayan ko bye bol kar
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"beta ab ise tum sambhalo" nischal raichand bole purvi ko
"lekin papa mai....." purvi ne sid ki aur dekha to sid ne ishare se Haan karne ko bola
"mai ab boodha ho gaya hoon beta, is group ko khatam na hone dena" nischal raichand apne bed me lete hue bole
"mai raichand group ko aap se bhi zyada oonchaiyon ke paar pohunchaungi papa" bol purvi ne nischal raichand se aashirwad liya
Sid uth kar Saath waale kamre me gaya
"pata hai, mai usi din tujhe khatam kar deta jis din rakhi didi chal basi, lekin isse tujhe aasan mout milti, tere liye bhagwan ne saza tay kiya hua hai" sid bola aur duble patle se bade bade daadi aur baal badhe hue Akhil ke sar par haath fera
"hggnnn hgnnn" Akhil badi badi aankhen karta hua bola
"poora body paralysis hai Akhil, susu karne se lekar hagne tak bed me karta hai tu, Saari zindagi apne maa Baap aur uske baad apni behen ke tukdo par palega tu. Aur Saari zindagi mujhe maarne ke sapne bunega, aur to aur tere Bhatija aur bhatiji ka Naam bhi maine un dono ke Naam par rakha hai, bye fir milenge "bol sid chala gaya aur Akhil badi badi aankhon se dekhta gaya
"sid can we go??" hawayein tez ho rahi thi, baarish kabhi bhi a sakti thi purvi pareshan thi apne dono bachchon se
sid dono samadhi ke Saamne aaya aur un par phool chadane
"koun hai papa Ye??" ladki boli
"Haan papa aap bohut der se khade ho yahan" ladka bola
Baarish girne lagi thi aur tez hone lagi thi
"siddesh, prerna to the car right now, sid please baarish badh rahi hai" purvi aayi thi wahan
"aao aaj tumhe ek bhai behen ke pyaar ki kahani sunata hoon" sid bola aur nanhi si prerna ko god me utha liya
"ek thi ladki jiska Naam prerna tha" sid bola to God me prerna khush ho gayi aur chote se siddesh ko muh bana kar chidane lagi
"mummy dekho na" siddesh naraz hone laga
"prerna please behave" bol purvi aur Baaki sab car ki aur jaane lage
Sid ne ek baar mudkar dekha dono samadhi ko aur apne god me prerna ko jaane ke liye Keh diya, aur wo daud kar car me baith gayi
"sid come fast" purvi car se boli chillate hue
Sid wapas gaya aur apne coat ke Ander se wo diary nikali aur dono ke beech rakh kar chala gaya
Car apni speed pakad kar ojhal ho gayi
Baarish aur tez hone lagi Saath me bijli kadakne lagi
Diary ke panne idhar udhar hote gaye aur baarish ke boondon se uski syahi mitti se milne lagi
Diary ghulne milne lagi rakhi aur siddesh ke samadhi par
Jaise wo Keh rahi ho ki aakhir kar mil hi gaye dono
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Thanks bro,Bohat der kardi sarkar aatey aatey. Sab theek to thaa bhai. Is forum ki wajah se ek rishta sa ban gaya hai sab members me.
Thanks a lot story ko support karne ke liyeBohot hi lazwaab behtreen story swaraj bhai![]()
स्वराज भाई आपकी स्टोरी बदला 2 पढ़ी अच्छी लगी पर बदला अभी तक अधूरी है 2018 की स्टोरी पूर्ण नहीं है
Tow Ashika n khud hi ooper se kood ker Jaan dedi or Varun ko anjan shaksh n Plak ke samne mait k ghaat utar dia list din badin k hoti Jaa Rahi h dekhte aage kiska ka namber hVarun ne aankh kholi time abhi bhi nahi hua tha jaane ka, usne mobile me time check kiya aur fir call lagane ki koshish ki ashika ko
Damn it, call bhi lag nahi raha tha
"nahi lagega ab call" ek sard bhari awaz ne hila daala varun ko
Chaunk kar idhar udhar dekhne laga wo, aur uski aankhen jam gayi uske bed ke bagal me rakhi kursi par
"you bastard" bol varun kood pada kursi par baithe shaks par lekin isse pehle ki wo hamla karta
"khachhh"
Ek chote se chaku ne pet me suraakh kar diya varun ka, varun ne us jagah par apna haath rakha
"mout itni jaldi kaise a sakti hai varun??? Mout to til til karke aayegi" shaks bola aur fir se
Khach Khach Khach
Teen Vaar kar daale usne
"k kyun??" varun bola aur apne zakhmon ko dekhne laga
"kyun ka jawab us din prerna ne bhi poocha tha varun, kyun ka jawab us din siddesh ne bhi poocha tha" shaks ne jawab diya aur bedsheet se us chaku ko pochne laga
"wo to sab us madarchod Akhil ka kiya dhara hai bastard isme ashika aur mujhe kyun target kar rahe ho" varun Dard se karah utha
Khach Khach Khach
Teen Vaar fir se kiya us shaks ne aur fir se us chaku ko bedsheet se poch diya
"is chaku ko dekh rahe ho varun?? Ise har Vaar kar ke saaf kiya hai maine lekin..... Vaar karne ke baad fir se khoon lag hi Jaata Hai" bol shaks hasne laga
"ye mera jawab nahi hua, mujhe aur ashika ko kyun maar rahe ho" varun bola
DHADDDD
Ek ghoosa pada varun ke jabde par
"galti pooch rahe ho tum???" shaks ne poocha
FLASHBACK
"are prerna didi, aise kaise chalega thoda to khana hi padega" varun bola aur khana aur cold drink ki bottle prerna ke Saamne rakh diya.
