Jassybabra
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Ye kya mitr? Itni pyaari kahaani aur aap yu hi chorr rahe ho? Mein samajh sakta hu aapki wo waali baat ki readers yaha sahi me aggressive ho jaate hai aur bura bhala bhi kehte hai kyuki meri khud ki story par bhi kuch log the aise jinhe bas gaali aur writer ka mazaak hi banaana hota hai. Ye baat sabhi jaante hai ki writer ko kuch nahi milta siwae readers ke comments aur likes ke alaawa, ab yadi usme bhi gaali sunni pade toh writer zaahir sii baat hai tang aa jaega. Bura lagta hi hai, bhale koi kitni bhi saantvna dele aapko. Mujhe bhi laga tha. Par bhaaya, kaahani adhuri mat chorriye. Yadi aap kisi jagah par atak gaye hai ya aapko kahani ke aage ke plot ke baare me koi upaay nazar nahi aa raha toh mitr hum sab hai yaha. Aap kisi se bhi help le sakte hai. Ek poorn kahani hi acchi lagti hai. Aapko koi zaroorat nahi hai time dene ki, aap itminaan se apne phone par kisi bhi app me kahani ke aage ke updates ko likhiye, poora samay dijiye usse. Aur jab aapko lage ki yaha post karna chahiye tab aap post kariye. Aapko khud ke routine me pressure daalne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. Bas yahi kahunga, ki ye story complete hoegi toh mujhe behad khushi hoegi. Aur aap bhi ek kaam se fursat ho jaenge. Overcome karna boht mushqil hai I know but naamumkin nahi.Bhai log....
Main dil se chaahta tha ki apni is story ko complete karu aur iske liye maine koshish bhi ki magar main ye achhi tarah samajh gaya hu ki yaha par readers writer ko mentally torture karte hain aur ek din aisa aa jata hai jab writer story ko bich me hi chhod kar chala jata hai....
Ye sach hai ki writer bina likhe nahi rah sakta. Uska dil o dimaag aur uske hath machalne lagte hain likhte ke liye. Ham mehnat karte hain magar uska uchit roop se fal nahi milta. Dhairya saahas ka path padhana bahut asaan hota hai. Khair koi baat nahi....
Kamdev bhai, is baar aap kuch nahi kahege mujhe. Kyo ki is baar aisa kuch hua hai jisse mujhe aapki baat samajh me nahi aayegi. Gussa sabko aata hai chaahe reader ho ya writer bas wahi baat hai....
Maine ye dusri id bana kar yaha ek nayi story is liye start ki thi ki shayad is baar halaat achhe honge aur readers writers ki mehnat ka uchit fal dege magar mera ye sochna shayad galat tha. Kuch likhne ke liye hath machalte the aur dilo dimaag baghawat karne lagta tha. Is liye dusre naam se aaya. Magar har baar ki tarah is baar bhi wahi haal dekhne ko mila....
Main apne dost bhaiyo se sirf yahi kahna chaahta hu ki kab samjhoge bhaya. Kab ahsaas hoga aap logo ko. Aap to apna rona dikha dete hain magar ham kise dikhaye aur use kaun samjhe.??? Main maanta hu ki yaha writers aur stories ki kami nahi hai magar dosto nyaay annyaay ki bhi koi cheez hoti hai....
Ab kabhi bhi kisi bhi id ya naam se story likhne nahi aauga yaha. Aapko jo achha lage wo kijiye. Mere dil ne jo kaha wo main kar raha hu. Gaali dena ho to wo bhi de dena. Magar ab bas alvida....!!
Siraj Patel bhaya, sorry aapko fir se taklif de raha hu magar ye aapki marzi par hai. Thread chahe to close kar dijiye ya rahne dijiye. Your choice....
