Satyaultime123
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Komal Ji, me aapki writing ka bahut jyada kaayal hu...aap apni kalam se jo likh deti thi usse pure jism me aag lag jati thi..Bura mat maniyega but ab is story me wo spark nhi raha..apke flavour ka jo taste inn stories me aata tha wo ab nhi milta...ye kahani ab boring hone lagi hai...is kahani se dhime dhime interest ja raha hai...
Please apna wahi purana style of writing dikhaiye..
Please apna wahi purana style of writing dikhaiye..

