Prerna muskurai aur usne khana shuru kiya
"kaisa hai?? Yahan ke best restaurant se mangwaya hai" varun bola
"kahin se bhi mangwaya ho varun, lekin pyaar se agar aap ek chota sa chocolate bhi khilao to uska taste badh Jaata Hai" prerna boli
"wo to hai, khair mai chalta hoon siddesh aata hi hoga aapse milne" bol varun chala gaya
DHADDDD
"kuch yaad aaya kamine??" shaks ki awaz aur ek aur ghoosa jabde par padte hi varun present me a gaya past se
"m mere Saath jo karna hai karo lekin ashika ko....." varun isse zyada nahi bol paaya khoon zyada behne ke wajah se kamzor ho raha tha wo
DHADAMMMMM
Tabhi darwaza khula aur...
"hands up" palak bhatnagar ki awaz ne varun ko rahat aur shaks ko statue bana diya
"ha ha... Tu to gaya saale" varun bola
"drop off your weapon" palak ne shaks ke chaku ki aur ishara kiya
Shaks waise hi khada raha
"I will not repeat it again, apna hatiyar neeche rakh do" palak fir se bol uthi aur uska service pistol shaks ki aur pointed out karke ye bata raha tha ki gadbad ki koi gunjaish nahi hai
"palak bhatnagar, kisi ko nahi bacha paogi tum, sab ke sab marenge" shaks bol utha
"last and final warning de rahi hoon, drop off your weapon" palak boli
MADAMMMMM
Ek Awaz ne distract kiya palak ko aur uska gardan ghoom gaya awaz ki aur, uske constable ki cheekh thi
Aur uski Waqt
TAADDDDD
shaks ne foorti ke saath table par raha glass uthaya air palak ke haath me maara, haath se pistol choot kar neeche gir gaya
Aur usi Waqt
KHACHHHHHHHH
"aghhhhh...." aankhen badi badi kar wahi let gaya varun. Chaku gardan ke aar paar ja chuki thi
Palak ne foorti se gun uthaya aur
DHAAAMMMM DHAAAAMMMM
do bullets daag diye shaks par lekin shaks khidki se chalang laga chuka tha
Palak daud kar aayi varun ke paas lekin tab tak varun mar chuka tha
Palak daud kar gayi apne us constable ke paas jo cheekh pada tha
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Sid jab location par pohuncha tab tak kaafi time lag gaya tha
"KAAVYA KARTICK" chillaya sid
"shabash pohunch gaye" dushyant bola
"kartick aur kavya kahan hai dushyant" sid ne poocha
"pehle ye bata behenchod, India me tu kya kar raha hai??" dushyant bola
"kavya aur kartick ka isse koi lena dena nahi hai dushyant, aakhiri baar pooch raha hoon kahan hai wo dono" sid ne poocha
"mai bhi aakhiri baar pooch raha hoon, India me. Siddharth Mittal kya karne aaya hai purani diary lekar jo siddesh ki hai" dushyant bola
"jab siddesh ko jaanta hai to ye bhi jaanta hoga ki kaise uke poore family ko barbaad kiya tha tum logo ne" sid apne aap ko nahi rok paaya ab
"barbaad to tere family ko bhi karenge ab, le aao re" bol dushyant ne awaz di aur kartick aur kavya ko lekar a gaye do log
"tu bach nahi paayega dushyant, tu marega" sid bola
"d dhamki deta hai" bol dushyant gusse se jaakar sid ka collar pakad leta hai, hatta katta sid wahin khada hokar dushyant ki aankhon me dekhta hai
Dushyant koi bohut bada shaks nahi tha, dubla patla dushyant Akhil ke isharon par naachta tha
"mai a chuka hoon, ab chodd do kartick aur kavya ko" sid bola
"abhi kahan, abhi to is chikni ka lena hai" kavya ki aur haath badha diya dushyant ne
"lagta hai tumhe Mittal group ke power ka andaza nahi hai dushyant" sid bola aur usi ke saath teen Chaar gaadiyan khadi ho gayi aur kai log nikal kar Saamne a gaye
"poore jagah ko gher rakha hai dushyant, agar apni salamati chahte ho to kavya aur kartick ko chodd do" sid bola
Dushyant jisne aaj tak ek chota sa decision bhi nahi liya tha, kaampne laga
Sid ne kuch ishara kiya aur uske kuch aadmiyon ne jakar kartick aur kavya ko chudwa diya aur wapas Gaadi me baith kar chale gaye
"man to kar raha hai tera keema bana doon, lekin tere. Jaise keede ko wahi sahi tarike se maar sakta hai, tu bhi marega. Wo tujhe nahi chodega" bol sid wahan se nikalne laga tabhi police ki jeep wahan a gayi
"khabar mili thi kidnapping ki" palak nikal chuki thi jeep se
"Waah police as usual late a gayi" sid hasne laga, lekin palak ko fark nahi pada
"kuch nahi hua, sab theek hai" sid bola
"ek buri khabar hai, ashika aur varun dono ko khooni ne maar diya" palak boli
"KYAAAAAA" sid aur dushyant ek Saath bol uthe