Ye kya mitr? Itni pyaari kahaani aur aap yu hi chorr rahe ho? Mein samajh sakta hu aapki wo waali baat ki readers yaha sahi me aggressive ho jaate hai aur bura bhala bhi kehte hai kyuki meri khud ki story par bhi kuch log the aise jinhe bas gaali aur writer ka mazaak hi banaana hota hai. Ye baat sabhi jaante hai ki writer ko kuch nahi milta siwae readers ke comments aur likes ke alaawa, ab yadi usme bhi gaali sunni pade toh writer zaahir sii baat hai tang aa jaega. Bura lagta hi hai, bhale koi kitni bhi saantvna dele aapko. Mujhe bhi laga tha. Par bhaaya, kaahani adhuri mat chorriye. Yadi aap kisi jagah par atak gaye hai ya aapko kahani ke aage ke plot ke baare me koi upaay nazar nahi aa raha toh mitr hum sab hai yaha. Aap kisi se bhi help le sakte hai. Ek poorn kahani hi acchi lagti hai. Aapko koi zaroorat nahi hai time dene ki, aap itminaan se apne phone par kisi bhi app me kahani ke aage ke updates ko likhiye, poora samay dijiye usse. Aur jab aapko lage ki yaha post karna chahiye tab aap post kariye. Aapko khud ke routine me pressure daalne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. Bas yahi kahunga, ki ye story complete hoegi toh mujhe behad khushi hoegi. Aur aap bhi ek kaam se fursat ho jaenge. Overcome karna boht mushqil hai I know but naamumkin nahi.
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Pandit bhai is comment ki last line padke sokun poucha dil ko kyuki ye story one of my favorite story hai..... Writers aur readers ke bich aisa to chalta hii rehta hai bhai jo bhi galat tarike se reply karta hai usse ussi bhasa me jabab deke uska muh ka shutter band kar do bhai hum bhi to pehle se hii is story padh raha hu aur mera tarha kitni hii readers hai... Bhai do ek aisa mil hii jate hai jo apna story na chalne ki bajah se galat reply karta hai un logo ko chood ke aage badho bhai.... Jo bhi komi hum readers ke bich reh gaya tha hum puri karne ki puri puri kosis karenge... Bhai jaldi dubara start karoBhaya baat ye nahi hai ki main story me kahi atak gaya hu ya fir mujhe ye samajh nahi aa raha ki main aage kya likhu....baat hai readers ke reaction ki. Readers story to padhte hain magar na like karte hain na hi comment karte hain. Kuch log to ye bhi kahte hain ki unhe review dena nshi aata agar aata to kya wo khud koi story na likhte. Ajeeb baat hai bhaya ki inhe kuch bolna nahi aata...magar jab aap update nahi doge ya fir story bich me hi stop kar doge to inhe writer ko gaaliya dena aur faaltu ki baate karna aane lagta hai. Hai na mazedaar baat.????
Yaha kisi ko kuch nahi milta hai. Na writer ko likhne ke paise milte hain aur na hi readers ko padhne ke. Log sirf enjoy karne aate hain. Writers story likh ke enjoy karte hain to readers story padh kar magar iske bich jo ek important cheez honi chahiye wo nahi hai. Writers aur readers ke bich ka combination sahi nahi hai. Writer story likhta hai aur ek update taiyar karne me kam se kam 3 se 4 ghante lag jate hain magar readers us update ko mushkil se 5 ya 10 minute me padh kar gayab ho jate hain...wo ye bhi nahi sochte ki writer ne agar itni mehnat karke aur time laga kar update likha hai to us par apne kuch vichaar bhi rakh de....
Main ye dekh kar hairaan hota hu ki jin stories me maheeno koi update nahi aata us par dana dan log waiting waiting likh kar page bhar rahe hain aur jis story me update aata hai usme readers gayab hain. Story ko bich me chhod dene ke pichhe sirf writer hi jimmedaar nahi hai balki readers bhi utne hi jimmedaar hain....
