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:verysad:जिंदगी में कभी बिछड़ना पड़े तो मेरी सॉसें ले जाना, क्योंकि तुम्हारे बिना ये मेरे किसी काम की नहीं।

Bhaiya ji mobile kab tak me repair hoga aapka.???

Hahaha maine yahi par ek comment padha tha jisme likha gaya tha ki aap pahuche huye mahatma hain. Waise bhi jiska naam hi kamdev ho wo jo bhi kare usme ashcharya kaisa.???Bhaya main to silent reader hi rahna chahta hu is story ka. Aapki meharbani se update aata rahega to usse achhi koi baat hi...

Are bhaya 75% kaha...abhi to story 50% bhi nahi huyi hai. Abhi to bahut kuch baaki hai story me....

Jai ho kamdev bhaya ki....Bhaya ji is story ko padh kar mere dimaag me bas ek hi baat aayi ki agar koi aapki is story ko achhe se samajh le aur kahi par bhi confuse na ho to wo duniya ki jatil se bhi jatil baat samajh lene ki koovat rakhega. Is maamle me @firefox2017 bhaya sabse upar hain kyo...

Hahaha sahi hai bhaya ki main personally aapko update send kar duga, magar sochne wali baat hai ki jab main update ready rakhuga to bhala khud post kyo nahi karuga.? Aise me to mere aziz bhai log aur bhi shandar tarike se meri aarti utarenge.... :hehe:

Dhanyawaad bhaya.... Dekhenge ki aap apni is baat par kitna khara utarte hain....

Bhaya mujhe kisi ke galat comments se koi aitraz nahi hai, balki aitraaz is baat se hai ki log story padh kar bhi like comment nahi karte. Readers ke like comments se aisa aksar hota hai ki writer ko koi aisa point mil jata hai jo uski story ke liye important hota hai. Copy paste wale comment...

Bhaya baat ye nahi hai ki main story me kahi atak gaya hu ya fir mujhe ye samajh nahi aa raha ki main aage kya likhu....baat hai readers ke reaction ki. Readers story to padhte hain magar na like karte hain na hi comment karte hain. Kuch log to ye bhi kahte hain ki unhe review dena nshi aata...

Oh so sad yara.... Chalo koi baat nahi, hame intzaar rahega bhaya....

:thanks: Bhaya....

Where are you bhaya. Everything is okay.???

तेरे रुखसार पर ढले हैं मेरी शाम के मंज़र, खामोशी से मागी हुई मोहब्बत की दुआ हो तुम।

Waiting bhaya....

तमाम उम्र गुजार देंगे हम राह-ए-इंतजार में, झूठा ही सही पर आने का वादा तो कर दे।।

Awesome bhaya....To aakhir gaav walo ke bhale ke liye kaam shuru kar diya raghav ne. Mangal kaka ko un logo ki list banane ka kaam diya hai jo chachao ke ishare par kaam karte hain. Aisa lagta hai ki raghav ka sabse pahla waar apne chachao ke aadmiyo par hi padne wala hai. Well dekhte hain...

Awesome update bhaya....Poonam ki kahani ne raghav ko sochne par majbur kar diya hai. Kyo ki maamla raghav ki soch se alag hatya ka nikal aaya. Fir bhi raghav ne usse kaha hai ki wo is case me un hatyaro ko saja dilayega. Ab dekhna ye hai ki raghav kis tarah se is case me poonam se kiye huye...

हमें सीने से लगा कर हमारी सारी कसक दूर कर दो, हम सिर्फ तुम्हारे हो जाऍ हमें इतना मजबूर कर दो।।

Awesome update bhaya....Poonam aur raghav ke bich ki conversation zabardast hai yara. Poonam ke man me abhi dwand jaisi baat hai aur ye takraar bhi ek din uske andar raghav ke prati pyar jaga dega. Anyway ye achha hua ki urmila raghav ke gaav me rahne ke liye raazi ho gayi....Bhaya ab ye...

Hahaha kamdev bhaya.... Wo bhaya sahi to kah raha hai mere paas ab likhne ko kuch nahi hai....Bhaya is bakloli ka apna hi maza hai. Rahi baat update ki to jaise hi mere paas likhne ke liye kuch hoga to update bhi aa jayega. Abhi to aapki story padh raha hu....