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haha bahut khoob super story

Story is becoming very exciting but plot and screenplay of bollywood stylejab kajal innocent hai fir juhi ki help ki kya zaroorat zaroorat wo bhi ek police officer ki wife ?

kajal ka idhar bhi kuch khaas lafda hoga zaroor ye innocent to ho hi nahi sakti

haha haan yaar will call you

Chacha seems to be behind all these unnatural happenings but question is why ?

story is so meticulously written in your unique style that the scope to improve is minimal :smile:

mita koi bhootni to nahi jab dekho raat ko bahar hi milti hai ?

wow rebellion to aap ki stories ke hero mein koot koot ke bhara hai pat panchayat mein uska stanf bhi wajjib thaGreat story in making

This story looks more complicated then the first part isme bahut se angels hainchacha kya kar raha hai ?meeta kon hai ?sapne mein kon aati hai ?bhai se na bolne ka kya reason hai ?

ok dear tahe care

wow yaar dactar sahib kajal ne to es story mein aate hi lehnga utha diya :lotpot:yahani bhi iska koi poorana link niklega aur apne pati dev ka poora chutiya kategi

hello manoj bhai how are you ?

Great story writing aur mona hi nagin hai par ye end mein goli kis ne mar di ?

Get well soon dear, Take care !

wow bhai amazing story writing, came here after many daysyahan to san kuch badal gya roopa ki kya mazboori rahi hogi ?ab shayad nagin ka past pata chale

hmm super suspense in end again kis ki lash aa gayi ?baba aur dev mil kar nagin bacha sakte hain lekin dev ye kaam pehle karega

amazingly exciting story writing broMain suspense of the story right from the beginning is of Nagin akhir wo hai kon ?abhi to nagin ne sab se bada sacrifice bhi kiya lekin uska dev ke saath rishta kya hoga ?

wow yaar ye ajay to yahan ka leader ban gya and incest bhi full enjoy kar raha hai

super exciting story dear, har update ke baad ek naya ahsaasGreat work !

hmm great curiou turns in story now but run both parallel if possible