Writer sirf like comment hi chaahta hai magar use wo bhi nahi milta. Hamare kamdev bhaya aur firefox bhaya hame samjhate hain ki hame is sab par dhyan nahi dena chahiye balki apni pratibha ko chup chaap yaha dikhate raho. Matlab ki aap paaglo aur bevkufo ki tarah lage raho aur samne wala aapki taraf dekhe tak na.???
Starting me mujhe bhi lagta tha ki ye writer log kyo apni story ko bich me chhod kar bhaag jate hain...mujhe aise writers par gussa bhi aata tha magar jab maine story start ki aur aage badha to samajh aaya ki aisa kyo hota hai. Maine socha tha ki is story ke baad aur bhi stories likhuga magar galat socha tha bhaya....
Yaha bade bade writers ki stories ka bhi yahi haal hai. Yaha un stories par log chipke huye hain jinme be sir pair ka sex bhara hua hai. Anyway leave this topic bhaya. Ye story zarur complete karuga, bhale hi iske liye wakt lage....
bhai e xforum ka purana silent reader tha...kyun k pehle account nhi bana tha...hr story pr main apna review dene ki koshish zarur krha hu...aap story start to karo...Bhaya baat ye nahi hai ki main story me kahi atak gaya hu ya fir mujhe ye samajh nahi aa raha ki main aage kya likhu....baat hai readers ke reaction ki. Readers story to padhte hain magar na like karte hain na hi comment karte hain. Kuch log to ye bhi kahte hain ki unhe review dena nshi aata agar aata to kya wo khud koi story na likhte. Ajeeb baat hai bhaya ki inhe kuch bolna nahi aata...magar jab aap update nahi doge ya fir story bich me hi stop kar doge to inhe writer ko gaaliya dena aur faaltu ki baate karna aane lagta hai. Hai na mazedaar baat.????
Yaha kisi ko kuch nahi milta hai. Na writer ko likhne ke paise milte hain aur na hi readers ko padhne ke. Log sirf enjoy karne aate hain. Writers story likh ke enjoy karte hain to readers story padh kar magar iske bich jo ek important cheez honi chahiye wo nahi hai. Writers aur readers ke bich ka combination sahi nahi hai. Writer story likhta hai aur ek update taiyar karne me kam se kam 3 se 4 ghante lag jate hain magar readers us update ko mushkil se 5 ya 10 minute me padh kar gayab ho jate hain...wo ye bhi nahi sochte ki writer ne agar itni mehnat karke aur time laga kar update likha hai to us par apne kuch vichaar bhi rakh de....
Main ye dekh kar hairaan hota hu ki jin stories me maheeno koi update nahi aata us par dana dan log waiting waiting likh kar page bhar rahe hain aur jis story me update aata hai usme readers gayab hain. Story ko bich me chhod dene ke pichhe sirf writer hi jimmedaar nahi hai balki readers bhi utne hi jimmedaar hain....
Writer sirf like comment hi chaahta hai magar use wo bhi nahi milta. Hamare kamdev bhaya aur firefox bhaya hame samjhate hain ki hame is sab par dhyan nahi dena chahiye balki apni pratibha ko chup chaap yaha dikhate raho. Matlab ki aap paaglo aur bevkufo ki tarah lage raho aur samne wala aapki taraf dekhe tak na.???
Starting me mujhe bhi lagta tha ki ye writer log kyo apni story ko bich me chhod kar bhaag jate hain...mujhe aise writers par gussa bhi aata tha magar jab maine story start ki aur aage badha to samajh aaya ki aisa kyo hota hai. Maine socha tha ki is story ke baad aur bhi stories likhuga magar galat socha tha bhaya....
Yaha bade bade writers ki stories ka bhi yahi haal hai. Yaha un stories par log chipke huye hain jinme be sir pair ka sex bhara hua hai. Anyway leave this topic bhaya. Ye story zarur complete karuga, bhale hi iske liye wakt lage....