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Shukriya bhai, aapke vichar vistaar se rakhne ke liye. Kharad ke character ko main bahut soch samjh kar likh raha hu, main nahi chahata ki usme koi gray shade dekhne ki koshish kare. Kuch log hote hi hai haramkhor.Bahut hi badhiya or shandar update
1. Jamal ki niyat me mujhe khot najar aa rahi ha jaise wo shabhay se bat kar raha tha or uski baton ko nahi man raha tha shayad isliye sukant ne shabhay ko chuna kyonki shayad use jamal pe shak ho gaya ho ki kya lata ye bhi kharad si mila ho
2. Idhar rupali or meena pahunch gayi ha kamal ke ghar kamal ko invitation dene or use ane ke liye bhi kaha kamal ko jana to tha hi use karan ne jo kaha ha idhar shital kamal ke ane se khush ho rahi ha wo soch rahi ha ki kamal ko kisi tarah mana legi use ahsas ho gaya ha ki usne kya kiya ha kamal ke sath lekin use ye nahi oata ha ki kamal inki wajah se nahi kisi or wajah se aa raha ha or inke wahan to wo katai nahi rukega engagement me dhamal hone wala ha shayad
3. Idhar kharad ka kahar jari ha jo amrit lok ke kisi ganv ke mukhiya ko dhamki dene pahunch gaya ha kyonki use apna dar bethana ha sabke age kya villIain ha pure evil villain ko aisa hi hona chhahiye kher mukhiya bechara apne ghar ki ijjat ir bachho ko bachane ke liye surrender kar diya
4. Idhar pehli bar shweta ke dil me kamal ke liye feelings jagi ha kaise bhai ab tak kishar thi ye idhar guddi bhi as usual apne dusre bhai behnon ki tarah nikli use bhi kamal me koi khas interest nahi ha or kamal ko un dono vishal or sunil se compare kar kar rahi ha kamal kya ha jab ise pata padega to iski ankhen fati rah jayengi shweta dekhte han engagement me kamal se bat kar pati ha ya nahi
5. Idhar kamal ko pritam sapne me apne hatiya Chāyāvrtt ke bare me bata raha ha ki ao uska ha jo ki abhi kharad ke pas ha agar wo hatiyar pritam ka ha to shayad jald hi wo kamal ke pas hoga kyonki uska asli hakdar to kamal ha or lagta ha use pane ke bad kamal ki power or badh jayegi
Kher ham to yahi chahten han ki kamal engagement me dhum macha de apne pariwar walon ko sach ka ayna dikha de or ho sake to thodi powers bhi show kara de ki jisse uske pariwar wale dekhte rah jaye or han mafi kisi ko bhi nahi abhi to chhahe koi kitna hi pyar se mana le ya bat kar le sabki ignore mar de kamal
Waiting for next update bro
Kamal sirf Karan ki vajah se mana hai engagement me aur maa aur bahan ke sath to lafde jarur hone vaale hai ye to hai hi.Nice update
Shital ,Meena aur rupali ko lag raha hai kamal Maan Gaya Saadi me aane ke liye
Baaki dekhte hai kamal kya kerta hai Meena ki engagement me ,aur kaisa vaivhaar kerte hai kamal ke ghar waale khass ker maa bahen aur bhai
Thankx❤Sab kuchh bahut shi Jaa rha h bhai abhi tk toh,,, bss me ek chiz khna chahunga,,, tumko bhi apni studies wgrh me dhyan dena hota h aur pta ni tum college me ho ya internship pr,,, pr haa, story k lie ek time limit bna Lena ki kitne time me end kroge uss hisab se expansion ya contraction Krna story ka... Ek complete story ki baat he alag hoti h,,, baki tumne bhut achha landscape taiyar kiya h,,, aur sb characters se attachment feel hoti h,,,
Jabardast update bhai![]()
.ye kharad abhi bhi apna kahar gaav waalo per dhaa rha hai ab to usne Amrit lok ke kisi gaav per dhawa bol diya hai waha ke logo ko pareshaan laga hai
Aur yaha kamal ke ghar me abhi bhi kamal ke baare me koi jyada interest nhi le rha hai wahi uski maa shital ko lag rha hai kamal bahut assani me Meena ki engagement me aane ke liye Maan gya hai ab shital jaldi se kamal ko mana legi .........
Khair dekhte hai aage kya hota hai
Bhai ek baat bolni thi
Ab 2,3 update me only kamal aur uske ghar walon ka hi scene dikhao jab tak meena ka engagement nhi ho jata hai
kharad aur Amrit lok ka scene thoda side ker do ,jab Kamal apne ghar jaaye aur wah se jab wapas aaye uske baap kharat aur Amrit lok aur baaki sab scene add kijiye update me
Baaki aapki marzi
Phr toh tumne aadhi Jung Jeet he li agr ending fix kr li aur plot ready h tohThankx❤
Main sunday aur saturday ko vakt nikalkar likhta hu story. Aur ab thoda schedule bhi thik ho gaya hai mera to 7 din se jyada nahi lagenge update ko. Time limit bata nahi sakta , lekin jyada se jyada 6 mahine lagege usase jyada nahi. Aur ye complete story hogi meri dusri story maine bich me isiliye chhodi kyuki main ending ke plot se bhatak gaya tha.
Baaki ye vaali story ki ending fix hai aur aage ka pura plot hai.
Koi baat nhi bhai ,haa mera kahne ka matlab aap ye bhi samjh sakte hai ki kharad ka scene thoda kam kijiye 2 update tak ,jab tak engagement nhi ho jaati hai ,baaki dekhte hai kamal kya dhamaal machata hai ghar jaane perThank you so much , engagement rupali ki hai, aur shital mana paati hai ki nahi uske baare me kuch nahi bolunga lekin main aap ke kahe anusar Kharad aur Amrit lok ke scene ekdam se hi dikhane band nahi kar sakta kyuki kuch update ke baad jyada tr scene Amrit lok ke hi honge . Lekin kam jarur karunga. 1/4 scene se kam scene amrit lok ho iski koshish karunga.
Me to soch raha hoon kahin kamal engagement hi na hone de rupali kiShukriya bhai, aapke vichar vistaar se rakhne ke liye. Kharad ke character ko main bahut soch samjh kar likh raha hu, main nahi chahata ki usme koi gray shade dekhne ki koshish kare. Kuch log hote hi hai haramkhor.
Shweta ki feelings ke pichhe reasons hai, vo abhi kya mahsoos karti hai vo agle update me pata hi chal jayega. Aur haa engagement jo bhi hoga aapko pasand aayega.